06-04-2020, 12:47 PM
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Adultery Lock down aur Tabbasum
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06-04-2020, 02:24 PM
Bro your story is the only one worth reading at Xossipy right now. Because every other story is the same boring incest or boring adultery shit. Its boring and unoriginal as fuck. A young lactating modest mother vs an old ugly servant in a lockdown in the best setting ever! I loved the breastfeeding and chai bits. It was so kinky and original. Also I dont know your plans for this story but please add more male characters later on. But make them the low class ugly undesirable types. Like that short midget type guy named Ganesh. His introduction and the way he was staring at her milk filled breasts was so hot. But please dont add more female characters. The story is called Tabassum and Lockdown after all. So It's better she stays the sole female major character vs a lot of low class ugly men. This story would be the bomb. But don't include sex scenes with other men too soon. Rather add more kinky breast feeding and breast groping and exhibition scenes and then if and when you feel right add some kind of sex. Humiliation, embarassment, inappropriate touching are far more kinky than direct sex. Please update fast and thanks for this awesome unique story.
06-04-2020, 03:03 PM
(06-04-2020, 02:24 PM)Wtf99 Wrote: Bro your story is the only one worth reading at Xossipy right now. Because every other story is the same boring incest or boring adultery shit. Its boring and unoriginal as fuck. A young lactating modest mother vs an old ugly servant in a lockdown in the best setting ever! I loved the breastfeeding and chai bits. It was so kinky and original. Also I dont know your plans for this story but please add more male characters later on. But make them the low class ugly undesirable types. Like that short midget type guy named Ganesh. His introduction and the way he was staring at her milk filled breasts was so hot. But please dont add more female characters. The story is called Tabassum and Lockdown after all. So It's better she stays the sole female major character vs a lot of low class ugly men. This story would be the bomb. But don't include sex scenes with other men too soon. Rather add more kinky breast feeding and breast groping and exhibition scenes and then if and when you feel right add some kind of sex. Humiliation, embarassment, inappropriate touching are far more kinky than direct sex. Please update fast and thanks for this awesome unique story.I don't agree with you.If more male characters will be added then the excitement of this story will be spoiled.
06-04-2020, 03:48 PM
Dear boobs me say doodh wale scene bhot acha ha plz esy agay bhi continue karna pori site paar bs apki story trend par ha best of luck
06-04-2020, 03:53 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-04-2020, 04:04 PM by flash speed 321. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
(06-04-2020, 02:24 PM)Wtf99 Wrote: Bro your story is the only one worth reading at Xossipy right now. Because every other story is the same boring incest or boring adultery shit. Its boring and unoriginal as fuck. A young lactating modest mother vs an old ugly servant in a lockdown in the best setting ever! I loved the breastfeeding and chai bits. It was so kinky and original. Also I dont know your plans for this story but please add more male characters later on. But make them the low class ugly undesirable types. Like that short midget type guy named Ganesh. His introduction and the way he was staring at her milk filled breasts was so hot. But please dont add more female characters. The story is called Tabassum and Lockdown after all. So It's better she stays the sole female major character vs a lot of low class ugly men. This story would be the bomb. But don't include sex scenes with other men too soon. Rather add more kinky breast feeding and breast groping and exhibition scenes and then if and when you feel right add some kind of sex. Humiliation, embarassment, inappropriate touching are far more kinky than direct sex. Please update fast and thanks for this awesome unique story. yar agar koi female chracter a jai to kuch bura nai ha focus to tabbasum par hi hoga . baki ap 100% right ho. Qasam say dil ki baat keh di ap nay. 
06-04-2020, 03:54 PM
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06-04-2020, 05:14 PM
Shankar ne apna lund tabbi ke kamar par ragad kar ishara kara aur woh apna kala badan Tabbasum ke gore behad gore jism ke upper lake kahne laga.....
