Angrakshak Parivar Ka .........MAHI

[Dmahi19]

UPDATE 34
PART - 6 (B) .... Supplementary part

Ani ab Delhi ke farmhouse ki terrace pe apne saamne juice piti Prabha ( Aryan ke Chachaji ki ikloti beti ) ko boli ," Aaj meine tujhe ek doosri duniya ke baare me batungi par mujhe bich me mat tokna vaise bhi tera purane architecture aur mythology mei bahot interest hai na".

Prabha muskara ," Didi aap subha subha mujhe yahan terrace pe akele kya batna chahti ho saaf saaf kaho mein aapki koi baat aaj tak taali hai ".

Ani ne pyari muskaan ke saath kaha ," I know very well my cute little sister now listen carefully , hindi me batati hun ......

धरती पर ही सात पातालों का वर्णन पुराणों में मिलता है। ये सात पाताल है- अतल, वितल, सुतल, तलातल, महातल, रसातल और पाताल। इनमें से प्रत्येक की लंबाई चौड़ाई दस-दस हजार योजन की बताई गई है। ये भूमि के बिल भी एक प्रकार के स्वर्ग ही हैं।

इनमें स्वर्ग से भी अधिक विषयभोग, ऐश्वर्य, आनंद, सन्तान सुख और धन संपत्ति है। यहां वैभवपूर्ण भवन, उद्यान और क्रीड़ा स्थलों में दैत्य, दानव और नाग तरह-तरह की मायामयी क्रीड़ाएं करते हुए निवास करते हैं। वे सब गृहस्थधर्म का पालन करने वाले हैं।

उनके स्त्री, पुत्र, बंधु और बांधव सेववकलोक उनसे बड़ा प्रेम रखते हैं और सदा प्रसन्नचित्त रहते हैं। उनके भोगों में बाधा डालने की इंद्रादि में भी सामर्थ्य नहीं है। वहां बुढ़ापा नहीं होता। वे सदा जवान और सुंदर बने रहते हैं। "........

Ani ne apni baat sanchep me kahi toh Prabha jor jor se hasne lagi ," hihi hi hi hi hi ...... my elder sister mein aaki knowledge badha deti hun but listen carefully joh meine aaj tak padha hai ..........

( Prabha ne English me sab explain kiya)

Patala is described as filled with splendid jewels, beautiful groves and lakes and lovely demon maidens. Sweet fragrance is in the air and is fused with sweet music. The soil here is white, black, purple, sandy, yellow, stony and also of gold.

The Bhagavata Purana calls the seven lower regions bila-svargas ("subterranean heavens") and they are regarded as planets or planetary systems below the earth. These regions are described as being more opulent than the upper heavenly regions of the universe. The life here is of pleasure, wealth and luxury, with no distress. The demon architect Maya has constructed palaces, temples, houses, yards and hotels for foreigners, with jewels. The natural beauty of Patala is said to surpass that of Swarga. There is no sunlight in the lower realms, but the darkness is dissipated by the shining of the jewels that the residents of Patala wear. There is no old age, no sweat, no disease in Patala.

The Vishnu Purana states....... the seven realms of Patala, which are located one above the other, are seventy-thousand yojanas (a unit of measurement) below the Earth's surface. Each of them extends ten thousand Yojanas. In Vishnu Purana, they are named as from the highest to the lowest as: Atala, Vitala, Nitala, Garbhastimat, Mahatala, Sutala and Patala. In the Bhagavata Purana and the Padma Purana, they are called Atala, Vitala, Sutala, Talatala, Mahatala, Rasatala and Patala. The Shiva Purana, replaces Mahatala with Tala. The Vayu Purana calls them Rasatala, Sutala, Vitala, Gabhastala, Mahatala, Sritala and Patala.

The seven Patalas as well as the earth above them is supported on the head of the tamasic (dark) form of Vishnu, the thousand-headed nāga Shesha. Sometimes, Shesha is described to reside in the lowest region of Patala instead of below it. Below the regions of Patala lies Naraka, the ***** Hell – the realm of death where sinners are punished.

Different realms of Patala are ruled by different demons and Nagas..... usually with the Nagas headed by Vasuki assigned to the lowest realm. Vayu Purana records each realm of Patala has cities in it. The first region has the cities of the daitya Namuchi and Naga Kaliya , in the second Hayagriva and Naga Takshaka; in the third, those of Prahlada and Hemaka; in the fourth of Kalanemi and Vainateya; in the fifth of Hiranyaksha and Kirmira and in the sixth, of Puloman and Vasuki. Bali rules as the sovereign king of Patala.

1)Atala

Atala is ruled by Bala – a son of Maya – who possesses mystical powers. By one yawn, Bala created three types of women – Svairini ("self-willed"), who like to marry men from their own group; Kamayani ("lustful"), who marry Male from any group, and the Punshchali ("those who wholly give themselves up"), who keep changing their partners. When any male enters Atala, these women enchant him and serve him an intoxicating cannabis drink that induces sexual energy in the man. Then, these women enjoy sexual play with the traveller, who feels to be stronger than ten thousand elephants and forgets impending death.

2)Vitala

Vitala is ruled by the god Hara-Bhava, who dwells with attendant ganas including ghosts and goblins as the master of gold mines along with his consort Bhavani and river Hataki here. When fire – fanned by wind – drinks from this river, it spits the water out as a type of gold called Hataka. The residents of this realm are adorned with gold from this region.

3)Sutala

Sutala constructed by Viswakarman, is the kingdom of the pious demon king Bali. The dwarf Avatar of Vishnu, Vamana tricked Bali – who had conquered the three worlds – by begging for three paces of land and acquired the three worlds in his three paces. Vamana pushed Bali to Sutala, but when Bali surrendered to Vishnu and gave away all his belongings to him, Vishnu in return made Bali, richer than Indra, the god-king of heaven. Bali still prays to Vishnu in this realm. Highly impressed by the devotion of Bali, Vishnu gave him a boon that He Himself would perpetually stand as the watchman to Bali's palace.

4)Talatala

Talatala is the realm of the demon-architect Maya, who is well-versed in sorcery. Shiva, as Tripurantaka, destroyed the three cities of Maya, but was later pleased with Maya and gave him this realm and promised to protect him.

5)Mahatala

Mahatala is the abode of many-hooded Nagas (serpents) – the sons of Kadru, headed by the Krodhavasha (Irascible) band of Kuhaka, Takshaka, Kaliya and Sushena. They live here with their families in peace but always fear garuda.

6)Rasatala

Rasatala at the sole of the feet of the universe form of Vishnu is the home of the demons – Danavas and Daityas, who are mighty but cruel. They are the eternal foes of Devas (the gods). They live in holes like serpents.

7) Patala

Patala or Nagaloka, is the lowest realm and the region of the Nagas, ruled by Vasuki. Here live several Nagas with many hoods. Each of their hood is decorated by a jewel, the light of which illuminates this realm. ""

Prabha apni poori baat karke jab chup huyi toh Ani muskara ke boli ," very good my lovely sister par ab samay aa gaya ki tum patalok jaakar Aryan bhai ki madad karo kyonki unka saamna ek bahot jhereeli nagin se hoga usko tum hi sam mohit karke rok sakti ho ".

Prabha badi badi aankhien phaad ke Ani ko hairani aur kotuhal se dekh rahi thi par Ani ke chehre ke bhaav ghambeer dekhkar woh kuch kehti , Ani uska hath pakad ke purane jungle ke samney teleport ho gayi .......

Prabha ab darr chuki thi ki yeh kya ho raha hai uske saath aur Ani didi ke saath yahan ish bhyanak jungle ke saamne kaise aa gayi ...... Ani se haath chuda ke usko dekhne lagi tab Ani ne kaha ," daro nahi baby , abhi tumko bahot kuch jaanana hoga bas mujhpar vishwas rakho phir Aryan bhai se pyar karti ho na sabse chupa ke ".......

Prabha sar hila ke ," nahi nahi aap meri Ani didi nahi ho , kyon ho tum aur mere baare me kya kya jaanti ho ?"

Ani ne bagar uski taraf dekhe aage badhte huye kaha ," mein Ani hi hun aur Aryan bhi yahan jungle me aata hai , uski jaan mushibat me hai agar tum chahti ho usko kuch na ho toh mere picche aa jao nahi toh vapas jaa sakti ho "........

Ani aage jaa jungle me parves kar gayi, Prabha bhi himmat juta ke jab darte darte ander phonchi toh Ani ko Maharani Vijaylakshmi ke roop me dekhkar vishmit hi reh gayi ...... Ander jungli jaanwar aur pakshi sar jhuka ke abhivadan kar rahe the Ani ka .......

Rani Vijaylamkshi ," tumhara suwagat hai Prabha , daro nahi yeh bhi mera (Ani) hi roop hai bas yahan mein Maharani Vijaylakshmi hun aur bahar tumhari badi bhen Anita Singh , ab tumko andazaa ho gaya hoga mein kaise teliport karke yahan laayi ....... Chalo tumko Aryan aur mere Guruji se aur hamare parivaar ke Guruji dono se milwati hun ...... dono apni deh tyaag kar paribimb roop me yahin nivaas karte hain ...... Meri MAA Rati devi , Saroo Didi , Geeta , Meena , Jane , Dolly , Neha bhi Aryan ke saath yahan aa chuke hain toh darna chodkar sabkuch samjhne ki koshish karo ".


Kuch din pehle 18 varsh purn ki yeh yuvti Prabha Singh joh sabse chulbuli thi parivaar me aur Rati ki jaan basti thi ish ladki me kyonki usko apni naani maa Ratidevi jaisa banna tha aur Dr Anju ki tarah doctor bhi ....... Aryan apne bade bhai ko bahot pyar karti thi as lover a bhi ..... Ani uski ideal sister thi uski ek call pe India aa gayi par 2 ghante bhi nahi areoplane ko land huye aur woh ish rahasmayi jungle me apni badi bhen ko Maharani ke roop dekhkar bas dimaagh ke ghode dauda ke sochti yeh sab kyun aur kaise ho raha hai ......

MahaRani Vijaylamkshi ke saamne jab dono Guruji ke partibimb prakat huye toh usne Prabha se dono ka ashirwad lene ko kaha toh usne bhi dono ko naman kiya jameen pe bethkar .......

Dono Guruji ne ashirwad diya phir Bade Guruji bole ," pareshan na ho putri tum puri tarah surkahshit ho aur Maharani ka tumko yahan bulane ka ek hi prayojan tha woh hai tumhara pichla janam aur ish janam me tum ushi teen phen waali apni bhen Vishaka se badla bhi le payogi jiski wajah se tum Sarp yoni dubara na paa saki "...... ishi ke saath Prabha ke maathe ke ander bade Guruji ke haath se prakash punj bheja toh aankhien bandh kar woh apne pichle janam ki sab ghatna dekhti chali gayi aur aankho se aansoon behte rahe .....

Kuch samay paschaat jab Prabha ne apni aankhien kholi aur aansoon phonch ke boli ," mein aa rahi Vishaka..... apni choti bhen ka saamne karne ke liye tyaar ho jaa , mere bhai Aryan ko tu choo bhi nahi payegi ".......

Rani Vijaylamkshi bas muskara ke bade Guruji ki taraf dekhi toh unhone bhi palkien jhapka ke ashvasan diya ki samay aa gaya hai Prabha ko patalok bhejne ka .......

( Doston yeh part Update ka edit kar ke cut kar diya tha , agar aap ne yeh na bhi padha toh story samjhne me koi dikkat nahi hogi ....... English waala part meine translate nahi kiya hai par koi dikkat nahi hogi jab Aryan aur Deepti aage patalok me safar karenge , wahan bhi jarurat ke hisaab se vistaar se pata chal jayega )

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EXCELLENT WORK KEEP IT UP

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Next update kal raat ko .....
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Update 34
[size=undefined]PART - 7 (A) ....... ( Patalok )


Ab Tak ........

Deepti kuch sochkar boli ," Aryan mujhe lagta hai nakshe aur ish jungle ka koi sambadh hai , ek min tum side hona "..... Aryan se durr jaakar Deepti ne jab mitti dekhi joh rait jaisi thi aur yahan ghass bhi nahi thi toh nicche bethkar apni nangi pith ke bal lait gayi .

