31-05-2020, 06:40 PM
Very very hot plot oriented twist. Waiting for mega updates.
Romance Dr. Revati
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31-05-2020, 06:40 PM
Very very hot plot oriented twist. Waiting for mega updates.
31-05-2020, 06:41 PM
31-05-2020, 07:06 PM
You are moving the characters with bountiful of room to maneauver as they pleases. That itself is not a usual attribute that we can find with every writer.
Great going...strong engagement with your plot...fantastic!
31-05-2020, 10:14 PM
Bhai apki kahani ne hila diya hai sex ke sath romance maza a gaya
01-06-2020, 12:42 AM
01-06-2020, 12:52 AM
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01-06-2020, 12:55 AM
01-06-2020, 03:31 PM
Nice story.... Please update more....
01-06-2020, 11:14 PM
Update 33
Reena apne vicharo me khoyi hui khud se hi baate karne lagti hai.. “Haa yahi sahi rahega.. mein revati ko sach seedhe seedhe nahi btaugi balki indirect hint de dugi agar vo samaz jati hai to thik hai or nahi samzti hai to mujh par to blame nahi aa payega.. kyuki mene to hints diye the use.. haa reena yahi karna chahiye tujhe” Reena sab soch hi rahi thi ki sofe par soyi revati ki nind khulti hai or vo reena ke hath me apna phone dekh kar ek dum se us se phone le leti hai or bolti hai.. “m..m..mausi aap kab aayi ?” Reena-“bas abhi aayi vo phone gira hua tha to usko uthaya itne me tu uth gayi...” Revati –“achaa... time kya hua mausi” Reena –“7 baj gye h aj college nahi jana kya ?” Revati –“omgg.. mausi 7 baj gye aj to mein bahut late ho gyi... mausi hato mujhe ready hone do ab “ Or aisa bol revati dodti hui bathroom me ghus jati hai or ready hone lagti hai. Vahi boys hostal me subah 5 bajte hi rudra jogging par nikal padta hai or fir apna routine follow kar fresh hokr canteen me breakfast ke liye nikal rha hota hai tabhi use meena pas ke room se nikalti hui dikhayi deti hai. Meena ko dekh rudra apna face niche kar leta hai or bina kuch bole hi aage bad jata hai. Tabhi meena use piche se awaz lgati hai.. “rudraaaa.. “ Rudra palat kar use bina dekhe hi bolta hai... “haa kya hua” Meena ki aankho me aansu the vo use dekh rahi thi par rudra use dekh bhi nhi rha tha. Meena roti hui awaz me boli... “I’m sorry rudra” Rudra-“hmm.. sorry kis liye... kher chhodo it’s your life afterall” Meena ke muh se word nhi nikal rahe the vo rudra ka jawab sun bas roti hui bhag kar apne hostel chli jati hai. Ladkiya duniya ki sabse complex thing hoti hai shayad hi koi mard hoga jo unhe puri tarah se samaz paya ho. Rudra bhi koi bhagwan nahi tha use bhi meena ka behaviour samaz nahi aaya. Vo bs use jate hue dekh rha tha or fir breakfast krne canteen chla jata hai. Vahi college me kartik revati ko kal raat ke bare me puchta hai.. “hi raat me kya ho gya tha.. na msg ka reply na call pick kiya” Revati –“v..v..vo mein so gyi thi” Revati ko kartik ke sath baithna ajeeb lag rha tha specially kal raat ke sapne ke bad to vo jese kartik se jitna dur ho sake utna dur jana chahti thi. Lekin kartik uske pas khiskta hi ja rha tha. Vo jan bujh kar revati ko rudra or meena ki pic dikha kar fir se vahi topic chhedta hai. Par pta nahi kyu is bar revati tunak jati hai or chilla kar bolti hai... “tumhare pas baat karne ke liye or koi topic nahi hai kya jab dekho tab uski life ke bare me hi bolte rahte ho” Ek pal ko to kartik ki bhi gand fat gayi or vo bas revati ka ghusse se bhara face dekhta rah gya. Use vo din yaad aa gya jab revati ne kartik ko thappad mara tha. Vo revati se maafi mangta hai or apna dhyan selena par focus karta hai. Vahi piche baithi priyali sab dekh or sun rahi thi. Use bhi belive nahi ho rha tha ki meena or rudra raat bhar ye sab kiye. College ke bad vo apne