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Adultery Lock down aur Tabbasum
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Bahot badi gadbad ho gayi sari mahnat kharab ek bada update likha tha woh galti se back ho gaya sab chala gaya sab moond kharab
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Sorry dosto ab nahi likh paonga woh jo feel likha tha ab nahi Aa sakta sorry agar likha bhi to bahot fast likhonga to itne acche se nahi bata sakta isliye shayad ab yaha se kahani rokta ho..... Bahot mahnat se likhna padta hai ek galti ne se kho diya
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Please continue bro .
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Jani yar esa na karo plz . es forum pay ap ki story perhny aty hen plz yar . agla update jaab dedena jaab mood set ho jai lekin esa na karo .
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Come on Lion, you can do it. Do not say that you will not be able to update. Please continue and I hope I will see the update in the next few hours.
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(10-04-2020, 05:12 PM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Sorry dosto ab nahi likh paonga woh jo feel likha tha ab nahi Aa sakta sorry agar likha bhi to bahot fast likhonga to itne acche se nahi bata sakta isliye shayad ab yaha se kahani rokta ho..... Bahot mahnat se likhna padta hai ek galti ne se kho diya

Bro listen to me. I know how you feel. I've been where you are right now. So, do this instead of stopping update for the story. First stop thinking about writing the story. Just start fantasizing about the story, the characters, the situation. Just start making a movie on your mind. Turn this whole story into a movie in your mind. 
Then start writing the best parts, the best scenes in a doc file. And keep saving every five minutes. Don't forget to save and write all the best scenes in separate files. No need to get into the details. Like, write the jists of all the scenes. How it played out in your minds. Then review them after finishing writing them. After that start adding details like dialogues, and other details by editing those files. After you've completed edited those individual scenes they should be ready to be updated here. But they are individual scenes right. They are not narratively connected. So now connect those scenes. Sequentially the way they are supposed to be in the story. The ones that aren't easily getting integrated in the narrative. Leave those, and add the ones which can be. Then you've got yourself a big update worth two three updates. Then copy paste your story from the doc file into the website. 
It's not that hard bro. Don't give up. Take a break, clear your head, start fantasizing about your story(but don't jerk off to it though lol. Then you wouldn't feel motivated to write rather masterbuate and sleep) and then start writing the best scenes on short. I know you can do it bro. 
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Dear wapis a jao. Aj relax karo kal update dedena lekin esa na karo
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Shayad jo ek bar likh diya waisa feel na la pao Phir bhi try karta ho mujhe bhi bad fell ho raha hai ki story aise hi Jane do.... Chalo lets try......

Thoda sa mai piche se shuru karta ho......

Tabbasum pahle apne dusre room mai Jane se pahle kuch time apne bacche aur nadia ke sath spend karti hai......

Aur wahi apne kapde bhi change karti hai full veil ke sath kamar tak kurti aur long skutt pahan leti hai.... Tab woh kahti hai ki ab tum hi ise dekho mai ab sone ja rahi ho kuch raat ko soyi bhi nahi kam se kam aaj raat aaram se so jati ho.... Aur agar baby pareshan kare to garam pani milk powder sab rakha hai......

N.... Are mere jana ye tere kok se zaroor paida hua hai par mai ise ek Maa se badkaar chahati ho pata nahi kab mere kok bharegi.......

Aise kuch lambi bata hokar aur apne apne shohar ki is time takleef jo ho rahi thi waha us par bhi Baat hoti hai tab woh dusre room mai jati hai......

Yaha uska irada ganesh se sex karne ka nahi woh mob bhi leke aati hai jisse raat ko woh try kare ki shayad shankar ke call lag jai to woh uske hal chal le sakti hai... Aur woh puchna bhi chahati thi aakhir tumne is bone ganesh ko kyo bheja

Ye sochkar apne room mai jati hai.. Ha ganesh ko usne Jane ke liye kitchen ke kand ke bad kaha bhi tha... Par woh raat ka bahana bana kar hall ke ek kone mai so gaya......

Jaise hi door open kar ke jati hai to..... Isse aage ka maine bata hi diya hai sab ko... Tabassum kuch shart rakh kar ganesh ko apne room mai aane deti hai.....

Jab ganesh aata hai to woh Tabbasum ko dekhta hai Tabbasum uski traf peet kar ke khade hue thi aur apna veil sahi kar rahi thi.....



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Tabbasum ki bahar ki nikalti gaand dekh kar ganesh apne honto ko dato se dabata hai......

G... Mam sahib ap ki ye gaand sali jan na le le mere.....

T. Tum Phir shuru ho gaye maine isiliye tumhe andar aane diya tha ye sab us shankar ki wazah se na woh aisa kahta na mai karti......

G.... Ahhh shankar sala bada harami hai itna Accha mal laga aur bad mai mujhe moka diya... Waise jaise ap us ka intzar darwaza khol kar kar rahi thi to laga mujhe ki shankar ne jo mujhe apke pass bheja tha uska parinam mujhe mil jayega......

Ye sab baate ganesh andher mai teer chala kar karta hai..... Woh janta tha ki jis trah shankar ka intzar aur jab usne Tabbasum ki gaand ko hall mai sahlaya dabaya tha to tabassum ne kuch nahi kaha lakin jab bad mai shankar ki jagah use dekha to bus samjh gaya ki kuch gadbad hai......


Tab aise hi piche jakar ganesh ne piche se Tabbasum ki kamar mai hath dal kar pakda to Tabbasum ne use jahtka mara aur woh apne ko sambhal na saka.... Piche jake wahi bed ke kinare se uska sir laga... Woh dard se bilbila gaya.... Aur apne sir par hath rakh kar dekhne laga ki khoon to nahi nikla hai.....

G... Ahhh mar diya ap shankar ko sab kuch karati ho par mere ko nahi.....

Tabbasum ne jab use dard se tadapta hua dekha to woh uske pass aana chaha par aai nahi.....

G.. Mare mai kiya burai hai mai bhi ek apke husn ka bhikhari ho bheekh mangta ho apke husn ki mai janta ho ap mere kalpano se bhi kahi aage hai..... Mai zindgi bhar tarasta raha par jab apne mujhe humdardi se gale lagaya to aisa laga ki mai apko pa sakta ho... Hamesha ap ke bare mai sochta tha...

Par mujhe pata hai ap dariya ka woh dusre kinara hai jisse mai mil nahi sakta.... Lakin shankar ne ap ki chudai ke bare mai bataya to laga ki woh bhi ek garib hai jab ap use apne husn ki bheekh de sakti ho to mujhe bhi de sakti ho...... Zindgibhar apke yaha gulami karonga bus ek bar to mujhe bhi moka do... Sab kuch kitchen mai sahi chal raha tha par woh khubsurat chudel kaha se aa gayi kitni garam thi ap.....

