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Romance Duja via ( vintage romance thriller incest punjabi story
#21
bht vadiya kavita ji..... update karde raho vade vade...,
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#22
update krdo mam
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#23
Nice all time favourite but daily uodate dio ehda
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#24
Daily update dena aukha a ji .waisey b readers hay nyi ethey..so regular n continue likhan du
a mood n atmosphere create nyi no riha ... let it as it is going .. writer always write when there r readers otherwise ..


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#25
Koi gal ni mam, changa likhan lyi time ta lagda hi aw
But please mam story nu continue rakho
As you know eh site new aw , so readers holi holi ape jud jaane aw
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#26
Kavita ji writers nu new readers v tahi milange j likhea hoea paran ge.... purani website te tu c bht kuj likhea c so othe readers v kafi jur gae c ..... eh new site hai ethe v jive jive tu c content paoge readers v ape juri jange so please likhde raho we appreciate your writing......
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#27
5th update



'Tusi kadon uthey .' Kamrey ton bahar aa jeetu chaunkey ch beithi kam kardi preet wal vekhda bolea
 'Kado di ...' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli 
' wadey ch dangran da kam muka .. bas safayi karkey hati c ..' ek baar dil dhark uthea usda rat dean gallan chetey kar ...
 'Menu utha dindey mein madad kar dinda  .' Preet kol chaunkey ch aa khada hunda  sehaj swaa ch jeetu bolea 
 'Sochea kyoun uthana naley chuttia a tenu so lavey jinna marji ..' jeetu wal vekh fer chulley tey ubaldi cha ch dudh pandi  preet boli'  cha ban gyi a munh hath dho lay ...' 
 'Tusi payo cha mein aya ...' parna chuk gusalkhaney wal janda jeetu bolea'  fer ekethey beh k peendey haan cha ....'


 'Bdi thand a'  parney nal hath munh punjda jeetu chulley kol aa beithda bolea ...
 'Thand tan hay ..' cha da gilass jeetu wal kardi preet boli ...
 'Tusi nha lya ...' preet dey munh wal vekhda jeetu cha da ghut bharda bolea
 'Haan kyoun ..' cha dey gram gilass nu dono hathan ch fad nigh lendi preet boli ....
 'Eni thand ch .'Vehrdey ch  faili dhund wal vekhda jeetu bolea 
 'Hanji ..tere wang alsi nyi ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli  ' kam muka sab ton pehlan nahati fer cha dhari tenu awaz marn e lgi  c k uth j hun ..bathera din chad aya ..'
 'Mein tan kado da uthea pya c bas rajayi vichon nikln nu dil nyi kar riha c .
.cha da ghut bharda jeetu bolea ...
 'Oh acha ji ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli'   pta menu ... rupi dey supneya ch guhri need suta pya c ....sochea bibi bapu ghar nyi so lavey ...nyi tan bapuji dey ghar hundey eni der soo k vekhda ..'Edan e a gharwaley ghar nyi sanu kisi da dar nyi ..' cha da ghut bhar jeetu bolea'  mein tan cha pee k fer so jana ...'
 'khetan nu geda  maar awin .. bapuji ney andey ehi puchna tey mere ton jooth nyi keh hona ...'jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli 
' Ki bhabhi tusi mere lyi ena b jooth nyi bol sakdey'  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea .....
 'Nyi bilkul b nyi ...' biba putt ban khetan nu ja ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli' aa k jinna marji so lavin ....' chaunkey  ton uth khadi hundi preet boli
 'Jo hukam malkan da  ...' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea' Kithey chali bhabhi'  preet nu chaunkey ton uth vehrdey wal jandi vekh jeetu ney puchea
 'Kitey nyi makhan ridkan lgi c' chaati tey madani chuk ek passey nu jandi preet boli ...
 'Bhabhi o rat kehrey bol sunaye c tusi..' muskuranda jeetu cha da ghut bharda bolea
 'kehrey. ..' gardan ghuma jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli  
 'Ohi hasdi dey dand ginda turdi da lak minda deor hoyea nwa nwa jwaan bach k rahi bhabhia .. ' preet nu niharda jeetu bolea
 'Aho fer ..' jeetu wal vekh nimi nimi muskurandi preet boli
 'Sachin bhabhi tuhadi taur morni wargi a'  preet dey patley doldey lak tey lehrandi kali praandi wal vekhda jeetu hasda hoyea bolea 
 'Hor kuch ..' jeetu di gal sun hasdi hoyi preet boli'  
 'Hor b vohat kuch ... ' khetan ton wapas aa dasunga 
 'Koi na ..' hasdi hoyi preet vehrdey ch ek passey peedi tey beith chatti ch dahi pandi boli  ' sweater paa chaddar di bukal mar k jawin thand vohat a ..
 'Theek bhabhi..' uskolon langda jeetu bolea'  tusi b soch k rakheo ..
 'Ki ..!' Sar chik jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Rat tusi keha c sochungi oho'  akhan matka jeetu preet nu cherda bolea..
  'Hye rabba'  apni hik tey hath rakh jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  nyi nyi bilkul b nyi .. rat pta nyo mere ton kidan ..'
 'Tuhadi  marji .. ' ah bharda jeetu bolea'  par ek gal a bhabhi  jindgi bhar chetey rahugi rat ali tuhadi chummi .'
 'Ja baba  .. khetan nu ja' jeetu nu ghurdi preet boli'  savrrey saverey fer shuru ho gya .....'
' theek a ji'   gate khol bahar nu janda jeetu fer preet nu cherda bolea......' j vehley hoye  tan socheo jarur ...'



'Eni der la ditti kheyan ch ...' maney tey beithi dhup sekdi preet vehrdey ch aye jeetu wal vekhdi boli ..' mein kado di udeekdi pyi c ...'
 'Sachin bhabhi preet kol anda bolea jeetu'  lagda soch liya tusi jo mein sochn nu keha c esi lyi udeek rahey c ..'
 'Jyada jabblean na maar roti tuk da karna c'  jeetu wal vekh ghurdi hoyi preet boli  'kado di udeek rahi c tun awey tan roti tuk ton vehli howan ...dopehra ho gya ...'



