Adultery PERVERT - BABAN

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Posted by Curiouser - 7 hours ago
Transfrom her to be sadistic and creul like her father in law.....
Posted by vat69addict - 8 hours ago
उफ्फ क्या लिखे हो भाई, एक चरित्र हीन नारी का क्या वर्णन किए हो।वो जो अब तक पतिव्रता होने का नाटक कर रही थी, आज एक रात में सब सामने आ गया। वो दृश्य जिसमें वो रोहन को हटा के ख़ुद अपने ससुर के साथ चिपक के बैठी, ये दर्शाता है कि बस उससे ऐसे ही किसी मर्द की खोज थी।उस के बाद के वार्तालाप में ये अस्पष्टत दिखता है, कैसे जान के की उसके ससुर और नौकरानी ने मिल के शयंत्र रचा फिर भी उससे उसकी ग्लानि नहीं। यही है असली चरित्र इन जैसी नारी का, जो पैसे और हवस में अपने बेटे तक को भूल गई। आपको तो साहित्यकार होना चाहिए, जो लोगों के मर्म को छू ले, ये कहां आ गए
Posted by Shabaz123 - 8 hours ago
Great update bhai.....jungle me mangle hone wala he....rough gali galoch wala hoto badhiya hoga
Posted by hirarandi - Today, 02:09 AM
Uuuuuffff.... kamal update. Susar jee ne apna pehla wada poora ker diya. Bahu ko ek laakh de diya. Ab Jungle me Mangal ho ga. Dekhte hain kia hota hai. 

Sath me Champa or uski saheliyo k sath Lezbo b kerwao. 

Waiting 4 next update

THANKS DOSTON. AAP SAB KA FEEDBACK PAAKEY BAHUT ACCHA LAGA. 

AUR JINHONE ABHITAK NAHI PARA HAI PAR LIJIYE. 

Previous page is the updated page. 

[perfectmohib]

Bro this story is good and erotic but why the kid is narrating? It's not feeling that worthy.

Let the story be kinda live.

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Thanks for your question....
Lekin yeh story ek baccha narrate nahi kar raha hai. Agar aap shuruaat se pare hai toh aapne dekha hoga narrator yaani Rohan ab hostel mein rehta hai. Adult ho chuka hai. Aur woh apne past life ko humey bata raha hai. Jab woh chota tha aur uske aakhon ke samne jo hua tha woh hi woh bol raha hai. Usne is time jo feel kiya wahi woh bata raha hai.

[perfectmohib]

Thanks for your question....
Lekin yeh story ek baccha narrate nahi kar raha hai.  Agar aap shuruaat se pare hai toh aapne dekha hoga narrator yaani Rohan ab hostel mein rehta hai. Adult ho chuka hai. Aur woh apne past life ko humey bata raha hai. Jab woh chota tha aur uske aakhon ke samne jo hua tha woh hi woh bol raha hai. Usne is time jo feel kiya wahi woh bata raha hai.

His narration as a past story is not so cool because being a small kid he can't remember so much and also he is behaving like a spy and so.

It's a hot erotic story so let it be kinda LIVE, don't let the kid narrate.

Also don't add  that criminal in the story as this lady is not a slut. Instead add champas father in law to fuck both.

Also both oldies fuck this milf together.

And make big updates so to make it more erotic.

This is all my view

[hirarandi]

His narration as a past story is not so cool because being a small kid he can't remember so much and also he is behaving like a spy and so.

It's a hot erotic story so let it be kinda LIVE, don't let the kid narrate.

Also don't add  that criminal in the story as this lady is not a slut. Instead add champas father in law to fuck both.

Also both oldies fuck this milf together.

And make big updates so to make it more erotic.

This is all my view

Good Question. agar story ka maza lena hai to her ek cheez ko detail me likhna ho ga. Chahe ek chota bacha hi es cheez ko dekh raha hai. Lekin hamain usko avoid ker k naration ka maza lena ho ga. 

Aglay update ka intazar rahay ga

[hirarandi]

Also read my Own story. & give ur valuable comments & suggestions

Meri Zindagani 
https://xossipy.com/showthread.php?tid=26815

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His narration as a past story is not so cool because being a small kid he can't remember so much and also he is behaving like a spy and so.

