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#21
(24-11-2018, 04:46 PM)firefly Wrote: He is also not belong to the original writing of that story i think bro as he doesn't have any previous back!!! May be i am ryt or wrong??
U talking about this story's writer?
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#22
main aapako yahaan dekhakar bahut khush hoon. aapakee naee kahaanee ke lie bahut kuchh dhanyavaad. mujhe ummeed hai ki yah kahaanee koel ek masoom grhinee kee tarah bahut kaamuk hogee.
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#23
मुझे लंबे समय बाद आपको देखकर बहुत खुशी हुई। आपकी नई कहानी के लिए बहुत कुछ धन्यवाद।
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#24
(24-11-2018, 01:24 PM)SlayeRaju Wrote: Missed your koel ek.masoom housewife story a lot.
Bro.do u have that story still??

Yes i do have that story.

started on 19th October 2017   , a total of 233 pages.


CHARCHTERS.

Raj mehra, 29yrs (Husband)

Koel mehra, 27yrs (Wife)

Kamla, 39yrs (Naukrani)

Birju chacha, 58yrs ( Ex-care taker of now abonded govt logde)
 horseride  Cheeta    
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#25
(24-11-2018, 08:52 PM)sarit11 Wrote: Yes i do have that story.

started on 19th October 2017   , a total of 233 pages.


CHARCHTERS.

Raj mehra, 29yrs (Husband)

Koel mehra, 27yrs (Wife)

Kamla, 39yrs (Naukrani)

Birju chacha, 58yrs ( Ex-care taker of now abonded govt logde)

Can you please post full story somewhere. I am sure there are lot of readers want to read that story again
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#26
Update please..
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#27
Waiting.please update.
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#28
Waiting
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#29
(24-11-2018, 04:46 PM)firefly Wrote: He is also not belong to the original writing of that story i think bro as he doesn't have any previous back!!! May be i am ryt or wrong??

Yes. Koel story does not belong to THE EVIL. He had mentioned that on first page of his story. I think you haven't read that story completely. 

First 3-4 updates were used to give preview of the story, rest updates were owned by THE EVIL.
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#30
(24-11-2018, 08:52 PM)sarit11 Wrote: Yes i do have that story.

started on 19th October 2017   , a total of 233 pages.


CHARCHTERS.

Raj mehra, 29yrs (Husband)

Koel mehra, 27yrs (Wife)

Kamla, 39yrs (Naukrani)

Birju chacha, 58yrs ( Ex-care taker of now abonded govt logde)

Please post thi story on this forum with pictures (if any)
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#31
Congratulations THE EVIL for this new story. Lots of love and all the best
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#32
Waiting
DEATH IS JUST THE BEGINING.
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#33
Alok- han shloka...bahu thak gayi hogi safar se....araam karne do use....

shloka- thik hai bahu jaa araam kar le....

priya- ji momji....

fir priya stairs chad kar chali jati hai....aditya thode der batien karne ke baad apne room chala jata hai....wahan jakar oh dekhta hai ke priya ek taraf mun kiye hue bed men leti hui thi....aditya smile karte hue andar ata hai....aur door lock karta hai jiska ahsas priya ko hojata hai aur oh blanket ko pura apne upar le leti hai....aditya bhi bed men let jata hai...aur priya se sat jata hai...priya jo mun fula kar baithi thi usko piche dhakelti hai...aditya...meri jaan abhi bhi gussa hai kya mujhse....

priya- baat mat karo tum mujhse....aur mujhe sone do.....

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aditya- lagta hai meri jaan ko ab mere tarike se manana padega....

priya satark hojati hai....use pata tha ab aditya kuch na kuch noughty karega....aditya ab blanket ke andar ajata hai...

priya- aditya sone do na mujhe....

blanket men akar oh priya se sat jata hai aur uski komal kamar ko bhinch leta hai....

priya- ahhh aditya nooo....

fir aditya priya ki kamar men tickling karne lagta hai jisse priya ki hansi nikal padti hai....

aditya- hahaha....

priya- choro na...mujhe sone do...

aditya- pehle bolo mujhe maaf kar diya....

priya- bilkul nahiii...fir toh raho rukko...oh firse tickling karne lagta hai....

priya- aa aditya rukkk jawwoo...thik hai maaf kar diya....

aditya- chalo thik hai...

priya- thik hai mujhe sone do ab....

itna bolkar oh idar ghum kar let jati hai blanket lekar....priya ke chehre par smile thi ab....oh blanket men se hi....

priya- main abhi bhi gussa hun tumse....

aditya- uhmmm toh aur manana padega meri jaan ko....okey toh ek rasta hai mere paas...blanket men se hi...

priya- konsa rasta?? Oh smile karte hue bolti hai....

