24-04-2020, 07:09 PM
Kahani bahot hi alter universe men pravesh kar chuki hai. Magar suspense barkarar abhi bhi hai. Waiting eagerly ab aagey kya hoga?
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Vineeta ek jhooti shaadi me jakdi mahila/ A SEXY POOJA | 93 | 15.53% | |
Garima ek happily married housewife jo seductive mahol me behek gai/ A HOUSEWIFE SEDUCTION | 111 | 18.53% | |
Shabana ek zaheen housewife jiska shareer jitna akarshak tha bhagya utna hi kharab/ TRAPPED | 204 | 34.06% | |
Neha the bold stylish girl with full of fantasies/ FANTASY | 65 | 10.85% | |
Neetu ek sawli bengali girl jiski jald shaadi hone wali hai par ek khatre ke sath/KAMASUTRA LOVE | 36 | 6.01% | |
Aarti ek gareeb ghar ki behad sundar ladki jo aane wale khatre se hai anjaan/DEMONS LOVE | 34 | 5.68% | |
Shobha the bride and centre part of this story jiski suhaagraat uska sapna hai/FIRST NIGHT CONFESSION | 56 | 9.35% | |
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24-04-2020, 07:09 PM
Kahani bahot hi alter universe men pravesh kar chuki hai. Magar suspense barkarar abhi bhi hai. Waiting eagerly ab aagey kya hoga?
25-04-2020, 02:56 AM
अच्छी बात है कि आप घर पर रहते हुए भी लिख रहे है thanks
25-04-2020, 11:21 PM
(24-04-2020, 12:13 PM)Curiousbull Wrote: Aaj gaye Logan story me. Awesome as always. (24-04-2020, 01:42 PM)sunravi5853 Wrote: Very nice update (24-04-2020, 11:52 AM)Shabaz123 Wrote: Great mind blowing update bhai..... (24-04-2020, 10:42 AM)salman7349 Wrote: Nice upload.... (24-04-2020, 12:15 AM)Ajay.star Wrote: Super update. Thanks ravi Shabaz salmaan and Ajay. And yes utsuk saand finally Logan ki bhi kahani me guest appearance me entry ho hi gai.
25-04-2020, 11:25 PM
(24-04-2020, 07:09 PM)doctor101 Wrote: Kahani bahot hi alter universe men pravesh kar chuki hai. Magar suspense barkarar abhi bhi hai. Waiting eagerly ab aagey kya hoga? Alter universe ka to nahi pata par apne ant ke kaafi kareeb zaroor pahuch gai hai Day 8 khatam hone ke baad kahani sex updates ka part khatam hoga aur Day 10 me zaroor ek alag time ki kahani shuru hogi. Tab tak puri koshish rahegi ki kahani me suspense barkarar rahe.
26-04-2020, 12:38 AM
KAKATUA KE JUNGLE
Idhar neetu ke shabd roopi baano ne Aghori ke dilo dimag me ajeeb sa dwand paida kar diya tha udhar Lakhan aur Vineeta puja ke apne apne charan ko pura kar rahe the. Jaha Lakhan un kanyao ke sath dharti puja ke pratham charan Vriksharopan ko pura karke wapas a gae the to wahi Vineeta ne ghar me rehkar un kanyao ko bhojan karane ke liye swadisht bhojan tayaar kara tha. Uske baad Lakhan Vineeta ne ek pati patni ke saman hi un kanyao ko pankti me bitha kar bade prem aur adar ke sath bhojan karaya aur un kanyao se aashirwaad liya ki jin kanya bhroon hatya ka paap unke pariwaar par chada tha usse unhe mukti mile. Bhojan karwa kar unhone un kanyao ko waha se wida kara ab samay tha Dharti puja ke teesre charan yani Gau Prajanan ka. Wo gai kaafi tez awaaz nikal rahi thi shatad uske shishu ke bahar aane ka samay ho gaya tha. Lakhan ne to isse pehle bhi is tarah ki paristhiti ka saamna kara tha par Vineeta ke liye to ye ekdum naya tha. Vineeta ke to haath paav phool rahe the par Lakhan singh ne dhairya bandhaya ki chinta ki koi baat nahi hai wo bus waha upasthit rahe sara kaam lakhan singh aur wo gwala dekh lenge. Lakhan singh gai ke pet ke paas baith gae aur wo gwala gai ke peeche akar baith gae. Gai kaafi rudan kaf rahi thi. Lakhan singh ne Vineeta ko ishara kara ki wo thoda uska sir sehla de taki wo thoda shant ho jae. Vineeta us Gai ka sir apni godd me rakhkar baith aur bade prem aur