S... Ab to bata de mere jan tune to mere lund ko hi kha liya tha mai janta ho is waqt tu bahot garam hai ab to bata de ki tu khud apne dil se chudna chahati hai...... Tabssum ne uski Baat sunkar shankar ke niche jo uske pair dabe the usko chodane lagi..... Yani tabbi ki traf se ye ishara tha..... Aur apna chehra dusre traf kar ke aankhe band kar li...... Tab shankar samjh gaya ki ab chudai ka time aa gaya hai...... S... Chal mai tujhe aise nahi chodonga jaise tune mujhe kitchen mai ishara kar ke bataya ki tujhe ghodi ban kar chudna pasand hai..... Isliye mai hat jata ho tere upper se aur tu apne muh se to kuch bol hi nahi rahi hai...... Ab tujhe khud faisla karna hai.... Mai tera intzar karonga bus 2 min ke liye ab agar tujhe chudna hai to mere samne ghodi ban kar apne makhan jiase gaand bahar nikal kar mujhe ishara de...... Tabbasum jo bahot garam thi.... Par ab ye nai Baat sunkar woh sharma jati hai..... Nangi padi hue thi.... Aur us time shankar ne uske upper se veil aur naqab dono utar kar sampooran nangi kar diya..... Shanake bidi nikal kar pine laga aur Tabbasum ke andar himmat nahi ho rahi thi ki woh ghodi ban jai...... Shanake bidi pi kar apne lund ki malish karta hua muskura kar Tabbasum ko dekh raha tha...... Ab Tabbasum ka hal aur bhi bura hone laga ek trah se usne apne taange khol kar ishara bhi kara.... Par ab ye woh kise kar sakti thi..... S... Tu kuch bolti bhi nahi jo mai karna chahata ho tu woh karti bhi nahi itna mahnat kar raha ho tere upper mai aur tu hai ki.... Are kam se kam bol kar apne dil ki baat nahi kar pa rahi hai to ghodi ban kar apne dil ka hal to bata sakti hai...... Accha kuch kah kar fayda nahi mai chalta ho aur tere naseeb mai tadpna hai to tadap..... Ye kah kar shankar bidi wahi fek kar uthne laga..... To Tabbasum ghabra jati hai aur woh Phir bhi kuch na kah kar pet ke bal ho jati hai..... Aur apne ahista se ghutne modne lagti hai aur kuch hi lamha mai woh ghodi ban hi jati hai...... Par uske zaban khamosh thi aur uski chut ki jalan ab woh bardash ke bahar Jane se tadap rahi thi.. Tab woh ghodi ban kar apni gaand upper kar ke shankar ko dekhane lagi.... S.... Hiiii hiiiiiii jis ghadi ka mujhe intzar tha woh ghadi aa hi gayi..... Aakhir tu mere Baat man kar mere liye ghodi ban hi gayi.... Ahhhhj kiya ganad hai tere ohhhhh kitne gol gol nitamb aah aur uske bich mai kiya gulbi tang ched hai le mera lund aaj tere sari icchao ko pura karne ke liye ab tayyar hai..... Ye sunkar Tabbasum Sharam kar apna sir takiye par chupa liya.... Tabhi shnakr piche gaya aur dono nitambo ko sahkate aur masale hue kiss karne laga..... Aur apne zaban bhi piche tang ched mai dalkar ghuma di... Aur kuch kiss tabbi ki chut par karne laga..... T. Ummmmmmm shhhhhhhhhhhh ohhhhhhhhhh nahi ufffff bahot ahhhh jalannnn ho rahiiii hai mat karoooo mai mar jaongiiiiii ahhhhhhhhhhjj Tabbasum ke andar ke jzbaat bahar aane lage.... Aur ye moka dekh ki ab tabbi ko har halat mai lund chahiye tha to apna jaise hi Lund kamar ke piche akar lagaya aur halke se topa guseda jo bahad chikni chut hone ke wazah se aaram se sarak kar apne manzil ki aur bada to Tabbasum ke muh se bahot tez siskari nikal gayi.... Aur kahi na kahi is maze mai uske kuch aaso bhi nikal gaye..... Shayad itne der se woh bardash kar rahi thi is wazah se bhi.... Aur ab woh apne zindgi ka aisa sukkon jo talash kar rahi thi aaj woh sukoon khud ko bhi aur uski chut ko bhi milne wala tha.. ![[Image: 548-450.