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Incest Kannttoo fulln tey .... ayo k nyi
(19-03-2020, 10:20 PM)Rebel.Jatt Wrote: Mainu hamesha ton lagda si ke Kavita Khullar nu ego di prob. hai. Nikki nikki gall te update band kar den di dhamki ik achi aadat nahi si.

Par uhna di ego ton menu koi problem nahi si. Mainu kise de subah ton ki lena dena hai. Mainu ik vadhiya story read karan nu mil rahi hai jis karke main xossipy join kita si. Iston vadhke main ki demand kar sakda han.  As a reader jado ik story changi lagdi hai tan naturally  badi curiosity ban jandi hai ke agge ki hon wala hai. Har koi jisnu story achi lagdi hai oh chahunda hai ke jald ton jald update aave take usdi jigyasa shant ho sake.

Is lai jado kai vaar update late ho janda hai ja write regular update nahi dinde tan fir reader nirash ho jande ne. Frustration vich oh writer nu abuse karan lagde hann. Kujh din pehlan menu vi //// te ikk reader ne gala kadhiyan sann. Par main koi jwab na ditta. Update ton baad us reader ne sorry keh ke khud apni comment nu edit kar ditta si. Par menu kise de gala kadhan naal koi farak nahi penda.
Par yaro ikk vaar soch ke dasso ke ki eh fair hai. Koi writer story update nahi kar payunda tan sidha abuse karna suru kar dayo.
Xossip te kai writer hoye ne. Reet, seerat,  masterji, robin, busty te kai hor. Par Kavita vang koi nahi likh sakda. She is amazing writer.  Xossip te uhdi story kinni lambi challi si. Sabh ton vadh page sann. Sabh ton vadh comment sann te sabh ton vadh ke views vi use story de sann. Inni lambi story likhna te uhnu ikk anjam takk pahuchana eh kise hor de vass di gall nahi si. Idde- vadde vadde update hunde sann te kai baar do do update lagatar hunde sann. Te uhna di skill vi unmached si. Kai update inne erotic hunde sann ke baar baar padhan nu dil karda si. Khaas kar brother sister  te bhabhi de kirdar te uhna di story line bahut jabardast si. Bahut hi vadhiya character devlopment kiti Kavita ne us story vich.

Punjabi section vich inni long te amazing story den ton baad vi Kavita nu aksar abuse kita janda reha hai. Eh galat gall hai. Punjabi section vich views de 1 percent vi comment nahi milde fir vi kise ne tuhade sabh de entertainment lai inni mehnat naal ik lajwab story likhi. Sanu uhna de sukarguzar hona chahida hai. Par ho ki riha hai. Update te tan koi comment nahi karda par update na honn di surat vich abuse karan lai har koi tyar hai.

Punjabi section vaise hi dead hai. Main vi pata ni keyon likh reha han. Char panj ghante laga ke update likhan ton baad log do shabad da thank you vi nahi keh sakde. Par aapas vich ladan nu ik duje di ma bhen karan nu hamesha tyar haan.

Veero hausla vadhayo writers da. Je koi update nahi kar payunda tan sabar rakho. Har kise di personal life hai. Respect na dayo par thanks keh ke agle di mehnat da mull ta pa dayo.

absolutley  agreed on all points u made bruv......we r in full support of KAVI ma'am......no disrespect or abusive words from my side in past or next in future, thats for sure.....

she is one of the finest erotic & seductive & more creative writer, punjabi section ever produce till now.....

i know it takes loads of effort & sheer conc. thats why i m waiting for upcoming updates......when she feels & time to be in hands,....
updates may b late but she keep coming back with more erotic & seductive updates ......

she also a human being ......personal stuff & other things also matters ......many times it not feel to write anything....so its necessary to take a break......its not her job to give regular updates .....its more like fun or interest for her to write a story here....
sometime sumthing came up out of nowhere....so she miss the time to update....to which she promised......
don't take it seriously redaers....
keep patience brothers & frnds........

i m here on this xossipy site or xossip or exbii site for more than 7 to 8 years....i have read many story here.....most of story writer left there story in b/w after 2 to 3 updates & never came back......  

but KAVITA ma'am always come back after taking break or when she have time to write wonderful updates for us brothers.....
updates are for us ,not for her......she want u to enjoy her writing skills......
please cherish her efforts brothers.....
i have no idea who is KAVITA KHULLAR, i have not known  her  personally at all.but i know she is an amazing writer,dats what i respect  &  dats  why i praise her all the time.
hopefully u all readers are my frnds do the same ,respect the talent which she possess......
its a request .......

stay safe from CORONA virus...keep safe ur loved one's also......
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' Ki krdi c .. ' jiven e preet ney phone chukeya  ...jeetu ney ehi pucheya ...'
' Krna ki a ..' dudh di balti chuk wadey ton vehrdey wal andi preet  boli ' dudh cho k hatti c ..' 

' mein b huney e aya college ton .. ' roti khan lga c ..' aram nal sofey tey beithda jeetu kann nal phone laa bolea '  sochea pehln tere naal gal kr lwaan  ..' 
' tadkey college ... .. ' rasoyi andr jandi preet boldi boldi chup kr fer boli ' oh mein tan bhul gyi tere ethey tan din hona .. ' 
' Haan evening ho gyi ethey .. ' hasda hoyea  jeetu apney bootan dey tasmey kholda bolea ' din raat da frak a canada tey punjab ch .. sadey ethey sham tey punjab ch saver..' 
'  haan sach ..'  balti ton dudh patieley ch pandi preet kann naal phone landi boli ' sadey ethey tan raat bda meenh pya  '  . 'Acha tun Roti kha lyi ...ki bnaya c aaj  ..' 
' bs khaan lga c ... Mein tan kuch nyi banaya ... job  jaan ton pehln  arshi didi bna k gyi honi ' sofey tey beitha   rasoyi wal vekhda jeetu kuch sochda bolea ' aj paper c jaldi jana pya es lyi arshi didi ney food ..'

' Aap b koi kam kr lya kr ' hasdi jeetu nu mehna mardi  boli preet ' pardda b k awen kudean cherdn janda college ' 


' Krda mein b kam .. ' hasda hoyea jeetu bolea 'baki ethey  kudean cherdn da fashion nyi j psand a tan puch layou j haan tan theek nyi tan koi hor labh layou ...'


