Incest Pass -e- Parda (Ik Be Misal Kahani)

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Ajj raat update as javey gi bai.

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bahut sohna likh rahe ho.....enna detail wich......i really loving it......swaad aa gy pad ke.....pls continue rakhyo......
tuhade kol sacchi badi amazing writing skill hai ......so good
keep going
keep writing

Bohat shukaria g
Tuhadi mohabbat a

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Dar Haqeeqat Altaf Bohat Saoo Put C, Hun Tak Jo V Hoya C Oh Bilkul Ghair Iradi Taur Te Ho Gya C. Asal Ch Oh Apney Aap Te Bohat Sharminda C, Apni Maa Di Zuban Choosan Naal Ohda Lunn Inj Aakar K Khara Ho Gya C, Ohnu Eh Gall Khadi Jandi C, Ki Sochdi Howey Gi Ohdi Maa. Par Doojey Pasey Ohdi Maa Da Normal Muskrawna Ohnu Hor V Pareshan Kar Reha C. Ohdey Kolu Apni Maa De Samney Khara Hona Bohat Mushkal Ho Gya C. Ohda Dill Kar Reha C Keh Oh Othon Nass Jawey.

Altaf: Ammi Jaan Tussi Eh Kaprey Pharo, Me Rehra Le K Aaunda Waa. (Oh Kaprey Maa De Lagey Rakh K Rehrey Wall Tur Painda A.)

Parveen: Acha Putt Theek Aa (Parveen Apney Shareef Put Di Halat Samajh Chuki C, Ohnu V Apney Aap Te Sharam Jehi Aa Rahi C, Par Iss Gall Vich Ehda V Koi Qasoor Nai C, Sb Kuj Normal C Par Ik Gall Ohnu Normal Nai C Lag Rahi, Oh C Ohdey Gabhur Jawan Puttar Da Khotey Warga Mota Lull. Hayee Rabba Ehda Lull Idda Wada We, Kinj Ho Gya? Kiddan Laindi Honi Ehdi Ghar Walieh Soch K Ohdey Andar Ik Agg Jai Lag Jandi A, Idda Wadda Te Mota Lun Aohney Kadi Nai Si Vekhia. Ohney Apni Soch Nu Lagam Ditti, Jazbat Nu Dantia, Te Bari Ookhi Ho K Apni Shalwar Charai, Te Khari Ho Gai, Ohdey Moch Wala Pair Bohat Dard Kar Reha C, Oh Doojey Pair Te Bhar Paa K Bohat Mushkil Naal Khari C K Altaf Rehra Najdeek Le K Aa Gya. Ohney Barey Pyar Naal Apni Maa Nu Sahara De K Rehrey De Uttey Wakhi Bhar Pathia De Uttey Ee Lita Dita. Te Khota Rehra Haveli Nu Tor Ditta.

Altaf Di Himmat Nai Ho Rai C, Apni Maa Naal Gal Karan Di, Oh Sharam Naal Laal Peela Hoi Ja Reha C, Ohdey Mooh Cho Ik Mithi Te Payari Jahi Khushbo Aa Rahi C Jiwen Ohney Koi Mitha Banarsi Paan Khada Howey. Eh Khusbo Ohdi Maa Di Zuban Te Hothan De Rass Di C, Jinu Ohney Amrat Samajh K Rajj Rajj K Peeta C. Ik Passey Sawad Di Lehar Ohdey Loon Loon Wich Doar Gai Te Naal Ee Ohnu Phir Tu Sharam Da Bukhar Hon Lag Paya. Par Oh Shant C, Q K Ik Te Ohdi Maa Ne Bilkul Ghussa Nai C Keeta Te Dooja Jo V Hoya C Oh Achanak Hoya C.

Parveen Eh Sari Soorat E Hall Nu Na Sirf Enjoy Kar Rahi C Balke Oh Soch Rahi C Ke Kinj Oh Apney Sohney Putt Nu Normal Raka Sakey. Oh Bohat Samajhdar Aurat C, Ohdey Damagh Wich Kuj Ho Ee Chal Reha C, Par Sb Tu Pehley Oh Apney Putt Ne Normal Karna Chaundi C

Parveen: Ve Puttar ! Apney Pyo Nu Call Kar K Ohdey Kolu Puch Bai Kithey Wa. Te Putt Mera Khayal Aa K Aapan Ghar Nu Chalye Hun Sidhey, Meri Tabeat Kharab Wa Te Naley Menu Bohat Dard Ho Rahya Pair Vich Te Jithey Kandey Chubhey C Othey Bohat Dard Ho Rahya Wa. Ghar Vich Kuryan Merey Kandey Vi Kadh Dain Gyan Te Naley Merey Pair Ch Malish V Kar Dain Gyan.