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/2q3s3Qn/548-450.jpg) Ahista ahista apna lund sarakte hue chut ka muhana choda karte hue gusedne laga... To aisa nahi ki tabbi cheekhi chillayi jaisa akasar porn video mai hota hai ya kahaniyo mai bhi hota hai...... Tabbasum apna jo thoda dard to ho raha tha us dard ko bhi chupane ke liye takiye par apna muh rakhkar bardash karne lagi Shankar ka aaram aaram se lund andar ja raha tha.... Koi jaldbazi nahi.... Aur tight chut ki ragad Lund par lagi to shankar ka bhi nahot maze mai bura hal hone laga..... Par yaha tabbi to apne dil ki kasak nahi bata pa rahi thi par shankar to kah hi sakta tha..... S.... Are wahhhhh mere jaan aisa lag raha hai ufffffff ke apna lund kisi makhan ke andar dalraha ho ahhhh kitna sukhad ahsas hai..... Ahhh Maa kasam kitni tight chut hai laga nahi ki maine tere bus mai chut mari thi.... Ohhhhh mera jaisa insan sach mai tere jaise haseen aurat ki chut uski marzi se mar sakta hai.... Ahhhhh pata nahi sala aaj ke bad tujhe apne pati ko na bhula diya to mera nam shankar nahi.. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh Uski Baat sunkar aur zyada garam Tabbasum hone lagi aur apna sir utha kar siskarne lagi ab uske Aankho mai koi pachtawa koi gunah nahi tha bus hawas hi hawas thi...... Kuch thoda aaram se dalkar apna pura kala musal lund gori chut mai gused diya...... Aur jaha tak kabhi altaf ka nahi gaya usse kahi zyada shankar ka guss gya.... Aur seeda baccedani se tkaraya to...... T.... Ohhhhh maaaaaaa aaaiiiiishhhhhhhhhh uiiiiiiiiiiiii arammmm se ahhhhhhhhh kas ke nahi karna aaqa ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh bahottttt bada haiiii apkaaaaa ahhhhhhhhh marrr gayiiiiiiiiiiiiiii maaaaaaa shhhhhhhhhhhh Jaise kaha tha na ki uske ab anadr ke jazbat bahar aane lage aur uski Aa ke upper maze mai chadnge lagi...... Tabhi ab Shanakar se raha nahi gaya to Tabbasum ki ubharti hue gaand par 3 ya 4 thappad mare jisse lal nishan ke sath gaand ki thirkan dekhne layaq thi...... S.... Ab bata aur speed badao ya aisa hi Accha laga raha hai...... T. Ohhhh mai nahi janti.... Ahhhhhhhhh S... To tujhe maza nahi Aa raha hai agar kahe to lund nikal do tujhe takleef ho rahi hai to..... Uski Baat sunkar bus chihuk kar Tabbasum ne kaha..... Ahhhhh nahiiiii ap ko nahi pata chal rahaa hai ki mujhe ahhhhhh shhhhhhhh kaisa lag rha hai..... S. Tu batayegi nahi to kaise pata chalega..... Accha speed badao ya aise hi chodta raho.... T... Ahhhhhh apko marzi ufffffff mai kiya kah sakti hooooo....... Ye sunkar Shanakar muskurate hue ab dono hatho se kamar pakad li..... Aur jo abhi 30 ki speed thi use badane laga aur speed 60 km ki rftar par apna accelation badane laga.... Aur tabhi ab thaapppp thaapppp ki awazo mai bhi bulandi aane lagi.... Pura lund acche se gila hone laga yaha tak ki chut se kuch White sa chipchipapan bahar aate hue Lund par lagne laga jaise mano ko full cremi chut ho gayi thi..... ![[Image: Nude-Fucking-Sexy-Call-girl-Pics.