'Sachi .. ' hasdi hoyi preet balti ek passey rakhdi boli ' Tun b labh lay koi  ... aukhey velley kam sar deya karu' jeetu nu cherdi preet phone wal vekhdi boli '  jini der mein  canada nyi andi koi  gori tika lay ..usda b sar jayou tey tera b '' 
' Nyi ji mein tan bs..'nah ch  sar hilanda jeetu hasda hoyea bolea 'tere naal e kam sarna  ..hor kdi b kisi  naal nyi ' 

' oye hoye ' hwa ch hath lehrandi preet phone wal vekhdi boli ' fer meri  kiran didi di kyoun '
' Tera e kasoor c. ' lat tey latt rakh apney patt ghutda jeetu hauka lainda bolea ' kiran bhabhi nu ...'
' Eh changa tuhada ' ek dum boli preet 'edr  tun  kehnda  mera kasoor udr kiran didi b ehi kehndi mera kasoor ..   najarey tusi deor bhabhi ney luttey tey kasoor mera wah ji wah  ' 
'Tun   e '  bolda bolda has pya jeetu 
' Ki mein  sachi jeetu tun ' preet b boldi boldi has pyi 'Pkka bhabhi chaud a .. meri b pehln pehln bhabhi bhabhi keh lainda c ' 
' Hye jo mja bhabhi chaud k ' ahh bharda jeetu siskda hoyea bolea 
'Lucha....  pta menu .. bull tuk hasdi hoyi boli preet '  viah ton baad menu vohti samj ghat tey bhabhi samj jyada chaudeya ' 
'Sachi jad tenu bhabhi bna k ' akhn meech ah bharda bolea jeetu ' alag e swaad anda c .. ' 
' Chaudeya hoyea bhabhi da .. ' akhn matkandi hass pyi preet  ' study wal dhiyan dey awen ..' 
' dinda dhiyan study wal  b  pr dil nyi lagda tere ton dur reh k '  ahh bharda bolea jeetu 'hye kiney mahiney ho gye ..' 
' Koi na aa e jana doh ku mahiney ch tere kol fer layoungi khabr bhabhi chaud di ' khil khila k hasdi hoyi boli preet 
' acha tun massi kol jana c ' kuch sochda jeetu gal badlda bolea 

'Haan jana tan c .. pr mausam b kharab .. bapu ji b khetan ch kam krkey ..  tere canada jaan ton baad sara boz unha tey e .. ' kuch sochdi fikr krdi boli preet

' Massi nu kehna c yuvi nu bhej devey   ' slah dinda bolea jeetu '  o aa k lay jayouga  '

' Haan shyad  ohi aawey .. bibi kehndi c bhain naal gal hoyi ' kuch sochdi hoyi boli preet ' mera tan dil nyi jaan da 

' jaa aa yaar.  ' preet nu samjhandey  bolea jeetu ' viah b a  ....   uthey b jana paina '

' Haan kuch sochdi boli preet ' pr edan jwaan  mundey naal ekeli  pind jandi nu sang lagdi a ..' 
' Lay yuvi ton kahdi sang ' hasda hoyea jeetu bolea '  o b deor a tera ..' 
' Ohi tan ...    j o b tere wang lucha hoyea ' jeetu nu cherdi hasdi hoyi boli preet ' hor rah ch kitey rok hath fern lag javey .. na baba naa mein tan keh dena bibbi nu mein nyi jana ekeli yuvi naal ..'
' Kyoun ' preet nu cherda swaad lainda bolea jeetu ' deor a tera .. hak a usda fer ki hoyea j harh huth fer layou..' 
Kuch na boli preet smj gyi jeetu usnu cherd swaad lainda pya hun... 
' Ki hoyea chup kyoun..' preet nu chup vekh fer puchea jeetu ney ' ki sochn lag pyi ..' 
' j usney ajehi koi harkat rah ch kiti ' kuch sochdi hoyi chup kr gyi preet 
' Na na kutti na becharey nu .'. fer phone tey preet nu cherda bolea jeetu  

' Nyi ..kutungi ...  tan nyi ... ' boldi boldi hasdi jeetu nu chiradndi preet boli ' ehi kahungi deora rah ch nyi .. sabr rakh ... tere kol e chali haan  .. ghar puj k  jithey mrji hath fer cha pura kr lawin ...' 
' O teri ' kahli kahli ch bolea jeetu jhatka e lga usnu preet da jwaab sun sofey tey beitha beitha uchal pya 

' Ki hoyea ' jeetu di awaaz sun khila khila k hasdi hoyi boli 

 ' Kuch nyi ..'  apney aap nu normal krn di kosis krda  bechain ho  bolea jeetu  ' haan eh b sahi a  ghar ch aram naal ..' 
' Mjak krdi c .. ' jeetu di bechain hoyi awaaz sun dr gyi  preet lga kuch jyada e bol gyi gal sambhaldi boli  '  pehli gal tan tere wang lucha  nyi yuvi  ...  naley fer usdi ski bhabhi sehron ayi hoyi a usnu ki lord mere hath fern di..' j ferna hoyouga usdey fer layouga ..' 

 
' Manpreet bhabhi ayi hoyi a .. 'bechain hoye jeetu nu sakoon jeha milia .nyi tan ek alag e bechaini c  k preet massi hunna kol rehn chali a tey uthey yuvi ... pr jad pta lga manpreet bhabhi ney b pind hona dil dey kisi kauney ch lukey dr nu kuch hausla milia. kuch der chup reh bolea ' mere walon b pairi paina keh devin manpreet bhabhi nu ...' 
 
 ' keh dayoungi ji pairi paina ... pairan nu  hath b la dayoungi tere wallon '  kuch der chup reh khil khila k uchi uchi hasdi  jeetu nu cherdi hoyi boli preet '  hor tan nyi kitey hath lana apni manpreet bhabhi dey 
' Ki yaar bhabhi a meri ' preet di tichar sun jhepda hoyea bolea jeetu' awen tun ' 
'Jandi haan tenu bhabhi chaud nu  ' fer cherdi boli preet '  viah karwa k b menu vohti samj ghatt tey bhabhi samj jyada chaudeya ..'
' Udon pehln pehln  sang lagdi c tera naa laindey nu .. es lyi bhabhi ' jhepda hasda hoyea jeetu bolea ' waisey tun bhabhi bn dindi  ruh naal  c ..' 
 '


' Bhabhia pehln tan dindia nyi deor nu pr  j dindia tan fer  ruh naal e dindia  ' bull tukdi hasdi hoyi boli preet ' bhul gya kidan teri kiran bhabhi pehln naa naa krdi nakhrey krdi c tey fer  aap chuk chuk tenu kehndi c pa dey deora kyoun tarsanda a ...' 