room me gayi to vha meena baithi thi vo andar ghuste hi meena se ghusse me boli... “raat me kha thi aap mam ?” Meena –“kya matlab kha thi.. tujhe kya karna me kahi bhi ho ?” Priyali –“mam sach sach bta do varna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga” Priyali ke itna bolte hi meena ne uske baalo ko pakda or usko khichte hue khud bed par baith gayi or priyali ko apne pero me bitha diya or uske baalo ko khichte hue boli.. “haa to kya bol rahi thi.. tujhse bura koi nahi...CHATAAAK..” Meena ek jor dar thappad priyali ko deti hai. Thappad padte hi priyali ki sari hekdi nikal jati hai or vo rone lag jati hai. Or roti roti meena ko bolti hai.. “mera koi intention nahi tha aapse panga lene ka mam.. par vo..vo.. meri class me ek ladka hai.. kartik nam h uska.. vo us ladki revati ko aapki or rudra ki photo bta rha tha” Meena-“kya... puri baat bol kya hua” Priyali-“voo..voo.. mam vo revati ko bolta hai ki kal raat aap or rudra sex kar rahe the... mujhe pahle vishwas nahi hua uski baat par lekin jab usne aap dono ki pic btayi to mujhe bhi doubt hua isle ghussa aa gya tha aap par” Meena –“nikal gya tera ghussa ya or nikalu abhi baki ho to” Priyali –“nahi nahii mam but please bolo na kl raat aap rudra ke sath thi ya nahi” Meena –“tujhe us se kya matlab mein kal raat kiske sath thi” Priyali –“matlab hai mam.. I like him please bolo na” Meena –“to sun.. kal raat mein.. rudra ke room... ke baju vale senior shantunu ke room me thi jo mera bf hai...or rahi baat rudra ki to vo mera bhai hai chhota” Priyali –“ohhh woowwww... thank god mam aapne mere sare doubt clear kar diye... varna mein to yahi soch rahi thi ki rudra ne aapme kya dekh liya jo usko mujhme nhi dikha” Meena ghusse ka natak karti hui priyali ke baal khich kar upar uthati hai or bolti hai.. “jyada bol rahi hai chinal.. vo rudra hai mera bhai.. vo tere jesi chinalo ko ghas nahi dalta” Priyali –“dekhti jao mam.. isi bed par aapke bhai ka lund legi ye chinal... hahaha” Meena-“kar le try... tujhe chodna to dur agar teri taraf ache se dekh bhi liya rudra ne to jo tu bolegi vo mein karugi” Priyali –“thik hai mam.. fir ready rahna apna vada nibhane ke liye...hahaha” Meena ko priyali ki baate sun kar hasi aa jati hai vo janti hai ki rudra revati ko like karta hai or revati bhi use like karti hai lekin kartik nam ka kida dono ke bich darar paida karne par tula hua hai. Vo dono ko milana chahti thi par kese ? In sab sawalo ke jawab khojne ke liye vo kuch sochti hai. Vahi rudra in house clinic jakr apni arm ka checkup karwata hai. Lekin aj ek new nurse ko dekh kar chonk jata hai or bolta hai... “mam.. aap kon ho ?” Nurse-“mein yha abhi abhi appoint hui hu” Rudra –“or vo purani nurse ? Uska kya hua ?” Nurse-“ohh vo ladki ? Use to nikal diya yha se” Rudra-“kyu ?” Nurse-“ye to nahi pata mujhe par kuch afwah suni thi ke shayad usne kisi student ke sath clinic me hi physical relation bna liya tha” Rudra(man me)-“what?? Ye college hai ki sex ka adda... sala koi bhi kahi bhi sex karne lag jata hai.. pyar nam ki koi chiz hai ki nahi logo ke dilo me... sabko bas sex hi chahiye ladka ho ya ladki... yha vo nurse clinic me sex kar gayi... or vha vo itna sab pta hone ke bad bhi apne bf ke pas raat bhar sex karti rahi...chii mujhe to lga tha ye india ka top medical college hai.. par ye to sex college lag rha hai” Nurse-“ohh hello kya soch raha hai... bolo yha kese aana hua ?” Rudra –“v..voo mam... vo mera xray karwana tha or routine checkup” Nurse-“acha thik hai chalo fir” Rudra apne hath ka x-ray krwata hai or sab reports collects kar ke apne warden or professor dono ko inform kar deta hai. Nurse ne use ab college jane ki permission de di thi par abhi plaster utarne me