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Aman se Avni ki kahani
(03-04-2020, 06:14 PM)Anu80 Wrote: Nice Avni ji...ab story ko jaldi se end pe le ke aayey..
Intezar agle update ka....

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Nice going...Hope Jai and Ravi will arrive soon.
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Plsssss update an errotic one
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Ab AVNI Manoj ka virodh kar rahi thi....Manoj ne gusse me kaha " dekh ab jayada natak mat kar nahi to Heera ko bol ke KAMYA ki aisi pilai karwaonga ki wo seh nahi payegi aur kya pata bistar pe hi dum tood de....isliye no mai karna chahoon mujhe karne de...."

Ab AVNI ke paas koi rasta nahi bacha tha....filhal usey Manoj ki baat ko manna hi pada aur usney virodh karna chood diya...ye deku ke Manoj bola " Sahi kiya meri RANI.. ab dekh KAISEY TUJHE jannat ki sair karata hoinn.. mere bete ne bhi TERI pilai aisey nahi ki HOGI..waisey bhi wo kisi kaam nahi hai ....sala napunsak hai..."

AVNI sirf itna boli: Tu sahi me KAMINA hai ...dekhna tu kutte ke maut marega.... 

Manoj bas jawab me has diya 'HAHAHAHAHA'...

Phir Manoj ne AVNI ke hoonthon pe apne hoont rakh diye aur unhe chusne laga ' MMMMMAMMMAMMMAAMM'
Usne ek baar phir apne jeebh AVNI ke muah ke ander daal ke uske muah ke amrit numa saliva ko pina shuru kar diya....dono ke saliva paas me ghulmil Gaye...phir jab kuch 10 min. Baad uska man AVNI ke hoontoon se bhara to wo thoda niche aaya aur AVNI ki surahidaar garden pe apni jeebh firane laga aur jeebh pirate pirate wo uske kaan ke niche le aaya aur usny chum ne laga...aur uske baad usne dhire se AVNI ke kaan ke nichle hissey ok apne daaton me pakad ke halka sa kaat liya....ye AVNI ka nazuk part tha jispe Manoj ne anjane mehi chot kar di thi.....AVNI ke mush se ek siskari nikal gai aur uski aankhen band ho gai ' AHHHHHAHHAA'.....Ye deku ke Manoj ke chehre pe ek katilana muskaan aa gai....aur phir usne AVNI ke dusre taraf ke kaan ko bhi waisey hi kata....iss baar phir phir AVNI ke muah se siskari chut gai ' AAAAAAA'....

Phir Manoj ne dhire se AVNI ke left choochi ko daba diya is baar AVNI ke muah se ek madak sisak chut gai ' OOOOOHHHHHAAHHHH'.....an AVNI dhire dhire garam ho rahi thi ...shayad uspe se uska control khatam ho raha tha....

Phir Manoj ne AVNI ki left choochi ke nipple ko apne daaton me bhara aur halka sa chus ke kaat liya....AVNI ke muah se ek baar phir zor ki ahh nikal gai " AHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHH"....an Manoj ne AVNI ki left choochi ko pura apne muah me bhara aur chusne laga aur dusre haath se uski right choochi ko dabane laga....ander kamre ka mahool garam ho chuka tha.....


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Idhar bahar Heera ne KAMYA ko piche se jakda hua hua tha ....KAMYA ki gaand Heera ki ghutno pe ragad kha rahi thi....KAMYA HEERA ke samne kaad me kafi chooti thi....Heera ne thoda jhuk ke KAMYA ki dono choochiyon pe apne haath rakhe aur zor se daba diye....KAMYA ke muah se ek zordaar cheekh chut gai ' AAAAUUUUUCCCCHHHHHH".....HEERA has diya aur bola " HAHAHAH....are meri JAAN abhi to ye shuruwat hai....abhi to puri raat baki hai....pehle main yahi pe bahar TUJHE nanga karke...khade khader TERI maranga.....yahan pe khade sabhi pehredaar TERI pilai dekenge....uske baad ander mere quarter lejake TUJHE achhe se aage piche se pilai KARUNGA...."....