 'Bhabhi jad tusi gussey ch vekhdey o sachin vohat e sohney lagdey o'  roti khanda muskuranda hoyea jeetu bolea 
 'Mein kado tere wal gussey nal vekhea vey ..' gilass ch lassi pa jeetu mohrey rakhdi preet fer akhan kad di boli ..
 'Kyoun jad mein kuch kehnda gussey nyi hundey ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea 
 'Ena ku tan gussa jaruri a deor nu dikhana'  hasdi hoyi preet tokri vichon gram roti kad jeetu di thali ch rakhdi  boli'  nyi tan aj kal dey deor bhabhi nal kuch jyada e chambl jandey ney ..' 
' par jad bhabhi tuhadey wargi sohni sunakhi hovey tan'  roti khanda jeetu bolea'  gussey ch hor b sohni lagdi a ..'
 'Chal chad eh sab  'jeetu nu vekh hasdi hoyi preet boli'  aj bibi bapu ghar nyi mera bda dil karda kiran didi nu mil k aan da ..'
roti khanda jeetu kehan e lga c haan haan .. koi na chaldey haan unha dey ghar par ek dum bolea'  nyi nyi bilkul b nyi ..'
 'Kyoun'  udas mayous jehi hundi preet boli
 'j bibi nu pta lag gya tan ...na ji na tuhanu tan pta e a mere ton bibi samney jooth nyi bol hona ...'
 'Oye hoye mera dialogue mere tey e'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli 
 'Edan e a ..' gilass chuk lassi peenda jeetu muskuranda bolea
 'Bda dil karda a didi nu milan da..' jeetu dean akhan ch vekhdi preet boli'  mera sohna sohna nikka deor bhabhi di eni gal nyi man sakda ..'
 'Tusi mn dey o meri gal ..' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Manugi .' jeetu wal vekhdi sehaj swah ch preet boli'  jo kahunga tun'  
 'Pkka'  roti khanda khanda ruk preet wal vekhda jeetu mukeria'  baad ch mukeriyo na ..'
 'Rehn dey nyi lay k jana tan na lay k ja ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet  udas hundi boli 
 'Gussey kyoun hundey o'  preet da uterya munh vekh jeetu bolea'  tusi tyar ho jayo mein roti kha k chad anda tuhanu ..' 
 'Tyar e haan .. ' apney kapdeya wal vekhdi.preet boli 
 'Edan nyi changi trah tyar ho k ... akhan ch kajl ...surkhi bindi  laa ..sohna jeha suit pa k ..'  ' muskuranda hoyea jeetu bolea ..'akhir pind ch mere b tan roab bney k eni sohni bhabhi nal jeetu tureya janda ...' 
 'Oh ho acha ji ..' hasdi chehkdi hoyi preet boli'  koi na pind ch teri tohr bna dindi haan' 
'Jaldi tyar hovo fer mein chad anda tuhanu .. aa k dangra lyi patthey b...
Kutarney ney .. ' muskuranda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Hye kinna changa a tun  jeetu ...'chehkdi hoyi preet kahli kahli ch kamrey wal jandi boli ...' vohat e changa ...'
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' acha bhabhi chalda mein ...'  kiran tey preet kolon uthda jeetu bolea'  tusi karo gallan ..'
 ' beh ja .. tun ki karna ghar ja k'  jeetu wal vekhdi kiran boli'  j bhukh lgi tan ethey e roti bna dindi haan ..'
 'Nyi bhabhi'  manjey tey beithi kiran wal vekhda jeetu bolea'  roti asin kha k aye c ..bas bhabhi kehndi c tuhanu milan nu dil karda es lyi asin aa gye ...'
 'Eh tan tun vohat e changa kita jeetu .. mera apna vohat dil karda c preet nu miln nu par teri bibi karkey nyi ayi ...' mayous jehi ho kiran boli 
 'Aa jana c tusi bibi ney ki kehna c ...' preet wal vekh fer kiran wal vekhda jeetu bolea ...
 'Pta nyi ki kehndi ..' thori udas hundi kiran boli'  tenu tan sab pta e a ..
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Kuch der chup khada sochda riha jeetu'  acha bhabhi mein ghantey ku tak lain anda tuhanu ...dangran lyi pathey b kuterney ney ..'
 'Koi na mein chad ayoungi  'preet wal vekh fer jeetu wal vekhdi kiran boli ..
 'Nyi nyi didi jeetu lay jayouga aa k'  kiran wal vekhdi preet boli ...
 'Theek a bhabhi ..tusi karon gallan'  gate wal anda jeetu bolea .....   jidan khush ho chehkdi hoyi bhabhi apni didi kol beithi gallan kar rahi c ....ek sakoon jeha c usdey dil ch bhabhi nu ethey lya ..

