27-06-2020, 10:11 AM
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Adultery Awara ladka aur didi
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27-06-2020, 10:11 AM
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27-06-2020, 11:47 AM
Mast.... Super... Please update more
28-06-2020, 09:10 AM
Bhai story ke hisaab se soch kar likh rha hu thoda time lgega. Taki original writer ki thinking se match kare. Kuch idea dete rehna kyonki story ka plot kharaab na ho.
29-06-2020, 12:15 AM
(27-06-2020, 10:11 AM)PAATROW Wrote: I m Farzi writer of this story so enjoy the story through my imagination. Great..................... It doesn't matter you are original write or what. Just contiunue. We will suppor you.
29-06-2020, 09:50 AM
Great Update .....Keep It Up
30-06-2020, 12:09 AM
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30-06-2020, 02:45 AM
Bdiya bhai...
30-06-2020, 09:50 AM
Super..... Great story....... Please update more
30-06-2020, 02:15 PM
Fantastic. Going great. Where were you before bro. You are writing perfect.
30-06-2020, 02:39 PM
Is mein us boy ki bet kerny wala qissa lazmi dalna jo k larki haar chuki hai aur larkay sy kuch b kerny ka promise kiya tha.
30-06-2020, 02:39 PM
Suggestion: sath Thora buhut nakhra, sharam dalo. Aur story ko romantic banao.
30-06-2020, 02:42 PM
Aur baad meinn is larkay k doosray friend k sath b sulao isay.
30-06-2020, 10:10 PM
1 se 8 tak ka update main 30-40 baar padha fir story likhne ka idea aaya. Waise story ke character se unka nature pata chala h isiliye story ban rha h
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