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Adultery Saniya Ek Mazboor Housewife
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Bhai jabardast update diya hai
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#42
Bhai saniya ko sirf suresh or keshav se hi chudwao kyonki dono badsurath budhe jawan saniya ko chakenge to salo ki zindagi ban jayegi
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#43
Super story.... Mind blowing... Please update more
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Very nice story...
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#45
Very well written update.. keep updating..
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Thanks All freinds
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Update 6
Suresh kaka khana khata hai biryani bahot acchi bani thi suresh kaka Saniya ki bahot tarif karta hai Saniya suresh kaka ke samne nahi aati wo parde ke piche se hi apni tarif sunkar khush hoti hai …
Suresh kaka jane lagta hai magar Saniya andar hi khadi thi kitchen me to suresh kaka se raha nahi jata wo kahta hai are beta ..beti ko bulao kya beti mujh se sharma rahi hai ..
A.aesi bat nahi hai wo aese bhi bahot kum aati hai bahar kitche me hi rahti hai
Suresh..are mai kaun sa paraya hu tum log to ab mujhe apna pariwar lagne lage ho jara bulao beti ko
Altaf Saniya ko bualata hai Saniya bahar aao..
Saniya bahar aati hai suresh kaka ke lund me halchal ho jati hai
Suresh.beti ye lo suresh kaka imress karne ke liye Saniya ke hatho me 2000 rs rakh deta hai ..
Saniya inkar karti hai magar suresh kaka kahta hai beti tumne itna swadisht khana banaya khilya mujhe aaj bahot dino bad itna accha khana khane ko mila aaj mujhe meri patni ki yad aa gayi jab tak wo zinda thi aesa hi accha khana khane ko milta tha …
Saniya suresh kaka ki bato se thoda emotional ho jati hai ..
Suresh kaka Saniya ko jabardasti hatho me 2000 thama kar jane lagta hai
Altaf bahar tak chodne aata hai aur kahta hai kaka iski kya zaroorat thi aapne paise kyu diye apni family samajh kar diye ..altaf ko bhi suresh kaka apna pan accha lagta hai..
Suresh kaka ke jane ke bad Saniya kahti hai
Saniya ..kitne acche insan hai suresh kaka magar bad abura laga unka duniya me koi nahi ..
Altaf.ha farishta insan hai itna paisa hokar bhi koi ghamand nahi usnko..
Kuch din aese hi bit te hai ab suresh kaka koi na koi bahana bana kar altaf keg har aata bablu ko koi na koi khilona dila deta …
Ek din Saniya altaf se kahti hai ki bablu ka school jana band ho gaya koi dusri school me admission lena hoga ..
Altaf.saniya ab mai koi mahengi school me bablu ko nahi padha sakta koi sasti school me admission karna hoga
Saniya ko bahot bura lagta hai wo kahti hai ek hi beta hai hamara kaise koi bhi school me admission dilwa doge ..
Altaf chillate hue.tumse meri halat chupi nahi hai mujhe fikar hai bablu ke future ka magar itni fees nahi bhar sakta mai samjhi.
Saniya rone lagti hai ..altaf gusse se bahar chala jata hai ..
Altaf ke jate hi suresh kaka unke ghar par pahuch jata hai aur door se awaz deta hai koi hai ghar me
Andar se Saniya apne aansu pochte hue g aa jayiye kaka ..
Suresh andar aata hai Saniya ko dekh kar uske dil dhadkane badh jati hai ..suresh saniya ki aankho ko dekhte hue ..
Suresh.kya hua beti koi pareshani hai kya tumhari aankhe aakhir kya hua batao
Saniya..kuch nahi kaka
Suresh.batao na beti ..saniya niche dekh rahi thi magar suresh kaka ki nazre Saniya ke boobs par atki thi..