Altaf: Han G Ammi Jan Eh Gall Theek Aa Ohdi Jaan Vich Jaan Aa Gai. Aapan Ghar Ee Chaldey Wan Altaf Bolya, Te Naley Nusrat Te Waseem College Chon Aan Waley Aa. (Parveen Ne Note Keeta K Iss Gall Te Altaf Bohat Khush C K Apni Maa De Chitran Choo Kandey Ohnu Nai Kadhney Pain Ge. Oh Samajh Gai C Keh Ohdey Puttar Ch Bahli Sharam Te Naley Oh Apni Maa Tu Darda V Bohat C Q Keh Parveen Bajwa Tu Sarey Ghar Waley Dardey Si Kyu K Parveen Bari Asool Pasand Aurat Si Te Ghalat Gall Te Jhaar K Rakh Dindi Si) Altaf Apney Da Number Mila K Phone Apni Maa Nu Phara Dainda A, Phone Te Parveen Apney Ghar Waley Sultan Nu Dasdi A K Ohdi Tabeat Kharab Aa Te Oh Dono Maa Put Pathey Le Ke Ghar Nu Chaley Wa. Sultan Bajwa Ne Koi Etraz Na Keeta Te Dono Maa Put Pind Pohach Gaye. Altaf Ne Pehley Apni Maa Nu Ghar Chadya, Barey Pyar Nal Mohda La K Apni Maa Nu Ghar De Andar Le Ja K Ohna De Bedroom Ch Chadd Dainda Wa Te Cheti Murr K Aan Da Keh K Pathey Le K Siddha Haveli Walley Khota Rehra Le K Chal Painda. Inni Dair Nu Nusrat Te Waseem College Tu Murr Aandey Ne Te Jaddon Apni Maa Da Hal Vekhdey Ne Te Pareshan Ho Jandey Ne.

Parveen Waseem Nu Kehndi Aa Keh Oh Tandoor Tu Roti Le Aawey Te Fridge Chu Salan Garam Karey. Waseem Bajar Nu Tur Painda Te Parveen Nusrat Nu Dasdi Aa K Oh Kandian Wali Tehni Te Dig Payee C, Oh Nusrat Nu Asal Gall Nai Dasdi Bus Inna Ee Dasdi A Te Nusrat Nu Kehdi A Keh O Chitran Te Pattan Ch Tuttey Kandey Kadh Devey Te Naley Pair Ch Tel La Deway.

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Nusrat Ne Jadon Sooi Te Chimti Di Nok Nall Tuttey Kandey Kadhey Te Parveen Bohat Tarap Rahi C Par Ohney Sabar Keeta. Nusrat Ne Saryon Da Tail Moch Waley Pair Wich Laa Ditta. Inni Dair Nu Waseem Rotian Le Aaya Te Dono Bhain Bharawan Ne Lunch Karan Lag Paye.

Parveen Nu Sukoon Jeha Mil Gaya C. Oh Akhan Band Kar Ke Aram Karn Lag Payee Te Ohdi Soch Phir Apney Putt De Lull Waley Chali Gaye, Hayee Rabba, Kidda Mota Lull A Altaf Da Kisey Manji De Seroo Wang Mota, Khota Kissey Than Da. Me Te Bajoo Ee Samajh K Phari Rakhya, Naley Sakht Kina C Pathar Wango, Uffffffffffffff Altaf Di Ghar Wali Kiddi Khush Naseeb Aa. Parveen Doongi Soch Wich Eh Gallan Sochi Ja Rahi Si. Ohdey Ghar Waley Sultan Bajwey Da Lunn Wi Wadhya Si Par Altaf Warga Te Nai C. Je Kaddi Altaf Da Lunn Nanga Kar K Vekh Lawwan Te Kina Sawad Aaoo. Sachi Bohat Wadda Lunn A Altaf Da. Parr Kiddan Diakh Paoo Gi Altaf Te Kuryan Tu V Bohta Sharmeela Te Naley Ohda Saga Putt C, Bohat Mushkal Kamm C. Par Parveen Kuj Na Kuj Plan Kar Rahi Si.

Nusrat Te Waseem Me Khana Kha Lya C Te Oh V Kuj Aram Karn Layee Ooper Apney Apney Room Wich Chaley Jandey Ne.

Nusrat Apni Wadhi Baji Tu Choti C Do Saal Te Apney Bhara Waseem Kolon Ik Saal Wadhai Si. Nusrat 17 Salan Di Kanwai Kuri Si 2nd Year Di Student Si Uchi Lammi Gori Chitti, Sakhat, Bharwen Te Nokelay Nipplan Waley Mummey, Moti Gol Matol Bund Picho Ubhri Hoyee Te Nazuk Te Lachkeli Kamar, Sohney Angrejan Warge Nain Naqash, Sachi Bohat Sohni Jawani C.

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Waseem Sb Pain Bharawan Kolon Nikka Te Ladla Puttar C Parveen Te Sultan Bajwa Da. Athlete Kisey Sports Man Warga Jisam Te Muchan Maria Marin Hun Phutt Rahia Si.

