Those 6 days at Goa

[Avenger99]

Nice start bro.

[Drubyu]

2.


“Where are we going?” Mom asked Pratap.


“Not sure.” Pratap replied while driving the scooter.


“Let’s go on a Dolphin trip then.” I suggested I was hoping we could go there.


“Good idea but I think I need to buy some gifts for my family. We’re leaving tomorrow.” Pratap replied.


“Ohhh..yes..You’re leaving tomorrow na.” Mom said in a sad voice.


I strangely felt a mixture of happiness and sadness.My heart loathed him when I saw him hitting on my mom but I also enjoyed his company. I was sure I would not have enjoyed it so much if my dad would have been there instead of him. I felt sympathy for my mom.She was right in being sad for him.He was a fun guy to hang out with.


“There’s a giant mall nearby,” Pratap said.


“Hmmm..Let’s go then..” Mom replied.


The mall was really very nice but it was typical as per Delhi’s standard. Delhi had far bigger and glamourous malls than that one.


“So what would you like to purchase?” Mom asked him while standing on the escalator.


“I’m confused actually.I want to buy a souvenir for my granddaughter.”  Pratap said.


We were standing on the escalator.Mom and Pratap were standing on the same step ,two or three steps ahead of me. They were busy talking with each other. 


My mom was crazy about shopping. My dad was just opposite to her. When mom would go to the market or to the mall, she would take great interest in many things, she would check them out even if she didn’t have the intention of buying them.I hated going shopping with mom. I didn’t have that kind of patience. I preferred to go with dad. We would go to the exact thing that we wanted to buy and within a few minutes, we would be paying for that thing and exiting the mall. 


“Granddaughter?” Mom asked Pratap while walking in the lobby.


“Yes, daughter of my daughter.” Pratap replied calmly.


“Ohh...Fine.What’s her age?” Mom asked him.


“Four” Pratap replied.


“Ok. I think a soft toy would be a perfect gift for her.” Mom suggested.


“She has a lot of it.” Pratap said.


“Ohh...Buy a cute dress for her then..” Another suggestion from mom.


“Hmmm...Let’s see.” Pratap said.


We moved to the women's clothing section.Kids wear were in the farthest corner of the hall.Mom took great interest in other clothes also.She would stop and look at the fabric , design etc when she would find something interesting. That’s why I hated going shopping with her. Though Pratap was walking beside her, I was damn sure he was being bored too.


“Did you mark one thing?” Mom asked Pratap.


“What?” He said.


“Almost all of the dresses are party dresses. Designer ones. Very few dresses can be worn in routine life. Quite expensive also.” She explained.


“Hmmmm...They keep stock as per the demand of the place. Did you like them? ” Pratap asked her.


“Yes..They are nice.” Mom replied while having a look at the black dress.


“Can I ask something? If you don't mind.” Pratap asked looking at my mom while she was checking out a checkered dress.


“What?” She said, without breaking her concentration.


“What’s your size?” Pratap asked in rather a low voice.


Honestly, I didn’t like his question.I was sure mom also didn’t like it. She stopped checking the dresses out and turned her head in his direction.


“Why do you want to know about it?” She asked.I was expecting her to scold him but she was trying to suppress a smile.


“Nothing, I was just curious.” He replied itching his head with his hand.


“Size 8 dresses fit me perfectly.” She said.


“Yes, of course but I……” Pratap stopped talking as if weighing whether to say or not.


Mom kept looking at him questioningly. Then he took a deep breath and almost hissed in her ear,


“I meant the sizes of your bra, waist and hips.” He said and then turned his gaze away from her.


He spoke in a very low voice thinking he would not be heard but I was standing a step away behind them and there was a silence in the hall. I could hear it clearly.


“I wear 34D, other sizes are 28 and 36.” She said in an equally low voice and turned her head towards the dresses again.I saw her smiling while checking the clothes out.