Uski nangi pith jameen choote hi jungle gayab ho gaya aur poora andhera ke saath bas ek ghera gadha sa koi unshe 500 metre doori pe ish viraane si jagah pe dikhai diya ...... Dono samajh gaye yehi patalok ka parvesh dwaar hona chahiye ....... Aisi nirjeev aur khuskak jagah unhone nahi dekhi thi par manjil aage nazar aa rahi thi .

Deepti ab muskara ke khadi huyi aur Aryan ke pass badi ada se chalti huyi pith ghuma ke khadi ho gayi ...... Aryan ne bhi haskar uski goori pith se mithi jhaadi phir uske kaano ko kiss karke bola ," Mubarak ho ab naksha gayab ho chuka hai hamesha ke liye , agle 2 padav toh tum khud apne dimaagh me banne waali chavi se batane waali ho "...... uski jip bandh kar usko shield pehna di phir apni taraf turn kar kiss karne laga toh Deepti bhi kahan picche rehti apne premi ka alingan kiye bina ...... puchhhhh puchhhh chummm chumm muhhhhh muhhhh puchhhhh phuchhhh ..... I love you Mahi I love you meri jaan ......




Deepti


Khoob chooma chaati karne ke baad dono ko hosh aaya jab laga Geeta kisi musibat me hai...... Dono kiss todkar palte toh 20-22 koi 10-12ft unche danav size ke khonkhaar raaksash jaise prani unki ore hi badh rahe the aur unke chalne se dharti bhi kaamp rahi thi .

Deepti ne bhi jhukar apni talvaar utha ke kaha ," Mahi , hum Geeta didi ki koi madad nahi kar sakte par mujhse jameen pe naksha touch kar unki dharti ki shakti ( Earth power) khul gayi hai , ab dharti maiya se aajtak koi jeet paaya hai kya kabhi ? hum ab unko Divya Talvaar ko pakaar hi ajaad kara payenge unko teesre padav se pehle hi kaid kar liya gaya hai ".

Aryan bhi chintit hokar ," mujhe bhi yehi mehsoos huya aur Arjun-Chetak bhi khatre me hain phir diar mat karo pehle mein inh se nipat leta hun , inke haav bhaav dekhkar lagta hai inhse bagar lade toh hum ander jaa nahi payenge ...... bas tum picche rehna mein sambhal lunga ".


Ab Aage ......


Aryan ne apni talvaar nikaal ke unh 10-12 ft unche 20 se jaada khoonkaar danavo ki toli ki taraf daud laga, uchal ke chalangh maar ke do ke seene pe jabardast kick jadi joh sabse aage the aur teesre ka sar kaat diya ....... kick khakar dono picche apne 2 saathi ko lekar gire dhadaammmmm........ sab itni teji se huya ki baaki kisi ko mouka nahin mila vaar kar paate aur sar kate danav ka dhaad jameen me gira toh sab danav gusse se chillakar Aryan par vaar karne lage magar woh unke haath hi nahi lag raha tha apni teji se edher udher kudte huye vaar pe vaar karne laga .







Deepti joh Talvaar liye apni baari ka intzaar karne lagi ki koi sa danav uski taraf bhi aaye par Aryan ki dakshta aur vaar dekhkar baaki sab ne usko gher ke apne sastron (Gada aur Talvaar) se ghatak se ghatak vaar karne lage ...... Aryan apni speed se kisi ko laat kisi ko ghuse maar ke seedhe haath se Talvaar ka vaar kar unke ang aur sar kaatne laga ...... Saare uski teji dekh tilmila ke reh gaye kabhi kabhi vaar apas me hi ek doosre ko nukasan phonchte.

Shuru ke 2 min me usne sabko dhool bhi chata di thi aur 10 se jaada maar diye the par abki baar sabne uspar ek saath vaar kar usko nicche daba liya aur uski Talvaar durr phenk di cheen ke ek danav ne .

Danvao ke bade bade mukke aur shaktisaali waar bhi jab beasar hi Aryan pe sabit huye jinko woh rok ke apna mukka laat baar baar jad deta toh samjh gaye ye koi mayavi manush hai , 2-3 teen ne apni tantar aur rakshashi shakti ka upyog kiya par uspar koi asar nahi huya ..... Ush se takra ke shakti vapas khud pe lagti jaise koi shield Aryan ki body se lagi ho ...... (Yeh Saroo ki Kamal kawach ki shakti thi koi bhi kaali sakti usko bhed nahi sakti thi )

Aryan ne ek baar apna daav laga ke 4 danavon ko lekar joor laga ke ek saath durr pehnka aur unki taraf kood ke ab apne haathon ki unglion se hi unki aankh phodta , gardan tood daala baaki sabke vaar se bachkar ...... Ek badi jump maar woh apni talvaar utha liya aur palat ke phir se baaki 5-6 daanvon ko maarne kaatne laga .

Akhiri waale ka bhi sar kaat ke jab Deepti ki taraf palta toh woh muskara rahi thi uski bhaduri aur speed dekhkar ...... Deepti bhi abhi Aryan ke prakarm ko dekh ke vishmit thi ki Swayamvar me bhi koi inh danav jaisa shaktisali yodha na the par jish kushalta se Aryan ne sabko maar kaat daala woh aditviya tha .





Aryan

Aryan jab uski taraf badha toh dheree dheree Deepti ki muskarahat kam hone lagi aur darr sa chehre pe dikha ...... jameen ke kampan se laga koi heavy aeroplane jameen pe crash huya ho .

Aryan bhi jab palta toh dharti me bane Patalok ke parvesh dwaar se ek mahakaaye Danav (unh maare gaye daanv jaisa hi) bahar nikla ke jameen pe kooda tha ...... uski aankhien laal angaro si jal rahi thi aur seedhe haath ki katari si 8ft se bhi lambi Talvaar aag se lipti thi ....... Dikhne me hi kareeb 18 ft uncha , 6 ft chouda aur darwana tha . Sar pe yamraj waala kaala mukat seengh waala pehne sareer pe sirf nicche ek dhoti type ka neela vastar kamar se jhangho tak dhake tha aur gale me moti sone ki ratan jadit kayi badi badi maala pehne tha ..... Seedhe pair me sone ka mota bada kada uski vishalta ka bhakaan karta tha .

Aisa jeev Deepti kya Aryan ne bhi kabhi nahi dekha tha woh bhi aschariye chakit tha ki inta vishaal kaaye chalta phirta jeev uper se Danav . Aryan ki taraf jab Talvaar ka vaar uski kamar pe kiya toh Aryan ki Talvaar toh toot hi gayi bachaav karte huye par Aryan udta huya bhi vaar ke saath 100 metre door jaakar gira par usko chot nahi lagi thi ....... Aryan bhi uski speed dekhkar hairan tha jabki itna bhaari bharkam hai vishaal hone ke saath saath hi .




Dhartipakad Danav



Deepti jorse cheekhi ," Mahiiiiiii....... sambhalo apne ko ".

Danav ka dhayan jab palat ke Deepti ki taraf gaya toh Aryan ko yeh mouka mil gaya , woh poori taakat laga jaamen pe daud ke saath jab uske uper 50 ft unchi chaalangh laga dono haatho ki muthi bana ke sar pe vaar kiya toh Danav ko toh asar nahi huya mukat ke karan par Aryan ki taang pakad ke apne seedha haath se jameen me de patka ...... Aryan jameen me 8 ft andar ghus gaya tha itni jor ki patak se .......

Aryan bhi ush danav ki takaat aur phurti dekhkar samajh gaya yeh koi mamuli danav nahi , yah toh yeh patalok ke dwaar ka raksash "Dhartipakad" hai ya uska koi khaas sanik ......

Aryan abhi uthta ush pehle hi ush danav ne Deepti ko pakdna chaha toh Deepti ne bhi challangh laga uske baju pe Talvaar ka bharpoor vaar kiya par ush datye ko toh kharoch bhi nahi aayi ...... Magar Deepti ko pakdne ke liye doosre haath se jaise hi chooa toh uski cheekh nikal gayi ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ...... aur haath hata liya joh hissa Deepti ki body ke pass chooha tha woh gal gaya tha chune se jisme uski 3 unglian aur agutha saheed ho gaye ...... ahhhhhhhhhhhhh marrrrrrrr gayaaaaaaaa....... uski Talvaar bhi jameen pe gir gayi ....... Uska krudn bahot tez tha dard ki wajah se jaise yeh viraani si jagah bhi jagrit ho gayi thi par na uper asmaan tha na koi deewar kyonki yeh patalok aur prathvilok ke bich ka hissa tha ....... viraan aur jeevan rahit .


Deepti ne phir se Talvaar se uske piar pe vaar kiya par Danav ne uski Talvaar pakad ke kheencha jisse Deepti uske piar se takra ke gir gayi par uska ulta piar gutno tak gal ke girne laga ...... phir ahhhhhhhhh ki cheekh ke saath woh picche jameen me beth gaya ........ Aryan bhi Deepti ki bhaduri aur himmat dekhkar khush huya par danav ki halat dekh samjh gaya Deepti ko koi mard abhi touch nahi kar sakta ...... par kaise ab toh hamara Vivah bhi ho chuka hai???

Danav chilla hi toh pada "Mayaavi ladki kon hai tu ? tu mujhe nahi hara sakti , yeh kaisi shakti hai tere pass ? " .......

Ab ush ne Deepti ke upar jab apna mouh khol ke aag ke angare barsa diye toh Aryan jo pehle hi tyaar tha woh nazdeek ja Deepti ke aage khada ho ....... Kamal ki Shield ne Aryan Deepti ko ghera huya tha aur Deepti ko Aryan ne apne saath laga liya tha toh koi asar hi nahi huya ....... 2 min tak jab lagatar aag barsane ke baad bhi unhpar danav ki agnivarsha beasar sabit huyi tab ush danav ko samjh me aaya ki yeh dono aam manush nahi hai par yahan aaye kaise ?

Danav ne sochkar petra badla ," kon ho tum aur yahan kyon aaye ho ???? pakka mayavi ho joh mere vaar se abhi jinda bacche ho ? "

Aryan aur Deepti bhi khade hokar uski taraf dekhkar sambhal chuke the par Aryan ne Deepti ko apne se picche hi rakha aur ush danav se kaha ," hum Divya Talvaar ki khoj me aaye hain , hamara usko dhoodhna bahot jaruri hai , tum kyon ho joh humko rok rahe ho ?"

Danav bhi hairan tha yeh dono Patalok me ush Divya Talvaar ke liye apni jaan ki parwa kiye bagar yahan aaye hain ........ kuch soch ke chaal chalte huye bola ," ush Talvaar ke liye tumko Patalok ke ander jaana hoga aur Patalok ka dawar ko mein Maha Danav Dhartipakad hi khol sakta hun magar mein kyon jaane dun tumko Patalok ?"

Aryan thoda sochkar bola ," phir humko tumhe maar ke hi ander jaana hoga , behtar hoga humko jaane do vaise bhi tum ghayal ho marr ke tum ko kya milega ? ....... yeh meri patni hai aur iski jaan bachane ke liye Divya Talvaar tak humko phonchna hai , tumko maar ke hum Patalok ka choukidaar nahi khona chahte ".

Danav haskar ," hahahahaha ...... hahahahaha ........ hahahahaha ....... tum dono mayavi manush hokar apne ko shaktishaali samjh rahe ho par tumko gayat nahi hai ki Patalok me tumhari koi maya kaam nahi karegi aur mujhe ghayal karke tum apne ko shurveer samjh rahe ho toh yeh tumhari bahot badi bhool hai ...... Abhi tak meine apni shakti dikhai hi kahan hai , mujhe koi nahi maar sakta aur tum jaise thuch manushon ko mein apna bhojan bana leta hun "..... ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ......... uska athaas bahot hi darwana tha ......


Dhartipakad (Danav ) ne apna aakar ghata ke 10 ft ke kareeb kar liya par lag abhi bhi woh darwana aur badshurat hi tha ......

Dhartipakad ," tujhe ab mera naam bhi pata hai par kisi ne yeh nahi batya ki mujhe koi hara ke hi patalok ke ander jaa sakta joh kabhi hazaron saalon se nahi huya ".

Deepti ki taraf ishara karke bola ," ish sundari ko mein apni gulaam bana ke rakhunga aur tu joh koi bhi hai phoot le yahan se jaa teri jaan bakshi ish sundari ke liye ".

