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[bhukhalund]

“ यार मैं कोई बेबी नहीं जो गोदी में उठाये हुए हो । कमर टुट जायेगी तो मुझे दोष मत देना । “ 
 
मनु ने फिर से चुचियों को चुमा और बोला , 
 
“ भाभी , अभी जल्दी में हुं नही तो दिखा देता कि तुम्हे जिन्दगी भर ऐसे उठाये रख सकता  हूं । “ 
 
बोल कर प्यार से बेड पर लिटाया और सामने खडा होकर भाभी को एक टक देखता रहा । कुछ देर दोनो चुप रहा फिर भाभी ही बोली । 
 
“ तुमने जितने को चोदा है उन मे से एक पुनम को छोड मैं ही सबसे बडी रंडी हूं फिर हर बार जब मिलते हो ऐसे घूर घूर कर क्या दैखते हो , क्या ढूँढते हो ? “
 
मनु ने अपने कपडे उतारते हुए कहा . 
 
“ भाभी वही तो मैं भी ढुंढता रहता हूं कि एक बहुत ही बदसुरत , रंडीपना करने बाली औरत में ऐसा क्या है जो मुझे बांध कर रख्खा है । “ 
 
मनु का फनफनाता हुआ लौडा देख भाभी को बरदास्त करना मुस्किल होने लगा । चित लेते हुऐ ही ब्साउज के बटन खोले और बदन से निकाल कर नीचे फेंक दिया। सफेद ब्रा था और ब्रा के उपर से ही चुचियों को देख लौडा और भी तेजी से उपर नीचे होने लगा, सलामी देने सगा। उसी पोज में दोनो हाथ अंदर डाला , ब्रा कोखोला और निकाल कर मनु के उपर फेंका । मनु की खाश पसंद ३४ इंच साईज की मस्त गुदाज चुचीयों का ऑंखो के सामने था। मनु का हाथ आप से आप लौडा परआ गया , खुद ही लौडा को मुठियाने लगा । मनु की सभी माल में सिर्फ दो ही थी जिनके सामने मनु कई बार लौडा को मुठियाता था । एक ये लीला, छोटी भाभीऔर दूसरी पूना । 
 
“ कैसा नामर्द आदमी है तु , जवान नंगी औरत सामने लंड खाने के लिए तडप रही है और ये नामर्द लौडा को मसल रहा है। मनु ने जैसे सुना ही नहीं । एक टकदेखते हुए लौडा को मसलता ही रहा, बोला 
 
“ भाभी अपनी पहली चुदाई आज भी ऑंखो के सामने है, उस समय तुम जैसी थी, तीन साल बाद भी बिलकुल वैसी की वैसी ही हो।वही छडहरा बदन, एक एक हाथमें आने बाली मस्त , गुदाज चुची, वैसा ही कसा हुआ,,,”
 

[bhukhalund]

मनु बोल ही रहा था कि भाभी ने नाडा खोला और पांव से ही घसीट कर साडी - साया दोनो को ही अलग कर दिया। भाभी नंगी हो गई । दोनो की चुदाई की शुरुआतहुए तीन साल भी नहीं हुआ था, दोनो के बीच बहुत  प्यार भी हुआ, झगडा भी हुआ । नोंक झोंक के बीच मनु ने ज्यादा नहीं तो कम से कम ५०० बार इस बूर मेंलौडा पेला ही होगा। 
 
“ क्या बोल रहा था, चुप क्यों हो गया, मैं भी वो अपनी पहली चुदाई कभी नहीं भुल सकती, अपनी चिकनी चुपडी बातों में बहका कर , अपना मुसल जैसा लौडा दिखाकर एक शरीफ लडकी को रंडी से भी बदतर बना दिया। “ 
 
भाभी की बात मनु को समझ आई कि नहीं मालुम नहीं मनु आगे आया और दोनो पॉंव को कम से कम १० बार चूमा । पॉंव की एक एक अंगुली को कई बारचूमा और मनु का दोनों हाथ चिकने पॉंव पर नीचे से उपर की तरफ बढने लगा। बूर पर हाथ लगाया भी नहीं था कि जल बिन मछली जैसा भाभी तडपने लगी। 
 
“ आह, राजा तु कहॉं से यह सब , ऐसा ऐसा जादू सीख कर आता है, तु ही बोला ना कि तेरे पास समय नही , पेल राजा , जल्दी पेल” 
 
भाभी बोल तो गई लेकिन वो जानती थी कि ये लडका जब तक बूर नहीं चाटेगा , बूर में लौडा नहीं पेलेगाा।
 
“ उफ भाभी , ऐसी चिकनी जवानी किसी और की नहीं, तीन सालों में तुम कुछ नहीं बदली । अपनी पहली चुदाई के बाद जो मैं ने कहा था वो सही हुआ ना ! “ 
 
भाभी भी सेठ जी के ऑफिस में मनु के साथ की अपनी पहली चुदाई को कभी नहीं भुल पाइ । पहले मनु ने अपनी प्यारी बातों में बहका कर जम कर चोदा । पहलीचुदाई के बाद मनु ने कहा था , 
“ भाभी याद रखना, तुमने जिन्दगी भर के लिए मुझे अपना बना लिया । “ 

[sam_rozer]

Nice Update
Well mansi excels in persuading everyone too got kavita on right track telling everything about manu and knowing about suchi might have done the trick as kavita somewhat idolizes suchi as she is one of the top ranker too.
Don't know about others but i prefered the usual English font. if possible continue in that. I know Hindi too so its no trouble for me if you want to continue in Devanagari but i feel more comfortable in english as it has become a habit.
Now manu went to his goddess lets see what manu does there.

