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Doston ...KAMNA....ki taraf se good night...kal milten hai naye updates ke sath
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Ab din aisey hi gujar rahe the....Vikram ab mujh se khulke didi ke bare sab batata tha ki wo kya sochta hai kya  karta hai wagahara....

Main dekh raha tha ki ab didi ke chehre pe bhi ronak rehne lagi thi...wo khush REHTI thi...par abhi tak didi ne mujhe kuch nahi bataya tha.....par main janta tha wo AAJKAL khush KYUN rehne lagi hain....main bhi unhe khush dekh ke khush tha......ab main unhe kya bataoin ki didi jisey pyar samajh rahi hai wo sirf Vikram ke liye ek khubsurat ladki se apni hawas bitane ka bas jariya hai....

Main Vikram ko bhi apne aur didi ke bare nahi bata sakta tha....
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In San ke beech ek aur nai musibat aa gai thi....aap logo ko mene bataya tha...ki hum log Vikram station pe ek auto se jate the ...jo autowala home leke jata tha wo ek gundatype aadmi lagta tha....

To abhi kuch aisa tha ki jab hum dono subah office ke liye nikalte the tab wohi autowala hum logo ko hamari society se Virar station tak leke jata tha aur wahan se hum dono local train pakadte the office Jane ke liye....par sham ke waqt mera ghar aane ka time fix nahi tha ....isliye didi akele hi Virar station se ghar jati thi....

Aur wo autowala didi ko kisi aur auto me nahi baithne  deta tha.....agar KABHI didi kisi dusre auto me baithne ki kosish KARTI bhi to UNKA haatah pakad ke JABARDASTI apne auto me baitha deta unko....waisey aur koi dusra autowala uska virodh nahi karta tha kyunki wo  Virar ke autowalon ka leader tha....

Wo autowala didi se auto me double meaning baat karta tha....jabki didi uski baataon la koi jawab nahi deti thi....apne auto me ashlel game chalane laga tha ...kabhi hindi to KABHI bhojpuri....ek din usne had KARDI...jab usne didi ko hamari society ke bahar choda aur didi utar ke PAISEY deke Jane lagi to peeche se usne didi ki gaand pe apna haat pher diya...aur apna lund khujane laga....aur gandi si smile deke chala gaya....

Ab ye mujhe KAISE maloom...to ye sab mujhe didi ne nahi balki meri society ke watchman ne bataya jo society gate pe pehra deta tha....wo bhi UP se tha aur main ussey aate jate uska haal pooch leta tha aur KABHI kabhi ussey chai pani bhi de deta tha.....usne hi mujhe ye sab bataya...aur hamari society ke bahar lage CCTV camere main capture recording dekhai....


Jab Maine ussey USS autowale ke bare main pata kiya to usney bataya ki wo autowale ka naam Jagu Dhadke  tha aur wo yaha ke autowalon ka union leader tha aur yahan ki zameeno pe ya to Lanza karke ya phir kisi bhi tarah deal karaka builders ko bechta tha aur takra commission kamata tha...uspe 2-3 murder case bhi chal rahe the....

Ab itne khatarnak aadmi se main KAISEY baat karon  samajh nahi aa raha tha....uske samne main kuch bhi nahi tha...sharir me bhi wo mujh se bahoot JAYADA tha....

Didi ne uss din hi mujh se baat KARNI jiss din usne didi ki gaand pe haath phera tha...wo boli " Bachu...yahan ka mahool  bahoot kharab ho gaya hai hum kahin aoor shift ho jate hain..."

Didi ne mujhe puri baat nahi batai....main sirf ITNA bola " Didi AAP fikr MAT KARO...sab theek ho jayega...aur itne saste me ISSEY accha ghar HUME kiraye pe iss shehar ne nahi MILEGA....aur 5 mahine baad jab mera increment hoga tab dekhte hain..."

Par didi ne tab bhi mujhe wo baat nahi batai...shayad wo mujhe bata ke pareshan nahi KARNA CHAHTI thi...kyunki koi bhi bhai aisi harkat karte kisi ko apni BEHAN ke sath dekhaga to aag babula ho jayega....aur kuch na kuch kar baithega...bas wo boli " theek hai Bachu...par 5 mahine baad hum pakka yaha se shift ho jayenge..."

