06-04-2020, 08:18 PM
bahut bahut hot aur kamuk update,Sambhaalna mushkil hogaya bhai.
Kamaal hai kamaal.
Shaandaar, lajawaab, jhakaas update hai.
Kamaal hai kamaal.
Shaandaar, lajawaab, jhakaas update hai.
Adultery Lock down aur Tabbasum
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06-04-2020, 08:18 PM
bahut bahut hot aur kamuk update,Sambhaalna mushkil hogaya bhai.
Kamaal hai kamaal. Shaandaar, lajawaab, jhakaas update hai.
06-04-2020, 08:22 PM
Shaandaar,garam,jabardast,
Lajawaaab,dhasu Gajab Faaaduuu Jhakaaaaaaaasssss update
06-04-2020, 09:00 PM
Bahut khub hai bhai.lajawab aur behad h garam update, bahut Maja agaya.
06-04-2020, 09:17 PM
(06-04-2020, 07:26 PM)Introvert Wrote: The stories of the great writers like The evil, Rajkumar,Ajaykumar, sheanshean are the most favorite and read stories of any forum because they use their female characters in a very innocent way so that the male members of the family can't suspect them and at the same time the female members continue their illicit affairs secretly. For this reason their stories are so popular. There is no need to lengthen the story unnecessarily by adding more male characters. And how many of those stories have been fully completed? IT IS Lion bros story and like I said he can do whatever he wants. But you dont seem to take your own advice and are vehemently proposing for this one male fuck buddy scenario and opposing anyone whose asking for something different. I didn’t go around objecting to your viewpoints. I just stated mine. Its not my fault you want to shag off to the same story told the same way with different characters for the 98th time. I don't. I read stories like those before. This story has the potential to be different and unique. But the writer is smarter and more creative than the both of us combined. So its better he decides where the story's gonna go and I'll as I'm doing now, would request him to include what I think could be kinkier or would like to see included in the story just as you would in your comments.
06-04-2020, 09:25 PM
Bro like I said I cant even speak hindi and understand it okay ishly enough . But your narration, the dialogue, the scenes...GOD!! IT IS EROTIC AS FUCK!! I can't believe at the breakneck pace at which Tabassums moral compass is degrading and turning her into a slut for Shankar. I'm eagerly waiting what more kinky stuff Shankar is gonna make this pakeezah girl do. The breastfeeding chai scene was out of this world. Could something more dirtier be done to her? Cant wait man!!
06-04-2020, 09:46 PM
good going....keep it up...plz more breastfeeding..
06-04-2020, 10:04 PM
(06-04-2020, 09:25 PM)Wtf99 Wrote: Bro like I said I cant even speak hindi and understand it okay ishly enough . But your narration, the dialogue, the scenes...GOD!! IT IS EROTIC AS FUCK!! I can't believe at the breakneck pace at which Tabassums moral compass is degrading and turning her into a slut for Shankar. I'm eagerly waiting what more kinky stuff Shankar is gonna make this pakeezah girl do. The breastfeeding chai scene was out of this world. Could something more dirtier be done to her? Cant wait man!! Thanx bro mai ho diouloge dilivery karta ho woh jo mai khud aisa sochta hi ki agar koi aisa moka mile jiske liye Tabbasum jaise ladies ko pana mushkil ho aur woh sach mai use mile to kiya khani ho sakti hai bus yahi likh deta ho
06-04-2020, 10:05 PM
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06-04-2020, 10:09 PM
(06-04-2020, 08:14 PM)Juggernaut Wrote: OMG!OMG!OMG! Pheeeeewwwww Thanxx bro bus ap log aise hi himmat dete rahe to mai aur bhi Accha ek real mode par likhta rahonga jaha ap ko fantasy se zyada real sab lage
06-04-2020, 10:16 PM
06-04-2020, 10:18 PM
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06-04-2020, 10:20 PM
krpaya ise angrejee mein anuvaad karen
somebody please translate this into english i dont understand hindi words
06-04-2020, 10:23 PM
(06-04-2020, 07:14 PM)Rumana Wrote: Are baap re baap Jab mere us side par kahani bloked hue to apne is side ke bare mai bataya par is side par mai all redy ek kahani likh raha tha nazbeen ki bhadkati jawani par is liye yaha maine chhoda kyoki cmmt nahi Aa rahe the par ye side bhool gaya Thanxx ye khani mai aage bada paya is side se aur bhi kuch acche idea se kahani ise puri kane ke bad shuru karonga
06-04-2020, 10:24 PM
06-04-2020, 10:25 PM
Bohot hi erotic & hot update hae lion bhai...
06-04-2020, 10:28 PM
(06-04-2020, 07:26 PM)Introvert Wrote: The stories of the great writers like The evil, Rajkumar,Ajaykumar, sheanshean are the most favorite and read stories of any forum because they use their female characters in a very innocent way so that the male members of the family can't suspect them and at the same time the female members continue their illicit affairs secretly. For this reason their stories are so popular. There is no need to lengthen the story unnecessarily by adding more male characters. Mere fav writer bhi yahi hai jinki story pad kar mai aaj likh pata ho inhi acche writer ki wazah se nazbeen bahak gayi, intzar, iram aur bhi kuch story likhi mai bus yahi chahata tha ki jitna real base bana sako banao aur mujhe English acche se padna nahi aati par jo bhi apne kaha hai sahi kaha.... Par yaha mai apne deemag se story badaonga..... Aur jaisa chal rahi hai waise chalata jaonga.... Ha kuch idea hai jo likhonga aur kuch aisa likhonga jise pad kar maza aaye
06-04-2020, 10:30 PM
Abhi bhi side slow hai par Phir bhi jitna ho sake mai reply dene ki koshish kar raha ho... Ap ka ye prem ki wazah se mai Accha likhta rahonga sab ko ek bar Phir se Thanxx Aur jis frds ka mai reply nahi de paya to sorry kiya karo jab time milta hai to story likna shuru kar deta ho....
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