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Adultery Lock down aur Tabbasum
(11-04-2020, 02:45 PM)mraj1 Wrote: Sorry to learn about your mishap with the update.
It happens dear...
In the meantime, if you could upload your IRAM story-"MERI ADHURI KAHANI"...
I am a big fan of IRAM, must've read it the most.
And now TABASSUM.
You are a good writer of eroticism...
Just carry on!

Iram ki kahani unique thi aur woh usi time nazbeen ko takkar de rahi thi par yaha tabassum ko alag fase hue dekha kar likha par akeli aurat ko lagar ghar mai rakh kar zyada likh bhi nahi sakte par ab tak jo likha hit hi hua ap logo ki wazah se......
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(11-04-2020, 01:01 PM)Jatt2700 Wrote: bai me apo ke feeling smaj sakta hu mere sath same essa he hu tha mere punjabi stori me app likh karr copy karlea karo firr agge likha karo ager back ja error hoga to jitna copy he bo bach jae ga thoda likho thoda copy kro likh buht assa rahe ho lagge raho

Ha ab aisa hi kar raha ho kyoki ap jo first hand likh sakte hai moon se to 2nd time waisa nahi ho pata..... Par ab sahi ja raha ho aur ye update thoda alag likha pahle jaisa to nahi aaya par jaise ab logo ki demand hai jaldi jaldi likho.... Matlab zyada deep ma jakar point likho dekhta ho next update mai kiya likh sakta ho
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(11-04-2020, 06:56 AM)flash speed 321 Wrote: Dear esy hi ap nay dara diya itna acha update to diya ha  apny.  ap khud ko dukhi na karo . khush raho aur esy hi update dety raho.

Woh Phir bhi aisa nahi likh paya par Phir bhi story ko dubara se pakadna tha to likha
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I am feeling sorry for your loss.... But take time and keep updating
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Dear jo ho gaya usy bhol jao aur agay ki socho . intizar rahe ga apki shandaar update ka.
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This has got to be the Best Erotica I have ever read! So Unique and never before has a story matched so perfectly my own and probably a lot of other people's fetishes and kinks who are reading this story. This Writer is hands-down the best I have seen on the Internet. Hope this gets the recognition it deserves.
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IF possible add one sex scene in nam** pose too
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Thor you should remove your post.
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sir ji thor sb yh pic del kary interreligious ki had tak theek mgr mzhab k aqaid ko khassoi tor per nishana banana donu mazhib k logo k darmian nafrat barhanay ka sabab bany ga ap ko yh pic del karni  chahiy
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super dupar kahani hai ye is kahani co comments dene ke liye maine aaj hi registration kiya hai
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thor ne kafi ghatiya comment kiya hai shame on you
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Take it easy guys, that is just a fun comment.... i don't think it break any forum rules!
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Aapka to khrab update bhi itna mzedar tha kya btau
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Nazneen wali story mjhe bahut psnd thi apki... Kbhi comment nhi kr paya us time... Aaj apko dhanyawad deta hu... Aligarh se hu m bhi to or zada feel lia mne us story m
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Do not post like this mr thor story will be banned as moderator warned in the start
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Waiting bro
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Dear appki shandar update ka besabri say intizar ha.
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Nice story
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Gaand mai ungli ab aaram se aage piche Jane lagi aur Tabbasum ki dard se siakari mai awaz tabdil hone lagi..

T.. Ahhhh ab nikalo apni ungli ab sahan nahi hota ye ganda kam bhi ahhh koi karta hai.

G... Ahhh mere jaan malkin ganda mai jo maza hai na woh kaha saf suthre mai maza hai.....

T.. Ahhh tumne kaha tha ki Sirf mere back dekhoge.....

G... Back kiya hoti hai hamari bhasha mai to gaand kahte hai....

T... Mai tumhari trah besharam nahi ho ahhhhh ab nikal bhi do aur unka call Aa raha hai plzz ab to uthane do plzzz


G... Thik hai nikal deta ho... Ye kah kar gaand se ungli nikalta hai aur wahi bed par se call utha kar woh Baat karne lagti hai....

A... Are kab se call kar raha ho aur tum call receive nahi kar rahi ho....

T... Are baba mai baby ko feed kara rahi thi aur ap ka call nahi dekha woh vibration mai laga tha.....

Aise hi dono mai Baat hoti hai tab ganesh ki nazar nipple par jati hai....

Nipple mai se kuch qatre nikal rahe the doodh ke to woh tabbasum ke baat karte hue apne chote hatho se ek nipple ko pakdata to Tabbasum use dakka deti hai aur mana karti hai ki woh ye na kare... Ganesh nahi manta aur Phir se woh bada kar apna muh nipple ke traf lata hai.....

Tabhi Tabbasum call par kahti hai ki baby jaag gaya mai bad mai call karti ho... Ye kah kar call cut kar deti hai.....

T. Ye kiya kar rahe ho inhe chuwo nahi....

G.. Mere pyari malkin ek bar ise pine do dekho kaise doodh tapak raha hai.... Zara ise pine to do thoda sa....