Saniya..wo pyaz kat rahi thi isliye aankhe ..suresh bat kat te hue
Suresh.saniya beti maine duniya dekhi hai ye pyaz ke aansu nahi hai mujh se jhoot na bolo shayad tum mujhe apna nahi samajhti …
Saniya rone lagti hai aur altaf ki bate batata hai ki bablu ka future barbad ho jayega choti school me
Suresh.are beti bus itni si bat mai hu na kya bablu mera kuch nahi hai tum bablu ko tayyar karo aur tum bhi tayyar ho jao hum abhi shaher ki badi school ja rahe hai..
Saniya ..lekin wo school bahot mehanga hai uski fees dena mushkil hai hamare liye
Suresh.are beti tum kya mujhe apna nahi samjhti bablu mera bhi baccha hai mai usko padaonga aakhir mera kaun hai batao chalo jaldi
Saniya nahi manti magar suresh kaka bablu ke future ken am se usko mana leta hai
Saniya.magar unko bura lagega ki aapko maine ye sab bate bata di..
Suresh.are ha mai tumlogo ke bich jhagde ki wajah nahi banunga mai kuch dusra rasta dhundta hu jisse tum aur tumhare pati ke bich koi pareshani na aaye .. mai altaf se bat karunga
Suresh kaka puri tarah impress karna chahta tha Saniya ko ‘
Sham ko suresh kaka sharab ki offer kar di altaf ko altaf jhijhkte hue na kahne laga magar suresh kaka ne usko kaha sharmao nahi bete mai bhi pi leta hu kabhi kabhi altaf pine ko tayyar ho jata hai ..
Suresh kaka sharab pite hue yaha waha ki bate karta hai aur altaf ko puchta hai bablu kaun si school me jata hai .
Altaf.kaka ab tak admission nahi liya soch raha hu munsipal school me admission lu
Suresh.are beta bablu mujhe bahot pyara hai hum usko shaher ki badi school me padayenge kharche ka tension na lo mai hu na aakhir tum log bhi meri family ho.
Altaf suresh kaka ki bate sunkar uski aankhe num ho jati hai usko lag raha tha ki jaise suresh kaka ko gale laga le ..magar us bechare ko kaha malum tha suresh kaka kyu aesa kar raha hai..
Tabhi ek maile se kapde me ek shaks aaya 38 sal ka mota sa suresh kaka keg har me dakhil hota hai …
Wo shaks ..namaste kaka aa jao
Suresh ..aa jao sanjya
Suresh kaka altaf ki or dekhte hue altaf ye sanjay hai hum sab pyar se isko sanjya bulate hai iska ek garage hai pas me apni sabhi taxi yo ka kam yahi karta hai aur sanjya ye hai altaf mere bete ki taraf
Sanjya.namaste altaf bhai
Suresh.ja kitchen se tere liye glass la aur wo Keshav kaha mar gaya ab tak nahi aaya usko bhi to bualay tha maine
Sanjya.abhi aata hoga kaka
Kuch der bad ek budha maile si halat me andar aaya aur suresh kaka ko namaskar kiya
Suresh kaka ..alataf ki taraf dekhte hue altaf ye Keshav hai basti wale isko Keshav mama kahte hai iski pan ki dukan hai pas me Keshav ye altaf hai mere bete ki tarah aaj se ye bhi hamari party me shamil hai ab hum hamesha sath me piyenge

Keshav mama.altaf ki taraf hath jhodte hue namaste bhai
Altaf sanjya aur Keshav se milta hai sanya aur Keshav suresh kaka ki bahot tarif karte hai kyu ki sanjya ko garage aur Keshav mama ko pan ki dukan suresh kaka ne hi le kar di thi.ye sab sun ka altaf ke dil me suresh kaka ke liye aur bhi izzat badh jati hai …
Charo sath me sharab pite hai ab altaf Keshav mama aur sanjya dono ko jan gaya tha ab altaf bhi unka dost ban gaya tha ..charo ne kafi bate ki der tak sharab pi aur apne apne ghar chale gaye.