KAMYA aur Heera dono abhi uss tejaab wale talab ke paas hi khade the aur iss waqt Heera acche se KAMYA ke sharir ka muaina kar raha tha apne haathon se.....ab usne KAMYA ki gaand ki phankon ko apne haathoo me haatali me jakda hua tha...KAMYA ki gaand ki phaankhe Heera ke haathali me puri tarah sama gai thi....ISSEY hi andaza ho jata hai ki Heera kitna bada tha dil dool me ...Heera ne KAMYA ki gaand ki dono phaankon ko kas ki daba diya....aur ISSEY pehle ki KAMYA ke hoonthon se koi siskari nikalti  usne apne bade bade kale badhe hoont KAMYA ke gulab ki phankhrooyon jaisey  hoonthon pe rakh diye....' ANMMMMMM' ki awaz ke saath KAMYA ki ahh unme ghut ke reh gai.....


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Udhar ander bhi kuch aisa hi khel chal raha tha.....ab Manoj AVNI ke nabhi me apne jeebh daal ke usey chus raha tha....aur uski ek ungli AVNI ki yoni me ander bahar ho rahi thi aur AVNI ne apni dono aankhen bheench ke baand kar rakhi thi...aur abhi sirf uske muah pe kaam utejna ki lakeeren dekhi ja sakti thi....uske muah se siskariyan chut rahi thi ' AHHHHHHH OHHHHH UFFFFFF OH'....

Ab Manoj dhire dhire niche aaya aur usne apni jeebh AVNI ke yoni ke daane pe rakh di aur usey chatte huye apne muah me bhar liya aur chusne laga....' SUUUUPPPPPPPPPPUUPPPP'....

Phir Manoj niche aake apni jeebh ko AVNI ki yoni ki gharai me utar deta hai aur ander bhar aisey karne lagta hai JAISEY wo apni jeebh  se AVNI ki yoni ki pilai kar raha ho....AVNI apna control kho chuki thi aur uske muah se sirf aahain nikal rahi thi " OHHHH AHHHHHH UFFFFFFFF..."

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Udhar bahar Heera ne KAMYA ka lower niche sarka diya tha aur KAMYA ke sone se chamkti gaand ki phaankhe uski aankhon ke samne thi....ab ISSEY pehle ki aur koi harkat karta uske pehle hi uski peeth me tej DARD utha....usne apna ek haath piche leja ke USS jagah ko CHUA aur jab usne apna haath dekha to uspe khoon laga tha....usne JAISEY hi piche mud ke dekha to uski aankhen chaudi ho gai....issey pehle wo kuch samajh pata uske saar me ek goli aake lagti hai aur uske saar se ek khoon ki dhar nikal padti hai....


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Idhar ander inn sab baataon se bekhabar Manoj apni kaamkrida me vayst tha......ab wo bhi pura tarah nanga tha...wo AVNI ko bolta hai " chal meri RANDI ghum ja aaj main TUJHE apni kutiya bans ke pailunga....".....aur wo Avni ko ghuma ke doogy style khada karta hai aur AVNI ke peeche aake apne ling ki AVNI ki yoni pe set karta hai aur aur ek zordaar dhaka marta hai....

USS kamre main AVNI ke zordaar ahh nikal jati hai " AHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHH".....




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HEERA ko goli kisne mari....kya Ravi aur Jai aa phauche hai yahan....kya AVNI baach payegi Manoj se....kya Jai apne BAAP ko AVNI ke SAATH aisi haalat me dekh paayega...agar dekhu lega to uska kya reaction hoga....

Jaanenge  agle update main.....

Aap sab ke comments ki pratiksha main aapki AVNI...

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Is waqt piche se AVNI ki gaand kuch yun dekh rahi thi...

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Manoj ka ling Avni ki yoni me jate huye drashya...

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Awesome
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Idhar bahar jaisey hi ek goli HEERA ke sar me lagi wo piche ki aoor gira ....uske theek piche is waqt KAMYA khadi thi....

Iss se pehle ki wo Kamya ke uper fire aur wo dono sath me uss tejaab ke talab me gire uske pehle hi badi furti se Jai Kamya ka haath pakad kar usey apni aoor kheech leta hai....aur KAMYA sidhe Jai ke sine se lipat jati hai aoor Jai dekhta hai ki HEERA abhi bhi talab ke kinare pe khada tha...Jai  ek  laat MARTA hai hai HEERA ke peet me aur Heera us tejaab ke talab me gir jata aur uska sharir dhire dhire galne lagta hai.....ye deekh me KAMYA apni aankhain band karke apna chehra Jai ke sine me chupa leti hai...
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2sec. baad RAVI bhi unke kareeb aa jata hai....dono goliyaan RAVI ne hi mari thi HEERA ko....iss waqt 4-5 log jo Ravi aur Jai ke SAATH aaye the wo log wahan pe majood guards ko thikhane lagane ke kaam pe lage the....sabhi ki guns me silencer lage huye the jissey goli chalne ki awaz nahi aa rahi thi.....