[vkf]

super update why u started hindi font please start in english only

[Dmahi19]

All Updates are super se bhi uper .....
Keep posting .

[bhukhalund]

“ भाभी याद रखना, तुमने जिन्दगी भर के लिए मुझे अपना बना लिया । “ 
 
उसके बाद मनु के जिद्द पर ससुर से चुदवाई और फिर ससुर के सामने ही मनु के शोशल बाप मुनीम ने भी चोदा । मनु की उस चुदाई ने चूत की गर्मी इतनी बढादी कि जब तब जिससे मन हुआ चुदवाती रही । ससुर के लिए , धंधा बढाने के लिए रंडीपना भी किया । मनु ने थोडा नेगलेक्ट किया तो मरने के कगार पर आ गई। लेकिन अब करीब डेढ साल से सिर्फ मनु और घरवाला से ही चुदवा रही है। 
 
लीला अपनी चुदाई यात्रा के बारे में सोच रही थी लेकिन मनु की हरकत ने उसे अंदर तक हिला दिया । 
 
“ राजा, मनु मत कर ऐसा, तेरी छोटी भाभी मर जायेगी, हे भगवान मेरी बुद्धि मारी जाती है जो सॉंढ के पास जाती हूं । आह राजा बहुत मजा आ रहा है।उफ, आह , मर जाउंगी । “ 
 
मनु अंदरुनी जॉंघो को सहलाते हुए मसलते हुए बूर की मस्ती से रहा था । पहले तो पूरी बूर को मुंह मे ले चबाने लगा, कुछ देर चबाया फिर अपनी नाक को बूर केअंदर पेला और जितना हो सकता था खुब लम्बी लम्बी सॉंसे लेता रहा। भाभी को बरदास्त करना बहुत मुश्किल हो रहा था । नाक बूर के अंदर रखे हुए मनु को खूदघुटन होने लगी तब नाक बाहर निकाला और जीभ को अंदर पेला और दोनो हाथों से क्लीट और बूर की पत्तीयों को धीमें धीमें मसलने लगा। भाभी की छटफटाहटऔर भी बढ गई । 
 
“ उफ, राजा जीते जीते मत मार, मैं मर जाउगीं तो फिर तेरी प्यारी बेटी को कौन जनम देगा….” 
 

बस, इतना सुनना था कि मनु ने सर उपर उठाया और एक ही झटके में भाभी के उपर आ गया । किसी को हाथ लगाने की जरुरत नहीं थी । मनु अपनी प्यारी भाभीके ऑंखों मे देखता रहा, लौडा ने अपना जगह ढूंढ लिया । बूर इतनी पनीया गई थी कि धक्का लगाने की भी जरूरत नही पडी । मनु से दबाये रखा और लौडा खुद बखुद अंदर घुसता गया । मनु ने कई बार चूमा और कहा , 
 
“ भाभी , कार में आपको देखते ही मुझे लगा था कि जरुर कोई खाश बात है । उफ भाभी इस से ज्यादा खुशी मुझे पहले नहीं हुई । “ 
 

[bhukhalund]

“ भाभी , कार में आपको देखते ही मुझे लगा था कि जरुर कोई खाश बात है । उफ भाभी इस से ज्यादा खुशी मुझे पहले नहीं हुई । “ 
 
चुत्तर उचकाते हुए लौडा को अंदर एडजस्ट करते हुए बोली , 
 
“ तु इतना खुश किस बात से हो रहा है, पगला गया है क्या, मैं ने तो कुछ कहा ही नहीं । “ 
 
लेकिन भाभी की ऑंखों में शरम साफ साफ दिख रही थी । मनु ने जैसे भाभी की बात सुनी ही नहीं । इस चुदाई में जोर से नहीं बहुत ही प्यार से धीमा धक्का माररहा था ।
 
“ भाभी , मैं तो ऐसे ही तुम्हारा गुलाम है लेकिन तुम मेरी बेटी की मॉं बन रही हो, यह बताकर तुमने मुझे जनम जनम के लिए खरीद लिया । “ 
 
मनु को पहचान थी या नही मालुम नहीं लेकिन भाभी के ऑंखों की शरम, चेहरे का चिकनापन साफ साफ बता  रहा था कि वो पेट से है, प्रिगनेंट है। लगातार धक्कामारते हुए, अपने तरीके से चुचीयों को सहलाते हुए पुछा , 
 
“ लेकिन भाभी , तुम्हे कैसे मालुम कि हमारा पहला बच्चा बेटी ही होगी । अब तक मैं ने जितने भी बच्चा पैदा किया है सब बेटा ही है। देवयानी, संध्या, गॉंव मेंवैद्ध की बेटी नीशा, संध्या की बहन कल्पना. मीरा दीदी ,ममता की सौतन मीनू सबने मेरे बेटे को ही जन्म दिया है । “ 

[bhukhalund]

भाभी को  इस चुदाई में कुछ ज्यादा ही मजा आ रहा था । ये पहला मौका था कि मनु तुफानी और कुत्ते जैसा तेजी से नहीं धीमे धीमे आराम से चोद रहा था । उसनेमन ही मन कहा , 
 
“ साला हर बार नये तरीके से चोदता है, इसके साथ की हर चुदाई में कुछ अलग ही मजा मिलती है इसिलिए बार बार चुदवाने का मन करता है । चुदाई की मस्तीलेते हुए बोली , 
 
“ अपनी मानसी के बेटे विक्रम को भूल गया , वो भी तेरा ही बेटा है और तुने एक प्यारी बेटी “ परी “ को भी जन्म दिया है उसे भी भुल गया । “ 
 