T.. Kah diya jo kahna tha ha jab tumhe pata hai ki shankar ne mere sath..... Par woh sab maine apne khushi ke liye nahi kara tha.... Woh bus ka safar mere zindgi ka kiya kahi kaise kaho..... Us safar ne mere zingdi tabah kari ya abad nahi janti mai... Aur tumhe ab tak shankar ki wazah se bardash kar rahi thi... Warna tum jaise log.... Mere pairo ke dhul ke barabar nahi ho kabhi dekha hai sone ap ko kab shuru hote ho kab khatam hote ho.... Tum jaise logo par taras kahke badi bhul hoti hai.... Jitne tum chote ho utna hi zameen ke andar.......

Yaha ab ek Baat to ab ganesh ko pata chali ki woh shankar ko yaad kar rahi hai yani shankar ne ise khub choda hai.... Ye to ab isne bhi kah hi diya ab isi Baat ka fayda utha kar kaise bhi is garam mal ko apna bhi banana hoga......


G... To apne kyo shankar ki baat manakar mujhe ghar mai aane diya... Are mai apse sirf yahi to chahata hi ki thoda ap ko nanga dekh lo.... To mujhe chain Aa jai.. Waise bhi mai bona insan ap ko apne hath pair se to kabo mai nahi kar sakta........


Aur ap mujhe zaroor dat rahi ho par apne aankho mai dekho kitne hawas se lal ho rahi hai ye jism ek ke liye nahi bana is jism ko aise nahi chhodo aur bus mujhe bhi shankar ki trah thoda apne husn ki bhekh de do.... Kabhi zindgi mai nahi socha tha ki apki nangi gaand dekh paonga uske andar ungli kar paonga..... Par ab jab aisa hua to lagta hai bhagwan ne mujhe mere zillat ruswai ka inam tumhare roop mai de diya hai.....


Are mai to apse kiya chahta ho chalo thik hai ap ek bar apne gaand ye kapda upper utha kar Phir se dekha do kasam se door se dekh kar mutt mar kar chala jaonga......

Kyoki ap ko hamesha soch kar mutt mari hai to apke piche apki ye haseen gaand dekh kar ek bar aur mutt marne ka dil kar raha hai...... Abhi to ap kuch der pahle waha kitchen mai mera sath bhi de rahi thi... Apko chut kitni garam thi apka jism kitna tapish mai jal raha tha.... Sab sahi tha par woh kaha se aa gayi.... Ap ko bhi pata hai mere jaise insan se jor jabardasti nahi hogi..... Bus apse bheekh mang rakta ho..... Mujhe woh khushi ek bar aur de do..... Aur shankar to aaj nahi kal apko chodega hi...... Par mai apki gaand dekha kar hi mutt mar liya karonga......

T. Tum Pagal ho gaye ho kab se ye gande alfazo mai Baat kar rahe ho tumhe andaza bhi hai kisse Baat kar rahe ho jante bhi ho mai kon ho galti hue jo tumhe maine itna badawa diya mere haisiyat ka andaza hai tumne

G.... Ha ap ek pakiza aurat hai is bade ghar ki bahu hai.... Tab ap mere liye ek pujniy devi thi.... Aur mai apko zindgi bhar soch kar mutt mar ke nikal deta.... Par ab ap kon hai pata hai ap ek lundkhor hai ap shankar ki rakhel hai.......

Aur ap apne pati ki bus ek showcase mai rakhne wala saman hai kuch nahi jab apne us nich insan se chudai karwai to ap mai bus apne jism ki aag thundi karwane ke ilawa kuch nahi raha ha shankar ne bataya tha ki ap ko khub ragad kar choda hai..... Par ye mai nahi janta kaise ap us ki rakhel ban gayi........



Ye Baat bade hinmat de kari wohi bataya ek andaze se kah to di par ab tabbassum uske kiya jawab deti......

Tabbasum jo sach mai uski chut subah se jal rahi thi aur ab uski Baat sunkar gussa to bahot aata hai par shankar ki rakhel jo woh kah raha tha to use bura zayada nahi lagta.... Par ek aurat thi halat ki mari itna to shankar ne bhi zaleel nahi kara.......

Tabbasum ki aankho se aaso Jhalak aaye woh bhi isliye ji uske samne ek nihayti gatiya aadmi use uski auqat bata raha tha......

Tabbassum tootne lagi aur us ka dil kuch aur kah raha tha use samjh nahi Aa raha tha ki woh is ki baat ka kiya jawab de... Ab woh yaha kam se kam apne ko shankar ki rakhel hi samjh rahi thi.......

Aur Woh apne aaso pochte hue apna muh uske samne se hata diya tab ye dekh kar ganesh aage badta hai aur uski long skit upper uthata hai to Tabbasum bhadak jati hai.... Par woh foran Phir se uske pairo mai gir kar pahle to maafi mangta hai aur Phir......

G.... Mujhe maaf kar do mai bus khasam khata ho ek bar apki gand dekh kar mutt mar kar chala jonga mai yaha koi shankar ka nam nahi longa.....

Par aisa zulm na karo is garib ka bhi khayal rakkho ap to bahot dayalu hai ap hamesha garibo ki madad karti hai.... Ha ye pahla aisa garib hai jo bheekh mai ap se apki gand dekhne ki vinti kar raha hai......

Mahabani kar do is garib ki bhi jholi bhar do mai ye bhool jaonga ki maine kithchen mai kiya kiya kara bus abhi ka hi ap dhayan rakhonga mai janta ho ek bona ho mere hatho pairo mai itni taqat nahi ki mai apke upper sawar ho jao......

Uski is trah ki baat sunakar jism ne ek harkat li subah se bus shankar ko hi apne doosh nikal kar chai pilayi thi aur din bahar se doodh kafi jama hone laga jis wazah se nipple mai Tees hone lagi aur apne ap kuch boonde nikal kar bra mai samnane lagi........

Par ab use apne pairo par pada dekh kar tabbassum ko Accha lag raha tha...... Aur chut to subah se geeli ho rahi thi.......

Uske andar jawae bhata badne laga yaha ganesh ne bhi jab se aaya tha tab se use aur garam kar diya tha.....

G... Plzzz mamsahib ek bar door se dekhonga ap ki gand aise gaand to kisi ki nahi ho sakti kitni gadde dar chodi ganad hai tumhari.... Ek bar hi sahi dekha do..... Ap to janti hai mai apse jabar nahi kar sakta apne dekhayi thi tab se mera dil ise chune ko kar raha tha... Apne chumwaya bhi pyar bhi karne diya aur apko tang surakh mai jab ungli dali to ap ko kiya pata mere liye ye ek sapne se bhi badi cheez thi... Ap jaise log to hamre sapne mai bhi nahi aate hai..

Kafi der man murawat ka dor chalta raha Tabbasum garam hoti rahi par aakhir man hi gayi......