vatsalya se uska sir sehlane lagi. Lakhan jab Vineeta ko prem se us gai ka sir sehlate dekh rahe the to man hi man soch rahe the ki jab bhi ye mahila khud maa banegi badi achhi maa banegi bhagwaan inhe ek achhi shaadishuda zindagi pradan kare. Wahi vineeta us gai ka bachha paida hote dekh kar yahi soch rahi thi ki kya uske jeewan me bhi ye sukh kabhi aaega kyuki jo uska pati hai use to usse pyar hi nahi hai aur jis shaksha se wo is waqt pyar karti hai wo uska pati nahi ban sakta. Lakhan Vineeta apne apne vicharo me khoe the idhar gai ke shishu bahar aana prarambh ho gaya. Lakhan ne to ye pehle bhi dekha tha par Vineeta jeewan me pehli baar kisi shishu ka janm hote dekh rahi thi bada hi romanchak aur dil ko chhu lene wala anubhav. Kis tarah ek mada ek nae jeewan ko duniya me lati hai kehte hai jeewan to uparwala deta hai aur ye jeewan duniya me lane ki chhamta usne mada jati ko hi pradan kari hai phir bhi kuchh chhoti mansikta ke log stree ko purush se kum samajhte hai. Shayad is puja ke charan ka uddeshya hi stree ki vastavik shakti ka sajeev darshan karana tha. Wo bachhda puri tarah bahar aa chuka tha par usse khada nahi hua ja raha tha gwale ne us bachhe ko uthakar uski mata ke chehre ke paas rakh diya aur gau mata ne bade prem aur vatsalya ke sath apne navjaat shishu ko chat chat kar saaf karna shuru kar diya. Kitna prem aur mamtamai drishya tha ye vineeta ki aankhe aasuo se dab daba aai par ye aansu dukh ya gum ke nahi khushi ke the ek bachhe ko duniya me lane ke mahaan kaam me sahyog karne ki khushi. Jab tak us gaai ne apne bachhde ko chat chat kar puri tarah saaf nahi kar diya wo teeno wahi khade us shishu aur uski mata ko niharte rahe. Uske baad us gwale ne unse chalne ki anumati maangi aur Lakhan ke sahyog se us Gai aur bachhde ko ek tange me laadkar unhe pranam karke waha se prasthan kar gaya. Uske jane ke baad Lakhan ne Vineeta ki aasuo se bhari aankhe dekhi. Lakhan: Aap ro rahi hai ab bachha hone me itna dard to hota hi hai. Vineeta: Ye dard to bade naseebo se milta hai mai to ek maa ka apne bachhe ke liye prem dekhkar emotional ho gai. Maa chahe insaan ho ya jaanwar maa maa hoti hai apne bachhe ke liye uska pyar samaan hota hai. Lakhan: Sahi kaha aapne mujhe ab mehsoos hota hai ki jab mere purkho ne un maao se unki navjaat bachhiyo ko chheen kar maar diya hoga to kitna dard hua hoga. Dil se baddua nikli hogi unke shayad wahi baddua aaj humare pariwaar par shrap par ban gai hai. Aaj mai haath jod kar un sabhi maao se chhama mangta hu ki ho sake to mere un purkho ke un paapo ko maaf karde apni baddua humare pariwaar se wapas le le. Vineeta: Aisa hi hoga apke pariwaar ko us shrap se mukti zaroor milegi waise hume Aghori baba ko is bare me bata dena chahiye. Lakhan: Hmm aap sahi kehti hai. Lakhan ne Aghori ko phone milaya. Lakhan: Baba puja ke pratham teen charan ho gae. Aghori: Bahut achhe agle teen charan ke bare me us patra me vistaar se likha hai ab sandhya ho chuki hai ab aap us patra ko pad sakte hai. Ye charan thode kathin hai khaskar vineeta jee ke liye asha karta hu har baar ki tarah us baat bhi aap dono safal honge. Vineeta: Baba ab aage ki puja kitni bhi kathin kyu na ho itni door aane ke baad ab wapas nahi lautenge mai har kadam me lakhan jee ka pura sath doongi aur is puja ko sampann kara ke hi rahungi. Aghori: Aap ek bahut achhi insaan hai mujhe khushi hai ki lakhan jee ke sath is puja me aap shamil hui shayad upar wale ki bhi yahi marzi thi. Ab vineeta kya kehti ki upar wale ki kya marzi thi uske man me apne se dugni umar ke aadmi apni hi saheli ke sasur ke prati jis prem ka ankuran