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Vineeta ek jhooti shaadi me jakdi mahila/ A SEXY POOJA
15.53%
93 15.53%
Garima ek happily married housewife jo seductive mahol me behek gai/ A HOUSEWIFE SEDUCTION
18.53%
111 18.53%
Shabana ek zaheen housewife jiska shareer jitna akarshak tha bhagya utna hi kharab/ TRAPPED
34.06%
204 34.06%
Neha the bold stylish girl with full of fantasies/ FANTASY
10.85%
65 10.85%
Neetu ek sawli bengali girl jiski jald shaadi hone wali hai par ek khatre ke sath/KAMASUTRA LOVE
6.01%
36 6.01%
Aarti ek gareeb ghar ki behad sundar ladki jo aane wale khatre se hai anjaan/DEMONS LOVE
5.68%
34 5.68%
Shobha the bride and centre part of this story jiski suhaagraat uska sapna hai/FIRST NIGHT CONFESSION
9.35%
56 9.35%
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A wedding ceremony in village
(12-05-2020, 01:50 PM)Amarjit Wrote: भाई मैं तो कहता हूं जय स्टोरी कभी खत्म ना हो   इस कहानी को खत्म करते-करते आप इसका दूसरा पाठ भी बना दीजिएगा

भाई सृष्टि का नियम है जो चीज शुरू होती है उसे ख़तम होना ही होता है और वैसे भी ये कोई एकता कपूर का सास बहु सीरियल तो है नहीं जो पीड़ी दर पीड़ी चलता ही जाएगा पर मेरा ये नया प्रयोग रीडर्स को अच्छा लगा यही बहुत है और हा इसके  करेक्टर्स पर आगे नई कहानी लाऊंगा ये आईडिया है मेरे दिमाग में.
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(12-05-2020, 12:27 AM)Ajay.star Wrote: Super update..
Hot update ke sath felling bhi kamal ki dali he. Baki chapter ka happy ending ho ya na ho lekin veenita aur lukhan kakarva dena. Ab to ek hi grah bacha he us me bhi isi tarha special karna aur milan bhi karva sena. 
. Aur sab se important bat veenita aur lakhan ko hamesa ke liye ek karva dena. 
Story ka sab se emotional aur important character he to is ko to happy ending milni hi chahiye.

Vineeta ke chapter ki USP hi usme darshai gai feelings hai. Aur ending kya hogi ye to abhi reveal nahi kar sakta par jo bhi hogi i think readers ko pasand aaegi.
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(12-05-2020, 06:42 AM)Rohan0064 Wrote: Bohut hi gazab ka update diya bhai maja aa gaya yaar
Ab Vineeta aur Lakhan ki chudai bhi jabardast honi chahiye matlab chut gaand muh sab chooden Lakhan aur ek dosere ko apna viray bhi pilaye koyn ki bohut tadpe hai dono

Thanks Bro update itna pasand karne ke liye. Nishchit hi ye chudai jabardast hogi jitna itne dino me tadpaya hai wo saari tadap is aakhiri din me nikal doonga.
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(11-05-2020, 04:11 AM)Logan555 Wrote: Haa doctor subah ke 4 baj rahe hai aur ab jakar pics select karke update post kar paya hu. Philhaal to is update ko banane aur post karne me busy raha ab kal ek din ka break lunga agla update likhne se pehle tab samay nikaal kar tumhare aage ke updares padunga. Tab tak ke liye Shubh raatri Shabba Khair.

Logan bhai, bahot bahot shukriya. Aap ka creative hard work hum jaise naye writers ko inspire karten hain. Lekin aap ka hard work appreciate karten hain. Jo passion, commitment, dedication, hard work, creative plots, seductive erotic writing aur aapka subject ka research kaabil-e-taarif hai. Aap ki writing bahot hee professional hai, without any mistakes. Keep it up bro. 