time tha. Rudra khush tha itne dino bad finally use college jane ko milega ab. Yahi soch kar vo khushi khushi apne room chla jata hai or apna revision karne lagta hai. Sham ko priyali rudra ko call karti hai. Aj rudra sham ko padne nahi aaya tha to isle priyali use call karti hai or bolti hai... “hi rudra kha ho aj padai nahi karni kya” Rudra-“nhi priyali aj mein thoda busy hu” Priyali –“are wahh... room me rahte hue koi kese busy hota hai btao to zara” Rudra-“priyali please.. mene kha na mera mood nahi hai or vese bhi kal se college join karne ki permission mil gayi hai to mein college me puch luga jo bhi missing hoga” Itna bol kar rudra phone cut kar deta hai. Priyali thoda sad ho jati hai. Jisko patane ke liye vo bra panty nikal kar keval ek hotpant or tank top pahen kar baithi thi usne aj us se milne se hi mna kar diya. Vo ghusse me muh bnati hui room me hi baithi rahti hai. Priyali se apna rejection sahen nahi ho rha tha vo anshika or sonal ke room me jati hai or apni saheliyo ke samne apna hal suna kar rone lagti hai. Dono use dilasa dete hai or bolte hai.. “ho sakta hai ki tu usko rijhane ke liye ye jo ang pradarshan karti hai use nahi pasand aata hoga... ek kaam kar kal se vo college aa rha hai na to tu usko sharif gharelu ladki ban kar dikha de... ye meri salwar suit le ja yahi pahen kar jana kal college” Sonal ki baat sun priyali ko thoda thik lagta hai or vo apni dono saheliyo ke sath baith kar gappe ladane lagti hai. Raat me jab sab dost canteen me dinner kar rahe the tab rudra priyali ko avoid kar rha tha. Priyali ne apna getup change kar liya tha or vo tshirt or lower pahen kar canteen aayi thi. Lekin rudra use fir bhi bhaw nahi de rha tha. Sab dinner karke apne room me chale jate hai or rudra akela bahar garden me walking karne chla jata hai. Rudra garden me walk kar hi rha tha ki use ek window se fir vahi jana pahchana chehra dikhai deta hai jise dekh uske dil ki dhadkan bad jati hai, rongte khade ho jate hai or aankho me jese us masum chehre ke liye dher sara pyar umad aata hai. Haa vo or koi nahi balki revati thi jo kitchen me dish wash kar rahi thi. Ek hath me bartan or dusre hath se scrub liye vo sink ke pas bartan dho rahi thi. Uske baalo ki late bar bar uske chehre par aakar gir rahi thi jise vo apni sabun lgi hatheliyo se piche sarka rahi thi. Revati ko is waqt koi bhi dekh le to use apna dil de baithe. Fir rudra to kafi pahle hi use apne dil me utar chuka tha haa ye baat alag hai ki vo is baat se anjaan tha. Kuch yahi haal revati ka bhi tha. Achanak revati ki nazar window ke bahar jati hai or use ground me bench par baitha rudra dikhayi deta hai jo is waqt use hi dekh rha tha. Revati ki nazar padte hi rudra ghabra kar idhar udhar dekhne lgta hai. Uski is masumiyat par ek pal ko revati ke hontho par bhi smile aa jati hai. Lekin agle hi pal vo smile ghusse me badal jati hai or vo rudra ko maar dalne vali nazaro se dekhte hue jor se window band kar deti hai. Revati ka is tarah behave karna rudra ko samaz nahi aaya or vo man me khud se hi bolne kga... “ab ise kya hua achanak... ye aisa kyu behave kar rahi h... kya ye vahi ladki hai jo mere bina bole mere liye raat ko jaag kar notes bnayi thi.. agar ye vahi hai to ye aisa kyu kar rahi mere sath... mene iska kya bigada hai” Rudra ko apne sawalo ke jawab dhundhne the or meena ko apne sawalo ka jawab mil chuka tha. Isi udhed bun me raat nikal jati hai or subah ki pahli roshni ke sath ek naya din ek naya savera uday hota hai. Rudra fir roz ki tarah apni jogging par nikal padta hai or fir se room aakar fresh hokar college ke liye ready hone lagta hai. Kya hoga aj jab itne dino baad rudra ki class me fir se entry hogi padte rahiye Dr. Revati.