T. Nahi inhe dekhna bhi nahi ye kisi aur ke liye bacha kar rakhe hai.


G... Shankar ke liye na are mere jaan shankar jab aayega tab use bhi pila dena mai bhi to dekho kaisa sawad hota hai....

Woh aage badta hai to Tabbasum piche hat jati hai aur ganesh use bistre par dakka de deta hai.... Tabbasum bister par let jati hai... Aur apne ko chupane ke liye koi kapda leke apne upper dalne ke liye badti hai.... Tab lete hi woh uska Lund ab gor se dekhti hai to uske chehre par kuch hawas doad jati hai.....

Topa kafi mota lambai ate 6 inch par jhante zyada nahi thi.... Woh abhi full khada bhi nahi tha tab bhi bade ajeeb nigaho se Tabbasum lund ko dekhti hai......

Woh apne Lund ko hilate hue uske Tabbasum ke pass aata hai to Tabbasum Sharam se apna chehra chupa leti hai

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G.. Ohhh mere pyari malkin ab mat sharmo mujhse aap bhi janti ho ki kuch der mai apna Lund apki bepanah is right clen chut mai dal donga.... Dekho na kaise apko chut se pani nikal raha hai ap ye chahti ho ki ap tadapti raho....jaise shankar de chudi thi mujhse bhi chud hi jao......

Mera Lund apko pasand aaya na kiya pahle ise chus kar khada karogi ya apne dodh thoda sa mujhe pilaogi.... Ya apni chut ka rus mujhe pilaogi batao na kuch to bolo.

Par Tabbasum ke muh se koi Alfaz nahi nikalte tab woh uske samne beth kar Tabbasum ke pair kholne lagta hai to Tabbasum bhi apne pair ko khol kar apni chut ka nyota deti hai.... Ek garam aurat ke nate woh bhi tadap rahi thi par ab tak khul kar na to shankar ke samne aa saki na is bone ke samne..... Par Tabbasum ko uska Lund bha gaya tha.... Mota to tha hi par Tabbasum ko laga ye dard se zayada maza bhi dega..... Shankar ke lune se takleef to hue thi par abhi uski aadi banane ke liye chut ko thoda sabar rakhna tha.....

Tab ganesh ne chut mai lund dalne ki bajaye apna muh chut ke traf le gaya.... Aur kahi na kahi Tabbasum bhi yahi chahati thi ki uski chut ko pahle chuma chata jai shankar ki trah par shankar ne jaisa chat kar chus kar maza diya tha kiya ye bhi dega yahi sab ab Tabbasum ke dil mai chal raha tha.....


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Ganesh ne apna muh chut se laga kar zaban bahar nikal kar chatna shuru kar diya to.....

T.. Ahhhh ganesh tum sab ek jaise ho sab ek aurat ke jism par ohhhhh shhhhhh aise gandi nazar rakhte ho.... Ye bhi nahi samjhte ki woh aurat tumhari malkin ahhhhh aur ek acche ghar ki bahu bhi hai..... Ohhhhhhhhh

G... Kiya kare aaj aisa husn mila hai to kaise Jane do.. Apko Accha lag raha hai na chut chatwana.......

T. Ahhhh mere halat dekh kar tumhe kiya lagta hai...... Ohhhhhhhh

Ganesh ne ab dono ungli ki madad se chut ko choda kar ke usme dekhta hai to kafi gulabi pan aur usme se pani bahr aata hua dekhta hai.... Tab ganesh apne zaban andar Dal kar chut ki dewar par jab zaban firata hai to.....

T... Ahhhhh shhhhhhhhhhhh Accha lag raha hai ahhhh aise hi ohhhhh aur thoda andar dalo shhhhhh mai nahi janti aage mera kiya hoga.... Par itna janti ho jis pyar ke liye taras rahi thi woh tum aur shankar de rahe ho.... Ahhhhhhh
Thoda aur andar uffffff honto ko andar dal kar chuso bahot accha mahsoos kar rahi ho....... Tabbi ab apne dil ki Baat nikalne lagi jaisa woh apni chut ko chatwana chahati thi waisa hi ab ganesh chatne laga.... Aur niche gaand mai Phir se ungli dal kar aage piche karne laga ab Tabbasum ki gaand ka ched ne uski ungli ko accept kar liya tha....


Par ganesh bona tha to woh kas kar apne baho mai to nahi le sakta tha.... Aur kuch anadipan bhi dekha raha tha itna khubsurat haseen jism woh bina pura ek ek ang chune chate kaise Chhod raha tha.... Tabbasum ka jism sur se pair ke ungli tak aage se piche tak sirf pyar karne ke le bana tha chumne sahlne ke liye bana tha.....

Tabbasum ki pahli stage pure hote hi woh apne pair band karne lagi... Iska matlab ye tha ki Tabbasum ab aur kuch chah rahi thi.... Chut bhi 10 min tak chatwake woh pahla round hasil kar liya.... Ab chut kuch aur mang kar rahi thi.....

