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Fantasy MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER)
#1
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hello friends ye story ab yaha par continue karunga..

Ho sakta kuch changes aaye ismea pichle wali sea...

Par story waise he majedar hogii..

Bas aap sab apna sath banaye rakhe..
Or reviews be dea..


Story mea roj update aayega..

Abi kuch din free hu isliye jadda se jadda update dene ke kosis karunga..

Hope aapko ye story achi lage..

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Update 1


Rajasthan mea udaipur ke pass he ek bada he khubsurat sa gaav he



Ratangadh

Ratangadh apne prakritik saundarya ke liye kafi mashoor hea..


Suraj ke ujale mea ye gaav kisi sonapur se kam nai lagega or raat me chand ke chandni me toa jaise hazaro jugnuoo ka dera ho..


Aisa lagta hea..

Or in sab ki shaan badata he yaha ke raajo ki haveli jaha par aaj b raaj pariwar rehta hea..

Kehne ko toa raaj shasan khatam hogaya he par ratangadh or aas pass ke 56 gaavo me aaj be ratangadh ke raaj pariwar ka sashan chaltay...

Or is raaj pariwar ki shan or yaha ke praja ki jaan hea Sohanlal singh joki is gaav ke nove raaja hea...

Sohanlal singh ne apne pure rajya ko bakhubi sambal rakha hea..


Inka ek or bhai b hea jo ki Australia mea rehta he apni family ke saath...

Sohanlalji ko 18 saal ke umar mea he raaja gosit kiya gaya tha qki us waqt inke pitaji ki mrityu ranbhumi mea dusmano se ladte waqt hui thi..

Sohanlalji ke 4 bete or 1 beti hea..


Jinme sea kisiko b ab tak beta nai hua tha isliye wo kafi pareshan rehtea the ..

Qki unko apna waris ghosit karna tha or wo unko pota he hosakta tha


Is baat ko raajguru ne kahi thi..

Par ab tak unke kisi b bete ko ladka nai hua tha..

Vo har roj baghwan se prathna karte ki unko apne raajya ka waris miljaye..


Aise he din bit rahe the ab tak unke 2 bade beto or 1 beti ki shadi hochuki thi or insabi ko he ladkiya hu hui thi..

Fir ek din inke 4th bete bharat ne bhag kar shadi karli...


Qki jis ladki se unhone shadi ki thi ek toa wo dusre dhram ki thi or upar se soha lalji ke dusman ki beti thi...

Isliye Bharat ne bhag kar shadi ki or Goa mea shift hogaya apne patni ke sath...

Inhone bohot kosis ki thi pitaji ko manane ki par we mane nai isliye dono ne bhag kar shadi ke..


Inke patne ka naam lalita he or in dono ke shadi lalita ke chote bhai mahaveer ne karwayi thi..

Apne bete ke jaane ke baad sohanlalji ko kafi dukh hua ki unka he beta unke sath bagawat kar gaya hea..

Unhone kabi b apne bete se naa toa milne ki kosis ki or naa he kabi usse baat karne ki kosis ki..

Unhone toa apne bete ko mrit gosit kardiya tha...

Aise he din bite or unke 5th ladke ki b shadi hogayi..

Or unke sabi bache apne apne ghar grihasthi me khush the..

Par ab tak unke kisi b bache ko ladka nai hua tha..

Or bharat ka inke pass koi b khabar ni thi..

Or dusri taraf bharat lalita ne shadi ke baad Goa mea settle hogaye the..

Yaha mahaveer ne unki madad ki thi joki lalita ka chota bhai hea..

Goa mea bharat nea mahaveer or ek or partner ke sath milkar jewellery ka business start kiya or 6 mahino me he unka business  kafi  acha chalne lagga


Or ab bharat ne khudka banglow banwaliya tha..

In 6 mahino mea bharat ne bohot kosis ki apne pitaji ko manane ki par unke beje gaye kisi b patra ka jawab ni aaya tha..

Or ek din unko apne pitaji ki or se letter aaya ki bharat unke liye mar chuka he or agar kabi b usne apne pita ki thodi b izzat ki ho toa kabi b apni sakal na dikhaye unhe..

Is letter ke baad kabi b bharat ne koi b kosis na ki apne pitaji se milne ki...

Or apna sarra dyan apna business empire setup karne mea lagga diya..

Isi bich lalita pregnant hui or unko ladka hua..

Par bharat toa abb apne business empire khada karne mea itna kho gaya tha ki usse iss baat se jada koi farak ni padda..

Ladke ka naam Aaryan rakha gaya..


Lalita ko beta hua he ye baat jab lalita ke maata pita ko khabar padi toa unhone apni narajgi dur karte huye lalita or bharat ko apna liya par ab tak is baat ke bareme Sohanlal ko koi b khabar ni thi...

Jab Aaryan ka janam hua tha ussi waqt dharti se dur ek alag he jagah thi jaha par sab kuch sone se bana hua tha..


Wahi ek bohot he khubsurat mehel mea 2 log aapas me baat kar rahe the..


Jinme ek ladki or ek aadmi tha..

Ladki - Pitaji aaj khushi ka din hea.. aakhir usne fir janam lea he liya hea..

Aadmi - Sahi ka beti..


Bohot lamba samay lea liya ussne lotne mea...


Par usko apne or apne atit ke bareme kuch b patta ni hoga

Ladki - Par pitaji dushmano ko agar uske janam ke bareme pata chala toa bohot muskil hojayegi..


Mea isbar usse ni kho sakti pitaji..

Aadmi - Isbar usse harana aasan ni hoga..


Pichli baar se kai guna jadda taqatwar he wo isbar par ussne apne shaktiyo ko paa na hoga..


Rahi baat dushmano ki toa jab tak wo apni talwar ni hasil karleta tab tak uske bareme kisiko b kuch b pata ni chalega..


Or uski safety ke liyea..


Uske dono rakshak ne b fir janam liya hea dharti lok par..


Wo dono uske saath he rahenge..

Ladki - Acha he pitaji..

Aise he waqt bitta gaya ab aaryan 3 saal ka hochuka tha..


Lalita ek baar fir pregnant hui or isbar b usse ek ladka hua jiska naam Divyesh rakha gaya...

In 3 saalo mea bharat ne apna business kafi expand karliya tha aaj uske pass kisi b chij ke kami ni thi..


Unhone is waqt me kabi b apne pitaji se milne ya baat karne ke kosis nai ki thi..

Divyesh ke janam hote he wo jada samay ghar par bitane lagge..

Jisse divyesh ke sath wo jadda der rukte..


Or ab samay aisa aagaya tha ki divyesh unko aaryan se jadda pyara hogaya tha..