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'Sachin bhabhi aj tan tusi meri tohr bna diti pind ch ..' preet nal ghar waps aa jeetu preet nu upr ton lay haithan tak vekhda bolea'  vohat e sohney lag rahey o tusi es suit ch ...' 
 'Oye hoye sachin ..' apney suit wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Tuhadi sonh .. ena sohna lagda eh suit tuhadey utey k puchon na ... darji ney changi trah nap k sitta esnu ..' preet dey ghutwey suit ch njr andey dilkash utar charav nu niharda jeetu bolea
 'Mein aap sitta c es nu ..' apney suit nu vekhdi preet boli 
 'Ohh haan sach mein tan bhul e gya c meri bhabhi tan suit c lendi a ..' halkey harey rang dey fullan di kadayi walley suit ch preet dey dul dul paindey husan nu vekh jeetu muskuranda hoyea bolea .. ek dum pattola lag rahi c preet us suit ch lak tey ghuti kameej dey goddeya ton thorey upr tak pujdey kameej dey palleya tey chamkdi peeley rang di fullan wali kadayi .. thalley chauna wali khulli duli patiala sahi salwaar .. patli patang uchi lambi jatti da jan kad da husan.. aj shyad pehli baar eni gaur nal bhabhi nu vekh riha c jeetu .. sohni tan usnu raj k lagdi c bhabhi  .. jism pura niroya gaddar ....lambi surahi daar gardan . Ubri hoyi hik dean  gollayean  da ubaar  ageo nukela .. samtal dhid nal chimbdi kameej ch patla lak ..jiven nawi nawi jawan hoyi mutiyar kudi ... pattan ch chauna wali salwaar dean silwaatn..  paunchey addea thalley.. pairan  ch payi suit nal match kardi sitareya wali juti .. dil kar riha c usda aj bas bhabhi nu velhi jawey ....
 'Ki kitta tun ghar aa k ..' jeetu nu apney wal tak taki lga k vekhdey hoye vekh preet boli'  pathey kutrey k nyi..'
 'Haan kutar lye bas panney a ..' wadey wal vekhda jeetu bolea .. sochea pehln tuhanu lay aawan ..ekeley da ghar chit nyi lag riha c ...'
'acha ji ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli 
 'Sachin tuhdey bina ghar sunna sunna lag riha c ..' muskuranda hoyea jeetu wadey  wal janda bolea ..' hun tusi aa gye tuhanu vekh lya chain aa gya ..'
 'Oye hoye ..' jeetu nu dangran dey wadey wal janda vekh preet nu jiven 
Kuch chetey aya usdey pichey pichey dangraan dey wadey ch aa  ek dum  boli' Oye ek gal puchni c tere ton .' Jeetu wal gaur nal vekhdi preet boli'  kiran didi nu ena ghur ghur k kyoun vekh riha c ...'
 'Kadon ..' ek passey pya pattheya da  khali  tokra chukda jeetu hairaan hunda bolea
 'Jyada dramey na kar mein sab vekhea'  jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  kidan akhan fad fad kiran didi nu vekh riha c ..'
 'Nyi bhabhi tuhanu galti lagi mein kado vekhea ...'  bina preet wal vekhey jeetu kutrey hoye harrey patheya tey tudi sutda bolea
 'Menu Galti ..' jeetu dey nedey aa us dean akhan ch vekhdi preet boli  'jad manjey tey beithi kiran didi mere nal gallan kar rahi c teria akhan kithey c' 
 'Kitey b nyi..'sakpkanda hoyea  pattheya ch tudi ralanda jeetu bolea
 'Chal jootha vekhea mein kidan akhan tika kiran didi di hik wal vekh riha c ...' gaur nal jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli 
 'Nyi tan' mukrda hoyea jeetu bolea munh da rang ud gya eh soch hye rabba bhabhi ney usnu kiran bhabhi dey mummey nihardey fad lya 
 'Mere nal tan jooth bolea na kar ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli  'kidan ghur ghur vekh riha c mein apni akhin vekhea
 'O bhabhi ..' kuch jwaab na sujeya jeetu nu 
'Bol hun  ' lak tey hath rakh jeetu dey udey hoye munh wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Waisey e njr chali gyi honi..' preet ton akhan churanda jeetu bolea
 'Oh ho waiaey e kidan ..mein aap vekhea bina akh jhapkey ghur ghur uthey vekh riha c .' Jeetu nal behas kardi preet boli 
 'Dikh  rahey c vekh ho gye'  patheya ch tudi rla tokrey ch panda holi jehi bolea jeetu'  menu lagda unha ney kameej thalley kuch nyi paya c . .'
 'J oh vekh lendey ki sochdey kidan ghur ghur vekh riha c  '  jeetu nu samjandi hoyi preet boli
 'Nyi eni ghur k v nayi vekhea bas ek adi baar njr ja tiki c uthey... mera ki kasor dikh rahey c vekh ho gye ..apney wallon safayi dinda jeetu tokra chuk majh agey khurli ch patthey sutda bolea
 'Oh acha ji ki dikh rahey c ..' puchdi puchdi preet da hassa nikl aya jidan masoom bhola jeha ban jeetu ney keha'  dikh rahey c vekh ho gye ..'
'Menu nyi pta ..' bhabhi nu hasdi vekh jeetu b sharmanda hoyea hass pya
 'Pta tenu sab kuch a ..ena bholla tun hay nyi jinna lagda a'  akhan tarerdi preet jeetu nu cherdi boli
 'Unha nu b chunni lay laini chahidi c hun mera ki kasoor jhaatia mardey c mere ton vekh ho gya  'masoom jeha ban jeetu safayi dinda bolea
 'Kehrry jhattia  mardey c vey'  Jeetu nal behas kardi preet boli 
 'Mardey tan c kameej vichon  bahar nikl..' kiran dey mummeya di golayi nu chetey karda jeetu bolea
 'Awin mardey  c ..unha kehra khulley galley di kameej payi c  ' fer behas di hoyi preet boli
 'Hun tuhanu kidan dassaan mere matlab bahar nu nikley hoye c..' mud tokrey nu patheya nal bharda jeetu holi jehi  bolea'  vekh ho gya' 
 'Oh ho acha ji  'jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli  'shukar a unha nu pta nyi lga k tun unha di hik nu ghur riha' 
 'Hor ki ... suit b patla c dikhdey pye c bahar nu nikley ...' bina preet wal vekhey jeetu kiran di kameej ch ubrey gol gol mummey tey bahar nu niklia doddia nu yaad karda bolea
 'Sachin bda lucha a tun ..' hasdi hoyi preet boli'  meri wadi didi a oh... kuch tan lihaj karda na vekhda ' 
 'Mera ki kasoor unha nu sochna chahida c..' pathheya da tokra mud khurli ch sutda jeetu bolea
 'Unha nu kehra pta c asin unha dey ghar aa rahey haan naley fer eh thodi pta c jeetu eda wada ho giya bhabhia dey mummey napda firda ..' pta nyi kidan preet dey munh vichon mummey nikl gya jeetu wal vekhdi ney jeev dand haith dba lyi jad samj ayi ki bol gyi oh' 
jhatka tan lga jeetu nu b  bhabhi dey munh ton mumma sun ... sharmanda hoyea bolea'  tusi b na bhabhi awen' 
 'Awen kiven ..'apni hik tey lyi  chumni nal apney mummeya di golayi nu swaar k  dhakdi preet boli'  hun tan menu b tere ton ...'
 'Ki mere ton .' Pathhey panda panda ruk gardan ghuma  preet wal vekh bolea jeetu ..
 'Kuch nyi ... ' jeetu wal vekh apna hassa rok preet boli'  pathhey pa majhan nu ...'


 'Daso na bhabhi ...' nimma nimma hasda jeetu fer bolea
 'Ki dassan ...  'hasdi hoyi preet boli  'jehra dujeya di bhabhia di hik niharda rehnda ..ki pta meri hik tey b akhan tikanda hovey...'

'Nyi bhabhi tuhadi sonh kadi nyi vekhea tuhadi hik wal ......' keha chahey jeetu ney eh pr apney aap e usdi njr chunni nal dhaki preet di hik tey ja tiki
 'Acha ji ....  kyoun changi nyi lagdi.. hasdi hasdi preet jeetu nu apni hik wal vekhdey vekh boli
 'Nyi o gal nyi ..jhepda jijhkda hoyea jeetu apnia najran preet di hik ton hta khurli kol aa beith pathey khilarda bolea
 'Fer ..' gaur nal jeetu dean akhan ch vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi nalka ged pani di balti bhardi boli
 'Tusi Kadi vekhn e nyi diti ...chunni ch luko k rakhdey o ...' hasda hoyea jeetu preet nu cherda bolea
 'O teri sachin .. sachi jina bholla tun lagda una hay nyi ... ' nalka ged di ruk preet uchi uchi hasdi usnu cherdi boli
 'Nyi tan .. ' patheya ch tudi mila majhn agey karda   jeetu bolea 
 'Ki nyi tan ...'   balti chuk majh kol aa khadi hundi preet boli