hua tha kya wo bhi uparwale ki hi marzi thi. Vineeta: Jee shayad jo kuchh uparwale ki marzi se hi hua. Aghori: Aap dono ko puja ke agle charano ke liye shubh aashish. Itna keh kar dono taraf se phone rakh diya gaya par aghori vineeta ke vyaktitva se begad prabhavit tha jis tarah usne kisi aur ki patni hone ke bawjood puja ki har rasm ko behad himmat ke sath pura kara aur aane wali rasmo ke liye drad sankalp liya ki wo peeche nahi hategi wo atulniya hai. Ek aurat ke liya uski izzat purush se kahi zada maene rakhti hai phir bhi vineeta itna sab kar rahi hai sirf insaniyat ke nate aur mai apna brahmcharya bachane ke liye us kanya ko mana kar raha hu. Kya wastav me mai us din bhavabesh me beh gaya tha aur sirf apne aham ko siddh karne ke liye apni siddhiyo ka pradarshan kar raha tha. Khair jo ho gaya wo gaya ab use wapas nahi laya ja sakta ab jo bhi ho agar maine us kanya ko ye rasta dikhaya hai to ab use isme safal karna bhi mera hi farz hai aur mujhe ise pura karna hi hoga. Mujhe khud ko mansik roop se is puja ke liye tayaar karna hi hoga. Mujhe use batana hoga ki mai is sadhna ke liye tayaar hu aur wo khud ko bhi iske liye tayaar karle. Aghori apni kutiya ki taraf chal pada jaha wo neetu ko chhod kar aya tha. Andar Neetu besabri se Aghori ke jawab ka intezaar kar rahi thi Raj ke liye bhi aur khud ke man jagi kaam ichhao ke liye bhi. Aghori: Mai is sadhna ke liye tayaar hu. Neetu aashcharya aur khushi se: Jee Aghori: Jee haa apke saath ye saadhna mai sampann karunga. Mai apka kaumarya bhang karunga aur apna brahmcharya uspar samarpit karunga. Neetu khushi se: Mujhe vishwaas nahi ho raha ki aap is saadhna ke liye maan gae hai. Aghori: Jab vineeta jee is puja ko sampann karne ke liye itna sab kar sakti hai to mai kaise mana kar sakta hu. Bus mai apko batana chahta hu ki mai African Negro Habsi nasal se hu jinka ling uttejna ki awastha me bhartiya purush ke ling se kahi jada lumba ho jata hai isliye aap khud ko mansik aur sharirik roop se tayar kar lijiye kyuki ek African hashi ke sath sheel bhang karane ka dard sehne ke liye apko andar se kaafi majboot banna padega. Aghori ki baat sunkar neetu ke shareer me sihran si daud gai ki vastav me kya wo ye dard seh paegi. Par ab ek baar aghori ko convince kar chuki to ab sochne ka koi matlab nahi banta aur waise bhi ek apne aap me ek lifetime experience hai ek habshi se seal tudwana jo birle hi kisi kisi ko naseeb hota hai. Neetu ko chinta me dekh Aghori bol utha. Aghori: Chinta na kare aaj apko apna sheel bhang nahi karwana khud ko tayaar karne ke liye apke paas kal raat tak ka waqt hai sheel bhang ki kriya kal raat hogi par aaj raat ko apko us ling ko kaafi kareeb se mehsoos karne ka anubhav prapt hoga jise apko apne yoni ke andar lena hai shayad isse apko khud ko tayaar karne me kuchh madad mile. Neetu: Jee Aghori: Ab aap vishram kare aur nishchint hokar aaj raat ki sadhna ka vichaar kare aaj apko kafi kuchh karna hoga. Mai bhi talab ke paas sadhna ke liye ja raha hu jeewan bhar kisi stree ko kamuk nazar se na dekhne na sparsh karne ke karan mujhe bhi khud ko mansik roop se khud ko tayaar karna hoga. Aa seedha sadhna ke waqt lautunga aap khuchh bhojan kar lijiyega. Neetu: Jee Aghori waha se sadhnaa ke liye chala gaya aur neetu bhi khush thi ki finally uski mehnat rang lai aur Aghori is sadhna ke liye tayaar ho gaya. Ab Raj ko bhi kuchh nahi hoga aur use bhi ek lifetime experience anubhav karne ka mauka milega ek aisa anubha jaisa kai mardo ke saath sex kar chukne wali Neha ko bhi nahi mila tha. Usne interracial sex ke bare me suna aur video me dekha to bahut tha