Altaf Bohat Kashmakash Da Shikar C. Ik Passey Oh Apney Maa De Hussan Te Maa Kolu Mili Qurbat De Nashey Wich Choor C Te Doojey Passey Ohda Zameer Ohnu Malamat Kar Reha C. Oh Ik Muslman C Te Ohdey Dhram Wich Maa Ne Nanga Vekhna Bohat Wadda Gunnah C. Ohnu Iss Gall Di Bahli Sharam C Keh Be Dhayani De Wich Pata Nai Kiwen Ohda Lunn Akar Gya C, Te Ohdi Maa Ne Ohda Lunn Nu Pharya Wi Si, Ghutia Vi Si, Te Gussa Vi Nai Hoi. Oh Kamm V Kar Rahya C Te Ajeeb Jahi Jung V Lar Rahya C. Ohney Jadon Ik War Phir Sochya K Kidan Ohney Apni Maa Nu Apnian Bahwan Ch Chukia, Kiddan Kandian Wali Tehni De Nall Apni Maa Di Shalwar Lah Ditti, Kiddan Maa De Sexy Te Moti Bund Te Chuttar Vekhey, Kina Mast Ho K Maa De Hoth, Zuban Choos Choos K Nachor Ditti, Ohnu Sb Yaad Aa Rahya C K Ohdi Parri Wargi Sohni Maa Ne Vi Mohabbat Vich Mast Ho K Ohdey Bull Choosey C. Eh Sochanian Sochdian Altaf De Lull Akar Gya Te Chadrey Nu Tamboo Bna Ditta. Lull Inna Zor Naal Jhatkey Mar Reha C Keh Altaf Nu Kamm Chadd K Manji Te Behna Pya. Ohda Lull Ohdi Sharm Te Bazi Le Gya C. Oh Vekhna Chahda Si Keh Ohdi Maa Da Ki Response Howey Ga Hun Jadd Oh Ghar Jawey Ga. Ohnu Ikk Gall Di Tassali Si Keh Ohney Kuj Vi Jaan Bujh K Nai Si Keeta. Ohney Te Jo Wi Keeta C Apni Jaan Tu Wadh Pyari Maa Di Takleef Nu Khata Karan Lai Keeta C. Eh Soch K Ohnu Kaafi Tassali Ho Gai. Ohney Cheti Cheti Kam Naberia. Te Hath Mooh Dohon Lag Paya. Pata Nai Kyon Ohda Dill Kar Reha Si Bai Oh Udd K Apni Maa Kol Jawey Te Puchey Bai Hun Te Takleef Nai Ho Rahi A.

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Parveen Vi Apney Bed Te Chadar Andar Akhan Band Kar K Kissey Lammi Soch Vich Dubbi Hoi Si. Oh V Kashmakash Vich Si Keh Ohda Puttar Ki Sochda Hona. Ohdey Samney Ajj Di Hoi Sari Kahani Ik Film Wang Chal Rahi C. Ik Passey Te Oh Apney Janwan Putt Dian Garam Sahwan, Tapdey Hoth Te Kambdi Jeebh Da Att Nasha Te Sawad Nu Ajey Tak Apney Hothan, Te Zuban Utey Mehsoos Kar Rahi Si. Dooja Oh Eh Soch Soch K Pagal Hoi Ja Rai C Keh Ohney Ghato Ghat 2 Mint Apney Putt Da Lull Ghtt Ka Phari Rakhia Si Te Muthian Bhardi Rahi Si. Te Eh Soch Soch K Ohdi Phuddi Pharki Ja Rahi Si. Parveen Bajwa Nu Bus Ik Ee Fikar C Keh Ohda Puttar Ohdey Barey Ki Sochda Howey Ga. Ohney Apney Puttar De Hoth V Choosey San Te Ohda Mota Akarya Hoya Lull Vi Apney Hathan Wich Pharya Si. Kidrey Ohda Puttar Ohnu Ghalat Na Samajh Rahya Howey. Par Oh Ki Kardi Ohnu Ohdey Puttar Ne Att Sakoon Ditta Si, Ohney Kinni Fikar Te Mohabbat Naal Apni Maa Da Dukh Wandia Si. Sachi Gall Te Eh Si Keh Ohdey Puttar Ne Jinney Nashey Wich Ohdey Bull Te Juban Choosey San Oh Pagal Ho Gai Si. Ohda Ghar Wala Ik Jut Si, Ohney Kaddi Ohdey Mooh Ch Mooh Paa K Pyar Nai Si Kita, Oh Te Bus Gallant E Bullan De Uttey Ee Pyar Karda Si. Iddan Zunba Nai Si Chughi. Ohney Mehsoos Keeta K Ohda Puttar Ohnu Ohdey Ghar Waley Tu Wadh Pyar Karda A. Chalo Jo V Si, Oh Bohat Khush Si. Oh Apney Putt Nu Iss Pyar Da Jawab Dena Chahndi Si Te Iss Lai Ohnu Sb Tu Pehlan Apney Sharmeeley Puttar Di Sharam, Jhaka Te Darr Khatam Karna Si Oh Iss Layee Kujh Plan Kar Chuki Si. Ohnu Hun Apney Puttar De Ghar Aan Di Udeek Si. Oh Apney Puttar Da Mohabbat Di Zuban Nal Shukaria Ada Karna Chahndi Si. Eh Sochdey Sochdey Ohdi Akh Lag Gai.