Altaf ghar aaya usne Keshav mama ne jo bablu ke admission kaha wo bataya Saniya bahot khush hue uske dil me Keshav mama ne jagah bana li thi …
Saniya sochte hue kitne nek dil hai mama altaf ko pata bhi nahi chalne diya ki maine babalu ka school ka mama ko bataya aur altaf ko mana bhi liya aur mere bacche ka bhavishya ke liye kitna kuch kar rahe hai aakhir Saniya ek maa thi maa ko bacche se badhkar koi nahi hota aaj Keshav mama ne Saniya ka dil jeet liya tha ……
Dusre din suresh kaka taxi le aaya aur bablu Saniya ko sath le gaya school ke admission ke liye altaf apni duty par chala gaya tha
School me sabhi formality puri karke dono ghar Saniya bahot khush thi Saniya ko bablu ko door par chodkar suresh kaka jane lage to Saniya ne kaha
Saniya.kaka ruk jayiye mai chai bana deti hu
Suresh kaka Khushi hoti hai magar wo kahta rahne de beti fir kabhi
Saniya..nahi kaka aapko chai pikar hi jana hai rukiyena
Is andaz se Saniya ne suresh kaka ko kaha to suresh kaka se raha nahi gaya usko laga ki aaj pakad kar ragad de is gadraye badan ki apsara ko ..
Suresh kaka ..thik hai beti tu kahti hai tu pi leta hu
Suresh kaka man me chai nahi tera dhoodh pina chahta hu suresh kaka itna tharki nahi tha magar Saniya ko dekh kar din ba din tharki hota ja raha tha .
Suresh kaka kin azar aage chalti Saniya ki badi gand par hi tiki hue thi dono ghar me gaye Saniya ne suresh kaka ko chai bana kar di aur Saniya ne suresh kaka se kaha
Saniay.kaka ek bat kahu aapke ghar me kaun kaun hai ..
Suresh.beti kya batao beta aur bahu chodkar chale gaye biwi ko mare hue 10 sal hone ko aaye ab mai akela hi hu ..
Saniya ko bad abura laga
Saniya.to aap khana kaha khate hai
Suresh.khana mai khus banal eta hu kabhi hotel se lakar khata hu
Saniya.agar aapko koi takleef na ho to yaha aakar khana kha liya kare aapne kaha na ki aap humko apna samjhte ho to aapko aana hi padega
Suresh kaka ke man me laddu futa
Suresh.nahi beti tum kyu takleef karti ho..
Saniya bahot manati hai suresh kaka .bechari Saniya insaniyat ke nate puch rahi thi suresh kaka ko magar suresh kin azar to Saniya par thi..
Saniya in sabse bekhabar thi..
Suresh kaka nakhre karte hue aakhir man hi jata hai..
Kuch der bad suresh kaka ke jane ke bad altaf aaya sharab pikar Saniya ne roz ki tarah usko samjhaya ki piya na kare magar altaf kaha man ne wala tha ..
Saniya ne fir suresh kaka ko ghar khana khane ka kaha altaf ne kaha accha kiya bechare bahot acche insan hai hamare sath kha liya karenge ..
Dusre din dophar ko Saniya suresh kaka ka intzar karne lagi bahot der intzar ke bad bhi suresh kaka nahi aaya ye sab jan bhuj kar kar raha tha suresh kaka Saniya ko bilkul accha nahi laga ..
Itna der intzar ke bad bhi suresh kaka nahi aaya to Saniya ne khana kha liya magar uski nazar door par hi thi ki shayad kaka aa jaye ..saniya insaniyat ke nate suresh kaka ka intzar kar rahi thi …
Magar suresh kaka apna alag hi plan bana raha tha ..
Aese hi sham ho gayi kuch der bad altaf roz ki taraf pi kar aaya Saniya ne altaf ko kaha aaj bhi pi kar ..bad me Saniya ne kaha aaj suresh kaka ko kaha tha magar wo nahi aaye khana khane aapke pas unka phone no. ho to call karke puch lijiye rat ko khana khane aayenge yan ahi ..
