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Romance Duja via ( vintage romance thriller incest punjabi story
#41
World no 1 writer and best story aa eh bs jdo bhi ph nu hath laida pehla ehi chek krida ke mam ne update kita ke nhi ..bhut nice update si bs jaldi hun mila davo dova nu ..god bless u.
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#42
Awesome?????
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#43
i love this Story ❤️❤️?
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#44
Lao ji appa v bna lea account urre... madam ji xossip te tuhadi story da last update itho tak hi c ya ik hor c agge....yaad ni....but urre pls continue rakhyeo story...thanks for making comeback here....
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#45
hun ta update de deo kavita ji....
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#46
kar deo update kyu eni wait kara rae ho.....????
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#47
Pls give some time to write update ... in don't believe in 'fahawad' story writing so pls wait if u can ... and give little justify time to write update .. it's not cut n paste work to write story


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#48
(01-12-2018, 09:39 AM)kavitakhullar Wrote: Pls give some time to write update ... in don't believe in 'fahawad' story writing so pls wait if u can ... and give little justify time to write update .. it's not cut n paste work to write story

mam take as much time as you need, koi jaldbazi ni hegi...bs keha c v continue rakheo...and puchya c v ki itho tak hi story xossip te update hoi c ya nva update hi aau koi...
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#49

Es update ton pehlan tak story xossip tey post kiti c o unha ney band kar diti pta nyi ki reason tey lalach c unha da ...any this is continuation of story now onwards....



 'Luccha'  apni hik tey hath rakhdi preet khumari ch khind uthi ... sarey aam e jeetu usda mumma palos gya ... jyada e chamblea pya aj ... haan sochdi da dil jor nal dhatk uthea jad usnu chetey aya manjey ton utar bahr jandey hoye jeetu dey kurtey da palla kidan pattan kolon bahar nu niklay hoyea c ...hye rabba kambni bhari khumari nal kambn lgi .. jeetu da khada c .. haan pakka khadda c akadeya hoyea esi lyi tan usda kurta pattan kolon bahr nu ubreya c ..


