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Vineeta ek jhooti shaadi me jakdi mahila/ A SEXY POOJA
15.53%
93 15.53%
Garima ek happily married housewife jo seductive mahol me behek gai/ A HOUSEWIFE SEDUCTION
18.53%
111 18.53%
Shabana ek zaheen housewife jiska shareer jitna akarshak tha bhagya utna hi kharab/ TRAPPED
34.06%
204 34.06%
Neha the bold stylish girl with full of fantasies/ FANTASY
10.85%
65 10.85%
Neetu ek sawli bengali girl jiski jald shaadi hone wali hai par ek khatre ke sath/KAMASUTRA LOVE
6.01%
36 6.01%
Aarti ek gareeb ghar ki behad sundar ladki jo aane wale khatre se hai anjaan/DEMONS LOVE
5.68%
34 5.68%
Shobha the bride and centre part of this story jiski suhaagraat uska sapna hai/FIRST NIGHT CONFESSION
9.35%
56 9.35%
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A wedding ceremony in village
wow logan....... simply great... please continue with the updates...... waiting anxiously
Val Namaskar
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इस हॉट अपडेट को पोस्ट करने के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद।
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बढिया कहानी है । आगे क्याा हुआ ।
‘LIVE LIFE CHAMPA STYLE
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gret dear
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Logan555 

Waah bahut Khub Abhi Tak Ki Kahani Bahut badiya Lagi 

Appke Likhane Ki Style Bahut Pasand Aayi Bahut Badiya Likhte Hai Aap

So Far So Erotic So Narrative and i like narration rather than main plot of story 

Anyways Thanks For Sharing and definitely  i will going to learn so many things from your story

Regards

Sudha
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When will next update come? Abb to kuch readers bhi aa gaye hai...Please post next update ASAP.
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(12-02-2019, 05:18 PM)Unknown Wrote: I am commenting because I like this story a lot.

And talking about other readers...They will join gradually as story keeps going ahead...Just give update regularly...Readers will also join.

For readers joining story, story must have quality...And quality of your story is good...Kewp posting...Lots of reader will join you.

Thanks bro definetly ur comments giving me so boostup that a reader stay with my story continously and regularly giving me feedbacks and it means a lot.
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(20-12-2018, 11:41 PM)How to upload pics Logan555 Wrote: [Image: df571b18d9ce3be7ac10cb628b30da6f.jpg]
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(11-02-2019, 09:14 PM)Amitraj39 Wrote: Awesome story, itni aachi story mujhe kaise nahi mili xossip pe

Pata nahi bro maine to kareeb 6 mahine xossip par is story ko diya tha 178 tak pahuch bhi chuka tha kafi readers bhi jud chuke the shayad aapne dhyan na diya ho. Anyways now thanks for appreciation.
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(13-02-2019, 10:52 AM)val.coutinho Wrote: wow logan....... simply great... please continue with the updates...... waiting anxiously

Thanks for ur appreciation and joining with my story.
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START OF DAY 5


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Subha suraj ki pehli kiran ke sath vineeta aur lakhan ki aankhe khul gai. Kal ki thakawat bhari yatra ke baad aaj is nai jagah nae mahaul me ek nae rishte ( pati patni ) ke roop me ye unka pehla din tha. Halaki ye bus ek sanketik rishta tha par rishta to rishta tha jise jhutlaya nahi ja sakta tha aur bahri duniya se puri tarah kate vineeta lakha ke liye ye rishta hi agle kuch din unke jeewan ki ekmatra sachhai tha. Kuch hi der baad lakhan ke phone par wo phone aa gaya jiska unhe intezaar tha Aghori ka. Aghori ne unhe bataya ki Sun Mars aur Mercury ke baad bari hai ab bari hai agle grah ki aur aaj unhe ek nahi do graho ki puja karni hai wo bhi ek sath.

Jupiter

Jise hum Brihaspati bhi kehte hai aur greek mythology me ise hum Zeus ke naam se jante hai. Jo bijli aur akash ka devta hai.

