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(24-11-2018, 04:46 PM)firefly Wrote: He is also not belong to the original writing of that story i think bro as he doesn't have any previous back!!! May be i am ryt or wrong?? U talking about this story's writer?
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main aapako yahaan dekhakar bahut khush hoon. aapakee naee kahaanee ke lie bahut kuchh dhanyavaad. mujhe ummeed hai ki yah kahaanee koel ek masoom grhinee kee tarah bahut kaamuk hogee.
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मुझे लंबे समय बाद आपको देखकर बहुत खुशी हुई। आपकी नई कहानी के लिए बहुत कुछ धन्यवाद।
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(24-11-2018, 01:24 PM)SlayeRaju Wrote: Missed your koel ek.masoom housewife story a lot.
Bro.do u have that story still??
Yes i do have that story.
started on 19th October 2017 , a total of 233 pages.
CHARCHTERS.
Raj mehra, 29yrs (Husband)
Koel mehra, 27yrs (Wife)
Kamla, 39yrs (Naukrani)
Birju chacha, 58yrs ( Ex-care taker of now abonded govt logde)
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(24-11-2018, 08:52 PM)sarit11 Wrote: Yes i do have that story.
started on 19th October 2017 , a total of 233 pages.
CHARCHTERS.
Raj mehra, 29yrs (Husband)
Koel mehra, 27yrs (Wife)
Kamla, 39yrs (Naukrani)
Birju chacha, 58yrs ( Ex-care taker of now abonded govt logde)
Can you please post full story somewhere. I am sure there are lot of readers want to read that story again
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Waiting
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(24-11-2018, 04:46 PM)firefly Wrote: He is also not belong to the original writing of that story i think bro as he doesn't have any previous back!!! May be i am ryt or wrong??
Yes. Koel story does not belong to THE EVIL. He had mentioned that on first page of his story. I think you haven't read that story completely.
First 3-4 updates were used to give preview of the story, rest updates were owned by THE EVIL.
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(24-11-2018, 08:52 PM)sarit11 Wrote: Yes i do have that story.
started on 19th October 2017 , a total of 233 pages.
CHARCHTERS.
Raj mehra, 29yrs (Husband)
Koel mehra, 27yrs (Wife)
Kamla, 39yrs (Naukrani)
Birju chacha, 58yrs ( Ex-care taker of now abonded govt logde)
Please post thi story on this forum with pictures (if any)
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Congratulations THE EVIL for this new story. Lots of love and all the best
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Waiting
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Story is developing very smoothly and wisely. This story is having lots of scope. All the best and give next update at earliest.
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Yo EVIL NICE TO SEE YOU BACK IN ACTION...... GREAT STORY GOING SMOOTH .....
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Hope neha , riya , karim , Rakesh. Will soon have a new life in this brand new home.
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Super hot evil bro
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Keep going like this show everyone who is the boss
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28-11-2018, 07:14 PM
(This post was last modified: 28-11-2018, 07:25 PM by hfmwife.)
The story is going to the right direction.I think this story will be more erotic and lascivious if only Ramu or Hariya seduces the female members of this family one by one and becomes successful to shag them.. Thanks for giving a big update.
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bahut achchha update. aage badho. agale update ke lie intajaar kar rahe hain
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