 'Ki keehndi teri bhabhi' chahey preet ney jeetu nu eh puchea... par .. akhan   usdean jeetu dey pattan vichkar e c ajay b kurtey da palla bahar nu ubreya hoyea...saaf pta lag riha c pajamey ch jeetu da lun akad k khada .....jad buhey di kundi laa uskol aaya... usdey pattan ton akhan prey kardi boli'  dasea nyi tun ki kehndi teri bhabhi' 
 'Bibi ney suneha bhijwaya ek doh din hor lag janey massi theek nyi shyad kal sham nu chutti miley haspataal ton..' manjey tey beithi preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Ohhh..' kuch sochdi hoyi preet di ek ajeev jehi khushi ch dil di dhadkn wadhn lgi fer b boli'  matlab kal fer menu e sara kam karna paina' 
 'Koi na fer ki hoyea'  peeet wal vekhda jeetu bolea saaf jhalk rahi c usdi awaz ch b bibi dey kal na aan di chehak manjey di wahi tey preet kol beithda bolea'  tuhada kam mein kar dayounga...'
 'Rehn dey tun .' Hasdi hoyi tedi akh nal kol beithey jeetu dey pajamey ch ubrey lun wal vekh fer jeetu dean akhan ch vekhdi boli' wada aya mera kam krn wala .. mein aap e kr layoungi ...' pattan vichkar kurtey dey palley thalley ubrea lun da akkaar vekh dharkdey dil nal kamrey ch edar vekhdi khumari bhari sochan ch pay gyi'  jad jeetu ney keha'  tuhada kam mein kar dayounga enj lagea usnu jiven jeetu dey kehn duja e matlab ...
 'Acha chummi deo hun ..' preet dean akhan ch vekhda jeetu apney bull ghutda bolea
 'Kyoun ..' jeetu wal vekh akhan jehia kad preet boli
 'Tusi apey keha c chummi lay lavin ..'preet dey bulln wal vekh jeetu besabra jeha ho bolea
 'Aho keha c pr eh tan nyi keha c aj  dayoungi ..' jeetu dey  betab bulln wal vekh preet usnu tarsandi swad lendi boli' kal dayongi.. aj nyi' 
 'Glt gal a bhabhi keh k mukrdey pye o tusi .' Bina palak jhapkey preet dean akhan ch vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Mein kad mukri ...  'jeetu nu bechain  hoyea vekh preet apney bull ghut usnu hor tarsandi boli' kal dayoungi' 
 'Nyi aj laini a'  jid jehi karda jeetu besabra hunda bolea
 'Nyi ji kal dayoungi .' Jinni jeetu jid karda una e usnu tarsandi preet nu hor swad aa riha c
 'Ki bhabhi.. aj dey dey na'  ahh jehi bhr jeetu bolea
 'Ki jeetu kal lay lawin ..  'preet b jeetu di nkl kardi  hasdi hoyi boli 
 'Kal savery laini mein fer..' samj gya jeetu kal e dayougi bhabhi chummi hun 
 'Nyi nyi kal rat nu .. din velley menu sang lagdi a ...' shrm bhareya nakhra kardi preet apney bull tukdi boli
 'Kyoun ..' bechain hoyea jeetu bolea'  mere ton kahdi sang' 
 'Bas sang lagdi a  'apney bull ghutdi preet tedi akh nal jeetu dey pattan vichkar pajamey ch  akadey lun dey ubar nu vekhdi boli'  rat nu doh lay lavin ...'
 'Ki bhabhi mein tuhadia sarea gallan mn da  tey tusi'  mayous jeha ho mehna marda jeetu bolea
 'Kehri gal nyi mni vey .. tun keha bina chunni ton vekhna .. mein nah kiti .. fer chummi nu rokea ..  ' jeetu nal behas krdi preet boli' hun jid na kr kal chahey doh lay lawin ...'
 'Sachin  ..' kuch soch chehkda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Haan kal rat nu doh lay lawin .. hun son dey tey ja apney manjey tey ... ' jeetu wal vekhdi preet ney hasdi hoye keha  'rat vohat ho chuki a saverey tadkey uthna b a ..' 
 'Nyi mein ethey e sona kal gal hoyi c sadi  ..' manjey utey changi trah chaukri maar beithda jeetu preet wal vekhda bolea ...' us manjey tey menu neend nyi andi ...'
 'Oh acha ji .. wada ho gya par jid juakan wargi karda ajay b'  hasdi hoyi preet jeetu wal vekhdi manjey ton uthdi boli'  chal koi na so ja mein us manjey tey so jandi haan..'
 'Mein kehnda tusi b es manjey tey e so javo ..wada manja a aram nal dono so sakdey haan ..' manjey wal vekh preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Nyi ji ..'  chaukri mar beithey jeetu dey pattan wal  tedi akh nal vekh usdean akhan ch vekhdi voli'  tera manja a tun e so ethey ..'
 'Chalo sona nyi tan thori der beitho ta  sahi gallan kardey haan ..' preet wal vekh jeetu bolea dil nyi kar riha c bhabhi uskol uth dur dujey manjey tey javey ...'
 'Hun kehria gallan karnia menu tan neend.aa rahi a'  angrayi lendi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli' mein tan sona  a hun...' chahey preet ney keha eh c par dil usda b jeetu kolon uth k jaan da bilkul nyi kr riha c . 
 'Hye bhabhi ek baar fer angrayi layeo ..' preet di hik tey akhan tikayi jeetu bolea .' Kiney sohney lagdey ney tuhadey dono ..'
 'Kuch jyada e chakmia gallan nyi kar riha mere naal aj tun ..' jeetu nu apney mummeya utey akh tikayi vekh preet 
ghurdi hoyi boli..
 'Aho ..' preet dey mummya da nukeelapan vekh sehj swaa ch bolea
 'Ki aho ..' akhan kad jeetu da jawaab sun preet fer ghurdi hoyi voli
 'Tusi b tan kardey o chakmia gallan' chehkda muskuranda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Mein kad kittia vey..' jeetu nu enj chambal k hasda vekh preet behas krdi boli
 'Kyoun keha nyi c tusi tun b fad lavin jaspreet bhabhi nu ..tey tey ..' kuch sochda chup reh fer bolea'  naley keha c hay b usdey wadey wadey mottey mottey .. '
 'Kyoun hay nyi usdey wadey wadey ..' gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli 
 'Meinu ki pta mein kadi vekhey e nyi' bhola jeha bn jeetu preet di hik nu niharda bolea 
 'Oh ho acha ji .'  jeetu da jwaab sun preet boli'  ena sharif tun hay nyi..'
 'Sachin bhabhi kadi nyi unha di hik wal vekhea ..' safayi dinda jeetu bolea  
' naley tuhadey wargi jan kadwi hik nyi honi unha di .. vohat e sohney ney tihadey ..'
 'Jan kadwi..' apni hik tey hath rakh hasdi hoyi preet boli'  jaan kadwi ki hundi' 
' ji karda vekhi jaawn vekhi jaawn tey jad vekhda haan  tan jaan nikldi a ..' preet dey mummey di golayi wal vekh hauka lenda jeetu bolea' uton aj tusi kameej thalley kuch pya b nyi ...menu pucho mera ki hall a' 
 'Puchna ki a dikh e riha'  jeetu di halat  vekh preet hasdi hoyi boli'  kehn tan lgi c tera akadaya khada. . aap das riha ki hall a tera fer b  gal bdldi boli  'bar bar meri hik nu e ghur riha' 
 'Hay e eni sohni akhan baar baar uthey ja tikdia'  mummeya upr ubrea doddia vekh jeetu apney bull chabda ahhh bharda bolea
 'Sambhaal apnia akhan nu jyada e bigdean ja rehean ney  'apni hik wal vekh hik utey hath rakhdi preet boli
 'Nyi sambhl dean bhabhi tuhadi gol gol  hik utey bhr nu nikl ubrea doddia tan  jan kad dean  ney'  sah nigalda jweetu behain jeha ho bolea
 'Tun e keha c j tusi kameej thalley kuch na paya hunda'  jeetu nu enj behal hoyea vekh preet boli' mein b sochea chal vekhdi haan ki  hall hunda jeetu da  '
 'Voht bura hall a bhabhi uton jad da hath lageya uthey  ..  'apney hath wal vekhda jeetu bolea' uff menu aap nyi pta .menu ki hunda ja riha  sara jism akadeya pya ..'
 'Pta menu..' jeetu di halat vekh preet tedi akh nal usdey pattan wal vekhdi boli  'kuch jyada e bura hall ho gya tera .. '
 'Haan bhabhi'  angrayi lenda jeetu bolea
 'Chal so hun ... 'jeetu kol khadi apney manjey wal vekhdi  preet nakhra jeha krdi boli'  teria gallan tan kdey nyi muknia menu neend aa rahi a ... .. ' eh tan usnu e pta c akhan ch   neend tan usdi udo di ud chuki c jad da usney jeetu dey pjamey ch khada ... bechain tan behal pura c jeetu pr pta c usnu jijhkdey hoye jeetu ney pehl tan krni nyi tey aap b o eni besrm nyi c pehl karey ... ehi  sochdi apney manjey wal jaan lgi  ...j pehl krni hoyi jeetu ney tan kr layouga nyi tan mein sona apney manjey tey .. hor ki ...eney isharey kr dittey esnu .. chunmi b dey ditti hik b vikha diti.. mummey nu putwa lya fer b j jijhkda sharmanda darda tan darda rahey ..hun es ton wadh tan besrm nyi ho sakdi mein jeetu agey.....