Jab Ravi Kamya ke kareeb phaucha tab wo Jai ke sine me apna sar chupa ke roo rahi thi....Ravi wahan pe aaya aur usne Kamya ko apne sine laga liya aur pucha " Tu theek hai na "....jawab me has Kamya ne apna saar haan me hilaya....tabhi Jai ne ussey pucha " AVNI KAHAN pe hai gudiya....wo bhi YAHIN hai na "....


KAMYA boli: Haan BHAIYA wo USS kamre me hai....

Kamya ne uss khidki ki aoor ishara kiya jahan pe usne AVNI ko dekha tha.....bas itna sunte hi Jai haweli ke ander bhaga.....


Idhar ander ka mahool garam tha.....Manoj ko kuch bhi khabar nahi thi bahar kya ho raha hai....wo to bas apni masti me choor tha....uska ling ab puri tarah  AVNI ki yoni ki gharayion me sama chuka tha....iss waqt wo param sukh ke anand me gote laga raha tha ....jis ladki ki wo itne dino se lene ke sapne dekh raha tha aaj uska sapna pura ho raha tha....uss ladki ki yoni me uska ling tha....ab usne apne dhakke lagane shuru kiye AVNI ki yoni me....Is param sukh ke karan ab Manoj ke muah se siskariyan nikal rahi thi " UFFFFFFFF OHHHHHHHHHH MMMMMM"...... usne apna ling ek baar AVNI ki yoni se pura nikal liya aur phir se ek baar pura ander utar diya....iss baar AVNI ki muah se bhi ahh choot gai " AHHHHHH "....Ab Manoj ne ussi position me AVNI ko pelna shuru kiya aur apne dono hathoo se AVNI ki choochiyon ko dabane laga....

Iss waqt ander kamre ka scene bahoot hi madak tha.....par....

Tabhi ek zordaar awaj ke sath USS kamre ka darwaja khul gaya aisa laga jaise kisi ne zordaar tarike se thokhar maar ke uss darwaje ko toda ho.....aur phir JAI USS kamre me dhakhil hua....
Wo scene dekh ke JAi ki aankhen patient reh gai....wo nistabh sa waha kisi murti ki tarah jad gaya...uske haath pair thandie pad gaye...

Jahan JAI ko dekh ke AVNI ki dono mragnayni jaisi aankhon se moti jaisey aasoo ludak gaye wahain MANOJ ke chehre pe ek kutil muskaan as gai....AVNI ne roote huye bas Jai ko pukara ' JJAAAAIIIII'..


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Ab dekhna tha ki Jai kya karega....kya AVNI ka badla pura hoga Manoj  se.....ya phir BAAP Bete dono ek ho jayenge.....dekhte hai agle update me....

Agala update aakhri hoga to  bane rahega saath me.....


Aap San ke sahyog ki aasha rahehgi..

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Superb update avani26
U r fabulous
Keep posting ??
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Update plz
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update avni dear
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Aaj shaam tak update JARUR AAYEGA doston....
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(09-04-2020, 03:18 PM)Avni26 Wrote: Aaj shaam tak update JARUR AAYEGA doston....

Avni dear...... Update?
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Sorry kisi karanvash update nahi de pai....abhi thodi der me update AAPKE samne chair hoga....
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AVNI ke aankho se aaso beh rahe the .....aur Manoj ke chehre pe ek shaitan hasi thi.....Manoj ne Jai ke chehre ko dekhte huye AVNI ki yoni me ek dhakka mara....aur ek ahh choodi apne muah se " AHHHHHHH"....AVNI is waqt SHARAM ke mare kuch bhi nahi bol pa  rahi thi par uski aaankhain bahoot kuch keh rahi thi....uski aankhain jaisey Jai se keh rahi thi ki Please mujhe iss darinde  se bachaoo......Jai ekdum se garja " PITAJIIIIII AVNI KO CHOOD DO NAHI TO MAIN WO KAR JAOINGA JO MAIN NAHI KARNA CHAHATA".....

