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Adultery Awara ladka aur didi
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Mast.... Super... Please update more
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Bhai story ke hisaab se soch kar likh rha hu thoda time lgega. Taki original writer ki thinking se match kare. Kuch idea dete rehna kyonki story ka plot kharaab na ho.
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(27-06-2020, 10:11 AM)PAATROW Wrote: I m Farzi writer of this story so enjoy the story through my imagination.

Update 9

                Ground pahunchne ke baad main apne puraane doston se mila aur fir humne kai ghante cricket khela. Aur jab thak gye to wahi kinaare ek ped ke neeche baith kar susthaane lage, mujhe yaad aaya ki aaj Raghu aur uski gang maidaan mein nhi aaye the khelne- nashakhori karne. Fir hum sab apne-2 ghar ko laut gye, ghar par maine dekha ki Didi kitchen mein mummy ka help kar rhi thi. Sofe par unka mobile padaa tha to maine check kiya usmein network company ka msg aaya hua tha. Tabhi mujhe ek idea sujhi to maine Mobile tracker app (mobile tracker free.com) download kar diya aur use hide kar diya, fir main apne kamre mein fresh hone aur change karne chala gya. Mere nahaane tak takriban 10 msgs aa chuke the, jo mere mobile mein notify ho rhe the. Maine check kiya to pata chala ki  Raghu ke  msgs the. Kuch video links bhi the.

Raghu®- Hi Menka ji. Kaisi hain aap?

R- Kal main aapse college mein milne aaunga.

R- Ye kuch video link bhej rha hun aap achhe se   dekh kar mujhe bhi sikhaiyega.

R- Taaki main apne hone wali gf ko bhi sikha sakun.

      6 video links lip kissing ke the.
1- Gay couple ke.

2- Lesbian couple ke.

3,4,5,6- Straight couple ke. 

    Sabhi videos 10-15 mins ke the jismein se 5th video mein kissing ke saath boobs masalna tha. Aur 6th mein to honth kiss ke saath galaa kiss aur boobs masalna fir gaand (bums) sehlaana bhi tha. Saath hi saath wo couple kapde ke upar se hi apne lund aur chut ko ek dusre se chipka kar ragad bhi rhe the. Ye sab video dekh kar to mera lund bhi tann gya aur main sochne lga ki Didi ka kya haal hone wala hai ye sab video dekh kar. Kyonki sabhi video ek se badhkar uttejit aur kaamuk the. Didi abhi msgs nhi dekhi thi notification ke hisaab se. Main samajh gya ki ab Raghu dheere-2 Didi ko video ke sahaare se seekha bhi rha hai aur seduce bhi kar rha hai. Taaki wo Didi ke saath maje bhi le sake aur unhe apni randi bhi bna de (ya kahein ki randi bnane ki training dena).


{{ PAATROW-The Chutiya Farzi writer }}


Great..................... It doesn't matter you are original write or what. Just contiunue. We will suppor you.
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Great Update .....Keep It Up
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Bdiya bhai...
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Super..... Great story....... Please update more
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Fantastic. Going great. Where were you before bro. You are writing perfect.
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Is mein us boy ki bet kerny wala qissa lazmi dalna jo k larki haar chuki hai aur larkay sy kuch b kerny ka promise kiya tha.
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Suggestion: sath Thora buhut nakhra, sharam dalo. Aur story ko romantic banao.
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Aur baad meinn is larkay k doosray friend k sath b sulao isay.
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1 se 8 tak ka update main 30-40 baar padha fir story likhne ka idea aaya. Waise story ke character se unka nature pata chala h isiliye story ban rha h
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(30-06-2020, 02:15 PM)sadasada Wrote: Fantastic. Going great. Where were you before bro. You are writing perfect.

I m waiting for the original writer to complete the story.
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(30-06-2020, 10:12 PM)PAATROW Wrote: I m waiting for the original writer to complete the story.

What??????

You said earlier that you are not original write of the story but will try to complete the story. Now you are saying that you are waiting for the original writer to complete the story?
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(30-06-2020, 02:39 PM)sadasada Wrote: Is mein us boy ki bet kerny wala qissa lazmi dalna jo k larki haar chuki hai aur larkay sy kuch b kerny ka promise kiya tha.

Wo bhi jaldi aayega
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(30-06-2020, 02:39 PM)sadasada Wrote: Suggestion: sath Thora buhut nakhra, sharam dalo. Aur story ko romantic banao.

Story ke hisaab se ladki bold aur saahasi h
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(30-06-2020, 02:42 PM)sadasada Wrote: Aur baad meinn is larkay k doosray friend k sath b sulao isay.

Name mention karna 
Ladki ka bhai ya raghu?
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(30-06-2020, 10:22 PM)PAATROW Wrote: Name mention karna 
Ladki ka bhai ya raghu?

Raghu ka dost , Jay.
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(30-06-2020, 10:20 PM)PAATROW Wrote: Story ke hisaab se ladki bold aur saahasi h

Ok Bro.jaisy ap ko theek lagay, waisy likhein. Ap ny suggestion mangi thi, isliye mei ny bataya .
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