' Uff preet 'ahh bharda kuch boln e lga c k driveway ch arshi didi di aa ruki car nu vekhda bolea ' Lagda arshi didi aa gye kam ton .....baad ch gal krda ..' 
' Theek a mein b chulleyh chaunkey da kam mukka lwaan fer krdi  gal .. ' kahli kahli ch rasoyi ch pye khilarey wal vekhdi boli  preet '  tere naal galln krdi ney koi kam nyi kitta .. bibi ney aa jhirdkaan marnia ...' 
' Theek a fer   .. mein b roti .. ' sofey ton uthda jeetu fer preet nu cherda bolea ' awen gussey na howin yuvi nu j usney hath ...' 
' Nyi nyi bilkul b nyi hundi tun fikr naa kr ..'  khila k hasdi hoyi boli preet '   waisey tun sab nu apney warga lucha samjda..bhabhi cho....'
' Hye tere wargi patola gaddar bhabhi nu vekh tan sau ton sau deor b lucha...'  ahh bharda jeetu bolea  ' ki pta o b ...' 
' Acha ji menu pta e nyi c '  uchi uchi hasdi hoyi boli preet ' chal changa tun b roti rutti kha mein b kam muka laawan ... ' enha keh kahli kahli ch phone katdi  boli preet bdi muskil naal dandan thalley jeev rakh apney aap nu rokeya nyi tan munh vichon nikln lga c .. ' jey hath fer gya yuvi  fer na teri vohti  suki waps andi pind mud k  ...' 











' Ki gal jeetu roti nyi khadi ..' rasoyi ch jeetu nu lunch box khol roti plates ch rakhda vekh arshi apney kamrey wal jandi jandi ruk boli 
' O didi ek tan college ton late fer preet da phone aa gya ' arshi wal vekhda jeetu bolea ' galln krdey time da pta e  nyi ..' 
' Dopehrey kuch khada c k nyi .. ' kych sochdi hoyi puchea arshi ney 
' Haan haan kha lya c college di mess ch .. ' arshi wal vekhda jeetu bolea ' tusi change kr layo mein tuhadey lyi coffee ..
' Nyi nyi coffee nyi bs ready ho jana pammi udeekdi honi ..' kahli kahli ch apney hath ch bni ghadi wal  vekhdi arshi boli 
'Oh haan mein bhul e gya...  ' ek dum chetey aya jeetu nu ..' es week end ch tusi bahr  apni friend kol ..'
' Haan yaar dil tan nyi krda pr jana paina ..' apna hand baig mez tey rakhdi boli arshi...
' Vohat changa kita jehrda tusi ja rahey o..  'plate chuk rasoyi ton bahr aa dinning table tey beithda jeetu bolea ' mein tan aap tuhanu kehnda  rehnda  .. bahr jaya karo friends nu milia karo ... kuch mind change hoyouga ..kuch streess  ghatugi ..
'Stress tan us din....  jis din satti ton ...' apney kamrey wal jandi burburayi arshi ....



Shyad sahi keh rahi c arshi didi .. usnu aj b chetey c jad tin ku mahiney pehln o study lyi canada aya c ...  


Udon............







Airport ton bahr nikldey jeetu nu e pta c dil usda kini jor di dhardk riha ... begainey mulk ch aa tan gya study lyi hun agey .. eda wada airport ....bahr  khadiean gaddean ...wadiea wadiea sadakaan ...sab nu lain koi na koi aya hoyea c usnu b lain arshi didi ney aana c .. gal hoyi c jahaaj ch beithn lgey .. ena lamba safar  kdi nyi kitta c .. thakawat naal bura hall .. phone b nyi usda chal riha .  hun kidan phone kr dasuga didi nu o k puj gya airport tey .. ayi honi didi lain ehi soch arshi didi nu bheed vich  labhn lga .. pr usnu arshi didi kitey b njr naa aayi .. j didi naa lain ayi fer .. college da address hay uthey chaleya jayounga.. ehi sochda arshi didi nu labhda edr udr vekhn lga pr didi usnu kitey njr na ayi... keha tan c didi ney airport tey usnu lain ayougi .. flight da time b puchea c .. pr kitey dikh nyi rahi ..dil ch haul pain lga.. apney aap nu begainey mulk ch ekela vekh  ghabrahat hon lgi .. gussa tey khij b aa rahi c  phone  kyoun nyi chal riha ..  nedey tedey koi telephone booth b nyi dikhya

' Jeetu jeetu .. " kanna ch pyi arshi didi di awaaz sun dil khushi ch uchal pya ...samney aa khadi kudi nu akhn aad add vekhda socha ch pay gya .. awaaz tan arshi didi di e c pr eh kaun ..
' Mein tenu awaaz maardi pyi a tun vekh e nyi riha ..' jeetu wal vekhdi arshi muskurandi chehkdi hoyi boli 
' Didi tusi'  hairaan hoyea arshi didi nu pehchanan di kosis krda  jeetu  gaur naal usdey chehrey wal vekhda bolea 
' Haan kyoun..' muskurandi arshi apney munh tey ayi wallan di latt prey krdi boli '  jad tun gate ton bahr niklda pya c awaaz b mari pr tun bina suney e dujey passey ..
' O o ' apni jhep mitanda jeetu arshi nu upr ton lay haithn tak vekhda bolea '  pta nyi lagea ..  pehchania e nyi tuhanu ..sach e keh riha c jeetu  usney tan aksar pind ch arshi didi nu  suitan ch e vekhea c .... pr .. samney jean top ch khadi arshi nu vekh pehchan e nyi sakeya.. pehlan nalo thori  healthy   khulley lambey straight reshmi  wall chamkdean kalia kalia  akhn... muskurandey gulabi bull ..lambhi surahidaar gardn ... ghutwey top  tey fitting jean ch bhareya bhareya jism  ...   arshi didi da ek dum modern look    thora hairaan krn wala c us lyi  ..



' ki sochda ' jeetu nu gaur naal apney wal vekhda vekh agey nu ho usdey gal lag mildi arshi hasdi hoyi boli'  ki hoyea apni didi nu pehchaneya nyi  ..'
 Nyi .nyi pr tusi . ' muskuran di kosis krda jeetu apni jhep mitanda gal badlda  bolea  ' Jeeja ji nye aye ' 
' satti job tey .. ' jeetu dey hathon trolly fad  di arshi  boli 'chal  aa ghar chalea .. gaddi udr khadi a ...'


Kuch pal khada pta nyi ki sochda riha shyad yakeen nyi ho riha c eh arshi didi e a . trolly fad usdey agey agey  gaddi wal turi jandi arshi didi da confidence .. tey chaal ..  na chahundey hoye b usdean akhn didi dey lak tey tik gayea neeley rang di  ghutwi jean ch doldi bund tey chittadan tey tight fitting usdey dono sudaul bahr nu ubrey hoye  chittadn ch thirkn bhari lachak paida krdi ..  uchi addea dey sandles krkey ek alag e  madak c didi di tauur ch ... didi di awaaz sun   apney sar nu jhatka dey  apney aap nu sambhalda edr udr vekhn lga 
' Aa gaddi ch beith ' smaan gaddi ch rakh.. kol khadey jeetu  nu kuch sochda vekh arshi hwa ch ud k munh tey aye walln nu pichey kr uswal vekhdi boli  ' ki soch riha 
' Nyi kuch nyi ... muskuraan di kosis krda jeetu car ch beithda bolea  ' car tusi chalayoungey ..
' aho ..kyoun ' car start kr apney lak tey belt bn jeetu  wal vekh usnu b  belt laan da ishara krdi boli '  safr ch koi problem tan nyi hoyi ' 
' Nyi didi '  car dey sheeshey ton bahr nu vekhda jeetu normal hunda bolea '  tuhanu airport tey na vekh ghabra gya c uton mera phone b nyi chalda .. sakoon jeha milia c usnu car ch beithdey . Ek lamba sah lainda bolea '  safr kafi lamba c thak gya mein tan jahaj ch beitha beitha  ..'