Finally we reached the kids section.Mom helped him choose the best dress for his grand daughter.It was a beautiful pink colored dress.He asked us to wait near the escalator as he would be joining us after paying the bills. 


Mom and I exited that hall. I found Gulliver’s travels in the book section that was on the way to the escalator.Mom purchased it for me. We  went to the escalator and stood in the lobby, waiting for uncle.He appeared after a few minutes.He had two carry bags in his hand. 


There was a famous *** outlet on the top floor of the mall. Pratap said he felt hungry and suggested we should go there for lunch before returning to the hotel. I liked his idea.I was hungry too. We went there.There were no one except us. 


“Let me give the order. You guys sit there.” Pratap pointed to a table in the corner and then went to the counter to place an order.


Mom and I sat around a small round table. Soon Pratap appeared along with his carry bags and sat on the stool in front of my mom. He was beside me. 


“Hey...What’s that?” Uncle asked me. I had put that book on the table and was turning it’s pages. I was very excited.


“Look..What I found…Gulliver’s travels.. One of my friends was praising it...” I replied to him.


“Hmmm...Gulliver’s Travels by Jonathan Swift. Is it all the four parts?” Pratap asked.


“Four parts?” I could not understand.


“Yes. It is written in four parts. The most famous is Part one, Liliput part though.” He said.


I checked the book again.It was indeed only the first part.


“Yeah...it’s Liliput only.” I replied to him.


Pratap then put one of the two carry bags on the table and then pushed it towards mom who was till then listening to our conversation.


“What’s that?” She asked.


I was curious too. It looked like there was a box inside the bag.


“Nothing.. A small gift from me. Please accept.” Pratap said.


“No...no...I can't take it.” She pushed it little towards Pratap and said.


He stared at mom for  few moments silently. He looked as if he was surprised.


“But why?” Pratap could only speak.


“You have already done too much for us.Since day one , we had fun with you guys. You never let us pay a single rupee till now. I can’t accept it.” Mom said reasonably.


“Do you consider me as your friend?” He asked my mom.


“Yes.” She replied.


“How would you feel if you buy a gift for your friend and she rejects it?” Pratap asked pushing the bag on the table towards mom, looking at her.


She didn’t reply.She stared at him for few seconds and then put her hand on the bag and said,


“Ok….Thanks” 


Uncle smiled at her.He then started typing something on his phone.Soon mom’s mobile beeped.She took her mobile out from the pocket of her jeans and looked at it. She did some typing also and uncle’s mobile beeped.They kept typing and their mobile kept buzzing for some time. 


Then mom stood up.She inserted her phone in her pocket and said,


“I'm going to the restroom.” She started moving towards the restroom.


I again looked at  the book that was on the table.Pratap uncle sat there silently for few moments. Then he dialed a number on his phone and started talking on it. He stood up from his stool while talking over the phone and moved to the glass window that was near to our table. He was talking to someone from his relatives.


I focussed again on the book.I turned its pages and saw beautiful illustrations in the book.I finished turning its pages. I was sitting there alone.There were no other people in the hall and uncle was also not there. 


I decided to go and wash my hands.There were two restrooms opposite to each other with symbols of male and female on their doors. Obviously I went to the male one and washed my hands properly. When I was exiting it, I heard a weird sound coming from the female restroom.


As there were no other people except us, I pushed its door a little curiously and I got the biggest shock of my life. Mom and Pratap uncle were standing in the middle of that restroom and kissing. They were standing near the wash basin and mom’s back was towards the giant mirror.Uncle was facing the mirrors and his back was towards the door of the restroom.


Mom’s hands were on the waist of Pratap uncle. Pratap uncle had caught mom’s face with both of his hands and his lips were smashed on the lips of my mom. Mom’s eyes were closed and Pratap was busy smooching her.


My heart sank looking at them.I felt a strange sadness in my heart.I felt I was defeated and he was victorious.I could not look at them anymore so I moved to the table with a heavy heart.

