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(18-05-2020, 11:39 PM)sam_rozer Wrote: Nice Update
As I feared Nivedita is the one on whom the tragedy befalls it was emotional for me as I liked Nivedita very much she was very much devoted to manu She was a chaste woman but gave everything to Manu and in return, manu loved her too but as all good things doesn't last forever and this one didn't.I hope this brings something good out of manu if not then her death wouldn't matter and she was too good a charcter to not have an impact. its good that manu was not the reason for her demise but he was the reason she lived longer and is he would have been the reason the he would have killed himself. Lets see how manu reacts to the news and hope he learns something to it and he better starts respecting those who are devoted to him and love him very much like.
Lets see how this twist turns the story............
NIVEDITA IS HAVING ONLY ONE MONTH'S TIME. EARLIER MANU WAS GREATELY DISTURBED BY REKHA'S MARRIAGE BUT CHHOTI BHABHI BROUGHT HIM ON TO TRACK. THEN HE WAS VERY MUCH DISTURBED BY PUNA WHO INSISTED TO HAVE SEX WITH MANU. THAT TIME ALSO CHHOTI BHABHI ONLY TOOK CARE OF MANU. THOUGH SAUMYA'S MARRIAGE AND BABLI'S DEATH DISTURBED HIM MENTALLY A LOT BUT MANU HAS LEARNT TO MANAGE WITH UNPLEASANT SISTUATIONS. BUT NIVEDITA IS VERY VERY SPECIAL TO HIM, IT IS ONLY ONLY NIVEDITA WITH WHOM STAYED EXCLUSIVELY FOR 5-6 DAYS. MANU HAS NOW MATURED A LOT, HE IS NOW VERY UNDERSTANDING BUT WHETHER HE WOULD BE ABLE TO ABSORB NIVEDITA'S LOSS IS TO BE SSEN. ALSO, WHETHER MANU WILL AGREE FOR DEATH OF SOMEONE ELSE FOR LIFE OF NIVEDITA...
NOW STORY IS TAKING SHARP CHANGES , PLEASE READ CAREFULLY...
THANKS FOR FOLLOWING THIS STORY...
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It is very sad to read that Nivedita is terminally ill. She may die in a month’s time. Whether Champa will do any magic ?
Waiting..
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MANU KE KAHNE PAR KALI MAA SE AASHIRWAAD LE GURUJI KE SAATH CHAMPA EK KHAASH JAGAH WANHA SE AAKAR CHAMPA NE MANU SE KAHA,
“teri Nivedita aunty puree tarah se theek ho jaayegi, koi bimaari nahi rahegi. “
“Lekin Nivedita ke badle uske apne khoon , Ujjawal, Suchi Ya Nivedita ka koi apna saga bhai , bahan hai to uss mey se kisee ek kee jaan jaayegi…”
Manu ek butt / statue saa maa ko dekhta raha…
“idhar kisee ek kee maut hogi aur udhar Nivedita bilkul theek ho jaayegi…15 din mey ek baar nahi ek din mey 15 baar tumse chudwayegi…bolo kiske naam par havan du Suchi, Ujjawal ya Nivedita kee sagi bahan , Mauli kee maa..tum agar unke kisee aur sage ko jaante ho to uska naam batao. “
{ …din bhar Champa aur guruji ka bahut swagat hua, bade, famous logo se mulaquat huee, sabhi ne apne apne ghar invite kiya. Raat kareeb 11.30 baje 2 lady Champa ko apne saath le gaee. Guruji bhee aana chaahte theye lekin unhe mana kar diya gaya. Champa ko ek nadi/ river ke ghat par laaya gaya. Wonha pahunchte hee Champa ko sab kuchh jaana pahchana laga. Ek dead body ke upar ek 35 saal ke aas paas kee lady, bilkul nude baithi thye. Bagal mey bhairav baba bhee aankh mund kar nange baithe theye. …Champa ne apna doubt kaha to lady ne kaha,
“haa, kareeb 2 saal pahle tum yanha aaee thee, tumhari ye sadaa bahaar jawani tumhe yanhi mili thi…har saal yanha saikdo aurate aati hai tumhari jaisee khubsurti aur jawani ke liye lekin tumhare siba koi bhee ‘baba’ ko khus nahi kar paaee…”
Champa ko mauka mila,
“ phir baba se kahiye kee mere bete kee premika ko bilkul swasth /healthy kar de, mere jaisa jawani de de…”
Aurat ne jabaab diya ,
“tum aur tumhara beta Manu jo chahte hai wo ho sakta hai, Nivedita jindgi bhar Manu ko aurat ka shukh deti rahegi lekin uske liye Nivedita ko ek qurwani deni hogi…”
Aurat sabka naam eise le rahi thee jaise kee sabko badhia se jaanti ho..
“kaisee qurwani, kiski qurwani..”
Aurat ne promptly kaha,
“Nivedita ke apne khoon mey se kisee ek kee qurwani deni hogi…agar tum iss baat ke liye taiyar ho to Nivedita bikul thee ho jaayegi . Tum jiske naam par havan karogi uski maut ho jayegi aur uske marte hee Nivedita bilkul theek ho jaayegi, Manu jis din usse chodna chhorega uske ek mahina baad marr jaayegi..
Champa ko kaato to khoon nahi. Thodi der baad dheere se boli,
“meri jaan le kar Nivedita ko bacha do. “
Aurat ne phir 2 took jabaab diya,
“tum kya, Manu bhee agar jaan dega to Nivedita nahi bachegi…uska apna ya apne kisee kaa khoon , beta, beti, bhai bahan ke maut ke baad hee Nivedita bachegi…”
Champa ne apna saari utaar phenka, nangi hee aankh moonde huye baba se lipat gaee. Boli,
“ baba, mai jindgi bhar aapki gulami karungi, din raat eise hee nangi rahungi, aapki , maa kee sewa karungi, mere bete kee Nivedita ko bacha lijiye, Manu ko jaisee Nivedita pyari hai uss se jyada pyar Suchi se karta hai..aur koi maa nahi chahegi kee usko bachane ke liye uske bachche apni jaan de. “
Baba ne Champa ko godi se nahi uthaya. Baba ne kaha,
“ Nivedita kee ek sagi bahan bhee hai, Manu kee Mauli kee maa ‘Vaidehi Nivedita kee sagi chhoti bahan hai..uski jaan ke badle bhee Nivedita theek ho jaayegi. “
Champa ghumkar baba ke godi mey , bur ko lund se ragadte huye, chuchio ko baba ke chest se dabaye huye boli..
“ baba, jab Nivedita theek ho sakti hai to phir kisee aur kee jindgi liye bina theek kar do, badle mey mujhe apne paas rakh lo, bete se chudwate chudwate mai bhee thak chuki hu, yanha aap jis se kahenge uski sewa karungi..”
Itna par bhee baba ne Champa ko chodne mey koi interest nahi dikhaya. Wey bole,
“ tum dono maa beti ( Champa , Mamta ) hamare guruji kee maal ho, peechhli baar sadhna / rituals ke liye tumhe bahut choda, bahut bhoga , ek –do baar nahi, lagaatar saat din raat tum yanhi nangi chudwati rahi, hum chodte rahe lekin wo ek kaam thaa tumhe eisee jawani dene ke liye lekin ab hum tumhe nahi chod sakte ..aur Manu , apne bete ke saath tumhe jindgi bhar chudwana hai …naa itni juldi tum marogi aur naa Manu..lekin Nivedita ko yaa to khud marna hai ya phir uske badle uske kisee apne ko marna hee hoga…”
“lekin kyo ?, eisa kya kiya Nivedita ne kee bhari jawani mey usse utha rahe ho, abhi wo apni jawan beti se bhee jyada mere Manu ko , aapke guru ke bete ko masti deti hai, khush karti hai..bacha lo,,5-7 saal kee jindgi Nivedita ko aur de do…mai janam bhar tumhari kutia bun kar rahungi..”
Dead body par baithee huee lady ne kaha ,
“kyoki Nivedita aur uske gharwale ne hamare saath, maa ke saath dhoka kiya..humne uske bete kee jaan waapas kee aur unhone humey hee dhoka diya. Baba ne unhe shraap diya kee Nivedita bhari jawani mey vidwa ho jaayegi aur jab Nivedita ko lagne lagega kee wo bahut khush hai tabhi ghut ghut kar uski maut ho jaayegi…baba ka shraap kabhi jhuth nahi hota lekin sirf tumhare liye hum shraap ko utha sakte hai yadi tum khud Nivedita ke badle uski kisee apne ko maut de do..”
Lady ne Champa ko Ujjawal ke bahut hee chhote umra mey bimaar honeye kee baat, dhoka dene kee baat bataaee…”
Lady kee baat khatam huee aur baba Champa ko dhakka dekar khade huye aur kaha,
“Champa, tum kisee kee kutia nahi, maharani ho, ab tumhare haath mey hai kee Nivedita jinda rahe yaa marr jaaye. “
Bolkar baba wonha se andhere mey gaayab ho gaye.
Champa yah sunn kar shockingly amazed ho aurat ko dekhti rahi. Ek dusra aadmi aaya, purey kapde pahne huye aur aurat uss aadmi ke saath aurat apni ritual mey byast ho gaee. Champa wonha se uthna chahti thee lekin escorts ne uthne nahi diya. Wo aurat dead body ke saath apna ritual karti rahi…Champa ko bhee naanga hee rahna para.
Finally , about half an hour before the sunrise aurat ne kaha,
“jaa Champa , ab yanha teri jarurat nahi hai lekin hamne tujhe shakti de dee hai, ye shakti buss kal subah tak (next 24 hours ) tere paas rahegi…Ujjawal, Suchi ya Vaidehi jiske naam par hawan karegi wo marr jaayega aur Nivedita bilkul theek ho jaayegi..din mey jitni baar chahe Manu ke dhakka ko sah paayegi . Apni chhoti beti Pari , beta aur bahu ke saath Mansi ko bhee lakar yanha aashirwaad lene ke liye aa jaa…der mutt kar, juldi jaa . Abhi chali jaa waapas….ye baat, maut ke adla badli kee baad, hamare beech kee baat Manu ke siba kisee aur ko maalum nahi hona chahiye. Aur tujhme bahut shakti hai…shakti ko jagaa kar rakh…jaa abhi…”
Champa ke dekhte dekhte wo couple gaayab ho gaye.
Champa bhee wonha se nikal kar wapas aa gaee. Raaste mey guruji ne puchha to Champa ne itna hee kaha kee Nivedita kee jindgi khatam ho chuki hai.. Wo ab nahi bach sakti. Raste mey kaee baar uske dimaag mey baat aaee kee apni dushman , jaalim aurat Suchi kee hee jaan le lekin Champa jaanti thee kee agar eisa hua to wo apne bete se hamesha ke liye haath dho baithegi..
TANTRA , MANTRA MEY BAHUT SHAKTI HAI..AAJ BHEE USS KHAASH ‘..PITH “ MEY EISE RITUAL HOTEY HAI, CHAMATKAAR HOTEY HAI…LEKIN HUM JAISE ORDINARY AADMIYO KO EISE TANTRA SHAKTI SE DUR HEE RAHNA CHAHIYE.
Manu ko dekhte hee Nivedita uss se ek chhoti bachchee jaisee chipak gaee.
“ Manu , mujhe itna juldi nahi marna, tere kaaran hee jinda rahi raja, mujhe 15 din mey ek baar nahi ek din mey 15 baar pyar kar tab main 15 saal aur jinda rahungi.. “
Dono bahut der tak ek dusre ko daboche khade rahe. Udhar kareeb 6 baje Suchi ashram pahunchi to munna dekhte hee daur kar uske paas aa gaya lekin Pari daur kar apni maa, Champa ke peechhe khadi ho gaee..
Munna ka haath pakde Pari ke paas gaee to Pari ne Champa ka haath jor se pakad liya . Suchi kee oar dekha bhee nahi.
“ iss chhokdi ko dekho ! Bhai to mujhe rula hee raha hai bahan bhee meri jaan lene par tuli hai .. beti , apni maa kee haalat dekh mujhe bahut gussa aa gaya thaa , maaf kar de beti mujhe..kaan pakadti hun.. “
Jaise hee Suchi ne apne dono kaan pakde Pari daurti huee aakar Suchi se chipak gaee.
Pari ke saath reunion honeye ke baad bhee Suchi wonhi Manu ka wait karti rahi . Kareeb 8 baje Mansi ka phone aaya aur Usne daanta kee ab tak ghar waapas aaee kyo nahi .