par socha nahi tha ki kabhi use khud apni life me interracial sex karne ka mauka milega wo bhi apni life ke pehel sex experience ke roop me. Pehla sex kisi bhi aurat ke liye behad special hota hai jise wo sari zindagi yaad rakhti hai aur neetu ke liye to ye special se bhi jada special banne ja raha tha kyuki uska pehla sex ek African Habshi ke sath hone wala tha. Par neetu ke man me ek aur sawaal tha jo baar baar use vichalit kar raha tha ki kya ek baar ek Habshi ke sath pehla sex experience le lene ke baad wo Raj ke sath apni sex life enjoy kar paegi kya is sex ka asar uski aane wali sex life par to nahi padega. Par neetu ne finally apna dil majboot kar liye ki jo hoga dekha jaega philhaal Raj ki zindagi bachana kisi bhi cheez se jada zaroori hai aur use ye karna hi hoga. Idhar Neetu aur Aghori khud ko aaj raat ki sadhna ke liye mansik roop se tayaar kar rahe the udhar Lakhan aur Vineeta us patra ko padne ke liye tayaar the jisme Prithvi ke Greek swaroop Gaia ke bare me aur uski puja se jude teen charan ke bare me vistaar se likha tha. Jadatar Vineeta Lakhan ki puja ke suryast ke poorva ke charan Lakhan ki sharirik chhamtao ki pariksha lene wale rahe the jaha tarah tarah se unki takat aur buddhi ki patiksha li gai kabhi Dangal karwa kar to kabhi ek adiyal ghode ko kabu karwa kar kabhi door kisi mandir se ek Trishul mangawa kar to kabhi behad kathin Rath daud karwa kar . Par har din suryast ke baad charan Vineeta ke liye jada kathin sabit hue jaha unke jazbato ki behad kathin pariksha li gai unhe behad kamuk tareeke se Lakhan ke kareeb aane ko majboor kiya gaya kabhi ek doosre ko alingan me bhar kar puri raat bitane ko keh kar to kabhi adhnange badan dikhau kapde pehna kar kabhi unse mukhmaithun karwa kar to kabhi unke stano ko lakhan singh ke hontho se sparsh karwa kar. Aisi paristhitiya utpann ki gai jaha unke man me ek doosre ke prati prem utpann ho aur aisa hua bhi. Ab dekhna ye tha ki Maa Dharti ka ye greek Gaia swaroop unke saamne kya nai chunauti pesh karne wala tha kis kamuk tareeke se unhe ek doosre ke nazdeek lane wala tha.
26-04-2020, 03:29 AM
Great update
26-04-2020, 07:16 AM
Super update bhai...
26-04-2020, 02:54 PM
Super update.
Vineeta aur neetu do no ke chapter ko interesting mode pe la diya he. Neeta ka first sex experience vo bhi habsi ke sath aur vineeta ki puja har din ke sath mushkil hoti ja rahi he to is bar bhi kuch alag hi erotic scene hoga vo bhi emotion ke sath
26-04-2020, 03:56 PM
Logan bhai sahi jaa rahe ho very eagerly waiting for sexual acts of Neetu snd Vineeta. Keep it long sexual acts with full details and seduction please. Secondly, I salute your deep knowledge of Nakshatra, Greek Mythology and Indian traditions. Hats off to you.
26-04-2020, 09:13 PM
Eagerly waiting for next. Vineetha and garima
26-04-2020, 11:03 PM
Logan bhai, aapse ek personal request hai. I have written First Time an erotic episode part 1on Page No. 25 in Adultery: "Shikha ki Kahani ...Ek Chhote Seher se Aagey..." Written by Wickedsunnyboi with his request I wrote it. Please I need your genuine frank feedback and writing skills improvement. Can you spare 30 minutes on this post in bottom page of 25. Link of page attached herewith. Thanks in advance.
https://xossipy.com/showthread.php?tid=20469&page=25
27-04-2020, 10:12 PM
(26-04-2020, 02:54 PM)Ajay.star Wrote: Super update. Thanks Day 8 and 9 Vineeta aur Neetu ke hi naam jaega specially Neetu. Day 8 ka Neetu ka update kaafi erotic hoga koshish karunga use achhe se achha bana saku. And Day 9 me Vineeta dominante karegi wo bhi apne emotions ke saath.