भाभी ने कहा तो कहा , मनु कभी उसकी बात नही काटता था । वो चुप रहा तो भाभी बोली , 
 
“ मैं ने भी भगवान से तेरी परी से भी ज्यादा खुबसूरत और मानसी से भी ज्यादा तेज दिमाग बाली बेटी के लिए दरखास्त दिया है देखें कबुल होता है कि नही ? “
 
“ होगा भाभी, समझो की कबुल हो गया । मैंने भी मॉं से उनसे भी ज्यादा सुन्दर और मानसी जैसी बेटी मॉंगी थी । परी है तो मॉं से ज्यादा सुन्दर अब देखें मानसीजैसी होती है कि नहीं “ 
 
लीला को नहीं मनु मालुम था कि परी भी मनु की ही बेटी है। यह पहला मौका था कि मनु ने खुद किसी से कहा कि परी उसकी ही बेटी है । भाभी ने इस बात परकोई कमेंट नहीं किया , उसने कहा , 
 
“ मनु आज ही तुम्हें एक वादा करना होग। “ 

[bhukhalund]

“ मनु आज ही तुम्हें एक वादा करना होग। “ 
 
भाभी की इस बात पर मनु ने एक जोरदार धक्का लगाते हुए कहा , 
 
“ रानी वादा की बात नहीं बल हुक्म करो “ 
 
“ मादरचोद जिंदा रहने देगा तब ना हुक्म दूंगी , कमर तोड दिया हरामी ने , तु वादा कर की हमारी अपनी बेटी को कभी नहीं चोदेगा , भले ही तेरे सामने दिन भरनंगी खडी रहे , खुद तुमसे चुदवाने के लिए जिद्द करे फिर भी नहीं चोदेगा । “ 
 
भाभी की बात खतम हुई । एक और दमदार धक्का मारते हुए कहा , 
 
“ अपनी कसम भाभी अपनी ही नहीं तुम्हारी किसी भी बेटी को कभी नहीं चोदुंगा लेकिन स्नेही भाभी की अगर बेटी हुई तो उसके अठारवें जन्म दिन पर मैं हीउसकी चुद का उदगाठन करुंगा । “
 
धक्के को संभालते हुए भाभी बोली , 
 
“ तेरे जैसे हरामी दूनिया में और कोई नहीं होगा , मॉं को नहीं चोद पाया तो बेटी को ही चोदेगा । “ 
 
चूची सहलाते हुए , चुम्मा पर चुम्मा लेते हुए पेलता रहा और बोला , 
 
“ जो भी हूं तेरा ही गुलाम हूं , सच कहता हूं भाभी , जैसे तुमने पहले कहा था अगर सबीना के बदले तुम ही मुझे यहॉं लेकर आ गई होती तो हम दोनों की जिन्दगीऔर भी बढिया होती ।” 

[bhukhalund]

मनु की बातों में प्यार के साथ साथ शिकायत भी थी । लीला को खुद ही इस बात का हमेशा दुख होता था मनु की तबियत ठीक होने के बाद तुरंत कलकत्ता क्योनहं आ गई । उसने कहा , 
 
“ मेरी बुद्धि मारी गई थी । उस समय मैं यही समझती थी कि तुम्हें मुझसे कोई प्यार वार नहीं तु मुझे सिर्फ चोदना चाहता है । “ 
 
“ पुरानी बातें छोडो भाभी अपनी बेटी के बाप को प्यार करो । “ 
 
“ बस ऐसे ही मीठी चुदाई करते रहो , बेकार ना तु तुफानी चुदाई करता है । उस रात अगर तुने अपनी चुदाई से हम दोनों, नीरा और मुझे डरा नही दिया होता तो मैंहमेशा तेरे ही साथ रहती । प्यार कर राजा । “। 
 
प्यार भरी , मस्ती भरी चुदाई और फिर दोनों साथ झडे ! 
 
एक दूसरे को चिपकाए हुए एक दीसरे के बदन को सहलाते हुए प्यार कर रहे थे कि करूणा की आवाज सुनाई दी, 
 
“ मनु पौने चार हो रहा है , कार आ गई है , नहीं जाना है तो कार को वापस भेज दूं । “ 
 
“ भाभी, कभी मत भुलना कि मनु तुम्हारा है, मेरी जिंदगी में कोई भी आये , जाये लेकिन मेरे दिल और जिंदगी में तुम्हारी जो जगह है वह कोई नहीं ले सकता । आई लव यु भाभी, मैं तुम्हें बहुत प्यार करता हूं, बहुत,बहुत , बहुत से भी बहुत ज्यादा । “ 
 
“ ताबड तोड भाभी को जगह जगह चूमा और कपडे लेकर बाहर आ गया । मनु के पसंद का दूध का ग्लास लेकर करुणा खडी थी, गटा गट पी गया। कपडे पहनतेहुए बोला , 
 
“ दीदी, आज समय नहीं है अगली बार आउगॉं तो पहले तुम्हे प्यार करुंगा फिर भाभी को ।” 
 
कपडे पहन, झटके से करुणा को अपने से चिपकाया, गालों को होंठो को चुमा और जोर से बोलते हुए , 
 
“ आज मैं बहुत खुश हूं, भगवान, बडे गुरु जी मेरी लीला भाभी को दूनिया की सारी खुशियॉं देना, कभी कोई दु:ख मत देना ।” 
 
बाहर भागा । कार में बैठ कॉलेज चलने के लिए कहा । कार गई तब पेटीकोट पहने लीला बाहर आई । मेड ने पुछा , क्या खिलाया दीदी, आपका यार इतना खुशपहले कभी नहीं दिखा । 