 'Bhabhi tusi keha c j mein tuhanu kiran bhabhi nal mila lyawa jo mangu ga.. ' tokra ek passey rakhda jeetu bolea 
 'Menu pta tun ki mangna koi na rat nu son velley ..' apna bull ghutdi preet balti majh agey kardi boli 
 'Nyi bhabhi...' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea 
 'Fer . ' akhan chuk jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'tuhanu vekhna...' sar ton lay pair tak preet nu niharda jeetu muskuranda hoyea bolea
 'Koi na vekhi ja'  hasdi  hoyi preet boli  'jina marji vekh' 
 'Nyi binna chunni ton  ' chunni nal dhaki hoyi  preet di hik niharda jeetu bolea
 'kyoun...'  jeetu di gal sun jad smj ayi  preet nu hik tey hath rakhdi  boli'  hye rabba...'
 'Mn ja na bhabhi  ..' preet nu gussey na hundi vekh jeetu hausla kar fer bolea
 'Tun b ki yaad karunga'  chunni lah hath ch fad preet sidi khadi ho jeetu wal vekh hasdi hoyi boli'  khush hun ..'Lagda tenu chaska lag gya bhabhia di hik vekhn  da  '
 'Edan di gal nyi ..' gaur nal preet di hik wal vekhda jeetu burburya ..
 'Khush hun ..' muskurandi hoyi preet... betab hoye jeetu nu  bina akh jhapkey  kameej andar lukey apney  mummeya nu nihardey vekh boli  
 'Haan...' chehkda hoyea jeetu bolea'  par tusi kameej  thalley .. kiran bhabhi ney tan kuch nyi...'
 'Mein tan pandi haan ..' sar jhuka apni hik wal vekhdi preet boli 
 'Hye j kitey tusi b kameej thalley kuch na paya hunda ...' bull ghutda jeetu bolea 
 'Fer ki ...' jeetu wal vekh akhan kad di preet boli
 'Kuch nyi ..' dar jeha gya jeetu bhabhi nu edan akhan kad ghurdi vekh 
 'O acha acha ...na kaka ji na o nyi dikhnia jehria tun labhda  'apni hik wal vekhdi preet muskurandi hoyi boli .. khumari jehi chard gyi apni hik wal vekhdi nu .. gol gol mummey kameej ch ghutey hoye bahar nu nikley jiven jeetu nu tichar  kar puch rahey hon'  kyoun hun das teri bhabhi di hik kisi ton ghat a ...'
 'Ki gal chup e kr gya kithey gwach gya ..' jeetu nu bina akh jhapkey apni hik wal vekhdey vekh masti ch sah tan usdey b tez hon lgey jwaan mundey samney bina chunni ton khadi tey munda b akhan e akhan ch usdey mummeya di golayi nap bechain hunda
 'Nayi bhabhi'  apney bull ghut preet dey kameej ch kassey hoye mummeya di golayi tey bahar nu nikli hik da nukeela pan vekh jeetu aukha  sah lenda bolea'  vohat e sohney ney tuhadey' gol gol tikhey tikhey ..'
 'Vekh vekh kidan akhan fad vekh riha .' Apni hik nu nihardey jeetu nu vekh sharmandi hasdi hoyi preet boli'  jo labh riha o nyi dikhnia ..!'
 'Jo vekh riha o kehrey ghat ney .'. sah jeha niglda bechain hoyea jeetu bolea'  sonh rabb di vohat e dil khichvi hik a tuhadi .. kisi di nyi edan di... rupi di b nyi ..gol gol tikhey tikhey tuhadey dono mum....' bolda bolda ruk gya jeetu ..
 'Chal chal vohtia jhattia na maar ..' hasdi sharmandi hoyi preet boli
 'Bs bhabhi hun chunni nal na dhakeyeo eney sohney ...  ' preet dey hath ch fdi chuni wal vekhda jeetu bolea' menu tan pta e nyi c meri bhabhi di hik eni jan kadvi ..'
 'Oh ho ..kakka ji kam b kar layo ..majha becharean pattheya nu udeek dean ..'jeetu ton apni tareef sun tey behal hoyea vekh preet hasdi hoyi  boli
 'Haan haan  ' jeetu preet di ubri hoyi nukeeli hik dean gollalyean vekh da besbra jeha ho bolea'  bas hun chunni nal ena nu dhakeo na...'
 'Nyi dhakdi ..vekh lay'  hasdi hoyi burburayi preet ..' nyi tan begainia bhabhia di hik ghur ghur ulambey lay anda firunga....'
 'Jad tuhadi  vekh lyi hun kisi hor di kyoun vekhunga ..' preet nu muskurandi vekh jeetu hasda hoyea bolea.... 'ah tokra fadayeo jra ..!
 'Kyoun nyi ji  'agey nu jhuk  jameen tey pye khalli tokrey nu chukdi preet boli
 'Hye bhabhi ..' siskarda hoyea jeetu machal e uthea 
 'Ki hoyea'  tokra chukdi ek dum boli preet
 'Hye j tusi thora hor jhukdey swad e aa  jana c ..' apni hik tey hath rakhda jeetu bull chabda bolea
 'O kiven ... ' par agey e pal jhuki hoyi ney  jad kameej dey galley vichon bahar nu nikl jhattia mardey apney mummeya wal vekhea ek dum sidi khadi ho apni hik upr hath rakhdi boli'  badmaash'  

 'Sachi J thori hor jhuk jandey tusi changi trah dikhh janey c .. ' preet dey gorey chittey mummeya di uprli nangi golayi vekh betab ho chuka jeetu hauka lenda bolea
 'Besrm  jeha' chunni chuk apni hik dhakdi preet da haasa nikl aya 
 'Hye bhabhi  chunni kyoun lay lyi'  apni hik nu chunni nal dhakdi preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Na ji teri akh da koi bharsoa nyi ..' hik tey chunni swardi preet boli
 'Kehra kuch dikhea bhabhi   'bechain  jeha ho akhan tikayi jeetu preet dey sahan nal hildey mummeya wal vekhda bolea'  J tusi kameej thalley kuch na paya hunda  tuhadia kalia kalia bahr nu ...'
 'Meria kalia nyi bhuria ney ..' apney aap e pta nyi kidan preet dey munh ton  nikl gya
 'Hye sachin . ..menu dikhayo .' preet di gal sun hor besbra ho jeetu bolea 
 ' Chal chal dangra da km mukka  .' jeetu ton akhan churandi preet wadey ton bhr nikldi boli   'hor b km ney menu ...'
'ruk ja na bhabhi ..' preet nu vehrdey wal jandi vekh jeetu mayous hunda bolea' thori der hor vekh lain deo. .'
 'Nayi ji ..hasdi hoyi wadey ton vehrdey wall panjeya bhar turdi  preet ney gardan ghuma jeetu wal vekhea yakeen c usnu pakka usdey lak wal wal e vekhda hona  eh sochdi dey alahad jwan mutiyaar   jism  ch ek niroyi masti ch dubi  lehar daudan lgi........
 