Aryan jorse hasa ," ha ha ha ha ...... abe ya toh tu nira bewkoof hai ya aankh ka andha ..... bawale yeh ladki nahi sakshaat mout ka roop hai isko joh choo liya woh parlok sidhar gaya dekh apne haath ki unglian aur gala huya piar phir bhi iske chakkar mei hai ....... jara dailogue sahi maar ki mujhe gulaam banega aur ish ladki ko jaane dega ..... hi hi hi hi hi ..... "...... Aryan bhi uska uphaas udaane laga toh Deepti ke chehre pe bhi pheeki muskaan aa gayi kyonki Dhartipakad koi mamuli danav usko nahi lag raha tha par Aryan ki chinta thi ushe .

Danav bhi jorse athaas maar ke hasa aur aankh bandh karke mantar pada toh uske haath piar theek hone lage ...... phir aankh kholkar Aryan ko ghoorta huya chillaya ," murk manush ab toh jinda nahi rahega aur ish ladki ko tere saamne hi nanga karke .......ahhhhhhhhhhhhh ..... "

Uski baat adhuri hi reh gayi Aryan ne uski baat poori hone se pehle hi uchal ke ghussa jab uske mouh pe jada toh uske 4 daant toot gaye aur khoon nikala fohara ke saath toh dard se ahhh chillaya ...... Gusse se neeli aankien joh laal ho chali thi Aryan ki ...... phir toh jaise uske baad uske upar laat mouke ki itni tej barsat ki Danav sambhal nahi paa raha tha aur adhmara sa maar khaakar jameen pe gira .....

Aryan ne jab jameen pe gire huye Dhartipakad ke pet pe jorse laat maari toh usne dono haath se uske piar ke vaar rok ke pakad liya par Aryan ne doosra pair ki kick se uski ek aankh pe maari aur dono haath ka vaar uske seene pe kiya toh Danav tilmila ke usko picche uchaal diya Aryan ko aur chilla ke apni dayni aankh pe haath rakha joh phoot gayi aur usse khoon beh raha tha ...... Aryan ki kick se uski dayni aankh phoot gayi thi .

Aryan bhi gusse se picche jameen pe girte hi furti se khade hote hi phir pil pada...... Dhartipakad pe laat ghusse jaise hathode ki maafik ushpar baras rahe the ...... " sauar ki aullad tu meri Deepti ko gulaam banega , usko nanga karega ...... maderchod mein teri maa chood dunga kutiya ke janne , haram ke beej aaj tujhe apne paida hone pe afsoos hi hoga "..... Deepti bhi Aryan ka ugrh roop dekhkar darr bhi rahi thi ki yeh kaisi shakti hai Aryan ke pass joh itni teji se kisi chandaal ki taar Danav ko maar raha hai .

Har gujarte pal ke saath Dhartipakad ki halaat bad se badtar hoti jaa rahi thi , woh kuch kar hi nahi paa raha tha par uske pass ab ek hi rasta bacha tha woh jhat se dharti me sama gaya par Aryan ne haathon se uski ek taang pakad li joh dharti me ghuste huye aa gayi jisse Aryan bhi dharti ke ander samata chala gaya .......

Dharti ke ander Danav ke ghaav bharne lage par Aryan usko wahan bhi ghusse se maarta raha ....... Dono jab 100 ft ander dhas gaye toh Danav ne apna powerful mantar padha jisse Aryan ko jhatka laga aur woh bahar sateh pe aakar gira ......

Aryan khada huya toh Dhartipakad bhi khush hota ab sahi salamat bahar aaya ki Dhartipakad usko aise hi nahi bolte kyonki ish shakti ki wajah se mujhe koi hara nahi sakta par Aryan ko dekhkar hairan tha ki yeh jinda kaise bach gaya aur yeh hi uski sabse badi bhool thi jiska usko ghamand tha .......

Danav ki dharti waali power ka Aryan pe koi asar na huya par kaise ? abhi woh soch hi raha tha ki Deepti ne apni talvaar Aryan ki taraf phenki aur boli ," maar daalo ish behesi darinde ko Aryan yeh Patalok ki choukidaari ke layak nahi hai".

Dhartipakad bhi ab Aryan se darr raha tha kyonki jitni teji se ish manush ne usko dharti ke ander bhi maara tha aur shakti mantar ka asar nahi huya toh yeh bahot jaada shaktisaali hai ...... Yeh manush nahi ho sakta pakka raksash ya danavi shakti bhi iske pass hai mayavi hone ke saath par weh bhi mujhe nahi hara sakte .

Aryan ne gusse se Talvaar se usse vaar karne shuru kiye toh woh bhi bas apni angaro waali Talvaar se bachav hi kar paa raha tha kyonki ab Aryan ki Talvaar bhi uski shakti se jadit thi ...... rukk jaaa rukkk jaaa , mujhe chod de ".......

Magar diar ho chuki thi pehle Aryan ne uski dono haath kaat chuka tha ...... apni laat uske seene mei gada ke chilla ," Deepti meri jaan hi nahi meri rooh ki malika hai aur tu ne ushpar buri niyat dikha ke apni mout maang li Dhartipakad ...... teri aankho me dikh raha ki tu ne kitne nirdosh logon ko maara hai kitni streeon ki ijjat taar taar ki hai ...... Bahot naaj hai na tujhe apne laude pe aaj dekh mein kya karta hun ".

Uske baad toh Deepti bhi Aryan ke ghinona kirtya dekhar palat gayi ki mein yeh nahi dekh sakti par har gujrte samay ke saath Dhartipakad ki cheekhian ghoonj rahi thi ...... uska Patalok , uske mantar , uski shaktiyan bhi aaj sab bekaar hi sabit huyi ...... Patalok se bhi uske kayi subhchintak bhi itni gandi dardnak mout ke bas mook darsak hi bane rahe .

(Aryan ne Dhartipakad ko nanga kar uska 2 ft lamba lauda kaat daala aur apni talvaar me lauda piro ke uski gaand me thoos diya phir uski dono taange kaati phir uska seena phaad ke uska dil nikal uske mouh me thoos diya )

Aryan chilata huya ," jaa ab naraklok apne kukaramo ki saza bhugt tera samay poora ho gaya Patalok me" ....... aur uska sar kaat ke Deepti ke pairon ki taraf phenka aur Talvaar ke vaar ne theek Deepti ke pair ke pass Dhartipakad ka kata hua mund Talvaar se behd diya tha joh jameen me aadhi dhans gayi sar se ghuskar dil se bahar aati huyi ......

Durdaant aant huya Dhartipakad ka aur Patalok ke Mahabali ko bhi ghera aghaat huya ki Unka choukidaar ( Patalok ke dwaar ka rakshak , pehredaar maara gaya ) ...... Aryan aur Deepti ko Patalok ke ander parvesh hote huye dekhkar sabne apni jagah pe hi rehna theek samjha .....????

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Dhartipakad ne Deepti ke baare me galat bolkar Aryan ki takaat hi jaise lalkaar di thi , Dhartipakad ko koi manush , Danav , Devta , Jaanvar bhi nahi maar sakte the par ek aatma Aryan ke ander aisi thi jisko mehsoos karke hi Patalok ke bhi praan sookh gaye ...... yeh Dhartilok se Patalok tak kaise aaya aur woh bhi jivat hai jabki yeh toh 40,000 saal pehle hi deh tyaag diya tha ....... Ab Divya Talvaar ko le jaane se isko kyon rok sakta hai ....


Patalok me achanak 7 lok ke swaami aur Mahabali ikhete huye tab ek bujurg se 10 phaan waale Sarp ne kaha joh sabka adarniye tha ," yeh Maharyan ka Avtaar hai , iske ander 5 aur aatma samahit hain joh ki ashambhav hai itni shakti dharan karna par hum usko roke toh maut ko gale lagane waali baat hogi ....... Divya Talvaar bhi jab yahan prakat huyi thi tab hi humko samajh jaana chahiye tha ki ek din uska maalik aayega joh Patalok ko bhi nasht kar sakta hai ".

Doosra 4 fan waala sarp ( ardh sarp ardh danav jaisa dikhne waala) bola ," Mahabali aap bhi usse darr rahein hain jabki aapko koi hara nahi sakta , usne Dhartipakad ko hi toh maara hai ...... mein abhi usko maar ke nighal jaunga aap bas aagya dijye "...... woh jaise tesh me tha .......

Tab ek sunder se aurat joh vesh bhusa se Maharani lag rahi thi boli ," Naagdansh tum toh kya hum sab bhi usko milkar nahi rok sakte agar woh apni pe aa gaya ........ sukar hai uski shakti abhi soyi huyi hain , humko adrish hokar usko Divya Talvaar tak phonchne dena chahiye ...... Waise bhi ush shaktisaali Talvaar ko iske alwa koi dharan nahi kar sakta jisne koshish ki maara gaya ........ Bas koi ush pagal Vishaka ke pass soochna bhejo ki jaan pyari hai toh Divya Talvaar se door ho jaye ".

Bujurg naag ," Maharani sahi bol rahi hai , apne hi haatho apne Patalok ka vinaash karwana woh bhi ush Divya Talvaar ke liye joh hamara thi hi nahi kyon lalach karna , Vishaka ko sandesh phonch gaya hoga uske yahan Patalok me kadam rakhte hi ....... Koi kuch nahi karega usko yahan se jald se jald Divya Talvaar le jaane do yeh hamara aadesh hai ....... Aaj ke baad Divya Talvaar ke jaate hi Naagdansh tum Patalok ke parvesh dwaar ki jimmedari uthaogye ".

Jitni jaldi Sabha huyi utni jaldi hi khatam bhi ho gayi ki Aryan ko khud Divya Talvaar hasil karni hogi , humko kuch nahi karna ......... Woh Aryan se nahi ush ke ander chatti (6th) aatma se darr rahe the joh uske ander bade Guruji ne parvesh ki thi uske janam ke samay jab waqat ruk gaya tha aur safed roshni Saroo ke bete Mahi ke ander sama gayi thi .

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Deepti ne palat ke Dhartipakad ke sar mund pe apni laat rakh haath se apni talvaar bhaar nikaali , jameen me dhool me ragdi phir ek kapde se saaf ki aur myian me rakh li khoon phonch ke ....... Aryan uske pass phoncha ab woh normal tha aur apne gale se laga liya uska maatha choom ke ...... Deepti ki khushi aur umaad ka thikana na tha , Dhartipakad ke gusse dilane ke baad jish koorta se Aryan ne usko ek aam yodha ki tarah maar daala woh uski Deepti ke liye pyar ko darshata tha lekin woh kahan jaanti thi ki jish Dhartipakad ko Aryan ne maara usko koi insaan kya koi bhi nahi maar paata woh ajay tha par amar nahi ban paya Aryan ke karan .


Deepti ne Aryan ke gaal pe chooma," aap mujhse itna pyar karte ho ki mein aaj bahot khush hun "....... Aryan bhi haskar," mujhe tumse pehli nazar me bhi pyar ho gaya jab tumko dekha phir tumhare mere liye itni care aur apnapan mujhe tumhara hone se rok nahi paya phir Chanda Rani ( Geeta ) ka tumse lagav aur pyar meri zindgi me tumko laa hi diya ....... Ab aage badhna chahiye Geeta abhi bhi kaid me hogi ".

Deepti Aryan apne ko sanyit kar jab ush gehre aur bade gadhe me dekhe toh ek taraf bada sa dwaar nazar aaya , dono gadhe me koode joh 50 ft ghera tha aur golakaar dwaar se jab ander pravesh kiye jispar koi darwaja nahi tha .

Darwaja toh Dhartipakad ke marte hi vilupat ho gaya par dwaar aise hi bana tha jaise kabhi darwaja hi na ho ....... Ander jab enter kiye toh sab taraf prakash hi tha din jaisa jabki dwaar ke picche ushpar bilkul andhera ........ Saamne upar aasmaan ,nicche haryali , ped podhe , chidya , kuch jaanwar bhi dikhe par koi bhi khoonkaar nahi tha ......

Acchi vaayu beh rahi thi aur door tak rasta dikh raha tha , dono aage badhte gaye kareeb aadhe ghante baad unko dur ek basti si nazar aa rahi thi jab dono najdeek phonche toh unko kuch 2-3 manzil ki building aur log dikhe , kuch manav jaise , kuch danav jaise , kuch ardh sarp , ardh danav , kuch purn sarp ....... Kuch bahot sunder streeian kuch bahot sunder mard bhi .