[bhukhalund]

कार से उतरा ही था कि मानसी अपनी कार से आ गई । भाभी की कार को मानसी पहचान गई। मनु को कार से उतरते देखा तो मंजरी स् कही; 
 
“ इस रंडी छोटी भाभी के कारण कॉलेज जाना बंद किया था अब लगता है कि कॉलेज भी छोडेगा । इतनी बढिया बढिया माल को चोदता है फिर भी उस रंडी के पासजाना नहीं छोडता । “ 
 
मंजरी ने शॉंति से जबाब दिया , 
 
“ मानसी, तु उसे रोज अपनी जवानी का रस पिला फिर देख कभी किसी दूसरे के पास नहीं जायेगा ।” 
 
सहेली की चुची मसलते हुए मानसी ने कहा, 
 
“ तु पागल है क्या ! किसीके लिए भी मनु रंडी को नहीं छोडेगा । “ 
 
मनु ने कार का गेट खोलते हुए पूछा , 
 
“ कौन किसे नहीं छोडेगा ? “ 
 
“ मनु अपनी रंडी लीला भाभी को नहीं छोडेगा । “ 
 
मानसी की बात पर कुछ जबाब नहीं दिया और रोज की तरह मंजरी से सट कर बैठा। मनु ने रीसेस के बाद क्लास नहीं किया था ईसलिए मानसी का वेट ना करपैदल ही घर चली गई । कार जब कविता के घर के टर्न  पर आई तो मनु ने कविता को देख लिया । 
 
ड्राइवर से बोल कार रुकवाया और मानसी से कहा, 
 
“ तेरी बहन की चमचागीरी करनी है। “ 
 
कविता डोर पर नॉक करती कि मनु भी उसके बगल में आ गया । मनु ने ध्यानहीं दिया कि किसने डोर खोलो। अंदर घसते ही कविता को बॉंहो पर उठाये हुए बेडरुम में ले गया । कविता ना नुकर करती रही लेकिन १०-१२ मिनट की चुमा चाटी की, बुर को चूसा और ३०-३५ मिनट की चुदाई में पस्त पस्त , मस्त हो गई । कविता के सारे गिले सिकवे दूर हो गये । कविता की मॉं बहन को अगले दिन के चुदाई का वादा कर आश्रम बापस आ गया ।
 
Bhabhi ko chod kar Mansi ke car se Kavita ke ghar aaya. Maa bahan baahar baithee rahi aur Manu ne Kavita ko jum kar choda ..chudai kar baahar nikla to dono , maa aur Vineeta ne kaha..

 
“kal Kavita nahi, hum dono ko apna kela khilaoge. “ 

[Dolly99]

Another sex encounter of chhoti bhabhi with Manu. As always , very nicely described sex episode. Both always rocks. Great update.. what next , 

Waiting..

[Dmahi19]

Bhai meri hindi padhne ki speed bahot jaada hai English ki tarah par hinglish mein majey lekar aaram se padhta tha....
Koi nahi aap likhte jaoo bas mujhe bhi current Update aane ka intzaar hai .....
Nice update and keep posting .

[bhukhalund]

My dear sam-rozer, vkf, Dmahi, Dolly,

Thanks for liking this story and for comments. I myself is not comfortable with Hindi font but wrote few in devnagiri just for a change. There may be one more such update. 

Now story is approaching a turning point..keep reading and don't forget to comment. 

[bhukhalund]

EK DIN PAHLE EK NAEE KUNWARI VANDNA KO CHODA. AGLE DIN CHHOTI BHABHI APNE  HUSBAND KE SAATH MANU KO COLLEGE SE BULAKAR LE GAEE. CHUDAI KE SAMAY BHABHI NE BATAAYA KEE WO MANU KE BACHCHE KEE MAA BAN-NE WAALI HAI, BHABHI NE KAHA KEE USSE BETI HEE CHAAHIYE. MANU NE USSE ASSURE KIYA KEE BETI HEE HOGI. BHABHI USKE BACHCHE KO JANAM DEGI, YAH SUNKAR MANU BAHUT KHUSH THAA. KAVITA KE GHAR JAAKAR KAVITA KE SAATH MASTI LEE , USSE CHODA. WONHA SE AASHRAM AA GAYA.  

 
Kavita ke ghar ka mahaul toh halka ho gaya lekin ashram mey khaamoshi thee. Manu  ashram pahuncha. 5.30 hee hua thaa. Suchi college se waapas nahi aaee thee. Champa bhee nahi dikhi . Miththu aur Mamta dono bachcho ke saath theye. Manu ko paani dete huye Gulabo ne kaha kee Champa aur guruji dono Puna ko dekhne gaee hai . 2 din se Puna kee haalat bahut kharab hai . 
 
“ Puna kee haalat bahut kharaab hai “ 
 
sunte hee Manu bina paani piye neeche aa gaya. Apni dono car nahi thee. Van ko lekar Champa aur guruji gaye theye. Manu compound se baahar aaya to ek family ko car se utarte dekha. Manu unke saamne gaya aur haath jor kar kaha, 
 
“ kaka , ashram kee dono car aur van baahar gaee hai aur mujhe juldi kanhi pahuchna hai , kya aap driver ko bol sakte hai kee mujhe pahuncha de..jaana bahut hee jaruri hai” 
 
Family ne Manu ko turant pahchan liya . 
 