' Koi na ghar puj k jinna marji aram .. ' chehkdi muskurandi hoyi jeetu  wal vekhdi arshi  boli '  college tan tera agley week ton start hona ..
' Hanji didi ' sadak tey bhajdia gaddia tey turey jandey lokan wal vekhda jeetu  aram naal beithda bolea ' menu tan pta nyi kinni dur tey kithey hona college...pehley din tusi chad k ayoungey ..'
' Haan haan kyoun nyi mein apey ..'   hasdi hoyi boli arshi '   o sari jimmeywari meri ..tun fikr na kr usdi ... ahh lay fad  phone ... pehlaan massi huna nu phone kr das dey  tun puj gya canada ...'









' Jeetu uth cha pee lay ...'chah dey doh mug chuk kamrey ch aa arshi sutey pye jeetu nu bdey laad naal awaaz maar uthandi boli  ' chal uth voht so lya...'
Jad na utheya chah ek passey rakh  sarhaney beith gaur naal sutey pye jeetu dey masoom chehrey wal vekh usdey walln ch ungl ferdi hass pyi nikka hunda b edan e sutta hunda c .. kinia awaazan marnia paindia c uthaan lyi ... 
'Hanji didi '  kanna ch pyi arshi didi di awaaz sun akhn khol ..us wal vekhda bolea ' tusi aa gye  job ton ' 
' Haan huney e ayi .. ' jeetu wal vekhdi arshi  muskurandi  cha da mug jeetu nu fradndi  boli ' mera cha peen da dil c .. sochea tere lyi b bna lwan .. menu b company ho jayougi .. 

' Neend e bdi ayi ...' uth k bed naal dho laa beithda jeetu 'chah da mug farda bolea .. " thakawat naal bura haal c ..'
'Ani e c .. ' eni lambi flight ton baad jet laig tey thakwat normal ' jeetu kol e bed di nukr tey beithi arshi hasdi hoyi boli ' ek doh din lgangey thakawat dur hon nu ..
' Tusi kadoh  aye job ton ..' chah da ghut bharda jeetu kuch sochda bolea 
'huney e ayi ..' jeetu wal vekhdi arshi boli. ' vekhya tun sutta pya ... ' 
" Eni der sutta riha ..' thora hairaan hunda jeetu bolea " tusi iob ton b aa gye tey mein sutta ..' 
' Pind b tan nikkey hundey edan e sonda c .. chetey a naa jad sadey kol chuttia ch anda c  ' jeetu wal vekh usnu cherdi arshi boli ' awaazn maar maar thak jandey c pr tun machla bn sutta rehnda c .. ' 
' Jeeja ji aa gye ' gal badaldey kamrey ch edr udr vekhdey jeetu ney puchea 
' Nyi ajay nyi ..' cha da ghut bhaardi arshi boli 
' O tan tuhadey ton b pehln job tey  gye c .. fer b  ' arshi wal vekhdey burburaya jeetu ... kuch bechaini b c usnu .. pehli baar milna c arshi didi dey gharwaley nu .. ek ghabrahat jehi .. pta nyi kidan bolugey ki gal karugey .. ki kahugey ..
Kuch na boli .. arshi chah peendi kuch der chup reh   boli .. ' mein change kr lwaan fer roti bna di haan '
' Jeeja ji aa jaan fer ..' chah da mug arshi nu franda jeetu bolea  ' ekethey khawangey ..' 

' Usney nyi ana .. ' jeetu dey hathon chah da mug fard khadi hundi boli arshi 
'Kyoun kitey dur job tey jandey ney .. ' arshi wal vekh puchea jeetu ney
' Nyi esi sehar ch a '  kuch sochdi hoyi boli arshi 
' Fer kyoun nyi aana ' thora hairaan hunda bolea jeetu ' tusi daseya nyi c mein aa riha canada ' 
' Vekh jeetu mein tere naal es barey gal b krni c  pr.. ' chah dey khali mug mez tey rakh arshi jeetu kol beithdi boli '  pehlan promise kr kisi nu nyi dasunga ' 
' Kehri gal...didi  '  sida ho bed tey  beithda jeetu utsuk ho bolea 
' Pehla meri sonh kha kisi nu nyi dasunga ' bechain hoyi arshi jeetu da hath fad apney sar tey rakhdi boli 
' Nyi dasda  didi ..'  hairaan hoyea jeetu arshi wal vekhda bolea '  tusi daso kehri gal a ..' 
' Mein tey satti hun ekethey nyi rehndey ' kuch der chup reh boli arshi ..'  mera matlab ek saal hon lga o kitey hor rehnda tey mein ethey apney ghar ' 
' Kyoun..'  samj naa ayi ki keh rahi a didi 
' Mein nyi us naal reh sakdi .. ' thori uchi awaaz ch boli arshi ' jad mein canada ayi udon tan sab theek pr doh ku saal baad kafi bdl bdl gya satti ..  niki niki gal tey behas krda ladan lag janda....  kyi baar tan .. ' 
' Ki .. ' hairaan hoyea jeetu arshi dean akhn ch vekhda burburaya ' nyi nyi ..'
' Aukha ho gya c usnaal rehna' pareshaan hundi arshi boli  'fer pta lga usdi ethey kisi gori naal viah ton pehln di gal a..' 
' Nyi nyi..edan nyi ' yakeen nyi hoyea jeetu nu jo didi das rahi c 
' Haigi a.. aj kal usnal e rehnda ..' apni gal tey jor dindi boli arshi 
' Tusi es barey sanu .. ' pareshaan hoyea jeetu bebsi mehsoos krda bolea ' matlab pind ch massi ji nu ..' 
' Nyi nyi esi lyi tenu  keha ' kahli kahli ch jeetu nu tokdi boli arshi '  kisi nu pind ch  na dasin ...tenu meri sonh ' 
Kuch na bolea pr didi  da dukh sun pareshaan ho utheya
' Mein vohat khush haan usnu chad k.. ' jeetu nu pareshaan ho apney wal vekhda vekh samjandi hoyi boli arshi '  nyi tan har velley ladayi jhagda kalesh tang aa gyi c .. hun o apney rah mein apney rah' ek lamba  sah laindi arshi edr udr vekhn lgi  
' Ohh ..'hauka e nikl aya jeetu da o tan ehi soch riha c.. didi canada aa bdi khush ... 
' Tenu nyi pta jeetu ' hichki laindi jeetu nu fer samjandi arshi boli '  mein kiney dukh vekhey ethey aa  pr ghardeya nu das dukhi nyi krna chahundi c ..'
' Fer b ..' kuch sochda hoyea bolea jeetu 
' Vekh jeetu ..tenu airport tey e dasna c fer  sochea..' jeetu wal vekhdi arshi boli  'sham nu job ton aa k aram naal gal karungi ..' 
'Asin  sarey tan ehi sochdey c  tusi ethey canda aa... ' bolda bolda chup kr bolea jeetu '  bda galat hoyea didi ' 
' Khush haan jad di uston vakh hoyi haan .... bs kuch dinna ch sada  divorce .... ' jeetu wal vekhdi arshi us da hath fardi boli ' minat ali gal a tenu meri sonh  ghardeya nu naa dasin .. jad divorce ho jayou fer mein aap e mauka vekh...'
 ' Nyi dasda  ..' kuch sochda jeetu pareshaan ho bolea ' pr tusi ethey ekeley..  kidan rehendey   ..' 
' Job krdi haan..  tey ghar da  duja portion b rent tey ditta hoyea .. usdi tension  nyi.. ' ek lamba sah laindi boli arshi '  ulta jad satti mere naal rehnda c usda kharcha b menu e chukna  painda c ...' 
' Ohhhh ..' kuch kuch samj ayi jeetu nu.. dukh b lga ...  pr pta nyi kyoun ek sakoon mehsoos hoyea dil nu .. nyi tan ehi soch soch ghabrahat tey kahli paindi c k ghar didi nal jeeja ji b honey pta nyi kidan di nature hoyougi ..keho jeha behave krangey..   us nu ghar aya vekh ..   o tan jeejey nu kdi milia b nyi c ......
