[kittepo]

wow - top update -

[luvpain]

Exciting update. Eager to know what led to the restroom scene. And what was the gift and offcourse what messages did both of them exchanged.

[arahan90]

awesome story...can we know whom we all imagining the lead role... I am imagining the arfa khanum as lead an old guy as Pratap and me being the boy...all other please answer whom we all are imagining...also big thumbs up to author...

[Ssglover]

Massive

[Drubyu]

I sat on the stool.I stared in the direction of the restroom.Soon I saw my mom exiting the restroom.Her lipstick was gone.She smiled at me when she noticed I was looking at her.She walked to the table and silently sat on her stool.


“Where’s uncle?” She asked me innocently.


As if you don’t know- I thought.A rage was building up in my mind.I hated looking at her so I avoided her. I didn’t reply to her and kept looking at the table.


“Are you alright? What happened?” Mom put her hand on my shoulder and asked.


No I was not alright.Just a few minutes ago, some creep was kissing you and I hated it.I was moodless and it is all because of you- I wanted to say but I didn’t know why I could not utter a word from my mouth. I felt too much shame in admitting that I had seen some creepy guy kissing my own mother on her lips.


“Yes. I’m alright.I’m just hungry.” I replied instead.


“Ohh...So sorry, boy. My phone call went too long. Let me bring us the food.” I heard the voice of Pratap uncle. He was standing near the table.Then he moved to the counter to bring the food.


Pratap returned with a tray of food in his hands. It was a nice combo meal with big cans of coke and french fries. Normally I would have jumped on it as I liked the food from that outlet very much but it was not normal that day. 


I had witnessed an abnormal thing for the first time in my life. I had never seen my mom doing anything sexual in my life.Even though my parents were liberal by Indian standards. Mom was fond of wearing different kinds of clothes. She was crazy about footwear and jewellery. I had seen her wearing Sarees, Salwar Kameez , jeans, tops, Tshirts, Skirt and what not. She looked pretty in any of the dresses as she had maintained her body very well. I had seen my mom and dad hugging or kissing especially when dad would go on a long trip or they were meeting after a long period. But it was not sexual. Their kisses would be quick and it never felt in that way.


I was disturbed.I was thinking about all these things while eating the Burger.I could hear mom and uncle talking with each other or mom chuckling in between it but I was so much occupied in my thoughts, I could not understand what they were talking. I heard the voice of Pratap uncle.He was talking about something. It was very irritating. 


Then suddenly an image of them came in my mind. The scene of them in the restroom started to be rewinded in my mind. How he was standing closer to my mom, how he had caught her face with his palms on her chin and fingers behind her ears.How his thumbs were caressing her cheeks and how his lips were rubbing on her lips. I tried to reason whether he was forcing her but then I remembered her hands were on Pratap’s waist and her eyes were closed. She just stood there while he kissed her lips. I remembered she was not resisting. So definitely he was not forcing upon her anything. 


I felt a strange feeling.I felt relieved that she was not being forced but the same thing made me sad that she was not being forced. I was in turmoil. I looked at mom, at her lips precisely. She was looking at Pratap and speaking something. I remembered she wore red colored lipstick but it was not on her lips now.Definitely she had washed it.Then I looked at Pratap.He was staring at her and listening to what she was saying. My eyes wandered on his lips. He had thin and dark lips. I could see a small red colored dot in the corner of his lips. It was residual of mom’s lipstick. Suddenly I felt like puking. 


I just stood up and ran to the restroom. I felt sick. I puked the food I had eaten earlier. Then I cleaned my mouth and washed my face and came back to the table.


“Hey.. are you alright?” Mom put her hand on my back and asked.


“Yes.” I said and sat on my stool.


Soon they were finished. We then exited the mall. Pratap sat on the steering of the scooter and turned the engine on. He waited for us to sit on the scooter. I hated to sit behind him so I just stood there.