“ panditji , aap kee sewa kar humey bahut hee khushi milegi . Chaliye kanha chalna hai pahuncha deta hu. “ 
 
Manu bahut khush hua. Dono bado ko feet chhu kar prannam karte huye car mey aage baitha aur bola, 
 
“ kaki , aap bachcho ke saath mandir mey baitheeye , kisee bhee dusre pandit se kahiyega kee maine aapko bheja hai,  kaka ko juldi wapas bhej dunga. “ 
 
Car ko kaka khud chala rahe theye. Car ke wonha se nikalte hee kaki ke muh se nikla, 
 
“ ye Manu pandit kitna jawan aur khubsurat hai “ 
 
Aur uski jawan beti ne kaha, 
 
“ haa maa bahut hee handsome hai , college kee sabhi ladkiya iska dost ban-ne ke liye marti hai . “ 
 
Ye ladki Divya bhee Manu ke hee college mey chemistry honours ke 3rd year mey thee .Divya ne aage kaha , 
 
“ sabhi kahte hai kee ye aapka pandit ussee khooni ladki Mansi ka bhai hai aur koi bahut hee khubsurat ladki iske saath hee rahti hai . “ 
 
Divya ka bhai idhar udhar bheed mey aati jaati aurato , ladkiyo ko dekh raha thaa. Usne apni maa kee ye baat nahi suni , 
 
“ mujhe ishara kare to sab kuchh chhor mai bhee Manu ke saath rahu. “ 
 
Beti ne daanta, 
 
“ kuchh to sharam karo, beta saath hai aur ye pandit mujhse bhee chhota hai , chalo andar. “ 
 
Lekin maa kya jaane kee uski tarah beti bhee Manu ke neeche aane ko machal gaee thee. Ladki ne mann hee mann decide kiya, 
 
“ jaise bhee ho kal college mey Manu ke saamne aaungi dekhe pachanta hai kee nahi “ 
 
Dono maa beti Manu ke baare mey sochti huee mandir ke andar ghusi. Gate par jo pandit mila unse Divya ne kaha kee wey Manu kee dost hai, saath hee padhte hai. Aur 21 saalo mey pahli baar dono maa beti ne statue ke bahut hee nazdeek, first line mey khada hokar aarti dekhi.   . 
 
Udhar kareeb ek ghante ke drive ke baad car Puna ke ghar ke saamne ruki . Manu bahut udas tha lekin kaka ke puchhne par apne aur family ke baare mey bataaya. Mansi ko apna bahan hee bataaya . Sirf yah nahi bataaya kee uski 2 gharwalia hai . Uncle ne bhee khud hee apne family ke baare mey sabkuchh bataaya. Divya ke baare mey bataaya to Manu ne kaha kee wo kabhi science wing ya library nahi jaata iss liye Divya ko pahle kabhi nahi dekha. 
 
Manu car se neeche utra. Bahut jidd kee lekin kaka car se nahi utre, Manu ko apne ghar aane ka invitation de kar wapas mandir chale gaye. Manu ne knock kiya aur turant door khula. Door kholne waali, maid Shyama dekhte hee Manu se chipak gaee aur rote huye boli, 
 
“ Manu maalik, meri maalkin , apni Puna ko bacha lo...unhe kuchh hoga to sab barbaad ho jaayega…”
 
Bina kuchh jabaab diye, Shyama ko chipkaaye huye andar ghusa to dekha kee sabhi Puna ke charo taraf baithe dekha. Ek lady doctor aur ek nurse bhee thee. Manu straightway doctor ke paas gaya aur bimari ke baare mey puchha. Doctor ne bataaya kee shayad pura body infected ho gaya hai aur theek honeye mey kaafi time lagega. Manu ne forehead, cheeks, wrist chhu kar dekha. Doctor ne kaha kee medicine dene ke baad bhee fever 102 degree se kam nahi hota hai. Puna behosh nahi thee lekin purey hosh mey bhee nahi thee. Manu kee aawaaj  sunn uski aanke thodi khuli . Manu ne aankho ko kiss kiya. Usne doctor se Suchi ke hospital ka number puchha, doctor ne apni diary dekh number de diya. Dusre room mey jaa kar hospital phone kiya aur telephone operator ne bahut request ke baad Zeenat ka number diya. Zeenat ko phone kiya aur request kiya kee ashram aa jaaye , wo ek -do ghante mey ek patient ko lekar aa raha hai. Zeenat ke baad Manu ne Mansi ko Puna ke bimaari kee khabar dee aur yah bhee kaha kee wo Puna ko lekar aashram aa raha hai. Mansi kuchh bolti uss se pahle Manu ne phone kaat diya. 
 
Room mey wapas aaya aur bola, 
 
“ kaki ( Puna’s mother in law ) , mai apni Puna ko hospital le jaa raha hu, maine Dr Zeenat se baat kar lee hai , wo hamara wait kar rahi hai. Mohit , Puna ke kapde aur jaruri saaman saath le lo. “ 
 
Doctor ne toka kee Puna bahut hee weak hai, abhi kanhi jaane ke laayak nahi hai..” 
 
Lekin Manu ne bedsheet aur pillow ke saath Puna ko apni baanho par uthaya . Doctor, dusre bhee rokte rahe, daraaya lekin Manu usse lekar baahar aaya aur ashram ke van mey beech baale seat par lita diya aur khud saamne floor par baith gaya. Jagah bahut kam thee phir bhee idhar udhar adjust kar baitha. Champa aur guruji bhee aa gaye. Mohit kee maa bahut rokti rahi . Manu ne unhe kaha kee aap raat mey yanhi rahiye, Bulli , Shyama ko akele darr lagega. Unhe subah aane ke liye kaha. Doctor gussa se baahar chali  gaee. Mohit ek bada suitcase lekar peechhe baith gaya. Van start huee to Manu ne driver se ashram chalne ko kaha. 
 