T.... Dekho ye mere izzat hai aur mai bahot khandani aurta ho.... Par us shankar ne mere bare mai bata kar tumhe mere gale ki haddi bana diya.....

Par agar tumne mujhe chuwa bhi to.....

G... Nahi nahi apko kaise chuw sakta ho ap mere liye itna kar rahi hai yahi bade baat hai bus live apki gand dekh kar mutt mar kar chala jaonga.... Dekha do ab na sharmao kitchen mai khub dekhi sahkayi dabai thi... Par ab yaha kisi aane ka bhi dar nahi to kyo sharma rahi ho......

T. Pahle utho aur door khade rahna agar kisi ko shankar ki trah batata to mai apne jaan de dongi......

G... Paran jai par vachan na jai shankar ne galti kari thi par mai aise galti nahi karonga aur ap shmakr ki traf se chinta mukt ho jao woh kisi ko kiya apne ko bhi nahi batayega...

Yaha agar jab door bell baji thi tab door open kar ke shankar ki jagah is bone ko dekh leti to baat yaha tak nahi aati aur khud ki galatfahmi ka shikar tabbi ho gayi thi......

Usne aisa kuch react kara ki woh samjhi ki ye sab shankar ki wazah se ho raha hai... Par Baat yaha tak thi ki shankar ne ab tak kisi ko kiya apne ko hi nahi bataya woh janta tha ki ye ghar ki izzat hai aur is izzat ki abru to loot li par sab ko nahi bata sakte.....


Par shankar se bhi galti te hue ki usne to apne bare mai kiya sochta hai sab bata diya lakin use is ganesh ko involve nahi karna tha.......

Tabbasum ne use piche hata kar ab apni long skut diwar ke sahare khade hokar aaram aaram se uthati hai ye dekh kar woh apne sare kapde utarne lagta hai aur lund to funkar hi raha tha....pahle gori pindiya dekhti hai phir gori jhang tababsum panty gili aur zayda hone lagti hai nipple tan jate hai uske nipple mai doodh ka sarot badne lagta hai..... Aur us ke nipple se bhi kuch doodh bahar aane lagta hai......

Jo bra mai jazb ho jata hai....

G...ohhh mere malkin ruko nhai utaho aur uthao apne nayab gaand ka didar ek bar aur kara do.... Is bhikhari ko jo bheekh mai apki gand dekhne ka intzar kar raha hai de do is bhikhari ko apne husn ki bheekh...


Tabbassum uski Baat se josh mai aa jati hai.... Aur aakhir apni skirt kamar tak le ke use kamar ke curve par dal deti hai......

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Jab uski panty aur bade bade nitamb ganesh ko ek bar aur dekhte hai to apne Lund par uska hath tez chalne lagta hai.....

G... Bus aise hi khadi raho ahhhhh mere malkin kasam se kis sanche mai apko banaya hai.... Ohh apki gand duniya ke sanse khubsurat gand hai.... Ise pane ke liye to log apas mai kat ke mar jayenge..... Wah kiya tarif karo is gaand ki kitni gori mulayam Ahhh gaddedar hai ohhhh apko to apni gand ki khubsurati bhi nahi pata....


Ahhhh aise gand maine aaj tak nahi dekhi.... Zinadgi bhar mai tarasta raha par aaj mujhe nahi pata ki kis neki se upperwala khush hua hai.... Ohh apke pati ise roz dekhte honge chumte honge pyar karte honge aur khub masalte honge.......

Tabbi man mai.... Kash aisa hota log itne deewane hai mere hips ke aur mere shahar to ohhhh mai itni khubsurat ho ye ahsasn mujhe ye bona aur shankar ne dilaya hai.......

G... Ahhhhh bus zindgi bhar ise dekhta raho kash mai is gand mai apna Lund bhi dal deta shankar ne kaise chod di bina chode uff jab maine ungli dali thi to andaza nahi tha ki ye gand kunwari hogi......

T... Bus karo..... Ab aise gandi Baat Ahhh na karo mere andar kuch ho raha hai......

G...ahhh hone do jo ho raha hai apko chut hamesha gili rahe aur ap aise hi garam rahe..... Ap ko kiya pata ki ap ka husn kiya hai....... Kash mai bhi lamba choda hota aur mere shandi bhi apse hoti to kasam se din rat aage piche chodta hi rahta.... Aur raat ko chut mai Lund dal kar sota....... Ahhhhh roz ise nangi dekhta kapde bilkul bhi nahi pahnata ap ko pat kar ke apki ganad par khana rakh kar khata..... Ahhhhh roti ka niwala apki gand par rakhe sabzi ta kuch bhi dalkar us pa laga kar khata.......

Ap jab soti to apki gaand par apna sir rakh kar sota........

T.... Ohhh ruk jao mere jaan nikal rahi hai ab na bolo ohhhhhh ruk jao.....


Aise hi kuch aur tarif karta hai aur 10 min aise hi panty mai lipti gand dekh kar uska Lund mai mal aane ko tha.....

To woh bilkul Tabbasum ki gand ke pass chala jata hai par uske kad ki wazah se woh lund ki ragad gaand par nahi laga sakta tha... Tabhi uske lund se pichkari chhutti hai.... Woh apne lune ka nishan gaand par laga hai to dono taraf gand par mani aati hai aur kuch pichkari Tabbasum ki jhango par aati hai......

Uska jgadana tababsum ko nagawar guzarta hai..... Par woh aise hi khadi rahti hai.....

Tab woh apne chote chote hath gaand par badata hai aur jaha mal tha us par laga kar dono nitambo par malne lagta hai..... Tabbasum ko bahot chipchipa sa lagta hai... Par woh kuch nahi bolti.......

Dono nitambo par mal laga kar ab jhango par lage mal ko bhi wahi Malta hai......

Aisa karte waqt Tabbasum bahot geeli ho jati hain.......

Tab use uske zaban ka kurdura pan lagta hai Tabbasum chokti hai tab piche mud kar dekhti hai to apne hi mal ko gand par se chat chat kar saf kar raha tha aur dono jhange pakad kar sahla raha tha.......

Ye aisa gandapan dekh kar Tabbasum ko ubkai to aati hai..... Par woh ubkai ek sharif aurat le rahi thi... Par jo andar hawas ki devi thi use bahot accha lag raha tha.....

T.. Chiiii ye kiya ahhhh ahhhhh kar rahe ho apne hi gandgi chat ahhh rahe ho.......tab woh kahta hai... Apko kiya pata mere mal ki kimat kitni bad gayi hai....ap nahi jan sakti apke gore tawcha par lag kar ye amrit ban gaya hai.....

Aisa kahte hue woh jhango par se bhi chatne laga..... Ye andar hi andar tababsum bahot accha feel kar rahi thi......