“Go..” Mom looked at me expectedly and said.


I didn’t move from my place. I didn’t want to sit behind him. But then a thought came in my mind-If I didn’t, my mom would have to. So I decided to go and sit on the seat of the Activa behind Pratap. But when I was about to move, mom just walked to the scooter and sat on it with both of her legs on either side of the seat. I had no option left but to sit behind her.


She put both of her hands on Pratap’s shoulders and slid further to her front to create some space for me to sit. I went there and sat behind her.Pratap drove us to the hotel where we were staying.


As usual, Pratap uncle preferred the stairs instead of the lift.Mom and Pratap climbed the stairs together while I climbed behind them. Mom had the carry bags in her hand.


Nidhi was standing in the lobby and talking over the phone. Pratap climbed two steps at a time and went ahead of mom when he saw Nidhi standing in the lobby, near the stairs. Nidhi waved her hand while talking over the phone when she noticed us.


Door of the Nidhi’s room was open.When Pratap’s grandson saw him, he ran towards Pratap shouting Dadu...Dadu … Pratap carried him in his arms and went inside the room of Sumit and Nidhi which was just next to Pratap’s room. 


Mom and I entered our room.Mom threw bags on the bed and sat on the couch.I also sat on the couch beside her.


“Wanna drink?” Mom took the water bottle in her hand and offered it to me.


“No.I’m not thirsty.” I replied and took Guliver’s travels in my hands. I was planning to read it completely in one  go.


Mom drank the water from the bottle and then slid on the couch and sat very close to me.She put her hand around my shoulder and said,


“Listen..Don’t spoil your mood. I know you want to go on a Dolphin trip. We’ll go in the evening when your dad comes.” 


Poor mom.I was moodless because of some other reason and she thought it was because of those damn Dolphins.It made me chuckle.


“Hmmm…” Mom tightened the embrace and pulled my nose with her other hand.She was giggling too.


Then she stood up and turned the TV on.She played some songs on it.I lay on the couch with my head on the armrest and that book about Liliput in my hands. Mom sat on the bed. 


I started reading the book.After a few minutes, there was the sound of her mobile beeping.I looked at her from the corner of my eyes. She took her phone out and read it.She smiled and typed on it.Then again there was a message from someone and again she typed. 


“Loser..” I just cursed him and then concentrated on the book.


I felt dizzy while reading the book and soon I descended  into sleep. I didn't  know how much time I had slept but I woke up to the sound of ringtone of my mom’s mobile.It was fucking irritating.


“MOM….Answer the call.” I shouted, hoping that cacophony would be silenced somehow but it kept ringing.


“MOM…” I shouted again and opened my eyes. 


I found the mobile on her bed but she was not there. Irritatingly I stood up and went to the phone. Screen was showing the name - Hubby.


It was dad’s call. So I answered the call and said in a lazy voice,
“Yeah...dad.” 


“Where are you guys?” He said with irritation in his voice.


“I was sleeping and mom’s in the washroom.” I told him yawningly.


“Ok. Tell her to call back when she exits.” Dad said.


“Ok..Dad.” I said and cut the call.


I threw the phone on the bed and went to the door of the washroom to tell my mom that dad had called. But to my surprise, the door of the washroom was open and on one was inside it.I wondered where she would be gone.


I exited the room and went to the door of Nidhi’s room.I turned the doorknob and tried to open it but it was locked.Then I moved to the door of Pratap’s room and pushed the door ajar. I peeped into it and found my mom there.

[Henry]

Excellent & hot erotica...

[doonknightz]

u t just an amazing writer......so good.......loving it
plz explain side by side POV from SHWETA(mom).....what is exactly happened or happening b/w mom & pratap.....that will be more convenient to understand how they become so close....atlest their conversation
plz that is a request....rest up to u......whatever u decide.....
keep going
keep writing

[Man4u90036]

So good man.. 