Hope you will get spare time in few days to read my update part - 3 and part 4. Part 3 is very very long. Thanks bhai.
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Logaan bhai, erotic scene ko kaise long buit up karen. Woh aapse sikhen. Lakhan aur Vinitaa ke characters bahot hi unique hai. Aur aapne jo sex narrations ke variations bshot hi interesting, kaamuk aur dilchasp hai. Keep it up Logaan bhai.
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(13-05-2020, 01:10 AM)doctor101 Wrote: Logaan bhai, erotic scene ko kaise long buit up karen. Aur mud ka erotic flavor is very unique and very hot. Aise erotic scenes aapne kyaa built-up kiye hain. Woh aapse sikhen. Lakhan aur Vinitaa ke characters bahot hi unique hai. Aur aapne jo sex narrations ke variations bahot hi interesting, kaamuk aur dilchasp hai. Keep it up Logaan bhai. Readers ko utsuktaa hai ki Vinita Lakhan samaagam kaisaa aap prastoot karoge.
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सच में मजा आ गया इस अपडेट को पढ़ते हुए। thanks
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Nice bro
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(13-05-2020, 01:10 AM)doctor101 Wrote: Logaan bhai, erotic scene ko kaise long buit up karen. Woh aapse sikhen. Lakhan aur Vinitaa ke characters bahot hi unique hai. Aur aapne jo sex narrations ke variations bshot hi interesting, kaamuk aur dilchasp hai. Keep it up Logaan bhai.


(13-05-2020, 01:05 AM)doctor101 Wrote: Logan bhai, bahot bahot shukriya. Aap ka creative hard work hum jaise naye writers ko inspire karten hain. Lekin aap ka hard work appreciate karten hain. Jo passion, commitment, dedication, hard work, creative plots, seductive erotic writing aur aapka subject ka research kaabil-e-taarif hai. Aap ki writing bahot hee professional hai, without any mistakes. Keep it up bro. 

Hope you will get spare time in few days to read my update part - 3 and part 4. Part 3 is very very long. Thanks bhai.


Bhai agar situation me khud ko feel karke likha jaega to emotions aur shabd apne aap nikalte chale aate hai. Mai jab koi scene likhta hu to pehle ye feel karta hua ki agar mai khud is scene me hu to kya ho isse scene khud ba khud realistic ban jata hai khaskar vineeta lakhan ke case me. Baaki us par ki gai research in charectars ko aur bhi unique bana deti hai umeed nahi thi ye dono readers ko itna pasand aanege.
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(13-05-2020, 08:33 PM)Amarjit Wrote: Nice bro

(13-05-2020, 05:58 AM)asha10783 Wrote: सच में मजा आ गया इस अपडेट को पढ़ते हुए। thanks


Thanks amit
शुक्रिया आशा जी लिखते समय यही सोचता हूँ की रीडर्स को मज़ा आए
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LAKHAN SINGH KI KOTHI

Raatri ne apni dastak dedi thi jisse zahir tha ki kahani ka ye aathva din bhi apni samapti ki taraf agrasar tha. Aur idhar Garima ke tan badan me vaasna ki aag lagi hui thi jeetu ne uski maalish to behad kamuk ki par wo uski vaasna ki aag ko hawa dekar bina bujhae hi khud thanda hokar chala gaya aur Garima ko waise hi vaasna ki aag me jalta chhod gaya. Aur yaha gaanv me Garima ek ankaha sa Lockdown jhel rahi thi jaha na uski saheliya tha na uska pariwaar na uski parichit jagah ledekar thi to ek badi si kothi me ek 20 by 15 ka kamra ek 55 saal ka buddha rasoiya aur uska 18 saal ka jawan beta jo baar baar aisi paristhitiya utpann kar dete the ki Garima chah kar bhi us uttejna ke janjaal se nikal nahi pati thi din raat apne akelepan ke mahaul me bus yahi sab sochti rehti thi aur is uttejna ke daldal me dhasti ja rahi dhasti hi ja rahi thi.

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Kuchh yahi haal garima ka is waqt bhi tha. Jeetu use garam to kar gaya par us garmi ko thanda kare bina chale gaya aur ab to use hariya ka bhi sahara nahi tha jisne use is hawas ke daldal me kheecha tha uske paas agar koi option tha bus bihari kaka jinhe subah usne jhidak kar kamre se bhaga diya tha. Wo ab unke bare me hi soch rahi thi kya aaj raat phir wo uske khane me neend ki goliya milaenge kya aaj raat phir wo chupke se uske kamre me aaenge par kya aaj bhi uske upar muth maarke hi chale jaenge. Nahi aaj mai unke saamne neend se jaag jaungi ya neend me hi unhe khud ko chodne ko majboor kar doongi. Par agar maine wo neend ki goli mila khana kha liya to mai so jaungi ek kaam karti hu wo khana kamre me le aati hu aur yaha khaungi hi nahi unhe yahi lagega ki mai neend me hu pichhli baar ki tarah. Hmm ye sahi rahega.