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/JrB6Mkq/Nude-Fucking-Sexy-Call-girl-Pics.jpg) T.... Ahhhhhh maaaaaaa aaram se itniiiii tezzz to Ahhhhh nahi kaha tha...... Ahhhhhh aram se karoooo mere jaan nikaloge......... Ahhhhhh aaram se aaram se mere andar Ahhhhh kuchhhhh ahhhhhh nikal raha haiiiiii aram se karoooooooo maaaaaaa mai kahi bhagi nahi ja rahiiii hooooo mar daloge err mujheeeeee. S.... Are mere jaan mere janeman chut ko woh bhi tere jaise haseena ki.... Bedardi se choda jata hai chut par agar raham dekhaya to ye mujhe apna gulam bana legi.... Aur mai tujh par apni malkiyat sabit karna chahta ho.... Dar mat jab 2 ya 4 bar jhagegi to samjhegi asli chudai ka maza kiya aata hai..... T... Par raham karo.... Aisa Na karoooo ahhhhhhhhh maaaaaaaa Yaha ab speed badata hua piche se chut ka bhosda bana raha tha... Par kuch 5 min mai bahot hi rahat hone lagi ab jism mai akadanpan khtam hone lagi... Aur ab chudai ka maza lene lagi...... Halke halke siskariya nikalte hue apne garam garam sanse bahar fekne lagi..... Shankar piche se kabhi thappad marta to kabhi apne hath aage peet ko sahlata hua niche do bade anmol latke chuchiyo ko kad kar dabata jisse ek mithe dard ke sath chihuk nikal jati....... Aur yaha ek position jo kab se kahi na kahi dogy ban kar alataf se chudna chahti thi woh position pakar anadr hi andar nonihal hone lagi....... Tab ek tez pani chut se nikla jo sahi mayno mai pahla orgasam hasil karti hue jism ko pura bister par dal diya.... Par abhi ye nahi ki woh jhad gayi thi.... Aurat ko pura tarapt hone ke liye 3 awasatha hoti hai.... Agar mard ne woh 3 awasatha ke charam seema par pahucha diya to aurat us mard ki gulam ban jai.... Aur apne dil se use dhero pyar dene lege..... Jab jism dheela hua to apna lund chut se nikla to ye tabassum ko pasand nahi aaya bhale woh sukh par pahuch gayi thi par abhi full satisfaction hasil nahi kar payi thi...... Tabhi shankar ne Tabbasum ko sans lene ki furasat na di... Aur use palat kar seedha kar diya aur uske pairo ke bich mai aakar Phir se apna lund chut par rakhkar gused diya...... Yaha Tabbasum apne pair upper uthate chali gayi.... Aur shankar ne bhi uske gori taange apne kandhe par rakh kar chut ko jitna ho sake upper utha diya....... ![[Image: 134.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/Z2vZ3mD/134.jpg) frame cartoon png Shanakar ne ab Phir se speed bada kar uski madhosh aankho mai dekhte hue thapp tahppp ke madhur sangeet ke sath chodne laga.... Aur kuch jhatke marne ke bad Tabbasum ke muh par apna muh rakhkar uske surkh honto ko chusne laga..... Tabbi is maze mai thi ki usne bhi pura Saath dete hue apna hont khole to honto ko chuste chuste apna thhok tabbi ke muh mai dala to.... Tabbi ne kuch bhi na kah kar uski aankho mai dekh kar woh thook apne gale ke niche utar diya...... S... Ab