Adultery My wife, why did she betray me (completed)
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You have defeated my thought process.
Wonderful!
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Great! Great! Great!

Waiting eagerly for next updates.
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Great update meera should change now and should lead a happy life with saravanan
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Good Story.
Please Continue.
Repu Added.
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wow wow wow!
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Killing them softly
Some would say I am the REVERSE 
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WOW no words to describe how good you are.
You just keep surprising me with every update and this one was defferent from previous updates.i thought Saravana will definitely refuse Guthami praposal but the way you presented Saravana character in this update was just out of my imagination.
 listening Saravana heart will be more punishment for Meera, I don't know about Prabu. Keep up the good work.



" Meera’s heart broke on hearing her husband speak. She had a diamond with her yet she had not learnt to treasure it."


These words just reminds me this quote

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"Meera’s heart broke on hearing her husband speak. She had a diamond with her yet she had not learnt to treasure it. How could she ever deserve such a person as this. Her heart swelled with love for her husband. What can she do.. what should she do… Meera was lost now more than ever. "

Best lines, it's been long as I have fun loving it. Best story in my point of view as story comes to the end I love it so much that I didn't control my self to write here, love to read the final beddings. Waiting||
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That's the reality.... Women may be weaker physically than men.. But they outshine men in everything..... 

Thanks for sharing the views of 1980s people who respect relationships and understand the importance compared to today lives where divorce is so common.. 

Story is ending in a right way...

Finish with real views and also great way bro

Ezpect many  works from you in future
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Practically, Meera can never get back her normal life.

Everytime she will sleep with her husband, Prabhu will haunt her as nightmare. It will not be a pleasant one, on the contrary, she will hate herself more. She doesn't have enough willpower to overcome her bad memories. A change of address may be beneficial.

Things could have been more beneficial to her, provided she could impart some direct punishment herself.
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Very short update








But excellent





Keep posting
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After taking a days break yesterday I have started writing the final episode today. Normally it would take a day or two to finish but this being the last episode it may extend slightly longer. I hope everyone can be patient.
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Yes dear







Take your time








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Dear Author,

Initially, I really adored the theme of the story and the way you steadily moved ahead explaining each and every feelings the protagonists going through . You were no where in hurry to make Meera and Prabhu mate and moved ahead just like the way it would happen in real life (Thank god you did not Make it look like a porn movie where things happen without any logic). Slowly you portrayed the mindset of each character and eventually it became evident that Saravanan does not get excited seeing his wife with other guy albeit that guy is much better in sex than him. Meera although mad a sin and every time got weak whenever she thought about Prabhu but she showed no signs of being a characterless slut. She has been a good wife from within and I feel its not her fault that she fell in Devil's hand as she always tried hard not to. Its just she was naturally an insatiable horny woman and was never showed the real side of sex by her Husband.

But Lately honestly speaking , I am not finding the story at all exciting . I understand that you are putting all the efforts and that could be witnessed the way you express each character's feelings which is actually very time taking and full of efforts. I do appreciate that.
But I realised that Saravanan has been always suffering from the beginning and lately its been shown like everybody is regretting and all we see is pain in the story. There is no sexual excitement left.
I guess we all readers come to this platform to get some excitement as after all its an erotic story.(lucky us, that this particular story is based on realistic scenarios) .I see only pain in the story now. I know in real life things would go in the same direction if a person would be just like Saravanan or totally different if he had some cuckold feelings .
I just wanted to express that when I realised Saravanan is suffering from day 1 and theme of the story is based on cheating wife , it started killing the excitement as it really turns off if some person in the story is getting emotionally tortured and hurt.
I wish we see some change in the story which rekindles some fire and excitement . ;p

Thanks Smile
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(19-04-2020, 09:45 PM)love_couple Wrote: Dear Author,

Initially, I really adored the theme of the story and the way you steadily moved ahead explaining each and every feelings the protagonists going through . You were no where in hurry to make Meera and Prabhu mate and moved ahead just like the way it would happen in real life (Thank god you did not Make it look like a porn movie where things happen without any logic). Slowly you portrayed the mindset of each character and eventually it became evident that Saravanan does not get excited seeing his wife with other guy albeit that guy is much better in sex than him. Meera although mad a sin and every time got weak whenever she thought about Prabhu but she showed no signs of being a characterless slut. She has been a good wife from within and I feel its not her fault that she fell in Devil's hand as she always tried hard not to. Its just she was naturally an insatiable horny woman and was never showed the real side of sex by her Husband.

But Lately honestly speaking , I am not finding the story at all exciting . I understand that you are putting all the efforts and that could be witnessed the way you express each character's feelings which is actually very time taking and full of efforts. I do appreciate that.
But I realised that Saravanan has been always suffering from the beginning and lately its been shown like everybody is regretting and all we see is pain in the story. There is no sexual excitement left.
I guess we all readers come to this platform to get some excitement as after all its an erotic story.(lucky us, that this particular story is based on realistic scenarios) .I see only pain in the story now. I know in real life things would go in the same direction if a person would be just like Saravanan or totally different if he had some cuckold feelings .
I just wanted to express that when I realised Saravanan is suffering from day 1 and theme of the story is based on cheating wife , it started killing the excitement as it really turns off if some person in the story is getting emotionally tortured and hurt.
I wish we see some change in the story which rekindles some fire and excitement . ;p

Thanks Smile
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I agree. That is why I said in my earlier comment that "I am disappointed".

Anyway all things have to come an end at one point of time.

Let's wait and see how the author planned to end this one, particularly for Meera ( the name itself excites me happy ) because in my point of view she is one who got tortured and sandwiched between the Prabu & Saravanan.

One point of time she warned Saravanan about Prabu's looks (women always know the difference ), but the idiot conveniently forget and didn't support Meera at any point of time. 

Loving means what?
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The whole efforts of the writer to keep the story realistic just washed away by the miracle pushed....  Prabhu's impotency... His inferiority not by any realistic reason... But by miracle or badluck
On the other hand...  Sarvanan never reacted naturally... Even with meera... And meera is behaving like a victim and always trying to keep herself out of reach from sarvanan...  Not just physically but emotionally too... Never offered any word or act to reunite with her husband or family on a normal pace....

Let's see what happens next
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