Altaf.thik hai.aur altaf suresh kaka ko call karta hai khane ko invite karta hai..
Kuch der bad rat ke khan eke liye suresh kaka aata hai ..saniya khush ho jati hai aur halke se narazgi dikhate hue kaka dophar kyu nahi khane ko
Suresh.kuch kam nikal aaya tha beti..
Kuch der bad suresh kaka,Saniya,altaf aur bablu sath kaha khate hai aaj bhi khane ki bahot tarif karta hai suresh kaka ..
Saniya ko suresh kaka ki tarif bahot acchi lahgti hai magar us hisab se nahi wo to suresh kaka ko baap ki nazar se dekh kar tarif se khush ho rahi thi ..
Magar suresh kaka ki nazar Saniya par beti wali nahi thi wo to mauka dekh Saniya ko chodna chahta tha usko apana bana na chah raha tha …
Khana kha suresh kaka chala gaya altaf aur Saniya khush ho gaye ki unko ek baap ki umar ke insan ka saya unke sath hai..
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Lage raho bhai mast update
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Update 7
Aese hi din bitte gaye Saniya aur suresh kaka bahot karib aane lage Saniya ab khul kar bate karne lagi suresh kaka se baap ke umar ke insan is lihaj se ..
Altaf ki sharab ki lat din ba din badhti gayi altaf jitney paise kamata utne sharab me uda deta kabhi saniya ko ghar kharach ke paise deta kabhi nahi..
Saniya ki altaf ki is bat par ladhai hona shuru ho gayi Saniya aur altaf ki sex life bhi ab kuch khas nahi rahi thi mahine me ek ya 2 bar altaf Saniya ko chodta sharab ki wajah se ab altaf ka stamina bhi kum hota jar aha tha sex ka ..
Ek din altaf ka makan malik rajaram seth ghar aata hai altaf ghar par nahi tha .
Rajaram.ghar me koi hai
Saniya andar se sir par duppata dale hue bahar aati hai
Saniya.g boliye
Rajaram.mai is ghar ka mailk hu
Saniya.ohh aap hai rajaram g aayiye na ghar me
Rajaram.ohh sab chodo pichle 3 mahine se kiraya nahi diya altaf ne kaha hai wo altaf
Saniya khabrate hue g wo ghar par nahi hai
Rajaram.ghar par nahi gaya hoga sharab ke theke par
Saniya ko badi beizati mehsus hoti hai bahar sabke samne zalil hote hue uski aankhe num ho jati hai
Saniya.dekhiye paise to mai unko deti thi har mahine ..
Saniya ghar kharach se bachakar kiraye ke paise altaf ko deti thi aur wo sharab ke nashe me uda deta
Rajaram.tum usko paise deti thi to usne sharab ke theke wale ko de diye honge uske bare me sab pata chala mujhe pichle mahine jab usse bat ki to mujh par hi chillane laga sharabi kahi ka aaj hi mera makan khali. karo.
Saniya rote hue..magar aaj hi kaise hum kaha jayenge
Rajaram.wo sab mai kuch nahi janta sharab pine ko paise hai uske pas aur mera kiraya dene nahi kyu
Tabhi awaz aati hai rajaram apni juban sambhalo wo awaz suresh kaka kit hi..
Suresh kaka.rajaram tumne kya tamasha laga rakha hai ..
Saniya suresh kaka ko dekhte hi rahat ki sans leti hai usko laga ki ab sab thik ho jayega
Rajaram.kaka aapki mai bahut izzat karta hu tabhi aapke kahne par makan diya magar wo to sharabi insan nikla ab mujhe nahi rakhna inko yaha
Suresh..thik hai aaj hi tumhara makan tumko mil jayega sham tak samjhe ab dafa ho yaha se
Rajaram.mera kiraya
Suresh kaka apne jeb se 3 mahine ka kiraya rajaram ko deta hai aur rajaram chala jata hai
Saniya rote hue.aap ka ye aehsan kaise utarungi mai
Suresh kaka aehsan ki bat mat karo beti aur ghar me chalo yaha tamasha mat bano ghar me bat karenge.
