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Vineeta ek jhooti shaadi me jakdi mahila/ A SEXY POOJA
15.53%
93 15.53%
Garima ek happily married housewife jo seductive mahol me behek gai/ A HOUSEWIFE SEDUCTION
18.53%
111 18.53%
Shabana ek zaheen housewife jiska shareer jitna akarshak tha bhagya utna hi kharab/ TRAPPED
34.06%
204 34.06%
Neha the bold stylish girl with full of fantasies/ FANTASY
10.85%
65 10.85%
Neetu ek sawli bengali girl jiski jald shaadi hone wali hai par ek khatre ke sath/KAMASUTRA LOVE
6.01%
36 6.01%
Aarti ek gareeb ghar ki behad sundar ladki jo aane wale khatre se hai anjaan/DEMONS LOVE
5.68%
34 5.68%
Shobha the bride and centre part of this story jiski suhaagraat uska sapna hai/FIRST NIGHT CONFESSION
9.35%
56 9.35%
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A wedding ceremony in village
Very erotic update bro.

Garima aur Kaaliya ke scene ko bahut erotic likha aapne...Dekhte hai abb uss incident ke baad dono me agli baar kab hota hai.

Now waiting updates on Vineeta, Shobha and Neetu.
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Please post next update ASAP.
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(07-02-2019, 03:04 PM)Unknown Wrote: Xossip par to padha nahi tha ye story...Abb padh raha hu iss liye new story hi lag raha hai...Thanks for posting this story here...Abb lag raha hai xossip me itna accha story miss kar diya.

Ha bro xossip band hone se kafi dilkat hui itni abhi tak yaha jitni story post kari use xossip me badi detail me har kirdar ko pura time dekar khola tha. Yaha 12 page ki story xossip par 100+ plus page ke barabar hogi 178 page par tha jab xossip band ho hai day 5 bu s khatam hua tha aur day 6 shuru hona tha. Yaha day 4 par hu bus iske baad Day 5 ke updates dene hai uske baad baad wapas se stoy ko xossip style me detail karke likhunga har kirdar ko uske dialoge dekar. Bus is story ke sath jude rahiye
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(07-02-2019, 03:06 PM)Unknown Wrote: Very erotic update bro.

Garima aur Kaaliya ke scene ko bahut erotic likha aapne...Dekhte hai abb uss incident ke baad dono me agli baar kab hota hai.

Now waiting updates on Vineeta, Shobha and Neetu.


Kaaliya nahi Hariya
Xossip par isi incident ko 10 part me likha tha. Un 10 parts ko yaha ek part me samet kar likha hai phir bhi koshish kari ki ek part me bhi padne wale ko maza aae.

Vineeta Shobha Garima ka to day 4 khatam kar diya abhi Shabana neha neetu aarti ke update bache hai. Aarti ka update kafi interesting hone wala hai aur story me ek nae kirdar ka agman hone wala hai. Purane readers ko shayad yaad hoga.
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Very hot and lascivious update.Thank you very much for posting this hot update after a long time.please Keep posting regular update.
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Haweli me Neha ne shabana ko kahi na kahi convince kar liya tha dhamu ke sath sambandh banane ke liye aur usse bachha pane ke liye. Unke kamre me lage spy cam se lalu and company bhi ye baat jaan gai thi. Aur lalu man hi man khush tha apni shatranj ke har mohre ke uske hisab se badne par. Lalu khud to is waqt vikarm ke sath tha raste me tha wo dono lakhan singh aur vineeta ko Kakatua ke jungle chhod kar wapas aa rahe the isliye Lalu ne msg ke through apne sathiyo ko aage ka plan samjhaya ki unhe ab dhamu ko shabana ke paas jane se pehle ek goli khilani hai. Ye goli viagra ki opposite thi jaha viagra shareer me uttejna ko kai guna bada kar lund me tanav la deti hai wahi ye goli shareer me uttejna ko kum kar deti hai aur jab tak is goli ka asar rehta hai tab tak lakh koshish ke baad bhi lund khada nahi ho sakta. Dev Kundan Pratap confuse ho gae ki lalu ke dimag me chal kya raha hai ek taraf wo shabana ke dhamu ke sath sambandh banwane ke liye itni chale chal raha aur ab jab sambandh banane ka time aya to dhamu ki uttejna ko khatm kar raha. Tab lalu ne bataya ki shabana koi charectarless lady nahi jo apne maze ke liye dhamu se sambandh bana rahi hai wo dhamu se sambandh bana rahi hai ek bachhe ke liye aur agar uska ye maksad dhamu se pura ho gaya to hum uske sath wo kaise karenge jo humne socha hai. Sabko lalu ka plan samajh aa gaya.