“ tum hospital jaane kee baat kar rahe theye ! “ 
 
Mohit, guruji, Champa ne ek saath puchha lekin Manu chup raha. Sabne dekha kee Manu ke aankho se aansuo kee baadh  nikal rahi hai. Van dheere chal rahi thee. Kareeb dedh ghanta se jyada ke drive ke baad van ashram pahunchi. Van ke rukte hee Manu ne driver se kaha kee juldi se Purvi ko neeche waale 2 room kee chaabhi lekar aane ke liye kahe. Purvi ashram mey nahi thee , apne ghar chali gaee thee. Driver ne sab bataaya to Gulabo neeche ke room ka key lekar neeche dauri. Room khola aur Manu ne Puna ko bed par litaya. 
 
“ janha se bhee ho Purvi ko dhundh kar laao. “ 
 
Driver aur Gulabo dono Purvi ko dhundhne gaye . Tab tak upar se sabhi Suchi aur Zeenat bhee neeche aa gaye. Zeenat ko dekhte hee Manu ne uska haath pakad kar kaha, 
 
“ doctor rani , meri Puna ko bacha lo, chaho to badle mey meri jaan le lo lekin meri Puna ko bacha lo. “ 
 
Zeenal ne Puna ko check karna shuru kiya. Ek to Suchi ko Puna waise hee bilkul pasand nahi thee , upar se Manu kee baat sunkar uska dil aur dimaag gusse se bhanna gaya. Bina kuchh bole Miththu ko ishara kar upar aa gaee. Miththu bhee upar chali gaee. Zeenat check kar rahi thee tab tak Mansi apne maa baap ke saath aa gaee. Jitna ho sakta thaa utna check karne ke baad Zeenat ne kaha, 
 
“ upar se dekhne se lagta hai kee Puna badly infected hai lekin real cause , real bimari thoroughly check karne ke baad hee pata chalega. Aaj raat yanhi rakho , kal 9 buje ke pahle hospital le aao. “ 
 
Zeenat ne bag se nikaal kar kuchh medicine diye aur saath hee instruction diya kee ladki hosh mey hai ya behosh har 2-2 ghante par aadha glass nimbu paani pilaate raho. Hamesha ubala hua paani hee pilaye. Zeenat ne Puna ko 2 injection diya . Usne kaha kee 
 
“ raat bhar kisee ek ka ladki ke paas jaagte huye rahna jaruri hai..” 
 
Tab tak Purvi bhee aa gaee aur Manu ne iss room ke saath ek dusra room bhee set karne ke liye kaha. Zeenat hospital kee car se aaee thee, Suchi se milkar wapas chali gaee. Manu ne jabardasti Champa, guruji aur Mohit ko Gulabo ke saath upar bheja. Khana khaa kar Champa aur Mohir waapas aa gaye tab Mansi jabardasti Manu ko apne saath lekar upar gaee. Usne khud Manu ko khilaya aur warn kiya kee subah tak Suchi ke saath rahe. 
 
“ agar tu, subah se pahle ek minute ke liye bhee neeche gaya, Suchi se alag hua to soch lena kee tere liye Suchi ke saath saath Mansi bhee marr gaee. “ 
 
Manu ko saath lekar Suchi ke room mey gaee. Suchi ne Manu kee oar dekha bhee nahi. Mansi se baate kee. Kareeb aadhe ghante ke baad Mansi chali gaee. 
 
“ Champa kaki se milkar mai ghar wapas chali jaaungi, Manjari wait kar rahi hogi. “ 
 
Mansi ke jaane ke baad Manu ne Suchi se kaha , 
 
“ bahut naaraz ho rani ? Dekha nahi Puna kitni bimaar hai , mai usse eise hee kaise chhor deta..? “ 
 
Suchi ne koi jabaab nahi diya. Manu ne apna kapda change kiya aur karwat lekar soone ka try karne laga. Soo bhee gaya. Suchi padhna chah rahi thee lekin attention nahi de paa rahi thee. Padhai bund kar light off kiya aur bed par, Pari ko apne aur Manu ke beech rakh kar flat ho gaee. Lekin nind kanha se aati. Manu se itni naaraz thee kee Manu agar husband nahi hota to uska murder kar daalti. Idhar udhar karwat badalti rahi , Manu aur apne baare mey sochti rahi. Finally conclude kiya kee Manu ke saath relation aur uss ke saath marriage karna uski jindgi kee sabse badi bhul thee. 
 
“ ye haraamjaada mere laayak nahi hai, mai ab iske saath nahi rahungi… kal subah hee chali jaaungi..bhaiya bhabhi se maafi maang lundi.”
 
 Iss decision ke baad Suchi ka dil  halka hua. Suchi ne aankhe bund kar lee lekin  phir bhee nind nahi aaee. Kaafi samay gujra . Suchi karwat badalti rahi aur raat ke kareeb ek baje achaanak room mey light honeye laga. Suchi kee nind ya aankh khuli to dekha kee saamne ek heavy dil- daul baala aadmi khada hai. Lambe baal hai aur lambi dhaadhi bhee. Suchi akbaka kar uth baithee . Figure ne kaha, 
 
“ Suchi beti, daro mut , mai koi bhut pret nahi tere Manu ka bade guruji hu..” 
 
Yah sunte hee Suchi ne Manu ke body par haath rakh usse uthana chaha lekin guruji ne rok diya. 
 