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#50
do not hurry.It is very difficult to have spare times in this busy world.We are always grateful to the writers who are trying their best to entertain us with their great writings.and vaise v length ght ho jaan mzaa ghat janda
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#51
btw nice update mam
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#52
Rab di sonh Jeete nalo jyada tn mera akad gya aah wali post padh k
Ohh doddiya wala scene wahla hi dungha satt marda a
finding female (any age) for Love and relationship in Punjab?❤️
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#53
(01-12-2018, 09:39 AM)kavitakhullar Wrote: Pls give some time to write update ... in don't believe in 'fahawad' story writing so pls wait if u can ... and give little justify time to write update .. it's not cut n paste work to write story
kavita ji me v nai Chanda k tu c story da fahh wado.... par ki kariye tuhadi writing he eni vadiya hai k hor paran da dil karda es lai sabar e nai hunda..... baki well written keep updating..... Heart
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#54
Sirra update kavita g
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#55
Siraaa swaad aa geya
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#56
ਅਨੰਦ ਆ ਗਿਆ ਪੜ੍ਹ ਕੇ, ਪਹਿਲੀ ਬਾਰ ਜਦੋਂ ਅਕਾਊਂਟ ਦੇਖਿਆ ਸੀ ਇੱਥੇ ਓਦੋਂ ਲਗਿਆ ਵੀ ਕੋਈ ਫੇਕ ਹੋਣਾ ਕਾਪੀ ਪੇਸਟ ਕਰ ਰਿਹਾ ਹੋਣਾ ਪਰ ਅੱਜ ਸਾਬਿਤ ਹੋ ਗਿਆ ਤੁਸੀਂ ਕਾਵਿਤਾ ਜੀ ਹੀ ਹੋ। ਇੰਨਾ ਪਿਆਰਾ ਅਪਡੇਟ ਦਿਲ ਖੁਸ਼ ਕੀਤਾ ਤੁਸੀਂ ।। ਤੁਹਾਡੀ ਕਹਾਣੀ ਤਾਂ ਬੰਦਾ judgement ਦੇ ਡਰ ਤੋ ਬਿਨਾ ਆਪਣੇ ਪਾਰਟਨਰ ਨੂੰ ਵੀ ਸੁਣਾ ਸਕਦੇ । ਸ਼ੁਕਰ ਗੁਜ਼ਾਰ ਹਾਂ ਤੁਹਾਡਾ। ਧਨਵਾਦ
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(01-12-2018, 08:47 PM)Chamanchutiyabsdk Wrote: ਅਨੰਦ ਆ ਗਿਆ ਪੜ੍ਹ ਕੇ, ਪਹਿਲੀ ਬਾਰ ਜਦੋਂ ਅਕਾਊਂਟ ਦੇਖਿਆ ਸੀ ਇੱਥੇ ਓਦੋਂ ਲਗਿਆ ਵੀ ਕੋਈ ਫੇਕ ਹੋਣਾ ਕਾਪੀ ਪੇਸਟ ਕਰ ਰਿਹਾ ਹੋਣਾ ਪਰ ਅੱਜ ਸਾਬਿਤ ਹੋ ਗਿਆ ਤੁਸੀਂ ਕਾਵਿਤਾ ਜੀ ਹੀ ਹੋ। ਇੰਨਾ ਪਿਆਰਾ ਅਪਡੇਟ ਦਿਲ ਖੁਸ਼ ਕੀਤਾ ਤੁਸੀਂ ।। ਤੁਹਾਡੀ ਕਹਾਣੀ ਤਾਂ ਬੰਦਾ judgement ਦੇ ਡਰ ਤੋ ਬਿਨਾ ਆਪਣੇ ਪਾਰਟਨਰ ਨੂੰ ਵੀ ਸੁਣਾ ਸਕਦੇ । ਸ਼ੁਕਰ ਗੁਜ਼ਾਰ ਹਾਂ ਤੁਹਾਡਾ। ਧਨਵਾਦ