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Aditya- shaam men bataunga....tum araam karo ab.....

fir aditya shower lene chala jata hai....kitchen men vimla ramu se baat kar rahi thi....

vimla- dekhiye bahurani agyi hain....abse thoda dhayan rakhiye....kahin kahin bhi shuru mat hojayiye....aur is ghar men jawan log rehte hain....acha lagta hai kya is umar ye sab karna....

ramu uske latke hue chuche blouse ke upar se maslte hue....

rumu- meri patni ko chodne ke liye ab main logon ki parwa karu kya vimla...

vimla- kya aap bhi.....aisi gandi batien yun khule men mat kijye...

ramu- tu oh sab chor chal kamre men....

vimla- kya aap bhi...apko is umar men bhi ye sab ki padi hui hai....is waqt nahi koi askta hai....

ramu- vimla tu bohat natak karne lagi hai ajkal....

vimla- mujhe kaam hai bohat aap jakar bahar garden men pani dijye....

vimla tehri adhedu umar ki awrat use is umar men sex karna acha nahi lagta tha....lekin ramu budha hone ke bawjud bhi tehra apne lund se majbur...isi baat ko lekar dono men anband hoti rehti thi...ramu fir udar se bahar chala jata hai pani dene....udar jakar....

ramu- sasura zindagi jhand ho rakhi hai....hariya bhi nahi hai baat karne ke liye....

shaam men kareeb 5 baje haweli men car enter hoti hai...car rukte hi pihu jaldi se door kholkar andar chali jati hai....hall men hi use uska bhai aditya mil jata hai....

pihu- bhaiyaa...

Aditya- pihuu aaja aja....

pihu- sab kuch choriye mera bola hua saman le aye ya nahi...?? 

Aditya- jakar teri bhabhi se hi puch le mujhe kuch nahi pata....

shloka- pihu pehle fresh toh ho lo...

pihu- mom mujhe pehle meri pyari bhabhi se milna hai....bhaiya kahan hain bhabhi??? 

Aditya- room men....

pihu chali jati hai upar 2nd floor par sidha....aur door kholti hai room ka....priya jo bed men baithi hui apna mobile use karrahi thi....pihu ko dekhte hi....

priya- pihuuuu....

pihu- bhabhiii...

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priya mobile side men rakh kar udar jati hai aur pihu bhi aage chali jati hai aur dono gale lagte hain.....fir alag hokar....

priya- kaisi hai tu?? 

Pihu- thik hun bhabhi...aap batayiye....kaise raha honeymoon??? Priya thoda sharma jati hai....

priya- pihu...aa baith....

dono bed par baith jatin hain.....dono men achi banti thi....priya side men rakha hua bag open karti hai...aur dono bhabhi nanad baton men lag jati hai....

udar hariya car park karke piche wale kamre men jachuka tha....wahan jakar oh apna shirt nikal deta hai....shirt nikalte hi uski safed kale balon wali chati dikhti hai...fir oh apni pant bhi nikal deta hai....ab oh sirf ek badi si underwear men tha....thaka hua oh ab niche bichi hui chatayi par let jata hai....uski badi si underwear men ek bada sa tambu bana hua tha....hariya kuch sochte hue apna lund underwear ke upar se pakad leta hai....thoda aur sochne ke baad oh apna underwear jhat se niche kar leta hai....aur apna bada kala lauda pakad kar upar niche karne lagta hai....hariya kala kaluta budha tha lekin uske paas acha khasa driving experience tha isliye use kaam diya gaya tha....lekin rajput family ko ye nahi pata tha ke jis admi ke sath oh apni ladli pihu ko haroz bhejte hain kitna bada tharki hai.....

hariya ne jab pehli baar pihu ko dekha tha tabse hi oh uski jawani ke piche tha lekin rajput khanadan ka pure gaun men rutba tha jisse hariya bakhubi wakif tha...agar koi galat harkat ki toh uski kya halath hogi...haroz oh pihu ko pick aur drop ke dauran ghurta tha....ab is waqt oh pihu ke bare men sochte hi apna kala lauda hila raha tha....use pata tha ke pihu jaisi itne bade ghar ki jawan beti uske tha kabhi nahi anewali....impposible tha oh....isliye toh oh apna lauda hilane men laga hua tha......

hariya- kya lag rahi thi aaj ohhh ahhhhhhh....

aaj pihu ki salwar aur kamiz ki tasweer dimag men bana kar oh laga hua tha....thodi der baad oh jhad jata hai....