Main bas ok bola par main janta tha wo aisa KYUN chahati hai....

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Jaggu Dhadke....

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Main..Arun...ab aisa ho gaya HOIN...


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Aur KAMNA didi ko to AAP jante hi hai...

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Great update bhai
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Super.... Aaj 4-5 update dena bhai
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Maine Jaggu se iss bare baat karne ka faisla kiya...main Satuday sham ko Virar station pe Jake usey dhoondne laga...jab main logo seuske bare main pooch raha tha tabhi mere kandhe pe ek haath aaya...mene peeche mud ke dekha to mere peeche Jaggu khada tha...wo bola " Kya be chookre...to mujhe KYUN dhoond raha hai be...."

Main : Jaggu hi AAP se kuch baat KARNI hai....

Jaggu : haan ...bol be...

Main : Woooo....thoda akele.main...

Hamare was paas bheed jama ho gai thi ...jayadatar wahan pe sab autowaley hi the....

Jaggu : chal udhar kone me....

Jaggu ne ishara kiya ...jahan usne ishara kiya tha wo ek patli andheri gali thi...aur shaam ke 7 baje waisey bhi wo ekdum andheri ho chuki thi....pehle main ghabraya phir himmat kar ke uske sath uss gali me aa gaya...

Jaggu : bol.be kya baat KARNI hai...

Main : wo Jaggu ji...aap his ladki ko roz pareshan karte ho...usey pareshan MAT karo...

Jaggu : kyun be....to uss item ke sath ke ghum sakta hai....aur main baat bhi nahi kar sakta ....tu kya kahin ka thanedaar hai jo main TERI baat manu....

Main : dekhye....aap jo kar rahe hain...wo sahi nahi hai....aapko pata hai AAPKE aisa karne se wo KITNI pareshan hai...

Jaggu : dekh be chookre JAYADA to udd MAT...abhi main sharafat se baat kar raha HOIN...agar main apni pe aaya na to TUJHE bahoot bhari padega...mere uper waisey hi 4 murder case chal rahe hai ...ab paanchwa bhi shuru ho jayega...chal nikal yaha se....

Main : dekhiye Jaggu ji kal aapne jo kiya na unn ke sath wo accha nahi tha....main bhi abhi sirf AAPKO samjhane aaya tha...agar aap nahi mane to main security officer complaint KARUNGA...

" CCCCHHHHAAAATTTAAAKKKKKK"

Us gali me ek jordar chante ki awaj gunj hai...wo chanta Jaggu ne mujhe mara tha...mere muah se KYUN nikal aaya...sahi me uska haath bahoot bhari tha...

Usne mera coller pakda aur bola : dekh be launde...mujhe security officer ki DHAMKI to dena mat...unke sath to mera roz ka uthna baithna hai....ab kaan khol ke sunle...tujh se jo ho SAKE TU wo karle....abhi to sirf us item ki gaand pe haath phera hai...kal sali ke chuchiyon ko dabaonga....aur parso apni janghon pe baitha ki uski chut marunga TERI aankhon ke samne...ja ab yaha se....bacha le usey...

Main : dekhye ...wo meri behan hai...aur agar mujhe uski IZZAT bachana ke liye kuch bhi KARNA pade to wo main KARUNGA...apni JAAN tak de DUNGA...

Ye sunke usne mera coller chood diya...aur bola " wo TERI behan hai....par mere ko to lagta tha ki TUM dono ke beech lafda chal raha hai...dekh be...teri behan hai to 1 no. ki item....chal ab main usko TERE samne nahi chodunga...akele mai leja ke CHODUNGA bas...."

Ye bolke wo rakshas ki tarah hasne laga " HAHAHHAHAHAHAHA"...

Aur hasta hua wahan se nikal gaya...main bhi wahan se nikla aur sidhe ek Activa ke shop pe gaya...aur ek Activa select kiya...mene owner ko bola ki mujhe Sunday sham tak KAISEY bhi Activa ka delivery chahyie aur main pura payment ek sath kar DUNGA...aur Maine apna credit card swipe MAAR diya...