Idhar neeche khana ban to chuka tha par kaka ki garima ko awaaz dene ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi. Kaka soch rahe the ki kal raat me use chod diya ab kis muh se beti kahe. Unhone jeetu se garima ko awaaz lagane ko kaha hi tha ki upar seediyo se garima aati nazar aai. Garima apna attitude barkarar rakha aur kaka ki taraf dekha bhi nahi.
Garima: Mujhe plate me khana lagakar de dijiye mai apnr kamre me khaungi.
Kaka ne bhi chupchap khane ki plate lagakar garima ko pakda di aur garima khana lekar wapas mudi hi thi ki jeetu ne use awaaz dekar rok liya.
Jeetu: Garima di
Garima: Hmm kya hai
Jeetu: Wo darasal Hariya kaka ka phone aya tha wo kal shaam ko wapas aaenge aur wo lakdi ka pul bhi ban gaya hai to unhone apko tayaar rehne ko kaha hai wo kal shaam ko apko lene aaenge apko shaadi wali jagah me le jane ke liye.
Garima: Hmm theek hai.

Hariya ke wapas aane ki khabar sunkar garima khushi se bhar uthi par ye sunkar ki kal hi hariya use uski saheliyo ke paas chhod aaega wo thoda maayus bhi ho gai kyuki jab wo kal shaam hi aaega aur seedha haweli ki taraf chal dega to use uska saath samay bitane ka mauka hi nahi mil paega. Aur ye sochte hue bhi uska dil dhakk kar gaya ki aaj ki raat uski is kothi me aakhiri raat hai. Yahi sab sochte hue eo khane ki thaali lekar apne kamre me aa gai. Uske man me ankeko khayal aa rahe the ki chuki ye kaka ke liye bhi uske saath aakhiri raat hai to wo bhi iska bharpoor fayda utjane ki koshish karenge aur nishchit unhone aaj bhi uske khane me neend ki gloiya milai hogi. Par wo is raat ko kewal sone me barbaad nahi karna chahti thi isliye usne khana bina khae plate ko bistar ke neeche chhupa diya aur raat gehri hone ka intezaar karne lagi jab kaka har raat ki tarah wo almaari sarka kar uske kamre me aaenge.

Garima ka ek ek pal badi mushkil se beet raha tha wo neeche ho rahi khatpat ki awaaze sunne ke liye darwaaze par kaan lagae hue thi aur unke thamne ka intezaar kar rahi thi. Neeche khatpat ki awaaze ruk gai thi shayad jeetu khana kha kar bahar bane servant quarter me chala gaya tha aue ab kothi me wo aur Kaka hi the. Ab shayad kisi bhi pal kaka uske kamre me aate hi honge. Jab bade zor ki bhook lagi ho aur pizza order kare to 30 min ka intezaar bhi bada bhari lagta hai kuchh yahi haal garima ka tha uski chut ko bade zor ki bhook lagi thi use umeed thi ki jald hi wo 55 saal ka lund uski bhook shant karne aata hoga par ye intezaar usse bardasht nahi ho raha tha. Wo darwaaze par kaan laga kar bahar ki ahat ko sunne ka prayatn kar rahi thi ki shayad use kaka ke kadmo ki ahat sunai pad jae par bahar ekdum khamoshi chhai hui thi.

Garima ka sabra ab jawab de raha tha wo kabhi us almari ki taraf jakar uske peeche ki ahat ko sunne ka prayatna karti to kabhi darwaaze se neeche ki ahato ko sunne ka par har taraf sannata pasra tha. Pura din to usne jaise taise kaat liya kyuki use umeed thi ki har raat ki tarah aaj bhi kaka uske upar muth maarne to aaenge hi par ab use samajh aa raha tha ki aaj jis tarah usne kaka ko jhada hai ki wo neend ki goliya tak khane ko majboor ho gae the aise me shayad ab wo nahi aane wale. Par wo aisa kaise kar sakte hai ye jante hue ki aaj raat ke baad unhe dubara mere saath kuchb karne ka mauka nahi milne wala shayad galti meri hi thi maine hi sakhti ka kuchh jada natak kar diya agar aisa na hota to shayad aaj kj raat ko hum yaadgaar bana dete. Par ab wo kar bhi kya sakti thi jo hona tha wo to ho chuka tha is waqt itni raat me to wo jeetu ko bhi nahi bula sakti thi aur agar bulati bhi to kya pata subah ki tarah apne inexperience ki wajah use dubara garam karke khud jhad jata use to is waqt ek anubhavi lund chahiye tha jo uski garmi ko thanda kar sake aur ye kaam sirf Bihari kaka hi kar sakte the.