'Chal aah kam b mukya   ' manjey tey beithi navjot baig ek passey rakhdi boli  '  menu tan lgda c wahla time lagu sehar pr jaldi vehlian ho gayean ..' 
'Jaldi mummy ... char bjan lgey ney tey mein preet bhabhi nu lain b jana ' navjot wal vekhda yuvi bolea '  hanera ho jana uthey pujdey pujdey '
' Aho sach nee ' manpreet wal vekhdi navjot boli ' bhain da phone b aya c puch rahi c turya k nyi yuvi ..' 
' Javey hun apni preet bhabhi kol ' yuvi wal vekh khind khinda k hasdi hoyi boli manpreet ' asin kehra rokeya ... sada kam tan muk gya ' 
' bhukh lgi honi yuvi nu .. tun rotti tuk da kr  ... mein wadey ch dangran nu pathey pa k ayi 'manjey ton uthdi navjot rishu di ungl fad usnu apney naal lijandi boli ' chal aa putt asin dangran nu pani dhani puch layea..'
' Bs mummy ji suit bdl k roti pka dindi haan .. ' apney modey tey chunni theek kr kapdeya dey baigs chukdi manpreet yuvi wal vekh akh mardi boli ..
Dil e dhark utheya yuvi da jad bhabhi ney us wal vekhdey akh maar k  keha  ' suit bdl  k roti pka dindi haan ..'  enj lga jiven bhabhi ney akh maar ishara kr puchea  hovey ..'' vekhni aj b   kapdey badldi bhabhi  '
' Chal changa theek a  ' bina manpreet wal vekhey navjot dangraan dey wadey wal jandi boli  ' pehln yuvi nu tor roti khila k ..'
' Theek a mummy ji...  ' chehkdi akhn matkandi  manpreet  yuvi wal vekhdi usnu cherdi boli ' oye  vekhni bhabhi kapdey badldi aj b...' 
 

' Haan...'  ek dum   khush hunda chehkda hoyea bolea yuvi  ' aawan andr ...' 
' Andr nyi bahron jithon kal vekheya c ..' akhn matkandi manpreet apney kamrey di takki wal vekhdi boli ' hay himmat ..' 
Kuch na bolea yuvi ghar ch mummy o kiven takkii ton jhatti .. 
' Soch lay .. ' yuvi nu sochan ch pya vekh manpreet fer  usnu cherdi   uksandi akh mardi boli '  jehri kal thori vekhi c ki pta aj puri ...' 
' Sachii .. ' hauka lainda uchal e pya yuvi bhabhi di gal sun 
' suit badln chali haan andr.. ' akhn matkandi dangran dey wadey wal vekh yuvi wal vekhdi boli manpreet '  hun j  tere ch himmat a   takki ton vekhn di   taan vekh lay ' 
' Sachi bhabhi '  apney bull chabda yuvi  takki wal vekh fer  dangran dey wadey  wal vekhda chehkda hoyea bolea
' Aho sachi .. ' ena keh gutt nu jhatka dey pichey  sutt  kahli kahli turdi manpreet buhey kol puj  akh maar yuvi nu  takki waal aan da ishara kr buha band krdi andr wad gyi 

bed kol puj  moddeya ton Chunni lahndi   takki wal vekhdi manpreet nu ..  pta c  lucha pakka takkii ton jhattia maruga...  ehi soch takki wal pith kr kammej di kannia fad upr chukn lgi..  dil dhark b riha c usda pr yuvi nu tarsda vekhn da  ek alag e swaad c   ...
Kameej ek passey rakhdi ney jad gardan ghuma takki  wal vekheya yuvi nu uthey na vekh samj gyi himmat nyi hoyi honi yuvi di mummy ji dey ghar hon krkey ...
Ayouga tan jarur ehi sochdi  salwar khol pairan vichon kadn lgi pr akhn usdean khirki wal vekhdia yuvi nu udeek rehea c ..
Salwar teh laa ek pasey rakh baig vichon dibba kad aj lyandi kachi tey   bra vekhn lgi .. eni patli tey niki c kachi k pyi ... naa.. payi ek brabr ... aar paar sab khuch dikhna.. janbuz k yuvi nu dikhan lyi tarsan lyi mummy ji ton chori khardi c ... 
'Ja vey teri kismat ch nyi bhabhi di vekhni ..' kol pya ghar paan wala suit chukdi ney ek baar takki  wal vekhea.. udr vekhdey e  dil usda dharkda  uchal pya .. bina akh jhapkey munh kholi takki kol  khada  yuvi uswal e vekhda..  msti ch chehkdi khumari naal  kambn  lgi ...  cha e chard gya yuvi nu kamrey andr jhatti marda vekh Jad usdean akhn yuvi naal milian bharwatey chuk uswal vekhdi ney isharey naal puchea kithey reh gya c...

