Posts: 371
Threads: 6
Likes Received: 290 in 203 posts
Likes Given: 89
Joined: Jan 2019
Reputation:
7
(26-02-2019, 10:57 AM)krish_999 Wrote: Guys, I am extremely sorry for the delay.
The next update is yet to be finished. It seems like it's the most difficult chapter I have so far written for this story. Sometimes it feels I'm on a writer's block. I know how to begin this and how to end this chapter, but I am not really sure about bringing it from point A to point B. I have written a lot and I am still looking at it what to include and what not.
It's gonna take a couple of more days; I have nothing else to say for now, except for one thing: that I won't delay it more than three days from now.
Thanks for your patience. I am happy that the story is inching towards 1 lakh views. I thank all the readers for believing in my story.
In a fun way, I am also waiting for the update to happen, guys.
Krish.
Krish_999, take your time we all are with you. I know it does happen when you want to give your best.
Some times while writing we get confused, even when we know the destination but there are multiple paths in front of us.
![[+]](https://xossipy.com/themes/sharepoint/collapse_collapsed.png)
•
Posts: 22,553
Threads: 267
Likes Received: 22,470 in 9,446 posts
Likes Given: 168
Joined: Nov 2018
Reputation:
300
26-02-2019, 06:35 PM
(This post was last modified: 26-02-2019, 06:39 PM by Ramesh_Rocky. Edited 4 times in total. Edited 4 times in total.)
Congratulations Krish first thread to reach 100k views in English Forum.
Like, Comment and Give Rating.
•
Posts: 22,553
Threads: 267
Likes Received: 22,470 in 9,446 posts
Likes Given: 168
Joined: Nov 2018
Reputation:
300
Like, Comment and Give Rating.
•
Posts: 1,252
Threads: 3
Likes Received: 437 in 328 posts
Likes Given: 11,458
Joined: Nov 2018
Reputation:
16
(26-02-2019, 06:35 PM)Ramesh_Rocky Wrote: Congratulations Krish first thread to reach 100k views in English Forum.
congrats krish dear
take your time and update the best
•
Posts: 22,553
Threads: 267
Likes Received: 22,470 in 9,446 posts
Likes Given: 168
Joined: Nov 2018
Reputation:
300
Like, Comment and Give Rating.
•
Posts: 461
Threads: 6
Likes Received: 148 in 122 posts
Likes Given: 53
Joined: Dec 2018
Reputation:
10
(26-02-2019, 11:53 PM)Ramesh_Rocky Wrote:
very very hot girl. I found quiet similarites in this movie with the character of this thread. The actress reminds me anvita's adventure many time while watching this movie. What a weird coincidence.
•
Posts: 22,553
Threads: 267
Likes Received: 22,470 in 9,446 posts
Likes Given: 168
Joined: Nov 2018
Reputation:
300
Movie name :- Good Sister in Law Forbidden Love eng sub
Link :- https://www.xvideos2.com/video33743583/g...idden_love
Like, Comment and Give Rating.
•
Posts: 63
Threads: 0
Likes Received: 28 in 20 posts
Likes Given: 0
Joined: Dec 2018
Reputation:
1
3
Days gone...its time to post the update
•
Posts: 1,252
Threads: 3
Likes Received: 437 in 328 posts
Likes Given: 11,458
Joined: Nov 2018
Reputation:
16
waiting eagerly krish dear
•
Posts: 238
Threads: 5
Likes Received: 51 in 33 posts
Likes Given: 1
Joined: Nov 2018
Reputation:
4
Posts: 138
Threads: 0
Likes Received: 63 in 35 posts
Likes Given: 17
Joined: Dec 2018
Reputation:
8
Krish, can we expect an update today?
Love to witness my  
•
Posts: 461
Threads: 6
Likes Received: 148 in 122 posts
Likes Given: 53
Joined: Dec 2018
Reputation:
10
I hope there is brief group sex update between anvita, prithvi, george, leona
•
Posts: 371
Threads: 6
Likes Received: 290 in 203 posts
Likes Given: 89
Joined: Jan 2019
Reputation:
7
02-03-2019, 12:39 PM
(This post was last modified: 02-03-2019, 12:42 PM by themaskeditor. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(02-03-2019, 11:40 AM)fasterboy Wrote: I hope there is brief group sex update between anvita, prithvi, george, leona
O Great It would be TOO HOT and AWESOME, With Atul being just a helpless spectator or watching it in hiding.