“ Mansi, aapke bhai kaa wait kar rahi hun , lagta hai Miththu ke saath apna dukh baant raha hai, usse saath lekar aaungi . “
Mansi ne chutki lete huye kaha ,
“ maatha to phod diya ab kya galaa kaatne ka irada hai, juldi se aa jaa, tera dushman sidha yanhi aa gaya tha apni gharwali kee baanho mey. “
Mansi ko bhee khabar nahi thee kee Champa 2 raat baahar rahi.
Sab khane ke liye rokte rahe lekin Pari aur apna saamaan lekar jitna juldi ho sakta thaa ghar wapas aa gaee. Kisee ne nahi toka kee Pari ko saath kyo laaee.
Suchi ne dekha kee Manu ke forehead par 2 inch long cut ke saath kaafi swelling bhee hai. Suchi ko dekh kar Manu ke face par halki muskaan aaee. Wo kuchh bolta uss se pahle Pari ko liye saamne aakar wound par kiss kiya aur dheere se boli,
“ I am extremely sorry. Maaf kar de apni iss pagli ko. “
Suchi ne mouth hataaya to turant Pari ne bhee ghaao par waisa hee kiss kiya aur apne naajuk fingers se ghaao ko sahlaane lagi. Manu ne bibi aur beti ke dono gaalo ko baari baari se chuma. Thodi der baad hee munna ko le Champa aur Mamta bhee aa gaye. Mauka nikaal kar Champa ne Manu se saari baat bataaee. Manu ne shaanti se sab suna aur bola,
“tumhi bolo maa, kya mai apni Suchi ko apne saamne marne du, Ragini bhabhi ko vidhwa /widow honeye du, Mauli kee kya galti hai, usse kyo anaath karu, inki abhi puree jindgi hee baaki hai..meri hee kismat kharab hai…jis se bhee jyada pyar karta hu, Rekha, Puna, Saumya, Sabina, Babli aur ab ye aunty, mujhse dur yaa phir dunia se hee dur chali jaati hai…nahi maa ye maut kee adla badli nahi ho sakti hai..”
Champa ne bhee chain kee saans lee. Apne haatho kisee ka maut nahi chahti thee. Raat ko dono maa beti wapas aashram aa gaye. Nivedita kee maut pukki ho gaee.
Champa ko ek mauka mila Nivedita ko bachane ka lekin dono maa bete ne faisla liya kee ek bimaar aurat ko bachane ke liye kisee dusre kee jindgi nahi le sakte. Dono Nivedita ke jindgi ke din gin-ne lage.
Eise hee din gujarte gaye. Manu college ke baad ka pura time wonhi gujarta thaa. Suchi subah college jaate samay Pari ko ashram mey chhor deti thee aur shaam ko college se aakar Pari ko saath le aati thee. Devyani ke saath Suchitra aunty bhee daily aane lagi. Manu kee dusri khaash maal Leela, Poonam, Saumya, Puna, badi bhabhi bhee aate jaate rahe . Kavita aur uske family waale bhee regularity aane lage. 10 din gujra to aunty ke head ke saare baal/ hairs gaayab ho gaye. Maut ne platform par aane kee pahli ghanti de dee.
Manu ne bald head ko kiss karte huye kaha,
“ aunty, itni khubsurat aap pahle kabhi nahi lagi. “
Aur aunty ne jabaab diya,
“ Manu , tu meri jindgi mey nahi aata to marne mey itni takleef nahi hoti.. abhi mai marna nahi chahti. “
Kaee logo ke saamne Manu aunty ko baanho mey le betahasha chumne laga.
“ raja , sabhi ko room se baahar bhejo. “
Manu ne sabhi ko room se baahar jaane ka ishara kiya, Suchi ko bhee. Sabke baahar jaane ke baad Manu ne khud door ko andar se bolt kiya.
“ aunty , aapke bina mai kya karunga , kuchh nahi kar paaunga , marr jaaunga. “
Lekin aunty ka kuchh aur hee irada thaa.
“ Manu, apne kapde utaro , mujhe ek aakhiri baar pyar karo , please raja pyar karo..”
Aunty ke tests ke pahle Zeenat ko chodne ke baad 21 days se Manu ne kisee ko chodna kya theek se dekha bhee nahi thaa. Manu nahi chahta thaa phir bhee marne waali kee aakhiri wish ko kaise ignore kaise kar sakta thaa !
Khud nanga hua, aunty ko nanga kiya. Aunty ko last time choda thaa uska uss din 21st day hee thaa. Manu ko biswas nahi hua kee ye wohi Manu kee mast favourite lady hai. 60-62 kgs wajan waali aurat 21 dino mey 35 kgs kee ho gaee thee. Manu nahi chodna chahta thaa lekin aunty bachcho jaisa jidd karti rahi, jaisa aunty chahti thee, head se toe tak ek ek ang ko sahlaya, aunty ne Kuchh der lawda chusa to lawda mey kadak-pan bhee aa gaya.
“ Manu , mai yahi sochte sochte marna chahti hun kee tum mujhe pyar kar rahe ho, buss raja ek baar pel do.. Ab mai tere pasand kee nahi rahi to mujhe pyar nahi karoge ? “
“ aunty , meri jindgi mey aap ke jaisee pyari aur pasand kee aurat naa aap se pahle aaee thee aur naa aap ke baad aayegi, mere dil mey jo aapke liye jagah hai wo koi nahi le sakta, Suchi bhee nahi..aap kee kami koi puree nahi kar paayega..”
Manu ye baat kaise bardaast karta kee aunty ab dekhne laayak bhee nahi hai ! Aunty ke sides mey haath rakh knee se legs ko phailaya. Aunty ne lawda ko pakad kar bur se sataaya. Bur hee nahi, pura body cotton ball kee tarah soft ho gaya thaa. Angulio se bur ke phaank ko phailate huye lawda ko andar dabata gaya.. dheere dheere lawda andar jaane laga. Jab pura andar gaya to dheere dheere upar neeche karne laga. 5 minute hee hua hoga kee aunty ne lawda ko apne haath se pakad kar bur ke andar dabaaye huye kaha ,
“ aaj tujhe ek baat bataati hu “
Buss haule se lawda dabaye huye puchha ,
“kaun see baat aunty ?”
“pahle mujhe chodo..”
Manu ne pelna shuru kiya, bilkul dheere dheere aur dus minute baad hee lawda baahar nikaal liya. Aunty ne bhee nahi roka. Jab dono ne kapde pahan liye tab aunty ne Suchi ko bulane kaha ,
“Sirf Suchi, Pari bhee nahi, usse lekar aao.”
Nvedita ko bolne mey takleef ho rahi thee. Manu baahar gaya aur Suchi ko lekar aaya. Manu ne door ko bund kiya. Aunty phir bhee dheere dheere ruk ruk kar boli,
“ Manu park mey tujhse pahli baar mili uss ke 3 din pahle mujhe bahut joro ka chakkar aaya thaa., ghar mey akeli thee, chakkar kha kar gir gaee. Bahut der ke baad hosh aaya thaa. Mujhe maalum thaa kee mujhe cansor hai, Suchi ke babuji ne bataa diya thaa aur unhone yah bhee kaha thaa kee iska koi ilaz nahi hai.,,,chakkar aane ke baad eisa lagaa thaa kee 2-3 din mey marr jaaungi ….mujhe Suchi kee bahut chinta rahti thee…aur garden mey dekhte hee tum mujhe bahut pasand aa gaye..”
Aunty khansne lagi, Manu ne bolne se mana kiya, 2-4 ghoont pani piya aur bolti rahi..
“ mai ne tumhe chai peene ghar nahi bulaya thaa , maine ghar bulaya thaa kee tum Suchi ko dekho, usse pasand karo , uss se shaadi karo..lekin jab tumne kaha kee tum college ka board exam hee de rahe ho mai bahut dukhi ho gaee… lekin tumne mujhe chhu kar, mujhe pyar kar, holi ke din mujhe nanga kar, rang laga kar mujhe naee jindgi de dee, tumhari ek chudai se mujhe naee jindgi milti gaee, tumne mujhe naee jindgi de dee lekin Yamraj ko to apna kaam yaad rahta hai..mujhe khush dekh kar saala mujhse jalne laga…”
Aunty ek minute chup rahi, saans liya aur boli ,
“mere jaane ke baad Suchi ko chhor to nahi doge, wo tumhe jindgi mey, dunia mey har cheej se jyada pyar karti hai.”
Manu ne dhyan diya kee aunty ko bolne mey bahut takleef ho rahi hai . Suchi ke dono haatho ko apne haatho mey le bola,
“ aunty, aap dono se pahle bhee kaha hai aaj phir kahta hun. Agar meri kismat mujhe aapse nahi milati to Suchi bhee shayad meri jindgi mey nahi aati . Suchi ke upar pahli nazar padte hee mere dil , dimaag, maa kali, guruji ne kaha kee yahee ladki meri jindgi kee saans hai Meri jindgi hai, shayad Suchi ko meri jindgi mey aana thaa issee liye aap se meri mulaquat huee. Aaj apne guruji ko gabaah/ witness rakhte huye ye wada karta hu kee jiss samay aapki beti meri jindgi se jaayegi mai bhee ussee samay jindgi ka daaman chhor dunga..mere saath Suchi nahi to phir Suchi ke bina jindgi bhee mujhe nahi chahiye. “
Dono maa beti Manu kee baat sunkar khush huee aur phir mayus bhee kyoki kee Manu jindgi chhorne kee baat kar raha tha. Suchi ne kaha,
“ maa Kali, guruji tumhari saari baat maante hai , maa ke liye kuchh aur saal maang lo..jyada nahi sirf 1-2 saal aur…”
Iss se pahle kee Suchi ke aankho se aansu nikalte Manu ne usse apni baanho mey liya aur room ke baahar aa gaya.
Idhar Nivedita apne maut ka wait kar rahi thee aur udhar saniwaar kee subah subah Komal apni gharwali Aparna ko le ashram pahunchi.
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Bhai niveditha ki chudai tak meine padha tha ..... Par woh ill kaise ho gayi hai .....
Updates sab aache the ..... Bas comments bhi jaldi se nahi Kar paa raha hun aajkal . Updates bhi sayad ek book ki tarah hi chapter ki tarah padh raha hun ......
Aap khud samjhdaar ho aaj latest 2 Update padhkar comments karunga par niveditha ke saath kuch bura mat karna woh Meri favorite character hai .
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Bhai bas itna hi kahunga ki last two updates ne Dil hi cheer diya ..... Dono Updates rotey rotey padhe ab aage padhne ka mann nahi .....
Niveditha Aunty ko mein bhi dil se pyar karta hun ishliye itna dard aur tadap ke saath dukhi sa ho gaya hun .
Meine aapki story ka agla part padha tha ush mei bhi Niveditha Aunty ka jikar tha ki unki mout ho gayi hai , Manu Suchi unko bahot yaad karte hain par itna dardnaak aur dukhi end karke aapne sacch mei rula diya.
Bas itna hi kahunga I hate you for these 2 Updates ..... I hate you ......
I love niveditha Aunty ??
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Loved the update but hated that nivedita has to die........
Felt like an update is missing here as there is no information about suchi backlash and some missing points are there dear bhukhaland please look into it whether there is an update missing or its just my misunderstanding..
the update is so well written down to emotions of everyone but missed reaction of manu and suchi when he got the information about nivedita except that all was well written. and i dont remember what was a betrayal to baba regarding ujjawal disease what nivedita promised which she couldn't give. nivedita was one of my most favorite character in this saga who has loved manu in an unselfish way and always wanted good for him. She loved everyone even mansi knowing she is urmila's, daughter. I can't write enough about her. you gave a nice farewell to her.
it was nice to see manu not taking any names instead of nivedita as it shows maturity of him...
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20-05-2020, 10:52 AM
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SUPER Update AND EXCELLENT Story
but something is missing from last update to this update when mansi told and how she told to suchi and manu about niveditha death, what was their reaction after know niveditha death in one month.
these are missing some points in this update u left these things or we missing any thing here.
Still story is going on super BHUKHALUND
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Nice update
But i think their is 1update missing between last 2 updates
As there is no continuation bitween this 2 updates
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My dear Dmahi, sam-rozer, vkf, ikkushal & Dolly.
Thanks for your lovely comments & following this story. I am extremely sorry for sad state of Nivedita. But , death is enevitanle . Every one will die only time is most important factor.
As vkf & ikkushal has pointed I missed one update. I will post that missed one & last update again so that continuity of story gets maintained .
