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Adultery Awara ladka aur didi
(30-06-2020, 10:18 PM)sadasada Wrote: What??????

You said earlier that you are not original write of the story but will try to complete the story. Now you are saying that you are waiting for the original writer to complete the story?

Haan to sahi to kaha ki itne din aur mahina wait kar rha tha ki writer story ka update post kare lekin uska kuch pata nhi tha.
 Maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki agar kisi site se copy kar rha hai to link bheje wahi se padh lenge.

Ab original writer ke thinking se apni thinking match kar ke story bna rha hu taki story alag na lge.
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(30-06-2020, 10:28 PM)PAATROW Wrote: Haan to sahi to kaha ki itne din aur mahina wait kar rha tha ki writer story ka update post kare lekin uska kuch pata nhi tha.
 Maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki agar kisi site se copy kar rha hai to link bheje wahi se padh lenge.

Ab original writer ke thinking se apni thinking match kar ke story bna rha hu taki story alag na lge.

Bilkul theek. Mjy apki baat samajh aa gai.

Ap ny jo 2 updates d hein. Zabardast updates hein. keep it up. baqi mein apko suggestions deta rahu ga. thora sa updates ki length ziada rakho.
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(30-06-2020, 10:35 PM)sadasada Wrote: Bilkul theek. Mjy apki baat samajh aa gai.

Ap ny jo 2 updates d hein. Zabardast updates hein. keep it up. baqi mein apko suggestions deta rahu ga. thora sa updates ki length ziada rakho.

Chhote update jyada achhe hai kyonki usmein naya masala bhara jaa sakta hai. Bich mein suggestion dete rehna kyonki main kuch baatein bhul gya tha jaise betting wala. Pura story shuru se padhna padta hai story continue karne ke liye. Naya idea milta hai to achha lgta hai story ke liye.
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Bhai log original writer active hai. 2 may 2020 ko uska last update aaya tha new story " Didi aur college ke ladke" ka. Isiliye uska is thread mein koi reply nhi tha.


        Delta knight bhai jaldi update do
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Arey bhai nahi likhni toh bata do nahi likhoge...
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Hello .. bhai kaha the ab tak. Jab aap likh sakte the, to humlogo ko etna wait kyu krwaya. Ye to saaf hai ki original writer hame dhoka de gaya hai, aur ab jab aapne continue krne ki kosis ki hai to ab uski jarurat b nai hai. So first of all, forget about original writer and wo kya chahta tha story me. Jab aap likh rahe ho to apni tarike se write karo kyuki waise b story abhi 15 se 20 % hi complete huwi h. Raghu ne to just apna jaal dalna start hi kiya tha ki story stop ho gayi thi.
Well mai b kuch kahna chahta hu story pr- pahli baat ki raghu u msg bhejega , live dikhayega to ka ladki samjhegi nai kya ki raghu apni gf ke liye nai balki uske piche pada h. So ab en video links bhejne ke baat raghu ke liye tough hona chahiye ladki ko trap krna. Ladki bold n sahsi hogi to apne aap bachti jayegi aur uska bhai b bech bech me kuch ker sakta h jisse raghu ki planning fail hoti rahe. But sath hi raghu ki kosis ke karan ladki ander se khud hi sex ki taraf attract hoti rahi jiske karan wo raghu ke samne dhere dhere surrender ho jaye baad me. Jaha ek tara raghu gunda h to wahi ladki ke samne sharif, helping nature ka ladka bane taki ladki ke constant touch me bana rahe aur seduce kr sake. Thanks and keep posting bro..
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Original and so called duplicate writer both are same.  Wasted our time.
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Duplicate writer ki apni 4 stories incomplete hei. Verify kerna chahta hei to uski profiles mein jo jo stories hei ja k dekh lei.
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Bus batein banana ati hei. K original write active hai, yeh wo. Baqi members andhy nahe hei k unhei nazar nahe aa raha original writer ka active hona.
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Koi poochay k original ko chhoro. Tum ny kia kiya. 2 updates dy k bus.......dum daba k bhag gaya.
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Ab kya huwa yaar.. update me etna tym kyu le rahe ho..
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Bhai original writer active hote rehta h. Agar uski story main likhta hu aur admin mujhe block kr de to fir kya hoga? Koi btaa sakta h kya?
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Update nai milega kya es story ka
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Are bhai aage ki stories likho...
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Are bhai koi or ise start kar do
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Update story
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Bhai update de do bahut din ho gye.
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बहुत बढिया लिखा आप लिखना जारी रखे ,! कृप्या अपडेट दे
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REVISIT UPDATE 1