•
Posts: 461
Threads: 6
Likes Received: 148 in 122 posts
Likes Given: 53
Joined: Dec 2018
Reputation:
10
Also while they all four are in middle, manjot pay a surprise visit to anvita home.
•
Posts: 492
Threads: 0
Likes Received: 421 in 255 posts
Likes Given: 376
Joined: Dec 2018
Reputation:
11
(02-03-2019, 11:40 AM)fasterboy Wrote: I hope there is brief group sex update between anvita, prithvi, george, Leona
Perfect recipe for killing the essence of this story! While its possible to enact this at the very end of story like a prologue , if that's where the story is headed.
•
Posts: 22,553
Threads: 267
Likes Received: 22,470 in 9,446 posts
Likes Given: 168
Joined: Nov 2018
Reputation:
300
(02-03-2019, 07:49 PM)RCF Wrote: Perfect recipe for killing the essence of this story! While its possible to enact this at the very end of story like a prologue , if that's where the story is headed.
Yes what you said was right it will spoil the story.
Like, Comment and Give Rating.
•
Posts: 202
Threads: 1
Likes Received: 37 in 34 posts
Likes Given: 1
Joined: Nov 2018
Reputation:
12
(02-03-2019, 08:52 PM)Ramesh_Rocky Wrote: Yes what you said was right it will spoil the story.
Yep...it is not like other fantasy stories...it is more realistic and natural...
So Anvita going around and fucking all other men surely kill all the emotion that carried till now...
I personally stop reading if that is what going to happen...
•
Posts: 515
Threads: 7
Likes Received: 721 in 332 posts
Likes Given: 0
Joined: Jan 2019
Reputation:
39
So far Anvita character as has been portrayed is, she is sexually starved. Her physical needs are a burden to herself and she is struggling over it. Already self wiling blowjob at car has dampened the spirit of the storyline and against the character of Anvita. The mental conflict between her love towards Atul and submission towards physical needs are at a critical stage. Unless she overcome her mental agony, she can't involve in sex with others willingly. It has to be forced.
Hence I strongly feel that blowjob at the car is against the natural flow of Anvita character. What is required is that in stimulating situations, she is blown by physical needs great enough to overcome guilty conscienceness. Otherwise it will become an ordinary story of a slut having meaningless mind-blowing sex, for which there are plenty stories.
•
Posts: 202
Threads: 1
Likes Received: 37 in 34 posts
Likes Given: 1
Joined: Nov 2018
Reputation:
12
(02-03-2019, 10:42 PM)manasi Wrote: Hence I strongly feel that blowjob at the car is against the natural flow of Anvita character. What is required is that in stimulating situations, she is blown by physical needs great enough to overcome guilty conscienceness. Otherwise it will become an ordinary story of a slut having meaningless mind-blowing sex, for which there are plenty stories. Yeah well said...I too feel the same...
And inviting Prithvi and allowing him to take her just in a week afte her father in laws wise words is also not that much natural.....lost the flow in there...I'm not feeling that much emotional since recent updates...
See what writer will come up with...
•
Posts: 22,553
Threads: 267
Likes Received: 22,470 in 9,446 posts
Likes Given: 168
Joined: Nov 2018
Reputation:
300
(02-03-2019, 10:42 PM)manasi Wrote: So far Anvita character as has been portrayed is, she is sexually starved. Her physical needs are a burden to herself and she is struggling over it. Already self wiling blowjob at car has dampened the spirit of the storyline and against the character of Anvita. The mental conflict between her love towards Atul and submission towards physical needs are at a critical stage. Unless she overcome her mental agony, she can't involve in sex with others willingly. It has to be forced.
Hence I strongly feel that blowjob at the car is against the natural flow of Anvita character. What is required is that in stimulating situations, she is blown by physical needs great enough to overcome guilty conscienceness. Otherwise it will become an ordinary story of a slut having meaningless mind-blowing sex, for which there are plenty stories.
Wow I am impressed
Blowjob at car was a bit too much for me too I expected handjob but as per anvita condition it she is starving for her physical needs it depends on person.at that situation it is Varun who provoked anvita.her thrust for physical need make her weak it proves in previous encounters with shreyas and others.
Like, Comment and Give Rating.
•
|