It's a hot erotic story so let it be kinda LIVE, don't let the kid narrate.

Also don't add  that criminal in the story as this lady is not a slut. Instead add champas father in law to fuck both.

Also both oldies fuck this milf together.

And make big updates so to make it more erotic.

This is all my view

Bhai... main nahi janta aap kabse  aur kaun se update se is story ko par rahe hai. Kyunki maine story ke shuru mein hi likh diya tha ke yeh ek 1st person view story hai. Yaani main nahi.... koi aur narate karega is story ko. Aur woh hai rohan. Yeh kahaani uski maa ko hai. Its maybe not cool for you but bahut log aaj tak is story ko enjoy karte aaye hai. Koi problem bahi hui.

Ek baccha shayad choti choti baatein yaad na rakh paye, adult baatein samajh na paye par koi nayee incident jo uske liye ekdum 1st time hai ajeeb hai,  aur specially us ghatna ke sath uska family member specially maa ya papa jura hua ha aur aakhon ke samne agaar aisa kuch dekhle jo usey nahin dekhna chahiyei toh yeh baat ek bacche ke mind mein bhi hamesha ke liye lock ho jata hai. 

And yes. He is behaving like a spy. Because he is curious. Har ek baccha is umaar mein curious hota hai.agar kuch alaag usko nazar ataa hai toh usko jaane ki iccha aur bar jaati hai. 

Yeh mera point of view hai. Aab kahaani ke is parao me akar main story ke sath koi cherchar nahi kar sakta. Thank you.

[perfectmohib]

Bhai... main nahi janta aap kabse  aur kaun se update se is story ko par rahe hai. Kyunki maine story ke shuru mein hi likh diya tha ke yeh ek 1st person view story hai. Yaani main nahi.... koi aur narate karega is story ko. Aur woh hai rohan. Yeh kahaani uski maa ko hai. Its maybe not cool for you but bahut log aaj tak is story ko enjoy karte aaye hai. Koi problem bahi hui.

Ek baccha shayad choti choti baatein yaad na rakh paye, adult baatein samajh na paye par koi nayee incident jo uske liye ekdum 1st time hai ajeeb hai,  aur specially us ghatna ke sath uska family member specially maa ya papa jura hua ha aur aakhon ke samne agaar aisa kuch dekhle jo usey nahin dekhna chahiyei toh yeh baat ek bacche ke mind mein bhi hamesha ke liye lock ho jata hai. 

And yes. He is behaving like a spy. Because he is curious. Har ek baccha is umaar mein curious hota hai.agar kuch alaag usko nazar ataa hai toh usko jaane ki iccha aur bar jaati hai. 

Yeh mera point of view hai. Aab kahaani ke is parao me akar main story ke sath koi cherchar nahi kar sakta. Thank you.

Fine bro

I liked this story that's why I passed my comments so that some little changes can be done if possible so to make it more erotica but no problem you're the composer so all is your mindset.

Perhaps don't add that CRIMINAL ever.

Old peoples are fine with that MILF, Like Champas Father in law, that doctor and also make all of them fuck that MILF together



And bro I too loved this story and I'm reading it from the start only.

Believe me I love this story.

All the very best


I'm your fan bro

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[vat69addict]

bhai aaj mat dena update...aaj bahut kaam h...kal chutti wale din dena...

[Shabaz123]

Waiting bro....aaj aae to maza aaega

[krishagarwal]

Pratap kamla ke sath erotic sex scene ka wait hai bhai

[hirarandi]

Update kab aey ga?

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[Shabaz123]

Waiting

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3 PART KA SUPER, KINKY, DIRTY EROTIC UPDATE LIKH RAHA HU. KAL AYEGA USKA PEHLA UPDATE. ISEY KEHETE HAI PERVERT-1

TAIYAAR REHNA DOSTON!!

[hirarandi]

Intazaar hai Update ka.

[Avishek]

Wow!! Waiting for part 1

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Pervert kisko kehte hai uska jeeta jagta ek example usdin maine apne aakhon se dekhata tha. Insaan kitna ghinona aur bikrit ruchi ka ho sakta hai woh dekhkar main aaj bhi hairan hu.


