13-03-2020, 05:03 AM
Bhot kaint likhya
Incest Kannttoo fulln tey .... ayo k nyi
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13-03-2020, 05:57 AM
Kavita Ji
Awesome keep it up.
13-03-2020, 07:59 AM
Waoooooo ......great
13-03-2020, 08:04 AM
kya baaat hai waiting for next..... bht kaint story hai bas thoda jaldi update de dea karo
13-03-2020, 10:59 AM
kaintttt
13-03-2020, 12:15 PM
thanks a lot for coming back.......
more than happy to see u back..... enna sohna update.......maza aa gya pad ke.... u r just amazing...... hopefully we shall see u more.... keep going ma'am keep writing
13-03-2020, 12:23 PM
Wow wow.... exceptional writing skills.... we'll be always obliged tuhadi mehnat nu slaam...
14-03-2020, 09:54 AM
Super update please next update jaldi
14-03-2020, 10:24 AM
Waiting for next
15-03-2020, 09:25 AM
Thx a lot Kavi for a blast & ur come back
Baki tuhadi writing skills te na kde doubt hoeya te na koi kr skda...... Bs eda e update dende rho ane time mutabik Hope ko sb theek hou Baki es update te na ta swad e leata
15-03-2020, 12:55 PM
Waiting for next update
16-03-2020, 03:01 PM
Good to see you back with a wonderful update
19-03-2020, 02:22 AM
Hun kine month baad update karna kavi ji?
19-03-2020, 10:29 AM
next update November
19-03-2020, 10:20 PM
Mainu hamesha ton lagda si ke Kavita Khullar nu ego di prob. hai. Nikki nikki gall te update band kar den di dhamki ik achi aadat nahi si.
Par uhna di ego ton menu koi problem nahi si. Mainu kise de subah ton ki lena dena hai. Mainu ik vadhiya story read karan nu mil rahi hai jis karke main xossipy join kita si. Iston vadhke main ki demand kar sakda han. As a reader jado ik story changi lagdi hai tan naturally badi curiosity ban jandi hai ke agge ki hon wala hai. Har koi jisnu story achi lagdi hai oh chahunda hai ke jald ton jald update aave take usdi jigyasa shant ho sake. Is lai jado kai vaar update late ho janda hai ja write regular update nahi dinde tan fir reader nirash ho jande ne. Frustration vich oh writer nu abuse karan lagde hann. Kujh din pehlan menu vi //// te ikk reader ne gala kadhiyan sann. Par main koi jwab na ditta. Update ton baad us reader ne sorry keh ke khud apni comment nu edit kar ditta si. Par menu kise de gala kadhan naal koi farak nahi penda. Par yaro ikk vaar soch ke dasso ke ki eh fair hai. Koi writer story update nahi kar payunda tan sidha abuse karna suru kar dayo. Xossip te kai writer hoye ne. Reet, seerat, masterji, robin, busty te kai hor. Par Kavita vang koi nahi likh sakda. She is amazing writer. Xossip te uhdi story kinni lambi challi si. Sabh ton vadh page sann. Sabh ton vadh comment sann te sabh ton vadh ke views vi use story de sann. Inni lambi story likhna te uhnu ikk anjam takk pahuchana eh kise hor de vass di gall nahi si. Idde- vadde vadde update hunde sann te kai baar do do update lagatar hunde sann. Te uhna di skill vi unmached si. Kai update inne erotic hunde sann ke baar baar padhan nu dil karda si. Khaas kar brother sister te bhabhi de kirdar te uhna di story line bahut jabardast si. Bahut hi vadhiya character devlopment kiti Kavita ne us story vich. Punjabi section vich inni long te amazing story den ton baad vi Kavita nu aksar abuse kita janda reha hai. Eh galat gall hai. Punjabi section vich views de 1 percent vi comment nahi milde fir vi kise ne tuhade sabh de entertainment lai inni mehnat naal ik lajwab story likhi. Sanu uhna de sukarguzar hona chahida hai. Par ho ki riha hai. Update te tan koi comment nahi karda par update na honn di surat vich abuse karan lai har koi tyar hai. Punjabi section vaise hi dead hai. Main vi pata ni keyon likh reha han. Char panj ghante laga ke update likhan ton baad log do shabad da thank you vi nahi keh sakde. Par aapas vich ladan nu ik duje di ma bhen karan nu hamesha tyar haan. Veero hausla vadhayo writers da. Je koi update nahi kar payunda tan sabar rakho. Har kise di personal life hai. Respect na dayo par thanks keh ke agle di mehnat da mull ta pa dayo.
20-03-2020, 02:12 AM
In full agreement with you.
God bless her with happy and blissful life.
20-03-2020, 06:38 AM
We are supporting kavita mam till her rishtean di chaanv story but jado yar 2 mahine baad update aawe tan readers upset hunde aa tanhi views kttde aa bt abuse krna is not solution or a good thing
20-03-2020, 12:00 PM
(19-03-2020, 10:20 PM)Rebel.Jatt Wrote: Mainu hamesha ton lagda si ke Kavita Khullar nu ego di prob. hai. Nikki nikki gall te update band kar den di dhamki ik achi aadat nahi si. Agreed on most of the points. But readers will comment only when the story is paced regularly. If updates are coming after 1-2 months or 2-3 weeks , then readers will surely loose interest. Moreover some persons don't like incest or specific theme stories, but this section is more oriented towards specific genre. Those readers will never comment here. I do not find exceptional stories here. Late or delayed updated are curse for readers.
20-03-2020, 12:01 PM
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