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Idhar neetu aur aarti raat me aghori ke sath jane ke liye khud ko mentaly tayar kar rahi thi par jane se pehle neha ko is baare batana jaruri tha taki wo agar kisi musibat me phase to neha un tak madad pahucha sake. Neha raat ke bare me dhamu ko batane ke liye dhamu ke kamre ki taraf chal di aur neetu aur aarti neha ki taraf raaate me teeno ki mulakat ho gai aur neetu aarti ne neha aghori raj aur sadhna ke bare me sab bata diya ki unhe raat me us aghori ke sath jana hai. Neha pehle to ghabrai aur shkbha ko is bare me batane ko kaha par neetu abhi is bare me kisiko kuch batana nahi chahti thi isliye usne neha ko abhi ye baat apne tak rakhne ko kaha aur kaha ki agar subah tak wo dono wapas na aae to wo shobha ko is bare me bata de aur madad lekar un tak pahuch jae. Neha maan gai aur wapas dhamu ke kamre ke paas pahuch gai aur dhamu ke kamre me jakar dhamu ko convinence kara ki wo raat me uske sath shabana ke kamre me chale wo bhi sabse chhup kar bina kisi ko batae shabana ko usse kuch baat karni hai. Mandbuddhi dhamu ab bhi yahi samajh raha tha ki shabana ab bhi usse gussa hai kyuki pichli baar shabana ne use daant diya tha jab wo uska dard door kar raha tha. Par neha ne dhamu ko samjhaya ki shabana usse gussa nahi balki us din ke sorry bolna chahti hai. Dhamu khush ho gaya aur raat me shabana ke kamre me jane ke liye maan gaya. Neha ne dhamu ko kaha ki wo raat me tayar rahe wo khud raat me use lene aaegi. Neha ko nahi pata ki Lalu ke dost darwaze par kaan lagae unki sari baate sun rahe hai.

Raat gehra gai adhi raat ka samay nazdeek aa gaya haweli me jadatar log sone ja chuke the. Neetu aarti aghori ki batai jagah par usse milne jane ko tayar the. Neha dhamu ko lene jane ko tayar thi. Jeewan me pehli baar apne pure hosho hawas me apni shaouhar ke ilawa kisi gair mard wo bhi mansik roop se kamjor ke sath sambandh banane ka soch soch kar shabana ke paseene choot rahe the uska roya roya khada ho gaya tha. Vikram ke sath wapas laut rahe lalu ki nazre apne mobile par thi wo is pure gjatnakram par nazar rakhe tha. Neha ke kamre se nikalte hi usne dev ko msg kar diya ki wo jakar dhamu ko wo goli khila de. Dev turant bhag kar neha se pehle dhamu tak pahuch gaya aur apni baato se dhamu se kabulwa liya ki wo shabana ke paas ja raha hai aur takat ki goli ke naam par dhamu ko wo goli khila di ki shabana ko takatwar aadmi pasand hai. Goli khilakar dev waha se nikal gaya. Neha ko raste me neetu aur aarti mil gai jo aghori se milne ja rahi thi neha ne unhe sawdhaan rehne ko kaha aur koi bhi dikkat hone par use turant phone karne ko kaha. Neha ko alwida keh neetu aarti chhupte chhupate haweli se nikal gai.

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Neha dhamu ke kamre me pahuch aur sabse chhupte hue dhamu ko shabana ke kamre tak le aai par neha ki har harkat par bariki se nazar rakhi ja rahi hai. Neha dhamu ko shabana ke kamre me le aai aur dhamu ko wahi chhod khud kamre ke bahar nikal gai. Shabana ne usse poocha ki wo raat me kaha jaegi kisi ke kamre me jaegi to wo poochega neha ne use keh diya wo raat me bahar hi khadi hai jab uska kaam ho jae to wo shobha ke kamre me chali jaegi aur use is bare me kuch nahi bataegi. Neha kamre ke bahar aa gai. Neha bahar khadi hi ki usne haweli ke peeche ki jhadiyo me kisi ke karahne ki awaz suni neha awaz ka peecha karte hue jhadiyo ki taraf chal di. Jhadiyo ke peeche dekhte hi neha ki aankhe phati ki phati reh gai. Chhotu naam ka 18 saal ka ladka jo kallu (jisne bus me garima ko chheda tha) ke sath haweli me waiter ka kaam karta tha nanga ghodi ki tarah zameen par jhuka hua hai aur haweli ka mukhya rasoiya ramu kaka jisme umar 50 se upar hai apni dhoti khole apna kala mota lund nikale us bachhe ki gaand maar raha hai aur bedardi se uske baal kheech raha tha. Chhotu dard ke mare karah raha hai shayad ye buddha rasoiya bdsm ka shaukeen tha.