Phir main ghar aa gaya ....didi ne dekha ki mere muah ke paas ek chota sa jhakam hai...wo boli " arey Bachu...tujhe ye chot KAISEY lagi...kahin se maarpeet karke aa raha hai kya.."...aur mere chehre ko apne komal haaton me leke chot ko choo ke dekhne lagi...aur uspe apne  muah se phoonk marne lagi...pata nahi didi ke itne nazdik aane se mere ander kuch hulchal hone lagi...main un se door hata aur bola .." didi mene ek Activa  book kara di hai ...kal delivery mil jayegi...ab hum uspe hi JAYA karenge...aur shaam ko wo leke AAP ghar aa jana aur main paidal ya bus pakad ke aa jaoinga.."

Didi ye sun ke hairan hoti huyi boli " par Bachu...tune Activa kyun kharidi...uski kya jarurat...wo to 60-70 hazar ki aati hai...itna kharcha KYUN kiya..."

Main : didi ab aap kuch nahi bataoge to kya mujhe kuch pata nahi chalega...wo autowala aadmi AAPKO roz pareshan karta hai mujhe pata hai...main aaj ussey baat karne gaya tha...par wo samajhne ke bajaye mujh se ulhajne laga...usme hi ye chot lag gai...aur usne AAPKE SAATH bura karne ki dhamki di ...isliye ab AAP auto me nahi Activa pe jao gi...aur bas thoda extra careful REHNA jab AKELI aao"...

Didi mere paas aai aur pyar se mere sar pe haath fera...aur boli " Tu meri KITNI FIKAR karta hai...pehle bhi mujhe bachana ke liye TUNE apne doston ko mara tha...aur aab bhi uss gunde se bhid ke aaya hai....I LOVE YOU Bachu...."
Aur ye keh ke didi mere sine se lipat gai....meri to jasey saans hi ruk gai...meri dhadkane bhad gai...phir unhone mere gaal pe ek kiss kiya...aur muskurati huyi kitchen me chali gai...

Main bas unhe jate huye dekhta raha aur mere dil me jo HALCHAL machi thi usko samajhne ki kosish karne laga...

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Agle din Sunday me mujhe Activa ki delivery mil gai...aur uska number aane abhi time.lagne wala tha par mene ye tay kar liya tha ki ab hum Activa se hi station tak jayenge aur station pe jo paid parking hoti hai...usme Activa park karenge....aur an hum Monday se thoda jaldi MATLAB 10 min. pehle ghar se nikal jate the....

Kuch 1 week tak humne Jaggu nahi mila aur pura week shanti se nikal gaya...iss week me ek din Vikram mujh se bola " yaar teri madam to mujhe ab SHADI ke liye FORCE kar rahi hai....ab to haath bhi nahi lagane deti...na kiss karne deti hai...mene socha tha ki uske muah me apna lund dalunga...uski gaand marunga...par has ek baar hi hua sex aur wo bhi bas uski chut hi le paya...ab SHADI ke baad hi sab KAREGI aisa bol rahi hai...samajh nahi aa raha kya karoon..maal itna jabardast hai ki usey chood bhi nahi sakta....aisi ladki jaldi se haat nahi aati..."...


Main mann me khush hua ki didi ISSEY ab kuch nahi karne se rahi hai....main bola " sir an main kya boloun...ye aap logo ke beech ki baat hai.."

Vikram : Haan be ...tu to aisa bolega hi...mujhe pata hai TUJHE bhi wo pasand hai...tu bhi ussey patana CHAHATA hai...par chote...apni shakal  dekh...wo item TUJH se nahi patne wali...accha ek kaam karte hain TU ussey SHADI kar le...meri problem solve ho JAYEGI...

Main  : ye AAP kya bol rahe ho...

Vikram: dekh PATNI bana ke tu maze lena...aur main pati PATNI ke beech ka Woh banke maze lunga...dono ka kaam ho jayega.... aur baccha koi bhi PAIDA karen...hum dono uss bacche ka kharcha utha lenge...kya bolta hai...

Main : sap pagal ho gaye ho...aur mai uss se SHADI nahi kar sakta....aap mujhe in sab me MAT ghasito...

Phir Vikram kuch nahi bola....aur has aisey hi wo week nikal gaya....