“ beti, Manu ko mutt jagao aaj mai Manu se nahi tumse baat karne aaya hu.” 
 
Yah sunte hee Suchi ak- baka kar khadi ho gaee. Lekin Suchi ko deekha kee guruji ne uske kandhe ko dabaa kar phir se bed par bithaya hai. Suchi bed par baith gaee . Guruji ne kaha, 
 
“ beti , ye ladki Puna tujhe bilkul pasand nahi hai, tu uss se nafrat karti hai. Lekin sach to yah hai kee Puna jaisee badhia ladki aur koi nahi , tum bhee nahi. .buss thodi jyada jiddi hai , iske alaba usmey koi abgun/ bad quality nahi..” 
 
Suchi ab bhee shocked thee. Guruji ne aage kaha, 
 
“ beti, jis jagah par tum abhi soee ho, wonha , Manu ke bagal mey tumhari nahi Puna kee jagah hai. Buss apni jidd ke kaaran ek bhayanak, badi see galti kee aur wo Manu se dur ho gaee. Tumhe yah jagah mil gaya. “ 
 
Suchi mey bhee himmat aa gaee thee. 
 
“ issee liye to ab mai aapke bete, Puna ke Manu ke jindgi se jaa rahi hu, Manu ko free kar rahi hu..” 
 
Guruji ne toka, 
 
“ ab ye tumhari jagah hai, ek Puna kya, hazaaro Puna miljar bhee tumhe iss jagah se nahi hata sakti. Tum abhi yah soch rahi ho kee Manu se shaadi kar tumne bahut badi galti kee lekin beti tumhara ye decision, Manu se shaadi karne ka phaisla tumhari jindgi ka sabse sahi aur badhia phaisla thaa. “ 
 
Guruji kee baat sunn Suchi bed par baith gaee. Guruji bolte rahe, 
 
“ tumhe lagta hai kee Manu apni khaash friend Leela, Meera, Rekha, Komal , Poonam , Puna ya Saumya se bahut pyar karta hai . Tumhara sochna bilkul  sahi hai lekin yah bhee utna hee sahi hai kee tumse jyada pyar wo kisee se nahi karta Mansi se bhee nahi. Manu kee jindgi se dur jaane ka kabhi sochna bhee mutt, teri jindgi nark se bhee bud-tar ho jaayegi..” 
 
Suchi dhyan se sunn rahi thee. 
 
“ tum yah bhee sochti ho kee daily 5, 6; 7; 8 ladkiyo aurat ko chodkar Manu bimaar ho jaayega , uski tabiyat kharab ho jaayegi,  nahi eisa kabhi nahi hoga, nahi ho sakta. Arjun pandit kee tarah Manu ka janam bhee ladkiyo, aurato ko khush karne ke liye hua hai..5-6 kya Manu agar roj 24 ghanta bhee chudai karta rahe to uski tabiyat kharab nahi hogi ulte wo aur bhee jawan aur majboot hota jaayega..uske upar koi ankush, koi restriction mut daalo...ghar , baahar, janha jise chodna chahta hai chodne do..biswas rakho tumhare liye uska pyar kabhi kam nahi hoga. “ 
 
Suchi ka dimaag ab saaf ho chuka thaa. Guruji ne finally wohi kaha jo shaam ko Mansi ne Kavita se kaha thaa. 
 
“ beti, tum mujhe Champa aur Mamta se bhee jyada pasand ho. Agar tumne Manu ke alaba kisee aur se shaadi kee hoti to mai Mamta kee tarah tumhare pet mey bhee  apna beta de deta. Mamta ka munna mera hee beta hai. “
 
Suchi ka pura badan sihar gaya. Guruji chup nahi rahe. 
 
“ Daro mut, ab tum meri bahu ho . Mai kya Manu ke alaba koi bhee tumhare upar haath nahi daal sakta. Tum Manu kee sirf gharwali hee nahi uski sabse khaash, sabse pyari maal ho. Wo to raat din tumhe pyar karna chahta hai, chodna chahta hai lekin tum hee kisee naa kisee bahane rok deti hai. Manu se jyada pyar tumhe koi aur nahi kar sakta. Tum  ne dhyan nahi diya kee jis kisee ne Manu ko apni jindgi se dur karne kee koshish kee, jo Manu se dur huee uski jindgi barbaad ho gaee, Puna, Poonam, Babli, Rekha, Saumya sabhi Manu se dur honeye ka phal bhugat rahi hai. Sabhi ghut ghut kar jindgi gujaar rahi hai..Apni dosto mey Manu sabse jyada Poonam ko maanta hai lekin apni jidd ke kaaran usse naa ghar mey sukh hai aur naa baahar . Saikdo mardo se chudwane ke baad bhee khush nahi hai...mujhe jo kahna thaa mai ne kah diya, ab tum khud samajhdaar do..jo jee mey aaye karo..Manu ke saath raho ya dur ho jaao teri marji. “ 
 
Suchi kahna chahti thee kee wo Manu ko kabhi nahi chhoregi lekin guruji gaayab ho gaye. Guruji gaayab ho gaye lekin unki baate Suchi ke kaano mey gunjti rahi. Ghum kar dekha , Manu chaiin se soo raha thaa. Suchi baar baar bud-budaati rahi , 
 
“ kya ye sach thaa..” 
 
Bud-budaate huye kab soo gaee usse maalum nahi pada. 
 
Idhar Suchi chain kee nind soo rahi thee aur udhar neeche Champa apni bur kee aag se pareshaan ho rahi thee. Raat ka 10 se upar ho gaya thaa. Puna ke paas ab sirf Champa, Purvi aur Mohit theye. Champa ne Mohit ko bhee soney ke liye kaha aur Purvi ko instruction diya. Lekin Mohit usee room mey Champa ke saath raat gujarna chahta thaa. 
 