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Dard se karahte chhotu ki nazar achanak neha par padi aur wo uthne laga. Chhotu ko uthta dekh ramu ko gussa aa gaya usne chhotu ke baal kheeche to chhotu ne ungli se neha ki taraf ishara kar diya. Neha ko is tarah apne saamne khada dekh ramu ki bhi sitti pitti gum ho gai use laga ki neha ab awaz lagakar sabko bula na le. Ramu bhi chhotu ko chhod peeche hat gaya peeche hatne se ramu ka lund chhotu ki gaand se bahar akar jhoolne laga. Neha ki nazre ramu kaka ke lund par gai ramu ke shareer ki tarah hi ekdum kala aur puri tarah phoola hua tha unka lund. Aur charo taraf safed jhaant ke baalo se dhaka hua tha jane kitne saalo se unhone apni jhaant ke baal saaf nahi kare honge. Neha ke man aise gande jhanto se bhare lund ke liye bhi alag fantacy thi par is waqt wo ye sab dekh shock thi kyuki use nahi pata tha ki ye sab chhotu ki marzi se ho raha ya zabardasti isliye wo kuch react nahi karna chahti thi. Neha ko dekh ramu kaka ne zameen se apni dhoti utha kar lapet li aur neha ke samne hath jod kar baith gaya ki kisiko batana mat. Neha ne bhi ramu ki warn kara ki dubara is bachhe ko pareshan na kare. Neha ko wada kar ramu kaka waha se naukro ke tamboo ki taraf chala gaya.

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Dard se karahta chhotu waha ab bhi nanga khada tha. Uska lund ramu kaka jitna tagda aur akarshak to nahi tha akhir 16 saal ke ladke ka lund tha par lund to lund hi hota hai aurat ki pyas bujhane ke liye to kafi hai. Par is waqt bechara gaand marwakar dard se bhara hua tha aur thodi sharam bhi thi yu neha ke saamne nanga khada hone ki. Wo karahte hue apne kapde uthane ke liye bada par neha ko laga iski gaand par thodi cream laga du to shayad iska dard kuch kum ho jae. Neha use rokne ka bol apne kamre ki taraf badi par use yaad aya kamre me to shabana dhamu hai waha nahi ja sakte par neetu aarti ja chuke hai unka kamra khali hai unke kamre me cream hogi. Wo unke kamre se cream le aai chhotu ab bhi nanga khada neha uske peeche aa gai aur uske ghutno ke bal baith kar uski chutdo ko apne hath se kholkar cream lagane lagi. Itni jawan khoobsurat sexy ladki se apni gaand par cream lagwakar chhotu ko alag excitement ho raha aur is tarah andhere me ek 18 saal kachhe jawan ladke ki gaand me cream lagana me neha ko bada maza aa raha tha.

Idhar jab neha dhamu ko kamre me chhod kar aai thi uske baad.

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Shabana kamre me ek gown pehne baithi thi aur dhamu saamne khada tha. Dono ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare. Dhamu to ab bhi shabana ki kal ki daant se dara hua tha aur shabana jaisi shareef zaheen mahila ke liye bhi khud ko is had tak gira kar ek mandbuddhi aadmi ka fayda uthana bada ajeeb lag raha tha. Par itna aage badne ke baad wo peeche nahi hat sakti aaur pehel bhi use hi karni thi kyuki dhamu se pehel ki umeed karna to bewkoofi hai. Shabana ek gehri saas bistar se uth kar dhamu ka hath pakad kar use apne sath bistar par le aai.

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Usne dhamu ko relax kara ki wo usse naraz nahi hai. Usne dhamu ke gaal par aur hontho par kiss ki.