27-04-2020, 10:20 PM
(26-04-2020, 03:56 PM)doctor101 Wrote: Logan bhai sahi jaa rahe ho very eagerly waiting for sexual acts of Neetu snd Vineeta. Keep it long sexual acts with full details and seduction please. Secondly, I salute your deep knowledge of Nakshatra, Greek Mythology and Indian traditions. Hats off to you. Thanks bro Day me Neetu ka sexual act kaafi interesting hoga may be aisa act ab tak is story me kabhi nahi hua jise maine specially Neetu ke liye bacha ke rakha tha. And bro Vineeta ke har update ke liye mujhe mehnat karni padti hai ha ye sach hai ki story ko likhte hue mujhe graho ke rituals, greek mythology ki jitni jaankari hui utni pehle nahi thi. Har god goddess ke bare me detail padte unke aadhar par hi update tayaar karta hu. Unke baare me itna padte padte sab sahi me yaad ho gaya. Kaun kis cheez ka devta hai kaun kiska beta hai kiska baap kiski biwi sab yaad ho gaya thanks to Vineeta.
28-04-2020, 12:53 AM
(26-04-2020, 11:03 PM)doctor101 Wrote: Logan bhai, aapse ek personal request hai. I have written First Time an erotic episode part 1on Page No. 25 in Adultery: "Shikha ki Kahani ...Ek Chhote Seher se Aagey..." Written by Wickedsunnyboi with his request I wrote it. Please I need your genuine frank feedback and writing skills improvement. Can you spare 30 minutes on this post in bottom page of 25. Link of page attached herewith. Thanks in advance. Doctor bro i have read ur update and give a genuine feedback u carry forward the story very well.
28-04-2020, 12:55 AM
GAIA PUJA KI VIDHIYA
Lakhan Vineeta ne wo chitthi kholi jisme Gaia puja ke teen charan likhe the. Lakhan ne tez awaaz me patra me likhe shabdo ko padna arambh kiya. Gaia jise hum Mother Earth ya Prakriti aneko naamo se jante hai wastav me humare saurmandal ka aadhar hai Jeewan ki janani hai. Gaia ne swayam apne purush ko janm diya apni yogmaya se jise hum Uranus ke naam se jante hai. Baad me Uranus aur Gaia ke milan se Cronus yani Jupiter ka janm hua. Kintu Uranus ka aham bahut bad gaya wo apni shaktiyo ka durupyog karne laga janmanas par atyachar karne jo Prakriti yani Gaia se bardasht na hua aur tab usne apne bete Cronus ki madad se Uranus ka ant kar diya par jis vibhatsa tareeke se Cronus ne apne pita ko mara usse sampoorna . d sihar utha aur tab ek akaashwaani hui ki jis tarah se Cronus ne aaj apne pita ko mara uski santan uska vadh karegi. Aise me Cronus ne faisla kara ki wo apni kisi santan ko janm hi nahi lene dega. To jab bhi Cronus ka shishu janm lene wala hota wo apne shishu ke pind ko sashareer nigal jata. Gaia apne putra ka ye vikrit roop dekhkar kaafi dukhi thi. Cronus apne paach shishuo ko nigal chuka tha jab uske chhathe shishu Zeus ke janm ki ghadi nazdeek aai to Gaia ne ek us shishu ko apne ek vishaspatra sarp ke madhyam se kahi door bhej diya aur ek kapde me ek pathar lapet kar Cronus ko de diya. Cronus use hi apna shishu samajh kar nigal gaya. Baad me jab Zeus jawaan hua tab usne apni dadi Gaia ki madad se apne pita Cronus ka pet phad kar apne bhai behno ko azaad karaya aur Cronus ko satta se hatakar shashan ki bahdor apne haatho me li. Gaia ne shashan ko apne teen pautro me baat diya. Zeus ki nyaypriyata dekhte hue use Anant akaash ka swami banaya Poseidon ke Josh aur Aaweg ko dekhte hue use Samudra ka swami banaya aur Hades ke andar apne dada aur pita ke jaise andhkaar ko dekhte hue use Patal me raaj karne ko bhej diya. Gaia ne jeewan bhar nyay ka sath diya aur is sansaar ko anyay se mukti dilane aur nyay ki sthapna me ek patni aur maa ke rishto ko bhi beech me nahi aane diya. Gaia ki sadhna ke bare me batane se pehle uske bare me batana zadoori tha. Ab aate hai puja ki