Sham Di Azan Hoi Te Sultan Bajwa Vi Havelly Aa Gya Ohney Tractor Khara Keeta Dono Pyo Puttar Ghar Aa Gaye.

Ghar Aundia Altaf Bajwa Ne Apne Payo Sultan Bajwa Nu Ajj Di Vapri Sari Kahani Dassi Par Puri Detail Vich Nai Gya, Bus Eh Ee Dasya K Odhi Maa Da Pair Tilak Gya C Te Oh Kandian Wali Tehni Te Diggi Si Te Ohdey Pari Wich Moch Aa Gai Si.

Ghar De Andar Parveen Bajwa Sutti Pai Si, Nusrat Bajwa Te Waseem Bajwa Dono Bjhain Bhara Kitchen Wich Khaney Di Tayyari Kar Rahe Si.

Ghar Aa K Sultan Bajwa Siddha Apney Kamrey Wich Chala Gya Jithey Ohdi Pyari Ghar Wali Pair Di Moch Nal Sutti Payee Si. Altaf Bajwa Te Darr De Marey Siddha Uppar Apney Kamrey Wich Turr Gya. Ohnu Darr Si Keh Ohdi Maa Kidhrey Ohdey Payo Nu Eh Naa Dass Devey Keh Me Apni Di Zuban Te Bull Choosey San Te Naley Apney Lull Khara Keeta Si.

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Sultan Bajwa Apney Room Vich Gya, Parveen De Kol Baitha, Ohnu Jagaya Ohda Haal Chal Puchya Te 5 Mint Baad Uth Gya Eh Keh K Chala Gya Keh Oh Naha K Roti Khawey Ga Te Us Ton Baad Lambaar De Derey Te Panchayat Si Koi Uthey Jawey Ga.

Sultan Bajwa Washroom Wich Chala Gya Te Parveen Bajwa De Dill Wich Jiwen Churri Phir Gai, Jiss Bandey Te Sari Umar Jaan Chirki Ohney Ohnu Inj Normal Deel Keeta Si. Ohnu Eh Reh Reh K Khayal Aai Ja Reha Si Keh Ohda Putt Ohnu Ohdey Ghar Waley Tu Wadh Payar Karda Wa. Naal Ee Ohnu Eh Khayal Aaya Keh Ohda Putt Kithey Wa. Oh Ajey Tak Aaya Kyu Nahi. Ohnu Pareshani Ho Gai. Oh Dar Rai Si Keh Ohda Putt Darda Te Sharmanda Bhanwen Ghar Ee Na Awey Kidrey Bahro Bahar Apney Sohrian Te Na Turr Gya Howey. Oh Dukhi Jai Ho Gai. Oh Apney Puttar Nu Vekhna Chah Rahi Si. Oh Apney Puttar Nu Dasna Char Rahi Si Keh Oh Apney Putt Naal Naraj Ya Gussa Nai Aa. Oh Apney Puttar Te Sadqey Wari Hona Chahndi Si.

Sultan Bajwa Naha Dho K, Roti Kha K Bahar Chala Gya, Waseem Ne Altaf Bajwa Nu Roti Da Puchya Te Altaf Ne Jama Ee Mana Kar Ditta. Ohney Kahya Keh Ohney Dudh Chungh Lya Si Majh Da Te Ohnu Bhukh Nai A. Asal Vich Oh Ajey Wi Darr Rahya Si Keh Oh Apni Maa Naal Kiwen Akh Milaoo, Ohnu Apney Payo Da Vi Jhaka Si. Bus Oh Apni Maa Te Pyo Dona Kolu Darri Janda Si.

Waseem Ne Thaley Aa K Nusrat Nu Dasya Te Ohney Kahya K Tu Apney Room Wich Ja Me Ammi Nu Roti De K Aani Aa. Nusrat Bajwa Ne Apni Maa Di Roti Payee Tte Kamrey Wich Turr Gai.

Parveen Ne Jadd Vekhya Keh Ohdi Dhee Roti Le K Aai A Ohney Cheti Naal Puchya, Ve Putt Altaf Kithey Wa, Oh Ajey Ghar Kyu Nai Aaya?

Nusrat Ne Dassya Keh Altaf Te Apney Kamrey Vich Chala Gya Si, Kissey Nal Gall Vi Nai Keetti Te Roti Vi Nai Khadi. Parveen Nu Bohat Dukh Lagya K Ohda Puttar Ohda Hall Puchan Vi Nai Aaya. Ohda Dukh Dohra Ho Gya, Ik Te Ohdey Ghar Waley Ne Ohnu Ink Nai Si Puchya Jiwen Puchna Chahi Da Si, Te Dooja Ohdey Puttar Ne V Ohda Hall Nai Puchya. Ohney Nusrat Nu Dukhi Dill Naal Mana Kar Ditta. Ohda Dill Bujh Gya Ohdi Bhukh Marr Gai. Nusrat Chup Kar K Murr Gai. Darwajey Wich Jaa K Ruki Te Puchya, Ammi Jaan Me Tuhadey Pair Nu Malish Kar Dewan? Parveen Ne Mana Kar Ditta, Puttar Tu Jaa K So Jaa Tera Abba Aaye Ga Te Oh Kar Dewey Ga.