 'Eh ki bhabhi ..' chaunkey ch beithi preet dey chulley ch nikldi agg di loh nal   chamkdey munh wal vekhda jeetu us kol aa beithda bolea ...
 'Ki ..' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli
 'Eh shawl di bukl kyoun mar lyi ..' lal rang da shawl lapet rottia pakandi preet di hik wal vekhda jeetu muskuranda bolea 
 'Thand lagdi c ji... es lyi shawl di bukl maar lyi  'apney modey tey shawl da palla theek kardi preet boli'  naley fer ek lucha deor vehrdey ch firda ...'
 'Kaun ..' hasdi hoyi preet wal vekh muskuranda hoyea  jeetu bolea 
 'Tun hor kaun  ' tedi akh nal jeetu wal vekh preet nimi nimi hasdi roti baildi boli
 'Mere tan sarey chaa adhurey  e reh gye ..' preet nu muskurandi vekh jeetu gaur nal usdi shawl ch lukey mummeya di golayi labhn di kosis krda bolea 
 'Kehrey chaa .. ' akhan matkandi preet  hasdi hoyi boli
 'Tuhanu bina chunni ton vekhn dey..' preet dean akhan ch vekhda jeetu hath agey kar chulley di aag sekda bolea'   ' tusi shawl lay lyi ..
 'Edan e  a...' vehrdey ch dhund  wal vekhdi preet boli'  thand vohat a ..'
 'Koi  na ..garmia aa lain deo..' preet dey patley patley gulabi muskurandey bulln wal vekh jeetu hasda hoyea bolea ..' fer tan ... '
 'Oye hoye  'jeetu wal vekhdi preet hasdi hoyi boli .' Ki fer tan ...'
 'Hanji fer tan patley patley suit paya karungey ..' nimma nimma hasda  preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea' udon vekhunga tuhadia bhuria bhuria ..'
 sharm nal lal e ho gyi preet akhan churandi holi jehi boli'  luchha.. '
 'Tusi app e keha tuhadia kallia nyi bhuria a ..' preet nu sharmandi sangdi sharm nal lal hundi vekh jeetu usnu cherda bolea' Bhabhi  edan nyi ho sakda aj ghar  koi nyi tusi kameej thalley kuch na pawo..'
 'Nyi ji edan tan bilkul nyi  ho sakda....' roti twey tey pandi preet boli'  ek tan thand vohat a uton ghar ch lucha deor ghumda jis nu aj kal bhabhia di hik napn da chaska lagea hoyea a ..'
 'Nyi nyi .. bhabhia di nyi apni bhabhi di..' preet dey sharm nal gulabi hoye noor jhalkdey chehrey wal vekhda bolea'  jad meri bhabhi eni sohni a mein kyoun begainia bhabhia di hik ... '
 'Chal chal roti kha ...  'thalli jeetu agey krdi preet boli ..  'rat ho gyi tey sarey krn waley pye ney ..savery bibi ney aa k meri gutt fad puchna ki kardi rahi nee ghar  ch ena khilara paya hoyea ...
 'Mein keh dayounga vehl e nyi lga eney kam c  ...' roti khanda jeetu muskuranda hoyea bolea ... 
 'Rehn dey vey ..' twey ton roti chuk jeetu di thalli ch rakhdi preet boli'  bibi samney bol tan hunda nyi tere ton ...
 'Koi na ... dhak  layo lukko layo  shawl ch ...    'preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea .. ' garmia ch vekheya karunga kidan lukoyungey patley patley suit ch ..'
 'Luko layoungi udon b .. tun roti kha '  hasdi hoyi preet boli ..



Roti tuk da kam muka bhandey manjdi nu ek sarur jeha chadeya hoyea c jeetu nu edan apney lyi betab hunda vekh chahey kamrey ch ja chukka c jeetu fer b  chaunkey ton bar bar akh chuk kamrey wal vekhdi enj lagda usnu jiven kadi b mud bahr aa us kol beith jayouga ..  
Hye mein b kini besrm haan kidan besrm ho bina chunni ton usdey samney khadi ho gyi .... tey jeetu b kida akhan fad fad mere mummey wal vekh riha c ....hye meria rabba apni hik tey hath rakh preet sochdi sochdi kumari nal kamb uthi k jeetu ney usdey mummey akhan naal naap lye .. fer ki hoyea j naap lye ..apney aap nu tassali dindi burburayi preet' .chahey o menu apni bhabhi samjda par sada viah  b tan hoyea a .....'
Bechara kidan tarseya hoyea meri hik nu niharda mintan karda keh riha c j bhabhi tusi kameej thalley kuch na paya hunda .. sochdi sochdi da hassa e nikl aya ... koi na kaka ji kisi din kameej thalley kuch na pa teri jaan b pkka kadungi .....  . ...


Kini der ho chuki c manjey tey pya jeetu baar baar  buhey wal e vekh riha c .. bhabhi kam muka andar nyi ayi  ... cha chadeya hoyea c tey chaska jeha lagea c aj b bhabhi nal kal wang gallan krn da tey bhabhi nu ched k tang krn da.. par aj bhabhi andar e nyi aa rahi c bar bar buhey wal e vekhda usdey aan di udeek krda  ....  dil khushi nal jhoom utheya jiven e preet kamrey ch ayi ... par edan pya riha manjey tey jiven usney andar ayi preet  nu vekhea e na hovey ..
 'Lattu bujja dewan ..' manjey tey lmey pye jeetu wal vekh muskurandi hoyi preet ney puchea
 'Bujja deo  'chatt wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'O jeetu edar vekh  'apni shawl lah ek passey killi tey   rakhdi preet boli 
 'Hanji bhabhi ki hoyea'  passa watt preet wal vekhdey jeetu ney puchea
 'Kuch dikhya..' nimi nimi muskurandi hoyi preet jeetu wal vekhdi boli
 'Ki bhabhi ..' edar udar kamrey ch vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Ja vey jeetu tun jhalla e a mere wal vekh ..' bull tuk hasdi hoyi preet boli
 'Hanji ..' gaur nal preet dey munh wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Kuch dikhya .' Muskurandi hoyi fer preet ney puchea
 'Ki bhabhi ..' samj na ayi jeetu nu ki vekhn nu keh rahi a bhabhi
 'Ohi jo tun shammi vekhn nu kehnda c'  muskurandi hoyi preet kameej ch apni ubri  hik wal vekhdi boli
 'Hye o meria rabba  'jiven e  jeetu di njr preet di hik wal gyi ....akhan fad fad preet dey tikhey tikhey mummeya  wal vekhda  kahli kahli ch majey tey uth beithda  bolea  '. 'bhabhi ...bhabhi lattu na band kreyo.....'

bechain ho manjey tey chall mar uth beith apni hik wal vekhdey jeetu di halat vekh preet muskurandi hasdi  hoyi boli'  nyi kardi ....'