prakriya par. ***** dharm me Dharti ko mata mana jata hai aur mata ke roop me hi uska puja ki jati hai par Greek mythology me Gaia ko Prakriti ke vastavik swaroop me hi puja jata hai. Jaha prakriti ke koi vastra nahi hai uske panchtatva hi uske abhushan uske vastra hai isliye ye...... (padte padte achanak lakhan kuchh pad kar atak gaya. Vineeta bhi samajh gai ki zaroor koi aisi baat aa gai hai jo thodi uncomfortable hai isiliye lakhan use padne me hichak rahe hai.) Vineeta: Kya hua aap padte padte achanak se ruk kyu gae mai janti hu ki har din ki tarah aaj bhi kuchh na kuchh aisa zaroor hoga jo hume uncomfortable karne wala hoga, par yakeen maniye ab mai iske liye tayaar hu. Ab bina sankoch kiye aage padiye aur agar apse nahi pada ja raha to patra mujhe dijiye mai padti hu. Lakhan: Nahi mai hi padta hu. Lakhan ne dubara padna shuru kiya. Panchtatva hi Gaia ke vastra isliye ye puja... apko vastraheen yani nirvastra hokar karni hai. Patra me likhi is ek line ne Lakhan Vineeta dono ko thook gatakne par vivash kar diya. Kuchh der wo dono yuhi maun khade rahe phir Vineeta ne hi khud ko sanyat karte hue Lakhan ko aage padne ko kaha. Yahi apki aaj ki sadhna ka pratham charan hai VASTRA TYAGAM jisme apko khud nahi balki ek doosre ke vastra utar kar ek doosre ko puri tarah nirvastra karna hai. Ha par aap dono ki asahjta ka dhyan rakhte hue aap ek kaam kar sakte hai aap chahe to is puri ke dauraan apni aankho par patti baandh kar rakh sakte hai taki apko ek doosre ke saamne nirvastra hone me itna asahaj na lage. ( Ye padkar Vineeta Lakhan ko thodi rahat mehsoos hui ki agar aankh par patti bandhi hai to nirvastra bhi hona pada to isme kuchh uncomfortable nahi lagega. Tab unhone socha bhi nahi tha ki aage patra me unhe aur kya kya karna padega.) Puja ka doosra charan hai MRIDA LEPAN. Mrida arthat Mitti aur Lepan matlab Malna. Is charan me apko ek doosre ke nagna shareer par.......(gehri saas lete hue) mitti ka lep malna hai. Aur ye lepan apko swayam apne upar nahi karna hai apko ek doosre ke badan ke har ang ko sparsh karke us par lep malna hai. Har ang se matlab........ har ang chera v....v..vaksha pet nabhi nitamb yaha tak ki yoni aur ling bhi koi bhi ang is lep se vanchit na rahe. Har ang ko apko apne haatho se chhukar mehsoos karna hai beshak apki aankho me patti bandhi hogi par haatho ke sparsh apko ek doosre ke badan ke har ang ko achhe se chhukar mehsoos karna hai waha us mitti ko achhi tarah se malna hai taki aap puri tarah sandehrahit ki waha achhe lepan ho gaya hai. Padte padte hi lakhan behad uttejit mehsoos kar rahe the aur ek ek shabd ko sunte hue vineeta ka shareer ka roya roya khada ho gaya tha. Apne nagna shareer par Lakhan singh ke haatho ke sparsh matra ke bare me soch kar Vineeta behad uttejnapurna mehsoos kar rahi thi to jab ye sab vastav me hoga tab uska kya haal hoga. Par ab use lakhan singh ke haatho nirvastra hokar unse apna nagna badan sparsh karana galat kum aur kamuk aur uttejak jada lag raha tha. Shayad uske man me jo lakhan singh ke liye prem utpann hua tha ye usika parinaam tha. Shayad jab puja prarambh hui thi tab Dharti ki puja sabse prarambh me hoti to shayad tabhi ye puja shuru hote hi khatam ho jati aur Vineeta kisi bhi surat me iske liye tayaar nahi hoto par puja me graho ka sanyojan bhi is tarah kiya tha ki unki asahjta ko krambadh tarah se khatam kiya jae aur unhe dheeme dheeme ek doosre ke nazdeek laya jae taki puja ek antim dino ki ye rasme nibhate hue unhe jada asahaj na lage wo sweksha se inhe karne ke liye tayaar ho jae. Par lakhan ko ab bhi isme asahaj lag raha tha. Beshak uske man me Vineeta ke liye prem bhav par wo Vineeta ke man me apne