Aaj Saturday tha....aur main jaldi ghar ja raha tha...jab main Virar station pe the to mujhe Jaggu ne pakad liya....aur mujhe leke side me aa gaya...aur mera coller pakad ke bola " Sale bhosdike apni item ko apni BEHAN bolta hai...sale mene pata kiya...tum dono pati PATNI ban ke uss buddhe budiya ke flat me rahtey HO...AUR TU mujhe uss ladki ko apni behan bata raha tha...mujhe gandu SAMJHA hai...aur saley tune Activa leli mujh se bache ke liye....kab tak bacha TU aur TERI item....mera dil aa gaya hai uspe...ab to main uski chut se apna baccha nikalunga....ussey apni RANDI banaunga...."...
Wo abhi ITNA hi bol paya tha ki peeche se kisi ne uske pet me lamba sa chaku ghusa diya...

Uske muah se ek tez karah nikal gai " AAAAAAAAAA".....wahan pe kuch 8-10 hathiyar band log aa Gaye the aur Jaggu ke logo ko rook ke rakhe huye the....

Aur ek aadmi Jaggu ke pet me chaku utar chuka tha...usne dobara chaku ghusa ke liye haath ghumaya to mene uska haath pakad liya...wo aadmi bola " abbey o ladke ...beech me mat aa...nahi to TERE ko bhi MAAR dalunga..."...

Par tab tak Jaggu sambhal chuka tha aur usney apni kamar se ek tezdhar bada sa chaku nikala aur uss aadmi ke pet me utar diya...tabhi el aur dusre aadmi ne..Jaggu ke peeth me talvar ghusa di...Jaggu ne peeche mud ke uss aadmi ki garden pe vaar kiya aur garden kaat di...uss aadmi ki garden se khoon ka fawara nikal aaya...aur wo wahin DHER ho gaya...aaj ITNA khoon kharaba meme pehli baar dekha tha....uske neeche gire hi JAISEY sab  SHANT ho gaya...shayad wo aadmi unn sab ka leader tha....bas itne me Jaggu ke logo ko time mila aur wo log unpe toot pade...wo log apne khayal aur mare satthi ko leke wahan se bhag liye....

Idhar ab Jaggu zameen pe gir chuka tha aur uska khoon bahoot beh raha tha....mene jaldi se ek aadmi ko MADAD se ussey ek auto me dala aur usko paas ke hospital me leke gaya...tab tak uske satthi bhi uss hospital me phauch Gaye the...

Kyunki Jaggu ka khoon bahoot beh chuka tha isliye ussey blood chadana tha par iska blood group O- tha aur wo kahin mil nahi raha tha...mera bhi O - group la blood tha to mene apna khoon Jaggu ko diya...aur phir lagbhag 12 baje  ghar aaya....didi be poocha ki main late KYUN hua...to meme bahana bana diya ke ek dost ka Birthday tha isliye usne party di thi to late ho gaya aur didi ka phone bhi nahi utha paya...aur uske baad main apne kamre main Jake so gaya.. .


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Badhiya update bhai...ab jaggu ki jaan bacha raha he to dikh na hoga ke ab bhi jaggu us ki behanke piche pare ga ya ..un ka ehshan chukaega
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Agle din sham ko Sunday ka din tha kuch kaam se main niche apni society me ek dukan pe aay tha...mene dekha ek aadmi ko ki Jaggu ka hi aadmi tha mere bare watchman se pooch raha tha...main uske paas gaya aur pucha ki kya baat hai...wo bola ki Jaggu bhai mujhe bula rahen hain....

Main uske sath hospital ki aoor chal diya...didi ko phone karke bol diya ki kuch kaam se station tak ja raha HOIN...thodi der lag JAYEGI ghar aaye huye.....

Jab me hospital phaucha to Jaggu ab ek Pvt room me bed pe leta hua tha...uske sharir pe Pattiyan bandhi huye thi....aur wo abhi iss waqt AARAM kar raha tha...mujhe dekh ke wo bed pe se utha....aur mujhe gale laga liya....aur bola " tera bahoot ahsan hai rey ladke....kya naam hai TERA..."


Main: jii...Arun Gupta....