Aur

Saturn

Graho me sabse sundar sabse ugra jise hum Shani kehte hai aur greece me ise Cronus naam se jante hai. Jo faslo aur hariyali ka devta hai.

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In dono ke pujan ke sath hone ka ek vishesh karan hai kyuki dono ka itihaas kafi kuch ek jaisa hai aur ho bhi kyu na dono pita putra jo hai. Zeus Cronus ki hi santan hai. Cronus ke pita the Uranus jinka teeno loko par kabza tha jo behad atyachari aur kroor the par apne putra se bahut prem karte the. Cronus ne apne pita ki kroorta ke khilaf aawaz uthai aur pita ka vadh karke unke kroor shasan ka ant kara par apne hi bete ke vishwasghat se gussa hokar marte marte Uranus ne use shrap diya ki jis tarah usne apne pita jiski jaan uske ling me thi ke andkosh kaatkar uska vadh kara waise hi uski santan uska vadh karegi tab use is takleef ka ehsaas hoga.

Cronus ke man me apne pita ke ye shabd andar tak baith gae aur jab bhi uski patni Giya bachhe ko janm deti wo usse wo bachha chhin kar sabut nigal jata. Aisa karte hue wo apne 5 bachho Hera Hades Posiedon Demetar Chiron ko nigal chuka tha jab chhata beta Zeus paida hua to Giya ne apne bete ko bachane ke liye apne ek paltu bail ki peeth me bandhkar use bhaga diya aur ek pathar ko kapde me lapet kar Cronus ko de diya. Cronus use hi apna beta samajh kar nigal gaya. Zeus varaho tak us bail ke sarakshan me ek gufa me chhupa raha aur jab bada hua aur apne pita se ladne me saksham ho gaya tab usne apne hi pita ke Hasiye se apne pita ka pet phad kar uska ant kara aur bhaiyo ko azad kara.

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Ek jaisa ateet hone ke karan aur pita putra hone ke karan aapko inki puja ek sath karni hai pehle aapko pita yani Shani ( Saturn ) urf Cronus ki puja karni hai uske baad Brihaspati ( Jupiter ) urf Zeus ki puja karni hai. Pehle Shani ki sadhna ki vidhi sun le. Apke shayan kaksha me kuch bakse rakhe hai jinme har din ke pujan ke hisab se samagri rakhi hai pratham bakse me aaj ke din ki samagri hai.

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1- Cronus ka astra hasiya hai isliye unki sadhna ka arambh hasiye ki puja se hoga jo aapko bakse se mil jaega.
2- Shani ka wahan kauaa hai isliye aap dono ko bhojan banakar ghar ke bahar kauwo ko bhog lagana hai.
3- Cronus ne apne pita Uranus ke andkosh yani Urinary Balls kaatkar unka vadh kara tha aur unke ling se nikle veerya ko apne shareer par malkar unki shari shaki apne andar le li thi. Yaha patni hone ke nate vineeta ko ye kaam karna hai. Lakhan ko ek dibbi me apna veerya nikalkar vineeta ko dena hai aur vineeta ko bathroom me jakar use apne shareer par malna hoga. Ye sun vineeta sharm se pani pani ho gai.
4- Shani ko tel chadaya jata hai isliye aap dono ko bhi aaj din me aur raat me sone se pehle apne shareer par tel chupadna hoga. Din me tel se snan ke baad aap pani se bhi snan kar sakte par raat apko tel chupad kar hi sona hai. Jinki sheeshi bakse me hai din aur raat ki alag alag.
5- Shani anaj aur hariyali ke devta hai isliye unhe khush karne ke liye apko aaj pura din ek vishesh tarah ki poshak pehenni hogi. Patto se bani hari bhari poshak aaj pura din apko usi me bitana hoga jo bakse me mil jaegi.

Ye hai Shani sadhna ki 5 vidhiya ab baat karte hai Brihaspati sadhna ki.