bata kaisa lag raha hai Accha ya bahot accha ya bilkul bhi nahi.. Tabbasum ek nashe mai kahti hai.... Bahot acchaa...... S.... Ab tujhe bina chode nahi Jane donga chahe tere pati ke piche hi mujhe tujhe chodna pade to chodonga..... Bta chudwayegi mujhse roz..... T. Hmmmmm S.... Aur apne wade ke anusar roz apne chuchi ki chai pilayegi..... T.. Ahhhhh ummmm haaaa Ye sunkar shnakr ne doodh pa muh laga kar jaise hi choosa to Tabbasum ne jo is qadar hawas us par hawi thi us hawas mai bahot ahista se kaha..... T..... Ahhhhh rukooo ise mat piyo warna subah tak ye khali rahega ahhhh phir shhhhhh kaise apko bed tea dongi........ Ye sunkar Shanakar bahot khus ho jata hai.... Aur aise hi chodte chodte tabbi ko apne upper litata hai to... Uska palatne mai Lund bahar aata hai.... Tabbi uske upper jati hai.. Aur apne chut khali mahssos kar ke ab khud hi bina shankar ke kahe woh uska lund pakad kar apne chut par uske upper lette hue lagati hai.... ![[Image: Fucking-Sexy-Call-girl-Naked-Pics.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/Pc1gGpX/Fucking-Sexy-Call-girl-Naked-Pics.jpg) Ye dekh kar Shanakar khus hokar niche se ab kas kas ke dakke marne lagta hai..... Jis maza lete hue ab tabbi khud bhi apna hont uske kale honto par laga deti hai..... Uski gori chuhiya uske kale seene se dab kar masalne lagti hai.... Piche se chuttado par Shanakar hath kas kas kar marte hue us thappad ki madhur awaz sunta hai..... Yaha ab Tabbasum aise mardaangi aur josh dekh kar kahi na kahi uske kayal hone lagti hai.... Bhale woh uska nokar tha usse darze mai kahi niche tha.... Par ab use samjh mai aane laga ki mard ke auqat ya uske chehre se nahi balki uski mardangi ki kuwwat se aurat uski deewani ban jati hai..... Par aise mard ka kaha pata ki woh kon honge kon nahi. Par yaha tabbi ki baat kari jai to woh samjhne lagi ki low class jo high society ki aurat un ke naseeb mai nahi hoti agar aisa ho to har aisa mahnati mazdoor mard kisi bhi high society ki wife ko apna dasi bana sakta hai...... Aur yaha shankar chahta tha ki chudai karte waqt ko kuch na kuch ganda ganda bole lakin ye itna asan nahi tha..... Shankar ne Phir se use niche le ke ab apne hath side se rakhkar full speed se apne kamar hilne laga.... Aur chudai ki awaz itne tez gujne lagi ki agar koi bahar main door par bhi hota to siskariya thaap thaap ki awaz sun sakta tha..... Tab bhi ke aankhe ab upper ko chad gayi......muh khula hi rah gaya.... Jism mai tez akdan hone lagi.... Ab siskari nahi cheekh nikal rahi thi.... Yani kai salo se badha baandh tootne laga....... Aur Woh ek cheekh marte hue shnakr ke gale mai hath dalkar chimlat gayi aur is maze mai aake usne Lund par to pahle hi kat liya tha par ab kandhe par bhi apne dant ke nishan laga diye peet par pure nakhoon dasa diye..... Jiska dard ka ahsas hote hi jitna tez jhatke mar kar chut ka barta nikal sakta tha niklne lagaaaaa.... Par uske daat aur nakhoon ka dard hone ke bad bhi usne kuch nahi kaha.. T.... Hiiiiiii maaaaa Mar gayiiiiiiiiiiiiiii mera jaan niklaallllllll gayiiiiiiii ohhhhhhhhhh shankarrrrrr jiiiiiiiiii