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hariya- ahhhhh sasuurraaaahhhbhh....

uske kale laude se gadha sa safed pani niklta hai....oh wahi hampte hue lete rehta hai....raat men khane ke baad sab hall men baithe batien kar rahe the....

alok- aditya oh meeting ka kya huwa??? 

Aditya- arey haan papa main oh bhul gaya...main abhi aya...

shloka- kaha jarhe ho beta...

aditya- abhi aya mom....oh kitchen men chala jata hai....

shloka- bahu...kya lane gaya hai oh?? 

Priya- nahi pata momji....

aditya- arey vimla kakii...oh kaam kar rahi thi....

vimla- chote malik kuch chahiye tha??? 

Aditya- haa oh maine oh tabhi fridge men plastic rakhne diya tha oh dijye...

vimla- haa abhi deti hun...

oh bada sa plastic cover nikal kar use de deti hai....oh jate hue....

aditya- haa kaki oh ramu kaka kidr hain?? 

Vimla- on andr hain...aditya use cover se 2 bade se ice cream cones nikal kar deta hai....

vimla- ye kisliye chote malik?? 

Aditya- oh kaka mera ek bada kaam hua hai aaj us khushi men...

vimla- badhayi ho chote malik....

aditya- dhanywad kaki....aur haa oh hariya kaka ko bhi ye ek de dena....

vimla- thik hai chote malik....fir aditya chala jata hai bahar....uska ek plastic bag lekar ata dekh....

alok- arey ye kya hai....aditya ice cream cones nikal kar bahar rakh deta hai....

pihu- bhaiya ice cream?? 

Aditya- batata hun batata hun....toh sab suno...aaj ki meeting successfull rahi aur humari company ko bohat bada project mila hai....

alok- arey wah ye toh bohat badi khabar hai....

shloka- haa betaa...

pihu- congrats bhaiya...

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priya bhi smile kar rahi thi lekin andar se oh khush nahi thi...use pata tha ab adity busy hojayega is project men....

aditya- haan papa ab humare company ko acha khasa expsure milega international market men....

alok- achi baat hai...

pihu- bhaiya itni badi khushi ki baat hai aur aap ye ice cream ki party de rahe ho....kahin ghuma kar le ate na....

aditya- abhi nahi pihu....fir kabhi....mujhe bohat kaam hai.....

pihu- hum logon ka choriye...kam se kam meri bhabhi ko toh kisi romantic dinner par lejayiye...ispar...priya smile karti hai pihu ke taraf dekh....

shloka- haa beta bahu ko kahin ghum is khushi ke mauqe par kal....

aditya- dekhta hun mom...time nikal paun toh....

alok- chlalo thik hai...raat kafi hogyi hai...jakar sojawo sab log....

fir sab chale jate hai....udar kitchen ka kaam karke vimla side men bane hue chote se kamre men chali jati hai...wahan par ramu kaka leta hua tha...

vimla- suniye oh chote malik ka kuch bada kaam hua hai us khushi men ye khane ke liye diya hai...aap zara hariya bhai ko bhai ko de ayiye....

ramu- acha kaisa kaam....

vimla- mujhe nahi pata...

ramu- thik hai main ata hun....

fir ramu kaka bahar se hote hue piche chala jata hai hariya ke room men....dono baith jate hain...

ramu- pine ka man kar raha hai nikal na bottle...aur ye le...aditya sahab ne kisi khushi men diya hai...

hariya- kaisi khushi?? 

Ramu- nahi malum...

hariya- ruk main bottle niklta hun...

fir dono sharab pine baith jate hain...dono idar udar ki baton men lag jate hain...udar aditya aur priya ke room men....priya niche se nangi thi aur aditya bhi....aditya uske upar chada hua dhakke laga raha tha....aur priya ki siskariya wahan gunj rahi thi...jo wahan ke mahol ka aur garam kar rahi thi....

priya- ahhh addiiii ahhhh aurr zorrseee ahhhhhhahhh ahhhh...

aditya- haanbmn annn hmmmppp....

priya aditya ko apni taraf khinchne ki koshish kar rahi thi apne hath uske kamar men dalkar....

aditya- ahhhhhh priyyaa maiinn nazdikk hunnn....