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Hamare mohalle ka naam hai vishwas nagar.hamare mohalle ke pass ek ground hai jaha par jyadatar log cricket khelte hai aas pass ke mohalle wale.usi khali ground ke kuch dur jaake slum area shuru hota hai.iss area ke log kuch gunde type ke hai,aur political power wale hai.Me ghar pe free rehta tha to kabhi uss ground me jaa ke cricket khel liya krta tha.Ek din me us ground me cricket khelne gya tha.us ground ke kuch kone par kuch log taash(cards) khel rhe the.kuch samay baad unme kisi baat ko le kr jhagda ho gya.wo kuch teen log the.fir unme se do logo ne mil kr ek ko marna shuru kr diya.wo humse kuch door the to hume nhi pta tha wo kis liye us ko maar rhe the,aur wo log umer me humse kuch bade aur gunde type ke lag rhe the to kisi ne unke lafde me padne ka na soch.kuch der baad wo ek banda jisne maar khai thi waha se chala gya and baki ke do log wahi beth ke bidi pine lage(smoking) karne lage.kuch der baad wo ek banda(jisne maar khayi thi apne sath do ladke le kr aaya.dono ladke umer me 22-23 saal ke lag rhe the.fit sharir ke ek dum kaale the.un dono ke hath me bat aur hockey sticks thi.unhone aate hi pehle wale dono logo par attack karna shuru kr diya.kuch der marne ke baad pehle wale dono bande waha se bhag gye.tabtak humne bhi khelna band kr diya tha.mujhe apne sath wale ek friend se pta chala ki dono sath ke slum area se hai,ek ka naam hai jai aur dusre ka naam raghu.dono hi ladai aur jhagde ke liye mashoor the aur suna tha ki bahut si sunder ladkiya pata ke chodna inka kaam tha.dono bahut si ladkiyon ko apne jaal me fasate the aur fir sath me chudai bhi krte the uske sath.Dono hi dikhne me ekdum kaale aur habshi jaisai dikhte the.kuch der aur wha bethne ke baad me ghar aa gya.karib 12:30 ko me ghar aaya khana khane,ghar me sirf mummy hi thi.papa office gye the aur didi college gyi thi.wo college se karib 2 bje aati thi.wo activa se college jati thi.us din jyada kuch aur khas hua nhi.
Agle din me jab ground pe khelne gya to wo kal wale ladke (jai aur raghu)mujhe ground per mere dosto ke sath dikhe.mai jab unke nazdik pohcha to mujhe pta chala ki wo mere baki dosto se unhe bhi hamre sath khilane ki baat kr rhe the.hum bahut kam log khelte the to humne unko ok bol diya.wo hamare sath khel rhe the to bich bich me bahut gali galoch bhi kr rhe the.unki power aur age humse kahi jyada thi to hum unko kuch nhi bol paa rhe the.usdin khelne ke baad wo log humare sath baat krne lage ki humlog kaha se aate hai,ghar kaha hai etc.kuch der baad jab sab apne apne ghar jaane ko hue to unhone mujhe pucha.