Parveen Nu Sari Samajh Aa Gai. Ohnu Pata Si Keh Ohda Puttar Darr Rehya Wa. Oh Soch Rahi Si Keh Oh Kiwen Apney Putt Da Darr Lahwey.

Nusrat Apney Kamrey Wich Chali Gai, Phir Ohnu Koi Khayal Aaya, Oh Sidhi Altaf Bhai De Room Wich Chali Gai. Altaf Chup Kar K Laitia Hoya Si. Nusrat Ne Altaf Nu Dassya K Ammi Bohat Pareshan Wa Teri Paron, Teri Fikar Kar Rahi Si, Te Terey Roti Naa Khan Da Sun K Aap Vi Roti Nai Khadi. Nusrat Ne Apney Bhara Nu Tarla Keeta K Please Tussi Jao Te Ammi Nu Roti Khawao.

Nusrat Eh Gall Kar K Apney Room Nu Muri. Altaf Ne Puchya Nusrat Abba Kithey Wa. Nusrat Boli Keh Oh Te Roti Kha K Lambardar De Derey Tu Chala Gya Wa Panchayat Si Othey Koi.

Altaf Da Dill Tarap Gya, Ohnu Bohat Dukjh Lagya. Ohnu Apni Maa Naal Bohat Pyar Si, Jadon Ohnu Pata Lagya Keh Ohda Payo Gharo Bahar Ja Chukia A, Ohnu Tassali Ho Gai Keh Ohdi Maa Ne Ohdey Payo Nu Kujh Nai Dasya. Naal Ee Ohnu Apney Aap Te Maan Jeha Ho Gya Keh Ajj Me Roti Nai Khadi Te Ohdi Maa Ne Vi Nahi Khadi. Oh Tarap Uthya, Te Jutti Vi Na Payee Te Thaley Chala Gya, Oh Siddha Kitchen Wich Gya, Khana Garam Keeta Te Apni Maa De Room Vich Chala Gya.

Parveen Bajwa Bohat Udaas Jahi Ho K Chatt Nu Vekhi Ja Rahi Si Te Dukhi Jahi Ho K Sochi Ja Rahi Si. Ohnu Qadman Di Awaz Apney Kamrey Wall Anudi Japi. Ohdey Dill Ne Aakhya Ni Parveen Tera Jigar Da Tota Aa Gya Ee.

Ohnu Apni Akhan Te Yaqeen Na Aaya, Ohney Vekhya Ohda Putt Hath Wich Roti Wala Chaba, Te Dudh Da Glass Phar K Darwajey Wich Khara Si.

Altaf: Ammi Jaan !

Parveen: Jee Meria Putra ! Maa Sadqey Jawey Tu Kithey Chala Gya Si Apni Maa Nu Chadd K (Apney Puttar De Chehrey Wall Wekhdi A, Te Apney Puttar De Mukh Tea Khan Wich Pyar Te Mohabbat Da Summandar Si, Masoomiat Si, Be-Chargi Si, Darr Te Khoaf Si, Hayya Te Sharam Si.

Parveen Kolon Bardasht Nai Ho Sakya Te Oh dumb nap siskarian lain lag payee

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Altaf Di End Ho Chuki Si, Oh Jazbat, Khushi, Mohabbat Te Khaloos Wich Pagal Jeha Ho K Apni Maa Dian Bahwan Wich Sama Gya. Ohdi Maa Ne Apney Seeney Uttey Laitey Hoye Putt Nu Apnian Bahwan Wich Ghut Lya.

Altaf Ne Wi Apni Maa De Dono Passey Apney Bajoo Phaila Dittey Te Apna Sir Apney Maa De Ik Modhey Utey Tika K Maa Di Mohabbat De Summandar Wich Dub Gya, Sakoon, Shanti Te Sukh De Uchey Ambar Wich Inj Udh Rahya Si Jiwen Kali Ghata Ch Mast Ho K Koi Awara Panchi Hawa Ch Tarr Rahya Honda. Dono Maa Put Koi V Harkat Kityon Baghair Madhoshi De Aalam Wich Apni Mohabbat Ik Doojey Te Nichawar Kar Rahe Si. Inj Lag Rahia Si Keh Altaf Nu Jis Aurat Nal Ishq Hoya A Oh Ohdi Maa Si Naa Keh Ohdi Biwi, Te Parveen Nu Inj Lag Rahya Si K 4 Bachey Paida Karn Tu Baad Jiss Mard Naal Ishq Hoya A Oh Ohda Puttar Si Na Keh Ohda Khasam.

Kafi Der Baad Jadon Maa Te Puttar Da Dill Ik Doojey Paroon Saaf Ho Gya Te Altaf Ne Apna Sir Chukya Te Apni Maa De Chehrey Ne Apney Dono Hathan Wich Pharh K Bolya,

Altaf: Ammi Tussi Mere Tu Naraz Te Nahi.

