[Drunker]

bahut bahut hot aur kamuk update,Sambhaalna mushkil hogaya bhai.
Kamaal hai kamaal.
Shaandaar, lajawaab, jhakaas update hai.

[Kartik69]

Shaandaar,garam,jabardast,
Lajawaaab,dhasu
Gajab
Faaaduuu
Jhakaaaaaaaasssss update

[hotboy007]

Bahut khub hai bhai.lajawab aur behad h garam update, bahut Maja agaya.

[Wtf99]

The stories of the great writers like The evil, Rajkumar,Ajaykumar, sheanshean are the most favorite and read stories of any forum because they use  their female characters in a very innocent way so that the male members of the family can't suspect them and at the same time the female members continue their illicit affairs secretly. For this reason their stories are so popular. There is no need to lengthen the story unnecessarily by adding more male characters.
After all it is the lion brother's story.So he will decide what will have to do.

And how many of those stories have been fully completed?  IT IS Lion bros story and like I said he can do whatever he wants. But you dont seem to take your own advice and are vehemently proposing for this one male fuck buddy scenario and opposing anyone whose asking for something different. I didn’t go around objecting to your viewpoints. I just stated mine. Its not my fault you want to shag off to the same story told the same way with different characters for the 98th time. I don't. I read stories like those before. This story has the potential to be different and unique. But the writer is smarter and more creative than the both of us combined. So its better he decides where the story's gonna go and I'll as I'm doing now, would request him to include what I think could be kinkier or would like to see included in the story  just as you would in your comments.

[Wtf99]

Bro like I said I cant even speak hindi and understand it okay ishly enough . But your narration, the dialogue,  the scenes...GOD!! IT IS EROTIC  AS FUCK!! I can't believe at the breakneck pace at which Tabassums moral compass is degrading and turning her into a slut for Shankar. I'm eagerly waiting what more kinky stuff Shankar is gonna make this pakeezah girl do. The breastfeeding chai scene was out of this world. Could something more dirtier be done to her? Cant wait man!!        

[Bondjamesbond707]

good going....keep it up...plz more breastfeeding..

[Lion King 989]

Bro like I said I cant even speak hindi and understand it okay ishly enough . But your narration, the dialogue,  the scenes...GOD!! IT IS EROTIC  AS FUCK!! I can't believe at the breakneck pace at which Tabassums moral compass is degrading and turning her into a slut for Shankar. I'm eagerly waiting what more kinky stuff Shankar is gonna make this pakeezah girl do. The breastfeeding chai scene was out of this world. Could something more dirtier be done to her? Cant wait man!!        

Thanx bro mai ho diouloge dilivery karta ho woh jo mai khud aisa sochta hi ki agar koi aisa moka mile jiske liye Tabbasum jaise ladies ko pana mushkil ho aur woh sach mai use mile to kiya khani ho sakti hai bus yahi likh deta ho

[Lion King 989]

Bahut khub hai bhai.lajawab aur behad h garam update, bahut Maja agaya.

Thanxx dear koshish karta rahoonga ki aur acche se likho

[Lion King 989]

Shaandaar,garam,jabardast,
Lajawaaab,dhasu
Gajab
Faaaduuu
Jhakaaaaaaaasssss update

Thanxx my frds aisa hi enjoy apko karata rahoonga

[Lion King 989]

OMG!OMG!OMG! Pheeeeewwwww
Samajh mein nahin ata k kia kahun.
I am really Speechless bhai.
Too too too erotic and exciting . Bahut hi jiada hot, very very sexy.

Thanxx bro bus ap log  aise hi himmat dete rahe to mai aur bhi Accha ek real mode par likhta rahonga jaha ap ko fantasy se zyada real sab lage

[Lion King 989]

Wow!Just wow! This is called the really eroticism.Absolutely hot update!

Thanxx bhai maine apne first story nazbeen se shuru kari muhje nahi pata tha kiya mai likh raha tha.... Par wohi charge mujhe is kahani mai mila

[Lion King 989]

vah! vah! ekdom gajab update dhiya bhai, bahut h hot aur majedar,ab tabbu dhire dhire kul rahe hai.

I don't know tabbi kiya karegi jo bhi karegi apko entertaint karegi Thanxx bro

[Lion King 989]

This is real  eroticism to the extreme.
Fabulous, fantastic, mind blowing update.

Thanxx bro

[Lion King 989]

The way you maintained the tempo of this story  is really wonderful.Fantastic and incredibly lascivious update.

Thanxx bro ap ko shayad mai nazbeen bahak gayi se janta ho aur bhi mere reader hai first story se yaha tak accha sath diya

[tanahok123]

krpaya ise angrejee mein anuvaad karen
somebody please translate this into english i dont understand hindi words

[Lion King 989]

Are baap re baap
Lion bhai kia jabardast, faaduu, dhansu update diya hai bhai, bahut bahut maja agaya.
Bahut jiada hot aur erotic update hai. Too much erotic and sexy

Jab mere us side par kahani bloked hue to apne is side ke bare mai bataya par is side par mai all redy ek kahani likh raha tha nazbeen ki bhadkati jawani par is liye yaha maine chhoda kyoki cmmt nahi Aa rahe the par ye side bhool gaya Thanxx ye khani mai aage bada paya is side se aur bhi kuch acche idea se kahani ise puri kane ke bad shuru karonga

[Lion King 989]

Extremely erotic and hot update

Thanxx bro

[Jaan]

Bohot hi erotic & hot update hae lion bhai...

[Lion King 989]

The stories of the great writers like The evil, Rajkumar,Ajaykumar, sheanshean are the most favorite and read stories of any forum because they use  their female characters in a very innocent way so that the male members of the family can't suspect them and at the same time the female members continue their illicit affairs secretly. For this reason their stories are so popular. There is no need to lengthen the story unnecessarily by adding more male characters.
After all it is the lion brother's story.So he will decide what will have to do.

Mere fav writer bhi yahi hai jinki story pad kar mai aaj likh pata ho inhi acche writer ki wazah se nazbeen bahak gayi, intzar, iram aur bhi kuch story likhi mai bus yahi chahata tha ki jitna real base bana sako banao aur mujhe English acche se padna nahi aati par jo bhi apne kaha hai sahi kaha.... Par yaha mai apne deemag se story badaonga..... Aur jaisa chal rahi hai waise chalata jaonga.... Ha kuch idea hai jo likhonga  aur kuch aisa likhonga jise pad kar maza aaye

[Lion King 989]

Abhi bhi side slow hai par Phir bhi jitna ho sake mai reply dene ki koshish kar raha ho... Ap ka ye prem ki wazah se mai Accha likhta rahonga sab ko ek bar Phir se Thanxx Aur jis frds ka mai reply nahi de paya to sorry kiya karo jab time milta hai to story likna shuru kar deta ho....