Usdin mummy aur dadaji ko itne kareeb dekhkar main kuch nahi samajh paya. Main wapas aa gaya aur tv dekhne lagaa. Thori der baad dadaji bhi mere paas akar baith gaye aur mummy un paison ke bundle ko lekar mujhse chupate hue apne kamre mein chali gayi. Phir wapas aakar neeche rasoi ghar chali gayi. Usdin subah se lekar dopahar tak mujhe aur koi ajeeb drisshya dekhne ko nahi mila. Normally mummy aaj upar hi mujge nehela diya, khud bhi upar hi shower le li, aur hum khane ko bhi baith gaye. Khaate waqt mummy aur dadaji bahut paas paas baithe. Maine kabhi kabhi mummy ko dadaji ke taraf, aur dadaji ko mummy ke taraf fekhte hue dekha. Par ismein zyada kuch abnormal nahi tha.
Mujhe kya pata tha..... isse hajar guna abnormal scene main dekhne wala hoo dopahar ko. 

Khaane ke baad dadaji mujhe boley: beta....chalo aaj main aapko bahaar ghumake lataa hu.

Main: kahaa dadaji? Phir se park mein? 

Dadaji: nahi nahi aaj us maidaan mein nahi balki aaj hum jayenge jungle mein. Yahan ek ghana jungle hai. Bahut barey barey per (tree) hai wahan. Bahut puraani jagaah hai. Tum jaoge na beta?

Main : haa dadaji.... main jaunga. Mummy....tum bhi chalo na mere saath? 

Mummy: main? Main wahan jakaar kya karunga? Tum dono jao... ghumkar aao. 

Dadaji: bahu....chalo na humare sath.....akeli baith kar kya karogi? Chalo ghumkar aate hai. 

Mummy : par babuji......

Main: mummy... mummy chalo na...pls.. pls

Dadaji : dekho bahu... munna bhi yahi chahta hai.... chalo humare sath.

Dadaji mummy ke paas jakaar mummy ke kandhe par haat rakhkar phir se poochte hai: chalogi na bahu? 

Mummy dadaji ke taraf dekhte hue muskurake boli: accha babuji.....aap jab bol rahe hai to main bhi aap logo ke saath aungi.

Dadaji yeh sunkar khush ho gaye. Dadaji apne kamre meinn chale gaye aur mummy apne kamre mein. Lekin mummy kya malum tha agey uskey sath kya hone wala hai.

5 baaj hum taiyaar hone lagey. Dadaji pant shirt pehenne lagey aur mummy mujhe taiyaar karne lagi. Mere ho jaane ke baad mummy mujhe bahaar bhej ke khud taiyaar hone lagi. Main bahaar drawing room mein wait karne lagaa. Dadaji bahaar akar mujhe dekhkar boley..

Dadaji: arey beta...aap taiyaar ho gaye? Mummy kahaan hai? 

Main : mummy taiyaar ho rahi hai dadaji.

Main aur dadaji wait karne lagey. Thori der baad mummy  kamre se bahaar ayi. Mummy ke bahar ate hi maine dekha dadaji ka muh khula ka khula rehe gaya. Mummy kya lag rahi thi us din. Waise bhi mummy itni khubsurat thi ke jo bhi pehenti beautiful lagti. Par us din blue saree aur golden blouse, khuley hue baaalon mein bahut hi acchi lag rahi thi meri mummy. 

Dadaji mere mummy ko fir se ys ajeeb nazron se dekh rahe the. Isbaar koi chupke nahi seedha mummy ke aakhon mein aakhein daal ke. Mummy bhi dadaji ko hi dekh rahi thi. Mummy mere paas ayi aur mera haat pakar liya aur dadaji ko dekhkar boli: toh......chaley? 

Dadaji: kahaan????? 

Mummy sharmate huye : jaahan aap le jana chahte hai.

Dadaji: (khoye hue) kahan le jana chahta hoo? 

Mummy muskurake : apne bola na koi jungle hai.. wahaan....

Dadaji: huuh? Jungle?..... oh.. haaan..haan...jungle... haan chalo. 

Mummy sharmake dadaji ko dekhkar boli: humm....chaliye. 

Neeche akar hum dekhte hai champa masi bhi taiyaar hai.

Dadaji: champa bhi humare saath aa rahi hai. Chalo rohan beta.... dadaji ka haat pakar lo. Thora dur janaa hoga hume.

