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Incest ਮਜ਼ੇਦਾਰ ਭੁਲੇਖਾ 2
Too good. Lafz nahi hain tareef ke liye...
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bhai junta curfew luga va.ho sky ty update kr dena
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(22-03-2020, 09:29 AM)Thank Kamboj saab Wrote: Bayi m bhut time da puchya aa kayi jnya nu k m v ek story likhna chonda aa menu ds do yr kida story post honi h

Panjabi stories section tay right side tay new thread da option howay ga us tay click karo baki dekho tusi kidan di story likhni ha sab tun thallay post da button howay ga tan tuhadi story posted
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Waiting for next update
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Ghaint update bai kam khichhi rakh
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Koi jawab nai Tera
Koi jor nai Tera
I salute your writing skills
Imagination, fantasy te words di selection att a bai
Eh Neha seen relate karde o k tann Mann ch agg la daindey ok
Keep it up
Shabash
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Koi aisa scene create kro ki naseebo apne ghar vich chudwane te nuri bahar khadi vekhe
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(23-03-2020, 06:26 AM)ajinohase Wrote: Koi aisa scene create kro ki naseebo apne ghar vich chudwane te nuri bahar khadi vekhe

With all due respect.is writer nu uske hisab se likhne t
De verde.
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awesome story.....
yaara tuhadi writing da koi jawaab nahi.... main tuhadi kayi stories padiyan ne saariyan ik ton badhke ik ne..... keep writing bro.... tusi apne hissab naal likho ( dont need to listen others) kyunki jo bhi tusi likheya hai oh bakamaal likheya..... bas story vich bandh na kareo...... thanks bro for such a wonderful story....
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bahut sohne.....u got some wonderful writing skills veere......enna creative scene plot karde ho .....bai kamaal hai......personally ,impressed.....
tuhadi conversation sabh to jyada hot & erotic hundi hai.....just amazing ....
m sure i 'll b regular reader of ur story now onwards.....
har ek update pichle naalo wad enjoyable hunda........really loving it....
keep going bai
keep writing
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Awesome veer koi mukabala ni. Tuhadi writing da.. Hun agge vekho ki hunda.. Waiting...
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(21-03-2020, 12:06 PM)jatt22 Wrote: krdo update k crona virus krke eh v band ho gya

It is not due to any virus. I will tell the truth . I will sting a little but I will let you know
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Bai ji mera account fake nahi hai
I have only one account.
I comment on the post where my heart says
Some time I have posted hard comments also
It's me who have requested readers not to request or post comments to the story whose writer is not regular
Apprishate the writer only when he gives update
Koi gal hove te pm kar lavi
Tusi aavdi chal jari rakho
U r a good writer.
Bakian da main kuj nahi kah sakda.
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Yaar tu swaad len auna ke investigation karan.. bhncd eda tu shelock homes ni kharda.. fudu janta
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tu swaad len auna ke investigation karan.. bhncd eda tu shelock homes ni kharda.. fudu janta
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Wow a investigation ... 
Koi na ji kal sara punjab tuhada naam lay k b tali bajyouga  jidan corna lyi sunday bjayi c .... .

Tuhada kasoor nyi ji lagda crona virus da asar tihadey dimag tey ho gya .... get well soon ..


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Le j main rebal jatt fer ta bale bale ho gyi
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es ch fooling aali ki gall aa...?
kuch v kre...agla contribute kr rea site te...tu ki likhya ajj tak?
sale chutiye lok...
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(24-03-2020, 06:24 AM)DRAGON WOLF Wrote: It is not due to any virus. I will tell the truth . I will sting a little but I will let you know 

wah bai wah DRAGON WOLF ,tussi tah kamal hi kar ditta ......enna dimag wala banda es xossipy site te ki kar riha.....bai ji tussi taah CORONA virus di medicine bano.....kithe eh comment karan ch tym waste kar rahe ho.....

me do char dina toh tuhade comment dekh riha.....tussi bas writer nu criticism hi apna kamm bna liya....
bai ji tussi v apni creativity dikhao....jo duje nu salaha deniya badi saukhiya....
sanu v apni story te comment & healthy criticism karan da mauka diyo.....

tuhadi jankari layi dass diya me koi aaj kal da story read te comment nhi kar riha.....pichle 7 - 8 saal to comment kar riha jado eh site EXBII hundi si.......

bai je kujh pta na hove taah ....jyada eder uder diya galla nhi karidiya......

enna dimag na laya kro......te praise wali gall ....bai sadde kolo likh nhi hundi story....te jo banda enni mehnat naal likh riha ohnu praise v naa kariye....eh taah galat gall hai.....
aa jede do char comment kar ke ....tussi healthy criticism da naa de rahe ho.....tuhanu kise ne jor ditta bai tussi comment karna hi karna.....na kro bas pad de raho.....kyu aapna kimti tym waste kar raho...... 

don't take it personally...take it as healthy criticism.....as u say......
good bless u.....
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nle dragon wolf story ehni ghaint likh reha y ohnu honsla de bt tu writer nu honsla ta ki dena ohnu na likhn lyi majboor krde oo
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