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NIVEDITA COMPLAINED THAT SHE FEEL WEAKNESS. WITH HELP OF ZEENAT, MANU GOT HER TESTED IN SUCHI’S HOSPITAL. AFTER STUDYING ALL REPORTS DOCTOR SAID THAT NIVEDITA IS IN FINAL STAGE OF CANCER..
Doctors ne aakhiri bomb phora ,
“ madam kee jindgi ab bahut kam hai, muskil se ek mahina. “
Itna bol wo senior doctor baahar chala gaya. Mansi ne Zeenat ka haath pakad liya ,
“ doctor didi, Suchi doctor hai bardaast kar legi lekin hum apne Manu se yah sab kaise kahenge, wo bilkul tut jaayega, aap nahi jaanti , Nivedita aunty ko bahut pyar karta hai , dedh saal se regularly chod raha hai , last Saturday chudai ke dauran ek baar aunty ne kaha kee “ kabhi kabhi bahut kamjori lagti hai “ buss Manu ne aapse test karwane ke liye kaha. Didi, Manu aapki bahut ijjat karta hai , mai to uss se nahi kah sakti , aap ko hee ye news break karna hoga. “
Zeenat ab bahut experienced ho chuki thee . Usne Mansi kee aankho se aansu pochhte huye kaha,
“Manu tumse jyada kisee aur se pyar nahi karta, kisee ko nahi maanta. .. dekho mai kya kar sakti hun lekin Suchi ka kya hoga ? Uske babuji hamare guru theye, unka bhee untimely death hua aur ab maa bhee. Rank holder hai, kanhi uski padhai naa barbaad ho jaaye. Tum ashram jaao, aunty ke pass raho , mai shaam ko Suchi ko saath lekar aaungi. “
Zeenat ne Mansi se disclose kiya kee Nivedita aunty ko untreatable blood cancer hai aur ek mahina se jyada jinda nahi rahengi.. Usne Mansi se ashram jaane ke liye kaha,
“tum ashram jaao , shaam ko mai Suchi ko saath lekar aaungi..”
Zeenat ne sabhi concerned ko warm kiya kee maa kee bimari kee khabar Suchi ko naa ho. Saturday ko Suchi jab practicals ke baad nikli to Zeenat bhee saath ho lee yah bolkar kee aunty ko dekhna hai . Udhar Manu bilkul hee badal gaya. Aunty hospital se wapas aaee tabse regular college kiya , saare period kiye lekin kisee se koi baat nahi kee , apne dosto se bhee nahi. Uss din bhee Manu 2 baje ke pahle hee ashram pahunch aunty ke paas baith gaya. Phir Mansi aur Manjari aaee aur baad mey Zeenat aur Suchi saath aaye.
Ashram ke baahar Manu ne kisee ko aunty kee bimari ke baare mey nahi bataya thaa. Lekin Lalita ne phone kar Leela ko bataa diya thaa. Leela se Devyani , badi bhabhi aur Puna ko khabar huee. Leela apni maa ke saath ek baar dekhne aaee lekin Devyani daily shaam ko aakar ek- dedh ghanta baithti thee.
Iss beech Manu apni jimmedari nahi bhula thaa. Seema aur Sneha kee bahan Neha ke admission ka jimma Lalita madam ko de diya. Lalita madam ne bhee dono ladkiyo ka admission unki choice ke subjects mey karwa diya. Agle Monday se first year ka class start hona thaa. Seema ne English hons liya aur Neha ne Chemistry hons. Guruji ne Seema ke rahne ke liye ek ghar theek kar diya thaa lekin Seema ne hostel mey rahne kee jidd kar dee. Lalita madam ke kaaran hostel bhee allot ho gaya. Mansi ne kaee baar Seema se apne saath rahne kaha lekin Seema ka ek hee jabaab thaa ,
“ Didi, aapke saath, aapke saaye mey rahne se badhia mere liye kuchh bhee nahi ho sakta lekin mai dekhna chahti hun kee mai akele rah sakti hun kee nahi , haa pahle kee tarah mera saara kharcha aapko hee uthana parega Manu ya guruji nahi . “
Mansi khub badhia se jaanti thee kee Seema kyo uske saath nahi rahna chahti , Mansi aur Manjari ke sexual equation ko disturb nahi karna chahti thee. Agli shaam Seema hostel jaane waali thee. Neha bhee ussee samay aane wali thee. Lekin Manu ko abhi aunty ke alawa aur koi dikhai nahi de raha thaa.
Raste mey Zeenat ne decide kiya kee Manu aur Suchi ko ek saath hee ye khabar denge. Hospital se nikalte samay Mansi ne phone kar diya thaa , kuchh hee der baad Ujjwal bhee wife aur beta ke saath aa gaya.
Zeenat ko dekhte hee sabhi ne test reports kee baat kee .. Zeenat ne kaha,
“ khoon kee kami hai , aur kuchh nahi , Ilaj shuru ho gaya hai , juldi theek ho jaayengi . “
Itna bol Zeenat room se nikalne lagi to Mansi ne Ujjwal ko ishara kiya . Thodi der baad teeno ek dusre room mey theye. Zeenat ne sab report Ujjwal ko diya. Usne ek ek report dekha aur chehra shukhta gaya, kabhi doctor ko dekhta to kabhi report ko .
“ doctor ( Zeenat ) , meri Maa ko ye bimari kaise ho sakti hai , wo to kitna khush rahti hai, hasne, hasaane waali hai .. “
Ek ghunt paani peekar bola ,
“ Mansi , dekh liya naa , yah sab tere bhai ke kaaran hua hai usne meri maa ko , sabhi ko barbaad kiya.. “
Wo aur kuchh bolta Zeenat ne tok diya,
“ infact, agar Manu aapki maa ke jindgi mey nahi aata to aapki Maa kab kee marr chuki hoti. Sirf Manu aur uske pyar ke kaaran hee aunty ko dedh-do saal kee extra jindgi mili hai . “
Kuchh der chupchap Zeenat ko dekhta raha . Doctor ke puchhne par bataya kee babuji ke marne ke baad maa ko bahut chakkar aane lage tha..Ilaj hua to theek ho gaee. Manu pahli baar ghar aaya uss se 2-3 din pahle hee phir chakkar kha kar behosh ho gaee thee. Lekin Manu se milne ke baad bahut hee khush rahne lagi . Pahle babuji aur ab maa, Mansi hum anath ho jaayenge. “
“ kaun anath ho jaayega ? “
Bolte huye Suchi andar ghusi. Saamne sab report bikhre thhey , bhai ke aankho mey aansu. Ek -do report uthakar dekha aur phati aankho se sabko dekhne lagi. Koi kuchh nahi bola . Kuchh der baad Manu unn sabko dhundte huye room mey ghusa to Mansi ne uth kar door ko andar se bolt kar diya. Manu ko dekhte hee Suchi ne uske upar mukko kee baarish kar dee.. aur ant -sant bakne lagi ..
“ ab tujhe chaiin aayega, Maa ko maar hee diya naa .. kuchh dino mey bhabhi ko maar daal aur phir mujhe .. kaun see dushmani nikal raha hai hum sabse . Humne tumhara kya bigaara hai .. Mansi iss harami ko meri aankho se dur karo , isse bol kee kabhi mere saamne naa aaye , kabhi aaya mai toh uske saare khaandan, maa,baap, bahan , Pari sabki jaan le lungi .. “
Manu usse apni baanho mey lene kee koshish kar raha thaa lekin Suchi ne itni jor se dhakka diya kee uska maatha almirah se takraya. Koi forehead se nikalte khoon ko dekhta uss se pahle Manu door khol baahar nikal gaya. Bahut dard ho raha tha, Kitchen mey gaya. Gulabo ne bathe khoon ko dekha ,
“ bhabhi kuchh mut puchho buss khoon saaf kar do, Diwal se takra gaya thaa.. “
Gulabo ne detoll se saaf kar ointment laga diya, bandage bhee laga diya, tab phir Manu aunty ke paas jaakar baith gaya. Sabhi ne puchha lekin Manu ne nahi kaha kee chot kaise lagi. Udhar Zeenat ne Suchi ko saari baate bataaee aur kaha,
“ Suchi , in fact tum sabko Manu ka thanks karna chahiye kee sirf uske kaaran hee aunty ab tak jinda hai agar Manu unki jindgi mey nahi aaya hota to chakkar aane ke mahina ke andar hee marr gaee hoti. Manu sabhi ko jindgi deta hai , kisee ko maut nahi., Aunty ab shayad ek mahine se jyada jinda nahi rahengi. “
Zeenat ne bimari ke baarey mey detail se bataya. Yah bhee kaha kee iss bimari ka abhi tak koi ilaaj nahi nikaal paaya hai . Tum loag bahut kismat waale ho kee aunty itne samay tak tum logo ke saath rahi nahi to iss bimari mey 99.99% loag 5 saal ke andar marr jaate hai.,aunty ne to 7 saal tak bardaast kiya.
Mansi ne bahut roka , kaha kee yanha aunty kee dekhbhaal ke liye bahut loag hai, Champa hai, Mamta hai lekin Ujjawal nahi maana.
“ maa ko marna hee hai to apne hee ghar mey saans chhoregi..”
Suchi ne bhee bhai ka saath diya. Zeenat ne hospital phone kiya aur ek ghante ke andar ambulance aur saath mey 2 nurse aa gaee. Manu buss dekhta raha. Aunty ke saath Suchi aur Ujjawal bhee chale gaye. Suchi ko jaate dekh Pari khub jor jor se roney lagi. Manu aur Suchi ne ek dusre ko nahi toka. Ambulance ke jaane ke baad Mansi ne Manu ko bahut samjhaya, dilasa diya , daanta bhee lekin Manu chup ka chup hee raha. Pari rotey rotey apne baap kee goad mey soo gaee thee.
Mansi aur Zeenat car se Suchi ke ghar gaye. Wonha medicines, diets ke baare mey saare instruction de kar aur Suchi ke saath saath Ujjawal aur Ragini ko samjha kar kee Suchi apni class naa miss kare , Zeenat aur Mansi wapas aa gaye. Zeenat ko Mansi apne ghar le gaee , khilaya, pilaya, Babli ke baare mey sab kuchh bataya .. Zeenat raat ko ussee makaan mey rahi. Aalishan ghar aur Mansi kee thaat baat dekh , CM aur Home minister se directly baat karte dekh Zeenat shocked see rah gaee.
Suchi bhee apni maa ke saath apne ghar chali gaee. Idhar bahut der tak ashram mey sabhi chup chaap saath baithe rahe. Guruji ne hee chuppi todi,
“ janm aur mritue apne haath mey nahi hai , koi nahi jaanta kiski maut kab aayegi ..iss liye dukh karne se , haath par haath dhar baithne se kuchh nahi hoga..sab bhagwan se prarthna karo kee Nivedita bilkul theek ho jaaye, juldi theek ho jaaye..Prarthna mey bahut shakti hai, bahut chamatkaar huye hai , bahut ho sakte hai..”
Dheere dheere sabhi , ek Champa aur Manu ko chhor kar, soney chale gaye. Pari apne baap Manu kee godi mey hee soo rahi thee. Champa dekh rahi thee kee jabse Nivedita hospital se wapas aaee hai Manu bilkul badal gaya hai, kisee se theek se baat nahi karta , khaata peeta nahi..Manu ne bataaya nahi lekin maathe ka chot dekh kar Champa ko laga kee yah chot jarur Suchi ne hee pahunchaee hai..Manu eisa udas , khoya khoya tab bhee nahi hua thaa jab Rekha shaadi kar pahli baar sasural gaee thee ya jab Babli mari thee. Usne Manu ko khush dekhne ke liye kaha,
“ beta, hum kisee kee maut ko nahi rok sakte lekin apna dil to bahla sakte hai, chal room mey masti maarte hai, chudai karte hai. “
Bolte huye jhatke se aanchal neeche gira kar blouse ke buttons ko ek jhatke mey khol diya. Champa kee spring jaisee chuchia aag ke goley jaisaa garmi phenkte huye Manu ke aankho ke saamne thee. Lekin Manu ko abhi koi , kisee kee choot ya chuchi nahi apni Nivedita aunty puree kee puree chahiye thee.
“maa, tujhe apne bade guruji yaad hai ?”
Chuchi , chudai kee baat naa kar achanak Manu ne bade guruji kee baat yaad uthaaee to Champa chaunk gaee. Phir bhee blouse ko body ke baahar nikaala, saari saaya khol nangi ho gaee. Bur aur chuchi ko sahlaate huye boli ,
“bade guruji ko kaise bhul sakti hu, saikdo logo ke saamne hum dono, maa-bete ko chudwaya, humey itni pyari beti dee, humey aashiwad diya, shakti dee…”
“ to maa tum apni shakti ka upyog kab karogi…jub hum tum marr jaayenge tab. Chal room mey .”