Tabhi ganesh ko ishara kara ki ab uski zaban jalan dene lagi hai.... To ganesh hat kar pet ko chumta hua ab boobs ki taraf aata hai......

T...nahi ise mat chuwo ye to kam se kam shankar ke liye chod do.....

Is Baat se thoda sa gussa aata hai jo ganesh gali nahi dena chahata to uske muh se gali nikal jati hai.....

G... Ma chudane gaya shankar...are mai tere samne ho aur tu shakar ka hi gur gaan kar rahi hai.... Aise chut maronga ki shankar ko tu bhul jayegi zayda natak kara to tere ganad mar longa samjhi..


Uski ye Baat kahne ko to buri lag rahi thi Tabbasum ko par ye galiya tu tadak andar hi andar use use josh bhi dila rahi thi....

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Ganesh ne ab Phir se apna hath chut par rakha to Tabbasum kasmasa si gayi..... Aur uska hath rakhte hi apne gaand ko uncha karne lagi tab woh ye chahati thi ki kam se kam ungli chut mai chali jai......

Ganesh ne ab chut ko sahlte hue ek nipple ko apne muh mai bharkar jaisa hi chuda to kafi doodh ek bar mai uske muh mai chala gaya.....

G... Are wah tere is thun mai Kitna doodh bhara hai... Ye kah kar Phir se apna muh laga kar baccho ki trah chune laga..... Aur apne ek ungli chut ke andar dal kar aage piche karne laga.... Ye maza Tabbasum ko jaan lene laga.....

T... Ahhhhh shhhhhh tum ahhhh mane nahi na aakhir mera bachaya hua doodh pi hi liya ahhhhh ab pina hai to pura pina uffffff Phir aage na kahna ki mera pet bhara nahi......

G... Ahhhh aaj mai te tanki khali kar donga kasam se kitna meetha doodh hai tera ohhhhh kiya kaho apne kismat ko bhale hi tu mujhe der se mili..... Lakin aaj mujhe laga ki upperwala ne sach mai mujh par ek bada Ahsan kar diya.....

Ye. Kah kar woh doodh pine lagta hai aur kabhi dusre side par jata hai to kabhi is side se aata hai tabbi ka doodh khatam hone ka nam hi nahi le raha tha jitna chusta utna nikalta..... Tabbi ka maze mai bura hal ho raha tha....doodh khatam nahi hua jabki shankar ka pet bhar gaya..... Aur ab woh gale par kiss karta hua uske Tabbasum ke gulabi honto ki traf aata hai.. Par Tabbasum apna chehra ghuma leti hai....

G.. Kiya hua mere jaan tu ab mere malkin nahi rahi ek hawas ki mari aurat jo apne hawas puri karne ke liye nakhre dekhte hai... Mai aur shankar tab bhi sahi hai..... Tu andar de itne garam hai ki tu kisi gande sadak chap bhikhari de bhi chud jayegi....

Uski Baat sunkae 1 sec ke liye bhi Tabbasum ko bura nahi lagta hai.... Aur ganesh beth kar apni traf uska sir balo se pakad kar khichta hai.....

G... Le Mere garam mankin le ab mere Lund ko chus bahot a raman the mere bhi kisi se lund ko chuswana par sala ye moka mila nahi... Aur mila bhi to aise haseen aurat se jisko sapno mai bhi nahi chod sakte le. Ab der na kar ye bhi maza mujhe de de ek bar......

Yaha Tabbasum kahti hai... Ahhhh mere baal to Chhodo ohhhh....

Tab ganesh Tabbasum ke bal chod kar ghuntne ke bal beth jata hai. Lakin wohi chote kad ki wazah se tabbassum ko thoda mana kar apne lune ki traf jhukata hai..... Waise bhi shankar ke lund ka zayka Tabbasum ko bahot pasand aaya tha to ab yaha nakhre dekhane se kuch fayda nahi hota...... Aur Tabbasum bhi usko dekh kar apna muh Lund ko traf jhuka leti hai......

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Ganesh sir ko aur jhukata hai.....

G... Ohhhh Maa chud gayi mere ahhhh aisa garam ahsad ahhhhh kuch bolne ko raha hi nahiiiii Ahhhhhhh bahot accha le pura ke kuch bhi na Chhod jad tak le mere malkin ahhhhh ek nokar ko isse bada kiya inam mil sakta hai Ahhhhhhh aur chus khub chussss ahhhhh ke halaq tak le........

6 inch ka Lund bhi ab bade pyar se chusne lagi par yaha Phir wohi Baat ki ganesh ka kad chota tha to woh pura jism par hath nahi pher sakta tha.... Ganesh ko pishab bhi lag raha tha par woh to abhi Tabbasum ke muh mai nahi kar sakta tha haaa ganesh ne soch liya ki bathroom to woh nahi ja sakta par pishab to ek jagah kar sakta hai.....
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