Aaryan ke sath muskil se waqt gujarte wo..

Isi bich mahaveer ki b shadi hogayi thi meena se joki arrange marriage thi..

Mahaveer meena ke sath mumbai mea rehta tha par kabi kabi goa aajata apne behen or bhanje se milne ke liyea..

Bharat ne ab ek naya banglow banwaya tha joki kafi sundar or badda..

Ye banglow ek colony mea tha jaha total 11 banglow bane huye the jisme se ek bharat ka tha joki colony ke starting mea tha or ek mahaveer ka jo ki colony ke end mea tha..

Bharat ke banglow ke baju me ek or banglow tha jaha par rajwardhan or unki patni roshni rehte the..


Inke ek beti thi jo ki aaryan ke age ke he thi jiska naam Nikki tha..

Yaha par shift hone ke baad lalita or roshni ke aapas me dosti hogayi or dono pakki saheliyon ban gayi thi..

Aaryan or nikki b sath me khel the the saara waqt ...

Dono ki apass mea achi ban ti thi..

Aise he kuch mahine or bite or aaryan ke janam din ke ek din pehlea lalita ka car accident mea death hogayi thi..

Aaryan ko bachpan se he sirf maa ka pyaar he mila tha isliye wo apni maa ke death ke baad sadme mea chalagaya tha..

Aaryan na kuch bolta na kuch khata..


Uski halat kafi buri hogayi thi isliye mahaveer or meena ne aaryan or divyesh ki custody lena ka socha qki bharat akela 2no bacho ni sambal sakta tha..

Par bharat ne iss baat se inkar kar diya or dusri shadi ki taki divyesh ko usse koi na lea sake..

Aaryan ka toa unhe koi fikar nai thi qki unhone suru se he aaryan ke sath kabi waqt he ni bitaya tha..

Par Mahaveer se aaryan ki ye halat dekhi na gayi isliye wo aaryan ko apne sath le jana chahta tha par aaryan apne ghar ko chodkar kahi nai gaya..

Ab waqt ke sath aaryan ka b haal tk hone lagga par wo kisi sea jadda baat ni karta tha bas khane ke waqt apne kamre se bahar aata baki pure din apne kamre mea he rehta bas kabi agar Nikki aajati toa usske sath thoda khel leta baki fir gumsum sa betha rehta..

Aise he kuch mahine bite or aaryan ki step mom riya ko ek ladki hui jiska naam kajal rakha gaya..

Jab Aaryan ne riya ko dekha toa aaryan ke chere par fir vo khushi aagayi thi joki uske maa ke jane ke baad kahi kho gayi thi..

Par uski step mom usko kajal ke pass b ni aane deti..


Unko aaryan bilkul b pasand ni tha naa jane q par unko nafrat thi aaryan se..

Divyesh ko toa wo apna beta manti or usse kabi ye mehsoos ni hone diya ki wo uski sagi maa ni hea par aaryan ke sath aisa ni tha...

Aaryan fir b chup chupke kajal ke sath khel leta or jab kabi b uski s mom usse pakad thi toa khub khari khoti sunati...

Kajal ke aane ke baad aaryan fir pehlea jaisa hone lagga tha ab bas kajal or nikki ke sath uske din gujar rahe the..

Aise he wo 6 saal ka hogaya or aaj uske college ka 1 st day hea..

Aaryan nea apna bag kal he pack kar rakha tha or ready hokar bag leke dining table par agaya..

Dining table par uske mom dad or dono bhai behen b the..

Aaryan ke aate he uske dad bole..

Dad - Aaryan aaj college ka 1st day hea koi complain ji aani chahiye b a good boy or driver tumhe college chod dega or lea b aayega..

Apni dad ki baat sun kar aaryan udas hogaya tha qki wo apne dad ke sath college jana chahta tha qki aaj 1st day tha..

Khair usne nasta kiya or apna bag lekar bahar aagaya jaha driver gadi lekar khada tha..


(Driver ko d chacha likhunga..


Ye mid aged person the par family me paiso ke kami ke wajase ye kaam karte the


Ye inke family ke sab se purane driver hea)

D chacha - Chalo aaryan baba college ke liye deri hojayegi..

Gate kholte huye d chacha bole..

Aaryan bina kuch bole bas haa me sar hila kar gadi me back seat par baith gaya..

Ghadi start huyi or banglow ke bahar he nikli thi ki nikki gadhi ke aage aagayi or gadhi ko rukwa liya..

Gadhi ke rukte he wo back seat ka door open karke apne dono hath kamar par rakhkar boli..

Nikki - Q be motu rukni sakta tha kya mere liyea thodi der..(Aaryan thoda chuby boy tha)


Aaryan toa Nikki ko dekhte he usmea kho gaya tha kafi cute lagrahi thi college uniform mea or upar se uske bolne ka tarika..

Nikki ki maa riya ke awaj se aaryan ka dyan tuta..

Riya - Nikki tuje kitni baar kaha hea aaryan se ache se baat kiya kar ye kya bolne ka tarika hota hea..

Aaryan - Janne do choti maa iski toa aadat hea..


Muje bura ni lagga bilkul b..


Or tu chuhiya jaldi beth gadhi me der hojayegi nai toa..


(Riya ko me choti maa bolta hu qki unhone he mom ke death ke baad muje maa ka pyaar diya tha s mom toa mujse nafrat he karti thi)

Meri or apni maa ke baat sun Nikki mu fula kar gadhi mea beth gayi tab uski maa boli..

Riya - aaryan apna or iska dyan rakhna..


Or pehlea din kisiko tang mat karna nikki..

Hamdono ne fir bye kaha choti maa ko fir chal pade college ke taraf..


Sry frnds story ko thoda starting mea fast forward kiya hea..


Taki jaldi majedar part suru kar saku..


Or kuch suggestion ho toa jarur dena..


Mea kuch changes kiye he characters mea jisse story ko or behtar kar saku..

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#3
Nice start.Keep going.
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#4
(20-11-2018, 03:42 PM)DK99 Wrote: Nice start.Keep going.

Thnx yara nxt update raat mea aayega
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#5
Update 2


Riya - Nikki tuje kitni baar kaha hea aaryan se ache se baat kiya kar ye kya bolne ka tarika hota hea..

Aaryan - Janne do choti maa iski toa aadat hea..


Muje bura ni lagga bilkul b..


Or tu chuhiya jaldi beth gadhi me der hojayegi nai toa..


(Riya ko me choti maa bolta hu qki unhone he mom ke death ke baad muje maa ka pyaar diya tha s mom toa mujse nafrat he karti thi)

Meri or apni maa ke baat sun Nikki mu fula kar gadhi mea beth gayi tab uski maa boli..