Bolte huye Pari ko godi liye huye utha aur apne room kee oar badha. Champa bhee nangi hee uske peechhe peechhe room mey aa gaee. Door ko push kiya. Manu ne beti ko bed par sulaya aur maa ko apni godi mey bitha kar rakha,
“maa, guruji ko yaad karo, unhone kya shakti dee thee usse yaad karo, apni shakti ko aajmao aur meri pyari Nivedita aunty ko bacha lo …aunty ko bacha lo, mujhe bacha lo..”
Champa godi se uthkar saamne khadi ho gaee. Bur bete ke aankho ke saamne thee lekin lawda mey koi kadak-pan nahi aaya thaa. Manu aage bola,
“maa, jab se mujhe aunty kee tabiyat kharab honeye ka doubt hua tabse mai roj maa kali se, bade guruji se prarthna karta hu, rotaa hu, khushamad karta hu, ye bhee kahta hu kee aunty ko bilkul thee kar meri jaan le lo lekin bhagwan meri baat nahi sunn rahe, guruji koi jabaab nahi de rahe hai..yaad hai tuney prarthna kee thee to meri Mansi virgin ho gaee, maine kaha to Saumya virgin ho gaee, bhagwan se, guruji se maanga to Suchi ko meri gharwali bana diya, hum dono ko Pari jaisee beti dee, tere kahne par guruji ne tere gharwala (munim ) ko naamard se dubara maha chuddakkar bana diya…maa bade guruji , kali maa meri baat nahi sunn rahe tu bolegi to jarur sunenge, tu apni shakti se meri aunty ko theek kar de, apne jaisee jawani de de…ab Suchi bolegi to uski maa ko kabhi nahi chodunga lekin maa aunty ko theek kar de, jawan bana de…”
Manu ka bolna khatam hua aur Champa ne kaha,
“abhi mandir chal, abhi turant…Pari ko utha le…”
Manu ek minute ke liye bhee nahi jhijka..Pari ko godi uthaya. Manu ne toka lekin Champa nangi hee baahar aa gaee. Manu ne kaha kee guruji ko uthate hai lekin Champa ne mana kar diya.
Bilkul dheere se door khola aur Pari ko godi mey liye dono neeche aa gaye. Neeche 2 guards theye..wey dekh kar chaunke. Campa ne kaha ,
“tum dono ke alawa kisee aur ko pata chala kee mai eise hee baahar aaee hu to maa Kali, tum dono ke saath tumhare ghar ke sabhi logo ko maar daalegi…tum dono ko Kali maa kee kasam kisee se kuchh kaha to…”
Raat ke 12 buj rahe theye. Teeno main temple ke gate par aaye. Wonha bhee 2 guards theye unhe bhee dara dhamka kar main gate khulwaya aur dono main staue ke saamne aaye. Uss dhupp andhere mey statue kee bright big eyes pole star kee tarah chamak rahi thee. Champa wonhi statue ke saamne baith gaee…Manu beti ko godi liye bagal mey haath jor kar baith gaya. Champa ne 2 ghante se jyada pray kiya phir uth khadi huee,
“beta, Maa ne mujhe “…..pith” jaane kaa hukm diya hai ..mujhe akele jaana hoga wo bhee abhi turant…ashram kee gaadi ko jaane ke liye taiyar karo…mai Pari ko lekar upar jaati hu… “
Champa jis ‘…peeth “ ka naam le rahi thee wo kolkatta se 220 km dur, 5-6 ghante ke distance par tha. Manu apni Nivedita aunty ko bachane ke liye kuchh bhee karne ko taiyar thaa. Manu udhar driver ko dhundhne gaya aur Champa beti ko lekar upar aa gaee. Waise hee guruji ke door par knock kiya. Kuchh knock ke baad Gulabo ne door khola…
“Gulabo, guruji ko juldi uthao , mujhe abhi baahar jaana hai.”
Champa ko nanga dekh Gulabo jaise hypnotised ho gaee thee ..usne guruji ko uthaya aur boli,
“bade guruji ne mujhe hukm diya hai kee mai abhi “…..Pith “ jaaun, bhairav baba se Nivedita kee jindgi maangu…mujhe abhi jaana hai akele…”
Manu kee tarah guruji kee nazar bhee Champa kee kamsin mast jawani par nahi gaee. Unhe laga kee Champa ko wo pahli baar dekh rahe hai …unhone itna hee kaha,
“tum akele nahi , mai bhee saath jaaunga…”
Champa ne kitna kaha kee usse akele jaana hai lekin guruji nahi maane. Champa ne sirf ek saari lapeta aur aadhe ghante ke andar Champa aur guruji wonha se nikal gaye..Manu, Gulabo aur jo guards aur dusre theye unhe warn kiya kee kisee ko khabar naa ho kee dono kanha gaye hai…
Subah sunrise ke saath Champa kee car ek jhopri /hut ke saamne ruki. Bhairav baba baahar hee theye Champa ko car se utarte dekhte hee kaha,
“ Champa, mai kab se tumhara intazaar kar raha hu…apne guruji ko saath laane kee koi jarurat nahi thee yanha tumhe koi khatra nahi hai…lekin abhi ab subah ho gaee, din bhar tum dono aaram karo, maa kee sewa karo , raat mey ‘Jogan’ tujhe jagah par pahuncha degi…”
Wo baba wonha se chale gaye. Koi upay nahi thaa. Dono purey din bahut bechain rahe. Guruji yanha aksar aate theye aur yanha ke sabhi pandit, pujari inhe khub badhia se jaante theye..guruji naa bhee hotey to Champa kee khubsurti aur jawani ke kaaran uski khaatirdaari mey koi kami nahi rahti.
Yah sunday morning thaa. Raat mey bhee aur din ( sunday ) mey bhee Suchi wait karti rahi kee Manu aayega lekin Manu apni aunty ke paas nahi gaya. Udhar aunty baar baar ‘ Manu, Manu, “ ka naam japti rahi.,Ragini ne , Ujjawal ne kaee baar ashram phone kiya kee maa Manu ko bula rahi hai lekin Manu nahi gaya. Purey samay apni Pari ke saath hee raha. Sunday kareeb 1 buje Suchi ne knock sunkar door khola iss hope se kee Manu hoga lekin Manu nahi thaa.
“ uncle, aunty aap loag yanha shahar mey..Mansi..”
Ye aunty Mansi kee maa Urmila thee jo apne husband ke saath gaaon se directly yanha aaye. Mansi ne shaam ko phone kar khabar kar dee thee. Urmila apni sautan ko dekhne aa gaee . Mansi ko baad mey Maya ne phone kiya kee maalkin Kolkata ke liye nikal gaee hai.
Suchi ko galey lagaya aur maa ke paas le chalne ke liye kaha. Aunty bed par bedrest ke sahare baithee thee. Urmila room mey ghusi aur 7-8 dino ke baad aunty ke chehre par muskaan aaee. Dono ne ek dusre ko 20-21 saal ke baad dekha thaa lekin pahchan mey koi bhee dikkat nahi huee.
“ dekh lo bahu, meri sautan aa gaee mujje maarne, ab to Manu kya bhagwan bhee chahenge to iss daayan se mujhe nahi bacha paayenge.. aaja Urmi, meri sautan.,tujhe dekhne ke liye hee ab tak jinda hun..nahi to jis din Suchi ka baap gaya mai bhee chali jaati. “
Aunty ne haath aage badhaya galey milne ke liye lekin Urmila ne aunty ke dono feet pakad apna head feet par rakh diya. Urmila ke aansuo se aunty ke feet bhing gaye. Urmila ne kabhi kisee se kaha nahi, kya kahti lekin usse guilt feeling thee kee uske kaaran hee Vikram ne Nivedita ko chhor diya thaa.
Urmila aur Nivedita ne 20-21 saal baad ek dusre ko dekha thaa lekin dono ne apni sautan ko turant pahchan liya. Nivedita to shaadi hotey hee Urmila ko bhul gaee thee. Sirf ek daulat chhor Nivedita ka husband har cheej mey Vikram se badhia thaa. Lekin Urmila kabhi Nivedita ko nahi bhul paaee thee aur sirf Nivedita se milne ke darr se 120 saal Kolkatta wapas nahi aaee aur ab ussee Nivedita ke kaaran, apni jaan aur Mansi kee fikra kiye bina Kolkatta wapas aa gaee. .
“ dekh le Suchi tere gharwala kee ye bhee ek randi hai, sach bol to hamare Manu ko issee daayan ne bigaara hai, barbaad kiya hai, doctor ne kaha hai kee ek mahina aur Manu se chudwa sakti hun lekin ye saali rula rula kar mujhe aaj hee maar daalegi…. “
Aunty khud jhuki aur Urmila ke baalo ko khichne lagi . Urmila ne head upar uthaya aur itne teji se dono galey miley kee sab dekhte hee rah gaye. Ragini apne saath sabhi ko , nurse ko bhee lekar baahar aa gaee. Kareeb 15 minute baad dono ek dusre ko sahara diye huye baahar aaye. Nurse ne aunty ko pakadna chaha to aunty ne haath jhatak diya.
“ meri bahan aa gaee hai ab mujhe tum logo kee jarurat nahi hai . Suchi bete, Manu ko phone kar bol kee uski randi Urmi aaee hai , juldi bula usse nahi to mai aur bhee juldi marr jaaungi. “
Suchi ne to nahi Ragini ne phone kiya lekin Manu line par aaya hee nahi . Ek taraf Suchi guilty feel kar rahi thee aur dusri taraf Manu ko dukh thaa kee Suchi ne uske aur aunty ke liye Manu ke pyar ko nahi pahchana. Shaam ko Seema ko hostel mey set karne ke baad Mansi aur Manjari aa gaye. Khana khane ke baad Mansi ne bahut jidd kee lekin Urmila ne kaha,
“ mai yanhi apni Didi ke saath rahkar unki sewa karungi .. yanha ab kisee nurse kee jarurat nahi , mai sab dekh lungi. “
Urmila nahi gaee , apne social baap ko lekar Mansi chali gaee. .
Agle din Mansi aur Manjari subah 8 baje hee aa gaye. Suchi college nahi jaana chahti thee lekin jab Nivedita ne kaha kee,
“ jab tak tu college se wapas nahi aayegi mai nahi marungi, waisee bhee sautan aa gaee hai to itni juldi nahi marungi , padhai barbaad kar Manu ko aur dukhi mut kar . Aur haa daamad ji ( Manu ) ke bina ghar wapas mut aana. “ .
Suchi bhee jaanti thee kee class miss karne se padhai ka kitna nuksaan hoga. Sabhi apne apne college gaye. Recess mey director khud Suchi ke paas aaya aur maa ke baare mey puchh-taachh kee. Director actually Suchi se Mansi ke baare mey baat karna chahta thaa lekin Suchi kee haalat dekh uski himmat nahi huee.
Manu bhee college gaya. Recess mey Seema aur Neha dono ko dhundhkar saath canteen laaya aur khilaya pilaya. Kisee ko kuchh bolne kee jarurat nahi padi , Seema aur Neha dono mey se kisee kee koi ragging nahi huee. Kavita ne kaee baar Manu ke saamne aane kee koshish kee lekin Manu ne koi mauka nahi diya.
Udhar din mey kareeb 2 baje Champa aur guruji ashram wapas aa gaye. Dono ke chehre par maayusi thee.
College khatam hua to Manu car se ashram aaya aur car ko Suchi ke college se laane bheja.
Manu aur Champa ko akele chhor sabhi wonha se hatt gaye. Champa ne door bund kiya aur Manu se kaha ,
“teri Nivedita aunty puree tarah se theek ho jaayegi, koi bimaari nahi rahegi. “
Itna sunte hee Manu ne maa ko godi mey utha liya aur naachne lagaa…lekin maa ka agla sentence sunkar kee,
“Lekin Nivedita ke badle uske apne khoon , Ujjawal, Suchi Ya Nivedita ka koi apna saga bhai , bahan hai to uss mey se kisee ek kee jaan jaayegi…”
Manu ek butt / statue saa maa ko dekhta raha…
“idhar kisee ek kee maut hogi aur udhar Nivedita bilkul theek ho jaayegi…15 din mey ek baar nahi ek din mey 15 baar tumse chudwayegi…bolo kiske naam par havan du Suchi, Ujjawal ya Nivedita kee sagi bahan , Mauli kee maa..tum agar unke kisee aur sage ko jaante ho to uska naam batao. “
Maa ko 2 minute ghurta raha phir bina boley wonha se nikal gaya aur Nivedita ke paas pahuncha. Idhar jab kareeb ek ghante ke baad Suchi ashram pahunchi to usse kisee ne pataa nahi chalne diya kee Champa 2 raat aashram mey nahi thee.