02-06-2020, 03:21 AM
Bahot hee badhiyaa update. Keep it up. Waiting for Rudra - Revati confrontation scene.
02-06-2020, 09:49 AM
02-06-2020, 09:59 AM
Good update
02-06-2020, 05:19 PM
Lgta hai hamare hero ke sath abhi insaaf hona baaki hai
Abhi raat hai din nikalna baaki hai Abhi dukh ka saaya hai toh sukh ka ujaala baaki hai Keep it bro
02-06-2020, 11:56 PM
03-06-2020, 11:59 PM
Update 34
Aaj pure 1 week ke bad rudra college me vaps aaya tha. Uski class puri change ho chuki thi ab pahle se bhi jyada bacche class me dikhayi de rahe the. Bahut sare new face the uske liye class me. Un sab new faces me use priyali 2nd bench par baithi hui dikhayi di jo usi ko dekh rahi thi or ishare se apne pas baithne ko bol rahi thi. Rudra use hath ke ishare se btata hai ki vo last bench par baithega or vo apni purani jagah par baithne chla jata hai. Priyali thoda udas hui rudra ke suddenly use avoid karne ke karn tabhi class me selena ki entry hui vo aj rudra ko class me dekh kar kafi khush thi or use isharo me “WELCOME BACK” bhi kha. Rudra ne bhi use “THANKS” kah diya. Or selena apni jagah yani 1st bench par baith jati hai thodi der bad kartik class me aata hai or selena ke pas baith jata hai. Lekin rudra to kisi or ke aane ki intezar me tha tabhi class me bhagti hui revati entry leti hai. Class me ghuste hi vo jor jor se hanf rahi thi or puri class us cute chehare par aayi paseene ki boondo ko dekh rahi thi jo kisi moti se kam nahi the ko nihar rahi thi. Jha boys uspe lattu the vahi girls us se jealous ho rahi thi. Tabhi revati ki nazar usi purani jagah par gayi jo 1 week se khali thi. Use fir se vo person dikha jo 1 week se class nahi aa paya tha. Rudra ko dekhte hi revati uski aankho me kho jati hai. Aj itne dino bad vo aaya tha class isle bhi revati use dekh kar kafi khush ho jati hai. Uski aankhe uski khushi ka izhaar kar rahi thi. Uski nazar rudra ke plaster jade hath par jati hai or vo man hi man rudra ko jese sorry bol rahi ho aisa face bna leti hai. Dono ek dusre me hi khoye hue the or ye chiz kartik priyali or selena ke sath sath puri class notice kar rahi thi. Achanak revati ki nazar selena par padti hai jo uski bench par kartik ke side me baithi thi. Use dekhte hi revati ki aankho ka pyar nafrat me badal jata hai. Vo rudra ko ghusse ki bhavna se dekhne lagti hai. Tabhi priyali apna bag utha kar piche rudra ke pas baithne jati hai or ye dekh revati ghusse se aag baboola ho jati hai. Or palat kar apni bench par baith jati hai. Vahi priyali ko apne pas aate dekh rudra usko bolta hai... “yha kyu aa rahi ho ? Apni bench pe hi baitho na” Priyali –“aree yarr me kisi ko nahi janti na class me tumhare alawa to ab kya baith bhi nahi sakti tumhare sath” Rudra-“fine baith jao” Priyali –“thank uuuu” Priyali badi hi excited thi rudra ke sath baithne se kyuki pahli baat ek to vo rudra se najdikiya bada sakti thi or dusri baat revati ko jealous karwa kar rudra se dur karwa sakti thi. Yahi soch kar vo rudra ke pas baith jati hai. Piche baithe kuch back benchers salwar suit me priyali ka katil figure dekh kar line mar rahe the. Priyali unko avoid karte hue rudra par apna focus badati hai. Aj anatomy ki class honi thi jisme sare baccho ko teacher dead body