Dono andar jate hai
Saniya.aapne kah to diya ki aaj sham tak ghar khali kardenge magar jayenge kaha
Suresh kaka.mai hu na beti mere ghar me raho aaj se tum log samjhi are itna bada ghar hai mera mai akela hi rahta hu aur tum to mere apne ho
Saniya .magar hum kaise
Suresh kaka.agar magar kuch nahi chalo saman bandho
Saniya man gayi saman bandhne lagi usko altaf par bahot gussa aa raha tha jo beizzati uski hue thi Saniya ne is dauran 2 bar altaf ko call kiya magar usne uthaya nahi Saniya ko aur gussa aaya usne apna thoda sa saman jo ghar me tha pack kiya kuch saman pack karne suresh kaka ne khud madad ki bahar kuch majdur bulwakar ek tempo bulwakar suresh kaka Saniya aur bablu ko apnr ghar le aaya aur altaf ko call karke sab bata diya …..
Altaf sham ko piye hue sharmindagi ki halat me suresh kaka ke ghar pahuchta hai suresh kaka ,Saniya aur bablu hall me sofe par baithe the.altaf mujrim ki tarah andar aaya altaf ki aankho me sharam thi.saniya ne altaf ko dekha aur gusse se dusri taraf mu fer liya bablu altaf ke pas bhag kar gaya altaf ne bablu ko god me liya aur Saniya ke pas aakar bola..
A.mai tumhara mujrim hu mujhe sab bat batayi suresh kaka ne
Saniya gusse me dusri taraf mu kiye hue thi.
A.saniya kuch to bolo
Saniya.kya kahu aapko aapse to har ummid har chuki hu mai ,altaf is sharab ke liye aapka ghar gaya shop gayi car gayi aapki izzat shohrat sab chali gayi ummid karti hu aapki biwi aur beta na chala jaye is sharab ke chakkar me bus itna hi kahana hai itna kah kar Saniya upar ke kamre me chali gayi gusse se
Suresh kaka ke ghar me niche 3 kamre aur upar 2 kamre the upar ke kamre Saniya aur altaf ko usne de diye the ..
Altaf ko bahot bura feel hua usne socha sala aaj se kabhi sharab nahi piyega..
Suresh kaka ne hotel se sabke liye khana mangaya Saniya ne khane se inkar kiya magar suresh kaka Saniya ko mana kar khana khila diya ..
Dusre din subha altaf kam par gaya aur ye sochte hue ki aaj se sharab nahi piyega..aur altaf apne juban par kayam raha Saniya ko bhi aehsas hua ki shayad altaf sudhar raha hai..
Magar ek din altaf ka phone baja altaf duty khatam karke ghar hi nikal raha tha altaf ne phone recived kiya..
A.Hello
Samne se ..bhai mai sanjya bol raha hu kaha ho chalo aaj chalte hai theke par Keshav mama ko bhi bulaya hai
A.nahi yar sanjay main ahi piyunga
Sanjay.are bhai ab tumhe kya hua chalo na bhai meri taraf se
A.nahi bhai nahi aa sakunga …..altaf andar andar na kar raha tha magar uska man ho raha tha jane ko
S.mere liye bhai aaj mera janamdin hai
A.are muabark ho thik hai mai aata hu
Altaf.sanjay aur Keshav mama theke par mile sharab piya masti ki altaf ko bhi sanjay aur Keshav mama ka sath accha lagne laga aur altaf ke mu se fir se sharab ka glass jud gaya..