Champa aur bhee shakti lekar lauti. Usne Manu se kaha kee Nivedita bilkul theek ho jaayegi lekin uss ke badle Nivedita ke kisee sage , Suchi, Ujjawal ya phir bahan (mother of Mauli ) ko marna hoga.
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MANU KE KAHNE PAR KALI MAA SE AASHIRWAAD LE GURUJI KE SAATH CHAMPA EK KHAASH JAGAH WANHA SE AAKAR CHAMPA NE MANU SE KAHA,
“teri Nivedita aunty puree tarah se theek ho jaayegi, koi bimaari nahi rahegi. “
“Lekin Nivedita ke badle uske apne khoon , Ujjawal, Suchi Ya Nivedita ka koi apna saga bhai , bahan hai to uss mey se kisee ek kee jaan jaayegi…”
Manu ek butt / statue saa maa ko dekhta raha…
“idhar kisee ek kee maut hogi aur udhar Nivedita bilkul theek ho jaayegi…15 din mey ek baar nahi ek din mey 15 baar tumse chudwayegi…bolo kiske naam par havan du Suchi, Ujjawal ya Nivedita kee sagi bahan , Mauli kee maa..tum agar unke kisee aur sage ko jaante ho to uska naam batao. “
{ …din bhar Champa aur guruji ka bahut swagat hua, bade, famous logo se mulaquat huee, sabhi ne apne apne ghar invite kiya. Raat kareeb 11.30 baje 2 lady Champa ko apne saath le gaee. Guruji bhee aana chaahte theye lekin unhe mana kar diya gaya. Champa ko ek nadi/ river ke ghat par laaya gaya. Wonha pahunchte hee Champa ko sab kuchh jaana pahchana laga. Ek dead body ke upar ek 35 saal ke aas paas kee lady, bilkul nude baithi thye. Bagal mey bhairav baba bhee aankh mund kar nange baithe theye. …Champa ne apna doubt kaha to lady ne kaha,
“haa, kareeb 2 saal pahle tum yanha aaee thee, tumhari ye sadaa bahaar jawani tumhe yanhi mili thi…har saal yanha saikdo aurate aati hai tumhari jaisee khubsurti aur jawani ke liye lekin tumhare siba koi bhee ‘baba’ ko khus nahi kar paaee…”
Champa ko mauka mila,
“ phir baba se kahiye kee mere bete kee premika ko bilkul swasth /healthy kar de, mere jaisa jawani de de…”
Aurat ne jabaab diya ,
“tum aur tumhara beta Manu jo chahte hai wo ho sakta hai, Nivedita jindgi bhar Manu ko aurat ka shukh deti rahegi lekin uske liye Nivedita ko ek qurwani deni hogi…”
Aurat sabka naam eise le rahi thee jaise kee sabko badhia se jaanti ho..
“kaisee qurwani, kiski qurwani..”
Aurat ne promptly kaha,
“Nivedita ke apne khoon mey se kisee ek kee qurwani deni hogi…agar tum iss baat ke liye taiyar ho to Nivedita bikul thee ho jaayegi . Tum jiske naam par havan karogi uski maut ho jayegi aur uske marte hee Nivedita bilkul theek ho jaayegi, Manu jis din usse chodna chhorega uske ek mahina baad marr jaayegi..
Champa ko kaato to khoon nahi. Thodi der baad dheere se boli,
“meri jaan le kar Nivedita ko bacha do. “
Aurat ne phir 2 took jabaab diya,
“tum kya, Manu bhee agar jaan dega to Nivedita nahi bachegi…uska apna ya apne kisee kaa khoon , beta, beti, bhai bahan ke maut ke baad hee Nivedita bachegi…”
Champa ne apna saari utaar phenka, nangi hee aankh moonde huye baba se lipat gaee. Boli,
“ baba, mai jindgi bhar aapki gulami karungi, din raat eise hee nangi rahungi, aapki , maa kee sewa karungi, mere bete kee Nivedita ko bacha lijiye, Manu ko jaisee Nivedita pyari hai uss se jyada pyar Suchi se karta hai..aur koi maa nahi chahegi kee usko bachane ke liye uske bachche apni jaan de. “
Baba ne Champa ko godi se nahi uthaya. Baba ne kaha,
“ Nivedita kee ek sagi bahan bhee hai, Manu kee Mauli kee maa ‘Vaidehi Nivedita kee sagi chhoti bahan hai..uski jaan ke badle bhee Nivedita theek ho jaayegi. “
Champa ghumkar baba ke godi mey , bur ko lund se ragadte huye, chuchio ko baba ke chest se dabaye huye boli..
“ baba, jab Nivedita theek ho sakti hai to phir kisee aur kee jindgi liye bina theek kar do, badle mey mujhe apne paas rakh lo, bete se chudwate chudwate mai bhee thak chuki hu, yanha aap jis se kahenge uski sewa karungi..”
Itna par bhee baba ne Champa ko chodne mey koi interest nahi dikhaya. Wey bole,
“ tum dono maa beti ( Champa , Mamta ) hamare guruji kee maal ho, peechhli baar sadhna / rituals ke liye tumhe bahut choda, bahut bhoga , ek –do baar nahi, lagaatar saat din raat tum yanhi nangi chudwati rahi, hum chodte rahe lekin wo ek kaam thaa tumhe eisee jawani dene ke liye lekin ab hum tumhe nahi chod sakte ..aur Manu , apne bete ke saath tumhe jindgi bhar chudwana hai …naa itni juldi tum marogi aur naa Manu..lekin Nivedita ko yaa to khud marna hai ya phir uske badle uske kisee apne ko marna hee hoga…”
“lekin kyo ?, eisa kya kiya Nivedita ne kee bhari jawani mey usse utha rahe ho, abhi wo apni jawan beti se bhee jyada mere Manu ko , aapke guru ke bete ko masti deti hai, khush karti hai..bacha lo,,5-7 saal kee jindgi Nivedita ko aur de do…mai janam bhar tumhari kutia bun kar rahungi..”
Dead body par baithee huee lady ne kaha ,
“kyoki Nivedita aur uske gharwale ne hamare saath, maa ke saath dhoka kiya..humne uske bete kee jaan waapas kee aur unhone humey hee dhoka diya. Baba ne unhe shraap diya kee Nivedita bhari jawani mey vidwa ho jaayegi aur jab Nivedita ko lagne lagega kee wo bahut khush hai tabhi ghut ghut kar uski maut ho jaayegi…baba ka shraap kabhi jhuth nahi hota lekin sirf tumhare liye hum shraap ko utha sakte hai yadi tum khud Nivedita ke badle uski kisee apne ko maut de do..”
Lady ne Champa ko Ujjawal ke bahut hee chhote umra mey bimaar honeye kee baat, dhoka dene kee baat bataaee…”
Lady kee baat khatam huee aur baba Champa ko dhakka dekar khade huye aur kaha,
“Champa, tum kisee kee kutia nahi, maharani ho, ab tumhare haath mey hai kee Nivedita jinda rahe yaa marr jaaye. “
Bolkar baba wonha se andhere mey gaayab ho gaye.
Champa yah sunn kar shockingly amazed ho aurat ko dekhti rahi. Ek dusra aadmi aaya, purey kapde pahne huye aur aurat uss aadmi ke saath aurat apni ritual mey byast ho gaee. Champa wonha se uthna chahti thee lekin escorts ne uthne nahi diya. Wo aurat dead body ke saath apna ritual karti rahi…Champa ko bhee naanga hee rahna para.
Finally , about half an hour before the sunrise aurat ne kaha,
“jaa Champa , ab yanha teri jarurat nahi hai lekin hamne tujhe shakti de dee hai, ye shakti buss kal subah tak (next 24 hours ) tere paas rahegi…Ujjawal, Suchi ya Vaidehi jiske naam par hawan karegi wo marr jaayega aur Nivedita bilkul theek ho jaayegi..din mey jitni baar chahe Manu ke dhakka ko sah paayegi . Apni chhoti beti Pari , beta aur bahu ke saath Mansi ko bhee lakar yanha aashirwaad lene ke liye aa jaa…der mutt kar, juldi jaa . Abhi chali jaa waapas….ye baat, maut ke adla badli kee baad, hamare beech kee baat Manu ke siba kisee aur ko maalum nahi hona chahiye. Aur tujhme bahut shakti hai…shakti ko jagaa kar rakh…jaa abhi…”
Champa ke dekhte dekhte wo couple gaayab ho gaye.
Champa bhee wonha se nikal kar wapas aa gaee. Raaste mey guruji ne puchha to Champa ne itna hee kaha kee Nivedita kee jindgi khatam ho chuki hai.. Wo ab nahi bach sakti. Raste mey kaee baar uske dimaag mey baat aaee kee apni dushman , jaalim aurat Suchi kee hee jaan le lekin Champa jaanti thee kee agar eisa hua to wo apne bete se hamesha ke liye haath dho baithegi..
TANTRA , MANTRA MEY BAHUT SHAKTI HAI..AAJ BHEE USS KHAASH ‘..PITH “ MEY EISE RITUAL HOTEY HAI, CHAMATKAAR HOTEY HAI…LEKIN HUM JAISE ORDINARY AADMIYO KO EISE TANTRA SHAKTI SE DUR HEE RAHNA CHAHIYE.
Manu ko dekhte hee Nivedita uss se ek chhoti bachchee jaisee chipak gaee.
“ Manu , mujhe itna juldi nahi marna, tere kaaran hee jinda rahi raja, mujhe 15 din mey ek baar nahi ek din mey 15 baar pyar kar tab main 15 saal aur jinda rahungi.. “
Dono bahut der tak ek dusre ko daboche khade rahe. Udhar kareeb 6 baje Suchi ashram pahunchi to munna dekhte hee daur kar uske paas aa gaya lekin Pari daur kar apni maa, Champa ke peechhe khadi ho gaee..
Munna ka haath pakde Pari ke paas gaee to Pari ne Champa ka haath jor se pakad liya . Suchi kee oar dekha bhee nahi.
“ iss chhokdi ko dekho ! Bhai to mujhe rula hee raha hai bahan bhee meri jaan lene par tuli hai .. beti , apni maa kee haalat dekh mujhe bahut gussa aa gaya thaa , maaf kar de beti mujhe..kaan pakadti hun.. “
Jaise hee Suchi ne apne dono kaan pakde Pari daurti huee aakar Suchi se chipak gaee.
Pari ke saath reunion honeye ke baad bhee Suchi wonhi Manu ka wait karti rahi . Kareeb 8 baje Mansi ka phone aaya aur Usne daanta kee ab tak ghar waapas aaee kyo nahi .
“ Mansi, aapke bhai kaa wait kar rahi hun , lagta hai Miththu ke saath apna dukh baant raha hai, usse saath lekar aaungi . “
Mansi ne chutki lete huye kaha ,
“ maatha to phod diya ab kya galaa kaatne ka irada hai, juldi se aa jaa, tera dushman sidha yanhi aa gaya tha apni gharwali kee baanho mey. “
Mansi ko bhee khabar nahi thee kee Champa 2 raat baahar rahi.
Sab khane ke liye rokte rahe lekin Pari aur apna saamaan lekar jitna juldi ho sakta thaa ghar wapas aa gaee. Kisee ne nahi toka kee Pari ko saath kyo laaee.
Suchi ne dekha kee Manu ke forehead par 2 inch long cut ke saath kaafi swelling bhee hai. Suchi ko dekh kar Manu ke face par halki muskaan aaee. Wo kuchh bolta uss se pahle Pari ko liye saamne aakar wound par kiss kiya aur dheere se boli,
“ I am extremely sorry. Maaf kar de apni iss pagli ko. “
Suchi ne mouth hataaya to turant Pari ne bhee ghaao par waisa hee kiss kiya aur apne naajuk fingers se ghaao ko sahlaane lagi. Manu ne bibi aur beti ke dono gaalo ko baari baari se chuma. Thodi der baad hee munna ko le Champa aur Mamta bhee aa gaye. Mauka nikaal kar Champa ne Manu se saari baat bataaee. Manu ne shaanti se sab suna aur bola,
“tumhi bolo maa, kya mai apni Suchi ko apne saamne marne du, Ragini bhabhi ko vidhwa /widow honeye du, Mauli kee kya galti hai, usse kyo anaath karu, inki abhi puree jindgi hee baaki hai..meri hee kismat kharab hai…jis se bhee jyada pyar karta hu, Rekha, Puna, Saumya, Sabina, Babli aur ab ye aunty, mujhse dur yaa phir dunia se hee dur chali jaati hai…nahi maa ye maut kee adla badli nahi ho sakti hai..”