Aryan ne jab ek manush ki tarah dikhne waale se poocha ki yeh konsi jagah hai ........ ushne dono ko uper se nicche tak ghoora aur bola ," manush hokar tum yahan kya kar raho hai 'Ataal Lok' mei ?"

Aryan thoda sochkar bola ," hum kisi ko dhoondh rahein hain joh hamari madad kare ".

Woh dono ko dekhta raha phir bola ," tum hamari bhasa bhi jaante ho toh tumko pata hona chahiye ki ish Puschin nagar ke pramukh se kuch nahi chipta tum unke pass jao unki aagya ke bagar yahan nahi ruk sakte ...... ish raaste pe 7 yojan ki doori par nagar hai wahi pooch lena unka mahel kahan hai "...... itna kehkar aage badh gaya .....

7 lok bahot bade the, ek lok 80 yojan ( yahan ki maapne ki ikai yaani 1k km ) ka hoga .......


Aryan phir Deepti se ," tum kya kehti ho humko nagar jaana chahiye ki nahi ?"

Deepti muskara ," hum wahan kya karenge jabki humko Ataal(1) nahi , Vitala(2) hokar Sutala(3) ke baad Talatala(4) jaana hai joh hamara choutha padav hoga aisa mere mastik me nakshe pe dikh raha hai".

Aryan bhi uske chedte huye ," phir toh mein bekaar mein hi koshish kar raha tha jabki manjil ka tumko pehle se pata hai ".

Deepti bhi bhaav dete huye boli ," hum bhi apni baari ka intzaar kar rahe the ki aap poochen hum baatien .... hi hi hi hi ".

Tabhi wahan kayi sanik aakar unko gher liye joh ki sab stree hi thi sanik ke roop mei , unki leader boli ," tumko abhi hamare saath Puschin chalna hoga yeh nagar parmukh ka adesh hai , nahi toh humko bandi banana hoga tum dono ko".

Bhid bhi ikathi hone lagi toh Deepti ne Aryan ka haath pakad ke kaha ," hum dono tyaar hain par yaad rahey yeh mera khaband ( Husband ) hai , koi buri nazar rakhi toh mein bich se chir dungi ".

Leader ," humko bas nagar pramukh ne bheja hai tum dono ko sahi salamat wahan laane ke liye ".

Dono ko ek badi se rath me bitha ke weh 20 ke kareeb sanik mahila chal di nagar ki taraf , rath ko 6 ghode ke jaise 4 pair waale pashu bahot tez gati se keech rahe the par ajeeb baat thi koi pahiya ( Wheel ) nahi tha bas raaste se 2 ft hawa mei hi woh rath jisme sab swaar hokar bethe the sarpat bhaaga jaa raha tha .......

Aryan-Deepti ek saath bethe the par sab stree sanik Aryan ko hi dekh rahi thi akhir itna sundar purush unhone nahi dekha tha upar se manush jinka khoon aur virye bahot swadist hota hai..... par Deepti sabki mansa samjhte huye Aryan ke gaal choom ke uske haath apni dono chaati me daboch ke sar ko uske kandhe par rakh li thi ...... jaise ki ish se dur raho yeh mera hai .

Leader bhi muskara ke boli ," tum ishko yahan kyon lekar aayi ho , sab mouka milte hi ishko apna gulaam banne ki koshish karengi ...... phir itna khoobsurat manush aajtak nahi dekha hum sab ne bhi ".

Deepti thoda josh ke saath boli," yeh koi sadharan purush nahi hai , Divya Talvaar ke maalik hain toh soch samjh ke bolna aur dekhna kahi mout ko gale na lagna pade ".

Divya Talvaar ka maalik sunte hi sab jaise shock hi ho gayi aur Aryan se darr rahi thi , Deepti ne muskara ke sabko dekha aur phir Aryan ka sar apni taraf ghuma ke usko aankh maari phir uske lips choosne lagi toh Aryan bhi khush hota bas uska saath dene laga ....... Itni stree yodha ke bich usne Deepti ko hi vaartalaap karne diya .

Yodha streeian bhi bas tadap hi sakti thi kyonki jisko woh mamuli insaan soch rahi thi woh toh Divya Talvaar ka Divya purush nikla humko nahi milega bas nagar pramukh ( Rani) hi ab majye lengi par yeh sunder yuvti ( Deepti) apne pati ko asani se nahi degi kisi ko .......

Kareeb aadhe ghante baad jab ish bhav nagar me enter kiye toh Deepti aur Aryan apni aankho se dekhte hi reh gaye , poora swarn nagri hi tha yeh nagar yaani sabkuch gold se bana tha aur har jagah bade bade ratan lage the .

Deepti aur Aryan aam insaan hote toh lalach aa hi jaana tha par dono khush hote huye bas ish nagar ki bahvta dekh rahe the ........ Aisa sehar toh dhartilok pe milna muskil hai , sab loot paat hi macha denge ........ Aryan ko andaza ho raha tha ki kareeb woh nagar me 200 km aa chuke hain toh ish nagar ko banne me hi arabon ton sona laga hoga par yahan koi electricity se nahi balki bade bade ratano ki light se poori nagar roshan tha par upar asmaan jaise halka neela hi lag raha tha .

Raste me stree , pursh , bacche ko Bazzar aur raste me dekhkar bas dono apni sochon me gum the ....... Dono Divya Talvaar se dhyan hata bas Patalok ke ish pehle nagar ko dekhkar bhonchake the par unko kahan pata tha woh Patalok ke lakhon mei se ek hisse ko dekh rahein hain ...... naa jaane kitne anginat bade bade nagar aur Rajya yahan hain alag alag lok mei joh hazron guna sunder aur moolwaan hain .

Sab sanik ek badi sunder imaart ke saamne ruk gaye aur woh leader sanik stree unko ander le gayi toh ander ki sundarta dehkar dono kho hi gaye , ek bahot bade rajshi hall me jab phonche toh ek rajshi poshak pehni sunder stree ne dono ka abhivadan kiya toh ush leader ne sar jhuka ke abhivadan kar picche ruk gayi .......

Aryan-Deepti ne bhi haath jodkar usko sar jhuka ke namaste kiya kyonki sab khade ho gaye 35 singhasaan se jisse samjhte diar nahi lagi yehi nagar parmukh hai ....... 25-26 saal ki yeh aurat nahi balki kaam ki Devi hi lag rahi thi sunderta aur kamukata mei ......

Nagar parmukh ," mein hun ish nagar ki rani Swarnlata , Aryan-Deepti tum dono ka swagat hai , baatien baad me karenge mere saath chalo pehle vishram grah me ".

Woh ush haal se bahar nikal gayi uske picche woh dono bhi hall se seedhe haath pe chal diye ...... Uski matkti chote vastaron me gaand ki lachak dekh Aryan ka toh imaan hi dol gaya , aisi kaatil pusht chootad ki thirkan kabhi nahi dekhi par Deepti ne uski pith pe maara ," Geeta Didi ko batungi tum kya kar rahe ho "......

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Rani Swarnlata


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Aryan bhi kheej ke apni nigaah ush galihare ki diwaar pe maarta ab idhar udhar dekhta huya chal raha tha ...... Swarnlata ke nitamb ki tharkan jaise kaano tak feel ho rahi thi , teeno ek kaksh me phonche toh usne unko fresh hone ko kaha par Deepti ne morcha sambahla ," mujhe aap se akele me baat karni hai abhi ".

Swarnlata ne ek poori najar Aryan pe maari dono ki aankhien mili toh jaise usne sandesh hi bhej diya ho Aryan ko ki tum mujhe pasand ho .

Swarnlata ," theek hai chalo mere saath, Aryan tum snan kar lo Dhartipakad ko maar ke abhi bhi uske khoon ki badbu aa rahi hai , hum aate hain ".

Aryan kuch bolta usse pehle hi Deepti ne haath dikha ke usko chup karwa diya ," tum fresh ho jayo mein aati hun , kisi se kuch baat mat karna ".

Deepti ke jaate hi Aryan bhi apna samaan rakh poore kaksh ko dekhkar uski sajawat aur vilaashta pe khush ho raha tha ki aisa hi Chanda Rani ke liye banunga par Geeta ki yaad aate hi Aryan bhi satark hokar humko jald yahan se niklna hoga Geeta abhi bhi kaid hogi wahan uski halat pata nahi kya hogi , hey bhagwan meri Geeta ka khayal rakhna mein uske bina nahi reh sakta .......

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Deepti jab Swarnlata ke kaksh me phonchi toh usne kaha ," dekho Rani Swarnlata , tum jisko rijhane ki koshish kar rahi ho woh Divya Talvaar ka maalik hai aur usne sirf Dhartipakad ko ishliye maar diya kyonki sirf usne mujhe gandi nazar se dekh gande sabd bolne chahe toh apne yeh roop ka jaadu khatam karo aur humko agli manjil tak jaane do ishi me sabki bhalai hai ....... Tumhara nagar aur prajya bahot acchi hai sirf ek yuvak ke liye sab daav pe mat lagao ".

Rani Swarnlata ko apni yeh toheen lagi tabhi uske mastik me sandesh aaya MAYA ka ," yeh sahi bol rahi hai unki madad karo aur apni jaan baccho woh tumhare roop jaal me kuch diar phas sakta hai par baad me tum kisi ko batne ke liye jeevit nahi hogi ".

Patalok ke Raja MAYA ki chetavni toh ander tak hila di Swarnlata ko par apne pe kabu karte huye boli ," Maharaaj meine Kaamlata aur Pushplata ko bhi sandesha bhej diya hai Aryan ne Dhartipakad ko maara ush ka tofaa dene ke liye hum utsathit hain ".

Raja MAYA ," uske liye tumko dhartilok jaana hoga bas abhi usko Divya Talvaar lekar jald se jald jaane do nahi toh Patalok hi tabaah ho jayega tumhari murkhta ke karan , mere aadesh ka palan karo ".

Deepti ke hilane pe Rani Swarnlata apne hosh me aayi aur boli," Deepti , tum bhi snan karke tyaar ho jayo aur mein vaada karti hun ki koyi Aryan pe nigaah nahi dalegi magar meri ek shart hai aur mein tumko aisi cheej dungi ki tum dono ko koi pure patalok me kahin bhi jaane se nahi rokega ".

Deepti kuch sochkar ," theek hai Aryan ke alwa kuch bhi maang sakti ho ".

Swarnlata khush hokar ," mein apni do badi bheno ke saath prathvilok aaongi tab hum teeno ko Aryan dhartilok ghumane le jayega tab tumko koi aitraaj nahi hona chahiye ".

Deepti ," mein samjh rahi hun par rani hokar bhi toh aap ko kitne log mil jayenge phir mera pati hi kyon ?"

Rani Swarnlata ," tum chinta na karo agar woh nahi chahega hum mei se koi aage nahi badhega par Aryan ki jhalak hi hirdya me utar gayi bas haan kar do mujhe accha lagega , meine aajtak kisi mard ke liye minnat nahi ki phir hum Dhartipakad ki mirtyu ka purashkaar hi denge ".

Deepti kuch sochkar ," theek hai Aryan ke saath ghoomne ki permission mein deti hun aur baaki ki permission tumko Geeta Didi se leni hogi joh kaid ho gayi hain ".

Rani Swarnlata khush hokar Deepti ke gale lagi aur boli ," Divya Talvaar ko agar Aryan ne paa liya toh Geeta bhi wahin aa jayegi par tumko ek baat bata dun Aryan se bhi kehna ki Vishaka ko dekhte hi maar de nahi toh ithaas phir dhoora jayega aur tum usko kho dogi ".

Deepti ," mein yaad rakhungi aur woh kya tohfa hai joh dene waali thi ?"

Rani Swarnlata ," tum ready ho jayo, mein jaate huye dungi . Deepti tum bahot saubhagwati ho jisko Aryan jaisa pati mila ".

Deepti wapas jaate huye palat ke boli ,"yeh mujhse jaada kon jaanta hai ".

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Deepti jab kaksh me phonchi toh snangarh se Aryan ke gaane ki awaaj aa rahi thi ...... " tu mayake mat jaiyo mat jaiyo meri jaan ....."