Parveen: Rabb Di Sonh Me Naraz Nai Wan, Menu Te Maan A Keh Menu Rabb Ne Inna Khayal Rakhan Wala Puttar Ditta A. Parveen Ne Vi Apney Dono Hathan Wich Apney Putt Da Chehra Phar Laya Te Muskra K Boli, Puttar Ajj Jo Vi Hoya Bhul Bhulekhey Te Na Chahundian Hoyan Hoya. Jo Vi Hoya Menu Bohat Change Lagya, Tu Jo V Keeta Apni Maa De Aram Lai Keeta. Me Sadqey Wari Jawan Me Apney Putt Tu Kadi Vi Naraz Nai Ho Sakdi.

Altaf Inna Khush Hoya Keh Ohda Chehra Khill Uthya, Ohney Apni Maa Da Math Chum Laya, Te Parveen Ne V Apney Puttar Da Matha Chum Laya

Altaf: Chalo Ammi Jaan Roti Khao

Parveen: Puttar Tu Kha Lai Roti?

Altaf: Me Kiwen Kha Sakda Wan Jadd Tak Meri Maa Bhukhi Howey

Parveen: Chal Phir Dono Khayeey. Puttar J Tu Na Aunda, Rabb Di Sonh Mere Andar Ik Burki Vi Nai Si Langhni.

Parveen Te Altaf Bed Te Beh K Amney Samney Beh Jandey Ne Te Alfat Ik Nawala Bana K Apni Maa De Mooh Kol Le Janda A, Parveen Apna Mooh Kholdi A, Jadon Altaf Nawala Moonh Ch Pa K Hath Pichey Karan Lagda A, Parveen Altaf Da Hath Phar K Ohdin Unglian Te Chummi Le Laindi A.

Phir Parveen Ik Nawal Apney Puttar De Mooh Wich Paandi A, Te Altaf Vi Apni Maa Da Hath Chum Lainda A. Dono Maa Puttar Bohat Mohabbat Nal Ik Doojey De Moonh Wich Nawaley Pandey Ne Te Har Nawaley Te Ik Doojey Dian Unglan Chum Laindey Ne. Khana Kha K Altaf Bartan Side Table Te Rakhda A Te Phir Bed Te Beh Jaanda A.

Parveen Seeee Seeee Kar Rahi Si. Ik Te Ohdi Zuban Ajj Dand Thalley Aa K Piss Gai Si, Te Roti Khan Nal Zuban Te Mirchan Lar Gayan Si,

Altaf: Ammi Jee Ki Hoya Tussi Seeee See Kyo Kar Rahe O

Parveen: Puttar Meri Zuban Te Pehley Ee Pissi Hoi Si Ajj Dand Thalley Aa K, Hun Salan Khada A Te Mirchan Larri Jandian Ne. Seeeee Seeeeee

Altaf: Ammi Jee Me Gurr Le K Awan Kitchen Vichu?

Parveen: Nai Putt Gurr Naal Nai Aram Auna

Altaf: Phir Ki Karyey Ammi Jaan

Parveen: Oh ………. Oh .. Oh Je Tenu Koi Masla Na Hovey Te……… Oh

Altaf: Ammi Jaan Tussi Hukam Karo, Meri Jaan Vi Hazar A Tussi Dasso Te Sahi.

Parveen: Putt……. Nai Put ,, Menu Sang Aaundi Aa, Me Kiwen Dassan

Altaf: Ammi G Tuhanu Meri Qasam Tussi Dasso Te Sahi, Methon Tuhadi Takleef Nai Dekhi Jandi
Parveen: Putt Oh Jiddan Ajj Meri Zuban Dand Thaley Aa K Pissi Si Bagh Wich Te Meri Zuban Nu Apni Zuban Naal Takor Keeti Si……. Put Menu Bohat Aram Aa Gya Si, Putt Tu Na, Tu Na Putt, Tu Unj Ee Kar De Thori Jinni Takor, Te Putt Ik Gall Sun, Put Tu Mere Ton Darya Na Kar Inna, Aaaho, Parvenn Ne Inney Pyar, Naaz Te Ada Naal Sharma Sharma K, Te Moonh Thaley Nu Kar K Eh Gall Keeti Se Keh Altaf De Loon Loon Wich Sawad Te Nashey Lehar Jahi Dor Gai.

Altaf: Oh Oh… Oh …… Te Theek A Par Nahi, …… Haan ……Nai Ammi Jaan Bus Oh…. Altaf Darwajey Wall Waikhan Lag Paya

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Parveen Samajh Gai K Altaf Di Pareshani Kee A. Asal Ch Dil Naal Dil Nu Rah Hondi A, Dono Maa Puttar Change Tarah Jaan Chukey Si K Nasha Dona Nu Charhya Hoya A Te Agg V Dono Passey Laggi Hoyee A, Bus Iko Kandh Wichkar Aa Rahi Si Te Oh Kandh Si Rishtey Di, Dharam Di, Sharam Di, Hayya Di, Parampara Di. Parveen Nu Pata Si Keh Ohney Eh Rah Aap Ee Siddha Karna A, Baqi Ohnu Pata Si K Aurat De Hussan Da Nasha Ki Cheez A Te Aurat De Hussan Te Pyar Di Taqat Ki Chaeez A.