Super writing.. Update soon ..

[arahan90]

pleaee everybody tell who all u are imagining the main lead

[Penetration]

Very hot update. Loved your writing skills

[arahan90]

bhut hi sexy story hai bhai...ia tarah ki stories bhut pasand hain... where a loyal wife is ready to involve in an illegal affair with another man exhibiting her inner sultism

[Blue]

Greatt narration!!? Amazing !!!

[Logan]

Very nice narrating, waiting for next update...

[fasterboy]

it's great to read u again. this story great. I found very similar to last completed one. Same kid's pov which gave me same sadistic feeling instead of to feel eroticism like lastone and felt fear to read forward. Same husband works very long hours. Wife's feels neglects. Boys always witness his mother's adulterous action but never confront his mother nor tell to his father. Father till the last stays as clueless. Like previous one boy's mother never get seduced instead she was attracted to her lover from day one when they met.

I were hoping to find some drama tensions between husband-wife regarding wife's affair but again hubby loose his chance while his wife already fucking old fart in his hotel room.

They will keep their fling in delhi too but husband always clueless.

You declaimed in staring based on true events. Is there some crime involved due to love triangle and reported to security officer ? Just curious.

[fasterboy]

Another thing I found you are writing update very frequently than previously. I hope you will keep this pattern till the end and will not hang us very long to read climax.

Again kudos to your skill.

[Man4u90036]

it's great to read u again. this story great. I found very similar to last completed one. Same kid's pov which gave me same sadistic feeling instead of to feel eroticism  like lastone and felt fear to read forward. Same husband works very long hours. Wife's feels neglects. Boys always witness his mother's adulterous action but never confront his mother nor tell to his father. Father till the last stays as clueless. Like previous one boy's mother never get seduced instead she was attracted to her lover from day one when they met.

I were hoping to find some drama tensions between husband-wife regarding wife's affair but again hubby loose his chance while his wife already fucking old fart in his hotel room.

They will keep their fling in delhi too but husband always clueless.

You declaimed in staring based on true events. Is there some crime involved due to love triangle and reported to security officer ? Just curious.

Exactly... Same plot... Boy knows about his mom's every escapade but still keeps silent getting frustrated himself but don't express.... She gave all the info in the first meet itself that she disappoint with husband.... And family. What else one needed..
May be if it ends whatever happening in goa there itself in 6 days like the title.. It would be interesting... With some twists and really like a real life happening..

But drubyu put lot of effort in completing his previous long story.. Where many others stop it in middle, which is very disappointing..
Thanks drubyu.. For writing again..

[[email protected]]

it's great to read u again. this story great. I found very similar to last completed one. Same kid's pov which gave me same sadistic feeling instead of to feel eroticism  like lastone and felt fear to read forward. Same husband works very long hours. Wife's feels neglects. Boys always witness his mother's adulterous action but never confront his mother nor tell to his father. Father till the last stays as clueless. Like previous one boy's mother never get seduced instead she was attracted to her lover from day one when they met.

I were hoping to find some drama tensions between husband-wife regarding wife's affair but again hubby loose his chance while his wife already fucking old fart in his hotel room.

They will keep their fling in delhi too but husband always clueless.

You declaimed in staring based on true events. Is there some crime involved due to love triangle and reported to security officer ? Just curious.

Can you provide link of the other similar story?

[[email protected]]

Exactly... Same plot... Boy knows about his mom's every escapade but still keeps silent getting frustrated himself but don't express.... She gave all the info in the first meet itself that she disappoint with husband.... And family. What else one needed..
May be if it ends whatever happening in goa there itself in 6 days like the title.. It would be interesting... With some twists and really like a real life happening..

But drubyu put lot of effort in completing his previous long story.. Where many others stop it in middle, which is very disappointing..
Thanks drubyu.. For writing again..

Link to the other story?