Jaggu : Arun tune meri JAAN bachai  air mujhe khoon bhi diya....mujhe MAAF KARNA mene jo kuch bhi kiya....ab se tu mera bhai hai...

Main : mene kuch nahi kiya...wo to ek insan INSAN ka farz nibhaya  bas mene...

Jaggu : wo THEEK hai Arun....par tujhe pata hai kal anjane me TUNE kis se panga le liya hai....Kallu Yadav se ...mere se pehle yahan ka Zameen Mafia wo tha...par mere aane ke baad uska raaj yahan se khatam ho gaya...aur ab wo mere khoon ka pyasa hai...meri MADAD karne ki wajah se TU ab uska dushman ho gaya hai...ek kaam kar TU ISS area se bahar chala ja...

Main : main kahan jaoinga...aur kyun jaon....mene kuch GALAT nahi kiya...

Ye sun ke wo has diya aur bola " Sahi hey re...tere me bahoot jigara hai...tu mujh se nahi darra to ussey kya darega...theek hai aaj se TU aur TERI item...oh sorry...bhabhi ji...meri protection me...

Main : dekhiye wo meri behan hi hain...aapko galat fehmi hai...wo kya hai na....jab hum iss shehar mai aaye tab HUME ghar nahi mil raha tha...har koi sirf married couple ko hi ghar kiraye pe de raha tha...isliye hum dono ne pati PATNI ka natak  kiya ghar lene ke liye...

Phir mene usey apni sari kahani SUNA di....

Kahani sunke wo bola " theek hai chote...tu an darr MAT...ye Jaggu ab TERA bada bhai hai....mai tujhe kuch nahi hone DUNGA ab..."...

Ab kuch din yunhi  beet gaye...Jaggu ka problem ab khatam ho gaya tha...

Par kuch din baad Jaggu ko security officer ne pakad liya ek picewale ke khoon ke ilzam me...ye khoon Kallu Yadav ne karwaya tha aur Jaggu ko phasa ke JAIL bhej diya...

Ab main kya karun ...kya mujhe Virar choodke kahin aur chale jana chahiye...ab main ye sab soch soch ke pareshan ho raha tha....

Aur ek din Vikram ne mere uper bum phoda...wo bola " Bhole...main air KAMNA SHADI kar rahe hai...main uske sath mandir me SHADI karne ka raha HOIN....aur TUJHE wahan AANA hai..."

Mene socha ' ye sala kya ho raha hai...didi ne abhi tak mujhe KYUN nahi bataya...'...


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Badhiya update bhai
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Main sham ko jab ghar aaya to didi bahoot khush lag rahi thi ....main jaisey hi ghar ke ander dhakil hua waisey hi didi ne mujhe apne sine se laga liya ....main thoda chunka par kuch bola nahi...

Didi boli : Arun zara pehle yahan baitho....

Aur unhone mujhe sofe pe baitha diya...aur mere bagal me aake baith gai....phir unhone apne nazuk hathon me mere haath liye aur apni nazre niche karke sharmate huye boli " Arun main TUJHE kuch batana chahti hoon...mujhe kisi se pyar ho gaya hai....aur main ussey SHADI karne ka mann bana chuki hoin...dekh TU naraz MAT hona...mene TUJHE pehle nahi bataya....main pehle ye pakka KARNA CHAHTI thi ki wo bhi mujh se pyar karta hai ya nahi....kyunki mujhe pehli baar kisi ladke se saccha pyar hua hai...tere Jija ji se mujhe aisi feeling KABHI nahi aai...shadi ke baad bas unhone mujhe apni hawas bitane ka jariya samajh rakha tha....par ye ladka mujhe SACH me pyar karta hai...aur ab SHADI bhi kar raha hai...."

Main samajh chuka tha ki didi Vikram ki baat kar rahi hain....main bola " Didi main AAPKO kuch bahoot JARURI baat batana chahta hoin"


Didi : pehle tu meri baat sun Bachu.... wo ladka kaun hain tu nahi janna chahega....dekh TU naraz MAT hona...pehle.vada kar....arey soch kya raha hai KARNA...

Main didi ki KHUSHI dekh ke soch me pad gaya tha ki unhe Vikram ke bare main bataon ya nahi....tabhi phir se unki madhur awaj  mere kanno me padi " are BOLNA Bachu...kahan kho gaya..."