Pr yuvi nu koi hosh nyi c  usdean akhn  taan kachi  bra ch   khadi manpreet dey jism tey tikian  ..
Nangi gori pith tey jhuldi ghutt moddey tey chimbdean bra dean pattian .. bharwa lak halki jehi lachak naal sajey paseey nu jhukya tey lak naal chimbdi kali kachi di waist band ..  jini jor di yuvi da dil dhadak riha c uston wadh jor naal jean ch ghutea akad da lun funkarey marda ... gori gundaaz bund kali kachi ch lishka mardi  sudaul pichley patt tey nangia lattan.. jan nikln lgi usdi..... besabra ho bull chabda sochn lga late ho gya oh.....pr  jad bhabhi ney gardan ghuma us wal vekhdey hoye hath pichey kr bra da hook kholea......






























Next update tommarow.. i promise


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Super update please next update jaldi
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(24-03-2020, 06:02 PM)kavitakhullar Wrote: Bs thori der hor wait kro pls aj sure update

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Pr yuvi nu koi hosh nyi c  usdean akhn  taan kachi  bra ch   khadi manpreet dey jism tey tikian  ..
Nangi gori pith tey jhuldi ghutt moddey tey chimbdean bra dean pattian .. bharwa lak halki jehi lachak naal sajey paseey nu jhukya tey lak naal chimbdi kali kachi di waist band ..  jini jor di yuvi da dil dhadak riha c uston wadh jor naal jean ch ghutea akad da lun funkarey marda ... gori gundaaz bund kali kachi ch lishka mardi  sudaul pichley patt tey nangia lattan.. jan nikln lgi usdi..... besabra ho bull chabda sochn lga late ho gya oh.....pr  jad bhabhi ney gardan ghuma us wal vekhdey hoye hath pichey kr bra da hook kholea......

jhatkey nal pith tey dhili hoyi bra nu vekhda bull chabda kambn lga ....moddya ton pattia prey kr jidan bhabhi ney bra lah ek passey nu sutti . wahan kolon   njr andi mummeya di golayi vekh addea chuk chuk mummeya nu vekhn lyi besabra ho uthea..  sahh niglda wadey wal vekh mud takki ton  jhatti maar manpreet nu kehn e lga c bhabji edr nu ghumo pr bhabhi nu lak ton kachi fad thalley krdi vekh sah e ruk gye usdey ... nangi hundi bhabhi di bund tey dono gol gol chittad .. jeev usdi tallu naal lag gyi..   jad bhabhi ney kachi pairan vichon  kad ek passey suti ....usney tan sochea c bhabhi thori jehi thalley kr upr nu chuk layo ... pr andr bhabhi ek dum nangi khadi . Bs pith tey jhuldi gutt .. dono nangey bharey bharey  chittad tey unha nu vakh krdi bund di lakeer . Akhn tikayi bhabhi dey pichley pattan vichaley vekhdey nu jad fudi dey bull njr naa aye .  bdi muskil naal apney sah niglda hichki lainda   bolea  ' bhabhi edr nu ghumo ' pr awaaz usdey gall  vichon naa nikli  ...  lun tan pent ch pattan jogga ho gya 


Gardan ghuma yuvi wal vekhdi manpreet nu yuvi di halat vekh cha e chadeya hoyea c.. jwaan mundey samney nangi khadi dean khumari naal lattan kamb rehea c pr jo swaad usnu yuvi dey munh tey ayi bechaini  bekrari  tadaf vekh mil riha c  usnu vekhn lyi e tan o luchi bn usdey samney suit bdl rahi c
' Nyi bhabhi ' sah niglda manpreet nu bra paan ton rokda burburaya yuvi... pr bdi muskil naal usdey munh vichon awaaz nikli .. bhabhi nu bra chuk modey tey fsa mummeya tey adjust krdi vekh sabr muk gya usda  dil kitta takki di chaugath patt andr wad javey 

' edr nu  ghumo na bhabhi ' bechain hoyea yuvi kambdi awaaz ch siskda  mintaan krda burburaya pr manpreet tey usdi awaaz da koi asar na hoyea  ulta usnu tadfda bekabu ho bulln tey jeev ferda vekh kachi chuk pairaan ch fsa upr nu chukn lgi  jiven jiven manpreet kachi upr nu chuk di ja rahi  yuvi dean akhn bhabhi dey pichley pattan vichelyo jhatti mardi fudi nu vekhn lyi bekraar ho uthea ...pr manpreet ney b aj usnu tadfa k marn da pura sochea hoyea c .. sidi khadi khadi ney bdey saleekey naal kachi edan upr chuki k tarsda e reh gya yuvi par picheo bhabhi di fudi di jhalk na vekh sakeya .. jidan jidan manpreet kachi upr chukdi ja rahi c yuvi di bhabhi di fudi vekhn di umeed mukdi jaa rahi c..
Lak tey kachi set krdi ney mayous hundey yuvi dey munh wal vekh apni bra wal vekheya .. chunni nalo b patli bra ney usdey mummey  e bs  kaid kitey c .. mummeya di golayi sudaulta tey kalia kalia doddia tan saf njr andia  .. lag e nyi riha bra pyi hoyi .. pattan vichaley jhatti mardi ney ek baar tan akhn e band kr layean ...kehn nu e kachi payi c ..  pr patli niki jehi kachi vichon jhattia mardey fudi dey ubrey hoye bull saaf njr andey .. 


'Bhabhi edr nu ghumo na' bull chabda besabra hoyea yuvi  sabr na kar sakeya .. fikey rang di kachi bund tey chimbdi .. enj lag riha c jiven bhabhi dey dono chittad nangey hon  .. 


' Holi bol .... .kuteeya mummy sun ...' yuvi di awaaz sun  kahli kahli ch usnu tokdi boli manpreet'  juttia pwania mere ' 
' Bhabhi edr nu munh karo na .. ' manpreet di nangi bund nu vekh hauka lenda bechain hoyea yuvi apney sah kabu krda holi jehi bolea 

Ghum k yuvi wal vekhdi nu cha chadeya hoyea c jwaan mundey nu apni fudi dikha tadafaan da pr ek niki jehi jhijak b c .pta nyi yuvi nu usdi fudi psand b ayou k nyi . Chahey ek b baal nyi  kori mulyam lishkhdi c fer b  . dono hath apney pattan vichkar rakh fudi lykondi boli'  lay kr lya tere wal munh ...das ki kehna ' 
' Hye bhabhi'  khada khada e uchal pya yuvi .. bra ch kaid saaf njr andey  dono sudaul mummey .. enj lagea jiven bhabhi nangi khadi hovey .. c b takreebn takreebn nangi  patli bra bs kehn nu usdey mummey dhak rahi c dono mottey mottey dudh wargey chittey  lishkdey mummey ... kalia nukeeliya doddia saaf njr andia  jism usda akad k kambn lga ...eni niki bra k dono mummya nu vakh krdi ghatti puri njr andi ...