Ye sun ke Manoj bola : Chup kar napunsak....tere bas ka kuch nahi..aisi kori kawanri maal ko bhi acche se nahi pel paya....ab main ISSEY acche se pel ke iss ki khokh se ek baccha nikalunga no TERA najayaz bhai hoga....HAHAHAHAHAHA....

Ye sun ke AVNI apna sar bistar ki chaadar me chupa leti hai niche jhuk ke....par Jai ke aankhon se ab angare baras rahe the.....usne an apna aapa kho diya tha aur usne apne haath me pakdi bandook se Manoj ke sine me ek goli utar di...' DHHHHAAAIIIIII'.....Goli lagte hi Manoj AVNI se alag hoke pehle bister pe gira peeth ke bal uske baad niche zameen pe ludak ke GIR gaya....

AVNI ko mehsus ho gaya ki Manoj ka ling uski yoni se bahar nikal gaya HAI....USEY goli ki awaj nahi aayi kyunki Jai ki bandook me silencer laga tha....jab usne sar utha ke dekha tha Manoj zameen pe pada tha khoon se laathpath...aur Jai uske samne aake khada ho gaya tha.....AVNI ne ekdum se Jai ko gale laga liya aurrone lagi....

Jai bola : Jaan...mujhe MAAF kar dena mujhe aane me thodi der ho gai....

AVNI: Nahi tum time as Gaye nahi to ye wahashi mujhe to barbaad  kar hi deta sath me KAMYA ki JINDAGI bhi BARBAD kar deta...KAMYA theek to hai na....wo uss pehlwan ke SAATH thi...

Jai : Wo THEEK hai...Ravi chacha ke SAATH hai....

Itne main Ravi kamre me aata hai aoor Manoj ko khoon me laathpath jameen pada dekhta hai....phir uski nazar Jai aur AVNI pe kati hai....AVNI ko dekhte hi wo nazar pher leta hai aoor bolta hai " JAI beta AVNI ko leke bahar aa jana main hall me wait karta HOIN "

Jai : Ji chacha ji...

Phir JaI AVNI ko kuch pehne ko kehta hai aur apni jeb se mobile nikal ke kisi ko phone lagata hai....iss waqt uski peeth AVNI aur Manoj  ki taraf hoti hai....

AVNI apni bra uthane ke liye niche jhukti hai jo iss waqt Manoj ke sar ke paas padi thi ....aur apni bra uthane huye Manoj ke kaan ke paas aake bolti hai " Aaj mera badla pura ho gaya....tujhe there kiye ki SAZA mil gai ".....Manoj me abhi JAAN baki thi aoor wo abhi bhi tadap raha tha....aur ye sunke wo AVNI ko prashanvachak nazar se dekhta hai....

AVNI uske nazar ko padh leti hai aur uske kaan ke paas halke se bolti hai " Tune mujhe pehchana nahi....pehchana bhi KAISEY....meri wajah se hi pehle Danish mara gaya....aur ab tu....iss din ka mujhe kab se intezar tha....tere paapo ki SAZA teri hi khoon se dilwa di mene....tune meri ROHINI ki JINDAGI barbaad ki thi..."

Manoj ne kisi tarah apni ukhadti saanso ok kabo me koya air poocha: Kaun hai tuuuu...

AVNI: Tu janna chahta hai main kaun HOIN....chal MARTE huye aadmi ki aakhiri iccha puri karna mera farz hai.....main AMAN hoin AVNI ke roop me ....aur ye roop sirf TERI wajah se liya mene....ab ye KAISEY hua wo TU apne bhagwan se poochna narak me Jake....

Ye sunke Manoj ko vishwas nahi hua ki ye KAISEY ho sakta hai...usey kya pata science ne kitni tarakki karli HAI....PAR ussey apna gussa nikalne ke liye AVNI ki garden ko apne haath me jakkad liya aur zor se dabane laga....uski pakad itni majboot thi ki AVNI chake bhi nahi choot pa rahi thi...uske mush se bas ahh nikal rahi thi....AVNI ne kisi tarah Jai ko pukara " JJJAAAIII"....