Champa ne bhee chain kee saans lee. Apne haatho kisee ka maut nahi chahti thee. Raat ko dono maa beti wapas aashram aa gaye. Nivedita kee maut pukki ho gaee.
Champa ko ek mauka mila Nivedita ko bachane ka lekin dono maa bete ne faisla liya kee ek bimaar aurat ko bachane ke liye kisee dusre kee jindgi nahi le sakte. Dono Nivedita ke jindgi ke din gin-ne lage.
Eise hee din gujarte gaye. Manu college ke baad ka pura time wonhi gujarta thaa. Suchi subah college jaate samay Pari ko ashram mey chhor deti thee aur shaam ko college se aakar Pari ko saath le aati thee. Devyani ke saath Suchitra aunty bhee daily aane lagi. Manu kee dusri khaash maal Leela, Poonam, Saumya, Puna, badi bhabhi bhee aate jaate rahe . Kavita aur uske family waale bhee regularity aane lage. 10 din gujra to aunty ke head ke saare baal/ hairs gaayab ho gaye. Maut ne platform par aane kee pahli ghanti de dee.
Manu ne bald head ko kiss karte huye kaha,
“ aunty, itni khubsurat aap pahle kabhi nahi lagi. “
Aur aunty ne jabaab diya,
“ Manu , tu meri jindgi mey nahi aata to marne mey itni takleef nahi hoti.. abhi mai marna nahi chahti. “
Kaee logo ke saamne Manu aunty ko baanho mey le betahasha chumne laga.
“ raja , sabhi ko room se baahar bhejo. “
Manu ne sabhi ko room se baahar jaane ka ishara kiya, Suchi ko bhee. Sabke baahar jaane ke baad Manu ne khud door ko andar se bolt kiya.
“ aunty , aapke bina mai kya karunga , kuchh nahi kar paaunga , marr jaaunga. “
Lekin aunty ka kuchh aur hee irada thaa.
“ Manu, apne kapde utaro , mujhe ek aakhiri baar pyar karo , please raja pyar karo..”
Aunty ke tests ke pahle Zeenat ko chodne ke baad 21 days se Manu ne kisee ko chodna kya theek se dekha bhee nahi thaa. Manu nahi chahta thaa phir bhee marne waali kee aakhiri wish ko kaise ignore kaise kar sakta thaa !
Khud nanga hua, aunty ko nanga kiya. Aunty ko last time choda thaa uska uss din 21st day hee thaa. Manu ko biswas nahi hua kee ye wohi Manu kee mast favourite lady hai. 60-62 kgs wajan waali aurat 21 dino mey 35 kgs kee ho gaee thee. Manu nahi chodna chahta thaa lekin aunty bachcho jaisa jidd karti rahi, jaisa aunty chahti thee, head se toe tak ek ek ang ko sahlaya, aunty ne Kuchh der lawda chusa to lawda mey kadak-pan bhee aa gaya.
“ Manu , mai yahi sochte sochte marna chahti hun kee tum mujhe pyar kar rahe ho, buss raja ek baar pel do.. Ab mai tere pasand kee nahi rahi to mujhe pyar nahi karoge ? “
“ aunty , meri jindgi mey aap ke jaisee pyari aur pasand kee aurat naa aap se pahle aaee thee aur naa aap ke baad aayegi, mere dil mey jo aapke liye jagah hai wo koi nahi le sakta, Suchi bhee nahi..aap kee kami koi puree nahi kar paayega..”
Manu ye baat kaise bardaast karta kee aunty ab dekhne laayak bhee nahi hai ! Aunty ke sides mey haath rakh knee se legs ko phailaya. Aunty ne lawda ko pakad kar bur se sataaya. Bur hee nahi, pura body cotton ball kee tarah soft ho gaya thaa. Angulio se bur ke phaank ko phailate huye lawda ko andar dabata gaya.. dheere dheere lawda andar jaane laga. Jab pura andar gaya to dheere dheere upar neeche karne laga. 5 minute hee hua hoga kee aunty ne lawda ko apne haath se pakad kar bur ke andar dabaaye huye kaha ,
“ aaj tujhe ek baat bataati hu “
Buss haule se lawda dabaye huye puchha ,
“kaun see baat aunty ?”
“pahle mujhe chodo..”
Manu ne pelna shuru kiya, bilkul dheere dheere aur dus minute baad hee lawda baahar nikaal liya. Aunty ne bhee nahi roka. Jab dono ne kapde pahan liye tab aunty ne Suchi ko bulane kaha ,
“Sirf Suchi, Pari bhee nahi, usse lekar aao.”
Nvedita ko bolne mey takleef ho rahi thee. Manu baahar gaya aur Suchi ko lekar aaya. Manu ne door ko bund kiya. Aunty phir bhee dheere dheere ruk ruk kar boli,
“ Manu park mey tujhse pahli baar mili uss ke 3 din pahle mujhe bahut joro ka chakkar aaya thaa., ghar mey akeli thee, chakkar kha kar gir gaee. Bahut der ke baad hosh aaya thaa. Mujhe maalum thaa kee mujhe cansor hai, Suchi ke babuji ne bataa diya thaa aur unhone yah bhee kaha thaa kee iska koi ilaz nahi hai.,,,chakkar aane ke baad eisa lagaa thaa kee 2-3 din mey marr jaaungi ….mujhe Suchi kee bahut chinta rahti thee…aur garden mey dekhte hee tum mujhe bahut pasand aa gaye..”
Aunty khansne lagi, Manu ne bolne se mana kiya, 2-4 ghoont pani piya aur bolti rahi..
“ mai ne tumhe chai peene ghar nahi bulaya thaa , maine ghar bulaya thaa kee tum Suchi ko dekho, usse pasand karo , uss se shaadi karo..lekin jab tumne kaha kee tum college ka board exam hee de rahe ho mai bahut dukhi ho gaee… lekin tumne mujhe chhu kar, mujhe pyar kar, holi ke din mujhe nanga kar, rang laga kar mujhe naee jindgi de dee, tumhari ek chudai se mujhe naee jindgi milti gaee, tumne mujhe naee jindgi de dee lekin Yamraj ko to apna kaam yaad rahta hai..mujhe khush dekh kar saala mujhse jalne laga…”
Aunty ek minute chup rahi, saans liya aur boli ,
“mere jaane ke baad Suchi ko chhor to nahi doge, wo tumhe jindgi mey, dunia mey har cheej se jyada pyar karti hai.”
Manu ne dhyan diya kee aunty ko bolne mey bahut takleef ho rahi hai . Suchi ke dono haatho ko apne haatho mey le bola,
“ aunty, aap dono se pahle bhee kaha hai aaj phir kahta hun. Agar meri kismat mujhe aapse nahi milati to Suchi bhee shayad meri jindgi mey nahi aati . Suchi ke upar pahli nazar padte hee mere dil , dimaag, maa kali, guruji ne kaha kee yahee ladki meri jindgi kee saans hai Meri jindgi hai, shayad Suchi ko meri jindgi mey aana thaa issee liye aap se meri mulaquat huee. Aaj apne guruji ko gabaah/ witness rakhte huye ye wada karta hu kee jiss samay aapki beti meri jindgi se jaayegi mai bhee ussee samay jindgi ka daaman chhor dunga..mere saath Suchi nahi to phir Suchi ke bina jindgi bhee mujhe nahi chahiye. “
Dono maa beti Manu kee baat sunkar khush huee aur phir mayus bhee kyoki kee Manu jindgi chhorne kee baat kar raha tha. Suchi ne kaha,
“ maa Kali, guruji tumhari saari baat maante hai , maa ke liye kuchh aur saal maang lo..jyada nahi sirf 1-2 saal aur…”
Iss se pahle kee Suchi ke aankho se aansu nikalte Manu ne usse apni baanho mey liya aur room ke baahar aa gaya.
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good update thanks for giving missing update
Excellent work BHUKHALUND
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Superb Update
thanx for posting missing update...
so no nivedita from now that will be hard to see. Nivedita will remain one of my favourite maybe top 3 in the saga. will miss her thats for sure. As much as i wanted manu to take a name insted of nivedita it was good of him to not take any names this shows manu is more mature now than earlier.
I dont remember the betryal of nivedita to baba/kali maa if it is mentioned in the story what was it ?
Komal is back in ashram lets see what she does ....
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Last three updates were very saddening but nicely narrated. Whether Champa will use her power ..
Waiting..
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My dear friends
Dmahi, sam-rozer, vkf, ikkushal, Dolly & Priya Joshi
Thanks for liking updates . Baba only mentioned to Champa that Nivedita did not fulfill requirement after they saved life of Ujjawal . I also unaware of details .
More to come Keep reading ,
‘LIVE LIFE CHAMPA STYLE
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Idhar Nivedita apne maut ka wait kar rahi thee aur udhar saniwaar kee subah subah Komal apni gharwali Aparna ko le ashram pahunchi. Manu ne Komal ko kaha thaa kee wo ek mahiana ke andar aashram aaye aur Komal ashram aa gaee. Lekin Manu wonha thaa hee nahi..
Champa ko maano swarg ka khazana mil gaya ho. Komal jyada tej thee. Bina kisee aur ko wish kiye, kisee dusre kee oar dekhe bina Komal ne hip se pakad Champa ko upar uthaya aur jo room saamne dikha uss mey ghush gaee. Bechari Aparna buss dekhti hee rahi . Mamta ne Aparna ka haath pakad kar kaha,
“ tum Komal kee saheli Aparna ho naa, Manu tumhari bahut taarif karta hai. Abhi kam se kam 2 ghante ke liye Komal ko bhul jaao , tum fresh ho jaao. “
Aparna ko yaad aaya kee Komal eise hee Manu ko lekar room ke andar chali gaee thee aur 2 ghante ke baad nikli thee. Usne dheere se kaha,
“ lekin Manu hai kaha ? Aur aap shayad Mamta Didi hai Manu kee bahan ..”
Mamta ne nod kiya . Aparna ne kaha,
“ ladko kee kismat badhia hai kee aap college mey nahi padhti , nahi to aapki ek jhalak ke liye aapko sirf touch karne ke liye ladke aapas mey mar mit-te. Aaj mujhe apne maa baap par gussa aa raha hai kee unhone mujhe ladka kyo nahi paida kiya..uff didi kya mast cheej ho aap..”
“ wo sab baate baad mey karenge , pahle fresh ho jaao , kya pitee ho , chai, dudh ya kuchh aur.. “
Mamta ne aankh maarte huye puchha. Ladki bahut bindas thee. Guest Room mey bag rakh bed par let gaee aur boli,
“ Manu ko maalum hai kee mai kya pitee hun , Manu nahi hai to ek cup badhia chai chalega. “
Aparna ne muh haath dho kar chai ke saath dry fruits liya. Phir Mamta se thodi der baate kar bath bhee le liya. Naasta bhee kar liya. Purvi ke saath mandir ghum aaee tab kareeb dhai ghante ke baad Champa aur Komal room se nikle. Dono ke baal bhikre theye aur dono ke chehre par gajab kee chamak thee. Guruji ka lawda dhoti ke neeche uth-baith karne laga thaa, line clear ka signal dene laga thaa. Agar Manu wonha hota to Champa aur Komal dono ko chodta lekin guruji buss dekhte hee rahe. Ye kahna muskil tha kee guruji ka lawda Champa ke liye tight hua tha ya phir Komal kee kadak choot mey ghusne ke liye ya phir naee maal Aparna ke liye..
Champa ko lekar Komal jis room mey ghusi thee wo Champa ka hee room thaa. Juldi se Champa ko bed par litaya, phata-phat door ko andar se bolt kiya aur Champa par kud paree. Lekin Champa ne phurti dikhaee, Komal uske upar jump karti uss se pahle bed se utar khadi ho gaee. Champa ne kaha,
“ jhutha pyar mut dikha, yaad hai tuney apni gharwali ko kitne mahino baad dekha hai, aur dekhogi kyo..wonha ek badhia jawan namkin naee gharwali mil gaee hai to phir budhia ko kaun puchhta hai..jaa mai tujhse baat nahi karti…”
“ hi, hi meri rani ke nakhre to dekho..saali roj apne bete se chudwati hai..bhul kar bhee mujhe yaad nahi karti , pyar karna Manu se sikho, Suhana aur Suchi ko dekho, Suhana ne galti se mera naam liya hoga aur mera yaar apni Komal ko pyar karne aa gaya,,”
Bolte bolte Komal nangi ho gaee aur Komal kee gathilee jawani dekh Champa apna hosh kho baithee.