Deepti bhi muskara ke dwaar band kar jaldi se snangarh me phonchi toh 5 yuvtion ko ander jhankta dekh gusse se aag babula hokar sabko aage badhkar picche dhakka di aur ander dekhi toh Aryan poora nanga naha raha tha ek bath tub numa sone ki hauj me gaana gaate huye ...... pancho yuvti khadi hokar jaldi se bhagi khadi hokar aur Deepti unke picche ," ruko nahi toh sabko maar dungi "......

Sab dwaar kholkar bas khadi hi reh gayi aur palat ke uske pass jaa piar pakad li humko maaf kardo hum daasi toh bas mehmaan ko nehlaane aayi thi ...... Deepti bhi unki gidgidhat dekhkar mann me hasi ab khud kabhi Aryan ko imagine kar naha nahi payogi ...... hi hi hi hi .....

Deepti ," aage aisi galti na ho samjhi , bhago yahan se "......

Deepti ne dwaar bandh kiya unke bhaagte hi aur khud ab dhyan se kaksh dekhti upar chat ko dekh rahi thi ki Aryan ne usko goad me utha liya aur choomte huye snangarh me le gaya woh mana karti rahi par bilkul nirvastar karke usko ush hauj jaisi bathtub me le gaya ......



Nude Deepti

Dono premi kisi naago ki tarah lipat ek doosre ko kiss karte , sehlate huye naha rahe the ....... unko khud nahi ahsaas tha par yeh pyar ki nischal krida unko poora jo karti thi .

Deepti bhi ab sharma nahi rahi thi , pichle 10-12 ghanto me Aryan ke liye itni stree or yuvti ki kamuk nigaah usko apne pritam pe kabja dikhane ke liye vivash kar di thi ........ puchhh puchhh chummmm chummmm chummmm chummmm muhhhhh muhhhh puchhhhh puchhhh........

Apni yoni ko Aryan ke vishaal sakhat ling pe ragdti jab do baar shkhaliyt aur santust hokar uske lund aur goote se Geeta ne sikhaye anubhav se pyar kar choomti , chaat leti kabhi choos ke 10 min me jhaad ke aadha virye pi bhi gayi ....... Aryan pe bhi jaise Patalok ki sundar aur maadak streeon ka jaadu aaj jaada hi usko utejit kar rakha tha .

Aryan ," Deepti , kuch toh jaadu hai yahan ki mahila ko dekhkar mein kuch jaada hi utejit ho gaya tha "...... akhir kar Aryan ne durgatna se sawadhani bhali waali soch vaykt ki Deepti ko .

Woh bhi muskara ke Aryan ka gaal choom ke boli ," aap chinta na karo jabtak mein hun koi mouh utha ke aapke karib aayi toh uski aankhien phood dungi bas apna dimaagh Geeta Didi ko jald se jald riha karne me lagaye ". Aryan ke liye chetawani , chinta aur pyar teeno ek hi line me Deepti ne bol diye.

Aryan (mann me ) Yeh itni bhi seedhi nahi hai jitna mein samjh raha tha tabhi mujhe blowjob dekar thanda ki , waah ri kismat itni sunder sunder stree ko choo bhi nahi sakta kaash Meena yahan hoti toh Talvaar milne ke baad ek hafta yahin aish karta .

Deepti uski tandra bhang karte huye," jaldi ready hote hai , Rani Swarnlata ne bhojan pe bula hai ".

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Rani Swarnlata ne bhojan karake dono ko Patalok ki poshak mei vida kiya apni mohar dekar joh Patalok ke doosre lok me aasani se jaane ke liye thi .

Aryan-Deepti ke saath ek stree yodha ( Wahi leader yodha) apne rath pe 3 ghante me unko 'Vitala lok' ke ander Rani Swarnlata ki swarn mohar dikha ke le gayi joh bhooton aur pisaach ka rajya tha par yahan bhi sab sone se hi bana tha tab stree yodha ne batya ki ishi lok se swarn sab patalok me jaata hai aur yahan ke goblins swarn nikalne me mahir hote hain ...... pehle do nadi paar ki joh ki yahan ki do Maharani ke naam thi phir swarn se bani ek vishaal nagri ko paar kiya .

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Jab teeno 'Sutala Lok ' me parvesh kiye toh wahan dwaar pe hi Vishnu bhagwan ka bada sa mandir tha tab stree yodha ne batya ki yeh Mahabali BALI ka lok hai aur yeh Vishnu bhagwan ke vaman Avtaar ka mandir hai ....... Swaym bhagwan ne ish Lok ki raksha ka vardan diya hai .

Aryan-Deepti ne bhav mandir me jaakar bhagwan Vishnu ki puja ki toh swaym ish lok ke RajGuruji ne wahan aakar dono ko ashirwad diya aur pooja karwai ......

Dono ne unka ashirwad liya tab RajGuruji bole ," bhagwan Vishnu tumhari raksha karenge parantu vatsh yeh dhayan rahe agar Divya Talvaar ke liye tum ne kisi ko nuksaan phoncha toh koi bhi tumhari madad na karke balki sab tumko dandit jaroor karenge . Maharyan apne Divya Talvaar ko hasil kar vapas apne Lok mei jaane me hi tumhari bhalai hai ".


Aryan bhi sar jhuka ke bola ," Gurudev me toh bas apni patni Deepti ke praan bachane hetu hi yahan Patalok tak aaya hun , mein Dhartipakad ko bhi maarna nahi chahta tha par usne Deepti pe kudristi daali to sajaa deni padi ..... mein iske liye maafi chahta hun ".

RajGuruji ne Aryan ko apne gale laga ke kaha ," putr tum kon ho ish baat se abhi anjaan ho par samay balwaan hota hai sab theek hi karega bas apne kartav se mat digna varna sab kuch bikhar jayega. Haan Dhartipakad ko uske ku karmo ki sajaa milni hi thi jisko sirf tum hi maar sakte the tabhi to tum itni asaani se yahan tak phonch gaye sab rini hai tumhare ..... vijayi bhav !!!! "

Deepti kuch sochkar ," Guruji , agla padav mere pati ko mujhse chal se chin na le ".

RajGuruji ," dhair rakho putri phir Divya Talvaar ko pana itna asaan toh nahi , bhagwan Vishnu aur Raja BALI Maharaaj ka ashirwad tum dono ko mila hai apne prem pe vishwas rakho ".

RajGuruji se aagya lekar phir dono stree yodha ke saath ish bhav lok ko dekhte aage badh rahe the ...... bilkul parthvilok ki tarah bas danav aur raksash insaani roop liye huye the ....... Stree yodha ne batya yeh Patalok ka sabse sunder aur suvasthit lok hai ...... yahan har taraf khushaali hai na koi chal kapt sab milansar hain asura, danav hone ke baad bhi ...... Parthvilok bhi kuch nahi iske saamne yahan Raja BALI Maharaaj ka sushasan isko smardh karta hai ".
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Deepti ne apni jigyasa vakt ki ," phir Patalok waale sab yahan kyon nahi rehte ?"



Stree yodha muskara ke ," Sab lok apne me ek lok hain , kya aap hamesha yahan rehna chahti ho nahi na kyonki apna lok accha ho ya bura humko apna hi lagta hai ....... Phir prathvi lok se toh laakh guna behtar hai yeh sab lok haan kuch buri soch waale sab jagah hote hain ".



Aryan ne usse poocha ," Talatala lok ke baare me kuch batao ".



Stree yodha ," woh Raja MAYA ka lok hai aur wahin phonchkar pata chal jayega ki woh kitne shaktisaali hain , ish lok ko koi paar nahi kar pata kyonki wahan ki moh maya me hi kho kar apne prann tyaag deta hai , mein wahin dwaar tak aapko chod dungi uske aage aap dono ko jaana hai ...... meri mano toh vapas chalo Rani Swarnlata ke saath raho wahan koi kasht nahi hoga ".



Dono chup hi rahe aur rath me bethe ek doosre ka haath pakde idhar udhar dekhte rahey , dono ko andzaa tha ki ab unki asli pariksha shuru hogi kyonki prathvi lok ki mohmaya toh dono ko choo na saki par Patalok ki asli mohmaya wahan se 100 guna jaada hai jisse niklna asaan nahi .



Deepti ko pata tha ki Aryan sab sambhal lega par Raja MAYA ke aage toh swaym bhagwan ko bhi jhukna pada tha aur hum tehre manush ....... ?


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excellent update

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Super Story and Excellent Work by DMAHI19

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excellent update

but try to give ONE UPDATE at least in a WEEK. It would be very good for continuation other wise their would be no continuaton for the readers otherwise your wish its my feeling.

Super Story and Excellent Work by DMAHI19

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UPDATE 34
PART - 7(B)


Aryan-Deepti ko 'Talatala Lok' ke dwaar pe chodkar stree yodha vapas lout gayi..... Dwaar se dono ander parvesh kiye toh koi nahi dikha sab taraf nazar karke Aryan bola ," Deepti apni talvaar nikaal lo mujhe lagta hai koi humko dekh raha hai par samne nahi aa raha ".

Aryan chillakar ," joh bhi tum ho samne aa jao ishse pehle mein mantar padhkar tumko bandhi bana lun ".

Dwaar pe Shankar bhagwan ki "Tripurantaka Avtaar" ki murti bani thi , Aryan samjh gaya ki Raja MAYA bhi Shankar bhagwan ke bhakat hai aur yeh lok unhone hi inko diya hai ........

(* Tripurantaka Avtaar lekar bhagwan Shankarji ne teen vishaal nagar ko nasht kiya tha joh MAYA ne banye the swarglok aur bhu lok ke bich teen rakshas bhaiyon ke liye ...... MAYA bhi wahin tha par vinash ke baad Shankar bhagwan ne apne ish bhakt ko phir se jivat kar Talatala lok ka Raja bana diya . )

Aryan ne phir aankh bandhkar bhagwan Bholenaath ka naam liya aur mantar padhta usse pehle hi samne rajshi vastron me woh prakat ho gaye ," tharo Vatsh Maharyan , tumko mantar padhne ki jarurat nahi hai hum bhi Shiv bhakt hain "........ yeh Raja Maya ki awaaj thi itni mithi jisne suni woh inke vash me ho jaye ......

Aryan ne haath jodkar namaste kiya toh Deepti ne bhi uska anusaran kiya ...... " chama chahta hun Maharaj , bas mujhse koi dwaar pe mohar nahi liya pravesh par toh laga humara uphaas uda raha hai ".

Raja Maya muskara ke ," koi baat nahi humko hi vilamb huya aane me , kaho hum kya madad kar sakte hain ?"

Aryan ," aap toh sarv gyani hain aur apke asar se kon bhala bacha hai aajtak ".

Raja Maya haskar ," phir tumko sirgh hi 4th padav tak jaana chahiye"..... aur ek portal sa rasta apne haath se bana diye ..... " yeh bhi hamare lok mei hai par wahan tumahri bhi Divya Talvaar ki maya se tumko paar paana hoga ".

Aryan-Deepti ne aage badhkar unke piar chuhye toh ashirwad dete huye bole," sadav khush raho aur meri maya ke asar se hamesha durr raho" ...... ha ha ha ha ......

Aryan bhi muskara ," Maharaj aap ki kriya bhi ek kadwa sacch hain ish jiwan ka aur mein bhi achuta nahi hun usse ush nashwar sansar mei aap toh antaryaami hain ".

Raja Maya ," haan tum hamari adhargni Rani Hema ke upaask lagte ho prantu poori tarah nahi phir bhi woh sacch tumhara nahi hai , jaldi hi apne samay pe apne aap pata chal jayega ...... Maharyan yeh Patalok tumhare rukne ke liye theek sthaan nahi hai ishliye apni karambhumi jaldi karya purn karke lout jayo ".


Dono ne unko pranam kiya aur portal me enter kiye joh unke picche bandh ho gaya .......

Tab Ek danav ne poocha ," Maharaaj aap ish manush se itna darr gaye jabki isko hum me se koi bhi asur ya danav hara deta ".

