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Misc. Erotica BASSSSS.. KARO ..(NAMRATA ek PAHELI)
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#801
15-04-2020, 03:45 PM
Bhai, main aapki majaboori samajh sakta hoon lekin slow and short updates will ruin your erotica. Other writer suggested you to write 1 hour daily so you will make huge content. You are losing your fans. Look at Sunnyboi completed his story with regular updates. And please focus on Protagonist only. No mother please. You will ruin the protagonist importance. You have supporting characters Birju watchman and society manager.
One suggestion:Outdoor Erotic Adventure is very risky. Now you have already done it. You have got a blackmail plot to exploit in future by watchman or society manager. But Salva should be first. You are one of the best erotic writer but late updates will ruin your story. e.g. Rajkumar's Budha Tailor. And we encourage you with positive feedback.
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15-04-2020, 04:05 PM
One more suggestion: Namrata maintained her character, virginity in college and social environment. Don't make her slut but a RELUCTANT INNOCENT GIRL who is in Dillema between social conscious character reputation and other side exploring her lust journey. Let her explore it by Salva's seduction strategies while working together by Happy erotic accidents. Don't make Namrata Salva's slave but she must have an upper hand to control the erotic situation. Remember all 3 Male characters know she is the daughter of a tough cop. No one dares to harm her or they know the consequences. Once she explored her sexual journey with these three characters may be a college peon, college political affiliation bad reputed general secretary student, tailor or some tapori.
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#803
16-04-2020, 02:15 AM
Update kab aayega
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#804
16-04-2020, 06:52 AM
Royalking bhai kaha gaya update kab aayega
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#805
16-04-2020, 07:34 AM
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16-04-2020, 11:59 AM
Royalking bhai aap Royal writer ho aur Royal writer continue update dete hai
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#807
16-04-2020, 12:09 PM
please update
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16-04-2020, 01:14 PM
Waiting
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16-04-2020, 04:21 PM
(16-04-2020, 11:59 AM)rafiqshaikh9059 Wrote: Royalking bhai aap Royal writer ho aur Royal writer continue update dete hai

Sahi bola bro
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#810
16-04-2020, 04:33 PM
Nice story. And seduction also.
Par upadte slow ho gaye kafi.
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16-04-2020, 05:22 PM
(15-04-2020, 04:05 PM)doctor101 Wrote: One more suggestion: Namrata maintained her character,  virginity in college and social environment.  Don't make her slut but a RELUCTANT INNOCENT GIRL who is in Dillema between social conscious character reputation and other side exploring her lust journey. Let her explore it by Salva's seduction strategies while working together by Happy erotic accidents. Don't make Namrata Salva's slave but she must have an upper hand to control the erotic situation. Remember all 3 Male characters know she is the daughter of a tough cop. No one dares to harm her or they know the consequences.  Once she explored her sexual journey with these three characters may be a college peon, college political affiliation bad reputed general secretary student, tailor or some tapori.

that will be good..........
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17-04-2020, 01:54 AM
Waiting brother
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17-04-2020, 02:26 AM
waiting next update
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17-04-2020, 11:47 AM
update please
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17-04-2020, 11:58 AM
bhai ek week ho gaya please update
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17-04-2020, 08:42 PM
Eagerly waiting
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#817
17-04-2020, 08:53 PM
Bhai update kab ayega???
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#818
17-04-2020, 11:02 PM
Waiting
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#819
18-04-2020, 04:43 AM
Please update
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#820
18-04-2020, 12:38 PM
bhai gala fad fad ke aapko awaz de rahe hai please update magar aap tak awaz hi nahi ja rahi hai lockdown me kaha busy ho ab
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