Parveen: Put Tu Bahro Vekh K Aa K Gate Di Kundi Laggi Hoi A, Te Naley Bachey So Gaye Ne Keh Jagdey Ne

Altaf: Acha Ammi Jee

Oh Bijli Wango Bahar Gate Wall Ja K Vekhda A, Kunda Laguya Hoys Si, Oh Nass K Ooper Janda A, Nusrat Te Waseen De Kamrey Dian Battian Bujh Chukia Si.

Altaf Jadd Wapis Apni Maa De Kamrey Wich Jamda A Te Ohnu Hairat Da Ik Jhatka Lagda A, Ohdi Pyari Maa Bed Te Nai Si. Parveen Altaf De Bahar Jandian Ee Ik Latt Te Bhar Paa K Mushkal Naal Dressing Table Kol Gai Si, Ohney Apni Chadar Bed Uttey Eel Ah Ditti Si, Sheeshey Samney Aa K Apney Waal Khol Dittey Se Parveen Ne, Te Surkh Rang Di Halki Jahi Surkhi Apney Bullan Te La Lai Si, Tea Khan Wich Kajjal Pa Laya Sit E Sheeshey Wall Kand Kar K Dressing Table Di Shelf Uthey Char K Beh Gai C, Ohney Apnian Lattan Innian K Khol Dityan Si Keh Ohda Putt Sokha Ho K Ohdey Samney Kharr Sakey.

Jaddon Altaf Darwajey Andar Aaya Te Ohdey Qadam Ruk Gaye Te Oh Jazbat, Josh Te Hairat Naal Apni Maa Nu Vekhda Ee Reh Gya. Ohdi Hoor Wargi Maa, Patley Jaye Lown De Suit Wich Apnian Reshmi Zulfa Khol K Dressing Table Di Shelf Te Apnian Lattan Chorian Kar K Baithi Si. Ohdi Maa De Lammey Reshmi Kaley Waal Ohdian Gol Matol Chatian De Dono Passey Kali Ghata Wangu Chaye Paye Si. Ohdi Maa De Motey Sakhat Te Ubhrey Hoye Mummey Walan De Wichon Inj Ubhrey Paye Si Jiwen Kaley Badlan De Wichoo Pahar Dian Chotian Sir Kadh Rahyan Howan. Ohdi Maa De Bullan Te Masoom Jahi Shararti Muskan Si.

Parveen: (Sharmandey Hoyan) Putt Oh Asal Vich Bed Te Tuhanu Mushkal Honi Si Meri Jeebh Di Takor Karn Lagya, Aithey Jara Change Tarah Takor Ho Jaye Gi.

Altaf: Jee…..Jeeeee… Ammi Jaan Theek Ee Aa. Bus Theek A Koi Gall Nai Jiddan Meri Ammi Nu Change Lagey. Te Oh Dharkdey Dill Te Kamdey Te Pharkdey Hothan Naal Agey Nu Wadhya.

Parveen: Altaf Puttar……………!

Altaf: G Ammi Jaan………..! Apni Maa Dian Akhan Vich Vekhda Hoya

Parveen: (Akhan Thalley Nu Kar K, Sharma K, Nikka Jeha Muskrat K) Puttar Oh……Oh Naa…….Oh Tussi………Oh Tu Na Darwajey Di Wi Kundi Laa De Putt

Pata Nai Kyu Altaf Nu Yakdam Ik Nasha Jeha Charh Gya, Pata Nai Eh Gall Ohdi Maa Ne Kuj Iss Ada Naal Kahi Si Keh Ohdey Tann Mann Wich Sawad Di Ik Bijli Jahi Doar Gai See. Oh Cheti Naal Kundi Laa K Murda A, Te Parveen Dian Akhan Hairangi Naal Chorian Ho Jandian Ne, Par Oh Kuj V Apney Putt Nu Mehsoos Nai Hon Dindi. Altaf De Chadar Da Agla Hissa Inj Ho Gya Se Keh Jiwn Chadar Wich Koi Danda Si Jehra Chadar Wich 90 Digree Te Tamboo Banai Khara Si. Altaf Nu Shayad Pata Nai Si Keh Ohda Lull Inna Akar Chukia Si Ohdi Dhuni Nal Ja Lagya Si…………………….

[Rebel.Jatt]

Lajwab, bemisal. Bahut achche.
Jabardast story build up. Thanks for the long updates.

[Horsepower]

Thanks Rebel Jutt
assi te likhna tuhadey kolu sikhya
Tussi ustaad o jee
motivate Karan da bohat shukaria
Bus Thora jeha Punjabi words ch faraq a. Eh farq chardhey te lehndey Punjab da a. I think so
Plz keep guiiding

[solo]

good .nice story

[Neo_]

Ultimate bai...nazaara bann ditta. Koi jawaab nahi aisey writing da....