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Shabana ka ye badla roop dekh dhamu bhi khush tha wahi apne mobile se shabana ki har harkat par lalu bhi nazar rakhe tha sath hi sath wo ye record bhi kar raha tha wo haweli pahuchne wale the.

Shabana ne badi himmat ke sath dhamu ki pant aur underwear utar di. Dhamu ka chhota sa lund uski aankho ke saamne tha. Chhota hi sahi par use maa banane ka zariya to ye hi tha aur wo ye sab apne maze ke liye nahi balki majboori me kar rahi thi. Usne dhamu ke lund ko hath me bhar liya aur apne hatho ko uspe aage peeche karke use uttejit karne ki koshish karne lagi kyuki lund ko uttejit karne ka yahi tareeka use pata tha.

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Neha ki tarah sex ke khel me parangat nahi thi balki parangat kya apne pati se kabhi use sex ka anubhav mila hi nahi agar milta to ye naubat hi na aati. Par dhamu ke shareer me wo goli apna asar dikha chuki thi uske shareer kisi tarah ki uttejna paida hi nahi ho rahi thi. Shabana apne pati ke sath ye parisghiti pehle bhi face kar chuke aur ek baar phir apni self respect ko gira kar usne itna bada faisla kara aur ek baar phir ek murjhaya hua lund uske saamne tha. Shabana dhamu ke lund par tez tez hath chala kar use khada karne ki bharsak koshish kar rahi thi par uski har koshish bekar thi. Lalu shabana ki is halat par man hi man muskura raha tha kyuki shabana ki chut ka udghatan to use karna tha.

Khisiya kar shabana ne dhamu ka lund hath se chhod diya aur neha ko call karne lagi. Bahar chhotu ki gaand me cream laga rai neha ne dekha ki shabana call kar rahi to usne chhotu kapde pehen kar jaane ko kaha. Jaate jaate usne chhotu ko hontho par kiss diya chhotu ne expect nahi kara tha ki gaand par cream lagane ke baad neha jaisi hot ladki use lip kiss bhi degi.

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Uska gaand ka sara dard is kiss chhumantar sa ho gaya. Neha se lip kiss lekar chhotu wapas servant ke tent ki taraf chala gaya. Neha apne kamre me aai jaha shabana gusse aur dukh me muh chhupae baithi thi aur bagal me dhamu adhnangi halat me baitha tha. Neha ko dekh dhamu ne apne kapde pehen liye. Shabana ne neha se kaha ki wo dhamu ko wapas chhod aae neha ne reason poocha par shabana ne kaha ki pehle ise chhod aae. Neha dhamu ko lekar bahar nikal aai aur dhamu ko uske room tak chhod aai. Tab tak vikarm lalu ki car bhi haweli ke andar aa gai.

Mausam ka mizaz bhi achanak se badalne laga tha. Aaj mausam vibhag ne ek bade toofan ki bhavishyawadi ki thi shayad ye wahi toofan tha. Charo taraf dhue ka gubar chha gaya tha tez aandhi chalne lagi thi aankh kholna bhi mushkil ho raha tha. Neha chhupte chhupate bhagkar wapas apne kamre aa gai. Wapas aakar usne shabana se poocha ki usne dhamu ko wapas kyu bhej diya to shabana ne neha ko sari baat bata di ki dhamu ka lund khada hi nahi hua wo bhi uske pati ki tarah namard hai. Par neha ne shabana ko samjhaya ki agar wo namard hota to kal nashe me uska lund khada kaise ho gaya shabana ko bhi neha ki baat me logic laga par aaj kyu nahi khada hua ye baat bhi thi. Tab neha ne shabana ko samjhaya ki mard ko uttejit karna bhi ek kala hai sirf lund ko hath me ragadne se zaroori nahi wo khada ho jae. Aurat apni adao apni baato ya sabse achook astra apni zaban se namard se namard mard ka lund bhi khada kar sakti hai. Par shabana ko to ye sab aata nahi tha neha ne shabana ko relax kara ki chinta na kare wo use ye sab sikha degi use sex ke khel me mahir kar degi aur phir wo dhamu ko uttejit kare. Shabana maan gai par use ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki neha use ye aade ye triyacharitra kaise sikhaegi khuki ye koi bol kar sikhane wali cheez nahi hai. Iska tareeka to neha ne apne dimag me soch liya tha aur sikhane ka zariya bhi use mil gaya tha jisme uski fantacy aur shabana ki training dono sath sath ho jati. Kal ki planning kar dono so gae shabana ki tension me neha neetu aur aarti ke bare me bhool hi gai ki use unse phone karke unla haal chal pooch lena chahiye.
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(07-02-2019, 05:56 PM)Vicky007 Wrote: Very hot and lascivious update.Thank you very much for posting this hot update after a long time.please Keep posting regular update.