“ kaki , mai bhee yanhi aap ke saath rahunga. “ 
 
Champa ne directly kaha, 
 
“ Mohit , koi dusra mauka rahta to tujhe apne saath sula leti lekin abhi meri bahu bimar hai. Mai wo nahi kar sakti jo tu chahta hai . “ 
 
Champa ne Purvi ko instruction diya kee Mohit ko dusre room mey le jaakar sab set kar aa jaaye. 
 
Purvi ne Mohit ka haath pakda aur jhatka.
 
“ chalo daamaad ji , aaj Champa apna maal nahi dikhayengi . “ 
 
Mohit uske saath chala gaya. Dusre room mey ghuste hee Mohit ne Purvi ko apni baanhi mey kas kar dabaya. Purvi ne kasmasaate huye kaha, 
 
“ abhi chhoro, jab Champa so jaayegi to aaungi. Raat bhar masti dungi. “ 
 
Purvi ek baar Mohit se chudwa chuki thee. Mohit jaise bahut hee khubsurat aadmi se dubaara chudwaane mey usse koi problem nahi thaa. Mohit ko thodi masti de, waada kar kee juldi waapas aayegi Purvi room se nikal gaee. Seedha Champa ke peechhe khadi huee aur baanho ke neeche se haath ghusakar chuchio ko masalte huye boli,
 
“ Mohit se bhee chudwa lungi lekin pahle tum mujhe chodne do.” 
 
Champa ne ladki ka haath nahi hataaya. 
 
“ itni garmi kyo hai ? Tera gharwala nahi chodta, tujhe thanda nahi karta kya ?” 
 
Purvi ne blouse ke button khol kar blouse ko baahar nikaal diya. Ab nangi chuchio ko masalte huye boli,
 
“ Manu jaisa to nahi lekin badhia chudai karta hai..juldi jhadta bhee nahi lekin saala jab bhee chodta hai to hamesha aap kee chudai kee baat karta hai…” 
 
Ek haath se chuchio ko masalte huye dusra haath saari ke andar ghusa kar bur ko masalne lagi. Puna soo rahi  thee ya behosh thee maalum nahi lekin jinda thee. Chuchia ek rhythms mey upar neeche ho rahi thee. Champa ne saari ka gaanth khola, petticoat ka naada khola aur baithe hee baithe kapdo ko legs se alag kar neeche ho gaee aur Puna ke bagal mey flat ho gaee.

[sam_rozer]

Superb Update
so Leela bhabhi is pregnant with manu's child and this time she will not get it aborted as its result of their love. IT was not their usual long encounter rather short but it was nice as it involved emotions between them and some lovely flashback moments seeing what they have been through in these years. leela even took a promise that manu will not fuck her daughter and manu promised. always enjoy their encounter wish it would have been a bit longer.
Puna is sick, Is this something bad which champa foresighted when she told to mamta that they will remain here as she is expecting something bad to happen.
Puna has always been one of the favourite for manu, they were destined to be together but one mistake led to this and she has recognized this already and has accepted manu as husband without wedding and their love has no boundary. she has done magic two times to save people's lives, one for manu itself and another for babli. let's see who does magic for her this time. Manu is fully devoted to her and he took action instantly for puna to be better. I am sure puna will not die as she is destined to have children of manu in future. so fingers crossed here. She is one of my most favourite character in this saga.
I will try to rank them all in which order i like them all its gonna be harder than i think.
Suchi sometimes acts out of her character she knows everything about puna and manu relationship and their love and she is more than mature enough to understand it and she knows that puna will never be manu's wife as puna itself devoted her to mohit and manu. She feels jealousy towards puna which she should not feel in my opinion. I expected to manu to act in this way only after knowing the manu's condition as we know that what they have been through so suchi can also understand it and she only one time said that only puna and poonam has loved manu the most on the night when manu put vermilion in her maang but she still feels jealousy towards her. Finally Bade guruji came and helped suchi understand that manu and suchi are perfect for each other and for once i agree with bade gurji although i have many differences with him but this time he is right. Another effect of this event is that suchi will lift the restriction on manu which she was gonna applied from the next day. Anyway, manu is not gonna be with someone until puna gets well or atleast out of danger and same goes with champa as she still considers puna her daughter in law so she denied mohit too and it was a very nice gesture from both I loved it and hope they maintain it.
lets see how this event unfolds

[vkf]

excellent update

[Dolly99]

So Puna suddenly became seriously ill and it certainly going to disrupt Manu’s life.jealously in Suchi after seeing Manu’s so much affection towards Puna was very natural . Bade guruji advised her correctly. He really is saviour of Manu. What Purvi planning with Champa ? 

Waiting... 

[Dmahi19]

Turning point start .....
Bhai jaldi jaldi story wahin pe lao toh mera maja bhi 4 guna ho jaye .....
Nice update ..... Sabka sad mood theek karte hain....


Leela and her look alike Manu's professor ....
(Both are Manu's step sisters )

[bhukhalund]

Dear sam-rozer, vkf, Dolly  & Dmahi,

Thanks for your continued support. Dear sam, your grip on this story is very good and Dmahi thanks for sweet photo. Suchi's anger for was very natural . any wife , whatsoever liberal she may be would get angry seeing her husband's such affection for another woman that also in front of her . but , guruji has given proper advise to Suchi. 

Dmahi, just after few updates we will reach to point where I had left you all. Till then enjoy...