Thank u so much .....edan e pyar dindey raho..  feel good to c readers read n like this story.... hope wish n pray mere Sara valuable readers es story nu as site tey ek n ek din aa k jarur padangey
Thanks hausla tey himmat den lyi


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#58
(01-12-2018, 05:44 PM)Vicksv Wrote: Siraaa swaad aa geya

Thank u so much .....edan e pyar dindey raho..  feel good to c readers read n like this story.... hope wish n pray mere Sara valuable readers es story nu as site tey ek n ek din aa k jarur padangey
Thanks hausla tey himmat den lyi


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#59
(01-12-2018, 04:30 PM)Jatt Saab Wrote: Sirra update kavita g

Thank u so much .....edan e pyar dindey raho..  feel good to c readers read n like this story.... hope wish n pray mere Sara valuable readers es story nu as site tey ek n ek din aa k jarur padangey
Thanks hausla tey himmat den lyi


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(01-12-2018, 03:55 PM)desimeet Wrote: kavita ji me v nai Chanda k tu c story da fahh wado.... par ki kariye tuhadi writing he eni vadiya hai k hor paran da dil karda es lai sabar e nai hunda..... baki well written keep updating..... Heart

Thank u so much .....edan e pyar dindey raho..  feel good to c readers read n like this story.... hope wish n pray mere Sara valuable readers es story nu as site tey ek n ek din aa k jarur padangey
Thanks hausla tey himmat den lyi


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