ke sath body parts ki details lab me dene vale the. Jese hi sab lab me ghuste hai dead body ki smell se sabhi vomit jesa face bnane lagte hai siwaye rudra ke. Use koi farak nahi pada us body ki smell se kyuki uska passion india ka top surgeon ban na tha or surgery ke time body smell or blood nikalta hi hai yahi soch kar rudra apne mind ko kafi lambe time se prepare kar rha tha. Uske teacher sare baccho ko cadaver ke pas lekar khade ho jate hai or normal explanation dene lagte hai. Uske bad surgery blade se jese hi cadaver ke stomach area par cut lgate hai sare ke sare bacche bhag kar vomiting karne lag jate hai. Lekin ruda vahi khada rahta hai. Teacher baccho ko vaps cadaver ke pas aane ka bolte hai par sab vomit kar rahe hote hai. Or fir thak har kar techer rudra ko hi cadaver ka stomach cut karke liver ki details show karte hai or rudra bade dhyan se use note hai. Sir uski himmat ki tarif karte hai afterall itna easy nahi hota kisi death body ko cut karke uske parts check karna. Class ke bad sab mess me jakr lunch karte hai aj kisi ki bhi khana khane ki iccha hi nahi ho rahi thi. Sab ko vomiting jesa feel ho rha tha par rudra maze se apna lunch complete karke apne room chla jata hai. Thodi der rest kar or davai lekar vo so jata hai. Vahi meena apne room me finally is decision par pahuchti hai ki vo shantunu ko bolegi revati ko sari sacchhai btane ke liye or yahi soch kar vo shantunu ke room me dophar me jati hai. Shantunu gate kholta hai or meena ko under le leta hai or gate lock kar leta hai. Meena is waqt shantunu ki baanho me thi vo use dekh smile karti hai or shantunu ko ek smooch de deti hai. Shantunu bhi use smooch dekar chhod deta hai or bolta hai.. “Kya hua baby achanak kese aana hua.... call ya message kar deti to mein vha aa jata” Meena –“nahi yaar ek important baat karni thi” Shantunu –“ha bol” Meena –“pahle promise karo ki mein jo bolugi usko thande dimag se sochoge or ghussa nahi karoge” Shantunu –“ haa baba tu bol to sahi” Meena-“shanu tum revati ko sab sach bta do” Shantunu-“are vo already janti hai ki hum gf bf hai” Meena –“ye sach nahi.. tumhara or.. or.. “ Shantunu –“or kya ?” Meena-“tumhara or selena ka sach” Shantunu –“pagal ho gayi hai kya tu meena.. vo mujhse rishta tod lagi jab use pata chalega ki mene uski dost ke sath aisa kiya” Meena –“dekho shanu thande dimag se socho aj nahi to kal use selena bol hi degi is se behtar yahi hoga ki tum khud hi use bol do” Shantunu –“no wayy meena mein use kuch nahi bolne vala” Meena-“please try to understand shanu... she likes him or tumhare karan dono me misunderstanding ho rahi hai” Shantunu (ghusse me)-“kiski baat kar rahi hai tu clear bol” Meena-“mein.. mein.. vo rudra ka bol rahi hu... shanu please pahle meri baat thande dimag se sun baba ghussa mat kar please” Shantunu –“ha bol” Meena –“rudra or revati dono ek dusre ko like karte hai” Shantunu –“meena tujhe pta hai na tu kya bol rahi hai. Ab agar kuch bhi bola to mein bhul jauga ki tu meri gf hai” Meena-“mein sach bol rahi hu shanu... mene revati ki aankho me dekha hai rudra ke liye pyar...par..” Shantunu –“par kya ?” Meena –“vo ab us se nafrat karne lag gayi hai... or iska karan sirf tum ho” Shantunu –“hahaha... aree