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Kya update h.. Mar diya.... Kya story h.... Late aate ho but sandar aate ho... Please update more
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Awesome Update. Keep it up.
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hottest update..and incredible plot twist..
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WHAT A SEDUCTIVE UPDATE BROOO...ALSO GRAT USE OF IMAGES AND GIF...THANK YOU UPDATE...PLEASE KEEP UPDATING..TAKE CARE
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Manali me Sanjay apni beti ko chod de ... Vo b dono ki marji se toh majja aa jay
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It What an update bro. Hats off to you for your magnificent thinking and writing. The way you have expressed every word is so erotic that I red every sentence twice. Simply amazing.
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Just my observation while going through the last few paragraphs: I believe that Birjus character was exceptionally good and he is the one who could have manipulated Namrita to an extreme level. Namrita was very scared of him yet very reluctant to say no to anything that Birju does to her. He could have easily kept using her and kept it a secret. As Birju was always a tharki and had tried on Namritas mom before, that could have spiced things up a lot. Whatever he was unable to do to Namritas mom, can do to Namrita and fulfil his lust. There was so much that Birju was able to do to her but now he’s dead.
However, you are a master in writing erotica and must’ve something way better planned for Namu. Can’t wait to read where this story goes.
Just a small request, do not make like a family incest sort of thing where we have seen it in earlier story. These sort of things are not real and does not happen very often. Try to keep the focus on Namrita with different low class older people. Just a suggestion. Please don’t mind.
Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Waiting, please post next update.
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Royal king fire, I truthfully give you the best erotic writing award for the Diwali Episode and it's Climax. It's too hot to handle in one read. It has mind blowing story content and erotic pleasure and diwali dhamakedar Climax. No one has achieved it like you proved it on xossipy as well as xossip. Evil, Rajkumar ki level se ek step ooper chale gaye is episode men. All the best to maintain same reputation and consistency. You stated an adultery High Class Virgin Girl with Low Class Characters. Hope you will maintain your genre than incest. DCP can seduce her but not dad. Your choice. We trust your writing instincts and plotlines. It was good that you finished it marathon climax in one final update. That's the high point of climax. Keep it up.