Par har beette pal aur bahar chhai khamoshi se clear hota ja raha tha ki bihari kaka ab aaj raat uske kamre me nahi aane wale aur shayad aaj uske khane me neend ki goliya bhi nahi milai gai hai. Usne bistar ke neeche rakhi khane ki plate nikali aur usme rakhi har sabzi ko thoda thoda chakh kar dekha swaad se to kuchh andaza lagana mushkil tha ki usme koi dawa mili hai ki nahi par thoda thoda chakne ke baad usne plate dubara neeche sarka di aur bistar par letkar intezaar karne lagi ki kya use sir bhari bhari lag raha hai kya use neend aa rahi hai. Par aaj raat to uski aankho se neend jaise udan chhu ho gai thi isse saaf zahir tha ki kaka ne aaj ke khane me neend ki goli nahi milai hai aur jab neend ki goli nahi milai to zahir hai unka aaj raat uske kamre me aane ka bhi koi irada nahi. Isliye aaj use pyasa hi rehna hoga isliye paristhiti se samjhota karte hue wo chupchap bistar par let gai aur aankhe band karke jabardasti sone ki jhoothi koshish karne lagi.

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Par garima ko aankh band karke lete hue kuchh pal ki use apne stano par kisi ke hontho ki garam garam saanse mehooss hui garima samajh gai ki akhiri uska intezaar khatam hua aur uske andar jal rahi aag ko thanda karne bihari kaka aa hi gae usne sari sharmo haya ko taak par rakhte hue bihari kaka ko kas kar apni baho me jakad liya aur uske sir ko apne seene par dabane lagi. Wo bihari kaka ka sir apne seene par dabae ja rahi dabae ja rahi thi par bihari kaka chupchap baithe thethe.

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Usse unki ye khamoshi bardasht nahi ho rahi thi wo chah rahi thi ki bihari kaka us par toot pade uske badan ko raund kar rakh de par bihari kaka to jaise jad ho gae the. Jab garima se aur bardasht na hua to usne aankhe khol hi di aur wo ye dekh kar shock reh gai ki wo apni kamukta ki aag me itni der se ek takiya ko apne seene se dabae bihari kaka ke khwaab dekh rahe thi. Bihari kaka to kamre me kahi the hi nahi wo jal bin machhli ki tarah tadap uthi aur ek baar phir bistar par karwate badalte hue khud ko kisi tarah sulane ki bharsak koshish karne lagi.

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Par jab pet ko bade zor ki bhook lagi ho to insaan laakh koshish kar le use neend nahi aati to chut ki bhook bhi bhook hoti hai wo bhi pet ki bhook se kisi maene me kum nahi hoti. Aur is waqt Garima ki chut ko bade zor se lund ki bhook lagi thi aur wo lund bhi uski pahuch ke daere me tha bus kuchh seediyo bhar ki doori par aur philhaal uske aur us lund ke beech me koi badha bhi nahi thi agar koi badha thi wo uski khud ki ichhashakti ki kya usme khud se neeche jakar apne se dugni umar ke buddhe aadmi se chudai ke liye poochne ki ichhashakti shakti hai. Uske shareer me vaasna ki aag lagi thi kal Hariya ke aane ki khabar ne bhi uski bechaini ko vada diya tha. Uske man me vichaar to aneko aa rahe the, Ya to wo kal raat ki ghatna ko kaka par daalte hue khud ko unki nazro me paak saaf rakhte hue chupchap sone ki koshish karte hue is raat ko yuhi kaat sakti thi aur yaha se jane ke baad ye afsos kar sakti hai ki wo us aakhiri raat ko khulkar enjoy nahi kar pai. Ya kuchh pal ke liye apni izzar ko kinare rakh kar yaha apni is aakhiri raat ko khul kar enjoy kar sakti thi par faisla use hi karna aur jald se jald karna tha.