“ Komal tu mard kyo nahi huee..tujhe pata thaa kee mai kanha rahti hun, Suchi aur Mansi aur Manu ke baare mey saari khabar rakhti ho aur yah bhul gaee kee teri ek gharwali vidhwa kee tarah bina gharwala, bina kisee mard ke jindgi gujar rahi hai..”
Champa bol rahi thee aur Komal dheere dheere uske kapde utar rahi thee. Phir Komal ne sab bataaya kee kyo aur kaise ghar chhora, yanha aaee to pata chala kee tum sabhi gaaon mey ho..
“ to raja gaaon kyo nahi aaee.,. ? Tu gaao aa jaati to phir hum gaaon mey hee rahte …”
“ gaaon mey rah jaati to phir tera raja Patna kee maharani kaise banti,.aur Manu kee uss randi apni bhabhi Rekha ke kaaran gaaon nahi gaee. Gaaon jaati to wo jarur mujhe apne ghar wapas le jaati aur ab chahe kuchh bhee ho jaaye mujhe ab apne ghar kabhi waapas nahi jaana hai..”
Phir Champa ko apni kahani sunate kee Patna kaise pahunchi, Aparna aur uske gharwalo ke baare mey , Aparna kee maa baap ke randipana ke baare mey sab kuchh bataaya…
“ rani, dunia mey aur sabkuchh hai lekin tumhari jaisee mast chudasi khubsurti aur Manu ke jaisa mardangi aur kanhi nahi..mujhe pyar kar, pyar karne de rani. “
Aur uske baad 2 ghante se jyada samay tak dono , ek jawan ladki aur ek sadabahaar jawani ne jawani ke, mard aurat ke khub khel khele. Komal ne apne bag se ek soft rubber ka lekin tightly packed, 9 inch lamba aur kareeb 4 inch ghera ka rod nikala aur dono ne ek dusre ko iss rod se choda.,,
Komal ne kaha kee Patna mey ab tak kisee kee himaat nahi huee haath bhee pakadne kee . Ek saal ke dauran sirf Manu se chudwaee… Champa ne kaha kee uski bhee yahi haalat hai.
“ raja, mujhe chodne waale to bahut hai lekin koi mauka hee nahi milta hai.,Mansi to jaalim hai hee, ye Suchi dekhne mey jitni khubsurat hai andar se utni hee jahar kee pudiya hai, Mansi se jyada khatarnak hai, inn dono ke kaaran chudai ka sukha par gaya hai.,dekh bur kee kya haalat ho gaee hai.,Manu bhee apni gharwali aur dusri randio kee choot mey ghusa rahta hai, mahina mey ek baar bhee maa ke bur mey lawda pel diya to meri kismat. Mamta jaisee jawan ladki kee bhee yahi haalat hai,,ye dono tere hee jaisee bindas kyo nahi hai, khud chudwao, dusre ko bhee chudwane do,,”
Komal ne serious tone mey kaha,
“ peechhle 2 saal mey Manu ke alawa kisee aur ne mujhe nahi choda hai, chodna kya theek se chhua bhee nahi hai..lekin Manu hai kanha, tera beta to gajab kaa mard hai ? “
“kya kiya Manu ne ..kisee ke saath jabardasti kiya, jabardasti choda..?”
Champa ke puchhne par Komal ne bataya,
“maatherchod, 2 din raat bhee pura nahi raha, mujhe choda, ek hee raat mey ghar kee teeno naukrani ko choda, mujhe choda, bina kisee pareshani ke Aparna ko mere saamne choda..yanha tak to theek lekin mere Manu kee himmat dekh, gharwala se directly kaha kee apni gharwali ko kahe mujhe ghumane ke liye..Aparna ke babuji ne apni gharwali ko teen saal se upar ho gaya , naa kisee aadmi se milne deta hai aur naa baaar ghumne deta thaa. Manu uss aurat ko baahar le gaya. Car mey dono aadha ghanta bhee nahi baithe honge, aurat ko pura pata liya,.,ghar laakar gaand maari aur teeno naukrani ke saamne choda, khub choda…maa baap ke ghar mey rahte huye beti ko din dahare jum kar choda…aunty to yanha aane ke liye paagal ho rahi thee lekin aaj chhutti hai, ghar mey nahi hai to kisey chod raha hai..”
Tab Champa ne Nivedita ke baare mey, uski bimari ke baare mey sab bataya.
Champa nahi chahti thee lekin Komal ne jidd kee.
“ rani, Manu ko apna chehra to dikhana hee hai, usne dhamki dee thee kee agar ek mahine ke andar yanha ashram nahi aaee to sab kuchh chhor kar Patna mere paas aa jaayega. Nivedita kee bimari ke chakkar mey sab bhul gaya hai nahi to phir se Patna aa jaata..“
Komal ko chumte huye Champa ne kaha,
“ ab to Manu tumhare saath nahi jaayega lekin mai chalne ko taiyar hun..janha rakhogi rahungi..”
“ Aparna ka baap bahut bada chuddakkar hai wo tujhe apni rakhail banakar rakhega to mai mana nahi karungi...tujhe uss se chudwana parega…”
“ buss tu saamne rahegi to phir jo kahegi, jis se chudwane kahegi chudwaungi…le chal apne saath. “
Komal aur Champa dono ko jo biswas thaa wohi hua. Ek dusre ke liye unka pyar kam nahi hua thaa ulte badh hee gaya tha. Jitni der Champa ke saath rahi Komal ke dimaag mey Aparna ka khayal ek beer bhee nahi aaya.
Ussee din shaam ko Mansi apne saath Komal aur Aparna ko lekar Suchi ke ghar pahunchi. Manu dono se muskurate huye mila lekin dono Komal aur Aparna ko saaf dikha kee Manu bahut dukhi hai . Manu ne dono ka thanks kiya. Komal aur Suchi pahli hee baar miley lekin dono ko eisa laga kee ek dusre ko khub badhia se jaante hai.
“ Suchi, aap bahut hee kismat waali hai kee aap ko Manu jaisa pyar karne wala mila hai . “
Suchi ne tapaq se reply diya ,
“ khaak kismat waali hun, mere saamne saikdo baar bol chuka hai kee agar Mansi aur Komal saath rahne ko taiyar ho jaaye to wo ( Manu ) sab kuchh chhor aap dono ko le kanhi dur chala jaayega. “
Kuchh hee din pahle Manu ne ye baat Komal aur Mansi se kahi thee.
Komal ne Suchi ko assure kiya,
“ eisa bolna bhee Manu ka pyar hee hai.. biswas rakhiye Manu kabhi aap dono , aap ko aur Suhana began ko nahi chhorega lekin Suchi bahan kabhi kabhi apne Manu ko humse bhee pyar karne dena.. “
Suchi kyo chup rahti , Usne kaha
“ Jaise Mansi ke liye Manu hamesha available hai waise hee aap jab chahogi Manu apni maharani ke sewa mey haazir ho jaayega. Aap dono bhee yanha aate raho , humey aap dono bahut achchhe lage. Jitna suna thaa, socha thaa aap uss se kanhi badhia ho, sirf Patna hee nahi har dil kee maharani ho. ., “
“ aur Suchi aap jaisee aur koi nahi , mere Komal kee Champa bhee nahi. “
Aparna ne kaha aur Pari ko pyar karte huye boli ,
“ mujhe bhee bilkul eisee hee beti chahiye, bilkul aapki beti Pari ke jaisee,.. “
Suchi ne phir jabaab diya,
“ apni sautan Champa se puchho kee kis-se pelwa kar eisee pyari beti paida kee, tum bhee usee se chudwana. “
Suchi kee baat se Aparna pareshaan nahi huee wo bhee kaafi gaali bakti thee. Usne kaha,
“ eisee pyari beti ke liye to kisee se bhee chudwa lungi. “
Manu wonhi khada sab sunn raha thaa. Komal ne kaha,
“ rani, mujhe maalum hai kee iss Pari ka asal baap kaun hai, jab bhee beti chahiye mujhe bolna. “
Raat dono ne ashram mey gujari lekin ek minute bhee koi soo nahi paaya. Raat bhar Komal ne sabse khub excercise karwaya. Agli raat kee train se dono Patna ke liye nikal gaye.
Suchi ke ghar khana khane ka koi scene nahi thaa. Komal ko dekhte hee Mansi ne apne ghar phone kar extra 4-5 aadmiyo ke liye badhia khana banane ke liye kah diya thaa. Apne ghar mey khana khila kar kareeb 11 baje raat ko ashram pahunchwa diya. Ashram pahunchte hee Komal ne kaha,
“ hamare paas ek hee raat hai, kalt hum dono ko wapas jaana hai..aaj raat hum sab ek saath soyenge. “
Yah idea sabhi ko pasand aaya. Mann hee mann Champa bahut khush huee kee ek aur raat Komal ke saath gujregi aur saath hee ek naee maal bhee khane ko milegi.
Mamta ne Gulabo ko bulaya aur munna ke saath rahne ke liye kaha.
“ bhabhi, hum kuchh der mey Komal se baat karke aate hai , tab tak aap munna ko sambhalo. “
Gulabo naa lesbian thee naa hee kabhi kisee ne lesbian masti ke liye uksaya thaa, wo nod kar munna ke bagal may let gaee aur kahani sunate huye sulane lagi.
Mamta pahunchi Champa ke room mey. Komal to Champa ke saath lagi huee thee aur Aparna baith kar dekh rahi thee. Usne Mamta ko room mey dekha to uske face par pyari see muskan aaee.
“ Mamta, dekh lo, kya jamaana aa gaya hai, mujhe saath lekar aaee aur dekho jub se aaee tabse kaise apni maa ke umra kee aurat se bhee badi aurat se chipki huee hai..”
Mamta ne room ke door ko tightly push kiya aur Aparna ke saamne khadi ho gaee. Dono haath sides mey thhe aur aanchal shoulder se phisalta gaya.. jyo jyo Mamta kee chuchi ka ubhar aankho ke saamne aata gaya Aparna kee aankhe badi hokar baahar aane lagi.
“ ufff Mamta, kya maal ho rani..ek saal se upar ho gaya, Komal mera maal kha rahi hai , aaj mai tumhara maal khaungi..uff dekha nahi jaa raha. “
Aparna khadi hokar Mamta ke paas aaee aur bejhijhak blouse ke saare buttons khol blouse ko body se baahar nikal diya. Aparna kee aankhe eise khulne aur bund honeye lagi jaise kee koi bahut bada ajuba dekh liya ho. Ek ek chuchi ke neeche apna ek ek haath rakh chuchi ko eise upar neeche karne lagi jaise kee chuchi ka wajan le rahi ho…
“ Mamta, Manu mujhe chode ya naa chode lekin agar aap ye waada karo kee aap hamesha , har raat apni inn mast bottles ( chuchio ) se mujhe garam sharab pilaati rahogi to mai kabhi aapko chhor kar naa jaaun..”
Mamta buss haule haule muskura rahi thee. Aparna ne baari baari se ek ko sahalaate dabaate huye dusre se dhoodh piya ..jab dono chuchio ko bhar pur chus liya tab Aparna ne saari ka fold khola, saari neeche gira..phir petticoat bhee khol diya. Mamta nangi ho gaee . Aparna thoda peechhe ho gaee aur Mamta ko upar se neeche , neeche se upar ghurne lagi.
“ Mamta, bura mut maan-na lekin agar mere bhaiya tumhe ek baar dekh le to ek minute bhee nahi hichkega, apni gharwali ko chhor tumse shaadi kar lega. “
“ naa baba , mai eise aadmi se shaadi nahi kar sakti ..kal kisee Champa aur Suchi jaisee aurat ko dekhega to mujhe goli maar kar unse shaadi kar lega..mai eise hee theek hai…”
Mamta ne suitable reply diya. Lekin Aparna to Mamta kee nangi jawani dekh hypnotise ho rahi thee. Usne aage kaha,
“ aur mera baap aapko dekh le to agar puree property nahi to apni aadhi property , dhan daulat , aap jo bhee chaho de dega…”
“ haa tab theek hai ..mai rupya, paisa, dhan daulat ke liye kuchh bhee kar sakti hun...lekin tere baap ko laakho dene honge tab jaakar mai uske godi mey baithungi..”