Main : haan didi BATAO na kaun hai wo naseebdar...

Didi : actually...Wooooo....TERA boss VIIIKKRAAMM HAI...

 Aur ye bolke wo niche zameen ki aoor nazre jhuka ke dekhne lagi....iss waqt wo ek pyari si BACCHI lag rahi thi....jaisey koi baccha apne papa se koi khilone maang raha ho....

Ab main ye samajh nahi paa raha tha ki main unhe Vikram ki sacchai KAISEY bataon....main JANTE bhujhte didi ko Vikram ke changul  me nahi phasna se sakta tha....

Main bola : didi main AAPKO bahoot hi important baat batana chahta HOIN Vikram ķe bare me...

Didi ne apni nazre uper utha li...aur prshanavachak nazro se dekhne lagi....

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Doston....mene ask 4-5 update diye hain aapko..aasha karta HOIN AAPKO acche lage honge...


Ek aur baat shayad kuch logo ko ye kahani boring lag rahi hogi....kyunki isme sabhi tak wo sex scene nahi aaye jo wo expect kar rahen hain usual stories ki tarah...in fact meri pehli kahani " YE KAISA SHRAP" me bhi acche khase scene the...

Par aap log nishchint rahen...kuch 4-5 updates main ye chapter khatam ho jayega...aur 3 rd Chapter ke bharpor sex honewali hai...twist turns aane wale hain...usme kinky sex bhi hoga aur AAP sab ko kuch fantac9bhi hongi....kahani ko build up hone me time lagta hai....aur JABARDASTI sex scene thoosna accha nahi lagta...
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Good going nice build up....
Par mujhe lagta hain 3 part se jada hone chaihiyan .. Is part ki bad toh woo use hone wali hain sab ki hato... Arun k hawas ko bhi ek part hona chaiyean kuyn ki wo kaamna ke liye itna kuch kara par Kamna hain ki khud parast hain arun ko bhi apne hissa ke revenge lena chaihiyan .... Jis part main KAMNA uski didi nahi just whore for his pleasure .

But choice is yours.
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Super yara.... Maja aa raha h... Interesting story..... Vikarm Or kamana ki sadi karwo Or sughrat ka bhi sence create karo jisme vikram kamana ki chut gand muh sab ko ache se ragad ke chode Or pergent kare...... Or uska bhai ye sab dekhe..... Please update more
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(23-07-2020, 05:48 PM)The_one Wrote: Good going nice build up....
Par mujhe lagta hain 3 part se jada hone chaihiyan .. Is part ki bad toh woo use hone wali hain sab ki hato...  Arun k hawas ko bhi ek part hona chaiyean kuyn ki wo kaamna ke liye itna kuch kara par Kamna hain ki khud parast hain arun ko bhi apne hissa ke revenge lena chaihiyan ....  Jis part main KAMNA uski didi nahi just whore for his pleasure .  

But choice is yours.

Sahi he bro.....ab fir se kamna ki shadi mat karao ....
Aska bhai hi ase pyaar me fasale aur fir khub ragad ke chude kamna ko...fir koi bahar wale ko chans mile
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hhaa uska bhai dala bana kai rakho jesa apni bhen ko chuta dekta raha gaaa
hana yahe kamina pan karo saloo
etne bekkar story ja rahi hai
or writer ka hoslaaaaaa banata raho

i realy does not like this story
i really hate this story gud bya
bakwas story ka mor kameena chutiyo kaa liya likta rahoooooooooooooooo................
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(23-07-2020, 09:13 PM)Ravikumar528 Wrote: hhaa uska bhai dala bana kai rakho jesa apni bhen ko chuta dekta raha gaaa
hana yahe kamina pan karo saloo
etne bekkar story ja rahi hai
or writer ka hoslaaaaaa banata raho

i realy does not like this story
i really hate this story gud bya
bakwas story ka mor kameena chutiyo kaa liya likta rahoooooooooooooooo................

Bhai I appreciate your criticism...it will help me to improve...I can't disclose the story...but yes mujhe bhi lag raha hai ki story boring ja rahi hai par aage kuch interesting mod pe le Jane ke liye thoda build up chahiye....


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