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Bhai ramlal ko main lead me rakho adhi .....our esi koi dawa ya injection lagao jisse ramlal ka lund bara ho jae
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(28-05-2020, 06:08 PM)Sana Shah Wrote: Hello Chamchey type person...maine koi kisi ko request nahi ki...or na tumhain kisi ne beech me broker banne ka kaha hai ...so mind your own business or apne comment par hi focus karo to behtar hoga tumhare lye
First off.. mind your langauge "Queen of hearts"???!!!!
My only advice to you is to try and see if you can write a story.... I know I can't but I dont critisize writers when they are delayed in updates..... FYI, have been a reqular support of EXBII and XOSSIP and now XOSSIPY for the past 10 years so I know sometimes things get delayled...
My only . - have some consideration for them cos they have a life apart from writing stories .... "." = point... in case you are confused....
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And you are getting it for free... SO STOP COMPLAINING!!!
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(28-05-2020, 06:17 PM)jtiwary Wrote: First off.. mind your langauge "Queen of hearts"???!!!!
My only advice to you is to try and see if you can write a story.... I know I can't but I dont critisize writers when they are delayed in updates..... FYI, have been a reqular support of EXBII and XOSSIP and now XOSSIPY for the past 10 years so I know sometimes things get delayled...
My only . - have some consideration for them cos they have a life apart from writing stories .... "." = point... in case you are confused....
Again i say...mind your own business and focus on your own comment....tum jeso behas nahi karti main....
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(28-05-2020, 06:18 PM)jtiwary Wrote: And you are getting it for free... SO STOP COMPLAINING!!!
Shut up....broker
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(28-05-2020, 08:10 AM)doctor101 Wrote: Omprakash Meenaji,
Yeh sunke bahot achchha lagaa ki aapne kuchh readers ki raay maani. Aur ab aap word file men likh ne ke baad hee copy-paste karte hain. Very good decision.
back up safety ka easy solution: aap apni word file hur ek update ke baad Update number likh ke woh word file GMAIL apne khud ke gmail account pe kijiye. Subject me Update Number zaroor likhiye.
Aur saath men apne Google Drive men ek nayaa folder create kijiye "Wardiwaali". Aur hur uodate ke baad woh update number likh ke woh word file wohi Wardiwaali folder men Upload kijiye.
Is se aap ki do secure backup ho jaayegi. Kal aap ka computer or mobile phone crash huaa toh bhi aap kaa content ONLINE SAFE rahegaa.
God forbid kal Xossipy lack of fund band ho gayaa toh aap ka published content aap ke paas rahegaa, jo aap kisi aur form men republish kar sakte ho.
Never evere write directly on forum. Always do copy-paste. Xossipy servers have lots of problems to upload text and pictures. Don't even think to write directly on Xossipy. 90% time you will lose your content in upload. I lost my big comments upload.
Every one knows basic. But we human always do silly mistakes.... Sometimes....
Most of Xossip writers did not save their work in their pc or mobile or online cloud storage. And they could not republish their work. e.g. Superstar Writee Rajkumar does not have his own original complete content of "Budha Tailor". Some Xossip Readers who saved those writers classic work, they republished it on this Xossipy. Hats off to those dedicated Xossip and Xossipy Readers.
Lady Cop is our favorite erotic genre in Xossip. Which was not active in Xossipy. Main aapki likhaavat, plots aur characters pe jo aapne ek nayaa benchmark create kiyaa hai. I am your fan. Keep writing and please don't leave us or pissed-off due to some impatience readers. Xossipy needs you for Lady Cop Genre writing.
Thats really good advice.. Always keep a backup of your story...
I curate a lot of stories, including yours.. and my word file is over 20MB now.. (authors like batmanforever etc)....
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Most of Pinkbaby's stories as well
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(28-05-2020, 06:08 PM)Sana Shah Wrote: Hello Chamchey type person...maine koi kisi ko request nahi ki...or na tumhain kisi ne beech me broker banne ka kaha hai ...so mind your own business or apne comment par hi focus karo to behtar hoga tumhare lye
Miss Sana sah, don't take anyone's words seriously like I don't take this script I have prepared a script to advance this story. I welcome the reader's suggestion and thank you for all the readers' suggestions. Those readers who want to see the story according to their own way, I will be able to change only a little in my prepared script.
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Can anybody share all woman security officer officer stories. Like Ajantha,Aparajitha
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(28-05-2020, 10:01 PM)yakumar Wrote: Can anybody share all woman security officer officer stories. Like Ajantha,Aparajita Ye pahle wali xossip site ki kahaniyan hai ab is site per milna mushkil hai
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(27-05-2020, 10:29 PM)Update 12 Wrote: Mahak-mere kapde kaha hai
Ramlal-mujhe nahi pata madam ji
Mahak-jyada chalaki karne ki jarurat nahi hai ok
Ramlal-(battisi dikhate hue) are madam vaise bina kapdo ke rahogi bahut sundar lagogi
Mahak-(gusse me) mere kapde do
Ramlal-itni bhi jaldi kya hai
Mahak-aakhir chahte kya ho itna kuch to kar diya mere sath ab or kya karna baki rah gaya hai
Ramlal-jyada kuch nahi bas aaj se aapko mere ghar par daily aakar duty diya karo kal se aapko double duty deni hogi
Mahak-tum mere sath aisa nahi kar sakte mai ek acp hu or tumhari senior bhi
Ramlal-mujhe koi fark nahi padta is bat se
Itna kahkar ramlal Mahak ki taraf badhta hai or Mahak ko jabardasti kiss karne lag jata
Mahak kuch der aise hi aankhon me aansu liye khadi rahti hai fir apne aansu pochkar aise apni pant or shirt pahan leti hai per shirt ke do button tute hue the isliye mahak jacket ko pahankar uski zip laga leti aaj Mahak itni majbur thi ki aisi garmi ke mousam me bhi jacket ki zip lagani padi thi Thanks for writing !