wahh ye to mere bina kuch kiye hi revu ne sahi kam kar diya” Meena-“ye hasne ki baat nahi hai shanu... vo samzati hai ki selena ke sath rudra ne vo sab harkat ki jo ki actual me tumne ki thi” Shantunu –“ohhhh to ye baat hai... to tu kya chahti hai mujhse mein apni bahen ko ye btau ki haa mene hi selena ko choda tha us din rudra ne kuch nahi kiya” Meena-“haa shanu.. mein bas chahti hu ki use atleast sachhai ka pta chale taki vo rudra ko galat na samze” Shantunu-“ohh to apne bhai ki setting karwane ke liye tu mujhe meri bahen se dur karwana chahti hai” Meena –“shanu mera vo matlab nahi hai yaar.. samzo meri baat ko..koi or use influence kar rha hai iske pahle ki der ho jaye tum use sachhai bta do” Shantunu –“kon kar rha use influence” Meena-“vo rudra ka room partner kartik... usi ne revati ko jhut bola ki selena ko rudra ne ye sab kiya taki revati uske karib aa jaye... isle bol rahi hu revu ko sachhai bta do” Shantunu –“ohhh kartikk.. tabhi sala us din chaplusi kar rha tha meri... acha kiya jo tune uske bare me mujhe bta diya.. ab dekh uska kya hal karta hu me.. or rahi baat sachhai btane ki to vo to me nahi btane vala revati ko” Meena –“shanuu aisa mat karo please tumko meri kasam.. apne pyar ki kasam” Shantunu-“heyyy apni aukat mat bhul meena... na jane kitno se chudwati thi tujhe apni gf bna kar college ki rani bnaya hai mene or tu mujhe hi faswane par tuli hai... nahi btauga me revati ko sachhai jo ban pade tujhse kar le... or rahi baat tere pyar ki to tere jesi bahut sari mere lund par jhulti hai pyar karne ke liye samzi na.... ab meri bahen ke bare me kuch bola to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga” Meena shantunu ko ek thappad khich kar deti hai or roti hui apne hostel ki or chali jati hai. Raste me rudra use dekhta hai par vo kuch bolta nahi hai or meena use bina dekhe hi bhag kar apne hostel me chali jati hai or room lock kar leti hai or roti rahti hai. Vahi boys hostal me shantunu thappad kha kar ghusse se lal ho jata hai or apne room se bahar nikalta hai. Bahar aate hi use rudra dikhta hai. Vo ghusse me uski taraf jata hai or uski coller pakad kar bolta hai... “sale bhadwe tujhe mene mana bola tha na meri bahen se dur rahne ko... fir bhi tu usko like kar rha hai.. lagta hai dusra hath bhi tudwane ka mood hai... or vo tera room partner vo kha hai uski to maa choduga aaj pure hostal ke samne” Rudra samaz nahi pata ki ye achanak isko kya ho gya kal to sorry bol rha tha or aj fir galiya dene lag gya. Vo usko bolta hai... “aj kya ho gya sir kal to bada sorry kar rahe the..” Rudra ki baat sun shantunu use marne ke liye apna hath uthata hai itne me rudra apne dusre hath se shantunu ke hath ko rok leta hai or apne pero se use gira deta hai or uske dono hath apne ghutno me fasa kar uske upar baith jata hai or apne hath se punch tan kar use marne hi vala tha or uske face ke pas aakr apna hath rok leta hai or bolta hai... “marne pe aau na to mein hath tod ke chhodne valo me se nahi hu ... akele hi marta hu tattu panju ko lekar ghumta nahi hu tere jese... us din socha misunderstanding hogi tujhe isle kuch kara nahi.. par ye roz roz ki dhamki agar ab di na to hath rokuga nahi sidha muh hi tod duga... jake dekh lena