Tabhi uski panty ko pakad kar khich deta hai to panty chirrr ki awaz se fatt jati hai........

T... Ohhh khuda apne to mere panty hi shaheed kar di.......

Hato mujhe Sharam Aa rahi hai..

Par tabbi jab niche apna skirt karna chahati hai to.....uska hook pakad kar tod deta hai aur yaha kamal ki baat ye thi ki tabbassum use rokti nahi bus aise hi nakami ki mazhammat karti hai...


Ab Tabbasum niche se nagi ho gayi... Udar sofe par ring baj rahi thi Tabbasum ne dekha to us par iske shohar ka nam likha Aa raha tha......

Par ye Accha tha ki vibration mode mai tha.... Tabbasum se use receive nahi kara......

Tabhi ek ungli Tabbasum ki gand ke ched par rengti si mahsoos hone lagi...... Tabbasum kuch kahti to woh ungli aaram se gand ke ched par dawab dalne lagi.......

T... Ahhhh nahi dalna nahi bahot dard hota hai.

G... Thik hai nahi dalta lakin zara si bhi hili to dal donga ab tu apne ye upper ka kapda utar de.... Jaldi ahhhh ab tere chuchi ko dekhna hai tere pet ko tere nabhi ko ahhhh ye husn to ab mujhe koi dekhne se rok nahi sakta.......

Tab woh apne ungli ka dawab badata hai to tabbassum jo is waqt itni garam ho chuki thi ki woh apne hath upper kar ke woh kurti kaho ya tshirt.. Utar deti hai.....

Ganesh ye dekh kar Tabbasum ki kamar pakad ka ghuma deta hai......

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Ganesh ke samne bra mai qaid uske boobs dekhte hai..... Aur uske nazar navel aur pet par bhi jati hai.....
Tabbasum aankhe band kari hue thi. Uske andar himmat bhi nahi thi ki woh aankhe khol de.... Tabhi uske pet par garam sanse mahsoos hoti hai......

Aur do hath gand par jo use masale ki koshish kar rahe the par use chote hatho mai gand ka hissa kam aata hai......

Woh Jo uska sir ka hissa navel tak tha to woh navel ko apne muh mai rakhta hai andar zaban nahi dalta Tabbasum ke jism mai se ganesh ki mani ki mahak bahot aa rahi thi aur woh is mahak ko apne sanso mai lete hue andar hi andar bahot hi garam ho rahi thi..... Ganesh Tabbasum ki navel chatne lagta hai......

Tab woh masti mai aake apni chuchi par hath rakhakr dabati hai to us mai se milk bahar aata hai....

Aur ganesh ke chote chote hatho ka sparsh ganad par bahot accha lagta hai.....

Woh ye sab bardash nahi kar pati to ghum jati hai is wazah se gand ka hisa Phir se ganesh ke samne hota hai..... Call barabar aati hai jise ab use diatraub vibration mode par hota hai....

Woh ganesh ko ishara karti hai ki ruk hai kuch na kahe..... Aur woh waha sofe par mob dekh ka ab mute karke bad ke traf mob fek deti hai......



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Ganesh uska behad gora jism gori gand dekhte hue kamar par Phir se pakad kar khichta hai to tabbi ladkhada jati hai aur wahi ek chota sa table rakha tha us se takra kar aage ki traf girati hai par zameen pa girne se pahle woh hath zamenn par laga deti hai jisse uska chehra bach jata hai.....

T. Ye kiya jahilpan hai mai agar gir jati to....tabi ganesh furti dekhta hua uske pair ko mod ta hai....

G... Ahhh mere makin ap aise hi betho ahhh ek min apni kamar to unchi kar do....

Ganesh tabbi ko dogy style mai bethne ko kahta hai to woh waisa hi karti hai.... Ganesh jaldi se uke bra ke hook khol kae bra bhi utar kar fek deta hai..


Aur piche aakar dekhne lagta hai bahot hi ab aur haseen gori gaand nikal kar bahar aayi thi.....

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G... Hey malik maine to iska andaza bhi nahi kara tha..
. Ohhhh bahot khubsurat hai.... Kha jaonga tere gaand mujhe kab se tu madarchod bana rahi thi par ab mai tujhe gaandchod bana donga.....


Uski bat sunkar thoda dar gayi aur ab pahli bar ganesh ke muh se galiya sunne lagi.....


Par ye gali abhi Tabbasum ko kaha de raha tha... Tabbasum mare Sharam ke uth kar bed ki traf jati hai to woh piche se pair khich kar kamar kas ke pakad leta hai.....
G..... Bus ab bahot hua tune ab tak mera lund nahi dekha.... Sala ab Phir s josh mai Aa raha hai ab aise hi bethe rahna pahle tujhe aona Lund dekha do.... Ye kah kar kamar se htah hata ka piche kadam apne leta hai to.... Dekhta hai ki chut ke hisse se pani tapak raha tha aur gaand ka surakh uske dil ki raftar tez kar raha tha....

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Ganesh se raha nahi gaya aur bahot hi mamoli sa jhuk kar use gand ko upper utha deta hai aur aone zaban se gand chatne lagta hain......


G. Uiiiiiii maaaa ab ye to nahi tha karne ko ahhhhh shhhhhhh ruko na.......


Tab woh ek sec ke liye ganad ko took laga kar geela karta hua Phir se piche se ungli gand ke ched par karta hain......

Par yaha chahati ti use rok sakti thi pa aisa nahi kara.... Uski ungli ahisa ahisa se gand ke ched ke andar Jane lagi....aur dard ko rokne ke liye apna muh band kar liya aankho se aaso nikal aaye par yaha tabbassum ne kuch nahi kaha.... Aur aakhir ek halki cheekh nikli........

Gand ne ched mai ungli ja chuki thi aur 5 min bad woh bhi kamar ko chumta to kabhi nitambo ko chumta uski ungli ab andar bahar hone lagi.... Jo ab Tabbasum ko dard ke sath Maza bhi de rahi thi...





Abhi maine ye part waise to nahi likh paya jaisa mai likhna chahata tha.. Par shayad ye part kisi ko pasand na aye aur cmmt bhi nahi mile par dekhte hai aage kuch ap log ek badiya chudai ki himmat dete ho ya nahi bus mai ye kahani aage le jana chahata tha ti likh diya..... Warna moond nahi tha... Par ap logo ne himmat di to maine likhne ki koshish kari.....
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(11-04-2020, 03:42 AM)hot update thanks for continue plz start your other stories also here Wrote: Shayad jo ek bar likh diya waisa feel na la pao Phir bhi try karta ho mujhe bhi bad fell ho raha hai ki story aise hi Jane do.... Chalo lets try......

Thoda sa mai piche se shuru karta ho......

Tabbasum pahle apne dusre room mai Jane se pahle kuch time apne bacche aur nadia ke sath  spend karti hai......

