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Adultery Nokrani k Pati ne Badla Liya (STOPED)
#61
(15-04-2020, 03:10 AM)rohanakasachin Wrote: My 1 suggestion would be to update the name of the story to 'Continued' so that people randomly searching will get to know that actually someone is posting new updates on that story and hence will not skip this amazing story. Till yesterday I didn't know that someone was actually adding new posts to the original writer's story

Mene is story k name me running likha hua tha. Mene Aj tak is forum pe bht se stories post ki hain. Hr ek story ko bht mushkil se dhoonda, review kiya or post kiya. Lekin mujhe kisi k comments nhi mile. Bht kam logo ne stories pe comment kia. 

Is liye mujhe itni mehnat kerne ka koi faida nhi. Is story ka title change nhi ho ga. Koi new person is ko continue kerna chahay to wo new thread open kare. Mene is story ko band ker diya hai. Ab sirf ek story Badalte Rishte by Awara Romeo chale gi. Jitne writer ne updates diye hain. Tab tak.

Ab me koi b story is forum pe post nhi keroon gi. Thanks
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#62
Don’t get disheartened.Aap bahut acha kaam kar rahi hai. Apne is story ko bahut ache se continue kiya hai.So Mujhe lagta hai ki apko is story ko continue karna chaiye
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#63
Me tumhari story ka bahut bada fan hu, please story upload karna mat chhod na. Ho sake to is story me starting english me to use hindi me converte kar ke post karna.
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#64
ye saare writers ki problem hai jab likh nahi sakte to saara ilzaam readers per daal dete hai ,kisi ne likhne ko kahaa nahi story kisi ko bhi , nahi likhna hai mat likho or baaki bhi story band kar do roka kaun hai but ye jo dhamki de rahe ho wo kabhi mat dena
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#65
Are jo bhi iska reader Hai aage badhao story aachi par ise adhura mat chodo
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#66
Please jo likhne wala ussne English me nahi likhni chahiye thi Mazza nahi aata Jis English me comment Kiya is English me likhni thi


Please ise aage badhao Roman ki khub chudai karwao Randi banao use virya peshab pilao galo par boobs gand par thapdo ki bochar kro wild rough sex karwao punishment bhi pitai bhi thapad bhi mare use.
Aisi chudai uski aankho se aasu aaye chekhe chilYe Romona ko Randi bna kar khub fadwao uski.


Is story ko incest banao thoda aalag tarike se Romana ka bhai or woh sab amir aayash tharki ho Romana ka bhai ka dost Romana ko book kre 1 week ke liye farmhouse par Romana week me bahut logo se chude dosto ke Sath hone ke Karan Romana ko uska bhai bhi chode dosto ko nhi pta iski bahan h woh dosto ke samne aapna mazak nhi banana chahe isliye vo bhi ki thukai kre farmhouse ke Mali naukar driver watchman bhi Romana ko chod Dale.

Ramona ke devro ko add kro woh bhi Romano ko apne dosto ke Sath chudai kre unhe pta na ki unki Bhabhi h shadi ke kuch woh mile na ho.

Ramona ke gao ke kuch harami logo ko add Ramona suru se Randi banana chahte the par yeah nhi huya par Randi bna de chudai Karen. Romana ko pregnant kar chod chod kar.

Animal se bhi chudwao dog gadhe se bhi chudwao.
Uski chute do land or gand me do land dalwao fad Dale Ramona ki chut gand ko



Apne bahut hi mazzedar story likhi h par ise aage badhao plzzz
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#67
Are please ise aage badhao
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#68
Filhal Me Apni stories likh rahi hoon. Us k bad is story ko dobara likhne ki koshish keroon gi
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#69
Thanks. Please continue. It's one of my all time stories
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#70
Nicely going. Aage likho
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#71
(28-06-2021, 04:53 PM)hirarandi Wrote: Filhal Me Apni stories likh rahi hoon. Us k bad is story ko dobara likhne ki koshish keroon gi

Hame aapke update ka wait rahega
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#72
Jaldi update do
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#73
Please ise start kro....
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#74
Nyc one story ji
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#75
Good story
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#76
Update please
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