A suggestion:
Story ka maza tab jayada aata hai jab fantasy aur reality ka mel ho. Maaf karna par thora jyada hi unrealistic hota jaa raha hai. Raat bhar ek kamre me soye hone ke baawjud Mahak Ramlal ko kaabu me karke use sabak nahi shikha paati hai.
Story me Mahak daredevil hai, ACP hai par Ramlal uspar haavi hai.
Ramlal aur Mahak ke bich ke scenes bagair Mahak ko Ramlal ke aage bebas dikha kar bhi rakha jaa sakta tha. Story me suru se hi dare devil hone ke baawjud Mahak dusro ke aage bebas ho jaati hai aur dusro ko apna shikar karne detai hai.
Ramlal aur Mahak ke bich ka scene kuchh eisa bhi sayad ho skata tha. Ek sample :
"Ramlal Mahak ko Mobile dikhata hai. Mhaka mobile me apno film dekh kar chaukti hai.Turant use khabri ki baat yaad aa jaati hai ki Ramlal pap ke daldal ka prana khilari hai. Wo Ramlal ko uski ke khel me maat dene ka iaarda karti hai. Wo ramlal ko thora apne jism se khelne deti hai apr ant tak used yakeen bhi dila deti hai ki wo iss khel me apni marzi se saamil hai aur agar Ramlal uske liye kaam karega to aage aur bhi jannat ka nazara dekh sakta hai.
RestRoom me Ramlal apni iccha jaahir karta hai. Mahak Iss bar apne pure jism ka aanand Ramlal ko uthane deti hai par saath hi me us se kuchh kaam ki baate bhi nikaal leti hai. "
Eise hi sah-maat ka khel dusro ke saath bhi Mahak khelti hai. Kabhi Mahak apni marzi se to kabhi sahi mauke ke intzaar me to kabhi just for fun apne jism ka istemaal karti hai.
Aapki story hai isliye aap jaisa aage story ko badhana chaho, badhau! Bas itna hi kahunga ki fantasy tabhi acchi lagti hai jab lage ki wo sach ho sakta hai.
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(29-05-2020, 12:16 AM)fantasywriter Wrote: Thanks for writing !
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Story ka maza tab jayada aata hai jab fantasy aur reality ka mel ho. Maaf karna par thora jyada hi unrealistic hota jaa raha hai. Raat bhar ek kamre me soye hone ke baawjud Mahak Ramlal ko kaabu me karke use sabak nahi shikha paati hai.
Story me Mahak daredevil hai, ACP hai par Ramlal uspar haavi hai.
Ramlal aur Mahak ke bich ke scenes bagair Mahak ko Ramlal ke aage bebas dikha kar bhi rakha jaa sakta tha. Story me suru se hi dare devil hone ke baawjud Mahak dusro ke aage bebas ho jaati hai aur dusro ko apna shikar karne detai hai.
Ramlal aur Mahak ke bich ka scene kuchh eisa bhi sayad ho skata tha. Ek sample :
"Ramlal Mahak ko Mobile dikhata hai. Mhaka mobile me apno film dekh kar chaukti hai.Turant use khabri ki baat yaad aa jaati hai ki Ramlal pap ke daldal ka prana khilari hai. Wo Ramlal ko uski ke khel me maat dene ka iaarda karti hai. Wo ramlal ko thora apne jism se khelne deti hai apr ant tak used yakeen bhi dila deti hai ki wo iss khel me apni marzi se saamil hai aur agar Ramlal uske liye kaam karega to aage aur bhi jannat ka nazara dekh sakta hai.
RestRoom me Ramlal apni iccha jaahir karta hai. Mahak Iss bar apne pure jism ka aanand Ramlal ko uthane deti hai par saath hi me us se kuchh kaam ki baate bhi nikaal leti hai. "
Eise hi sah-maat ka khel dusro ke saath bhi Mahak khelti hai. Kabhi Mahak apni marzi se to kabhi sahi mauke ke intzaar me to kabhi just for fun apne jism ka istemaal karti hai.
Aapki story hai isliye aap jaisa aage story ko badhana chaho, badhau! Bas itna hi kahunga ki fantasy tabhi acchi lagti hai jab lage ki wo sach ho sakta hai.
Mai aapke suggetion ka samman karta hu mai aapko bata du kahani ke jyada nahi 50 update me puri karunga or kahani puri kalpnik hai reality ka koi vasta nahi hai
Kahani me bahut se aise mod aayenge jaha aapka suggetion mail karta hai maine kahani ka kuch hissa aapke suggetion ke anusar soch rakha hai
Aap nischit rahe kahani me Mahak ki jindgi ke bahut se pahlu samne aayenge
 
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Blackmail karoge tohi maza he...pehle jabardasti fir khud hi khul ke chodwae
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(28-05-2020, 10:01 PM)yakumar Wrote: Can anybody share all woman security officer officer stories. Like Ajantha,Aparajitha
There are some stories on the other ".,.," site
Casinar updates his stories there. ........ do a google search... ".,., security officerwali"... you will get results......
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(30-05-2020, 12:31 PM)Shabaz123 Wrote: Waiting
Update kal aayega bro
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