[flash speed 321]

Ab kon khush naseeb ha jo tabassum ka doodh piye ga

[Lion King 989]

Ab kon khush naseeb ha jo tabassum ka doodh piye ga

Ha abhi maine bhi nahi socha ki kon ab milk ka maza lega... Par koi na koi zaroor hai jo rabbi ka milk piyega hi..... Us carecter ko soch raha ho  aur Phir se wohi sab ho alag parkar se jisme pad kar maza aaye aur tabbi ko wohi purane Sharam haya type ki full waise to nahi ban sakti par jitna ho sake banata ho isliye ek kirdar aa to raha hai mere man mai wohi uski ka update dene ki koshish karonga agar ye kirdar chal jai to kahani ko non stop aage bada donga

[salman7349]

Bahut badhiya continue rakhna story ko bro...

[Shabaz123]

Waiting bro

[rafiqshaikh9059]

Ha abhi maine bhi nahi socha ki kon ab milk ka maza lega... Par koi na koi zaroor hai jo rabbi ka milk piyega hi..... Us carecter ko soch raha ho  aur Phir se wohi sab ho alag parkar se jisme pad kar maza aaye aur tabbi ko wohi purane Sharam haya type ki full waise to nahi ban sakti par jitna ho sake banata ho isliye ek kirdar aa to raha hai mere man mai wohi uski ka update dene ki koshish karonga agar ye kirdar chal jai to kahani ko non stop aage bada donga

koi naukar mat rakhna kuch alag karna jaise koi sabziwala 51 sal ka buddha ya  koi dhudhwala

[Shabaz123]

Koi esa ja use pehchan taho koi low class....pehchan wale se chudwane me aur maza aaega

[flash speed 321]

Wesy doodh wala acha option ha . seducive bhi hoga jesy jaab doodh wala doodh dega to usy tabbasum kay mammay nazar aai gay aur double meaning baat kare ga etc . lets hope for best

[Lion King 989]

Wesy doodh wala acha option ha . seducive bhi hoga jesy jaab doodh wala doodh dega to usy tabbasum kay mammay nazar aai gay aur double meaning  baat kare ga etc  . lets hope for best

Ha sex to hoga hi par jaise encounter type hua hai to isse ek aur Tabbasum ka roop samne aaya yani andar se Tabbasum mazboot hue jo ab apne liye duniya se lad sakti hai... Aur woh apne lhawaish ke liye bhi kisi ke sath sex kar sakti hai.... Par ise mai ek iram jaisa look dena chahata ho... Kyoki ye story trake se bhatak gayi hai aur mai kisi ek ki Tabbasum nahi banana chahata to kuch aisa aage soch raha ho jo kafi had tak real lage aur padne wale ko lage aisa aam jeevan mai ho sakta hai...... Sex plus kahani

[Rancour]

clp); I read the story till now.
The turnaround has a solid pinch of reality and has put the story on track.It is vital that you should have a freedom to write irrespective of myriads of advisors because the way you fantasize a sexual scene is beyond comparison  .
Also every writer has an episode of mental block at some phase of writing . You can overcome it by abhorrence for a week or two from writing to increase your appetite and decrease the threshold of adrenaline rush that one has while exploring the realms of deep fantasy.
And above all while reading your valid eroticism , the most beneficial thing is that lockdown has become a taboo element in itself to most readers. The readers need this sort of writing and eroticism to overcome the boredom of lockdown  and makes me feel as if I am in a dreamy world.
So take your time and keep up the good job.  
Also a request to keep posting good images as they add spice to your writing and all previous ones whose link is not responding so as to help new discoverers of your terrific writing

[Lion King 989]

clp); I read the story till now.
The turnaround has a solid pinch of reality and has put the story on track.It is vital that you should have a freedom to write irrespective of myriads of advisors because the way you fantasize a sexual scene is beyond comparison  .
Also every writer has an episode of mental block at some phase of writing . You can overcome it by abhorrence for a week or two from writing to increase your appetite and decrease the threshold of adrenaline rush that one has while exploring the realms of deep fantasy.
And above all while reading your valid eroticism , the most beneficial thing is that lockdown has become a taboo element in itself to most readers. The readers need this sort of writing and eroticism to overcome the boredom of lockdown  and makes me feel as if I am in a dreamy world.
So take your time and keep up the good job.  
Also a request to keep posting good images as they add spice to your writing and all previous ones whose link is not responding so as to help new discoverers of your terrific writing