Raja Maya ne muskara ke kaha," Ishke haarne ya marne ke baad hi toh iska asli tandaav shuru hota, tum nahi samjhoge ishke pichle janam ki patrani Ratidevi joh ish janam me iski Nani MAA hai usko bhagwan Shiv ka vardan prapt hai agar usne Aryan ke marne ke baad punarjivt maang liya toh sabse pehle yeh Patalok ko hi tabaah karega ..... kabhi kabhi subkuch anbhig bankar sabki bhalai aur Patalok ka kalyan dekhna padta hai phir Dhartipakad ko bhool gaye , usko koi Patalok niwasi bhi nahi maar sakta na hi saare 14 lokon ka koi praani par ishne kaise asaani se maar diya yeh sochte rehna ...... sacch ye hai yeh ek tarah se dekha jaaye toh yeh manush inh 14 lokon me se bhi nahi hai samjhe ".

Sab hairan hi the yeh phir kahan se yaani doosri vishw se par aisa kaise ho sakta hai phir sabko Divya Talvaar ka yaad aaya ki woh bhi ish duniya ki nahi hai toh ohhhhhh tabhi yeh yahan aaya hai uske liye .....

Doosre ne poocha ," Maharaaj phir woh ladki jisko woh ardhangi bata raha hai ".

Raja MAYA haste huye ," woh bhi ek Divya Talvaar ki Maya hi hai jisko Maharyan jaldi khoj lega bas janam ek Divya Kanya ke roop me liya hai , usko koi nar choo bhi nahi sakta kisi bhi lok me ".

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Divya Talvaar mei ish baar bada kampan huya aur roshni bhi chaka chound se tez huyi aur andar dhas gayi ...... khazaane ka vishaal dher bhi khan khana utha aur apne teeno fan ko utha ke Vishaka ki 6 aankhien khuli neend se aschariye se yeh kampan aur tez kaisa hai ?

"Vishaka putri ab ish Talvaar ka moh chod do ishka maalik Patalok me aa chuka hai Dhartipakad ko mirtyudand dekar , ho sake toh apne prann bacha lo".

Vishaka ko apne mastiksh me sunai di yeh chetawani chinta se kam na thi ki Dhartipakad ko mirtyudand dene waala ish Divya Talvaar ka maalik hai ..... nahi yeh sirf meri Talvaar hai aur ishko bhi mujhse lagav hai . Mein bhi toh dekhun kon mujhse ishse juda karta hai .

'Patala Lok' keh lo ya 'Naag Lok ' ish Lok ki ek vishal gufa me joh ab Nangin Vishaka ka avaas tha ish Divya Talvaar ko paakar ...... Divya Talvaar ne Vishaka ko apne ko choone diya usse lagav karne diya iske picche ki mansa toh Divya Talvaar hi bata sakti hai par aaj usko bhi Vishaka ek zeherili laalchi nagin lag rahi thi joh uske maalik ke paas nahi jaane dena chahti hai ....... yaani ab Divya Talvaar bhi chahti thi ki Vishaka ka ant jald se jald ho aur woh apne maalik ke haathon ki sobha badhye.

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Portal ke ander jaakar samne unko bas Dhartilok jaisa najara nazar aaya , ped padhon hari ghass , pasu pakshi , neela aakash ...... Dono aage badhe toh Aryan ne kaha ," Deepti ab hum kisi mayavi duniya me hain kyonki yahan sab kuch accha hi dikh raha hai dharti ki tarah , 4th padav ko kaise paar karna hain tumko kuch andzaa hai ".

Deepti ne Aryan ki taraf dekhkar chalte huye kaha ," humko aisi jagah khojni hai joh vayu ki vishaal shakti rakhti ho yani air power ka srooht ho par Patalok me jeevon ko vayu ki kahan avaskta padti hai jabki sab jagah vayu mandal hai ".

Aryan ," Haan yeh baat bhi sahi hai , vayu ki shakti Patalok me kaise hogi par nakshe me meine ek bada bawandar dekha tha 4th padav ka sanket ..... ruko abhi dikhata hun ".

(Aryan ne apne laptop pe pehle Deepti ka naksha banya Photoshop se phir Jalmahal waala bhi ...... Beena ko dekar ek special dye use kar 2.5 ×1.2 ft kapde pe dono taraf print karwa pakka color use kar asani se na mitye yahan aane se pehle saath le liya tha )

Aryan ne apne bag se ek mota rumaal jaisa kapda nikaala 2 teh kiya huya phir khol ke Deepti ke saamne kiye ," dekho yeh hai woh naksha joh tumhari pith pe mujhe sabse pehle dikha tha aur yeh doosri side jab Jal Mahal ke pani me dikha ....... Dono taraf se compare karo toh pehle sirf 5 padav dikhe par paani me 5 sign (Jal mahal , jawalamukhi, chattan me gufa , bawander, ....???........ ) unh padav pe hain ....... yeh Patalok mei 4th padav me vuyu ka bawandar hai par yeh kisi ghane jungle ke bich kaise ho sakta hai?"

Deepti ," ho sakta hai yeh samne joh jungle hai ishi mei woh bawandar ho jis tak humko phonchna hai ?"

Aryan ," hunn par yeh koi humko phasane ki chaal bhi ho sakti hai yani humko woh dikhaya jaa raha joh hum chahte hain taaki hum apni manjil se bhatak jayen ya phir samne manjil hai aur hum bekar me ishko bhram samjhe ".

Deepti ," Baat toh theek hai aapki , chalo pehle yeh pata lagna hoga ki hum kisi mayajaal me to nahi phasen hain phir ush bawandar ke srooth ko bhi dhondna hoga ".

Dono ne sehmati jatate huye ek doosre ko chooma aur charon taraf nigaah rakhte aage badhe joh samne jungle nazar aa raha ish maidan ke baad paar karke ...... Aryan ko jungle ke bahar joh sabse uncha ped dikha toh ushpar chad gaya jab upar phonch ke dekha toh usko aschariye huya ki yeh to na khatam hone waala dur dur tak jungle hi lag raha hai phir ush bawandar ko kaise khoje , niche utar ke Deepti ko bhi apni jigasha prakat ki .

Ab dono ke pass jungle me enter karne ke alwa koi chara na tha , dono ne apne bade bade katri numa khanjar nikaal liye aur ish jungle me parvesh kar gaye ...... jaise jaise jungle ghana hota jaa raha tha waise waise dono apni katari se jhaad kaat te aage badh rahe the ....... dono aankho ke ishare ishare me baat karte aage badhte gaye par 2 ghante chalne ke baad bhatakte huye unko kuch nahi mila siwa jungli jaanwar aur pakshion ke joh unko dekhkar durr bhag jaate pukarne pe bhi nahi rukte .

( dono jaanwaro aur pakshion ki bhasa me baat kar lete the )

Dono ne kuch diar vishram karne ka socha toh ek bade ped ke nicche beth sustane lage , Pani peekar kuch phal khaaye joh saath laaye the aur aadhe ghante araam kar ke Aryan bola ," tum yahi ruko mein ek baar ped pe chad ke dekhta hun ".

Deepti ," Kya ish baar me dekhun ya dono chalen sayad kuch aur dikhe ".

Dono phir apne bags aur astar rakhkar ped pe chad gaye bas charon aur jungle hi jungle ab kya karen ? dono hatash hokar nicche utarne lage toh unko 2 lomad (jackal) dikhe joh unke bag utha ke ped ke nicche se bhaage ..... dono ne chilla ke unki language mei rukne ko kaha par nahi ruke ab dono alag disha me the toh Aryan ne Deepti ko doosre ki taraf bhagne ko kaha aur woh pehle ke picche . sayad jaanwaro se dono ka lagav unko maarne se rok raha tha nahi toh ek vaar khela khatam ho jata .

Aryan ne speed badha ke ush lomad ko ush ped se 2 km dur pakad liya joh uske choote hi gayab ho gaya aur bag jameen pe gira ....... usko samajh me aa gaya ki unko dhoke se alag kiya gaya hai yaani Deepti musibat me hai ..... kya jarurat thi bag ke picche bhagne ki woh tezi se vapas ushi ped pe phoncha kyonki daudte huye lomad ka piccha karte apni katari se bade pedon pe cut maarta aage badha tha par Deepti ka koi ata pata na tha usne Deepti waali direction pakdi aur teji se assure karta ki woh kis taraf gayi hai ...... Deepti ne kuch jhaad kaate the aage bhaagte huye .

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Udher Deepti badi tezi se ush lomad ke picche bhaagi par woh usko pakad nahi paayi aur ruki toh phir bag mouh me daba ke lomad dikha aur bhag liya phir Deepti bhagi picche uski bhasa me bolte huye," ruk aisa kyon kar raha hai tujhe khaane ko kuch dungi ruk jaa ?"...... 5 min baad phir woh nahi dhund paayi ..... phir woh dikha phir bhagi aisa kareeb ek ghante se jaada ho gaya par ab Deepti ko bhi nahi pata tha ki woh kahan hai par ush ped se bahot durr hai jahan Aryan woh alag huye the ...... arre bag ke liye itna bhagne ki kya jarurat thi par khel khela jaa chuka tha do premi ish jungle me alag alag ......

Deepti apni saans durust karti vapas jaane ka sochi toh kate huye jhaad joh kayi disha me uske lomad ke piccha karte bane the usko dhivdha me daal diye ki ab kya kare ...... ?

Deepti abhi soch hi rahi thi ki kisi ne picche se uske sar par maara toh behos ho gayi ...... tabhi teen chudailon ne Deepti ko gehr liya ....... Sakal se darwani aur badsurat si dekhkar hi ulti , pishaab aur tatti teeno aa jaye ek saath mei .

Pehli chudial ," mein ishko maalik ke pass le jaati hun sayad kuwari hai bada inaam milega , tum ush aadmi ko dhond ke wahin ghufa tak le aayo , pehle teeno uska saririk bhog karenge phir usko khoon bhi peena hai aur aand ( tatte ) bhi khayenge joh manush ke bahot sawadist hote hain virye se bhare huye "....... ha ha ha ha ha ......

Dono ne uski baat ka smarthan kiya , inki sakal hi darwani nahi thi soch toh aur jaada behesi thi ...... Pehli chudial ," par ush manush ko apna roop badal ke mohjaal mei phasa ke lana agar mere se pehle tum dono uska bhog kiya toh dono ko malik se bandi banwa dungi ".

Yeh waali chudial jaada takaatvar lag rahi thi , uske jaane ke baad dono ne roop badla ek roopwati 21 saal ki ladki ban gayi aur doosri kaala khonkhaar bhediya, woh sunder ladki aage bhagi aur bhediya picche picche ," baccho baccho ..... koi hai baccho "........

Aryan bhi aage badhta Deepti ki talash me 5 km aa gaya hoga par Deepti ka kuch pata nahi lag raha tha bas woh soch raha tha ki kahin Deepti musibat me na ho ....... Thoda aur aage chalkar usko ek ladki ki awaaj suni joh baccho baccho chilla rahi thi ...... yeh Deepti ki awaaj toh nahi hai phir ish jungle me kon musibat me hai mujhe usko bachana chahiye ...... Woh awaaj ki disha me dauda toh kuch hi palon me ush ladki ko apni taraf bhagta dekha aur ek kaala bhediya par agle hi pal nazara alag dikha Aryan ko ek chudail stree ka roop dhar doosri chudial bhediya ka roop dharan kar uski taraf aa rahi thi .

Aryan ke mastik me ," oh yeh dono roop badal ke mujhe hi phasa rahi hain aur Deepti ka bhi inko gayat hoga mujhe inka bhed jaana hoga "....... apne dimaagh me plan bana woh teji se ush ladki ke pass phonch ke pakad liya aur apne picche kar ke ush bhediye ko ek ghussa jad diya jisse woh durr jakar gira aur behosh ho gaya ......

Woh sunder ladki Aryan se chipat ke rone lagi toh Aryan bhi natak karta huya ," daro nahi ab tum surkahshit ho , ish jungle me kya kar rahi ho ? kya tum ne kisi ladki ko dekha ? "

Woh sunder ladki toh Aryan se lipat uske badan ki khusboo aur khoon soongh rahi thi rone ka natak karte huye, apne mann me " bada hi hata kata sunder manush hai ,ishe toh mein apne saath rakhungi kitna masoon hai iska virye bhi swadist hoga "..... yeh soch soch ke uske mouh me paani aa gaya tha ......