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Ye ek housewife ke seduction ki kahaani thi jis seduction ke daldal me Garima ne apne kadam rakh diye wo daldal use apne andar kheech raha tha garima chah kar bhi isse nahi nikal sakti thi. Ye ek aisa andhera rasta tha jaha jane ka to raasta tha par wapsi ka koi rasta nahi tha. Garima ko bhi is vaasna ke daldal ke bahar aane ka raasta nahi soojh raha tha wo bus khud ko justify karne me lagi thi ki agar ek raat mai ek buddhe ke saath uske saamne khud ko zahir karke sex kar lungi to kya ho jaega hariya ke saath bhi to kara tha. Aur waise bhi us bechare ki to biwi bhi nahi hai kitna tadapta hoga apni biwi ke saath kuchh pyar bhare pal bitane ke liye agar mai ek raat ke liye uski biwi ki kumi poori kar dungi to isme galat kya hai ye to bade punya ka kaam hoga. Aur waise bhi bhagwaan ne aurat ko banaya kyu tha mard ke liye hi na mard ki kaam ichhao ki purti ke liye. To agar ek mard kaam vaasna ke liye tadap raha hai aur mere paas mauka hai ki mai uski madad kar sakti hu to aisa na karna paap hoga. Ek aurat hone ke nate mera farz hai ek mard ki hawas ko mitana. Aurat bani hi mard ke neeche sone ke liye hai to agar mai ye karungi to ye galat kaise hoga.

Garima ne aaj ki raat ko khul kar jeene ka man bana liya tha agar pyasa kue ke paas nahi aa raha tha to ab kue ko hi pyase ke paas jana padega yani agar kaka nere paas nahi aa rahe the to ab mujhe hi unke paas jana hoga. Garima ne Hariya ki biwi ke kapdo me se ek sexy si ghaghra choli nikal li jisme ghaghra kuchh chhota aur tight tha ghutno se khuchh neeche tak aur choli bhi behad tight aur peeche se ek dhaage ke sahare bandhi. Garima ne apne pehne hue kapde utar kar ye ghaghra choli pehen li. Yu to neeche jakar use apni chaddi utarwai hi thi par chudai se pehle chaddi sarakwane ka apna alag hi maza hai isliye usne ek kasi hui chaddi bhi pehen li jisme uski phooli hui chut aur peeche gaand ka ek ek kataav saaf nazar aa raha tha.

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Garima ne khud ko aaine me dekha choli itni jada tight thi ki usme se garime ke bade bade stano ke cleavage ubhar bhar bahar niklr pad rahe the aur andar bra ki gairmaujoodgi me un stano ke nipple bhi choli ke andar se hi apne akar aur sthan ka ehsaas kara rahe the. Choli aur ghaghre ke beech uska pet puri tarah khula tha khud ko jada kamuk banane ke liye usnr ghaghra thoda neeche se bandha tha taki uski kaka ko uski nabhi aur kamar ke spaaht darshan ho jae.Choli ke upar se ek chunri bhi daal li taki kaka ko ekdum se aisa na lage ki wo jaanboojh kar badan dikhau kapde pehen kar aai hai.

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Makeup ka jada samaan to garima ke paas tha nahi aur jo hariya ki biwi ka thoda bahut tha bhi wo bhi garima ne lagana theek nahi samjha kyuki itni raat me makeup kaun karta hai yadi wo pura makeup karke kaka ke paas jaegi to aisa lagega ki ek tavayaf apne grahak ko khush karne ke liye saj dhaj kar uske paas aai hai. Bus apni kamukta badane ke liya usne apne balo ko khol liya. Khule lambe balo aur is kasi hui ghaghra choli me garima gaanv ki kisi alhad gadrae badan wale bhabhi jaisi hi lag rahi thi. Garima us 56 saal ke buddhe rasoiya ke paas jane ko puri yarah tayaar thi hariya ke sath jo kuchh bhi hua uske liya kahi na kahi garima ko benefit of doubt diya ja sakta tha ki pehli raat hariya ne uski behoshi ka laabh uthkar use nanga karke uske raat guzari, phir uski jaagh me ek keeda chipak aur us keede ka zeher chooste chooste hariya ke honth uski chut tak pahuch gae, uske baad wo to achhe man se hariya ki malush karne gai thi par waha behek kar hariya ke sath sambhog kar baithi aur us khandahar me bhi hariya ne hi pehle karte hue use behkne ko majboor kara par jo kuchh garima ne kaka ke sath kara aur karne ja rahi thi usme to sandeh ki bhi koi gunzaish nahi thi ye to spasht roop se uski vaasna ka pratifal tha.

Par ab jo bhi ho aaj garima ne apni thodi bahut bachi khuchi maryada ki lakshman rekha ko bhi paar kar diya aur aahista se apne kamre ka darwaaza khol kar bahar aa gai. Bahar ekdum sannata pasra hua tha kitchen me halka halka nightbulb jal raha tha kaka har raat kitchen me hi chadar bichhakar sote hai. Ab us 32 varshiya shaadishuda mahila aue 56 varsiya buddhe rasoiyo ke beech chand seediyo ka fasla tha. Garima ne ahista ahista bina awaaz kiye seediyo se neeche utarna shuru kar diya Par ye neeche jati seediya apne saath garima ka charitra bhi neeche le rahi thi ab dekhna ye tha ki vaasna ke unmaad me jalti is housewife ka charitra ki kis seema tak neeche jane wala tha.