Main dadaji ka haat pakar ke ghar se bahaar aa gaya. Mummy aur champa masi peeche peeche aane lagey. Hum maidaan ke taraaf hi jaa rahe the. Us waqt koi bhi nahi dikha raste mein. Waise bhi yahan log kam hi rehte hai. Hum chalne lagey. Maidaan ke paas rastaa right ke taraf murtaa hai. Hum bhi right ka road pakar ke chalne lagey. Thori der baad hum ek patla sa rasta pakar ke hum chalne lagey. Raste ke baju mein hi ek talaab tha. Bahut gandi badbu aa raha tha wahan se. Bahut dirty tha woh talab. Hum sab naak mein rumal lagaake chal rahe the. Shayad yahan bahut dino se koi nahi ataa. Thori der chalne ke baad jungle shuru hua. Yahan koi ghar, koi basti kuch nahi hai. Aas paas bhi sirf jungle hi hai. Hum jungle ke aur under chale aye. Yahan toh bus lambe lambe per aur neeche un peron se girey hue pattey hi thei. Patto ke upar chalte hue hum agey barne lagey. Ab hum lagbhag jungle ke beech aa chuke they. Dadaji mera haat pakar kar chal rahe the aur mummy masi ke sath baat karte hue idhar udhar chal rahe the. Tabhi mujhe dur jungle ke under ek bahut baraa ghar jaisa kuch nazar aya. Per aur patto se ghira hua ek ghar. Bahut purana. Idhar udhar se toota hua. Aur ek tree bhi ghar je under se janam le chuka tha. 

Maine dadaji se poocha: dadaji.... woh ghar kiska hai? 

Dadaji us taraf dekhke haskar boley: arey beta.... woh koi ghar nahi ek bahut puraana factory hai. Jab main college mein tha tabhi yeh bandh ho gaya tha. Ab toh wahan koi nahi jata. Under peir paudhey ug chukey hai. Bus khandar ki tarah khaali para hai yeh jagah. 

Yeh bolke dadaji ruk gaye. Fir us factory ke taraf dekhte hue kuch soche. Fir peechey murkar mummy ko dekhne lage. Mummy champa masi ke saath baat kar rahi thi. Dadaji mummy se nazar hataake fir se us bandh factory ko dekhne lagey. Unke chehre pe ek hasi khil uthi. Ek shaitaani hasi. 

Main : kyu hua dadaji? 

Dadaji: nahi beta bus.... ek khayal ayaa. 

Main: kya dadaji? 

Dadaji: huh??.... nahi nahi kuch nahi... tum choro. 

Main: dadaji kya hum wahan jaa sakte hai? Mujhe wahan janaa hai. 

Dadaji: nahi beta!! Woh bahut khatarnak jagah hai!! 

Main : khatarnak.... par kyun dadaji? 

Dadaji: wahan bhoot rehta hai!!! Bhutiya jagah hai woh... koi nahi jataa wahan. 

Main darr gaya aur bola: bhutiya jagha!!? 

Dadaji: haan.... beta koi us taraf nahi jata... dekho kitna sunsaan hai wahan.... isse accha hai tum yaha khelo apne ball ke sath. 

Main apne sath plastic ka football lekar aya tha. Main aur dadaji wahi ball ke sath khelne lagey. Main dadaji ko ball pass kar raha tha par dadaji ka dhyan kahin aur hi tha. Woh bar bar mummy ko dekh rahe the. Maine mummy ke taraf dekha toh dekha ke mummy bhi dadaji ke taraf dekh rahe hai. 

Main bola : dadaji... aap thik se nahi khel rahe ho. 

Dadaji: huh?? Haan... beta... ek kaam karo... tum champa masi ke sath thori der khelo.... mujhe tumhari maa se kuch zaruri baat karni hai. 

Yeh bolkey dadaji champa masi ko apne paas bulati hai aur masi ko kuch bolte hai. Champa masi ke sath baat karte hue dadaji ekbar mere taraf ungli dikhakar masi ko kuch bolte hai. Masi bhi apna sar hilake dadaji ke baat ko maan leti hai. Phir dadaji mummy ke paas jaane lagte hai aur champa masi mere taraf aane lagti hai. Maine dekha dadaji mummy ke paas jakar mummy ko ku h bolne lagey. Ab mummy bhi us factory ke taraf dekhne lagi. Dadaji mummy ko wahan dikhate hue kuch bol rahe the. Tabtak champa masi mere paas aa gai thi.