liye janme prem bhav se ab bhi anjaan tha aur wo Vineeta ko ye sab karne ke liye vivash nahi karna chahta tha. Lakhan: Nahi Vineeta jee bus bahut hua ye puja har din ako kuchh anuchit karne ke liye majboor kar rahi hai aur aap apni achhai ke karan ye sab kar rahi hai par ab mujhse par ab ye bus. Vineeta ne Lakhan ke kandhe par haath rakh kar unhe dhairya bandhaya. Vineeta: Lakhan jee adheer mat hoiye umeed mat chhodiye pura patra to padiye shayad isme aage kuchh aisa ho jisse hume asahaj na lage. Lakhan: Itna sab to likha hai ab aage kya padu. Vineeta: Meri khatir padiye agar apke man me mere liye zara bhi adar samman hai to patra pura kariye padiye please mere kehne par pad dijiye. Vineeta ki itne pyar se kahi gai baat ko bhala Lakhan kaise mana kar sakta tha. Lakhan: Jee MRIDA LEPAN ke is charan ke liye apke ghar ke peeche bana kamra jo ab tak band tha vishesh roop se isi charan ke liye tayaar kiya gaya tha. Waha ek bada sa gaddha banakar us gaddhe ko vishesh roop se tayaar ki gai mitti se puri tarah bhar diya gaya hai. Ap dono ko usi gaddhe me ek doosre ke sath......alingandh baithkar ek doosre ke shareer par us mitti ko malna hai. Aur ye prakriya chhan bhar ki nahi hai balki ek ghante ki hai apko ek ghante tak yuhi ek doosre ke sath alinganbadh rehkar is prakriya ko anvarat karte rehna hai sandeh ki koi sambhavna na rahe koi ang shesh na rahe koi ang apke sparsh se achhuta na rahe. Ek ghante ke Samay ki jaankari ke liye us kamre me ek Alarm clock rakhi hai jisme aap ek ghante ka alarm lagakar samay ka pata laga sakte hai. Ek ghante ke Mrida Lepan ke baad apne shareer par lagi mitti ko saaf karne karne ke liye usi kamre me us gaddhe ke sameep hi ek jalkund banaya gaya jo swaksha jal se bhara hai. Usme aap dono usi awastha me ek saath snan karna hai aur..... aur is snan ke dauran bhi aap dono alinganbadh hi rehna hai aur apne badan ki mitti saaf na karke ek doosre ke badan ki mitti ko saaf karna hai. Is snan ke liye samay ki koi seema nahi hai par apne shareer par lagi mitti ka katra katra apko uski kund me chhod jana hai. Isliye behtar hoga aap jaldbaazi na kare aur ek doosre me badan ko achhi tarah se saaf karne ke baad puri tarah santusht hone ke baad hi jalkund se bahar aae. Is snan ke saath hi apki puja ka dwitiya charan poorna ho jaega. Ab aate hai puja ke tritiya aur sabse mushkil charan par jiska naam hai. (Us charan ka naam padte hi Lakhan ki jaban ne saath chhod diya unse aage pada ho nahi ja raha tha.) Vineeta: Kya hua aap ruk kyu gae kya naam hai teesre charan ka. Lakhan: Maaf kariyega mai dil se apka bahut samman karta hu par ab aage mujhse nahi pada jaega. Aap chahe to khud padle. Itna keh kar lakhan ne wo patra vineeta ki taraf bada diya. Vineeta ne bhi wo patra apne haatho me tham liya aur patra ko aage padna arambh kiya. Ab aate hai puja ke tritiya aur sabse mushkil charan par jiske naam hai......(ladkhadati zaban se) jiska naam hai......Y....YONI PUJA. (Gehri saas lekar aage padt hue) Jaisa ki naam se hi zahir hai ye charan stree ke prajanan ang yaani uski YONI ki puja se sambandhit hai. Ye puja bhi teen charan me hogi Bahya Yoni Puja/Antah Yoni Puja evam Prasaad Grahan. Bahya Yoni puja ke antargat Lakhan jee ko panchtatvo ke prateek panch padartho se Vineet jee ki Yoni ka abhishek karna hai. Panch padartho ke roop me usi kamre me jalkund ke sameep paanch kalash rakhe hai jisme har tatva ke preteek swaroop paanch padarth hai. Ambar tatva ke roop me Tel, Prithi tatva ke roop me Dahi, Agni tatva ke roop me Shehed, Vayu tatva ke roop me Doodh aur Jal tatva ke roop me Jal. Ye paancho padarth un paanch kalasho me hai jinse baari baari isi kram me Lakhan