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Cant wait for next garima ka update aj hi dena plz
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(11-05-2020, 03:46 AM)C wa antLogan555 Wrote: [Image: XHmRjnyJ_o.jpeg]

Vineeta apni yoni par lakhan ki ungaliyo ki chhuan mehsoos kar rahi thi aur lakhan shant chitt apni ghatti badti dhadkano ko kabu karne ki koshish karte hue bus chupchap waha baithe the. Unhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki wo kaise vineeta ki yoni ke andar ungaliya daale.
Vineeta: Lakhan jee aap jitni der sochne me lagaenge utna jada samay hume is asuvidhajamak awastha me bitana hoga jo bhi karna hai ab apko karna hai to aap hi soch le apko in sabme kitna samay lagana hai. Ise jald se jald khatam karna hai ya yuhi bus samay vyarth karna hai.

Vineeta ki baat sunkar Lakhan ne ek gehri saas li aur un panch padartho me doobi apni do ungaliyo ko seedha vineeta ki yoni ke andar daakhil kar diya.

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Apni yoni me pravesh karti lakhan ki ungaliyo ko mehsoos karte hue vineeta ek tez aah lene ko majboor ho gai. Usne apni awaaz dabane ki bharsak koshish ki par jeewan me pratham baar kisi cheez ke apni yoni me pravesh karne ki uttejna ko wo chhupa na saki. Uski ye kamuk siskari lakhan ne bhi suni aur aise mahol me aurat ki siskari mard ko jada uttejit karti hai aur lakhan bhi kitne hi charitravaan kyu na ho the tl ek mard hi isliye is saskari ki pratikriya me unka ling bhi jhatke khane ko majboor ho gaya. Lakhan ne dheeme dheeme apni ungaliyo ko vineega ki yoni me andar bahar karna shuru kar diya.

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Halaki unke man me Vineeta ke liye bahut samman tha par uski kunwari chut ki kasawat na chahte bhi unka dhyan is or akarshit kar rahi thi. Lakhan ki ungaliya yoni ki deeearo se ragadti hui andar bahar ho rahi thi isi saaf zahir tha ki vineeta sach keh rahi thi uski yoni ab tak achhat kunwari hai.

Wahi vineeta ka bhi uttejna ke mare bura haal ho raha tha usne neha garima se unki chudai ke kisso ke bare me bada suna tha par kisi cheez ke chut ke andar jaane par kya kamuk ehsaas hota hai uska real anubhav use aaj hua. Koi cheez jab chut ki deewaro se ragad khate hue andar jati hai to shareer ka rom rom jhanjhana jata hai us jhanjhanahat ko usne aaj mehsooa kiya. Lakhan jante the ki vineeta andar se achhat yovana hai aur wo ungaliyo se uska kaumarya bhang nahi karna chahte the isliye wo apni ungaliya jada andar nahi daal rahe the aur ungaliya bhi bade haule haule andar bahar kar rahe the. Halaki vineeta ka man to kar raha tha ki lakhan apni ungaliya ko andar aur andar gehrai tak utar de apni speed bada kar is romanch ko dungna tiguna chauguna kar de par kamukta aur utttena ke bawjood lihaaj aur maryada ke bediyo ne hontho ko jakad rakha tha. Apni uttejna ko bardasht karne ke liye usne kund ki deewar ko kas kar pakad rakha tha.

Uski saase ukhad rahi thi pair bhari ho rahe the wo kis tarah peeche deewar ka sahara lekar khadi thi wahi janti thi. Uska pet me toofan sa uth raha tha jaise barso se kisi nadi ke bahaav ko baandh bana kar rok diya gaya ho aur wo naadi aaj pure veg ke saath us baandh ko tod kar beh jane ko machal rahi ho. Kuchh yahi halat is waqt vineeta ki thi shaadi hone ke bawjood jo chut ek pati ke sukh se vanchit rahi aaj use lakhan singh ke roop me ek humsathi mil gaya tha jo apni ungaliyo se hi us baandh ko tod kar use beh jane ko agrasar kar tha. Aur ek mard se milan ko tarasti vineeta ki pyasi chut kab tak is ragdai ghisai ko bardasht kar pati baandh ki deeware kamzor pad chuki thi bus zarurat thi ek tez pravaah ki. Aur ek tez pravaah ke saath wo baandh toot gaya vineeta aaj jeewan me pehli baar itna jhadi itna jhadi ki lakhan ki ungaliya us kaameus se sarabor ho gai. Lakhan ko khud par bahut sharam aa rahi hai ki jo mahila uska har kadam par saath de rahi hai jo umar uski beti asha se bhi chhoti hai uske saath use ye sab karna pada ye sochte hue lakhan ne apni ungaliya yoni se bahar nikal li.