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priya- aaddi ahhhhhhhh thodii derr aurr karro na plssss ahhhhh....

aditya- mainn chhoottt rahhaa hunnn ahhhhh....

aditya jhad jata hai....oh jhat se apna lund bahar nikal leta hai chut ke bahar....aditya ke chote gore se lund par condom laga hua tha....condom lagane ki ye waja thi ke dono ne abhi tak family planning nahi ki thi....jhadte hi aditya uthkar bathroom chala jata hai aur wahan dustbin men condom dal deta hai...fir wahi fresh hone lagta hai....

idar priya waise hi leti hui thi kisi soch men dubi hui....niche uski chut halka halka ras chor rahi thi...jo khud uska hi tha....uski chut ke paas halke halke baal the....priya kisi soch men thi waise hi leti hui...thodi der baad aditya fresh hokar bahar ata hai....

aditya- priya jawo fresh ho lo...priya jawab nahi deti....

aditya- priyaa...

priya- huhhh...ab oh uski taraf dekhti hai...

aditya- jawo fresh ho lo...

priya- haa....

fir priya chali jati hai andar....wahan jakar khud ko aine men dekhne lagti hai....halanki dono abhi abhi honeymoon manake aye the lekin priya utni khush nahi lag rahi thi.....uska matlab ye nahi tha ke dono ki sex life achi nahi thi...dono khush the ekdusre se lekin priya in particular kuch miss kar rahi thi...apne pati se oh kuch zyada expect kar rahi thi....is waqt oh mirror samne khudko nihar rahi thi....

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thodi der aur waise hi rukne ke baad shower lekar oh bahar chali ati hai....adi sochuka tha...priya ko achi tarha se pata tha ke sex karne ke baad adi gehri nind men sojata hai....priya fir ek wordrobe pehankar bed men akar let jati hai....priya ko bhi thodi der men nind ajati hai....

agli subha humesha ki tarha shloka nakron ko orders deneki awaz ane lagti hai....pihu apne pink bed men araam se leti hui thi....bohat hi pyari lag rahi thi oh is waqt....uske cute chehre par baal bhikre hue the jisse oh aur cute lag rahi thi....is waqt usne top aur shorts pehni hui thi...un shorts men uski gori tangen mast lag rahi thi...aur top ke upar se uske chuchon ka shape uff kehar dha rahe the bas....

tabhi uske kahon men uski maa ki awaz gunjti hai....ek do baar na sunkar teesri baar uski ankh khul jati hai....oh uthkar baith jati hai....apna mobile check karne ke baad oh fresh hone chali jati hai....udar priya ki ankh bhi niche horhe awazon se khul jati hai....lekin side men adi nahi tha....aur na hi bathroom se koi awaz arhi thi....

priya- kaha chale gaye...

oh uthkar fresh hone chali jati hai....niche humesha ki tarha tayari hochuki thi nashte ki....fresh hokar ready honeke baad pihu niche ajati hai....aaj usne jeane aur top pehni hui thi...top ke upar jacket....niche akar oh dining table par baith jati hai....shloka wahin thi....

pihu- mumma bhabhi nahi ayi?? 

Shloka- arey han main bhul gayi...bahuuu....priya jo room se bahar nikal hi rahi thi....

priya- haa momji ayi...

stairs se utrte hue jaise koi apsara arhi thi....gulabi saree ke andar matching color ka backless blouse....uske kale khule lambe baal kamar tak arhe the....

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shloka- awo bahuu....priya akar baith jati hai...

pihu- good morning bhabhi....

priya- good morning....momji adi kahan hain?? 

shloka- bahu o jaldi hi chala gaya office kuch urgent kaam tha use....jaldi men tha na isliye nahi bataya hoga tumko...

priya- hann...dono fir khane men lag jate hain...

priya- momji baithiye na aap bhi...

shloka- nahi bahu kha le...tujhe toh pata main unke sath hi khate hun....

priya- aye nahi hain papaji abhi tak?? 

Shloka- ate hi honge tum dono khawo....

fir pihu aur priya nashte karne lagte hain....thodi der baad dono ka hojata hai....

pihu- chalo mumma main chalti hun...

shloka- haa...arey ruk hariya ko batana toh bhul hi gayi...ruk main bolti hun use....

pihu- mumma rehne do ab...mujhe deri horhi hai...main bol deti hun...

shloka- haa thik hai...pihu....bye bhabhi...

priya- bye pihu...

fir pihu main door se bahar nikal kar piche servent quarter jane lagti hai...oh yaha shayd hi kabhi ayi thi...na hi use aneki zarurat padi thi...wahan jo chota sa room sa bana tha uske door ke bahar ab oh khadi thi...oh apni watch dekhte hue...

pihu- hariya chachaaaa...usko awaz lagati hai....andar se koi awaz nahi ati...pihu ko late horha tha....

pihu- hariya chachaa....

isbar thoda zorse awaz lagati hai....adar isbar hariya jag jata hai....kisi lady ki awaz sunkar oh hadbada sa jata hai....oh is waqt dhoti aur banyan men tha...typical gaun wale admi ki tarha...urgency dekh oh jaldi se darwaza khol deta hai...lekin oh khud ka hulya thik karna bhul gaya tha....