' Oye...wadey wal b vekhda reh kitey mummy na aa javey ..  ' besabrey hoye yuvi nu apni hik utey njraan tikayi khada vekh manpreet bull tukdi boli 
' Ajay uthey e a .. ' sah niglda yuvi manpreet dey mulyam gorey dhid wal vekhda mud usdi hik tey akhn tika  mummeya di golayi tey doddia da  nukeelapan naapda  bdi muskil naal  bolea 


' Khush hun ..'  yuvi di halat vekh  chehkdi bull tukdi manpreet nu  ek alag e khumari bhareya sarur aa riha c 

' Haan ....' apney sah niglda yuvi manpreet dey majboot gol pattan wal vekh aukha sah lainda keh tan lga c '  bhabhi hath chuko apney uthon ..' 
' Hor tan nyi kuch vekhna ... ' tedi akh naal takki tey khadey tadfdey bechain hoye yuvi wal vekhdi manpreet boli ..
' Haan haan ..' kahli kahli ch pagal hunda yuvi manpreet dey hathn wal vekhda bolea enj lga jiven rabb ney usdi nedey ho sun lyi  besabra ho akhn pattan vichaley rakhey hathn wal vekhn lgs  ' hath chukko na uthon ..' 
' Tun na kahin...... bhabhi lara laa k mukr gyi ..' yuvi wal vekhdi manpreet apney hath kachi  ton prey krdi boli ' kr lay cha apna pura ..
Lattan kamb gayean munh khulla reh gya.. jeev  tan tallu naal e lag gyi .. bhabhi ney tan sachi fudi uton hath chuk lye ...khada khada kambda  hoyea   j takki na farda tan shyad dig e janda.. bdi muskil naal apney aap nu sambhaleya   .. chahey dur khadi c bhabhi par bhabhi dey pattan vichaley pyi hoyi kachi nu vekh tan usda lun pent faad bahr aan lga   bra wang kachi b uni e patli .. bina akh  jhapkey gaur naal bhabhi dey pattan vichkar vekhdey hoye dey sah upr thalley hon lgey ... jindgi ch pehli baar fudi vekh riha c... takreebn takreebn  nangi e c fudi.... kachi tan bs  kehn nu e ek parda c aar paar sab dikhda .. chunni nalo patli halkey gulabi rang di  kachi fudi dey ubrey bulln naal chimbdi tey halki jehi fudi di lakeer ch fsi ...  butth baneya bhabhi dey pattan vichaley bni ' V' shape nu vekhdey nu yakeen nyi ho riha c apney aap tey .uslyi tan sufna e c .. jindgi ch pehli baar fudi vekh riha c .. gulabi fudi dey ubrey hoye dono bull tey unha nu vakh krdi fudi di draar .. khadey rehn aukha ho gya haklanda haukey lay siskda kambn lga 
' Khush hun.. '  yuvi  nu apney pattan wal vekh aukhey aukhey sah lainda vekh manpreet chehkdi hoyi boli .. ek dr ek jijhak b c k nangi tan ho gyi mundey samney  psand b ayougi k nyi..pr yuvi dean chamkdean akhn kambdey bulln vichon nikldey haukey vekh cha  chard da ja riha c.... 


' Haan...  ' akhn manpreet di kachi tey tikayi bull chabda yuvi behal hoyea bolea '  hye kinni sohni saaf dikhdi 
' Sachi ... ' yuvi dey munh ton tareef sun apni kachi wal vekhdi manpreet chehkdi boli  ' meinu tan  dr  c  pta nyi tenu psand  b .. 
' Vohat e sohni.. apni hik tey hath rakh  bulln tey jeev ferda besabra hoyea manpreet wal vekhda burburaya yuvi ..."  jannat .... Kash tusi buhey  di kundi na layi hundi mein hor nedeyo.. ' 
' Kini nedeyo .. ' yuvi di jaan kad di manpreet takki  kol andi  usnu hor bechain krdi boli ' eni nedeyo ..'

' Hye bhabhi .. 'dono hathan naal takki fad andr nu jhakda yuvi apney wal andi bhabhi di  kachi andr hundi fudi di  thirkn vekh pagal e ho uthea .. bull sukn lgey ...awaaz sahan ch atak gyi ..gulabi rangt ch lishkdey ubrey hoye fudi dey dono bull kadi aps ch jurdey kdi halkey jehey vakh hundey  ...dhardkn ruk gyi usdi .. samney khadi bhabhi dey sudaul majboot mottey patt tey pattan vichaley saaf njr andi fudi ... bulln tey jeev ferda  hichkian lain lga
 
Neend ton e jageya yuvi jad manpreet ney andron takki bnd krdi keha ..' tun naa kahin bhabhi ney meri lulli tan vekh lyi pr apni nyi dikhayi .. ...










' Kiven yuvi ..." bahr aa hik tey chuni swaardi manpreet  chehkdi  yuvi wal vekh kuch boln e lgi c k wadey wallon mummy nu andi vekh gal bdldi boli  ' chal hath dho  tyar ho mein uni der tere lyi roti ..'

' Hanji bhabhi ..  ' mummy nu vehredey ch ayi vekh apney aap tey kabu rakhda yuvi ghutwey suit ch khind khind njar andey manpreet dey utaar charaav vekh bolea ' tusi bnawo roti mein aya tyar ho k ..'  akhn agey hun  b andr khadi nangi bhabhi dey gadraye ang ..tey hun fikey neeley rang dey suit ch lukey ... dil usda kr riha c aj  kitey na javey ...  mummy ton akh bacha hath dhonda manpreet wal vekh aaah bharda bolea  ' Bhabhi sochea nyi c tusi apni... meri taan jaan e..'  
' Sochea munda tarsya pya ..' gardan ghuma mummy wal vekhdi bull tukdi holi jehi boli manpreet ' chal  dikha e dewan..  pr dr b lagda c tenu psand ayou k nyi..' 
' Uff bhabhi gulab dey full dean pattia wang ...  ' bechain hunda yuvi ahh bharda bolea '  enj lga jiven jannat vekh.. 
' Sachi tenu sohni lgi '  yuvi wal vekhdi manpreet dilon khush ho chehkdi hoyi boli ..
' Haan bhabhi vohat e sohni.. '  jad tusi takki kol aye .. ' sarur ch dubeya angrayi lain lga  yuvi bolda bolda chup kr  gya jad ehsaas hoyea kol e manjey tey mummy beithi .....

Manpreet nu b jad mummy ji kol e beithey hon da ehsaas hoyea akhn churandi bina kuch boley  kahli kahli ch rasoyi wal tur pyi .. bulln tey ek  alhad muskaan.. hik aap muharey e  garuur naal bahr nu nikli..  tey chaal ch ek alag e  akad bhari lachak .....
 