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#28
So nice
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#29
Att update se Hun auu swad update da
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#30
nice mdm.hun ithon new chlegi yaan haale ik hor episode hega si?
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v. nice update mam keep updating ..... thanks
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#32
kya baat hai mam.... asli story ta hun shuru hoegi.... wanting for your update
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update mam ?
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Wait for some time for next update


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waiting for update...
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 'Kuch dikhya .' Muskurandi hoyi  preet ney fer puchea
 'Ki bhabhi ..' samj na ayi jeetu nu ki vekhn nu keh rahi a bhabhi
 'Ohi jo tun shammi vekhn nu kehnda c'  muskurandi hoyi preet apni ubri  hik wal vekhdi boli
 'Hye o meria rabba  'jiven e  jeetu di njr preet di hik wal gyi ....akhan fad fad preet dey tikhey tikhey mummeya  wal vekhda Jeetu kahli kahli ch majey tey uth beithda  bolea  '. 'bhabhi ...bhabhi lattu na band kreyo.....'



bechain ho manjey tey chall mar uth beith apni hik wal vekhdey jeetu di halat vekh preet muskurandi hoyi boli'  nyi kardi ..'
 'Sachin ... ' hauka lay preet dey sahan nal hildey mummeya wal vekh behal hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Joothi  ' muskurandi hoyi preet akhan matkandi lattu bujan lyi hath agey krdi boli
 'Nyi nyi bhabhi lattu na bujawin ...' besabra jeha ho jeetu kadi preet di shahn nal upr thalley hundi hik ch kaid gol gol mummeya di golayi tey bahr nu ubrea doddia wal vekhda kadi bijli dey button tey rakhey bhabhi dey hath wal
 'Kyoun ...' bull nu dand nal dba preet jeetu di halat vekh aap b sarur ch dubdi boli ..
 'Sachin tusi es velley kameej thalley kuch nyi paya ..' preet di hik tey akhan tikyi   kameej ch ubar k bhr nu nikliya usdean doddia nu vekh sarur ch apna sah niglda jeetu bolea..
 'Tenu ki lagda ...' muskurandi preet jeetu di halat vekh apni bahar nu nikli hik wal vekhdi boli
 'Bhabhi nedey aa k vekh lwaan ..' besabra jeha ho jeetu bina akh jhapkry preet dey mummeya di golayi tey us upr  ubrea doddia vekh behal hunda bolea.. enj lga   aj  munh mangi murad puri kr diti bhabhi ney 
 'Kyoun etho nyi dikhdey ..  'bull tuk hasdi hoyi preet boli' Manjey tey beitha beitha e vekh jo vekhna  nyi tan mein lattu band kar dena...  ' lattu band krn lyi hath agey kardi preet boli 
 'Nyi nyi lattu na band kareo ..' bechain hoyea jeetu bina akh jhapkey preet di hik wal vekh ah bharda bolea  ' hye kinney sohney .. gol gol tikhey tikhey.. ' sahi e keh riha c bechain hoyea jeetu bhabhi di hik da ubar e dil khichwa jan kadwa c .. mummey ek dum gol tey doddia nukkelia bahar nu nikl taneyia hoyea ...mummey di golayi ney tan keel k rakh ditta jeetu nu .. sahan nal hildey upr thalley hundey mummey jiven saintaan mar usnu apney kol bulla rahey hon.. kehr e dha ditta c bhabhi ney aj tan .. jan halk tey aa atki usdi ...dil kr riha c uth k bhabhi dey nedey ja dono mummeya nu palos devey ...
 'Kush hun ..' jeetu di halat tey akhan di chamak vekh nimi nimi hasdi preet boli...
 'Haan ..' sah niglda jeetu preet di hik utey akhan tikayi bolea ...
 'Sochea ..kyoun apney deor nu garmia tak udeek karwani.. jad mere pattley suit ch meri hik nu jhattia maru ..'jeetu kol andi preet usdi bechaini vekh muskurandi hoyi boli
 'Sachin ...'bechain hoyea jeetu besabra ho bolea'Tusi kinney changey o'
 'Tun kehra ghatt changa a'   bull ghutdi preet manjey di wahi tey beithdi  boli'  menu kiran didi dey ghar lay k gya ...'
 'Bas bhabhi ek gal meri hor mn lay ..' apney sahan nu kabu karda jeetu bolea ..
 'Kehri..' dharkdey dil na jeetu wal vekhdi preet ney puchea pta tan c usnu jeetu ney ehi kehna bhabhi hath laa lain dey ..
 'Aj di raat lattu jag da rehn dayeo es nu na bujayeo ..' karmrey ch lattu di roshni ch chamkdey preet dey chehrey wal vekhda jeetu bolea ..
 'Ohhh ..koi na nayi bujandi  ..' jeetu di halat vekh hasdi hoyi preet jeetu dean chamkdia akhn ch vekhdi boli..
 'Swad aa gya bhabhi  'preet nu manjey tey beithi vekh jeetu madhoshi ch bolea'  kinney sohney ney tuhadey .gol gol' sah usdey wadh dey ja rahey c eni nedeyo bhabhi dey mummeya di golayi vekh ... '.jee karda vekhi jawan ...'
 'Vekhi ja menu ki'  hasdi hoyi preet bechain hoye jeetu dean akhn ch vekhdi boli ...
 'Acha bhabhi kal tusi samjaya c   menu k kidan lyi di a kudi di chumi ... ' preet dey muskurandey bull wal vekhda jeetu sah niglda bolea
 'Haan fer ..'muskurandi hoyi preet ney  jeetu dean akhn ch vekhdi hoyi pucheya
 'Menu lagda menu samj aa gyi kidan lyi kudi di chummi ..' bhabhi nu muskurandi vekh chehkda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Haan fer agey b bol ..' jeetu wal ekhh hasdi hoyi preet boli
 'Tusi check kr layo menu kudi di chummi laini ayi k nyi ..' preet dey gulabi nrm patley patley  bulln nu  vekhda jeetu  sharart ch muskuranda hoyea bolea
 'Ki matlab..'kuch kuch smj tan aa gyi preet ki keh riha jeetu fer b anjan ban di boli 
 'Matlb eh k aj mein lenda tuhadi  chummi'  preet wal vekh hasda hoyea jeetu shararti muskan muskuranda bolea'  fer daseo menu kudi di chummi laini ayi k nyi ... '
 'Oh acha ji ...' jeetu dean akhan ch vekhdi preet uchi uchi hassan lgi 
 'Ki hoyea'  preet nu hasdi vekh jeetu hairaan hunda bolea .usnu tan lga c usdi gal sun bhabhi ghuri wat akhan kad us wal vekhugi ..
 'Sida keh na chummi lain nu dil karda'  jeetu dey bulln wal vekhdi preet boli 
 'Haan.. nyi.. nyi  'samj nyi jeetu nu ki boley par bhabhi nu hasdi vekh bolea'  dayoungey tusi menu chummi ..'
 'Nyi  'jeetu wal vekhdi preet  bharwatey chuk akhan kad di boli 
 'Kyoun ..' mayous jeha ho jeetu bolea
'Tun keha tenu chummi laini aa gyi .. boldi boldi ruk  jeetu dean akhn ch vekh  nimmi nimmi hasdi hoyi  preet boli'  fer apey lay mein kyoun dewan' 
 'Sachin .. ' shyad yakeen na hoyea jeetu nu k bhabhi ney haan kr diti
 'Haan pr ek e .. ' jeetu dean akhn ch vekhdi preet boli
 'Haan haan ek baar bs' manjey tey agey nu hunda jeetu apney bull preet dey bulln kol lya usdean akhn ch vekhn lga 
 'Ki hoyea ..' jad jeetu ney apeny bull hor  agey na kitey holi jehi boli preet 
 'Sachin lay lwan gussey tan nyi hovongey ...' yakeen nyi c usnu k bhavhi eni jaldi haan keh dayougi  
 ' Lagda nyi tenu chummi laini aa gyi'  jeetu nu darda jikhak4da vekh  preet da apna hassa nikl aya 
 'Kyoun ..' gaur nal preet wal vekhdey jeetu ney puchea
 'J aa gyi hundi tan ena sochda na  . ' jeetu dey bull kol apney bull lya preet usdi thodi fad hasdi hoyi boli'  budhu ..'
 'Hun na roki bhabhi' ek dum josh ch aa jeetu preet dey   modey fad apney bull preet dey bulln nal jod dey e  masti ch kamb uthea  .. eney nram mulaym kambey gulabi bull bhabhi dey .. hosh e ud gye usdey 
Bulln nal bull jod usney bhabhi dean akhan ch vekhea jehri usdean akhn ch e vekhdi pyi c ... bharwatey chuk jidan bhabhi ney usdean akhn ch vekhea sabr krna aukha ho gya us lyi apna pura munh khol preet dey dono bullan nu apney bulln ch fsa chusan lga 