Main: masi.... dadaji mumny se kya baat karne gaye? Woh khelenge nahi? 

Champa: beta... tumhare dadaji ko tumhare mummy se kuch zaruri baat karni hai.... unko thora time lagega. Aao tabtak main tumhare saath khelti hu. Chalo.... thora aur agey chalte hai. 

Yeh bolkey champa masi mera hat pakar ke mujhe thori dur lekaar aaye. Yahan se mai dadaji aur mummy ko ab nahi dekh paa raha tha. Ab woh dono mere aakhon ke samne nahi thei. Main ab masi ke sath catch catch khelne lagaa. Thori der baad achanak masi ko nature call aya. Masi ko bahut zor ki lagi thi aur woh bhi do number ki. Masi ab ruk nahi sakti thi. Masi mere paas akar boli.. 

Champa: beta.... mujhe bariwali toilet aayi hai. Main jakaar ati hu. Tum ek kaam karo... yahan thori der akeley khelo. Main thori der mein hi aa jaungi. 

Yeh bolkey champa masi jaldi se us jagah ko chorkey hum jahaan se aye the wahan jaane lagti hai. Maine socha ke to tabtak main dadaji aur mummy ke paas jaakar baithta hu. Yeh sochke main chalte hue waahan ata hu jahan thori der pehle mummy aur dadaji baat kar rahe thei. Par yeh kya!! Ab toh yaha koi bhi nahi hai. Na dadaji aur nahi mummy. Dono kahaan gaye? Mujhe chorkey kahaan gaye woh dono? Ab is jungleein main akela tha. Chota tha isliye darr lagne laga.  Main thora agey jakar unko dhunda. Naam lekar bulaya bhi par sirf panchiyon ki awaz ke ilawa aur kuch sunai nahi fe rahata aur nahi koi dikh raha tha. Ab aur darrne laga main. Itbe barein jungle mein mujhe chorkey mummy dadaji kahan gaye? Main wapas aaakar idhar udhar dekhne lagaa. Tabhi mujhe woh puraana bandh factory dikha. Dadaji bol rahe the wahan bhoot hai. Aur yahan to mere ilawa aur koi nahi tha. Darr ke mare mujhe jaise rona aa gaya. Tabhi mujhe aisa laga jaise maine kisiko us factory ke dusre manzil se dekha. Kya sach me wahan koi hai? Ya mera wahem hai yeh janne ke liye main thora agey gaya. Tabhi mujhe us factory ke 2nd floor ke tutey hue khirki se phir se koi nazar aya. Main chowk gaya!! Mujge aisa laga maine wahan jisko dekha woh meri mummy thi. Arey..... ab ro us khirki se under deewar pe kisika shadow bhi dikh raha hai. Nahi...... kisi ek ka nahi do shadow dikh raha hai. Main confuse ho gaya tha.  Kya sach me wahan mummy thi ya koi aur? Main darr bhi raha tha aur mera curiosity bhi bar raha tha. Tabhi phir se us khirki se maine mujhe kuch dikha. Arey..... yeh to mummy ki saree  hai..... haan mummy ki saree hu hai woh.... iska matlab mummy wahan hai. Aur shayad dusra shadow dadaji ka hai. 

Mujhe thora gussa aya. Mujhe wahan jaane se manaa karke mummy aur daaji khud wahan chale gaye. Mujhe lekar kyun nahi gaye? Maine socha ab main khud wahan jaunga. Yahan akele champa masi ka intezar karne se accha hai ke main wahan us factory ke under mummy dadaji ke paas jata hun. Yeh sochkey mann mein sahaas lakar agey barne laga. Socha tha wahan jakar mummy aur dadaji ko surprise kar dunga. Par mujhe kya pata thaa ke main khud hi surprised ho jaunga. 

Aaj bhi yaad hai us khaali factory ke under ka woh har ek pal. Ufffffff......... kitna ghinona aur dirty tha woh sab. Yaad ataa hai toh rongtey khare ho jaate hai!!


To be continued.... 

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