Ya bro i tried my best to keep posting regularly but some time we are quite busy in some works thats why i cant update but i complete this story thats promise. But thanks for liking this story bus aap log aise hi jude rahe is story se apne comment ke madhyam se mai update deta rahunga.
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Very nice bro.

Shabana ne aage badhne ki koshish to kiya tha lekin, uski kismat.

Lalu ke jaal me fans rahi hai wo...Dekhte hai Neha usse kaise sikhaati hai ye sab kuch.

Neetu aur Aarti ki update ka intejar rahega.
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Waiting next...Please post next update ASAP.
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Waiting bro...When will you post next update?
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Idhar jab haweli me neha dhamu ko lekar shabana ke paas aai thi tab haweli ke bahar neetu aur aarti aghori ki batai jagah par unse milne pahuch gai. Kuch der baad aghori bhi waha pahuch gaya. Neetu ne aarti ke bare me kaha ki akele aane me use dar lag raha tha aur aarti ne zid kari sath aane ki isliye use le aai. Aghori ne kaha ki theek hai par aarti sadhna wali jagah par nahi ja sakti use bahar hi intezaar karna hoga. Teeno aghori ke niwas sthan jaha sankalp sadhna honi thi ke liye chal diye. Ghane junglo ke beech se hote hue wo chale ja rahe the raste me unhe ek chhota sa shiv mandir aur uske peeche se dhol nagado ki awaze sunai di.

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Aghori ne unhe bataya ki ye ye yaha ka pracheen shiv mandir hai jo yaha teen sau saal se hai kafi sidh mandir hai aur neetu se kaha ki wo apne kaumarya daan ki sadhna ke baad is mandir me aahirwaad le lena apni galti ki mahadev se chhama maang lena aur apne premi raj ke jeewan par koi sankat na aae uski vinti kar lena. Aghori ne unhe ye bhi bataya ki ye madir asliyat me ek seema rekha prachin bheel aadiwasi samaj aur gaanv ke nae rehen sehen me jeene wale logo ke beech. Is mandir ke us paar bheel aadiwaasi samaj ka niwas hai jo tantra mantra ke mahagyata hai aghori ne khud tantra ka gyan unhi se liya. Bheel samuday aur gaanv walo ke beech takrav na ho isliye barso pehle jungle ke beech mahadev ka ye jagrat mandir banaya gaya usr nirdharit kiya gaya ki na bheel samuday idhar aaega na gaanvwale us taraf jaenge. Neetu aarti door se us mandir ko pranam kar aghori ke peeche peech chal diye. Kuch hi der me teeno ek kabristan ke saamne khade the. Kali andheri raat me kabristan ka ye manzar behad darawna lag raha tha.

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Aghori ne unhe bataya ki is kabristaan ke beech me uski jhopdi hai jaha agle teen din neetu ko raj ki zindagi ke sadhna karni aur aaj us sadhna ka sankalp karna hai. Neetu aarti ki sitti pitti gum thi par jis raste wo aage bade the wo rasta unhone apni marzi se chuna tha. Charo taraf bus kabra hi kabra thi aur door ek ghar dikh raha tha. Aghori ne aarti ko kaha ki use yahi bahar intezaar karna hoga jab tak neetu andar sadhna karti hai. Aarti ko akele waha rukne me dar to bahut lag raha tha par kar bhi kya sakte the neetu ke sath aane ka faisla uska apna tha. Aarti ko wahi bahar chhod neetu aur aghori ghar ke andar chale gae. Ghar ke andar ek hawan kund bana tha jisme aur hawan kund bana tha aur hawan kund ke bagal me ek tamra arthat tambe ki moorti thi jo ek yodha jaisa tha jiske hath me ek ajeeb sa hathiyar tha aur paas me ek teen muh wale kutta baitha tha.

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Neetu aur aghori us hawan kund ke dono taraf baith gae. Aghori ne neetu ko us murti ke bare me bataya ki ye murti Hedes ki hai.