Aur wahi apne kapde bhi change karti hai full veil ke sath kamar tak kurti aur long skutt pahan leti hai.... Tab woh kahti hai ki ab tum hi ise dekho mai ab sone ja rahi ho kuch raat ko soyi bhi nahi kam se kam aaj raat aaram se so jati ho.... Aur agar baby pareshan kare to garam pani milk powder sab rakha hai......

N.... Are mere jana ye tere kok se zaroor paida hua hai par mai ise ek Maa se badkaar chahati ho pata nahi kab mere kok bharegi.......

Aise kuch lambi bata hokar aur apne apne shohar ki is time takleef jo ho rahi thi waha us par bhi Baat hoti hai tab woh dusre room mai jati hai......

Yaha uska irada ganesh se sex karne ka nahi woh mob bhi leke aati hai jisse raat ko woh try kare ki shayad shankar ke call lag jai to woh uske hal chal le sakti hai... Aur woh puchna bhi chahati thi aakhir tumne is bone ganesh ko kyo bheja

Ye sochkar apne room mai jati hai.. Ha ganesh ko usne Jane ke liye kitchen ke kand ke bad kaha bhi tha... Par woh raat ka bahana bana kar hall ke ek kone mai so gaya......

Jaise hi door open kar ke jati hai to..... Isse aage ka maine bata hi diya hai sab ko... Tabassum kuch shart rakh kar ganesh ko apne room mai aane deti hai.....

Jab ganesh aata hai to woh Tabbasum ko dekhta hai Tabbasum uski traf peet kar ke khade hue thi aur apna veil sahi kar rahi thi.....



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Tabbasum ki bahar ki nikalti gaand dekh kar ganesh apne honto ko dato se dabata hai......

G... Mam sahib ap ki ye gaand sali jan na le le mere.....

T.  Tum Phir shuru ho gaye maine isiliye tumhe andar aane diya tha ye sab us shankar ki wazah se na woh aisa kahta na mai karti......

G.... Ahhh shankar sala bada harami hai itna Accha mal laga aur bad mai mujhe moka diya... Waise jaise ap us ka intzar darwaza khol kar kar rahi thi to laga mujhe ki shankar ne jo mujhe apke pass bheja tha uska parinam mujhe mil jayega......

Ye sab baate ganesh andher mai teer chala kar karta hai..... Woh janta tha ki jis trah shankar ka intzar aur jab usne Tabbasum ki gaand ko hall mai sahlaya dabaya tha to tabassum ne kuch nahi kaha lakin jab bad mai shankar ki jagah use dekha to bus samjh gaya ki kuch gadbad hai......


Tab aise hi piche jakar ganesh ne piche se Tabbasum ki kamar mai hath dal kar pakda to Tabbasum ne use jahtka mara aur woh apne ko sambhal na saka.... Piche jake wahi bed ke kinare se uska sir laga... Woh dard se bilbila gaya.... Aur apne sir par hath rakh kar dekhne laga ki khoon to nahi nikla hai.....

G... Ahhh mar diya ap shankar ko sab kuch karati ho par mere ko nahi.....

Tabbasum ne jab use dard se tadapta hua dekha to woh uske pass aana chaha par aai nahi.....

G.. Mare mai kiya burai hai mai bhi ek apke husn ka bhikhari ho bheekh mangta ho apke husn ki mai janta ho ap mere kalpano se bhi kahi aage hai..... Mai zindgi bhar tarasta raha par jab apne mujhe humdardi se gale lagaya to aisa laga ki mai apko pa sakta ho... Hamesha ap ke bare mai sochta tha...

Par mujhe pata hai ap dariya ka woh dusre kinara hai jisse mai mil nahi sakta.... Lakin shankar ne ap ki chudai ke bare mai bataya to laga ki woh bhi ek garib hai jab ap use apne husn ki bheekh de sakti ho to mujhe bhi de sakti ho...... Zindgibhar apke yaha gulami karonga bus ek bar to mujhe bhi moka do... Sab kuch kitchen mai sahi chal raha tha par woh khubsurat chudel kaha se aa gayi kitni garam thi ap.....

T.. Kah diya jo kahna tha ha jab tumhe pata hai ki shankar ne mere sath..... Par woh sab maine apne khushi ke liye nahi kara tha.... Woh bus ka safar mere zindgi ka kiya kahi kaise kaho..... Us safar ne mere zingdi tabah kari ya abad nahi janti mai... Aur tumhe ab tak shankar ki wazah se bardash kar rahi thi... Warna tum jaise log.... Mere pairo ke dhul ke barabar nahi ho kabhi dekha hai sone ap ko kab shuru hote ho kab khatam hote ho.... Tum jaise logo par taras kahke badi bhul hoti hai.... Jitne tum chote ho utna hi zameen ke andar.......

Yaha ab ek Baat to ab ganesh ko pata chali ki woh shankar ko yaad kar rahi hai yani shankar ne ise khub choda hai.... Ye to ab isne bhi kah hi diya ab isi Baat ka fayda utha kar kaise bhi is garam mal ko apna bhi banana hoga......


G... To apne kyo shankar ki baat manakar mujhe ghar mai aane diya... Are mai apse sirf yahi to chahata hi ki thoda ap ko nanga dekh lo.... To mujhe chain Aa jai.. Waise bhi mai bona insan ap ko apne hath pair se to kabo mai nahi kar sakta........


Aur ap mujhe zaroor dat rahi ho par apne aankho mai dekho kitne hawas se lal ho rahi hai ye jism ek ke liye nahi bana is jism ko aise nahi chhodo aur bus mujhe bhi shankar ki trah thoda apne husn ki bhekh de do.... Kabhi zindgi mai nahi socha tha ki apki nangi gaand dekh paonga uske andar ungli kar paonga..... Par ab jab aisa hua to lagta hai bhagwan ne mujhe mere zillat ruswai ka inam tumhare roop mai de diya hai.....


Are mai to apse kiya chahta ho chalo thik hai ap ek bar apne gaand ye kapda upper utha kar Phir se dekha do kasam se door se dekh kar mutt mar kar chala jaonga......

Kyoki ap ko hamesha soch kar mutt mari hai to apke piche apki ye haseen gaand dekh kar ek bar aur mutt marne ka dil kar raha hai...... Abhi to ap kuch der pahle waha kitchen mai mera sath bhi de rahi thi... Apko chut kitni garam thi apka jism kitna tapish mai jal raha tha.... Sab sahi tha par woh kaha se aa gayi.... Ap ko bhi pata hai mere jaise insan se jor jabardasti nahi hogi..... Bus apse bheekh mang rakta ho..... Mujhe woh khushi ek bar aur de do..... Aur shankar to aaj nahi kal apko chodega hi...... Par mai apki gaand dekha kar hi mutt mar liya karonga......

