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Awesome update. Ashima as new character has created additional expectation on the story like lesbian (?)
Will jaya introduce her to sekar, rahim and mani? very interesting.
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Wow Ashima and Jaya and mani, shekar and Rahim nice plots expected
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Excellent way of going and explain about shekar capacity in small fun with jaya let see how jaya starts fun with mani and Rahim for whether hardcore or softcore fun
Ashima new face nice I hope you can go much long with her too anyway boss keep update weekly once otherwise I feel readers miss tempo and feels sad so try to update weekly once or monthly twice in long updates
Keep rocking...pics r nice
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Ohhoo.. good one.. narration keeping reality intect..i.e. old man unable to sustain more though taken her as far as possible.. very good erotic narration..
It seems more characters are igoing to involve..MORE THE MARRIERS..
Write as per your thought but expecting the male characters remain unknown form others who fuck Jaya or her freind-teacher.. as she some how save the secrets from other...
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Nice bro. There is no guilt in her anymore. She has started enjoying the so called LIFE
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23-02-2020, 01:24 PM
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That was a great night with Shekhar uncle...and it’s her first fucking experience also..other than her hus ..!!
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23-02-2020, 01:32 PM
(This post was last modified: 19-07-2020, 08:28 AM by Herbiee. Edited 6 times in total. Edited 6 times in total.)
He got the first chance to fuck this young hot Housewife...lucky man.!!
Suprrrb update.
In Bathroom,..Second Encounter!!!
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(22-02-2020, 02:48 PM)Yampag Wrote: Ohhoo.. good one.. narration keeping reality intect..i.e. old man unable to sustain more though taken her as far as possible.. very good erotic narration..
It seems more characters are igoing to involve..MORE THE MARRIERS..
Write as per your thought but expecting the male characters remain unknown form others who fuck Jaya or her freind-teacher.. as she some how save the secrets from other...
(22-02-2020, 02:19 PM)krishkj Wrote: Excellent way of going and explain about shekar capacity in small fun with jaya let see how jaya starts fun with mani and Rahim for whether hardcore or softcore fun
Ashima new face nice I hope you can go much long with her too anyway boss keep update weekly once otherwise I feel readers miss tempo and feels sad so try to update weekly once or monthly twice in long updates
Keep rocking...pics r nice
Thanks.... 1st part of Jaya's sex with Shekhar, most of the readers were disappointed. But Jaya must need an opening sex. If I use Mani or Rahim - then there is no difference from other stories. Now she is little flexible, she can control them. Otherwise they will control her and make beg her for fuck and make her as slut of them. I don't want to show Jaya teacher as a slut. Here Shekhar uncle is a reputed person. He can't be down as Rahim and Mani. Also he can't share the secret to anybody. So I choose him first.
Here I am introduce Ashima teacher as a second heroine of this story. May be Ashima's friendship give more adventures situation in Jaya's life. Not sure May be.... Around next 10 updates are in my mind to develop and present here. But need much time. Wait for that.
Anyway thanks for the support.
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(22-02-2020, 12:43 PM)Mr Strange Wrote: Super update... You are increasing the hotness with each update bro...
Eagerly waiting for next update....
Thanks
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egarly Waiting for next update
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(23-02-2020, 03:37 PM)kuttoosan009 Wrote: Thanks.... 1st part of Jaya's sex with Shekhar, most of the readers were disappointed. But Jaya must need an opening sex. If I use Mani or Rahim - then there is no difference from other stories. Now she is little flexible, she can control them. Otherwise they will control her and make beg her for fuck and make her as slut of them. I don't want to show Jaya teacher as a slut. Here Shekhar uncle is a reputed person. He can't be down as Rahim and Mani. Also he can't share the secret to anybody. So I choose him first.
Here I am introduce Ashima teacher as a second heroine of this story. May be Ashima's friendship give more adventures situation in Jaya's life. Not sure May be.... Around next 10 updates are in my mind to develop and present here. But need much time. Wait for that.
Anyway thanks for the support.
Yes, it seems logical..
keep it up as per your plan..
you can involve more characters but just keep in mind the logic and practicality of her job and her relations with other characters.
Till now are very much successful in maintaining the practicality of any human face in day to day life. So we enjoy it and found the character live and not the characters of the story.
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Point logical. Unfortunate that Jaya did not get a satisfactory sex from the old man. Waiting to see who is gonna "Completely Satisfy" her and make her his bitch. Mani or Rahim. I believe Rahim must be stronger than Mani and make Jaya his bitch. Interesting to see how Ashima and Jaya going to be with Mani and Rahim. Any group sex in the pipeline?
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This was awesome.
I am awaiting mani to drill his teacher
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(23-02-2020, 01:24 PM)Herbiee Wrote: That was a first and great pleasurable experience with Shekhar uncle...He got the first chance to fuck this young hot Housewife
(23-02-2020, 01:32 PM)Herbiee Wrote:
aughhh kajjuuu didii wanna fuck nd cum deep in her
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Erotic. Jaya is superb homely and young housewife doing sex with old man. Gud narration. Thanks for giving this too much erotic story to us. Daily am checking here for any updates. Begging you to update atleast monthly twice and update the date or time that when u r going to update next.
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24-02-2020, 03:05 PM
Thank you for great update bro. It is always erotic between oldman and young housewife. I wish it was little longer, it is too short session between Jaya and Sekhar uncle. Never mind, it is erotic. Eagerly waiting for long sensual erotic session between Jaya and Mani
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(23-02-2020, 03:37 PM)kuttoosan009 Wrote: Excellent idea and plans for showing Jaya character in proper way and plan for showing other dimension from usual stories...
I hope next update should have more twist and fun
Go on your plans bro...as per ur words jaya can dominate mani and Rahim and all is superb so let's see how you move in fantastic way...keep rocking
Try to update atleast 10days once or two weeks once
Thanks.... 1st part of Jaya's sex with Shekhar, most of the readers were disappointed. But Jaya must need an opening sex. If I use Mani or Rahim - then there is no difference from other stories. Now she is little flexible, she can control them. Otherwise they will control her and make beg her for fuck and make her as slut of them. I don't want to show Jaya teacher as a slut. Here Shekhar uncle is a reputed person. He can't be down as Rahim and Mani. Also he can't share the secret to anybody. So I choose him first.
Here I am introduce Ashima teacher as a second heroine of this story. May be Ashima's friendship give more adventures situation in Jaya's life. Not sure May be.... Around next 10 updates are in my mind to develop and present here. But need much time. Wait for that.
Anyway thanks for the support.
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Can anyone copy update 12...... Part 2.... And post to the reply box?? I am not able to seen thish update 12 post.. ????
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