Aryan joh usko asli roop me dekh sakta tha usko ghin aa rahi thi uski durgandh se jaise saalon se nahai na ho aur ghost khakar kabhi toothbrush na ki ho ..... Aryan ," dekho woh bhediya bhaag gaya ab batao kon ho tum yahan kya kar rahi ho ?"

Sunder ladki roti huyi ," mein apni do badi bhen Chaya , Saya ke saath bhatak gayi hun mera naam Maya hai ....... woh dono pani dhondhne gayi thi mere picche woh bhediya pad gaya ..... ab mein kaise dhoond paungi unko ?"

Aryan mann me yaani teen chudial hain , agar Deepti ka pata lagna hai toh iski dono bheno ko bhi milna padega tabhi pakad ke inko kaid karunga kahin Deepti ko nuksaan na phoncha den ...... " theek hain hum milkar tumhari dono bheno ko dhondte hain aur meri patni Deepti ko bhi woh bhi kho gayi hai ".

Maya ," theek hai jaisa aap kahien par aap shaadi suda lagte nahi ho bahot sunder ho "...... aur sharma gayi .....

Aryan ," yeh bhen ki loudi mujhe chutiya samajh rahi hai , time aane de tujhe apne chudial hone ki aaj aisi saja dunga bhoolegi nahi ".

Dono aage badhe toh bhediya gayab ho gaya tha aur Maya apne picche picche ush gufa ki taraf le jaa rahi thi jahan unh teeno ka maalik tha .

Kuch door jaakar unko Saya mil gayi joh apni choti bhen se bhi sunder roop dharan kar li thi , Maya jalte huye shikaar meine patya aur aa gayi laar tapkate huye ...... Saya apne mann me ," Kya lalam laal ghost hai , kitna hast pusth hai aur sunder sajeela bhi ...... isko khoob bhogungi khoob virye aur khoon piyongi , iske tatte bhi bade honge toh swaadist honge .

Saya Maya gale mili phir Chaya ki khooj me teeno aage badhe toh kuch doori pe woh ek sunder yuvti ka roop dharan unko mili ek haath me jal ka patr liye huye teeno bhene gale milkar khush ho rahi thi ki bada haath maara hai ......

Aryan bhi muskara ke bola ," meine tum teeno se badsurat , badbudaar aur kuroop chudial nahi dekhi ..... hi hi hi hi hi hi ...... chalo teeno meri patni ka pata bata do jaan se nahi marunga nahi toh kaid karke jeevan bhar tadapna padega".

Haste huye baat shuru kar gusse se unko chetawani de daali par teeno ko jaise lakhwa maar gaya ho , ishko kaise pata kya hame dekh sakta hai abtak natak kar raha tha ........ ???

Aryan ne ek mantar padha toh teeno apne asli roop me aa gayi .

Chaya ," ohh to tera pass shaktiyan bhi hain magar tu nahi jaanta hum teeno ko koi hara nahi sakta pehle humne socha ki tujhe acche se bhog lenge ya phir hamesha pass rakhte magar ab tere lahoo se pyas bhuja lenge ".

Ishi ke saath teeno ne Aryan pe hamla kar diya jisko woh khada huya muskarta bas aise hi nakaam kar deta , hathiyar , pathar , angare , jeher sab vaar kiye par ushpar koi asar nahi huya .......

Aryan ne mantar padha aur teeno ki chotti pakad li aur ek doosre me lapet ke bola ," abhi samay hai batao Deepti kahan hai nahi toh jitna mein chotti kaske ghoond ne laga utna hi dard hoga mout se badtar ".

Do enthe maarte hi teeno ki bhaynak cheekhian ghoonj gayi , aaj sacch me yamraj se paala pada tha bas woh manush roop dharan kiye tha ....... koi mantar , koi astar , koi jaadu kaam nahi kar paa raha tha upar se chotti ethne se teeno ki aatma si kat rahi thi joh bahot pida daayi hota hai ......

Teeno ne jor jor se rotey huye apne Malik ko pukara par woh bhi jaise inki pukaar nahi sun paa raha tha ...... Teeno ne haar ke Aryan ko batya ki Deepti gufa me unke malik ke pass hai .

Aryan teeno ki chotti se pakad ke ush gufa ki taraf dauda jahan Deepti thi .......

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Udhar "Vaatasur" raksash ki gufa me Deepti ko hawa me uda ke jungle se Chaya naam ki chudial le gayi toh Deepti ko gufa me hosh aaya uske jaane ke baad ....... usne dekha ish andheri gufa me ek hawan kund jal raha hai aur bahot bade aakar ka rakshas mantar padhta ahuthi de raha hai ......

Zameen se uthkar Deepti ne charon aur gufa me dekha toh haddi aur maash pada tha jiski badbu asehaniye thi ..... Deepti chillakar ," kon hai tu dusht joh mujhe yahan lekar aaya hai ?...... tu jaanta nahi hai mere pati Maharyan ko pata chala ki tu mujhe yahan laaya hai toh mout ki bheekh bhi nahi maang payega".

Rakshas Vatasur bas khaka laga ke hasne laga ," ha ha ha ha ha ha ..... tu jitni sunder hai utna hi tujhe bhog ke bali chadane mei anand ayega ...... tere pati ko toh meri teen gulam hazam bhi kar gayi hongi . Agar meri baat manegi toh tujhe apni rani bana ke rakhunga . Mera naam Mahan Asur Vaatasur hai mujhe koi hara nahi sakta ".

Deepti bhi haskar ," tujh pe mujhe hasi aati hai , tu kayar ki aulaad hi hoga tu nahi jaanta agar tujhe pata hota ki Dhartipakad ko mere pati Maharyan ne kitni bhayank mout di thi kabhi aisa sochta bhi nahi ...... Thuuu hai tujhpar kayar kahin ka , mujhe chua bhi toh tadap tadap ke marega ".

Rakshas ," jaban sambhal ladki , mein kuch bol nahi raha toh badh chadkar bol rahi hai aur Dhartipakad ko koi manush kabhi nahi maar sakta . mera apmaan karke tune apni bhi mout bula li hai tujhe toh tadpa tadpa ke maarunga ".

"" pehle apni inh teen chudail ko toh bacha le jaant ke pissu phir teri baari ""

Yeh awaaj Aryan ki thi jisne teeno chudail ko Vaatasur ke pairon ki taraf uchaal diya ....... teeno chillakar apne malik se unko bachane ki guhaar karne lagi ......

Deepti haste huye ," Vaatasur jab gidad ki mout aati hai na toh gaon ki taraf bhagta hai par tu nicch toh ish gufa me chupa betha hai ".

Vaatasur toh abhi bhi hairan tha ki yeh thuch sa manush gufa ke ander kaise aa gaya mera mantar todkar nahi yeh inh teeno bewkoof ki wajah se huya hoga .....

Deepti joh Aryan ko dekhkar khush huyi daud ke ushpar chalangh laga ke godi chadkar choomne lagi puchhhhh puchhhh chummm chumm Mahi puchhhhh puchhhh ..... I love you my darling .....

Aryan bhi kisi ka jawab dete huye ," tum theek ho kahin chot toh nahi lagi ..... I love you too my sweet heart ".

Deepti haskar ," hum vayu ka bawandar dhoondh rahe the yeh khud Vaatasur mil gaya , yahi bawandar layega bas ishko uljha ke bawandar banwao phir tum nighal jaana tabhi 4th padav paar hoga".

Vatasur ne 2-3 mantar padh teeno chudialon ki chotti kholne chahyi par na khuli ...... balki unki cheek pukaar aur badh gayi .......

Vatasur gusse se ," toh tu mayavi shakti rakhta hai par Dhartipakad ko tu nahi maar sakta magar aaj mein tujhe maar ke ish kanya ki bali dunga apne Maharaaj mayasur ko ...... ha ha ha ha ha ha ".

Hasne ke saath gufa me tej tej aandhi si chalne lagi phir badi speed se ush andhi me pathar , bhale , Talvaar , gada Aryan ki tarah chode toh usne Deepti ko picche kar apna haath aage kar gol gol ghuma ke uski disha Vatasur ki taraf kar di aur dhadam dhadam ...... ek ke baad ek saare vaar Vatasur ko lage toh woh bhi dard se cheekh pada ..... ahhhhhh

Aryan haskar ," abe tu toh Dhartipakad se bhi gaya gujra hai koi bada tofaan bhej jisse tera naam yatharth ho Vaatasur ..... hi hi hi hi hi hi ...... napunsak kahin ka ladkiyon ko utatha hai dhoke se "......

( Vaat = Vayu aur Asur = Rakshas)

" Vatasur , agar jaan pyari ho toh ishse maafi maang lo yeh sadharan purush nahi hai ishne Dhartipakad ko maara hai".

Yeh awaaj Raja MAYA ki sunai di thi Vatasur ke mann me , ab woh bhi darr raha tha par Aryan ne ishbaar usko maa bhen ki gaali dekar lalkaara toh tha to rakshas hi vinash kaale viprit bhudhi .....

Vatasur ne apna size badhna shuru kiya toh gufa phadhta kareeb 40ft uncha ho gaya phir ek gheri saans li jaise saari hawa hi ander kheench li ho aur phir joh huya ek bada bhayank 1200km/hr ki speed waalae bawandar ko mouh se bahar nikaal Aryan ki taraf disha de diya .......

Aas pass ke ped pathar se lekar dhool bhi usme milti gayi tab Aryan bola ," yeh dekho hum ish jungle me bawandar kahan galat jagah dhoondh rahe the par Deepti darling tum bahot intelligent ho tum ne srooth ke saath isko dhoondh liya ...... I love you lot ".

Deepti chidkar ," yeh bawandar abhi dur se hi mujhe uda le jaa raha hai kheenchta huya aur aapko Aashiqui sooj rahi hai kaskar pakad ke rakho mein udh jaungi ".

Aryan apni jagah se hila bhi nahi, Deepti ko gale lagakar bola ," daro mat meri pith pe chadkar lipat jayo abhi Vaatasur ka bhoot utarta hun ".

Deepti uski pith pe chad pet pe taang kas li aur haath gardan pe ," Ishko nighal ke hi aap rok sakte ho phir mere mouh me daal dena yeh Pawan dev ki shakti hai joh ish raksash ne tapsya se payi thi ".

Aryan ne aankh bandh kar haath jodkar mantar padha toh Kamal kawach uske aur Deepti ke charon aur ban gaya phir Aryan ush bawandar ki taraf daud laga ke usme kood gaya .......

Vaatasur ko Aryan ki murkhta pe hasi aa gayi yeh dono toh mout ke mouh me khud sama gaye ....... ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ...... mujhe koi nahi hara sakta .

Ander bawandar ki choti tak phonch Aryan ne aankh bandh karke mouh khol joh uski shakti peeni shuru ki 5 second me sab jaise shant ho gaya aur Aryan jameen pe land kiya .....

Bawandar ke khatam hote hi Vatasur bhi normal size ka ho gaya , uski toh darr ke hi cheekh nikal gayi ...... ek manush uski Pawan shakti hi pi gaya aur jinda hai yeh kyon hai yeh manush nahi ho sakta na koi devta na rakshas aisa kar sakta hai .......

Aryan ne Deepti ko utar ke apni talvaar usko dekar bola ," isko saja dene ka time aa gaya Deepti darling jao apni bejiti ka badla lo ".

Deepti bhi gusse se Talvaar lekar Vatasur se jaa bhidi . Vatasur bhi vaar kar raha tha par Deepti pe jab Kamal kawach ki shield thi kya asar hota par Deepti ki Talvaar ke vaar usko ghayal karne lage ...... Deepti ne petra badal ke uske upar se chalangh laga Talvaar Vatasur ki pith pe ghused ke uski moti gardan daboch li ," haramiiiiiiii tu mujhe bhogega , badjaat tu mujhe choo bhi nahi sakta "......

Ahhhhh marrrrrrrr gayaaaaaaaa bachooo Maharaaj Maya ........ Pawan dev bachoooooo marrrrrrr gayaaaaa maaffffff kar do ......

Deepti ki pakad me woh galta chala shareer mithi ki tarah dhool hoga ...... itna bheesan manjar apne malik ka dekh teeno chudial bhi darrr ke roo padi ki yeh manush hi nahi yeh ladki bhi mayavi hai bahot shaktisaali ......