Preet da tan rom rom e khind utheya jidan aj jeetu usdey bull chum riha c .akhn band hon lagea usdean  kayi mahiniya baad usdey pyasey bull nu koi chum riha c .. chum e nyi riha c jeetu tan usdey bull nu chusda hoyea besabra ho usdey modey fad usdey bulln nu khan e lga .. jeetu dey bulln di bechaini tey gram sahan da sek usdey munh andar aa usdey sahan nal ghul usdi kyi mahinia ton suti pyi jwani nu ubaln lga .. apney aap e usdey bull jeetu dey bulln nal bhid usdey bulln nu chusan lgey ..madhosh hoyi nu koi hosh na rahi kad jeetu da hath usdi hik upr aa usdey mummey nu palosan lga ..
Jini betabi nal jeetu preet dey bull chusda uni e bechaini ch preet b usdey bulln nu chusn di kosis kardi nu eh b ehsaas naa hoyea k jeetu usdey mummey di golayi nu hath ch ghut palos riha ..
Jeetu nu khud pta na lagea k usda hath kad bhabhi di hik tey puj gya par jad bhabhi ney ek baar b na rokea .. himmat usdi apney aap wad di gyi hath ch fadeya preet bhabhi da sakht mumma tey doddi ek dum tikhi usdi hatheli tey chubdi...

Bina bra ton kameej uton  bhabhi dey mummey nu fad ghutdey hoye enj lag riha c jeetu nu jiven usney bhabhi dey nangey mummey nu fadeya hovey . ungln usdean bekabu ho preet di doddi nu fad masaln lagea .. jina o bhabhi dey mummey di dodi ungln ch fsa masalda uni e bechaini ch bhabhi usdey bull apney bulln ch fsa khichn di kosis kardi bechain  hundi us upr jhukn lgdi ...
Behal hoyi akhan meechi bhabhi di bechaini nu vekh hath usda behkda hoyea kameej dey galley vichon andar mumneya wal jaan lga
 'Jeetu ..  'ek dum jiven hosh ayi preet nu jeetu dey bulln nalo apney bull vakh krdi jhatkey nal pichey nu ho gyi ..jeetu da hath apni hik tey ...sochdey e kambdi hoyi ney  jeetu da hath prey kr ghuri wat uswal vekhea .
Tey jeetu lyi jiven koi hasseen supna tut gya .. bhabhi dey bulln di narmi tey tapish ch behakda hoyea hath kithey paan lga c usnu khud nyi pta lagea ...

Apney sah kabu kardi hik tey hath rakh kamrey ch edar udar vekhdi preet nu kuch samj na ayi ki kahey jeetu nu ..