Aghori: Duniya teen bhago me bati hai aasman dharti aur patal. Hades Zeus aur Posiesion teen bhai the jinhone milkar apne pita Cronus ko haraya tha aur uske atyachar se duniya ko mukti dilai jiska duniya ke teeno bhago par kabza tha. Vijay ke baad teeno bhai ek ek bhag ke dewta ban gae aur waha niwas karne lage. Zeus anant akash ka swami bana Posiedeon mrityulok yani dharti par athah samudra ka dewta bana aur Hades ke gussail aur krodhi swabhav ke karan use Patal ka shashan mila halaki Hades is batware se khush nahi tha par baki do bhaiyo ke eksath hone ke karan use majbooran ye batwara manna pada.

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Hades ko hi hum mrity ka devta bhi kehta hai. Hume yaha tantra sadhna ke madhyam se Hades ko hi prasann karna hai taki Raj ke jeevan par aya mrityu roopi sankat wo har le. Ye sadhna hume kaisi karni hai wo mai tumhe aane wale dino me bataunga par filhaal tumhe yaha is sadhna ka sankalp karna hoga kyuki tantra me sadhna se jada mehtwa uske sankalp ka hota hai ek baar agar tumne is sadhna ka sankalp kar liya phir chah kar bhi tum peeche nahi hat sakti. Kuch isi tarah ka sankalp vineeta aur lakhan singh ne bhi kara hai. Isliye ek baar phir soch lo abhi bhi waqt hai kya tum wakai ye sadhna karna chahti ho.

Neetu: Jee baba peeche hatna ka to sawal hi paida nahi hota Raj ke liye mai kuch bhi kar sakti hu.
Aghori: Theek hai to ab is hawan kund me Hades ke naam ki aahuti daal kar hum unka aawahan karenge aur ye sankalp karenge ki hum Raj ke jeewan ke liye ye sadhna praramb kar rahe aur kisi bhi surat me hum isse peeche nahi hatenge iske antargat tum apna kaumarya ek brahmchari purush ko samarpit kar Raj ke prati apne prem ka praman dogi. Tumhare Kaumarya aur us purush ke Brahmcharya sweekar kar uske badle me Raj je jeewan par aya sankat Hades door kare.

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Ghar ke andar sankalp sadhna prarambh ho gai bahar dar ke mare me aarti ka bura haal tha sunsaan kabristaan me akele khade hokar bahadur se bahadur ko dar lag jae. Khade khade aarti ke pair bhi dukha rahe the usne aas paas baithne ki koi jagah dekhi par sab taraf bus kabra hi kabra thi aur kisi ki kabra ke upar baithna theek nahi kabristaan ke ek kone me ek peepal ke ped ke neche use ek badi si chattan nazar aa. Aarti jakar us par baith gai aur man hi man prarthana karne lagi ki is khaufnaak watawwaran me upar wala uski raksha kare.

Achanak mausam ka mizaz badalne laga mausam vibhag ki bhawishyawani ke ansuar jis toofan ka andesha tha wo aa chuka tha. Ye wahi samay tha jab haweli me neha dhamu ko chhodkar aai thi aur waha toofan aa gaya tha wahi toofan yaha kabristaan me ab aarti ke saamne tha. Pura aasman dhund se dhak gaya tha aarti ne to apni aanke band kar li uska aankh khile rakhna mushkil ho raha tha. Dhund ke sath ab bijli kadakna bhi shuru ho gaya.

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Kabristan ki is duniya aur us dussri duniya jaha hum marne ke baad jate hai ke beech ka ek dwar hai. Par aasman me vyapt divya urzae us dwar ko band rakhti hai aur surya ka praksh din me swayam aur raat me chandra ke mathyam se un shaktiyo ko us duniya se is duniya me nahi aane deta isilye kali amawas ko manhoos kaha jata hai kyuki us din un shaktiyo ki takat bad jati hai. Isi tarah aisa raudra toofan bhi in shaktiyo ki takat ko kai guna bada deta hai kyuki is toofan ki wajah se dharti aur aasman ke beech sampark awrudh ho jata hai.

