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Yes i love the sadistic theme of your story... You are the best erotic writer ever..... Make bahu more sadistic and wicked... We will love it.... Make her talk dirty to her saas while fucking her sasur..please update soon i cannot wait after this build up
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mast ja rahe ho bhai...ab bahu poora apne sasur k kabze mei ho gayi h...aur ussi ki tarah pervert bhi...woman psychology to bahut bareeki se pesh kiya h aapne,kaise ek pativrata naari( assuming) jo apne haalato se samjhjhota kar chuki thi; usse jab us k sasur ne uski weakness pe waar kiya to kaise ek nirlajj k jaisi us k saath sambhog kar rahi h...aur uski vikrit mansikata mei uska saath de rahi h..paise aur hawas k chalte...maza to tab aaye jab wo apne bacche ko bhi daraye...aur apne sasur k samne khulaam khule chudwaye...bahut sahi likh rahe ho
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बबन भाई, मैंने आपकी पिछली कहानियां पढ़ी है, जो वास्तव में अद्भुत और मादक थे और ये तो अतिमादक और उत्कृष्ट है।
अपने कार्य में व्यस्त होने के कारण पर्याप्त समय मिल ही नहीं पाता है, अन्यथा प्रतिदिन आपके अपडेट पर लाइक और टिपण्णी करता,
फिर भी समय निकालकर आपकी कहानी पढ़ने के लिए इस मंच पर उपस्थित हो ही जाता हूँ।
हो सके तो कृपया इस कहानी को निरंतर जारी रखिये, अपनी पिछली कहानियों के तुलना में जो शीघ्र ही समाप्त हो गयी।
इस कहानी में आपने जो रोचक और रोमांचक मोड़ दिए है जैसे बहु को गर्भवती करना, सास के सामने बहु से सम्बन्ध बनाना आदि,
मुझे आशा है की आगे भी ऐसे ही रोचक और रोमांचक मोड़ कहानी में आते रहे और ये कहानी 500+ पेज से संपन्न हो।
धन्यवाद।
आपका प्रिय पाठक। :)
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Superb update bhai.....bas pics thora aur add karye
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Bhai ab storey ko neya track pe le cholo. Sasur ji ka track boring lagraha he. Nehi to storey to tum mast likh rahe ho dill Khus kar Dane wali
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Thanks for you feedback but this is a realistic story. Haa yeh sirf ek kahaani hai par vastabik samaj ka roop bhi dikhaya hai maine. Ab is story ko sirf mazey lene ke liye kheechke lamba kar kar ke naye character naya plot likhne ka koi matlab nahi hai... balki jo chal raha hai wahi theek hai.
Yahan aapko samajhna parega rohan ki mummy koi call girl nahi hai jo har ek mard se sex karti firegi. Uska shaitan sasur use paaney ke liye bahut shariyantra racha hai aur aakhir woh kamiyaab hua hai. Kyu? Taaki woh akela apni khubsurat bahu ka maza ke sakey. naaki bahu ko dusre mard se sex karwaye. Aur bahu bhi sasur ke jaal mein faas chuki hai. Or you can say she's enjoining too.
He is a rich man. And that is also a strong power of dadaji. He used his money power as a trap. Sasur ke wajah se hi yeh story hai... uskey bina kuch nahi ho sakta. There will be no new male character.
But story aur bhi zyada romanchak, kaamuk aur khatarnak hobe wala hai. Sath rehena.
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thank you bro..
next update soon.. with more images
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बेशब्री से नए पोस्ट का इंतजार है
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mast hai bro... maza a gaya.. next update soon
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Yes great update let bahu abuse saas....let her be wicked like dadaji
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Mast likhe ho yaar....kya scene hai...Sasur apni bahu ko apni coma mei biwi k death bed pe chod raha h....jabki uska pota bahar hai...gazab likhe ho...aur bahu jo sab kuch jaan k uska saath ya kaho to wo bhi uski tarah pervert hoti ja rahi h....bhai wah...mast kinky episode hain....keep it up...reps added