Riya - aaryan apna or iska dyan rakhna..


Or pehlea din kisiko tang mat karna nikki..

Hamdono ne fir bye kaha choti maa ko fir chal pade college ke taraf..

Ab aage..

Hamara college goa ka sabse badda college hea..

Yaha mostly sabi rich bache he padte hea..

Hamara college ki building 5 male ki badi building thi..


Or college ke aage or piche dono side bade bade ground the..

college ka 1st day tha so mea kafi excited tha or nikki b..

Kuch he der mea ham college pohach gaye or jaise he car se nikle toa college ki building ko dekhte he rehegaye kafi badi or sundar building thi..

Hamara college C shape mea bana hua tha..

Abi hamdono college ke taraf he dekh rahe the ki piche se ek ladka bagta hua aaya or nikki se takrane walla tha ki mene tabi nikki ko apni taraf khich liya or wo ladka kuc aage jakar niche gir gaya...

Mea uske taraf badkar usse hath diya taki wo uthsake. 

Mera hath pakad wo khada hua or apne kapde sayi karte huye hame sry bola or bola..

Ladka - Sry bhai wo mere piche kutte lag gaye the isliye aise bhag raha tha..

Mene college ke gate ke taraf dekha toa waha kutte bhok rahe the..


Fir mea bola..

Aaryan - Koi baat nai..


Tum tk toa hona..

Ladka - Ha bhai me tk hu..


Hi mera naam sagar he..

Mere taraf hath badate huye..

Usse hath milate huye me bola..

Aaryan - Hi mea aaryan or ye meri frnd nikki hea..

Nikki ne b usse high kaha or fir aise baat karte huye ham log apne class ke taraf aagaye..

Hame class mea aane mea thodi der hogayi thi isliye sabi bench full hogaye the siway ek ke jispar ek specs walla ladka betha tha..

Ham 3ino uske pass jakar ussi bench par beth gaye..

Fir class mea teacher aayi or aise hea periods bitte gaye..

Teachers jo b padati muje wo sab padne me koi muskil ni hoti muje sab kuch asani se yaad horaha tha..

Aisa lagra tha ki jaise sab kuch pehlea se he aataho bas me rewise kar raha hu..

Khair aise adhe periods khtam huye or recess hui..

Recess mea ham sab apna apna lunch box kholne lagge par jo 4th ladka jo hamare sath betha tha wo hame dekh raha tha ..

Sayad uske pass tiffin ni tha..

Mene apna lunch box uske taraf badaya or kaha..

Aaryan - hi me aaryan tum mera lunch box share kar sakte ho..

Ladka - Hi mera naam ankit hea and thnx iske liyea..

Aise he ham sab mea jaan pehchan hui or hak charo dost bangaye..

Aise he din bitte gaye..


Ab mea 10th std mea aagaya tha..


Ham charon ki dosti kafi achi hogayi thi..

Mea padai mea kafi tej tha par weight jadda hone ke karan mea kabi sports mea part ni leat tha..

Ab mera chota bhai b 13 or kajal 12 saal ki hogyi thi wo dono b mere college mea he padte the..

Wo dono mujse bohot pyaar karte the khass kar ke kajal wo toa ek pal b mere bina ni rehti thi ye baat s mom ko jarra b pasand ni thi..

Par kajal unki ek na sunti..

Par har baar muje unki daat sunni padti par kajal ke liyea mea itna toa kar he sakta tha..

Aise he hasi khushi din bitte gaye or aaj 22 Sept thi or kal mera janam din tha..

Mea bed par soya hua tha ki tabi muje sapna aaya ki ek ladki jo ki dikhne mea kafi khubsurat thi wo muje bula rahi thi ki..

Ladki -  Aajao aaryan ab waqt aagaya he ki tumhe apne bare mea patta chale..


Tumhe khudko jaanna hoga..

Fir uss ladki ne mera hath pakda or muje ek sunhera darwaje ke par legayi..

Us darwaje ke paar ka najara kafi adbhut tha waha har taraf hariyali he hariyali thi..


Or kuch dur he ek nadi beh rahi thi joki kuch dur jakar he jarne me badal rahi thi..

Jarna jadda bada toa ni tha par bohot he khubsurat tha..

Jarna karib 7 feet ka hoga...

Mea abi insab chijo ko dekhne mea khoya tha ki mere saamne ek tej roshni chamak ne lagi or wo roshni deri deri akar badal ne lagi..

Kuch he der mea mere saamne ek budhe aadmi khade the..


Unhone pure white kapde pehne huye the..

Unke chere par ek alag he tej tha..

Wo mere pass akar mujse bole..

Budhe aadmi - Aaryan ab waqt aa gaya he ki tum apne bareme jaano...

Muje unki baate kuch samaj me ni aari thi..


Muje ab thora dar b lag raha tha..

Aam tor par mea kisi b chij se natoa darta na hi ghabrata par ye sab kuch jo mere sath ho raha tha ye sab mene sapne me b ni socha tha..

Malum he ye sapna he hea fir be tha toa ajib he naa...

Tabi wo aadmi fir bole...

Aadmi - Aaryan malum he muje tumhe ye sab ajib lagraha hoga..

Par ye sab sach hea is waqt tumhari ruh yaha khafi hea..

Or ab tumhe apne aap ko pehchana hoga anyata is duniya ko koi nai bacha payega..

Muje malum he tumhare man me bohot sare sawal honge par uske jawab waqt he de toa acha hoga qki mere pass utna samay nai hea ki mea tumhe sab kuch samja saku..

Bas itna kahunga ki tum par ab is duniya ka bhavishya nirbhar hea agar tumhe mujpar wishwas hea toa bina kuch bole mere sath aao...

Unki baate sun me gabra gaya tha par malum nai q muje un par viswas horaha tha isliye me unke piche piche chalne lagga bina kuch bole..

Wo aadmi us jarne ke taraf ja rahe the..


Mea b unke piche jarne tak gaya or tabi achanak wo admi jarne ke andar chalagaya ye dekh kar me chonk gaya tha..

Fir b himat karke mea b jarne ke uspar chalagaya..

Samne ka nazara bohot he ajib tha qki bahar itna sundar drishya or hariyali or andar ke taraf ek bohot he badda hall jisake bicho bich chkara bana hua tha..

Mea us admi ke piche chalte huye us chakra tak aaya fir we bole..

Aadmi - Tum muje guru yogeshwar ( guru y )bula  sakte ho..

Or ab tum us chakra ke bicho bich jakar khade hojau..