JAI AVNI ki awaj sunke palta aoor wo scene dekh ke gussey me usne ek goli Manoj ke sar me utar di aur AVNI ko kandhe se pakad ke apni aoor kheech liya....ab Manoj ke pran uske jism se alag ho chuke the...wo mar chuka tha aur AVNI ka badla bhi pura ho chuka tha....bas malal tha usko to bas ek ki wo ROHINI ka pata nahi kar saki...usey nahi bacha pai....

Phir AVNI ne apni bra pehnke ki sari ko apne jism se leta aoor Jai ke sath bahar hall me aa gai...wahan pe wo do aurtaiyen bhi khadi thi jinhone AVNI ko tayar kiya tha Ravi keishare pe wo AVNI aur KAMYA ko dusre kamre me le gai naye kapde badlwane ke liye....

Ravi bola : Chalo Jai ab HUME yahan se jaldi nikalne chahye...

Jai : Nahi chacha ji...mene security officer ko phone kar diya hai aur wo aayegi honge...mujhe apne BAAP ke Qtal ke liye JAIL jana hoga...mujhe surrender KARNA hoga..

Ye sunke Ravi bola :Nahi Jai TUM JAIL nahi jaoge....mene bhi kai paap kiye hai aoor UNKA prayshchit KARNA hai mujhe...isliye ye Qtal ka ilzaam main lunga....aur an TUMHE apni chachi aur Gudiya ka dhaayan rakhna hoga....ye yahhan jo bhi hua wo hamare ghar ke bahar nahi jana chahaiye nahi to hamare pariwar ki badnaami HOGI...aur phir Gudiya ke liye kisi acche ghar se rishtanahi aayega....

Jai : par chacha ji...

Itne me hi Ravi ne Jai ko rokte huye kaha : Par war kuch nahi Jai...jo meme kaha hai wo KARO....aoor abhi Kamya aur AVNI ko leke yahan se niklo....baki main SAMHAL lunga....

Uske baad Jai Ravi ke SAATH bahaas nahi kar paya aur Kamya aur AVNI ke SAATH wahan se nikal gaya....

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Uske baad Ravi ko 14 saal ki jail ho gai apne bhai ke Qtal ke ilzaam me....Jai apni chachi aur Kamya ko leke Mumbai as gaya......

Kuch dino ke baad AVNI aur Jai ki SHADI ho gai.....AVNI ne ek social NGO khola jo MAJBOOR aur besahara ladkiyon ko human trafficking aur vaishyavriti se bacha ke unhe jeene ki nai rah dekhta tha....

Jai politics chodna chahta tha par Avni ne samjhaya ki AGAR wo power me rahega to iss system ko badal PAYEGA....wo majbor air KAMJOR logo ki MADAD kar PAYEGA....ussey uske NGO ko bhi MADAD miegi....Jai ne kuch hi samay me apna accha naam bana liya tha politics me....usme usey apne BAAP ke naam ka bhi FAYDA mila tha.....

Inn San me RANDHIR ne bhi AVNI aur Jai ki MADAD ki.....


Kuch samay baad RANDHIR aur Suman ki SHADI ke baad ek ladka hua....uska naam unhone Mandhir rakha jo dono ke naam ko mila ke bana tha....

Uske kuch samay baad Doctor ki MADAD seAvni bhi pregnant huyi aur usne ek pyari si BETI ko Janam diya jiska naam unhone rakha Anshika.....AVNI ka ansh ANSHIKA.....


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To doston iss tarah ye kahani yahan khatam hoti hai......

Aap Saab ka pyar bana raha uske liye main abhari HOIN....


Please apne comments jaror dijega....ki aapko yeh kahani kasi lagi....

Ek saal pehle mene ye kahani likhni shuru ki thi jo ab Jake khatam huyi hai....aur isme AAP sabka sahyog raha hai.....


Agar aap log chahnge to mene  iska dusra bhaag bhi socha hai AVNI ki BETI pe aadharit rahega....aur uska title to mene sharekiya hi hai " AVNI ka ansh ANSHIKA"......

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Doston AAPKE comments nahi aa rahe....
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Bahot hi acha end hai
Avni26 aapke new story ka intezaat rahega hume
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(11-04-2020, 04:09 PM)Sanjay335 Wrote: Bahot hi acha end hai
Avni26 aapke new story ka intezaat rahega hume

Thanks....saath main AAPKE valueable feed back bhi dijeye...kya mujhe  uska 2nd part "AVNI ka ansh ANSHIKA "....Start karni chaiye...
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