Apni Talvaar liye Deepti Aryan ke gale lag gayi aur Aryan ne choomte huye ush bawandar ki shakti uske mouh me daal di jisko jhatka khaate huye Deepti seh gayi ....... 4 shaktiyan aajad kar chuki thi Rajkumari Deepti ab tak Aryan ki 5 princesses ke liye abhi panchvi baaki thi ..... ?


Vaatasur ke marte hi Rani Hema prakat huyi jihone apna haath teeno chudialon ki taraf kiya toh teeno Sundar ladkiyon me tabdeel ho gayi joh rajshi poshak pehni thi ....... Chaya, Saya ,Maya ko dekhkar Aryan Deepti bhi chounk gaye .

Rani Hema ," dhayanwad Maharyan joh tum ne hamari datak putrion ko ajaad karwaya aur Deepti ush Vaatasur koi stree hi maar sakti thi jisko gandi nazar se usne dekha ho par tumhari shakti ke samney toh wo chann bhar bhi na tika jabki usse Maharaj MAYA bhi darte the".

Teeno ladkiyan Rani Hema ke gale mili aur Aryan-Deepti ne unke piar chookar ashirwad liya ...... " Maharyan tumhe mera ashirwad hai tumhari sab patniyan ek saath hamesha khush rahengi vaise ek- do toh yahan se le jaa sakte ho jisme Patalok ki bhi shakti ho "...... hi hi hi hi hi

Aryan bhi muskara ke ," Maharani ji mein jitni hai unh se pareshan hun app meri dhuvida mat badhiye ...... oucchhh "...... Deepti ne Aryan ki kamar me chutki kaati thi .

Rani Hema haskar ," meine kaha na tumhari sab ardhangi tumko aur apas me prem karengi bas apne kartav ki taraf agarsar raho ".

Teeno Rajkumari Chaya Saya Maya badi hasrat se Aryan ko dekh rahi toh Rani Hema ne kaha ," tum teeno apna mouka kho chuki ho bas dono ko dhayanwad do ki yeh galti se yahan aa gaye nahi toh teeno ajaad nahi ho paati ".

Teeno ne Aryan-Deepti se chama maangi woh sraph ki karan daiyan bani aur kukaram Vaatasur ki shakti se karne lagi ..... teeno ne Aryan ko gala laga ek baar gaal pe choom ke hi alag kiya , Deepti bhi hasne lagi ....... Rani Hema ne haath aage kiya toh jungle gayab ho gaya aur saamne rasta dikhne laga .

Rani Hema ," yeh rasta tum dono ko 'Mahatala lok' le jayega jahan se tum 'Rasatala lok' ya 'Patala lok' jaa sakte ho bas apni mohar saath rakhna ab jaada sambhal ke jaana ".

Teeno Rajkumari ke saath Rani Hema chali gayi aur Aryan-Deepti phir ek baar chooma chaati me lag gaye .......

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Raja MAYA ke Rajmahal me jab Rani Hema phonchi toh woh bhi apni datak putrion ko dekhkar khush huye ...... Akele me jab Rani Hema ne katach karke kaha," Maharaj aapki double Maya bhi Maharyan aur Deepti ko phasa na saki, chal se jaada prem me shakti hoti hai ".

Raja MAYA bhi gehri saans lekar ," Vaatasur ki shakti toh unko leni hi thi par Aryan ne badi chaturai se Vaatasur ko bhi marwa diya Deepti se jabki hum soch rahe the woh khud marega aur hamare jaal me phas jayega ".

Rani Hema haskar ," mein abhi usse mili par joh cheej meine mehsoos ki usko bas pyar karna aata hai aur chal kapat usko choo nahi sakte aapki mohmaya toh dhari hi reh gayi uske samney ...... mujhe khushi hai woh mera saccha upsak hai koi stree nirash nahi hogi uske pass aakar ".

Kyon kehta hai Patalok me bhi log matlabi nahi hote kuch log chahte the ki Divya Talvaar yahin rahe aur Aryan kisi bhi niyam ko todkar kaid kar liya jaye ..... par kya yeh itna asaan tha sab kuch jaante huye bhi Raja Maya apni chaal chalna nahi chuke . Par baaji unke haath se nikal gayi .

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Aryan ne Deepti ko apni pith pe bitha liya aur chal diya apni manjil ki ore ......

Deepti ," Mahi aap na bahot acche ho bas apni flirting ab band kar do jab hum sab bhene aap ki hai seva karne ke liye phir kyon nayi ladkiyon aur aurtion ki taraf attracted ho jaate ho ?"

Aryan muskara kar ," flirt me sirf usse karta hun joh meri apni ho phir tum batao kya meine tumhare saath kabhi flirt kiya bas tumko dekh ke hi pyar ho gaya jaise tumhare bina adhura hun par kya karta bol nahi paya . Tum Suchitra maamiji ki choti bhen thi joh mujhe beta maanti hain ishliye tumse durr bhi chala gaya . Tumhari sacchai jaankar bhi doubt me tha ki mein kya kar sakta hun. par nadaan tha mein ki tumhare roop ka hi nahi tumhare pyar ka jadu ho chuka tha ...... wahan gaon me raat me aankh khul gayi sapno mei tumhara udas chehra dekhkar jaise mujhe bula rahi ho kab aayoge aur meri kismat dekho sab rahein tumhari hi taraf bula rahi thi . Ab dekho aaj mujhse khud kismat kon hoga ki meri pith pe meri rooh , mere dil ki dhadkan joh sabse sunder aur manmohak hai jisko bas pyar hi pyar karne ka dil karta hai ...... I love you Deepti from my bottom of my heart ".

Deepti toh khushi se phooli na sama rahi thi ki aakhir uske sapno ka Rajkumar uska humdam uska pati Mahi kitne pyar se usko apne pith pe bithaye le jaa raha hai kaash yeh pal yahin ruk jaaye .......

Deepti kayi auration ka Aryan se relationship ka poochna chahti thi par woh apne prem ko rushwa nahi karna chahti thi par akhiri sawal usne kar hi daala joh Aryan bhi sunkar jaise bidak hi to gaya ....... " Kya aap Meri dono mummy ko bhi bacche dene waale ho, Meena didi ne batya tha ye hi ek rasta hai unka maa banne ka phir meri maamiyon ko bhi ?"

Aryan ko jhatka laga par Meena ne yeh kya raita pehla rakha hai bhala koi apni saas ko gharbwati karega uski biwi ko pata chale toh kya beetegi ...... Aryan ne ek thandi saans bhari phir har sabdh tolte huye bola aakhir uske prem ki pariksha ki ghadi thi .

Aryan ," sacch kahun toh Deepti aisa meine sapne me bhi nahi socha hai , Meena ne aisa kyon kaha tumse mein nahi jaanta par hum ishko rok sakte hain ki aisa na ho . Tumhari mummy meri mummy hain bhala mein kyon unke baare me sochunga rahi maa banne ki baat toh woh medical treatment se ban sakti hai mein picture mei kahan aata hun par haan tumse dher saare bacche jarur karunga itna mein chahta hun ".

Deepti bhi uske jawab se santust hote huye ," par Didi ( Suchitra ) ko toh aap ne vaada kiya hai na ?"

Aryan jis question se bachna chahta tha wahi saamne aa gaya par tyaar hi tha jawab ," Suchitra maamiji ko apna mana tha jab se unse mila , ek viraanit thi unki life me jiske liye apne prem aur adhikaar ka vaasta dekar mujhse unhone apna pyar maang liya aur mujhe galat nahi laga ki mein apni maa saman Maamiji ka dil tod dun. Agar tumko bura laga toh sorry bol deta hun par kisi ki khushi ke liye mujhe koi saja bhi tum dogi to manjur hai ".

Deepti ne Aryan ka gaal choom ke apne tane huye stan uski pith pe ragad ke kaha ," Meri Didi ka adhikaar aap pe pehle hai aur meri mummy ke jivan me khushiyan aaye aapki vajah se mujhe koi aitraaj nahi bas mera aur meri bheno (sautan) ko pyar ki kami nahi lagni chahiye...... pyar mein koi sauda nahi hota kam ya jaada par Mahi tumhara prem hi hum sabki jeene ki vajah hai ".

Aryan thoda serious hokar ," Deepti sab apni life khud chun sakte hain kaise jeena hai par mujhe meri MAA (Rati) ne bada hi aise kiye ki mujhe apno ke liye jeena hai apno ke liye sabkuch nouchavar tak kar dena hai bas yehi mera satya hai ki meri MAA ke liye Aryan unke parivaar ki ek dhaal hai ek suraksha hai yaani bodyguard ( Angrakshak ) bol sakti ho jiske saath unki har khusi ka dhayan bhi rakhna hai . Ab mein itna aage aa chuka hun ki picche palat ke nahi dekh sakta ishliye meine shaadi karne se pehle hi tumko sacch bata diya jawalamukhi se vapsi ke samay ki naye rishte ki shurwat jhoot se na ho ".

Deepti bhi machalte huye ," aapko bura nahi lagna chahiye jaise aap ho, galat toh meine sabse jaada kiya ...... jaan bojh ke aise aadmi se shaadi ki jiske pehle se 5 already biwiyan thi par mera andha pyar phir bhi mujhe woh hi chahiye chahe jaan chali jaye . Aaj wohi mera pyar meri mout ko taalne ke liye Patalok tak aa gaya sirf ishliye ki mein zinda rahun . MAHI meine janam 21 saal pehle liya tha par jeene ka ahsaas ushi din huya jis din tum mere zindgi me aaye. Ek hafta mila mujhe aapko choo kar pyar karne ka itne kam samay me bhi kya kuch nahi diya aapne . Bas lalchi hi hai yeh aapki patni joh apne saath aapko bhi mout ke mouh pe le aayi aur apni Geeta Didi ko bhi kaid karwa di . Ho sake toh maaf kar dena aap sab mujhe ".

Deepti ka rona dekhkar Aryan rukkar usko apne saamne kar goadi utha ke choomta huya chup karwa raha tha kuch jaada hi senti ho gayi ....... ish ek hafte mei bas Patalok me inh dono premi ne sabse jaada time gujara tha , dono ek doosre ko parakh bhi rahe the aur atmiyata bhi badha rahe the .

Aryan ne majak karte huye ," kya meri rani shaiba aisa karogi apne honeymoon pe socho Patalok toh destination hi khatam ho jayegi newly married couples ke liye ....... dekho kitne sunder najarye hain kuch kissi vissi do kuch kissi vissi lo asoon toh hum parthvi lok pe bhi baha lenge ...... hi hi hi hi hi hi ".........

Deepti bhi uski baat pe haste huye ," isse buri honeymoon destination nahi ho sakti ".

Aryan ne Deepti ke labon ko chooma ," nahi Deepti my love , honeymoon destination koi bhi ho bas husband wife me prem hona chahiye toh narak bhi swarg hi lagega phir apne desh me toh 90 % log bas apne bedroom me hi honeymoon ka maja le paate hain gareebi ki wajah se par pyar unka sabse saccha hota hai kyonki pyar ke liye do aatma ka milan maayne rakhta hai jagah nahi ".

Deepti bhi Aryan ka poora chehra choom dali ," aap itni acchi acchi baatien kaise bana lete ho , I love you mujhe apna banne ke liye ".

Aryan haskar ,"mujhe sab pyar hi karte hain toh bas pyar hi dekhta hun nahi toh nafrat se zindgi kaante ki tarah lagti hai joh mujhe bura hi bana deti hai ".

Aryan-Deepti bahot khush the par dono ka dhayan na tha adrish roop me kayi nar aur mada danav , rakshas dur se dono ko moh maya ke mantar maar ke uksa rahe the par Kamal ki Shield ki wajah se be asar .

2 ghante baad woh jis dwaar pe khade the wahan se teen lok ko rasta jaata tha par Patalok ke har lok ko jaise jaana hi tha ....... ???

Aryan ," ab 5th padav to Divya Talvaar ki najdeek hi hoga ?"

Deepti ," 5th padav khud Divya Talvaar hi hai par kya mein uski bijli ki shakti (lightning power ) jhel paungi ..... ?"

Aryan ," kyon nahi tumhara aur Talvaar ka connection hai tabhi uska naksha tumhari pith pe raha ab dimaagh me ".

Dono ko baat karte ek teesra sakhs bhi mouh chupaye dekh raha tha ..... ????

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