Mea unki baat maan kar waha khada hogaya...

Jaise mea bicho bich aaya mere charo taraf saptrangi roshni failne lagi or jaha me khada tha waha 3 picture banne lagi..


Or wo mere charo taraf gum rahi thi circle mea..

Jab se yaha aaya hu jatke par jatke lag rahe hea..


Or bada jatka tab lagga jab wo tasvire gumte gumte ruki or mea unko clear dekh paa raha tha..

1st tasveer dragon ki thi..


2nd tasveer white tiger ki thi...


3rd tasveer ek white snake ki thi..

Wo tino tasveer jaise he ruki..


Usmea se tiger ki tasveer boli..

Tiger - Malik ab aapko apni saktiyo ke bareme pata chalega..


Par unko hasil karne ke liye aapko kai padav par karne padengea..

Usmea se pehla padav ye training hea uske baad aage kya karna hoga aapko guru y batayenge..

Ham hamesa aapke sath rahenge bas jab aapko hamari sabse jadda jarurat hogi hamese koi na koi aapki raksha karega jab tak aapko apni saari saktiyon ni miljati..

(Tiger ek ladki ki awaj mea baat kar rahi thi matlab wo ek tigress thi female tiger)

Itna bol wo saptrangi roshni mere sarir mea samane lagi..

Or kuch minute baad mea normal hogaya..

Tab guru y bole..

Guru y - Aaryan kal tum 3 baje tumhare colony ke piche jo jungle hea waha muje milna mea tumhe yaha aane ka gupt dwar bataunga taki tum khud yaha aa sako..

Or yaad rakhna insab chijo ke bareme kisiko b mat batana..

Warna tumhare dusmano ko agar galti se pata chala ki tum yaha ho toa wo sabko mar denge..

Aaryan - Ji guru y mea dyan rakhunga..

Meri baate sun guru y ne apna hath aage kiya or usmea se ek roshni nikli or meri neend khul gayi..

Mea uth the he sapne ke bareme sochne lagga qki ye kafi ajeeb sapna tha or muje ye sach lag raha tha par puri tarha confirm hone ka ek he tarika tha raat honeka intazar karna..

Purw din mea ussi sapne ke bareme sochta raha ki aakhir me he q..

Muje he q chuna gaya hea..

Aise he baate sochte sochte raat hogayi..

Mea bed par let kar 3 bajneka intazar karne lagga fir 2.45 ko uthkar mea ready hokar chup chupke jungle ke taraf jaane laga..

Ye jungle mere mama ke ghar ke piche ke taraf tha..

Mea jaise jungle ke entrance ke pass pohcha waha roshni faili or guru y mere saamne aaye mene unko pranam kiya fir unke sath jungle mea jaane lagga..

Kuch dur chalne par ek bargad ka ped ke pass ham ruke or guru y ne ek jad ko khicha jo ki dusri jadon se thodi alag thi 

Jaise he unhone us jad ko khicha bargad ke ped mea ek surung se banne lagii..


Ham us surung mea chalegaye or kal wale hall mea hea pohach gaye..

Yaha aakar guru y ne meri training start ki..

Jisme unhone muje dyan lagana,sehen sakti badana,ved grantho or yudh kalai ke bareme sikhaya tha..

Ye sab mea muje 4 mahine laggaye or in 4 mahino mea meri body b kafi achi ban gayi thi..

Mea ab 6 ft tall handsome hogaya tha..


Mere 6 pack abs b the..


Puri body par cuts the..

Sablog mere is change ko dekhkar shock the qki sirf 4 mahino me ye sab change huye the mujme..

Par fir b jadda ajib na lage isliye mene apne ghar par he basement mea gym banwaliya tha..

Guru y ne kaha ki ab meri training ka aakhri padav suru hoga..

Or isliye muje ek naye guru milenge or wo kal aayenge..

Fir mea apne ghar aagaya or sogaya tha...
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#6
u got one reader bro "sandycruz"...

i have a request... pls start the lines from left corner... der is a little inconvenience reading from the centre...
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#7
(21-11-2018, 06:25 PM)sandycruz Wrote: u got one reader bro "sandycruz"...

i have a request... pls start the lines from left corner... der is a little inconvenience reading from the centre...

Done bro
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#8
bro

are u a writer in xossip???

i m new to hindi section in that site so i couldnt recognise u... if u have any other writers contact then pls bring them back too...
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#9
(21-11-2018, 06:34 PM)sandycruz Wrote: bro

are u a writer in xossip???

i m new to hindi section in that site so i couldnt recognise u... if u have any other writers contact then pls bring them back too...

Ya I used to write on xossip but I don't have any writers in contact
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#10
Update 3


[i]Guru y ne kaha ki ab meri training ka aakhri padav suru hoga..[/i]

Or isliye muje ek naye guru milenge or wo kal aayenge..

[i]Fir mea apne ghar aagaya or sogaya tha...[/i]

[i]Ab agge..[/i]

[i]Kal ka intazar me besabri se kar raha tha qki pichle 4 mahino me mene jitni b mehnat kit thi apni duniya ko bachane ke liye ab wo complete hone wali hea..[/i]

[i]Pura din fir issike intazar me bitgaya..[/i]

[i]Or raatko apne schedule ke hisab se mea hall me pohach gaya apne training ke akhri  padav ke liye par muje kya patta tha ki ye training meri jindagi he badal ke rakhdegi...[/i]

[i]Khair training ke liye jaise he hall me pohacha mere saamne guru y ke sath ek or aadmi khade the wo b guru y ke ham umar ke he the bas unke pehnea huye kapde white ke sath sath golden  be the..[/i]

[i]Khair me unke pass jakar dono ko pranam kiya fir guru y bole..[/i]

[i]Guru y - Aaryan ye hea aacharya raghav (a raghav)[/i]


[i]Ye mere bade bhai hea or tumhare training ka agla padav ye he batayenge..[/i]

[i]A raghav - Aaryan jis speed se tumne tumhari ab tak ki training ki hea ye chij kabilya taarif hea aaj tak siway hamare yuvraj ke kisne b iss speed se ye sab ni sikha hea...[/i]

[i]Or kahi na kahi tumne unko b piche chod diya hea..[/i]

[i]Ab is darti lok par koi b manusya tum se jadda na toa taqatwar he or nahi budhiman..[/i]

[i]Bas tumhe apne shaktiyo ko pahchana hoga or iska sahi istemal karna hoga..[/i]

[i]Rahi baat tumhari training ki jo mea karane walla hu toa wo ek tarha se tumhari pariksha b hogi jo kuch b ab tak tumne sikha he ussea aajmane ki..[/i]