T. Tum Pagal ho gaye ho kab se ye gande alfazo mai Baat kar rahe ho tumhe andaza bhi hai kisse Baat kar rahe ho jante bhi ho mai kon ho galti hue jo tumhe maine itna badawa diya mere haisiyat ka andaza hai tumne

G.... Ha ap ek pakiza aurat hai is bade ghar ki bahu hai.... Tab ap mere liye ek pujniy devi thi.... Aur mai apko zindgi bhar soch kar mutt mar ke nikal deta.... Par ab ap kon hai pata hai ap ek lundkhor hai ap shankar ki rakhel hai.......

Aur ap apne pati ki bus ek showcase mai rakhne wala saman hai kuch nahi jab apne us nich insan se chudai karwai to ap mai   bus apne jism ki aag thundi karwane ke ilawa kuch nahi raha ha shankar ne bataya tha ki ap ko khub ragad kar choda hai..... Par ye mai nahi janta kaise ap us ki rakhel ban gayi........



Ye Baat bade hinmat de kari wohi bataya ek andaze se kah to di par ab tabbassum uske kiya jawab deti......

Tabbasum jo sach mai uski chut subah se jal rahi thi aur ab uski Baat sunkar gussa to bahot aata hai par shankar ki rakhel jo woh kah raha tha to use bura zayada nahi lagta.... Par ek aurat thi halat ki mari itna to shankar ne bhi zaleel nahi kara.......

Tabbasum ki aankho se aaso Jhalak aaye woh bhi isliye ji uske samne ek nihayti gatiya aadmi use uski auqat bata raha tha......

Tabbassum tootne lagi aur us ka dil kuch aur kah raha tha use samjh nahi Aa raha tha ki woh is ki baat ka kiya jawab de... Ab woh yaha kam se kam apne ko shankar ki rakhel hi samjh rahi thi.......

Aur Woh apne aaso pochte hue apna muh uske samne se hata diya tab ye dekh kar ganesh aage badta hai aur uski long skit upper uthata hai to Tabbasum bhadak jati hai.... Par woh foran Phir se uske pairo mai gir kar pahle to maafi mangta hai aur Phir......

G.... Mujhe maaf kar do mai bus khasam khata ho ek bar apki gand dekh kar mutt mar kar chala jonga mai yaha koi shankar ka nam nahi longa.....

Par aisa zulm na karo is garib ka bhi khayal rakkho ap to bahot dayalu hai ap hamesha garibo ki madad karti hai.... Ha ye pahla aisa garib hai jo bheekh mai ap se apki gand dekhne ki vinti kar raha hai......

Mahabani kar do is garib ki bhi jholi bhar do mai ye bhool jaonga ki maine kithchen mai kiya kiya kara bus abhi ka hi ap dhayan rakhonga mai janta ho ek bona ho mere hatho pairo mai itni taqat nahi ki mai apke upper sawar ho jao......

Uski is trah ki baat sunakar jism ne ek harkat li subah se bus shankar ko hi apne doosh nikal kar chai pilayi thi aur din bahar se doodh kafi jama hone laga jis wazah se nipple mai Tees hone lagi aur apne ap kuch boonde nikal kar bra mai samnane lagi........

Par ab use apne pairo par pada dekh kar tabbassum ko Accha lag raha tha...... Aur chut to subah se geeli ho rahi thi.......

Uske andar jawae bhata badne laga yaha ganesh ne bhi jab se aaya tha tab se use aur garam kar diya tha.....

G... Plzzz mamsahib ek bar door se dekhonga ap ki gand aise gaand to kisi ki nahi ho sakti kitni gadde dar chodi ganad hai tumhari.... Ek bar hi sahi dekha do..... Ap to janti hai mai apse jabar nahi kar sakta apne dekhayi thi tab se mera dil ise chune ko kar raha tha... Apne chumwaya bhi pyar bhi karne diya aur apko tang surakh mai jab ungli dali to ap ko kiya pata mere liye ye ek sapne se bhi badi cheez thi... Ap jaise log to hamre sapne mai bhi nahi aate hai..

Kafi der man murawat ka dor chalta raha Tabbasum garam hoti rahi par aakhir man hi gayi......

T.... Dekho ye mere izzat hai aur mai bahot khandani aurta ho.... Par us shankar ne mere bare mai bata kar tumhe mere gale ki haddi bana diya.....

Par agar tumne mujhe chuwa bhi to.....

G... Nahi nahi apko kaise chuw sakta ho ap mere liye itna kar rahi hai yahi bade baat hai bus live apki gand dekh kar mutt mar kar chala jaonga.... Dekha do ab na sharmao kitchen mai khub dekhi sahkayi dabai thi... Par ab yaha kisi aane ka bhi dar nahi to kyo sharma rahi ho......

T. Pahle utho aur door khade rahna agar kisi ko shankar ki trah batata to mai apne jaan de dongi......

G... Paran jai par vachan na jai shankar ne galti kari thi par mai aise galti nahi karonga aur ap shmakr ki traf se chinta mukt ho jao woh kisi ko kiya apne ko bhi nahi batayega...

Yaha agar jab door bell baji thi tab door open kar ke shankar ki jagah is bone ko dekh leti to baat yaha tak nahi aati aur khud ki galatfahmi ka shikar tabbi ho gayi thi......

Usne aisa kuch react kara ki woh samjhi ki ye sab shankar ki wazah se ho raha hai... Par Baat yaha tak thi ki shankar ne ab tak kisi ko kiya apne ko hi nahi bataya woh janta tha ki ye ghar ki izzat hai aur is izzat ki abru to loot li par sab ko nahi bata sakte.....


Par shankar se bhi galti te hue ki usne to apne bare mai kiya sochta hai sab bata diya lakin use is ganesh ko involve nahi karna tha.......

Tabbasum ne use piche hata kar ab apni long skut diwar ke sahare khade hokar aaram aaram se uthati hai ye dekh kar woh apne sare kapde utarne lagta hai aur lund to funkar hi raha tha....pahle gori pindiya dekhti hai phir gori jhang tababsum  panty gili aur zayda hone lagti hai nipple tan jate hai uske nipple mai doodh ka sarot badne lagta hai..... Aur us ke nipple se bhi kuch doodh bahar aane lagta hai......

Jo bra mai jazb ho jata hai....

G...ohhh mere malkin ruko nhai utaho aur uthao apne nayab gaand ka didar ek bar aur kara do.... Is bhikhari ko jo bheekh mai apki gand dekhne ka intzar kar raha hai de do is bhikhari ko apne husn ki bheekh...


Tabbassum uski Baat se josh mai aa jati hai.... Aur aakhir apni skirt kamar tak le ke use kamar ke curve par dal deti hai......

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Jab uski panty aur bade bade nitamb ganesh ko ek bar aur dekhte hai to apne Lund par uska hath tez chalne lagta hai.....