' Aj tan jaan e kad lyi tusi meri '   bullet tey beithda yuvi kol khadi manpreet wal vekhda holi jehi bolea 

' Keha c na tenu kaka ji tarsa tarsa teri jaan kadni ..pr deni nyi .. ' anghutha dikhandi manpreet yuvi nu bechain krdi  hasdi hoyi boli 
' Mera nyi dil krda jaan nu ..' nah ch sar hilanda yuvi jaan ton mukrda bolea 
' Jana paina kaka ji o bechari udeek di honi .. ' yuvi nu juak wang naa jaan di jid krda vekh manpreet khind khinda k hasdi hoyi boli 
' Edan nyi ho sakda .. ' manpreet wal ek aass naal vekhda bolea yuvi  '  kal saverey ja preet bhabhi nu lay aawan '

' Nyi ji edan nyi ho sakda ... phone aya c massi ji da huney mummy  nu ..' yuvi dey modey hath rakhdi manpreet usdean akhn ch vekhdi boli '  tey mummy ji  ney keh ditta yuvi tur pya preet nu lain .. hun tan jana e paina ..' 
' Ohh..'  mayous hunda yuvi gate wal vekh aukha sah lainda sochn ch pay gya hun tan jana e paina 
' Ki hoyea ki sochda ...  jaa hun ' yuvi nu mayous ho bullet tey beitha vekh manpreet swaad laindi akh mardi boli ' ... preet udeekdi honi ..' 
' Bhabhi ek chummi... '  manpreet nu cherda  yuvi vehrdey ch edr udr vekhda bolea 
' Hun ... 'yuvi wal vekh manpreet vehrdey ch beithi mummy wal vekhdi boli ' ethey vehrdey ch ' 
' Pls bhabhi ..' chehak e uthea yuvi usney tan bhabhi nu cherdn lyi keha c pr jidan bhabhi ney puchea hun ethey vehrdey ch ... umeed jehi hoyi k bhabhi shyad chumi ...

Kuch der chup reh sochdi hoyi manpreet navjot wal vekhdi boli ' mummy ji jehra massi ji lyi aj   suit lyanda .. '  o yuvi hath bhej dewaan ' 
' Haan haan' gate kol khadey manpreet tey yuvi wal vekhdi boli navjot ' ditta nyi  yuvi nu ...'
' Bs dindi haan ..' kahli kahli ch apney kamrey wal jandi manpreet boli ' yuvi ruki ek minute massi ji da suit b lainda jaa' 
' Ki bhabhi tusi meinu late karwa dena .. pehln e tuhadi shopping krkey late ' bullet ton utr mummy ton akhn churanda yuvi  nakhra kr  bur buranda  manpreet dey pichey pichey kamrey wal janda bolea ' deo kehra suit lay k jana ..' 

'Gussey kyoun hunda vey  ' kamrey ch aa bahr wal jhatti mardi manpreet agey nu ho yuvi samney khadi hundi boli ' tun e chummi mangi c ..' 
' Gussey kon ...ena ku nakhra tan mummy samney ..' manpreet nu wahan ch bhar apney naal ghutda yuvi us dean akhn ch vekhda bolea ' samjeya karo tusi..'
' Samjdi tan mein sab haan kaka ji ...' akhn matkandi manpreet  yuvi da munh hathn ch fad addea chuk uchi hundi us  dey bulln nedey apney bull krdi boli ' jaldi lay jehri chummi laini  .'  kahli b c usnu mummy ki sochugi ki krdey pye ney andr dono 

'Sachi ...' bhabhi dey gulabi kambdey bulln nu vekhda sabr na kr sakeya .. bulln vichon nikldey gram sahn nu apney munh tey mehsoos kr besabra ho yuvi  usdey bulln naal bull jod chumda madhosh ho utheya
  ... akhn e band ho gayean manpreet dean    pr  yuvi dey bechain bulln   di tapish naal pigldi bechain hoyi Kahli kahli ch yuvi dey bulln nu chumdi ek pal lyi tan  bhul gyi .. suit chukn dey baheney kamrey ch ayi a .. lak kol chubda yuvi da kadak lun  dil tan kita   andron kundi laa chimbd e javey yuvi naal .. pr majboori ...



' Ja hun ' apney ukhdey sah kabu krdi manpreet yuvi dey bulln naalo  bull vakh kr siskdi hoyi boli ' waps aa k lay lawin  jinia marji chumia '
' waps Aaa k tan  fudi laini tuhadi ' bekabu hunda yuvi apney bull manpreet dey bulln dey nedey krda bolea 
' Lay lawin...'  apney bull yuvi dey bulln ton dur krdi  manpreet usdi  hik tey hath rakh usnu apney ton dur krdi boli ' .. es ton pehln k mummey sochey pta nyi asin ki krdey andr .. jaa hun 
' Pakka bhabhi ' bhabhi ton haan sun yuvi gaur naal usdean akhn ch vekhda bolea ' lara tan nyi ' 
' Nyi lara nyi ' yuvi dey akadey lun wal vekh manpreet bull tuk kol pye baigs vichon suit labhdi boli '  jad di rasoyi ch teri lulli fdi a mera tan apna dil krn lg pya...' 
' Sachi bhabhi'   manpreet dey pichey aa khada ho yuvi usdey modey fad chehkda hoyea bolea  ' tusi menu ..'  
' Haan yaar ' baig vichon suit kad di  manpreet kamrey  ch edr udr vekhdi boli ..'  eney saal ho gye kdi kisi hor naal kdi b nyi ..pr hun ... hye dr lagda j tere veerey nu pta lag gya'  
' Una nu kidan pta ..'  manpreet dean akhn ch ummeed bhari aas  naal vekhda yuvi bolea '.. tusi thori dasungey... na e mein ' 
' Fer b dr lagda yaar ..'  apni hik tey hath rakhdi boli  manpreet'  uton preet ney b ayi hona ..  j usnu shak ...' 
' Haan ' kuch sochda manpreet di haan ch haan milanda bolea yuvi 

' J raat naa bhajda  ' yuvi wal vekhdi  manpreet boli ' tan shyad ..' 
' J eni akal hundi taan .. ' apni jhep mitanda yuvi bolda bolda hass pya ..


 ' koi na akal tan tenu sehar waps jaan ton pehln  dey k jayou  bachuu' hath agey  kr yuvi dey lun nu fad masaldi akhn matkandi  boli manpreet  '  teri eh tapdi  lulli tan hun  joothi honi e honi .'  chahey mein kraaan  chahey preet ton karwa waan ..' 
' Ufff bhabhi ' khada khada uchlda kamb gya yuvi jidan bhabhi ney usdey lun nu ungln ch lay maselya ...

Yuvi nu hauka lay siskda vekh manpreet kahli kahli ch hath  lun  ton prey krdi boli  ' Ah lay fad suit tey bahr ja ...mein ayi .....'  
' mukeryo naa .. ' suit fad kamrey ton bahr niklda yuvi gardan ghuma manpreet wal vekhda josh ch aa  boll tan pya pr samney beithi mummy   nu vekh dandn thalley jeev dba akhn churanda  bullet wal tur pya ..

' Eh bhain cho.. juttia pwayou meinu ' yuvi nu eni uchi bolda sun  apney mathey tey hath mar manpreet akhn kad di burburayi ... 







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