[i]Ussea pehlea mea tumhe tumhari energy source ko  control karna sikhaunga taki tumhe aage ki training mea iski sayata mile..[/i]

[i]Ab jo b mea kar raha hu ussea dyan se dekhna fir waise hea karna..[/i]

[i]Ab tak jo tumne dyan lagana sikha tha jisse tumhari energy source ko tum or taqatwar kar paa rahe the waisa he karna he bas ismea tumhe ussea badane ke sath sath control b karna he jisse tum apne energy se koi b weapon ya hathyar bana sako..[/i]

[i]Ab mere jaisa karna tum..[/i]

[i]Itna bol a raghav dyan lagane lage or fir unhone dono hatho ko aapas me joda..[/i]

[i]Achanak unke hatho ke bich ek roshni se aane lagi..[/i]

[i]Dire dire wo roshni badi or fir ek white gole ka roop lea liya..[/i]

[i]Uss energy ball se kafi heat mehsoos kar paa raha tha mea..[/i]

[i]Ye sab karne ko mea kafi excited tha qki ye ab tak ki gayi training se kafi alag tha..[/i]

[i]Mea b a raghav ke jaisa karne lagga par mea har baar nakam hota..[/i]

[i]Bohot der kosis karne ke baad  mere hatho ke bich ek choti se energy ball aayi..[/i]

[i]Mere energy ball a raghav se kafi choti thi..[/i]

[i]Par fir b mea khush tha ki mene akhir kar dikhaya..[/i]

[i]A raghav man me - Ye kaise hosaktay abi tak aarayn bacha he or pehli baar kar raha he fir b uski energy ball me itni urja he jitne meri energy ball me b ni thi..[/i]

[i]Aaryan he hame uss hadamba or nagraj ke changul se hamare desh ko bacha saktay..[/i]


[i]Par abi usmea kafi samay hea..[/i]

Guru y ne kaha ki ab meri training ka aakhri padav suru hoga..

Or isliye muje ek naye guru milenge or wo kal aayenge..

Fir mea apne ghar aagaya or sogaya tha...

Ab agge..

Kal ka intazar me besabri se kar raha tha qki pichle 4 mahino me mene jitni b mehnat kit thi apni duniya ko bachane ke liye ab wo complete hone wali hea..

Pura din fir issike intazar me bitgaya..

Or raatko apne schedule ke hisab se mea hall me pohach gaya apne training ke akhri  padav ke liye par muje kya patta tha ki ye training meri jindagi he badal ke rakhdegi...

Khair training ke liye jaise he hall me pohacha mere saamne guru y ke sath ek or aadmi khade the wo b guru y ke ham umar ke he the bas unke pehnea huye kapde white ke sath sath golden  be the..

Khair me unke pass jakar dono ko pranam kiya fir guru y bole..

Guru y - Aaryan ye hea aacharya raghav (a raghav)


Ye mere bade bhai hea or tumhare training ka agla padav ye he batayenge..

A raghav - Aaryan jis speed se tumne tumhari ab tak ki training ki hea ye chij kabilya taarif hea aaj tak siway hamare yuvraj ke kisne b iss speed se ye sab ni sikha hea...

Or kahi na kahi tumne unko b piche chod diya hea..

Ab is darti lok par koi b manusya tum se jadda na toa taqatwar he or nahi budhiman..

Bas tumhe apne shaktiyo ko pahchana hoga or iska sahi istemal karna hoga..

Rahi baat tumhari training ki jo mea karane walla hu toa wo ek tarha se tumhari pariksha b hogi jo kuch b ab tak tumne sikha he ussea aajmane ki..

Ussea pehlea mea tumhe tumhari energy source ko  control karna sikhaunga taki tumhe aage ki training mea iski sayata mile..

Ab jo b mea kar raha hu ussea dyan se dekhna fir waise hea karna..

Ab tak jo tumne dyan lagana sikha tha jisse tumhari energy source ko tum or taqatwar kar paa rahe the waisa he karna he bas ismea tumhe ussea badane ke sath sath control b karna he jisse tum apne energy se koi b weapon ya hathyar bana sako..

Ab mere jaisa karna tum..

Itna bol a raghav dyan lagane lage or fir unhone dono hatho ko aapas me joda..

Achanak unke hatho ke bich ek roshni se aane lagi..

Dire dire wo roshni badi or fir ek white gole ka roop lea liya..

Uss energy ball se kafi heat mehsoos kar paa raha tha mea..

Ye sab karne ko mea kafi excited tha qki ye ab tak ki gayi training se kafi alag tha..

Mea b a raghav ke jaisa karne lagga par mea har baar nakam hota..

Bohot der kosis karne ke baad  mere hatho ke bich ek choti se energy ball aayi..

Mere energy ball a raghav se kafi choti thi..

Par fir b mea khush tha ki mene akhir kar dikhaya..

A raghav man me - Ye kaise hosaktay abi tak aarayn bacha he or pehli baar kar raha he fir b uski energy ball me itni urja he jitne meri energy ball me b ni thi..

Aaryan he hame uss hadamba or nagraj ke changul se hamare desh ko bacha saktay..


Par abi usmea kafi samay hea..

Aise he kuch der or practice karne se mea ab apne energy ball ka size bada paa raha tha or sath he usse apne man mutabik yaha se waha pass kar paa raha tha ..

Inshort me kuch had tak energy ko control karna sikh gaya tha tabi muje ek idea aaya or mene apni saari urja or dyan apne hatho me energy ball par conectarte kiya jisse uska size badne lagga or dire dire wo kafi badi hogayi thi..

tabi a raghav nea muje roka or bole bas aarayn agar tumne isse or bara kiya toa iske heat se he duniya tabha na hojaye..





‌a raghav ki baat maan meane gole mea se dire apni urja kam karne lagga jisse uska aakar b chota hogaya fir vo gayab hogaya...





‌kuch der or mene aise he thodi der energy control karne ki practice ki fir ghar aagaya...

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Pichli bar yaha tak 15 update huye the par isbar 3 update mea he yaha tak ki story likh di hea..

Agar kuch confusion ho toa jarur bataye..


Or iske aage se saare update detail mea honge ..

Aage ke update kal aayengea
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Update 4


Tabi a raghav nea muje roka or bole bas aarayn agar tumne isse or bara kiya toa iske heat se he duniya tabha na hojaye..





‌a raghav ki baat maan meane gole mea se diredire apni urja kam karne lagga jisse uska aakar b chota hogaya fir vo gayab hogaya...





‌kuch der or mene aise he thodi der energy control karne ki practice ki fir ghar aagaya...

Ab aage....