Yes bro.. Mai kuch story aise hi shuru kar deta ho par jab likhta rahta ho tab us story ko sajata ho... But bich mai.. Kisi wazah se lamba chala gaya aur jo likhne ki power hai mere mai loss kar gaya aur ye kahani trake se bhatak gayi par ise mai Phir se come back karonga aur ye carecter Tabbasum ka mai iram jaise nahi to nazbeen jaise banaonga... Wohi soch raha ho aur uske andar Phir se apni normal life mai aaane ka moka donga..... Par kaise bus yahi deemag kam nahi kar raha hai kuch idea hai mere pass iske liye Tabbasum ko bhar lockdown mai nikalna hi padega.......

[Rancour]

Yes bro.. Mai kuch story aise hi shuru kar deta ho par jab likhta rahta ho tab us story ko sajata ho... But bich mai.. Kisi wazah se lamba chala gaya aur jo likhne ki power hai mere mai loss kar gaya aur ye kahani trake se bhatak gayi par ise mai Phir se come back karonga aur ye carecter Tabbasum ka mai iram jaise nahi to nazbeen jaise banaonga... Wohi soch raha ho aur uske andar Phir se apni normal life mai aaane ka moka donga..... Par kaise bus yahi deemag kam nahi kar raha hai kuch idea hai mere pass iske liye Tabbasum ko bhar lockdown mai nikalna hi padega.......

U can prepare a skeleton framework of next few updates before going into detail , making it easier for you to have a basic timeframe for interaction among the characters in those subsequent episodes as well as to stop veering away from the main plot. 
U can also introduce a new character effectively if u plan the story's direction and needs. But focus on the beauty and sensuality of the main character (with lusty images of course)

Always remember that you can easily add subplots in between without tampering with the main plot to keep the story alive and on right track .

Also more encounters of main character with others keeps the story riveted and intense throughout the day and nights timescale of the story.

[flash speed 321]

Jani update kaab doge??

[flash speed 321]

Dear kya hova kuch to batao??

[Rahulnimodiya599@]

Update karo continue isi story ko

[Rafiqaskhani586]

superb good going keep it up don't stop fans ap k saath hain

[Rancour]

 b Update kahan he juldi ek mast lamba update dijiye
Toh weekend rangein ho jayey

[jaunpur]

Update

[Lion King 989]

Mai ye kahna chahata ho yaha jo last update diya hai aisa lagta hai story khatam se ho gayi hai agar Tabbasum ka fun milk shake ke sath chahiye to ap log kuch jo bhi cmmt kar rahe hai... Woh sab kuch aisa carecter 1 ya 2 hi batao jisme mai ye story aage bada sako aur kal ya mai is kahani ja bada sa update do....... Aise koi naye log ho jinko Tabbasum khayalo mai bhi na aaye aur usi ke sath mai Sean likho.........


Likhne ka to mai sambhal hi longa par koi carecter ho jaise rafiq bhai ne bataya koi unknow ho subziwala ka..... Par woh achanak se suitable nahi ho pa raha hai........ To ap sab log kuch koi carecter bataye jaha se ek bar Phir se is kahani ko aage badao.......

[Rizzi1198]

Tabasum dr ka pas jay or waha koi ward boy usa seduce kare ya phir us tantrik ko lay ao story mn jis k pas uski saheli gai tha ya phr koi plumber ko bula lo pani ka masla ho jay achank sa ..its suggestions all the best

[Rahulnimodiya599@]

Uske ghar nayi noukrani rakhte hai jisper uske pati ki niyat kharab hojati hai badle me noukrani bhi is moake ka fayda uthake gharki malkin banne ka plain sochti hai jisee noukrani ka pati ghar ki iss sex bomb ko apne kabu me kar leta hai patni banne me majbur kar deta hai noukrani bani malkin or malkin bani noukari aisa scene create karo....... Reference chahe tohh harami noukrani or uska chudakkad pati jitu padho ...


Plz maine jaisa kaha waisa hee aage banao