'Hun tan nyi kahogey menu kudi di chummi laini nyi andi ..' sarur ch dubeya jeetu apney bull ghutda preet dey kambdey thar tharandey gullabi bulln wal vekhda bolea .. ek alag e swad tey nasha c bhabhi dey bulln ch ......bulln nal bull jud dey jiven usdey tan hosh e ud gye  c eney mulayam tey nrm ..pura sareer usda masti ch kamb riha c chumea b tan usney ruh nal c bhabhi dey bulln nu .. chumeya ki chus e lye c usney bhabhi dey bull ..
 tey bhabhi  ney b na tan bull vakh kitey na e koi nakhra kita ulta adkhulia akhan nal usdean akhan vh vekhdey hoye vich vich usdey bull apney bulln ch fsa chudsey pura sath ditta... 
 'Nyi ji hun nyi kehndi .. ' apney bull chabdi jeetu wal vekhdi preet nimi nimi muskurandi boli yakeen nyi ho riha c usnu jeetu ney aj usdey bull eni bechaini nal chusey ...ang ang usda khinda k rakh dita ..dil tan kr eiha c jeetu apney bull usdey bullan ton vakh e na karey ..jwan bulln di betabi tey gram sahn da sek usdey jism dey roye roye nu pigla gya ... sah ajay tak ukhdey pye c usdey hik ubar bahar nu nikli tey mummey  kameej fad bahar aan nu bechain ..
 'Vohat nrm tey mulaym a tuhadey bull ..' preet dey bulln nu vekhda jeetu khumari ch dubeya bolea ajay b enj lg riha c usnu jiven usdey bull bhabhi dey bulln nal chimbdey hon bullan  di tapish tey bhabhi dey munh vichon nikldey gram sahn ney  usdey jism nu akada k rakh dita ...
 'Hath kithey c tera ..' akhan kad ghuri wat di preet nu jad chetey aya jeetu ney tan bull chumdey hoye usdey mummey nu e fad lya c 
 'Oh bhabhi pta e nyi lga kad mera hath'  apney hath wal vekhda jeetu bolea ungln/ hatheli  ajey b bhabhi dey mummeya nu palosan dey swad ch dubea hoyi c .. gol gol tikha mumma hath ch fardey e jiven o hor e duniya ch puj gya c .. dar b riha c bhabhi gussey  ho bull na vakh kar  lavey par jad bhabhi ney kuch na keha himmat usdi apney aap wadh di gyi ungln ney ruh nal mumma palosea .. tey bhabhi dey sakth hoye mummey di doddi ..jad usney ungln ch fad masli kidan siskdi hoyi bhabhi aap usdey bulln nal apney bull ragar usnu chusan lgi c .. chetey andey e  njr usdi bhabhi dey mummeya tey challi gyi ubri hoyi hik tey sahan nal upr thalley hundey mummey tey mummeya dean dono doddia tan hor mottiya ho bahar nu ubar ayea c
 'Pta tenu sab a . 'Apni hik nu nihardey vekh jeetu wal vekhdi boli  ..kinney mahinia baad apney mummeya tey mundey da hath mehssos kr preet nu tan aj jiven bhulleya  hoyea swad chetey aa gya .. hye kuttey ney tan bull chusdey chusdey mera mumma e palos ditta. . paloseya  b ruh nal purey mummey di golayi naap gya ajay b usnu apney mummey upr jiven jeetu dean ungln ghumdea mehsoos ho rehea c 
 'Tusi b nayi rokea .. ' preet dean akhn ch vekhn di kosis karda jeetu bolea 
 'Menu tan aap nyi pta lga kad tera hath meri hik tey ... ' jeetu wal vekhdi apney sah sambhaldi boli' o tan jad tun meri kameej andr hath paan lga udon smj ayi ..
 'Pta nyi ki ho gya c ..' preet di hik wal vekhda jeetu bolea  'pr tuhadi hik tey hath rakh swad aa gya gol gol tuhada sakth  mumma' 
 'Lucha ..'jeetu dey munh ton mumma sun akhn kad ghurdi has e pyi preet 
 'Sachin bhabhi kinna sakht a tuhada  tey doddia .. mottyia tikhia nukkelia.
' preet nu hasdi vekh jeetu usdey mummeya da nukeela pan vekh apna sah kabu karda bolea 
 'Chup kr besarm. Jeha ..' jeetu nu enj khul k bolda sun sharmandi hoyi preet boli
 'sachin keha c bhabhi tusi tuhadia  kallia nyi bhurria a .. gol gol gulabi ghera tey upr bhurria doddia meri hatheli utey enj chub rehea c jiven bandook dean glllia hon..'preet dey mummeya nu tey apney hath wal vekhda jeetu bechain hoyea bolea
 'Chup chup..' jeetu nu apney mummeya nu akhan tikayi nihardey vekh  preet apni hik tey hath rakhdi boli ..
hairaan b c preet  mummey usdey aj ek dum sakht tey doddia akad k khaddiya .payi hoyi kameej tang lgn lgi  har baar sah lendi nu enj lagda jiven kameej pichey lgey hook tut jangey .. bull ghutdi sochn lgi  kutta meri eney mahinia di sutti pyi aag nu hwa dey gya.hye hun ..'

 'Nee preet ..' bahron ayi jaspreet di eh awaz sun ek dum kamb jeha gya jeetu ..enj lga usnu jiven kuch  chori kr riha hovey tey kisi ney usnu vekh lya... ehi haal preet da c  manjey tey  ekethi jehi ho buhey wal vekhn lgi ...
 'Nee preet' fer jaspreet di awaz ayi ..' so gyi k jagdi pyi a ....
 'Ki gal didi ..' jeetu wal vekh fer buhey wal vekhdi preet boli ... jaspreet da es velley enj awaz marna bilkul b changa nyi lga usnu
 'Gal suni jra ...' bahron ayi eh awaz sun jeetu b  preet wal vekhn lga  ..
'Ki gal hoyi aj fer jaspreet bhabhi tuhanu awazn mardi a ...'buhey wal vekhda jeetu bolea ... ena  mja aa riha bhabhi kol beh gallan krn da tey jaspreet bhabhi di awaz sun  ... khij.. gussa jeha aya ..
 'Bibi ney koi suneha laya hona ..us lyi shayd bullandi pyi a..' changa preet nu b nyi lga jaspreet di awaz sun ...ek khumari bharea swad aa riha c jeetu nal gallan kardi nu ..
 'Sara swad kharab kr dita' holi jeha burburanda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Kehra swad vey'  jeetu di gal sun hasdi hoyi preet boli'  ja .. ja k puch k aa ki kehndi a' 
 'Mein ...' preet wal vekhda jeetu bolea  'awaz tan tuhanu mardi a' 
 'Fer ki hoyea . Tun puch lay ki gal a' jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli' bahr thand vohat a mera dil nyi krda bahar nikln nu ...'
 'Menu nyi thand lagu ..' preet wal vekh jeetu bolea 
  'Ja na  'jeetu nu modey ton fad dhakka dindi preet boli .. ' mera puchungi tan keh devin so gyi haan ..'
 'Nyi bhabhi tusi jayo  ' bilkul dil nyi c jeetu da bahr jaan da 
 'Samjda kyoun nyi tun ja ... 'jeetu wal vekhdi preet boli'  vekh mein b teri gal mni c na  '
 'Fer ek   chummi leni  hor'  preet dey bulln wal vekhda jeetu bolea
 'Lay lawin baba  ja hun  ' kahli kahli ch jeetu nu manjey ton uthandi preet boli' vekh awazan mardi pyi a ..'
 'Nyi bhabhi'  manjey ton utarda utarda fer ruk gya jeetu
 'Ki hoyea ..' jeetu wal vekh buhey wal vekhdi preet boli
 'J menu unha ney fad lya..' hasda hoyea jeetu bolea
 'Tun b fda devin'  hasdi hoyi ek dum chup kr gal sambhaldi boli preet'  tun b fad lawin ...hun tenu b kudi di chummi laini aa gyi ..'
 'Nyi ji'  akhan matkanda jeetu b hasda hoyea bolea
 'Hath b laa  lawin ... ' jeetu dey hathan wal vekhdi preet boli'  hay b usdey motey motey wadey wadey ...'
 'Nyi ji mein tan tuhadey e hath layounga  'manjay ton uth khada hunda jeetu hath agey kr preet da mumma polla jeha palos takreebn takreebn buhey wal nu bhajda bolea
 'Luccha'  apni hik tey hath rakhdi preet khumari ch khind uthi ... sarey aam e jeetu mera mumma palos gya ... jyada e chambl pya aj ... haan sochdi da dil jor nal dhatk utheya jad usnu chetey aya manjey ton utar bahr jandey hoye jeetu dey kurtey da palla kidan pattan kolon bahar nu niklay hoyea c ...hye rabba kambni bhari khumari nal kambn lgi .. jeetu da khada c .. haan pakka khadda c akadeya hoyea esi layi tan usda kurta pattan kolon bahr nu ubreya c ..


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#37
very nice update kavita g
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#38
att kara ti kavita ji.... waiting for next update
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#39
kya baat mam .jini tarif kro ohni ghat tuhadi te tuhadi writing di
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#40
nai reesan tuhadi writing diya kavita ji..... swad e lea taa.... par please aj update jaldi de deo jada wait na karaeo please.....
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