Aise he 4 din tak mea apni energy ko control kar ussea ladne ke tarike sikhne lagga..

Aise karte huye muje hamesa mehsoos hota ki ismea kuch toa missing hea...

Mea har bar apne energy ko shape dene ke kosis karta par ho he nai paraha tha...

Mea sirf energy balls he bana sakta tha...


Par muje isse b aage badna tha par 


Na jane kuch toa aisa tha mere andar jo meri energy ko rok raha tha..

Bohot bar training kedoran aisa lagta ki meri energy se he mera sarir fat jayega par tabi wo apne app kam ho jati..

Mea ek limit tak he sab kar paa raha tha...

Mene apni iss duwida ko a raghav or guru y ke b saamne rakha..


Meri bate sun dono muje ajib nazro se dekhne lagee..

{. Guru y apne man me- Bhaiya kya isse wo us khajar ke bareme batana chahiye..

A raghav apne man me - Sayad ye usse control kar leaga..


Agar usne us khanjar ko pa liya toa iski soyi huyi kuch saktiya zarur jaag jayegi...

Guru Y - baat toa tk bhaiya par is khanjar ki raksha wo mayavi chudail zoya kar rahi hea..


Aaryan ko abi uske saamne bejna tk hoga kya..

A raghav - aaj nai toa kal ussea ye karna he tha..


Or us tantrik se ladne se pehlea aarayn ke liye ek acha abyas b hoga or agar aaryan musibat mea pada toa uske dono rakshak toa he hi uske sath hamesa...

Guru y - tk hea bhaiya mea aarayn ko uske bareme bata ta hu fir..  }

Guru y - Aaryan agar tumhe apni energy ko apne man mutabik hatyar mea tabdil karna he toa uske liye tumhe ek chij ki jarurat hogi..

Aaryan - Kya hea aisa guruji bataye muje..


Mea apni energy ko pure tarike se use karna chahta hu...

Guru y - Aaryan tumhe aisa karne ke liyea ek jaduyi khanjar ki jarurat hogi jo yaha se bohot dur hea..


Or uski raksha b ek mayavi chudail kar rahi hea..

A raghav - Tumhe agar us khanjar ko pana hea toa uss chudail ke changul se us khanzar ko lanahoga..

Aarayn - Me zarur us khanjar ko pane ki puri kosis karunga guruji..


Par agar wo jagha yaha se dur hea toa mea waha pochunga kaise..

Guru y - Uski chinta nayi hea aaryan wo toa ham tumhe waha pochha denge par us chudail ko tum mar nai sakte usse mahadev se wardan prapt hea..

Aaryan - Fir guruji us khanjar ko me kaise hasil karunga..

A raghav - Aaryan iska jawab tumhare apne pass he hea..


Tum hea he kuch soch kar ussea harana hoga or us khanjar ko pana hoga tabi he tum puri tarha se apni energy ko control kar paoge..

Guru y - Beta is baat ko yaad rakhna jo abi a raghav ne kahi hea..

Uss chudail ko harane ka rasta tumhare andar he hea..


Bas jo ab tak tumne sikha hea usse use karna..

Aaryan - Tk hea guru y..


Toa fir kab jana hoga muje us khanjar ko lane..

A raghav - Aaryan abi he chale jav...


Mea tumhe sidhe ussijungle mea chod dunga jaha wo khanjar hea..

Wo khanjar jungle me talab ke bicho bich ek pathar par dhasha hua hea..

Tum jab uss khanjar ke ass pass hoge toa wo khanjar ke saktiya tum mehsoos kar paoge or wo tumhe apne taraf khichea gi...

Guru y - Par yaad rakhna wo mayavi chudail hea uski raksha ke liye..

Or usne uss jungle mea tarha tarha ke view rache honge apne tilism se..

Or tumhe un sab se bachte huye uss khanjar tak pohach na hea..

Bas apne man ko shant rakhna har muskil ka jawab tumhare andar he hea bas shant dimag se socho ge toa wo chudail tumhara kuch ni bigar payegi...

Aaryan - Ji guru y mea dyan rakhunga..

A raghav - Aaryan tumhe waha jane se pehlea agar kuch sath lena ho jisse tumhe madat mile toa lea lo..

Qki waqt kam hea wo khanjar tumhe tab he dikhega jab suraj ki kirne us talab par giregi..

Or ye sab sirf 5 min ke liye he hota hea..

A raghav ke baat sun mene apne sath apni ek talwar or khanjar le liyea jisse mea training karta tha..


Or sath he wo jadibuti wala pani b jiise gaav bar jaate hea jo mea vedo ko pad shika tha..

Pehlea uss jadibuti ke pani se gaav barne mea 1 ghanta leta tha par ab mene ussmea kuch or jadibutiyo ko milakar ussea itna powerful banadiya hea ki..

Gaav b turant bar jaate hea or sari takhawat b turant he dur hojati hea..

Apne jarurato ke chije lene ke baad mea a raghav ke pass gaya ..

Unhone mere sar par hath rakha or unke hatho se ek roshni mereandar ane lagi..

Us roshni kea merwandar aate hea mere ankhe chamak ne lagi or unmea se nilli roshni aane lagii..

5 min muje normal hone mea lagge..

Jab mea normal hua toa mere aankhe blue colorke hogayi thi.


Or ab muje kafi dur tak ka dikh raha tha..

Tabi a raghav bole..

A raghav - aaryan abi mene tumhe durdristi ki shakti di hea...

Iski tumhe us mayavijungle mea bohot jarurat hogi..

Waha kadam kadam par traps honge jo tumhe ab asani se dikhenge par fir b dyan rakhna tum..

Aaryan - Sukriya a raghav...


Mea us khanjar ko pake he rahunga..

Itna bol menea dono ka aashirwad liya..

Tabi a raghav ne dono hatho ko gol gol ghumaya or unme se bijliya chamkane lagi or hamare saamne ek portal sa khul gaya...

Portal ke uss taraf andhera dikh raha tha..


Mea heran tha qki ye mene pehli bar dekha tha..

Tabi guru y bole..

Guru y - Beta iss portal ke us par wo jungle hea..

Yaha se aage tumhe akele he jana hoga. 


Meri baat yaad rakhna shant dimag se socho ge toa har muskil ka jawab tumhare he pass milega..

Apna dyan rakhna...

Mene dono ka ek bar fir aashirwad liya or uss portal mea chalagaya..

Portal mea guste he muje ajib se tarange mehsoos hone lagi..


Aisa lag raha tha ki mea bijli ke darwaje se gujar raha hu...

Mea jese he portal ke uss par gaya toa mea chaunk gaya tha qki...