Raghu: o harsh tu vishwas nagar me rehta hai na.
Me: ha bhai(wo mujh se bade the to me unhe bhai hi bulane lga tha)
Raghu: acha chal beth hum vahi jaa rhe hai tujhe chod dete hai.
Me: nhi bhai iski koi jarurat nhi me chala jaunga.
Raghu: chal beth ja saale itna bhaw to koi ladki bhi nhi khati,wahi ja rhe hai chod dete hai(ye unhone bilkul shant swabhav me kha tha,but mujhe pta tha inhe gussa dilana mere liye hi khatra hai to me unke sath beth gya).Pehle jai betha fir me aur fir raghu mere piche.raste bhar wo koi na koi ladki ko dekh ke uske bare me galat comment krte hue jaa rhe the,like unke boobs ke baare me ya gand ke baare me etc. Thodi der baad mera ghar aa gya.me bich me betha tha to pehle raghu utra fir me utra jai abhi bhi bike pe hi betha tha.fir maine unko byy bola aur ghar ke under chala gya.me direct apne room me gya.mere room me ek khidki hai.us khidki ke through mere ko ek awaj aayi.wo awaj scooty ki thi.jab maine khidki se bahar dekha to wo meri didi ki scooty ki awaj thi.wo aaj jaldi ghar aa gayi thi.jab maine bhar dekha to paya ki raghu aur jai abhi bhi bahar khade the aur jaisai hi meri didi ki scooty ruki aur didi utri wo to jaisai spne me hi chale gye.unhone aaj tak itni gori sunder aur itne mast figure wali ladki dekhi bhi nhi hogi.uss time didi ne tight jeans aur blue top paya hua tha.tight top me unke do dudh bilkul shape me the aur tight jeans me gaand aur bhi sunder lag rhi thi.abhi to wo swarg ki apsara se kamm nhi lag rhi thi.unhe iss time dekh ke to kisi budhe ka lund bhi khada ho ke paani chod de.abhi jai aur raghu meri khubsurat didi ko ghure jaa rhe the aur raghu ne to ek baar apna lund bhi masal diya tha.uske baad didi ghar ke ander aa gyi.kuch der aapas me baat krne ke baad wo dono bhi chale gye.Kuch der baad mummy ne bhi mujhe khane ke liye bula liya.jab me khana khane gya to didi bhi wahi thi.aur aaj wo sach me ek sex bomb lag rhi thi.face se to wo bilkul innocent thi aur figure to unka mashalla bomb tha.kuch samay halki fulki baat krne ke baad didi chali gyi apne kamre me aur me bhi khana khane ke baad Apne kamre me aa gya
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REVISIT UPDATE 2