“ dega didi, aapko sabkuchh dega.. lekin jab aap mere baap ke saamne aayengi tab naa, abhi to mai aapke saamne hun.. boliye kya du aapko, kitna du.. “
Mamta ko nanga chhor Aparna room se baahar nikal gaee aur kuchh hee der baad wapas aaee. Uske haath mey notes ke bundle theye aur ek cheque book. Dono notes ke bundle Mamta ke haath mey diye aur cheque book mey se ek leaf phaad kar diya..
“ Mamta ye blank cheque hai, mera aur babuji dono ka sign kiya hua, aap ko jo bhee amount chahiye likh kar apne bank mey daal dijiye.. aaj raat ke liye aap kee jawani meri. “
Mamta ne cheque aur notes wapas nahi kiya, table par rakh diya.
Aparna ne bhee saare kapde utar diye. Facial beauty mey Aparna aur Mamta dono kee apni apni khubsurati thee. Mamta ka face, shoulders , baanhe roundish thhe jab kee Aparna ka feature bahut sharp thaa. Mamta 64-65 kgs kee hogi jab kee Aparna 51-52 kgs kee. Manta 5 ft 4 inch thee to Aparna 5 ft 5 inch kee. Aparna kee chuchia 34 inch kee thee, dino chuchio ke beech badhia gap thaa jab kee Mamta kee chuchia 38 inch se kam nahi aur hamesha ek dusre se ragad khati rahti thee. Aparna kee choot andar kee taraf dhansi thee , chhoti see pyara triangle thaa. Choot kee phaank ek dusre se satey huye theye, saaf dikhta thaa kee bahut hee kam chudi thee. Mamta kee choot garam maalpuye jaisa ubhra hua thaa, clit bhee Aparna ke clit se lambe aur mote theye. Aur thighs , Mamta kee thighs janha thunder thighs thee, sirf thighs ko ek baar sahlaane ke liye loag laakho dete, wonhi Aparna kee thighs slim trim , bahut hee badhia well shaped thaa.
Agar 10 mey se 10 pahle Mamta ko hee chodna chaahte wonhi 10 mey se 10 Aparna se marriage ke liye ready ho jaate.
“ Chal Mamta, apni jawani ka maza lene de. “
Aparna ne Mamta ka haath pakad bed par litaya aur ek mard jaisa Mamta ko chumne sahlaane lagi. Komal ne Aparna ko pura train kar diya thaa. Udhar bagal mey Champa aur Komal apne khel mey lage theye. Ek face ko chhor Aparna aur Champs ka figure kareeb kareeb ek jaisa hee tha. Aparna ke body mey, face mey wo chamak bhee nahi thee jo Champa mey thee. Komal aur Aparna dono apne apne maal ko lutne mey, ragadne mey lage theye. Ab tak lesbian acts mey Mamta male ka role play karti thee lekin yah pahla mauka thaa jab koi dusri uske upar male ka role kar rahi thee. Mamta ne experience kiya kee iss ladki mey uss se kanha jyada aggression hai. Mamta ko ek naya maza aa raha thaa. Mamta ne pahle bhee Komal ko nanga dekha thaa jab apne hee ghar kee org mey Manu ne teeno maa, bahan aur Komal ko choda thaa aur munim ne Komal aur Komal ke saamne beti ko choda thaa. Aaj phir Komal ko nanga dekha. Komal bahut kadak to deekhti hee thee figure bhee bahut hee proportionate thaa. Undoubtedly Mansi ka figure Komal se jyada attractive thaa.
Mamta aur Aparna ne jabse nangi jawani ka khel shuru kiya , 40-45 minute paar ho gaya. Uss samay Aparna neeche thee aur Mamta upar . Aparna ka feet door kee taraf thaa. Mamta upar 69 pose mey thee. Aparna ke dono legs ko pura phailaye rakh kamsin choot ka , thighs ka maza le rahi thee. Aparna ke bagal mey Champa bhee flat thee. Komal ne Champa kee dono chuchio ko pakad rakha thaa aur apni chuchio ko apne hee knee par dabaaye huye Champa kee bur se ras chus rahi thee. Beech beech mey bolti bhee thee,
“ iss sadabahaar jawani ka ras chuste chuste marr jaaungi lekin iss aurat kee jawani kabhi sukhegi nahi. “
Phir apne kaam par lug jaati thee. Achanak Komal ko apni choot ke chhed par kuchh garam saa laga . Jab tak guruji Komal kee kadak chuttaro ko pakadte, LAWDA ko bur ke andar pelte Komal jhat se palti aur guruji ko thel diya. Dekha guruji ka lawda phan-phana raha thaa. Apne ko cover karne kee koi koshish nahi kee, Komal ne kaha,
“ guruji , aap andhe hai kya, itni mast mast maal hai yanha, Kamsin Aparna, Mast chudasi Mamta aur sadabahaar jawani Champa aur inn sab mast maal kee bur ko chhor kar aapko meri hee badsurat bur dikhaee dee. Meri paththar kee choot par sirf Manu ke lawda ka hee naam likha hai , meri puri jawani Manu ke naam hai, mujhe kisee aur se nahi chudwana. “
Guruji ko dekh Mamta bhee Aparna se alag ho gaee lekin kisee ne apne ko cover karne kee koshish nahi kee. Champa aur Aparna ab bhee flat thhe, dono taange phailee huee thee aur dono kee bur phudak rahi thee. Champa ko kaee baar chod chuke theye , Komal ne straightway mana kar diya to ab guruji abhi Aparna ko chodna chahte thhe..
Guruji kee nazar choot par dekh Aparna ne kaha ,
“ mai bhee aaee thee Manu ka hee kela khane lekin wo to abhi period mey hai mujhe kya Komal ko bhee nahi chodega . Aur aapki iss beti , Mamta ne bahut garam kar diya hai , meri garmi to Komal nikaal degi lekin dekh rahi hun kee aapke chuhe ( lawda) ko bahut bhukh lagi hai .. meri jawani isse pasand hai to khila dijiye lekin mai bhee Mamta kee tarah muft mey nahi dungi, mujhe meri puree kimat chahiye.. “
Aparna ne choot ko upar uchkaya. Usne guruji ko permission de diya.
“ Aparna rani , mai tere baap ko bahut badhia se jaanta hun, tumhari jaisee maal ko wo jitna deta hai uss se 10 guna ( 10 times ) dunga.. kuchh saal pahle yanha bhee meri 2-3 maal ko chod kar gaya hai . “
Udhar Nivedita apni jindgi ke aakhiri dino ko gin rahi thee aur idhar ashram mey Komal aur Aparna ne dhama-chaukri macha rakhi thee,,,guruji bhee room mey aa gaye. Wey Komal ko pelte uss se pahli komal ne rok diya lekin Aparna chudai kee garmi se pareshaan thee, usne guruji ko chodne kee permission de dee..
Guruji Aparna ke upar aa gaye. Baaki teeno ek 20-21 saal kee unbyahi / unmarried ladki aur ek 55 -56 saal ke budhdhe, Aparna ke baap se 3-4 saal bada thaa, kee chudai dekhne lagi.
Guruji kee personalty to badhia thee hee, lawda bhee badhia thaa aur dhakka bhee badhia lagaate theye. Aparna ne chuttar ko upar utha kar dhakke ko balance karte huye boli,
“ Manu jaise to nahi ho lekin badhia dhakka laga rahe ho , bahut maza aa raha hai..aur taquat lagaao…”
Champa ne Aparna kee chuchio ko masalte huye kaha,
“ ladki , guruji eise waise mard nahi hai, tumse chhoti chhoti ladkiya bhee guruji se pelwane ke liye marti hai..tu kismat waali hai kee tujhe hamare guruji ka aashirwad mil raha hai..”
Aur Aparna ke face ko dekh kar koi bhee kah sakta thaa kee ladki bahut khush hai , masti se chudwa rahi hai,,guruji ka sabkuchh badhia thaa lekin Manu jaisa stamina nahi thaa. 20-22 minute mey hee jhad gaye...Aparna ne apni baanho aur thighs mey guruji ko samet kar kaha,
“ buss guruji yanhi aap Manu se maat kha gaye..Manu ne mujhe 2 baar hee choda thaa aur dono baar 2 ghante se jyada hee thaa, waise aapne bhee bahut mast kiya , aap se baar baar chudwa sakti hun,,abhi utaro bhari lug raha hai.,”
Khub passionate kiss le kar guruji ko apne upar se utara aur lawda ko masalte huye boli,
“ ab aap Mamta ko peliye..dekhe ye mast maal kaise chudwati hai..”
Guruji ne Champa aur Komal kee oar dekha aur bole,
“ ladki tu apni saari daulat bhee mujhe de degi to bhee mai Mamta ke pair ke siwa kanhi haath nahi lagaaunga…”
Bolkar wonhi sabke saamne Mamta ke dono feet ko dono haatho se touch kiya, apna head feet se sataya aur khade ho gaye. Aparna se kaha ,
“ tu mere saath aur rahna chahti hai to mere room mey chal , aur jyada pyar karunga. “
Guruji apne room mey Gulabo ka wait karte rahe. 12 buj gaya , Gulabo nahi aaee to wey room se baahar nikle. Sabse pahla Suchi ka room tha, guruji ko maalum thaa kee Suchi ke absence mey koi bhee iss room mey nahi aa sakti. Uske baad ek guest room thaa, ye room Aparna ko allot kiya gaya thaa lekin room mey koi nahi thaa, thoda aur aage badhe to siskarip kee aawaj sunai dee. Aawaj Champa ke room se aa rahi thee. Dheere se door ko push kiya to door khul gaya aur guruji ko bahut mahino baad eisa nazara dekhne ko mila, room mey full light thaa aur charo nangi thee, Champa ke upar Komal thee aur Aparna ke upar Mamta. Lekin guruji ko sirf Komal kee kasee huee choot hee dikhai de rahi thee. Door par hee nange ho gaye. Lawda ko sahlaya to dekha kee choot mey ghusne ke liye pura taiyar hai. Door ko dheere se tightly push kiya. Dheere dheere lawda sahlate huye aage badhe.
Kisee ne gururuji ko room mey aate , nanga hote nahi dekha. Sabhi masti ke aalam mey khoye hute thhe. Lawda ko pakre huye Komal kee choot se sataaya hee thaa kee Komal palat gaee.
Guruji ne Aparna se saath chalne ke liye kaha.
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Super update .....
Manu missing tha nahi toh inh chaar maal ko aise ragdta ki Bhai aapko 3-4 Updates lagte likhne mei aur best orgy hota.
Niveditha ke liye dukh kam nahi ho raha hai to pics bhi add karne ka mann nahi kar raha ......
Manu ki sabse special Niveditha Aunty story ko bahot sad kar gayi . Babli ka kuch bhi dukh nahi hua , Leela bahot acchi thi par aapne usko doodh mei padi makkhi ki tarah phenk diya, Niveditha Aunty bhi usse jaada dukh dard dekar jaayegi .
Sometimes I think why your ink or pen didn't get dry or broken while writing these 3-5 updates .....
But as a writer you know better how to entertain the readers but I m not reader ?
Myself crazy manic fan of your story "Champa"
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Superb update
If this would have happened earlier than Nivedita then I would have enjoyed a lot.
missing Nivedita very much. Earlier also she was not present in so many updates but didn't miss her too much maybe knowing that she is dying putting extra emotion to that. Komal is back but that also isn't enough to put sorrows of nivedita behind me. hoping time will heal it. They say you should not get attached to the story and they are correct but I did and that hurts. Didn't feel that much for babli as she paid for what she did and beween also she did some mistake but nivedita was fully devoted to him and she never did any mistakes along the way. she was always a cheerful person. on deathbed also she welcomed Urmily (her only enemy which she has said many times in the story) in a very cheerful way. But now she is gone. so all three of his favorite saumya leela and nivedita all are gone far from him some too very far that they cannot come back Can't be with saumya and leela that frequently let's see how this turns this saga.
Missed manu in the update but it was good for manu as it would not have been of manu would have joined her it would have been an insult to nivedita but manu is more mature now however would love to see the final emotion of manu regarding nivedita please don't leave that i know that you have already written the story and now reposting it but you can rectify it as so many readers didn't read the story earlier myself being one of them.
Komal didn't allow guruji to fuck her as now she thinks manu is the only man for him lets see whether these changes in the near future or not. after marriage certainly, it will change but that's a long way to go. As champa said manu is giving less time to her would love to see more enounters between those too and that will also lessen the pain of manu...
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