Hope u all enjoy this one..


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Update 5


Guru y - Beta iss portal ke us par wo jungle hea..

Yaha se aage tumhe akele he jana hoga. 


Meri baat yaad rakhna shant dimag se socho ge toa har muskil ka jawab tumhare he pass milega..

Apna dyan rakhna...

Mene dono ka ek bar fir aashirwad liya or uss portal mea chalagaya..

Portal mea guste he muje ajib se tarange mehsoos hone lagi..


Aisa lag raha tha ki mea bijli ke darwaje se gujar raha hu...

Mea jese he portal ke uss par gaya toa mea chaunk gaya tha qki...

Ab aage...

Portal ke ispar ka najar bohot he ajib tha..

Mea is waqt jungle ke sima par khara tha jaha se wo jungle start hotay..

Par chukane wali baat ye thi ki jungle ke sima jaha se start hoti hea waha raat thi or uske is taraf din tha..

Mea yea dekhkar chaunk gaya tha..

Mene insab bato ko najar andaj karke apni nilli ankho se jungle ke taraf dekhne lagga muje jungle bohot se ajib chije dikhi..

Fir mene dire dire aage badna suru kiya..

Is waqt jungle mea andheratha par a raghav ke di huyi sakti ke karan mea aaram se dekh paraha tha..

Mea chalte huye aage badaya tha..


Ke tabi muje mehsoos hua ki koi mera picha kar raha hea..

Par jab mea piche murke dekhta toa waha koi nai hota...

Aise he kuch kadam or chalne ke baad muje ye toa confirm hua ki koi toa he jo mera picha kar raha hea par mea apni ankho se usse dekhni paraha tha..

Mere piche sirf per he per the..

Mea jaise thoda aage bada ki tabi mere pero mea kuch bandne laga..

Mea gor se dekha toa wo pero ki jarre thi..

Or wo mere pero ko jakad kar band rahi thi..

Mene apne hatho se apne aapko churane ki kosis ki par jaise mea hilta toa un jaron ki pakad majboot hojati..

Mere pairo mea aisa lag raha tha ki wo abu kat jayengea itni majboot pakad thi..

Mene apne aap ko shant kiya..


Or sochne lagga ki kya karu..

Tab tak un jarro kq ghera mujhpar barne lagga or wo mere kamar tak aagayi thi..

Tabi mene apni  pit se apni talwar nikali..

Or un jaron ko katne lagga..


Jitna mea unka kaat tha utni he jarre or nikal thi jameen se..

Tabi mere dimag mea ek idea aaya or apne ek haath apne jole mea daal kar jinki mere kandhe par latak raha tha usmea jadibuti ke pani ki shisi nikali or us pani ko apne talwar par daal diya..

Wo pani talwar par daalne ke baad meane fir un jaron ko katna suru kiya..

Magar isbar jaha kahi be mere talwar lagti waha aag lag jati.


(Ye sab mene ved grantho ko padkar banana sikha tha)

Jisse jarre wapas nai aa pari thi mere pass.

Kuch he der mea mene un sabi jaron ko apne sarir se alag kar diya..

Mere aas pass sabi jarre jalkar khak ho chuki thi..

Or ab aur jarre b ni aarahi thi..

Insab se nipat kar mea fir aage badne lagga...

(Yaha batadu ki mene apne sath alag alag or b jadibutiyo ka pani laya hu..


Jo ki mene apne training ke doran bana na sikha tha or ye b unmea se ek thu..


Isse kisi b hathyar pe daal kar agar war kiya jaye toa uss jagha turant aag lag jati hea..

Aise he alag alag tarah ke pani mea apne sath laya hu)

Mea ab pehlea se jadda satark hokar chal raha tha..

Qki ab muje patta chal chuka he ki ye jungle jitna mene socha tha usse b kayi jadda khatarnak he..

Kuch dur aage jane par muje bohot he jadda garmi mehsoos hone laggi..

Aisa lag raha tha ki mea kisi jwala mukhi ke pass hu..

Muje ye baat thodi ajeeb lagi isliye mea ussi direction mea chalane lagga jaha se heat aarahi thi..

Waha pohach kar mene dekha ki mere saamne lawa ke nadi beh rahi hea..

Or us nadi ke ass pass registani mitti thi yani sand thi..

Ab muje lag raha tha ki hona ho us khanjar tak jaane ka raasta is lawa ke uss paar he hoga par iss par kaise karunga..

Fir mene jungle mea se ek bade ped ko apni talwar se katta or usee us nadi ke upar pool jaise rakh diya taki mea uss paar jaa saku..

Par ped rakhte he wo jal gaya wo b kuch he seconds mea..

Ab mea soch mea padhaya tha qki is nadi ko kisi b pool ke jariye paar karna asamnav tha..

Fir mere dimag idea aaya ki mea jump karke uspar challa jaau..

Isliye mea bhag kar kinare se jump kari par jump karte he mea hava me jane ke bajaye niche jane lagga..

Mea lava me girne he walla tha ki tabi mene kinare ko pakad liya..

Or muskil se upar aaya..

Lava ke itne pass jane se mere kapde jalne lagge or ab meare track pant jo pehna tha vo jalkar half pant hogaya tha..


(Sehen sakti ke training ke doran aise kai chije mene sai thi isliye lava ke pass hone se mere body par uska kuch effect nai hua par mea lava ke andar ni ja sakta tha..


Qki yadi mea jatta toa jal jatta)

Badi muskil se mea fir kinare ke upar aaya..

Ab mea pareshan hogaya tha ki ab isse par karu toa karu kaise..

Ab mea bechain hone lagga tha..

Tabi muje guru y ki baat yaad aayi ki shant dimag se sochna hoga muje..

Mene apne appko shant kiya or fir sochne lagga ki kya karu jisse mea us par ja saku..

Na mea kisi b chij ko as a bridge use kar sakta hu or na he mea jump kar ja sakta hu qki us mayavi chudail nea apne tilism sea waha ki gravity bada di hea..

Kuch der sochne par  b muje koi rasta nai najar aaraha tha us nadi ko par karneka..

Muje lagne lagga ki mea us khanjar ko nai paa sakunga tabi mene gusse mea sand ko mutti me pakad kar lava ke nadi mea phenka..

Or jo mene dekha ussea mea chaunk gaya tha..

Akhir aisa kya tha jaane ke liye nxt update ka intazar kare..