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1- Zeus ne kai saal jungle me viprit paristhitiyo me junglee falo ke sahare guzare aapko bhi shani sadhna ke baad pura din aur puri raat jungle me guzarna hai khule akash ke neeche junglee falo lakdiyo ko jalakar ek doosre ke sahare.
2- Zeus ko kai saal ek bail ne pala isliye bail unhe bahut priya hai jugle me apko ek bail dhoondna hai jo ek chattan me bandha hoga apko use azad karna use bhojan karana hai.
3- Zeus ne apne pita ka pet phad kar apne bhai behno ko azad karaya apko us chattan ko pet manna hai aur us chattan ke paas hi rakhe ek hathode se us chattan ko khand khand karna aur us chattan ke andar maujood 5 gend ko mukt karke unhe paas hi beh rahi nadi me pravahit karna hai.
4- Raat me apko nadi me nagna hokar snan karke Brihaspati mantra Om Brihaspatiyay Namah ka jaap karna hai wo bhi 1000 baar aur wo bhi vineeta ko lakhan ki god me baithkar jisme vineeta ka chehra lakhan ki or hoga. God me baithne ki baat sun vineeta ko giosbumbps hone lage.
5- Iske baad panchwa charan hai Alinganbadh Nidra apne jism par tel chupad kar apko sari raat khule akash ke neeche guzarni hai wo bhi ek doosre ko alingan me bhar kar taki is thandi raat me apdono ko ek doosre ke shareer se garmi bhi mil sake aur raat bhi paar ho jae. Ye akhri baat sun to vineeta aur lakhan ke pairo tale zameen hi nikal gai par wo kar bhi kya sakte ye sab to karna hi tha.

Unhone shani puja ki vidhi ke anuroop bakse se hasiya nikala uska pujan karke pehli vidhi puri ki. Uske baad vineeta ne thoda khana banaya aur lakhan ke sath bahar jakar kauwo ko bhojan karaya. Ye do charan to asan the par teesra charan lakhan vineeta dono ke liye sharmindagi bhara par karna to tha hi. Lakha ne bakse se apne vastra ka packet nikala jo unhe aaj pehenna tha aur tel ki sheeshi aur ek chhooti dibbi lekar bathroom chale gae. Vineeta janti thi wo bathroom me kya karnege wo soch rahi thi ki kya muth maar kar apna veerya nikalte waqt wo uske baare me sochenge jise sochkar kahi na kahi romanchit bhi ho rahi thi aur sharminda bhi. Aur uska sochna kahi na kahi sach bhi tha lakhan ne andar muth maarna shuru kar diya tha shuru me to wo muth maarte waqt apni divangat patni ke bare me hi soch rahe the par achanak se na chahte hue bhi unke saamne unki patni ki jagah vineeta ka chehra ghoomne laga. Shayad muth maarte samay unka khud par kaboo na raha Vineeta ke madak jism aur patni ke roop me use expect kar unke hath apne lund par tez tez chalne lage aur kuch hi pal me lund ne apna prasad bahar ugalna shuri kar diya.

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Lakhan ne apna pura veerya us dibbi me bhar diya kai saalo baad aaj jhadne ki wajah se unka veerya bahut sara aur bahut gaada tha. Lakhan ko khud par gussa bhi aa raha tha ki unke pariwar ke liye itna kuch karne wali us bhali mahila ke baare me wo aisa kaise soch sakte hai par soch par koi kaboo nahi kar sakta. Uske baad lakhan ne apne jism par tel chupad kar tel se snan kara aur phir pani se khud ko achhi tarah saaf kar wo packet khol kar dekha. Usme patto se bana ek gherdaar dress tha jise kewal kamar par lapet kar apne ling ko hi dhaka ja sakta hai. Andar pehne ke liye koi chaddi bhi nahi tha isliye neeche se ati hawa se lund khula khula sa ehsaas de raha tha. Wo to achha tha ki lund ke aate ke patte ghane aur mote the warna shayad unhe bhed kar bahar aa jata. Upar lakhan ka seena puri tarah khula tha. In kapdo me lakhan ko bahar vineeta ke saamne jate bada ajeeb lag raha tha par aur koi option bhi nahi tha. Lakhan apne veerya se bhari dibbi wahi chhod bathroom se bahar aa gaya.