G... Bus aise hi khadi raho ahhhhh mere malkin kasam se kis sanche mai apko banaya hai.... Ohh apki gand duniya ke sanse khubsurat gand hai.... Ise pane ke liye to log apas mai kat ke mar jayenge..... Wah kiya tarif karo is gaand ki kitni gori mulayam Ahhh gaddedar hai ohhhh apko to apni gand ki khubsurati bhi nahi pata....


Ahhhh aise gand maine aaj tak nahi dekhi.... Zinadgi bhar mai tarasta raha par aaj mujhe nahi pata ki kis neki se upperwala khush hua hai.... Ohh apke pati ise roz dekhte honge chumte honge pyar karte honge aur khub masalte honge.......

Tabbi man mai.... Kash aisa hota log itne deewane hai mere hips ke aur mere shahar to ohhhh mai itni khubsurat ho ye ahsasn mujhe ye bona aur shankar ne dilaya hai.......

G... Ahhhhh bus zindgi bhar ise dekhta raho kash mai is gand mai apna Lund bhi dal deta shankar ne kaise chod di bina chode uff jab maine ungli dali thi to andaza nahi tha ki ye gand kunwari hogi......

T... Bus karo..... Ab aise gandi Baat Ahhh na karo mere andar kuch ho raha hai......

G...ahhh hone do jo ho raha hai apko chut hamesha gili rahe aur ap aise hi garam rahe..... Ap ko kiya pata ki ap ka husn kiya hai....... Kash mai bhi lamba choda hota aur mere shandi bhi apse hoti to kasam se din rat aage piche chodta hi rahta.... Aur raat ko chut mai Lund dal kar sota....... Ahhhhh roz ise nangi dekhta kapde bilkul bhi nahi pahnata ap ko pat kar ke apki ganad par khana rakh kar khata..... Ahhhhh roti ka niwala apki gand par rakhe sabzi ta kuch bhi dalkar us pa laga kar khata.......

Ap jab soti to apki gaand par apna sir rakh kar sota........

T.... Ohhh ruk jao mere jaan nikal rahi hai ab na bolo ohhhhhh ruk jao.....


Aise hi kuch aur tarif karta hai aur 10 min aise hi panty mai lipti gand dekh kar uska Lund mai mal aane ko tha.....

To woh bilkul  Tabbasum ki gand ke pass chala jata hai par uske kad ki wazah se woh lund ki ragad gaand par nahi laga sakta tha... Tabhi uske lund se pichkari chhutti hai.... Woh apne lune ka nishan gaand par laga hai to dono taraf gand par mani aati hai aur kuch pichkari Tabbasum ki jhango par aati hai......

Uska jgadana tababsum ko nagawar guzarta hai..... Par woh aise hi khadi rahti hai.....

Tab woh apne chote chote hath gaand par badata hai aur jaha mal tha us par laga kar dono nitambo par malne lagta hai..... Tabbasum ko bahot chipchipa sa lagta hai... Par woh kuch nahi bolti.......

Dono nitambo par mal laga kar ab jhango par lage mal ko bhi wahi Malta hai......

Aisa karte waqt Tabbasum bahot geeli ho jati hain.......

Tab use uske zaban ka kurdura pan lagta hai Tabbasum chokti hai tab piche mud kar dekhti hai to apne hi mal ko gand par se chat chat kar saf kar raha tha aur dono jhange pakad kar sahla raha tha.......

Ye aisa gandapan dekh kar Tabbasum ko ubkai to aati hai..... Par woh ubkai ek sharif aurat le rahi thi... Par jo andar hawas ki devi thi use bahot accha lag raha tha.....

T.. Chiiii ye kiya ahhhh ahhhhh kar rahe ho apne hi gandgi chat ahhh rahe ho.......tab woh kahta hai... Apko kiya pata mere mal ki kimat kitni bad gayi hai....ap nahi jan sakti apke gore tawcha par lag kar ye amrit ban gaya hai.....

Aisa kahte hue woh jhango par se bhi chatne laga..... Ye andar hi andar tababsum bahot accha feel kar rahi thi......


Tabhi uski panty ko pakad kar khich deta hai to panty chirrr ki awaz se fatt jati hai........

T... Ohhh khuda apne to mere panty hi shaheed kar di.......

Hato mujhe Sharam Aa rahi hai..

Par tabbi jab niche apna skirt karna chahati hai to.....uska hook pakad kar tod deta hai aur yaha kamal ki baat ye thi ki tabbassum use rokti nahi bus aise hi nakami ki mazhammat karti hai...


Ab Tabbasum niche se nagi  ho gayi... Udar sofe par ring baj rahi thi Tabbasum ne dekha to us par iske shohar ka nam likha Aa raha tha......

Par ye Accha tha ki vibration mode mai tha.... Tabbasum se use receive nahi kara......

Tabhi ek ungli Tabbasum ki gand ke ched par rengti si mahsoos hone lagi...... Tabbasum kuch kahti to woh ungli aaram se gand ke ched par dawab dalne lagi.......

T... Ahhhh nahi dalna nahi bahot dard hota hai.

G... Thik hai nahi dalta lakin zara si bhi hili to dal donga ab tu apne ye upper ka kapda utar de.... Jaldi ahhhh ab tere chuchi ko dekhna hai tere pet ko tere nabhi ko ahhhh ye husn to ab mujhe koi dekhne se rok nahi sakta.......

Tab woh apne ungli ka dawab badata hai to tabbassum jo is waqt itni garam ho chuki thi ki woh apne hath upper kar ke woh kurti kaho ya tshirt.. Utar deti hai.....

Ganesh ye dekh kar Tabbasum ki kamar pakad ka ghuma deta hai......

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Ganesh ke samne bra mai qaid uske boobs dekhte hai..... Aur uske nazar navel aur pet par bhi jati hai.....
Tabbasum aankhe band kari hue thi. Uske andar himmat bhi nahi thi ki woh aankhe khol de.... Tabhi uske pet par garam sanse mahsoos hoti hai......

Aur do hath gand par jo use masale ki koshish kar rahe the par use chote hatho mai gand ka hissa kam aata hai......

Woh Jo uska sir ka hissa navel tak tha to woh navel ko apne muh mai rakhta hai andar zaban nahi dalta Tabbasum ke jism mai se ganesh ki mani ki mahak bahot aa rahi thi aur woh is mahak ko apne sanso mai lete hue andar hi andar bahot hi garam ho rahi thi..... Ganesh Tabbasum ki navel chatne lagta hai......

Tab woh masti mai aake apni chuchi par hath rakhakr dabati hai to us mai se milk bahar aata hai....

Aur ganesh ke chote chote hatho ka sparsh ganad par bahot accha lagta hai.....

