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(20-07-2020, 08:16 PM)Bregs Wrote: wow damn excitingly hot update
zphra chud gayi an bacj naziya lekin noor ne uske liye kuch bahut bada socha hai
Maine yaha thoda fast sean likha par kahani ko maine clear kar diya mere man mai ab 2 carecter noor aur Nazia hai aur uski Maa side roll nibhayegi......
Kyoki ye kahani paiso aur shohrat ke liye likh raha to isme shareef jitna banana tha bana diya ab Nazia ki life mai jhakna padega bhale ek update mai... Kyoki direct sex kisi se karwao to woh feeling nahi aayegi
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(20-07-2020, 06:34 PM)The_one Wrote: GREAT like every updates of you.... Chud gaya zohra ... Ab kamayegi veil burkhe ki aad main
Ye practical life mai bhi dekho koi bhi Community ka mamla ho waha sharafat ke piche bada khel hota hai wohi mai likh raha ho.....
Aur kahi na kahi ye simple likh raha tha par bar bar yahi noor mujhe nazbeen ki yaad dilati hai jaise usne sex kara par bad mai wohi sex apna hathiyan banaya aur logo ko jhukaya aisa hi dekhta ho agar lagega ki mai noor ke sath justify nahi kar pa raha ho to isko ek Accha sa climax deke band kar donga......
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(20-07-2020, 08:46 PM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Maine yaha thoda fast sean likha par kahani ko maine clear kar diya mere man mai ab 2 carecter noor aur Nazia hai aur uski Maa side roll nibhayegi......
Kyoki ye kahani paiso aur shohrat ke liye likh raha to isme shareef jitna banana tha bana diya ab Nazia ki life mai jhakna padega bhale ek update mai... Kyoki direct sex kisi se karwao to woh feeling nahi aayegi
sahi hai but nazia ki entry bahut zordaar hone chahiye
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(20-07-2020, 08:46 PM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Maine yaha thoda fast sean likha par kahani ko maine clear kar diya mere man mai ab 2 carecter noor aur Nazia hai aur uski Maa side roll nibhayegi......
Kyoki ye kahani paiso aur shohrat ke liye likh raha to isme shareef jitna banana tha bana diya ab Nazia ki life mai jhakna padega bhale ek update mai... Kyoki direct sex kisi se karwao to woh feeling nahi aayegi
Bhai, you are going in write direction. We are getting all the element which We can wildly desire from a story ...
Many Character can effect story.. Many man may come get those veili slut, but heroine is noor the main character and Nazia her main weapon.. Zohra can aid them. She can only worm.customer when they come to fuck NOOR OR Nazia.
You are such a Marvelous writer..
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(20-07-2020, 08:51 PM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Ye practical life mai bhi dekho koi bhi Community ka mamla ho waha sharafat ke piche bada khel hota hai wohi mai likh raha ho.....
Aur kahi na kahi ye simple likh raha tha par bar bar yahi noor mujhe nazbeen ki yaad dilati hai jaise usne sex kara par bad mai wohi sex apna hathiyan banaya aur logo ko jhukaya aisa hi dekhta ho agar lagega ki mai noor ke sath justify nahi kar pa raha ho to isko ek Accha sa climax deke band kar donga......
That's True .. Sharafat ke piche hi hita hain sab kuch veili or h|ndu lady Doesn't matter..
Turely speaking Noor is admirable character, how she fucked with Mukesh two times was great, encounter with bhikhari and Nandu was also great . People wants the forbidden one like Innocence and veil of Noor. Every encounter since gopal fucking her like he is the first one unwarping that veil or drilling to cunt. Thats the best part of Noor
Ab story sahi chal rahe ..Bahut kuch baki in characters main. Show mast go one .Nazbeen and Noor like character is not easy to get .. Continue bro
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Bhai abhi toh khel tumne shuru kiya mujhe aise lagtahe ... Noor ko sahi tarha didar karwaw hamse ... Wo toh kuchhi jalak dikha rahe puri raat ka intejaar hain noorin ji jab pakiza banke customer ke pass nakhre karega aur fir mast hoke raat bitayegi. Tum jis thara likhteho aur conversation dalteho sab Noorin ki hi dewana banegi
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(20-07-2020, 09:56 PM)The_one Wrote: That's True .. Sharafat ke piche hi hita hain sab kuch veili or h|ndu lady Doesn't matter..
Turely speaking Noor is admirable character, how she fucked with Mukesh two times was great, encounter with bhikhari and Nandu was also great . People wants the forbidden one like Innocence and veil of Noor. Every encounter since gopal fucking her like he is the first one unwarping that veil or drilling to cunt. Thats the best part of Noor
Ab story sahi chal rahe ..Bahut kuch baki in characters main. Show mast go one .Nazbeen and Noor like character is not easy to get .. Continue bro
Ha maine bich mai ye experience ke anusar noor ko paisa sex shohrat extra woh dekhya.... Warna bahot se story hai jo sirf cheating wife par nahi zyada chal pati.... Aur jaha maine unke husband ko sex mai include kiya woh story hit rahi i mean uske husband ko malom padta hai uski wife uski wazah se sex kar rahi hai aur woh ignore kar deta hai to woh story hit ho jati hai like nazbeen iram ha intzar kab tak karenge bhi kafi hit rahi thi...... Waha bhi seduce kar ke apne kam age ke ladke se sex karaya... Par jab mai normal likhta ho woh na viewer milte na cmmt jaise budda kaka ke sath hua...... Woh kahani nahi chal pa rahi hai..... Aur lockdown ko maine apne mind mai badane ki soch liya hai kaise use badao
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(20-07-2020, 10:24 PM)Tharki_uncle Wrote: Bhai abhi toh khel tumne shuru kiya mujhe aise lagtahe ... Noor ko sahi tarha didar karwaw hamse ... Wo toh kuchhi jalak dikha rahe puri raat ka intejaar hain noorin ji jab pakiza banke customer ke pass nakhre karega aur fir mast hoke raat bitayegi. Tum jis thara likhteho aur conversation dalteho sab Noorin ki hi dewana banegi
Ha mai agar full night noor ki de do to noor open ho jayegi isliye short encounter de raha ho jisse reader ke man mai rahe ke aur aage kuch hota adhura sa raha.... Jisee noor ka carecter se lagaw aur bade.....