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Idhar vineeta ke saase tez tez chal rahi wo itni zoor zor sr saase le rahi thi ki uski saaso ki awaaz tak lakhan jee ko sunai de rahi thi. Uttejna ke mare uske honth sookh gae paav ladkhada rahe the par ab bhi ek antim kaam karna baaki tha prasad grahan aur wo bhi seedha yoni mukh se. Apni ungaliyo se lakhan ne vineeta ka skhalan to karwa diya par ab uski yoni par apna muh lagane me unhe bahut sharam aa rahi thi ki kaise wo aisa kar sakte hai. Par ab vineeta je liye pal pal bahut bhari pad raha tha.
Vineeta: Lakhan jee please ab ye sochna band kijiye mujhe ek ek pal khada rehna bhari lag raha hai please ye puja khatam kijiye iski aakhiri rasam ko bhi pura kariye.

Vineeta ki baat sunkar lakhan ne bhi apna dil majboot kar liya aur apne honth vineeta ki yoni ki taraf bada diye aur haatho se andaza lagate hue apne honth us yoni mukh par rakh diye.

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Vineeta ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya aur uske muh se ek tez siskari nikal padi. Lakhan bhi vineeta ki halat ko samajh raha tha par wo ye nahi samajh raha tha ki kahi na kahi vineeta khud bhi ye chahta hai isliye usne jada samay vyarth na karte hue apni jeebh ko vineeta ki yoni par upar se neeche tak fira diya use apni jeebh par tel doodh dahi shehed jal ke saath vineeta ki yoni se nikle kaamrus ke swaad ka bhi ehsaas ho raha tha.

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Kya madak swaad tha us kaamrus ka aur kamuk ehsaas tha un hontho ka yoni mukh par vineeta lakhan dono us pal me ek alag hi duniya me pahuch gae. Par jald hi lakhan ne khud par kabu rakhte hue apne honth wapas hata liye.

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Prasad grahan ka ye antim kaam bhi pura ho gaya tha aur isike saath puri ho gai thi aaj ki GAIA Puja jo prarambh to behad shant aur saumya tareeke se vriksharopan aur kanya bhoj ke saath shuru hui par ant aate aate Lakhan ke hontho ko Vineeta par yoni tak jane ko majboor kar diya. Ye antim padaav pura karne ke baad lakhan chupchap uth kar khade ho gae vineeta se kuchh kehne sunne ki unme himmat na thi unhone apne kapde bhi nahi uthae aur bus vineeta ko itna bol kar ki wo kamre ke bahar jaa rahe hai kamre ke bahar nikal gae. Lakhan jee ke kamre se chale jane ke baad vineeta ne apni aankho me bandhi patti ko khola apni jaagho ke beech se behte panch padrsh aur kaamrus ke mishran ko behte dekha. Kuchh pal vineeta wahi aankhe band kare khade khade kuchh der pehle ke lamho ko yaad karti rahi. Kuchh der baad jab vineeta ki saase thami uski ladkhadati taango me bal aya to vineeta ne jal kund ke paani se apni chut aur jaangho ko saaf kara apne kapdo ko sameta aur unhe pehen kar bahar aa gai.

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Bahar lakhan apne doosre kapde pehne shayankaksha me nazre jhukae baithe kyuki philhaal vineeta se nazre milane ki unme himmat na thi sharam aur maryada ne unke hontho kl see diya tha. Vineeta bhi unki jhuki nazre dekh kar unki manodasha ko samajh gai aur philhaal usne bhi baat na karna hi sahk samjha shayad subah tak wo bhi normal ho jae. Isliye wo bhi chupchap apne bistar par akar let gai aur lakhan zameen par beete palo ko yaad karte aankhe vand karke let gae. Aankh band karte hi unhe wo anubhav mehsoos hone lage jab unhone vineeta ke stano ko dabaya tha uske nitambo ko chuua tha uski yoni me apni ungaliyo ko andar bahar kara tha uskr kaamrus ko apne hontho se chakha tha aur ye sab sochte sochte hi na jane kab unke haath apne ling par pahuch gae aur wo vineeta ke badan ki komalta ko yaad karte karte apna ling masalne lage. Wo apne ling ko masalte rahe use ragadte rahe jab uske andar ki garmi shant nahi ho gai. Unki ye dhoti bhi unke veerya se sarabor ho gai.