Woh ye sab bardash nahi kar pati to ghum jati hai is wazah se gand ka hisa Phir se ganesh ke samne hota hai..... Call barabar aati hai jise ab use diatraub vibration mode par hota hai....

Woh ganesh ko ishara karti hai ki ruk hai kuch na kahe..... Aur woh waha sofe par mob dekh ka ab mute karke bad ke traf mob fek deti hai......



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Ganesh uska behad gora jism gori gand dekhte hue kamar par Phir se pakad kar khichta hai to tabbi ladkhada jati hai aur wahi ek chota sa table rakha tha us  se takra kar aage ki traf girati hai par zameen pa girne se pahle woh hath zamenn par laga deti hai jisse uska chehra bach jata hai.....

T. Ye kiya jahilpan hai mai agar gir jati to....tabi ganesh furti dekhta hua uske pair ko mod ta hai....

G... Ahhh mere makin ap aise hi betho ahhh ek min apni kamar to unchi kar do....

Ganesh tabbi ko dogy style mai bethne ko kahta hai to woh waisa hi karti hai.... Ganesh jaldi se uke bra ke hook khol kae bra bhi utar kar fek deta hai..


Aur piche aakar dekhne lagta hai bahot hi ab aur haseen gori gaand nikal kar bahar aayi thi.....

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G... Hey malik maine to iska andaza bhi nahi kara tha..
. Ohhhh bahot khubsurat hai.... Kha jaonga tere gaand mujhe kab se tu madarchod bana rahi thi par ab mai tujhe gaandchod bana donga.....


Uski bat sunkar thoda dar gayi aur ab pahli bar ganesh ke muh se galiya sunne lagi.....


Par ye gali abhi Tabbasum ko kaha de raha tha... Tabbasum mare Sharam ke uth kar bed ki traf jati hai to woh piche se pair khich kar kamar kas ke pakad leta hai.....
G..... Bus ab bahot hua tune ab tak mera lund nahi dekha.... Sala ab Phir s josh mai Aa raha hai ab aise hi bethe rahna pahle tujhe aona Lund dekha do.... Ye kah kar kamar se htah hata ka piche kadam apne leta hai to.... Dekhta hai ki chut ke hisse se pani tapak raha tha aur gaand ka surakh uske dil ki raftar tez kar raha tha....

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Ganesh se raha nahi gaya aur bahot hi mamoli sa jhuk kar use gand ko upper utha deta hai aur aone zaban se gand chatne lagta hain......


G.  Uiiiiiii maaaa ab ye to nahi tha karne ko ahhhhh shhhhhhh ruko na.......


Tab woh ek sec ke liye ganad ko took laga kar geela karta hua Phir se piche se ungli gand ke ched par karta hain......

Par yaha chahati ti use rok sakti thi pa aisa nahi kara.... Uski ungli ahisa ahisa se gand ke ched ke andar Jane lagi....aur dard ko rokne ke liye apna muh band kar liya aankho se aaso nikal aaye par yaha tabbassum ne kuch nahi kaha.... Aur aakhir ek halki cheekh nikli........

Gand ne ched mai ungli ja chuki thi aur 5 min bad woh bhi kamar ko chumta to kabhi nitambo ko chumta uski ungli ab andar bahar hone lagi.... Jo ab Tabbasum ko dard ke sath Maza bhi de rahi thi...





Abhi maine ye part waise to nahi likh paya jaisa mai likhna chahata tha.. Par shayad ye part kisi ko pasand na aye aur cmmt bhi nahi mile par dekhte hai aage kuch ap log ek badiya chudai ki himmat dete ho ya nahi bus mai ye kahani aage le jana chahata tha ti likh diya..... Warna moond nahi tha... Par ap logo ne himmat di to maine likhne ki koshish kari.....
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Dear esy hi ap nay dara diya itna acha update to diya ha apny. ap khud ko dukhi na karo . khush raho aur esy hi update dety raho.
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आपका बहोत बहोत शुक्रिया जो आपने मेरी बात को ध्यान से पढ़ा और अपनी राय दी। हालांकि मैं भी कहती हूँ कि जो कुछ भी हालात है उसका ही सब असर पड़ता दिखाई देता है आपकी सोच एकदम सही है। thanks अगले अपडेट का इंतजार रहेगा जल्दी से दीजिए pls।
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Bhai super update yaara....good going
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Keep it up bro
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(10-04-2020, 05:08 PM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Bahot badi gadbad ho gayi sari mahnat kharab ek bada update likha tha woh galti se back ho gaya sab chala gaya sab moond kharab

mere sath bhi aesa hua tha bro.5 pages delet ho gaye the galti se itna gussa aaya tha na ki laptop utha ke patak du magar fir se mood banaya aur likha hot hai yara bahot accha likh rahe ho great writer ho bhai aap aese mayue hoke nahi chalega
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(10-04-2020, 05:08 PM)Lion King 989 Wrote: Bahot badi gadbad ho gayi sari mahnat kharab ek bada update likha tha woh galti se back ho gaya sab chala gaya sab moond kharab

bai me apo ke feeling smaj sakta hu mere sath same essa he hu tha mere punjabi stori me app likh karr copy karlea karo firr agge likha karo ager back ja error hoga to jitna copy he bo bach jae ga thoda likho thoda copy kro likh buht assa rahe ho lagge raho
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(11-04-2020, 12:46 PM)rafiqshaikh9059 Wrote: mere sath bhi aesa hua tha bro.5 pages delet ho gaye the galti se itna gussa aaya tha na ki laptop utha ke patak du magar fir se mood banaya aur likha hot hai yara bahot accha likh rahe ho great writer ho bhai aap aese mayue hoke nahi chalega

Go to your ms word/libre office settings and activate 'save every 10 minutes' option so that you can only lose your last 10 minutes of work due to errors/power outages
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Sorry to learn about your mishap with the update.
It happens dear...
In the meantime, if you could upload your IRAM story-"MERI ADHURI KAHANI"...
I am a big fan of IRAM, must've read it the most.
And now TABASSUM.
You are a good writer of eroticism...
Just carry on!
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Bhai tabbu ko caw girl banao....jise ganesh sankar khich khich ke doodh nikale ..
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(11-04-2020, 07:14 AM)asha10783 Wrote: आपका बहोत बहोत शुक्रिया जो आपने मेरी बात को ध्यान से पढ़ा और अपनी राय दी। हालांकि मैं भी कहती हूँ कि जो कुछ भी हालात है उसका ही सब असर पड़ता दिखाई देता है आपकी सोच एकदम सही है। thanks अगले अपडेट का इंतजार रहेगा जल्दी से दीजिए pls।

Ha kyoki ladies hi ek Accha suggation de sakti hai.... Phir bhi maine is khani mai ladies yani ek aise aurat ke demag ke bare mai batane ki koshish kari ki woh kiya sochti hai wohi likha abhi tak to
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