jee ko Vineeta jee ki Yoni ka abhishek karna hai. Ye sab padte hue vineeta ko behad uttejak mehsoos ho raha tha par phir bhi wo apni uttejna Lakhan singh par zahir nahi kar rahi thi. Wo bina ruke lagataar pade ja rahi thi aur ekdum normal behave kar rahi thi jaise sab normal ho. Halaki beshak vineeta apni yoni par ek mard ke sparsh ka ehsaas se ab tak vanchit rahi par ye bahad kamuk hoga itna to use pata hi tha. Par lakhan ko ye sab sunte hue behad uncomfortable lag raha tha aur vineeta unke bhavo ko bhali bhati samajh rahi thi. Vineeta: Lakhan Mrida Lepan ke dauran bhi apko har ang ko sparsh karna hoga to agar phir se apko waha sparsh karna pada to usme naya kya hoga. Lakhan: Pata nahi par mujhe apke liye bahut bura lag raha. Vineeta: Aap jada mat sochiye ab patra ka antim paragraph hi bacha hai. Wo bhi khatam kar lete hai. Bahya Yoni Puja ke uprant Antah Yoni Puja ke antargat Lakhan jee ko panch padartho me apni ungaliya dubo kar un do ungaliya ko Vineeta jee ki...... (padte padte vineeta bhi rukne ko majboor ho gai par ek gehri saas lete hue dubara padna arambh kiya). Un do ungaliyo ko Vineeta jee ki Yoni ke andar daalkar apni ungaliyo ko andar bahar karke uska andar se tab tak abhishek karna jab to wo yoni skhalit hokar apna prasaad na nikal de. Shabdo ka prayog bhale hi kisi bhi tarah kiya gaya tha par unka matlab saaf tha ki Lakhan singh ko Vineeta ki chut me ungli daal kara andar bahar karke use jhadne par majboor karna tha. Ye soch hi vineeta ko apni jaangho ke beech geelapan mehsoos hone laga. Par gehri saas lete hue usne dubara padna arambh kiya. Yoni puja ka teesra charan hai Prasaad Grahan jo Lakhan jee seedha Vineeta jee ki....... ki (thook gatakte hue) ki...... (aah bharte hue). Seedha vineeta jjjjeee ki Yoni se grahan karna hai. Yyyyani seedha apna muh vvvvvineeeta jeee ki Yyyoniii par rakhkar waha se us prasaad ko garahan karna hai. Lakhan: Kya bakwaas hai ye mai nahi karunga. Vineeta: Kya apko isme ghin lagti hai. Lakhan: Baat ghin ki nahi hai baat sahi galat ki hai mai yu apka waha muh kaise laga sakta hu aap kisi ki patni hai. Vineeta: Jo shaadi bus naam ke liye hai jiska koi matlab nahi. Lakhan: Bhale hi ho par aap ek mahila to hai apka samman to hai na. Vineeta: Par kisi ke jeewan se bad kar nahi jis din mujhe apka wo muh me lena pada tha us din yahi saman sthiti thi par phir bhi maine wo sab kara, Phir aaj kyu nahi. Haa agar apko isme ghin lagti hai to alag baat hai. Lakhan: Nahi ghin ki koi baat nahi. Mai to.... Vineeta: Agar ghin ki baat nahi to ise bhi ek prakriya ki tarah pura kar dijiye maine wada kara hai na mai apka pura saath dungi. Ha agar aap mera wada todna chahte hai to apki jaisi marzi. Lakhan: Nahi aisi baat nahi hai. Vineeta: To mera saath dijiye. Lakhan: Theek hai mai apke saath hu. Prsaad Grahan ke saath hi Gaia Puja ke teen charan aur Prithvi puja ke 6 charan bhi purna ho jaenge aur aaj ki puja sampann ho jaegi. Aasha hai aap dono har din ki tarah aaj ki puja me bhi safal honge. SHUBHAASHISH
28-04-2020, 01:42 AM
Amazing creativity.
28-04-2020, 06:59 AM
Amazing
28-04-2020, 10:31 AM
Super update bro... puja me aur khuch naya lao....
28-04-2020, 10:41 AM
Can't wait for next.
28-04-2020, 06:51 PM
(28-04-2020, 12:53 AM)Logan555 Wrote: Doctor bro i have read ur update and give a genuine feedback u carry forward the story very well. Thanks Logan bhai. I have given you a reply of your post there too. Just now I have posted Part - II update but I won't force you again. You can read it in future in your spare time. Part - II post link: https://xossipy.com/showthread.php?tid=2...pid1893852 |
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