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pihu jo pehli baar yahan ayi thi hariya ko aise dekh oh thoda chaunk jati hai....thodi der men hi oh apna mun dusri taraf ghuma leti hai...hariya bhi pihu ko dekh hadbada sa jata hai aur jaldi se andar jakar khud ko thik karta hai aur ata hai...

hariya- boliye pihu memsab?? Pihu dhire se idar ghumti hai aur...

pihu- chacha kya boliye?? Mujhe college men deri hojayegi...chalna nahi hai kya...

hariya- haan haan pihu memsab main abhi aya...

pihu udar se ati hai main entrence par wait karne lagti hai....thodi der men hi hariya car lekar ajata hai...pihu jaldi se door kholkar baithne lagti hai...baithte hue oh thoda jhuk si jati hai jisse uske chuchon ki line hariya ke samne ajati hai...us top men uske chuche aur bhi mast lag rahe the..upr se jacket....hariya ka lauda uski men fankar raha tha....lekin oh majbur tha....pihu ke sath zara bhi chedkani karne ka anjam oh janta tha....pihu baithne ke baad oh car dauda deta hai....

idar priya breakfast karke wapas apne bedroom men achuki thi...use bore horha tha isliye oh apna mobile lekar apne pati dev call lagati hai....pehli baar oh call nahi uthata lekin dusri baar oh uthata hai....

priya- hello...


aditya- haa bolo priya....

priya- subha bole bina hi chale gye...

aditya- arey haan oh tum sorhi isliye aur mujhe urgent kaam tha isliye nahi bola...

priya- mujhse bhi important?? 

Aditya- ye kaisa sawal hai...ofcourse not....

priya- haa haan pata hai....

aditya- priya kisi kaam se call kiya hai kya tumne?? 

Priya- kyun main aise hi phone nahi kar sakti kya.?? 

Aditya- priya main is waqt busy hun...mujhe faltu chizon ke liye time nahi hai....

priya- kya??? Mere sath baat karna faltu lagta hai tumhen?? Bye...

itna bolkar oh call end kar deti hai...aditya do teen baar call back karta hai lekin priya call nahi uthati....

aditya- shaam ko mana lunga....

idar priya ka mood toh jaise off hogya tha ab apne hi pati ke aisa bolne se....oh apne bedroom ka tv on karke ek movie dekhne baith jati hai....udar kareeb adhe ghante baad hariya pihu ko college pohcha deta hai....door khol kar pihu daud kar jane lagti hai....jate hue jeans pant men uski gand ka shape saaf pata chala raha tha...hariya driver seat par baitha hua pant par se apna lauda sehlata hai....

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hariya- kya gand hai iski....pata nahi kab tak bas yun isko dekh kar muth marta rahunga....he bhagwan kuch toh reham kha mujhe budhe par....

hariya fir drive karke wapas chala jata hai....priya apne kamre men movie dekhte dekhte hi sojati hai....apne alishan bed par leti hui uske khubsurt chehre par uski zulfen...kisi pari se kam nahi lag rahi thi oh is waqt....aise hi dopehar hojati hai....khana khane ka waqt hogya tha....ramu aur vimla khana ke dishes lakar table par rakh rahe the....utne men shloka apne kamre se bahar ati hai....arey vimla...vimla andar kitchen men thi...ramu bahr akar....

ramu- ji malkin...

shloka- arey ramuu bahu niche ayi ke nahi khane....?? 

Ramu- ahm nahi malkin...

shloka- jake zara bahar se bahu ko awaz de....

ramu...ji malkin...


To be continued...
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#34
Story is developing very smoothly and wisely. This story is having lots of scope. All the best and give next update at earliest.  Heart
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#35
Yo EVIL NICE TO SEE YOU BACK IN ACTION...... GREAT STORY GOING SMOOTH .....
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#36
Hope neha , riya , karim , Rakesh. Will soon have a new life in this brand new home.
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#37
Super hot evil bro
DEATH IS JUST THE BEGINING.
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#38
Keep going like this show everyone who is the boss
DEATH IS JUST THE BEGINING.
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#39
The story is going to the right direction.I think  this story will be more erotic and lascivious if only Ramu or Hariya seduces the female members of this family one by one and becomes successful to shag them.. Thanks for giving a  big update.
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#40
bahut achchha update. aage badho. agale update ke lie intajaar kar rahe hain
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