[guru02041988]

Update bro...

[guru02041988]

Update bro...

[RajAg]

yahi to problem hai.. acchi story ya to incomplete hoti hai ya writer khud hi story ka band baja deta h jarurat se jyada late update de kr..
Any way, hope ki writer sahab es story ko jald complete karne ki kosis karega.

[axm55]

waiting for next update

[Rohann]

Update dedo kafi din ho gye hai

[braj_65]

Update brother

[Rajeev01987]

Ab to mera dhimak kharb ho gaya tha.

Gussa bhara hua tha .

Lekin meri jo wife thi wo bhola ke saam ne aznabhi thi so mak apna gussa control kia mai nahi chaha hata tha ki
Bhola ko pata chale.

Maine ab than lia tha ki mai pata kar ke hee rahunga..
So maine bhola se kaha

Me : chalo naseeb wala hai sule man
Pategi nahi vo alag baat hai lekin bike pe ghomane ka maza to le raha hai..

Bhola : hmm lekin pategi bhayya vo maal patalegansuleman


Me : kher dekte hai. Aur sale kya plan hai aaj ka

Bhola: kuch nahi.

Me : to ruk jaa aaj yahi pe raat me piyenge aur morning chale jaana

Bhola: hat se ok bhaaya

Me chalo theek hai .

Mai idar udar ki baate karne laga 

Maine tan lia tha ki mai isse poori baat janukga

Thodi der baad mai dinner aur drink ka order kia 

Aur iss dauran maine usse pucha ki kab se vo. Maal aa rahi ahi bike pe


Bhola: bahi ek ded hafte ho gaye muzhe pata chale shayad ek maheene se hoga


Mai: vo accha

Suleman sala pakka khiladi hai

Bhola: ha hmbhayya vo to hai

Lekin sala suleman aise chal chal aur kismat bhi saat dia to e sab mumkin hua

.

Me : accha

B: bhyya vo maal to special training chodne ka plan ki thi timeing ke wazw se

[playboy131]

Come on dude agar story post krne ka intrest nahi h to plz ise khtm kar do itne dino ke bad itna chota sa update readers ke sath dhoka hai

[mahamatherchod]

i agree completely with@playboy 131. if you are not interested in continue story shut it down ,because its 35 pages and your story has not begun yet. irregular & small updates killing interest of the story. You are doing same thing what writer having user id Ajanmol or Anmolkjain have done with story Hate story or Ab bassss.

[asha10783]

Update pls

[Rajeev01987]

It was suppose to long update but due to. Some intrupt i posted half ..


And my friend rightly said i am stopping story here ... Thanks you guyss take care bye

[krishagarwal]

Dude he is wrong but playing with reader’s emotion also wrong...we are eagerly waiting for your update ..even this reader also your fan but like everyone he also frustrated with your update timing...i know you are doing it for free i love your job you dont get payment from us and u have also less time but reader’s expectations also there... want to see next update if u have time plz reply

[mahamatherchod]

This writer has stopped this story so someone please take this story and post some long updates and finish the story otherwise this will another story which will go incompleted. The writer who ever will take this story must give regular updates .

[exbiixossip2]

bro. kyo apna or reader ka time kharab kar rahe ho rest karo yaar agar thak gaye ho to...

[axm55]

please post next update

[Bhavana_sonii]

Story update kijiye writer mahodaya

[drlund]

Plz continue bro

[Raj321]

Bhai pls continue story ....fast forward mai complete kro ...

[exbiixossip2]

update do bro.. kya hua

[drlund]

Bhai update karo plz... see beggars cant be choosers...
Dhayan mat do inki baatin pe...