[doonknightz]

just an amazing sensual & seductive update.......maza aa gya pad ke......yr jo tussi punjabi & urdu de words mix kar ke likde ho taah story wich char chann lag jande ne.....bahut hi wadiya describe karde ho situation nu.....just mind blowing bruv.....
kithe si bai enne chir de......pahla kyu nhi likhi tussi story......punjabi section nu lod hai enna wadiya likhan wale writer di....
enjoyed every single paragraph of this wonderful update.....
eagerly waiting for more......hopefullly u 'll continue with same pace....
keep going
keep writing

[DRAGON WOLF]

I don't know whether the readers who have replied here are reading your story properly or not. But I have read all the updates. As I promised that I will give honest and genuine feedback. So here I am giving my few cents on the story.

1) Mother son incest is your choice. But the scene of Parveen and Altaf interaction is not realistic. Parveen is a mother , atleast more mature , so how come she so easily fall on her son.

2) The details of the story are commendable but they fall flat when the premise of the story is predictable. Like how many times the readers have read incest stories where due to accident or any other incident mom-son or bro-sis come close to each other. Means there is nothing creative in the plot.

3) This is just my feedback and my point of view. Well I love the urdu words and detailed explanation in some parts. I just want you to improve the plot on coming updates and make it more realistic or believable.

4) Don't take it personally , it is just my opinion. Take it as a healthy criticism.

[desi love]

veer g swad a gya update da..

[Busty_kaur]

Bahut hi umda shuruwaat kiti hai tusa. Keep it up.

[Horsepower]

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[Horsepower]

I don't know whether the readers who have replied here are reading your story properly or not. But I have read all the updates. As I promised that I will give honest and genuine feedback. So here I am giving my few cents on the story.

1) Mother son incest is your choice. But the scene of Parveen and Altaf interaction is not realistic. Parveen is a mother , atleast more mature , so how come she so easily fall on her son.

2) The details of the story are commendable but they fall flat when the premise of the story is predictable. Like how many times the readers have read incest stories where due to accident or any other incident mom-son or bro-sis come close to each other. Means there is nothing creative in the plot. 

3) This is just my feedback and my point of view. Well I love the urdu words and detailed explanation in some parts. I just want you to improve the plot on coming updates and make it more realistic or believable.

4) Don't take it personally , it is just my opinion. Take it as a healthy criticism
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1. Kaka Teri approach ee inni bakwas as keh Punjabi forum te tu angreji jhari ja reha???? Teri sense amreeka naal bohat mildi jehra apna kamm kadhan layee pak-india nu larawn de chakar vich rehnda.
2. Tu dujian di gall karda me kehna tu Meri story aap parhi ee nai. Iss layee k story ch kitrey wi Parveen apney putt te digi ee nai.
3. Incest hamesha accidentally ee Honda a. Kisey aam kurri wango maa pain nu pata k chodya nai ja sakta.. Kaka A4 size de 30 pages likh dittey sirf plot vich te koi sex vex shuru nai Hoya haley iss tu wadh ki creativity ho sakdi?????
4. Jo kujh v ho rahya story Wich eh natural aur 90% sach wa. Eh Meri apni Sachi Kahani wa chawaley jahyey.
5. Eh kahani bohat lambi wa. Jinni tu parhi oh ok din di aa. Uddon Meri Umar 19 saal si te hunn 37 saal wa tu soch keh Kahani kithey to jaoo go.
6. B.P filman wekh k muth Karan walyan layee na te me likh rahya te naa ee ohna di choise layee me ik Sachi Kahani ch koi rangbazi karni. Eh kahani ohna layee jo adab naal Pyar kardey. Jehrey romance suspense sabar te thehrao rakhdey apni tabeat wi h. Jehrey lafzan di jaltrang te jazbat de paichan tu waqif haige.
7. Ghapa ghap te fatafat thoka thaki nu like Karan Waley readers tu maafi chahunda wa.
8. Mera taaluq Punjab - Pakistan tu waa iss layee Urdu alfaz me jaan bujh k nai paa reha balkeh menu sardaran wali Punjabi jehri aaundi oh maximum warat rehaa me.
9. Teri criticism di menu parwah nai. Iss layee k tusi Khair naal kafi negative soch rakhdey o. Tussi te eh v keh rahey o forum te k ikk ee writer different id tu likh reha te naaley comments vee fake was. Jama ee bachgana soch wa Teri. Aithey sb free ch likh rahe wa koi paid writers nai k koi inni sir khapai Karey. 8 ghantey lagdey ik update layee. Samjhey o Mr. Wolf? Tu te yaar koi 9th da student lagda menu. 
10. Me jiss writer tu inspire waa oh rebel jutt a. He oh menu koi Salah dain te most welcome. Me Khud I'm professor, writer te poet was iss layee me janda sb de level nu.


  sb nu request Kar reha k eh ik Sachi Kahani a. Me bohat mushkal time manage kar reha wan. Agar hu kissey ne bachgana comments dittey te me Kahani ithey ee rok deni.
Wasdey raho

[Raja156]

Bhai wo suna h na kuch to log kahenge.so dhyan mat do lage raho aap bahut badhia likh rahe ho.jise na padhni ho na padhe par dusre ka maja kharab na kare.