mujhe kiya ho rahaaaaa haiiiiii meraaaa sara pishabbbbbb nikaallllll rahaaaaa haiiiiiiiii hiiiiiii ruknaaaaaaa nahiiiiiiiiiiiiii maiiiii mar jaongiiiiiiiii mujheeeeee bachallllloooooooooo shankarrrrrrrrrrr maiiiiiio andarrrr kiyaaaaaaaaaaaaa ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh aiiiiiiiiiiiiiii maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Ye kahte hue pura jism lakdi ki tarah kada kar ke kuch hi sec mai dheela Chhod kar apna jism ki pakad Shanakar ke upper se hta di..... Bahot sara chut se pani nikla raha tha jisse puri chadar gili uske niche ki ho gayi.......... Shanakar ka bhi nikalne wala tha par uska jism ki ab aise halat dekh kar apna lund bhi foran nikla.... Aur kuch chand mitti mar kar woh bhi cheekhta hua der sara mal pet aur chuchi par nikal diya.. Aur uske bagal mai pad kar hafne laga dono paseene se lathpath the........ Tab uski traf apna chehra karta hai to dekhta hai pure jaha ki masumiyat tabbi ke chehre par Aa gayi hai...... Tabhi ka chehra bahot sukoon mai dekh raha tha sanso se uske chuchi kafi upper niche ho rahe the...... Hont tabbi apne ke kampa se rahe the.... Tab shankar thoda uth kar bethta hai aur uske pet de kafi mani ko apne hath mai lagakar pure pet par malish karne lagta hai...... Navel kamar aur jhango tak woh mani ki malish karta hai.... Tabbi ko to kuch pata hi nahi.... Woh is duniya mai thi hi nahi..... Tab jo chuchi par mal hota hai.... To uski gol chuchi par bhi pura laga deta hai..... Aur apne mal se gili hue ungli tabbi ke gulabi honto par laga deta hai...... Aur apne wohi ungli tabbi ke muh mai dalta hai to tabbi apna muh ko bhi open kar deti hai aur uski mal se lagi ungli ko chusne lagti hai...... Aaise hi woh sab ungli ko chusata hai.... Tabbi ko to kuch pata hi nahi.... Woh bus jo charmseema ka sukh liya tha us mai khoyi hue thi....... Shankar aise hi uske bagal mai let kar aankhe band kar leta hai.......... Yaha subah kiya hua kaise hua yaha mai bata nahi sakta aur jaise bataya hai ki uske bacche ke bare mai bhi nahi bata sakta bus itna samjhiye ki roz marra ke kamo mai woh ab apne bacche ki zaroorat bhi puri karti hai.... Isliye mai jab aisa koi moka aayega to thoda bahot bata donga...... Aur waha aaj se pura India band ho gya tha jo tabbi ko subah malom pada par late...... Isliye mai zayda deep abhi uske shohar ke bare mai nahi bata sakta..... Haaa ab subah kaise face karegi shankar ko woh likhonga..... Aur ab subah kiya kiya shankar karwata hai kaise karwata hai aur koi aur hai jo uske jism ka maza lene ko betab hai aur uske samne tabbi kaise aati hai....... To next update ka wait kariye....... . 
06-04-2020, 05:39 PM
Wow!Just wow! This is called the really eroticism.Absolutely hot update!
06-04-2020, 06:05 PM
vah! vah! ekdom gajab update dhiya bhai, bahut h hot aur majedar,ab tabbu dhire dhire kul rahe hai.
06-04-2020, 06:56 PM
This is real eroticism to the extreme.
Fabulous, fantastic, mind blowing update. 
06-04-2020, 07:06 PM
The way you maintained the tempo of this story is really wonderful.Fantastic and incredibly lascivious update.