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Bahar lakhan ko us poshak me dekh vineeta ki saas halak me atak gai is umar me bhi lakhan ka jism kafi kasrati tha. Sath hi vineeta ye bhi soch rahi thi ki jab unke kapde aise hai to uske kaise honge. Lakhan ne bade jhepte hue sharmindagi ke sath vineeta ko dibbi ke bare me bata diya. Vineeta apna packet lekar bathroom me aa gai. Bathroom me saamne hi ek dibbi rakhi thi jisme safed safed kuch bhara tha ye saaf tha usme kya tha. Vineeta ne apne kapde utar kar us dibbi ko uthaya uske hath kaap rahe the. Aaj tak jo purush ke sampark se anjaan rahi aaj wo apne saheli ke sasur ka veerya apne shareer par malne wali thi. Purush ke veerya se uska pratham sampark tha. Vineeta ne wo dibbi kholi usme bhara veerya kafi gaada tha usne neha se suna tha ki jis purush me mardangi aur sex power charam par hoti hai uska veerya utna hi jada gaada hota hai aur umar ke sath sath veerya patla hota jata hai. Use ashcharya tha ki is umar me lakhan jee ka veerya itna gaada hai. Pehle to uske man me aya ki veerya ko nali me baha de aur bahar jakar keh de ki usne veerya mal liya tha par phir use khayal aya ki kahi uski ek galti se puja adhoori na reh jae aur shobha par koi musibat na aae waise bhi yaha koi hai nahi to wo ye kar sakti hai.

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Vineeta ne himmat karke us dibbi me ungli daal kar thoda veerya bahar nikala aur use apne pairo pe malne lagi. Pairo ke baad hath phir pet phir apne stano par malne lagi. Stano par veerya ka sampark uske andar ki dagi vasna ki aag ko bhadka raha tha. Uski aankhe band ho gai aur pata nahi kab uske veerya se bhari ungaliya uske chehre tak pahuch gai. Apni ungaliyo ko naak ke paas le jakar wo us purush veerya ki madak sugandh ko apne mehsoos kar rahi thi. Pehli baar use is madak sugandh ka ehsaas hua tha. Ye madak sugandh use deewana bana rahi thi aur use behek jane ko majboor kar rahi thi. Vineeta ki ungaliya apne chehre par chalne lagi chehre ko malte malte vineeta ko pata hi nahi chala ki kab uski ungaliya uske hontho tak pahuch gai aur hontho par veerya malte malte kab uske honth khul gae aur wo ungaliya uske hontho ke andar dakhil ho gai. Shayad ye uski uttejna thi jo barso se dabi thi aur aaj zara sa mauka milne par behek gai thi aur usse ye sab karwa rahi thi. Pehli baar vineeta ko veerya ka swad mila tha neha se usne bahut baar suna tha ki wo apne boyfriends ka lund choosti hai aur veerya ka taste use madhosh kar deta hai par usne khud pehli baar is madhoshi ko anubhav kara tha kyuki uske to apne pati ne hi suhaagraat me uska tiraskaar kar diya tha. Dibbi me bus thoda hi veerya bacha tha aur bus ek jagah baki thi vineeta ki chut. Apne is kadar vasna me doob chuki thi ki bina khud ko shant kare wo ab peeche nahi hat sakti thi. Apne ek hath ki ungaliyo ko chooste hue uske doosre hath ki ungliya us bache hue veerya ko samet kar uski chut tak pahuch gai aur lakhan singh ke veerya ko apni chut par malne lagi aur chut par bahar se malte malte vineeta ki ungaliya uski chut ke andar dakhil ho gai. Lakhan ne uttejt hokar vineeta ke baare me hi soch kar apna veerya nikaka tha aur ab sayog dekhiye vineeta bhi lakhan ke bare me hi soch kar unke veerya ko apni chut ke andar mal rahi thi. Bina sambhog kiye hi lakhan ne jiski chut ke naam se veerya nikala wo apni mazil tak paguch gaya. Vineeta ki aankho ke saamne lakhan singh ka mardana jism hi ghoom raha apni ungaliyo ko chooste hue use ye hi ehsaas ho raha tha jaise wo lakhan singh ka lund choos rahi ho aur chut ke andar uski ungliya tez tez chal rahi jaise lakhan singh khud use chod rahe ho. Kuch hi mintute me vineeta ki uttejna shant ho gai muh aur chut dono jagah maujood uski ungaliya dheeli pad gai. Aisa nahi tha ye vineeta ka pehla orgasm tha apni pati ka tiraskar jhelti vineeta ne pehle bhi is tarah apni uttejna ko shant kara tha par tab uske saamne koi chehr nahi tha jise imagine karke wo khud shant karle par aaj uski band aankho ko ek chehra mil gaya tha aaj wo jitna jhadi itna pehle kabhi na jhadi.