Altaf aaj fir pi kar aaj kuch jyada hi piya tha magar altaf ladkhada nahi raha tha ..altaf jaise hi ghar pahucha Saniya ko bura laga ki altaf ne fir se sharab pina shuru kar di…
Saniya ko aaj mehsus hua ki saniya sochne lagi ..ab altaf ka kuch nahi ho sakta ab altaf par is bat ka bharosa karna bhi mushkil hai ki wo meri aur bablu ki zimmedari utha sakega.. shukar hai suresh kaka jaisa farishta mila humko nahi to footpath par sona padta altaf ki wajah se
Saniya badi mayus hue aaj altaf se shayad aaj altaf pahli bar uske dil se nikalta ja raha tha altaf ke liye izzat ab kahatm ho rahi thi Saniya ki ..aur dusri taraf suresh kaka ke liye izzat badh rahi thi magar ek bujurg bap ki umar ke insan ke hisab se ..
Saniya ne altaf ko uske halat par chod diya ab usko Saniya samjha thi bhi nahi ..har din ki tarah altaf pi kar aata kahana khata aur behosh hokar bed par kharrate marta ..
Babalu ka shaher ki badi school me admission hua ab babalu roz school jane laga babalu ki school bus gali ke andar tak nahi aa pati to suresh kaka bablu ko roz bahar pakki sadak tak chod aate aur sham ko lene bhi jate ….
Babalu bhi har bat ke liye ab suresh kaka se zid karta aur suresh kaka uski zid puri bhi kar dete ye bat Saniya ne bhi notice ki thi..
Ek din suresh kaka bablu ko school se bus me bitha kar ghar aaye sofe par baithe samne hi kitchen tha kitechen me saniya roti bana rahi thi ..aaj Saniya ne black laggir aur red kamiz pahni thi sir par black duppata tha duppate ne Saniya ki pith ko cover kiya tha Saniya ki badi gand duppate me cover nahi thi..
Jaise hi suresh kaka ..ghar me aaye Saniya ne mud kar dekha aur roti banana lagi.saniya ki pith suresh kaka ki taraf thi..
Saniya.kaka chod aaye babalu ko
Suresh.ha beta bada pyara bacha hai school jata hai to ghar khali khali lagta hai..
Saniya.ha magar aaj kal apne abbu se kum aur aapse jyada hi khelta hai
Suresh.mai bhi to uska abbu hi hu
Saniya samajh nahi payi..
Saniya jab roti bel rahi thi to Saniya ki gand hil rahi thi ye nazara dekh kar suresh kaka ne apne lund ko apne pajame par se masal diya ..
Suresh kaka man me sala bahot hua aaj se try karta hu machali par aaj zal bicha hi deta hu ..
Suresh kaka..ek bat kahu beti tumse bura na manna
Saniya ..kahiye na kaka aapki bat bhala mai kaise bura manungi
Suresh.beti mujhse tumhra dird dekh nahi jata tum itni khubsurat ho jawan ho mohhale me shayad hi koi tum jaisa khubsurat hoga..
Saniya ko kaka ki tarif ajib lagi magar Saniya ne kuch nahi kaha …
Suresh ..beti mujhe pata hai tum altaf ke hote hue bhi akeli ho ..beti mai bhi akela hu jabse meri biwi gujar gayi hai tabse akela hu mujhe pata hai akela pan kya hota lekin tum to jawan ho beti abhi …
Saniya samajh nahi pa rahi thi aakhir chacha kya kahna chah rahe hai ..
Saniya.mai samjhi nahi kaka kaisa akela pan
Suresh kaka kitchen ke andar aa gaya Saniya ke piche khada ho gaya
Suresh .beti tum bahot bholi wahi akela pan jo ek auarat aur ek mard ko mehsus hota bister par ..itna kah kar suresh kaka Saniya ko piche se jakad leta hai..
Saniya ko jabardast shock lagta hai …saniya badi speed se Saniya ke peth par suresh kaka ka hath tha usko dur karti hai aur badi furti se palat jati hai aur suresh kaka ko dhakka de deti hai..
Saniya bhare jism ki thi uske samne suresh kaka kamzor tha to wo dhakke se niche gir gaya..