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Nice story .....update
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Nice Update Bro....
Ek request thi ki jaise apne pehle post pe Image attach kiye waise bhi age updates mein bh Image attach kijiye like khanjar ka Image......
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Intresting story
Dekhte h kese lavaa ki river parrr karta h
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(26-11-2018, 06:21 PM)Tanu Wrote: Nice story .....update

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(27-11-2018, 10:41 PM)abhi_mishra_91 Wrote: Nice Update Bro....
Ek request thi ki jaise apne pehle post pe Image attach kiye waise bhi age updates mein bh Image attach kijiye like khanjar ka Image......
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(28-11-2018, 05:14 PM)Mahii rathore Wrote: Intresting story
Dekhte h kese lavaa ki river parrr karta h
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Update 6


Mene apne appko shant kiya or fir sochne lagga ki kya karu jisse mea us par ja saku..

Na mea kisi b chij ko as a bridge use kar sakta hu or na he mea jump kar ja sakta hu qki us mayavi chudail nea apne tilism sea waha ki gravity bada di hea..

Kuch der sochne par  b muje koi rasta nai najar aaraha tha us nadi ko par karneka..

Muje lagne lagga ki mea us khanjar ko nai paa sakunga tabi mene gusse mea sand ko mutti me pakad kar lava ke nadi mea phenka..

Or jo mene dekha ussea mea chaunk gaya tha..

Ab aage

Jaise he wo sand lava par giri vahi tehar gayi kuch minute ke liyea or fir niche chali gayi lava mea..

Issea muje idea aaya or meane khade hokar jungle se ek badaor jadda sa ped tod kar layya or usse apni talwar se karkar ek badda or chouda favda banadiya jisse mea sand ko lava me daal saku..

Faavda banane ke baad mene apni puri taqat se usse sand mea andar tak gusaya fir usse daka dete huye kinare par lakar jitni b sand jama hui usse lava mea daal diya..

Aisa kai baar karne ke baad or lava ki nadi or kinare ka level same hua bas fark ye tha ki nadi mea lava ke jagha sand thi..

Ab bas muje jaldi se isse paar karna tha..

Qki lava kabi b sand ko apne sath baha leja sakta tha..

Fir mene apni speed se us nadi ko paar kiya..

Sand kafi daram hochuki thi lava ke wajase par fir b mea usse sehen kar paa raha tha bas mere per jal chuke the..

Dusre taraf pohach kar mene apne bag mea se healing water nikal jo ki mene training ke doran use karta tha apne gaav barne ke liye..

Mene wo pani ka ek gut pi liya jisse mere pair b tk hogaye or mea ab pehlea se jadda fresh feel kar raha tha..

Hard training ke wajase mera stamina kafi bad chuka tha isliye mea agar pure din b doudta rahu fir b ni tahkta tha..

Jaise he pair tk huye..


Meane apne aapko sayi kiya or fir us jungle mea east disha ke taraf chlane lagga..

Muje is waqt malum ni tha kis disha me janna he muje par fir b muje lag raha tha ki east direction he sahi hogi qki suraj ki pehli kiran se he muje wo talab dikhega or suraj east side se aata he hea isliye me ussi disha mea chalne lagga..

Kuch dur jaane par fir muje wahi pedo ka saamna karna padda jinhe mene aaram se jalakar khak kardiya..

Abi suraj ugne me sirf 1 ghanta bacha tha..

Mere pass kafi kam samay tha isliye mea teji se aage badne lagga..

Abi mea kuch dur he gaya tha ki muje bhediye ki awaje aayi..

Par bhediye ke awaj mea me dard mehsoos kar paa raha tha..


(Muje sabi janwaro ki language aati he yaha tak insano me b jitni b language ho wo b..

Ye sab mene training ke doran grantho se sikha tha)

Isliye mea teaji us disha me chalne lagga..

Me thoda aage aaya tha ki muje wo bhediya dik gaya uske per ke aarpar ek badda sa katta gussa hua tha..

Mea jaldi se uske pass gaya or uske pair ko jispar katta lagga tha usse apne hatho me pakda or bhediya se kha..


(Yaha mene uski language mea baat ke thi par hindi mea bataunga)..

Aaryan - Daro mat mea tumhari madat kar sakta hu..


Bas tum shant raho..

Bhediya pehlea toa muje apni basha bolta dek chaunka par is waqt usse dard b kafi horaha tha isliye usne meri baat mani or shant hogaya..

Mene uske pair se katte ko ek he baar me khich kar nikla jisse usse or dard hua par fir b wo usse control kar raha tha tabi..

Mene apne bag se healing water nikala or usse ek gut pila diya..

Jisse uske per ka gaav kuch he der me tk hogaya..

Ab wo puri taraha fit hochuka tha..

Bhediyene khade hote huye mujse kaha..

Bhediya - Shukriya meri madat karne ke liyea..


Mera naam rakha hea or mea is jungle ke bhediyon ka sartaj hu..

Tum yaha ke toa ni hoa..

Tumhe yaha se jaldi chale jana chahiye anyata wo Zoya chudail tumhe b yaha kaid kar ke apna gulam banadegi...

Aaryan - Tum uski chinta mat karo..


Mea yaha wo jaduyi khanjar lene aaya hu..


Kya tum muje bata sakte ho wo talab kaha he jaha wo khanjardasha hua hea pathar mea..

B rakha - Tumne meri madat ki he isliye tumhe zarur batunga par uski raksha wo Zoya kar rahi hea...

Or aaj tak usse koi nai harra paya he kewal us khanjar ke malik ko chodkar..

Isliye us khanjar ki wo raksha kar rahi hea taki apne malik ke aane par wo khanjar unhe lota sake..

Aaryan - dhanyawad dost bas muje waha ka rasta batado tum qki suryoday se pehle muje waha pohach na hoga..

B rakha - Chalo fir tum meri pit par bet jaau..


Mea tumhe waha jald he pohacha dunga..


Par mea us zoya se ladne mea tumhari koi madat ni karunga qki mere saare log uske tilism mea fase huye hea..

Mea chahkar b unhe ni bacha sakta..

Aaryan - Tum uski chinta na karo..


Tumhare logon ko b uske tilism se chuda dunga..

Itna bol mea uski pit par beth gaya or wo rakha teji se doudne lagga.

Or kuch hi der doudne ke baad wo ruka or mujse bola .

B rakha - Yaha se tumhe akele he jana hoga..

Issi disha mea kuch dur chalne par tumhe us mayavi chudail ka ashiyana dikhayi dega..


Uske tk piche he wo talab he jaha wo khanjar laga hua hea..

Rakha ki baat sun mene usse ek baar or dhanyawad kaha fir uss disha mea chalne lagga..

Aage ka update raat mea dunga..


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N agar aapko story achi lagge toa pls rate b kar deana
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Ab real ladaii ka mja aayega
Waiting bhai for next update
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