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Par wo kehte hai na insaan gusse aur uttejna me jo kaam kar jata hai uska ehsaas use tab hota hai jab uska gussa ya uski uttejna shant hoti hai uski bhavnae sanyat hoti hai. Lakhan singh ne vineete ke naam par apna veerya nikala tha par jhadne ke baad use apni galti ka ehsaas hua aur kuch aisi hi halat vineeta ki thi. Use yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki uttejna me kya kuch kar gai jis veerya ko chhune me bhi uske hath kaamp rahe the us veerya ko apne hontho ke andar liya use chakh kar dekha apne se umar me itne bade apni baap ki umar ki aadmi ka veerya ungliyo me bhar kar apni chut ke andar mala apni saheli ke sasur se chudne ke baare me sochkar apni uttejna ko thanda kara ye soch soch kar use khud par ghin aa rahi thi. Beshak use uske pati se pyar na mila par sirf sex ki ichha me wo is had kaise gir sakti hai use khud par kaboo rakhna hoga aur ye dhyan rakhna hoga ki wo yaha sirf lakhan singh ki sanketik patni ban kar aai hai sirf puja karne unse chudne nahi. Wo yaha puja par aai hai honeymoon par nahi. Use khud par bahut gussa aa raha tha. Usne pehle to thook thook kar lakhan singh ke veerya ke ehsaas ko apne muh se door karne ki koshish ki phir apne jism par tel chupad kar use veerya ko hatane ki koshish ki phir pani se achhe se naha dho kar veerya ka katra katra apne shareer se hatakar wo packet khol kar dekha.

Dress dekhkar to uske rongte khade ho gae wo ek behad bold behad hot patto se bani dress thi jisme uski nabhi puri tarah khuli thi aur wo dress bamushkil uske nitambo se kuch neeche hi thi isliye uski uski puri jaangho ka nanga rehna nishchit tha. Vineeta ne jab wo dress pehni to uske ubhar kafi khule the is dress me vineeta is kadar uttejak lag rahi thi ki shayad agar uska pati bhi use dekh leta to shayad sab kuch bhool kar uske sath abhi suhaagdin mana leta. Vineeta ko bahar aate bahut sharm aa rahi thi par himmat karke wo bahar aa gai.

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Jab lakhan singh ki nazar vineeta par padi to unki khuli ki khuli reh gai. Na chahte hue bhi unka lund jhatke khane par majboor ho gaya. Lakhan singh ki kamar par bandhe patto ki sarsarahat se vineeta pata chal gaya tha ki achanak se ye patte kyu hilne lage usne sharm se apni nazre jhuka li is tarah adhnangi halat me unke saamne khade hona use bada ajeeb lag raha tha. Lakhan singh bhi apne ling ki is harkat par jhep gae aur vineeta ki taraf peeth karli taki unka dhyan vineeta se hat jae.