06-04-2020, 07:08 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-04-2020, 07:15 PM by Wtf99. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(06-04-2020, 03:03 PM)Introvert Wrote: I don't agree with you.If more male characters will be added then the excitement of this story will be spoiled. And I dont agree with you. I have read tons of stories and they all get boring real quick when its just the one guy or when the story takes a turn.and turns itself from a kinky erotica to a romantic novel. They never work. People...I mean most come here to read something kinky and erotic and shag off. Sure, some love romance on their stories but those aren’t the ones that are sexy or hot. You can only do so much with this Shankar guy. Pretty soon he's gonna start doing repetitive stuf, say repetitive dialogues and the whole hot and sexy interaction between Tabassum and him found in these first few updates would lose it's magic. This story would do real well if few things are consistently taken care of and maintained: 1) Character progression: Tabassum and other characters(most importantly Tabassum) should have a steady character development where each encounter should change her way of thinking. Just because Shankar fucked her she shouldn’t turn into his whore. And when she does start slowly enjoying this sort of taboo sex she should start becoming unpredictable and wanting more. That way she could turn from a victim to the influencer and start surprising us providing plenty of character driven twists to the story. 2) Acts: The story should have the three act structure. Where by the end of the first act she should love her interaction with Shankar and feel that her want is love but her need is exciting sex which Shankar would provide. By act 2 she should start enjoying the sex so much that she should have even more weirder fantasies and she would start enjoying more kinky sex but at some point Shankar would also start wanting more traditional love from her like a lover instead of a whore cuz he's starting to fall in love with her but all this weird and dirty sex kind of would ruin her. Slowly turning her into a nympho and enjoying the attention of other men. By the end of second act she would no longer stay confused and want to reciprocate towards other dirty perverted men who would be hitting and groping on her throughout the story. By the third act she should turn into a whore and that would be the tragedy of the story where the modest, religious loyal housewife gets ruined by the tharki servant and instead of coming out to her husband her keeping secret of the whole affair started this downward spiral of her character that would result in her marriage falling apart and her guilt turning her into the opposite of what she was in the beginning of the story. How the story would end is upto the writer. But this way, there could be so many possibilities. Her husband was also unfaithful and learning of her adultery they both realize their mistakes and fall in love with one another anew. They both know of each others affairs and realize the damage is done and break off thier marriage which shows us the karmic reality of lust and adultery. Tabassum turns into a total slut and Shankar to his horror realizes that his fantasy of turning this modest woman into his whore has backfired and she instead turned a whore for everybody. Because thats how people work. She fell down so hard from the ladder that now she got lost in her own sins and guilt. Showing us that true moral corruption not only destroys a person but destroys all relationships as well. There are many ways this story can end but the boring way some people want the story to progress would turn this story into something boring, predictable, and really short as it would get stale real quick and would needed to be concluded. The writer can do whatever the hell he wants with the story. But I just provided a blueprint for possibilities because most of the time writers themselves dont have the story outlined so they start following replies and comments from different readers which takes the plot to a contradictory and confusing point where its impossible to move the story forward so they instead of updating it they abandon it. 
06-04-2020, 07:14 PM
Are baap re baap
Lion bhai kia jabardast, faaduu, dhansu update diya hai bhai, bahut bahut maja agaya. Bahut jiada hot aur erotic update hai. Too much erotic and sexy
06-04-2020, 07:26 PM
(06-04-2020, 07:08 PM)Wtf99 Wrote: And I dont agree with you. I have read tons of stories and they all get boring real quick when its just the one guy or when the story takes a turn.and turns itself from a kinky erotica to a romantic novel. They never work. People...I mean most come here to read something kinky and erotic and shag off. Sure, some love romance on their stories but those aren’t the ones that are sexy or hot. You can only do so much with this Shankar guy. Pretty soon he's gonna start doing repetitive stuf, say repetitive dialogues and the whole hot and sexy interaction between Tabassum and him found in these first few updates would lose it's magic. The stories of the great writers like The evil, Rajkumar,Ajaykumar, sheanshean are the most favorite and read stories of any forum because they use their female characters in a very innocent way so that the male members of the family can't suspect them and at the same time the female members continue their illicit affairs secretly. For this reason their stories are so popular. There is no need to lengthen the story unnecessarily by adding more male characters. After all it is the lion brother's story.So he will decide what will have to do.
06-04-2020, 07:57 PM
Dear ab kya kaho story kay bary me lafz hi nahi mil rahe . ap ki story charas jesi ha .esi adat si lag gai ha chuti hi nahi. Best of luck
06-04-2020, 08:09 PM
Extremely erotic and hot update
06-04-2020, 08:14 PM
OMG!OMG!OMG! Pheeeeewwwww
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