Saniya zakhmi sherni ki tarah dahadi suresh kaka..
Saniya..cheee sharam aani chayiye aapko aap mere bap ki umar ke hai mujhe beti kahte hai aur dil me itni gandagi bhari hai aapke mai aapko kya samjhti thi aap kya nikle kaka ..
Suresh kaka ne himmat nahi hari wo uth khada hua aur Saniya se kaha..
Suresh.. ha kahta hu tumko beti magar tum meri sagi beti nahi ho jab se tumne kitchen sambhala hai mujhe meri biwi ki yad aati hai uske jane ke bad pahli bar kisi aurat ne is kitechn me kadam rakha
Aur aakhir mai bhi ek insan hu tum bhi ek insan ho zaroorate sabhi ko hoti hai maine kya galat kaha jara socho ye bat is char diwari ke bahar kisi ko pata nahi chalegi aur hum sath rahte hai to kisi ko koi shaq bhi nahi hoga …itna kahte hi chatttttttttaaaaakkkk ki awaz se hall gunj uthta hai..
Saniya ne suresh kaka ko chata mara aur kaha…kaka mai marjana pasand karungi apne bap ke umar ke buddhe se Rishta banane se accha ..
Suresh kaka apne gal ko sahlate hue gusse se bahar chala jata hai…
Saniya bhi rote hue apne kamre me chali jati hai ..saniya man me sochti hai kitna ghatiya nikla ye insan aaj iska ghar chodkar chale jayenge hum..
Magar Saniya ki dil ki awaz ne usse kaha ..kaha jaogi Saniya shauhar to tumhara din ba din laparwah hota ja raha hai tumko aur bablu ko aakhri sahara ye suresh kaka hi hai..
Saniya sochne lagi ..nahi nahi aesi zindagi se maut acchi..
Waha bahar babalu ki school bus aa gayi thi wo bus se utra magar aaj suresh kaka uske lene nahi gaya aur nahi Saniya ko yad aaya ..bablu bus se utar kar paglo ki tarah sadak par daudne laga aur ek bike ne babalu ko uda diya bablu ka accident hua bheed jama hue bheed me kisi ne kaha are ye to jo hamare basti me naye kirayedar aaye unks baccha hai ..unko batana padega ..
Kuch hi der me ek banda bhag kar suresh kaka keg har aaya aur bataya ki babalu ka accident hua hai Saniya ki to jan nikalte nikalte rah gayi…
Saniya us shaqs se daud kar bahar aayi us shaqs ne kaha usko hospital le gaye hai Saniya ne jaldi se auto liya aur us hospital me pahuchi jaha kuch bhale logo ne babalu ko admitted kiya tha hospital me Saniya ro rahi thi uska dimag band ho gaya tha kya kare kya na kare use kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ..
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#51
Badhiya update bhai
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#52
Nice story
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#53
Plz update and with some pic maja double ho jayega
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#54
Bhai kya likhte ho yaar
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Dear rafiqshaikh, awesome plot, Perfect buildup so far. Keep going.  clps
My work
1. Koel, ek masoom housewife
2. Bade ghar ki bahu betiyan
3. Game of lust
4. Kahani ek bade ghar ki
5. Muskan
6. Tale of a lustful revenge
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#56
The evil bhai kaha gayab ho gaye the ab aye ho to nayi story chalu karo ya game of lust ko phir se chalu karo us story me bahot dam hai aap to xossip ki asli jaan ho
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#57
Super.... Please update more
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#58
Not sure which direction is this story headed at..
Instead of feeling erotic, it makes us feel sympathetic for Saniya..
This is a huge turn off for readers.. we would need to see an erotic side of a housewife and not someone who would give it up for the sake of her child or poverty..
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(17-06-2020, 07:33 PM)THE EVIL Wrote: Dear rafiqshaikh, awesome plot, Perfect buildup so far. Keep going.  clps

welcome back... please update game of lust
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Sleepy Sleepy
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