Shani puja ki sari vidhiya poorna karke wo unhi kapdo me adhnangi halat Brihaspati puja ki vidhiya poorna karne ke liye nikal pade jo unhe ab saari raat khule akash ke neeche bita kar poori karni thi aur jiske liye sabse pehle us jagah ko khojna tha jaha ek bail bandha ho kyuki wahi wo sthan tha jaha unhe sari raat guzarni thi. Unhe jungle me bhatakte kafi samay ho gaya par bail ka kahi ata pata nahi tha. Bhook bhi kafi lagi thi raste me kuch fal ke ped mile jinhe kha kar unhone apni bhook shant aur raat ke liye bhi kuch fal sath bandh liye. Vineeta ko aghori ki baat yaad aai ki usne kaha tha ki raat me Brihaspati mantra ke jaap se pehle paas behti nadi me snan kar lena matlab us sthan ke paas ek nadi hai. Jungle me ek bail dhoondna mushkil par nadi dhoondna nahi. Nadi se aati thandi hawao ki disha me chalte hue wo nadi tak pahuch gae aur phir nadi ke kinare chalte chalte wo us jagah pahuch gae jaha ek chattan se ek bail bandha tha. Waha pahuch kar unhone bail ka bandhan khol kar use mukt karaya uski puja ki bail ke liye laya gaya bhojan aur fal khilae aur bail ko jungle me chhod diya. Jald hi bail unki aankho se ojhal ho gaya uske baad lakhan ne us chattan ke paas rakha hathoda uthaya aur us chattan par prahar karna shuru kar diya. Chattan todte todte lakhan singh paseena paseena ho gaya. Lakhan ke gatheele badan se behkar ata paseena bahut akarshak lag raha tha vineeta baithe baithe lakhan ko prahar karte dekh rahi thi aur soch rahi thi ki is umar me inke andar itna stamina hai ki bina ruke ye hathoda chalae ja rahe to jawani me to keher dhate honge. Kuch ghanto ki jee tod mehnat ke baad lakhan ne us chattan ko do tukdo me tod diya. Us chattan me paanch alag alag rango ki tambe ki paanch gend thi jo Zeus ke bhai behno ka prateek thi. Un paanc gendo ki puja karke vineeta ne unhe paas behti nadi me visarjit kar diya. Hathoda chala chala kar lakhan singh kafi thak chuke the aur vineeta bhi itni der chal kar thak gai thi isliye wo dono wahi ek ped ki chhav me kuch der ke liye so gae. Brihaspati puja ke do charan unhone pure kar liye the ab unhe shesh teen charan Nagna snan Mantra jaap aur Alinganbadh hokar raat katni thi.

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(14-02-2019, 12:18 PM)Sudha StoryTeller Wrote: Logan555 

Waah bahut Khub Abhi Tak Ki Kahani Bahut badiya Lagi 

Appke Likhane Ki Style Bahut Pasand Aayi Bahut Badiya Likhte Hai Aap

So Far So Erotic So Narrative and i like narration rather than main plot of story 

Anyways Thanks For Sharing and definitely  i will going to learn so many things from your story

Regards

Sudha

Thanks a lot madam for liking my story so far and very very thanks for us appreciation towards my writing skills.

Waise yahi story maine pehle xosssip par likhi thi aur waha story day 5 ke last update tak likhi ja chuki thi par xossip band ho jane ki wajah se wo story waha adhuri reh gai.

Waha story ko proper dialoge ke sath likha tha har sex scene ko kafi detailing ke sath par story band ho jane ki wajah se purani likhi ja chuki story tak jald se jald pahuchne ke liye kafi short karke likh raha. Par aapko ye style bhi pasand aa raha iske liye shukriya.

Aur meri story se apko kuch seekhne ko mila ye to mere liye bahut badi baat hai aise hi is story se jude rahe aur apne feedback dete rahe.
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I was very interested for this story and waiting for updates of this story. How the plot and expression will move on. Thanks for updates... And specially for Vinita and Lakhan and Neetu and agori.... Keep on.....
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Very nice bro.

Very erotic...Abb dono aur bhi khulte jaa rahe hai...Pata nahi iss pooja ki ant tak kya kya ho jaayega.

Now waiting for remaining portion of days.

Story is going nice...Readers are also joining...Give updates quickly so that more reader will join and interest and excitement for story wont fade away.

Keep going bro.
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Waiting next
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Waiting bro.
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