record me kick boxing championship ka certificate mil jayega” Rudra ka ye roop dekh kar shantunu ki gand fat gayi usne to socha tha ki vo ek seedha ladka hai par vo to kick boxing champion nikla. Rudra ki dhamki sun uska ghussa dar me badal gya. Rudra ke jane ke bad vo himmat karke utha or usne socha... “ye sala pagal lagta hai.. isko chhodo or us kartik ko btata hu ki meri bahen se baat karne ki saza kya hoti hai” Ye soch kar vo kartik ki talash me nikal padta hai. Vo call kar apne dosto ko bulata hai or sab kartik ko dhund rahe hote hai. Kartik use garden me baitha dikhta hai. Ye scene dekh shantunu ki aankho me mano angaare utar aaye or vo dodta hua kartik ke pas gya or use ke hath mara jis se vo bench par se niche gir gya. Shantunu apne dosto ko bulata hai or sab mil kar kartik ko buri tarah pitne lagte hai. Rudra ko bhi jab bahar shor sunai deta hai to vo bahar jata hai or dekhta hai ki garden me shantunu kisi ki pitai kar rha tha. Jese hi vo bheed ke aage jata hai use kartik ka khoon se lathpath face dikhta hai. Vo jor se chillata hai.. “oyee ruk usko kyu mar rha hai.. tujhe to ab sabak sikhana padega” Rudra ki awaj sun shantunu apne dosto ke sath bhag jata hai. Rudra bhag kar kartik ke pas aata hai or use uthane ki koshish karta hai lekin kartik behosh ho chuka tha. Vo clinic pe call karta hai or nurse se help bulvata hai. Clinic se nurse or compounder aate hai or kartik ko le jate hai. Itna sab kuch ho rha tha or revati dur khadi sab dekh rahi thi. Usne ek bhi baar shantunu ko rokne ke liye awaj bhi nahi lgayi or jab rudra kartik ko bchane aaya tab pta nahi kyu use rudra par ghussa aaya bahut. Kher kartik ko hospital pahucha kar rudra uske bag or saman ko bhi utha leta hai. Lekin in sab saman ke bich rudra se ek saman pick nhi ho pata vo tha kartik ka mobile. Revati dur se sab dekh rahi thi or bheed ke jane ke bad vo usi bench par aakar baith jati hai tab use ghas me ek black screen dikhai deti hai. Vo us taraf jati hai to vha ek mobile pda hua tha. Vo turant us mobile ko dekh pahchan jati hai ki ye kartik ka phone hai or vo us phone ko utha leti hai or switch off kar apne bag me dal leti hai. Kya hoga ab kya revati kartik ke phone me selena ke nude video or photos dekh payegi. Kya kartik ki sachhai use pta lagegi jan ne ke liye padte rahiye.
04-06-2020, 12:23 AM
Nahi aisa ho hi nahi sakta itni jaldi parda fas ho mujhe pata hai writer Kartik ka phone se av koi raj revati ko pata nahi chalega agar aisa hona hota to bahot pahle pata chal gaya hota kisi or madhyam se av pata chal gaya to writer ko koi or rasta hi nahi bachega story lambi karne ka
04-06-2020, 06:39 PM
Nice.... Mast story... Please update more
05-06-2020, 01:13 AM
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05-06-2020, 08:25 AM
(04-06-2020, 12:23 AM)gautamking19 Wrote: Nahi aisa ho hi nahi sakta itni jaldi parda fas ho mujhe pata hai writer Kartik ka phone se av koi raj revati ko pata nahi chalega agar aisa hona hota to bahot pahle pata chal gaya hota kisi or madhyam se av pata chal gaya to writer ko koi or rasta hi nahi bachega story lambi karne ka You have to keep reading the story to find out more. |
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