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Vineeta ke bare sochte sochte unhe apna lund to jhad diya tha par jis tarah jab koi murush apna lund masal raha hota hai tab use sahi galat ka bhan nahi rehta par jhadne ke baad uske man me ek glani ka bhav utpann hota hai. Yahi haal is waqt lakhan jee ka tha uttejna ke vashibhoot hokar vineeta ki badan ki kamukta ke prati asakt hokar wo skhalan to kar baithe par jhadne ke baad unhe khud par gussa aa raha tha apni soch par ghin aa rahi thi ki jo stree unke liye unke pariwaar ke liye itna bada balidaan de rahi hai apne maan samman ko taak par rakh kar itna kuchh kar rahi hai uske prati wo is tarah ka bhaav apne man me laae bhi kis tarah unhe vineeta ke bare me ye sab sochne ka bada pachhtava ho raha tha. Par ab jo hona tha wo to ho chuka tha isliye unhone chupchap apne vastro me se ek nai lungi nikali aur use lekar snankaksha ki taraf chale gae. Vineeta unhe dekh na pai kyuki wo bhi aankhe band kare apne khayalo me khoi hui thi.

Vineeta ab bhi unhi palo me khoi hui thi use ab bhi apne badan par lakhan jee ke haatho ka sparsh mehsoos ho raha tha apni yoni me chitiya si rengti mehsoos ho rahi thi jaise lakhan jee ab bhi apni ungaliyo ko usme andar bahar kar rahe ho. Ye sab sochte sochte hi vineeta ki apni chut me geelapan mehsoos hone laga aur uski band aankhe khul gai. Usne palat kar ek nazar lakhan jee ki taraf dekha jo apni lungi badal kar wapas apni jagah akar let gae the. Wo kuchh pal ektak lakhan jee ke robile chehre ko dekhti rahi phir nazre pher li. Kya soch rahi hu mai wo meri saheli ke sasur hai aur mai unke sath bitae lamho se itna uttejit ho rahi hu ye galat hai. Waise bhi jo baat sambhav hi nahi hai uske baare me vyarth soch kar mai sirf khud ko hi taqleef doongi. Jo ho nahi sakta uske bare soch kar kuchh fayda nahi mai unke prati koi bhi bhaav kyu na rakhu par ye mai bhi janti hu ki unke man me mere prati waisa koi bhaav nahi hai. Aur shayad humare beech umar ka jo antar hai use dekhte hue achha hoga mai bhi aisa koi bhaav na rakhu yahi sahi rahega bus kal ki antim puja ko sampann karu aur lakhan jee ki zindagi se hamesha hamesha ke liye chali jau. Ha yahi sahi rahega yahi sahi rahega.

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Vineeta aur Lakhan dono hi kahi na kahi ek doosre ke prati asakt the par ek doosre ke prati lihaaj aur maryada ka ye bandhan unhe apne man ke bhavo ek doosre par zahir karne se roke hue tha. Navagrah Puja me aath garho ki puja sampann ho chuki thi aur ab kewal ek grah shesh bacha tha SHUKRA yani VENUS jise GODDESS OF LOVE bhi kaha jata hai. Kya ye Prem ki Devi inke man ke chhupe hue prem ko ek doosre ke saamne la paegi ya ye premi joda is kewal puja ki sharto ko pura karte karte bina ek doosre ke man ke bhaavo ko jane hi ek doosre ko alwida keh dega ye to NAVAGRAH Puja ke antim grah ki puja me hi pata chalega tab tak inhe yuhi ek doosre ke itne kareeb hote hue bhi ek doosre ke viyog ki agni me jalna hoga shayad yahi vidhi ka vidhaan tha.
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Can't wait for next. Garima episode complete Kar do
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Very nice update
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Mind blowing......mazedar update diya bhai
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Zabardast update diya hai. Lekin is update se hamara mannn nahi bhara. Plz jaldi se ek baray wala update dijiye.
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Super update
Ab to ek hi rat bachi he us me jeetu ko bhi moka de do.
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Jaldi upload do...
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Shaban randi mrr gyi h kyaa
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