Mere ek galti se sabse zyada view cmmt mil rahe the lockdown mai maine use bekar kar diya......
Kyokibtabbasum ko reader aur ap sab logo ne jaise pasand kara waise mai lamba nahi chala paya.... But jaldi use sudharonga ap aur mere bahot se reader continue mera hosla badate hai unke liye Thanxxx writer yahi chahata hai acche cmmt mile bahot time lagta hai likhne mai aur koi zyada nahi kah pata kahani ke bare mai to thoda jhatka lagta hai. ...... But mai aisa kuch likhonga jaisa aam tor par kam hota hai.... Wohi cheez agar likho to alag maza aata hai jaise ab tak maine likha sab log pasand kar rahe hai ye Accha hai.....
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(20-07-2020, 11:23 PM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Ha mai agar full night noor ki de do to noor open ho jayegi isliye short encounter de raha ho jisse reader ke man mai rahe ke aur aage kuch hota adhura sa raha.... Jisee noor ka carecter se lagaw aur bade.....
Mere ek galti se sabse zyada view cmmt mil rahe the lockdown mai maine use bekar kar diya......
Kyokibtabbasum ko reader aur ap sab logo ne jaise pasand kara waise mai lamba nahi chala paya.... But jaldi use sudharonga ap aur mere bahot se reader continue mera hosla badate hai unke liye Thanxxx writer yahi chahata hai acche cmmt mile bahot time lagta hai likhne mai aur koi zyada nahi kah pata kahani ke bare mai to thoda jhatka lagta hai. ...... But mai aisa kuch likhonga jaisa aam tor par kam hota hai.... Wohi cheez agar likho to alag maza aata hai jaise ab tak maine likha sab log pasand kar rahe hai ye Accha hai.....
App likhteho kamal ki. Har character ek different andaz main bana leteho good for reader like us.. App likhete jao apni marji se.
Ek baat kahene chahungga. Noor shakt mejaj se kmaal mejej main bahut asche lagte hain but NOOR nazbeen ko piche chor denge is tarha chale toh
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(20-07-2020, 11:16 PM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Ha maine bich mai ye experience ke anusar noor ko paisa sex shohrat extra woh dekhya.... Warna bahot se story hai jo sirf cheating wife par nahi zyada chal pati.... Aur jaha maine unke husband ko sex mai include kiya woh story hit rahi i mean uske husband ko malom padta hai uski wife uski wazah se sex kar rahi hai aur woh ignore kar deta hai to woh story hit ho jati hai like nazbeen iram ha intzar kab tak karenge bhi kafi hit rahi thi...... Waha bhi seduce kar ke apne kam age ke ladke se sex karaya... Par jab mai normal likhta ho woh na viewer milte na cmmt jaise budda kaka ke sath hua...... Woh kahani nahi chal pa rahi hai..... Aur lockdown ko maine apne mind mai badane ki soch liya hai kaise use badao
Your every story has differet vibe . Isiliya ek sath agar likhenge toh apas main mix ho jeyega . App good writer ho manage karoge I can say but you should write once then move to another aur jada se jada do likho. App update bhi aur se jada deteho thats amazing .
Bro Noor aur nazia ko jo bhia kawana veil and burkhe main. Under jo chahen . har bar unwarping is good.. Like opening new mobils woh bhi iPhone... Shareef randi rahegi toh pyar jada milega. Har sakhs ko lagne chahe wo use pahele barbllot rahe ..
Hum reader toh bass hamare fantasy bol bol ke apko pakwa denge but keep writing as your wish . There was so many promising writer but like you a Very few.
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Brilliant story telling..
Hope to see a threesome soon with Noor and zohra..
Right now more eager to see bikhari's comeback and impact on the three ladies..
Would want to see more kinky stuff..
This is my favourite story now 
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Is there any update today Sirjee?
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Ab Noor aiye gi kya jalwa leke
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Fucking hot update bro.finaly Gopal fucks zohra.
Gis thrah baato mein zohra ko fasna liye Gopal phir chudia mast tarike se kiye. Bhut paysi nikle zohra toh.
Kya zohra bhi independent women bani gayi. Pyas bhi bhuje aur pasie bhi mile.
Nazia ko kya hoga ab lakho bhi bekhigi uski virgin chut.
Noor kya kya plan hai future k liye. Gharib logo ki sewa kargi?
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22-07-2020, 01:46 AM
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(21-07-2020, 09:51 PM)Don888 Wrote: ![[Image: EZX4-IAs-Xg-AE8-Mh-A.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/sK3XF9c/EZX4-IAs-Xg-AE8-Mh-A.jpg)
Randi Noorin tharki grahak ke sammne  please lion bhai zara video dekhliyeaga https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?v...f3dc724c00
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Waiting for a grand update today..
More erotic and something different..
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@Tharki_uncle What a link.. xhmaster pe dekhi thi but couldn’t find the link. Thanks uncle
@lion bhai, update da dijiye ... Noor ki customers yani hum log betab ho heya.. If possible please that type of sex which provided by uncle....
Intejer hain uodate ka . Jobardast conversation ka
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