Agle din jab me khelne gya to sab normal tha but iss baar raghu aur jai mujhse kuch jyada hu friendly baat kr rhe the.Wo mujhse bahut narmi se baat kr rhe the aur pyaar se bhi.lekin wo mujhe tu keh ke hi bula rhe the and bakiyon se waisai hi baat kr rhe the(thoda rough and gali de kar).kuch der khelne ke baad unhone mujhe fir se ghar chodne ke liye lift dene ki baat ki.me kr bhi kya sakta tha to me maan gya and wo mujhe ghar chodne aaye.tab karib 1:30 baj rhe the.unhone mujhe drop kiya and me ghar ke ander chala gya.jab me apne kamre me gya to maine aisi hi apni khidki se bahar dekha to paya ki wo dono abhi bhi mere ghar ke bahar kuch door khade hai.mujhe shak hua ki ye meri didi ko dekhne ke liye hi khade hai.but didi nhi aayi to wo kuch der ruke, fir bike start kr ke waha se chale gye.mujhe lga wo chale gye but wo humare mohalle me bike le kr ghumne lage,aur kuch der baad wahi aa kr ruk gye(mere ghar samne).ab 2 baj gye the aur meri didi ke aane ka time bhi ho gya tha.kuch der baad activa ke horn ki awaj aayi aur meri didi bhi aa gayi.jai aur raghu tab bahut khush lag rhe the.didi ne aaj salwar suit pehna tha wo bhi fitting wala.didi ke body ke kasav itne mast lag rhe the jaisai wo salwar suit unhi ke liye bna ho.suit ki fitting itni tight ki mummon ke shape ka pura pta chal jaye,uske niche flat pait aur ubhari hue gand kisi ka bhi land khada krne ke liye kafi thi.Wo lal rang ke salwar suit me ek dum apsara lag rhi thi. : Wo scooty se utri aur ghar ke andar aa gayi.jab wo ghar ke ander ki aur aa rhi thi to unki pith jai aur raghu ki taraf thi.wo meri masoom si didi ke mast gand ke hilan ko dekhne lage aur apas me kuch baat ki, apni ghadi me time dekha aage chale gye.Agle din jab me khelne gya to wo dono nhi aaye the,mujhe thoda shak hua,kuch der khelne ke baad me ghar chala gya.aaj me jaldi ghar aaya tha.kuch der khana khane ke baad me apne kamre me aa gya.mujhe ander hi ander pta tha ki wo aaj bhi meri didi ko dekhne jarror aayenge so me apni didi ke aane ka intjaar krne lga.jab meri didi ke aane ka time hua to me khidki se dekhne lga,kuch der baad didi bhi aa gyi activa se apni aur kuch der baad bike se wo dono bhi unke peeche se aaye aur aage chale gye.Didi ghar ke ander aayi,khana khaya aur apne kamre me chali gayi.Agle din bhi same hi hua.Maine jitna suna tha unke baare me ki wo masoom ladkiyon ko apne jaal me fsa ke unka fayda uthate hai Aur mil kar unke kar unke sath sex krte hai,bahut buri tarah chodte hai dono mil kr.Hamare pass ke mohalle ki ek ladki jo abhi college me hi unke jaal me fasi thi,usko unhone pyaar ke jaal me fsa kr uska video bhi banaya tha aur usko kai ladko se bhi chudwaya tha.badi mushkil se wo ladki unke chungul se bach paayi thi,wo bhi uski family ne jab usse yaha se dur padai ke liye bhej diya aur fir uski shaadi krwa di.Ab back to present
Agle din me jaldi utha bas ye jan ne ke liye ki wo dono sirf meri didi ke peeche dopher ko hi aate hai ya subah bhi peecha krte hai,toh me subah utha aur didi ke jaane ke time apne room ki khidki ke bahar dekha to koi nahi tha mujhe lga wo dono sirf shaam ko hi peecha krte honge but me galat sabit hua jab didi ghar se bahar apni activa le kr nikli to kuch der baad wo bhi unko follow krne lge.mujhe ab tak to pta chal gya tha ki ye meri didi ko patane ki soch rhe hai, aur me ye nahi chahta tha but me majboor tha kyonki mere me itna dum nhi tha ki me unko rok saku ya unpe ye iljaam lga saku ki wo meri didi ko ched rhe hai(kyonki wo meri didi ko ched nhi rhe the bus follow kr rhe the, ya fir me unhe mna kr saku kyonki wo mere se aur meri family se bahut powerful log hai, unke pass political power hai aur humare pass kuch bhi nahi hai waisa, Us din me khelne nahi gya aur ghar par hi betha rha, jab didi ke ghar aane ka time hua to me fir khidki ke pass ja ke dekhne lga aaj bhi same hua didi aayi aur unke peeche wo bhi follow krte hue aaye(shayed didi ko pta na ho ya wo ignore krti ho kyonki ladkiyon kw liye ye aam baat hoti hai).Fir mene socha kyon na kal se me bhi inhe follow karu to me inka plan pta kr saku aur apni pyari aur bholi didi ko bacha saku inn kamino se.Apne plan ko anjaam dene ke liye mujhe chahiye thi ek vachical, so me apne ek dost ke pass gya wo nazdik me hi pg le kr rehta tha aur uske pass ek bike bhi thi, meri uss se jaan pehchan cricket khelte hue hi hui thi aur jaan pehchan bhi bahut achi ho gayi thi to me uske pass gya aur bola bhai mujhe teri bike aur helmet kuch dino ke liye subah ke time chahiye, to usne mujhe ok keh diya.fir me agle din ka intzaar krne lga kyonki mujhe agle din se jaasoosi krni thi.
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