Andar sankalp sadhna apne ufaan par thi. Sankalp sadhna se uth rahi tantra urza ne kabristaan me is du iya aur us duniya ke beech ke dwar ko kamzor kar diya tha. Koi shakti thi jo us dwar ko khol is dwar me aane ke liye sangharsh kar rahi thi. Chattan ke bagal me khada peepal ka ped toofan me tez tez hil raha tha aarti ko andesh ho raha tha ki ye ped kabhi bhi toot kar gir sakta hai aur idhar jhuka hone ki wajah seedha uske upar girega isliye aarti us chaatan se utar gai. Aarti bus us chattan se utri hi thi ki achanak aasman me ek teevra bijli kadki aur us chattan par akar giri jis par ek pal pehle aarti baithi thi.

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Wo to achha hua aarti waha se hat chuki thi. Wo bijli seedha us chattan par giri wo vishal chattan do khand me bat gai. Us chattan se pathar ka ek tukda aarti ke sir me laga aur aarti apne hosho hawas kho kar behosh hokar wahi zameen par gir padi.

Tez aandhi me us chaatan ke bagal me khada peepal ka ped tez tez jhatke kha raha tha hawa ek teevra jhatke ne us ghane vishal ped ko tod diya aur ped seedha zameen par behosh padi aarti ke upar girne laga. Aarti is halat me bhi nahi thi apni taraf tezi se bad rahi maut ko dekh pati aur usse bachne ke liye kuch kar pati. Ek tarah se aarti ki maut nishchit thi. Par achanak ek chamatkaar hua aarti ke upar gir raha raha ped hawa me hi ruk gaya jaise kisine use apne hatho me tham liya ho jaise koi aarti aur us ped ke beech deewar ban kar khada ho gaya ho. Koi tha jo us duniya ki zanzeero ko tod kar is duniya me dakhil ho gaya tha. Ek ruhani saaya tha jo aarti aur uski maut ke beech aa gaya tha. Us saae ne ped ko dusri taraf phenk diya aur zameen par behosh padi masoom si aarti ko kareeb akar use niharne laga. Us saae ne aarti ko apni baaho me tham liya. Aarti ka jism hawa me jhool raha tha kyuki use thamne wala nazar nahi aa raha tha. Us saae ne aarti ke chehre se baalo ke parde ko hataya aur behosh aarti ki masoomiyat ko ektak niharne laga.

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Saaya: Barso se mai tumhara intezaar kar raha tha bahut der kardi tumne yaha aane me. Barso se mai us duniya se is duniya me aane ke liye tadap raha tha aur dekho kismat aaj tumhe wahi le aai jaha barso pehle mujhe tumse alag kar diya gaya tha. Humari muhobbat jo barso pehle apne anjaam tak na pahuch pai thi aaj ek baar phir mujhe tumhare paas le aai hai.

Kaun tha ye saaya kis barso purani muhobbat ki baat kar raha tha. Aarti to abhi 27 saal ki thi aur kabhi uska koi boyfriend bhi nahi raha phir kis muhobbat ki baat kar raha tha wo saya. Aarti ko niharte hue us saae ne apne honth aarti ke hontho par rakh diye. Aarti jisne aaj tak kabhi kisi ladke ko khud ko hath bhi nahi lagane diya behoshi ki halat me apne jeewan ki pehli kiss kar rahi thi wo bhi ek rooh ke sath. Achanak aghori ki jhopdi ka darwaza khulne ki awaz hui neetu ki sankalp sadhna puri ho gai thi aghori aur neetu jhopdi se bahar aa rahe the. Wo saaya barso baad is duniya me wapas aya tha aur abhi wo aghori jaise sidhha tantrik ke sath ulajhna nahi chahta tha isliye aarti ko zameen par lita kar wo waha se gayab ho gaya.

Bahar ka toofan bhi ab tham chuka tha bahar ke gire hue ped ast vyast mahool dekh neetu shocked reh gai use aarti ka khayal aaya wo aarti ko idhar udhar dekhne lagi aur uski nazar kabristaan ke akhri kone me behosh padi aarti padi. Aghori aur neetu bhagkar aarti ke paas pahuche aur behosh padi aarti ko sambhala aghori ko aas paas kisi ruhani takat ki maujoodgi ka ehsaas ho raha tha. Wo saaya door se chhupkar unhe dekh raha tha. Neetu ne aarti ko hosh me laane ke liye aghori se paani maanga. Aur aghori ka dhyan us ehsaas se hat gaya ki ye kabristaan hai yaha ye ehsaas hona aam baat hai aghori jhopdi se pani le aya aur aarti ke muh par chhete maar kar use hosh me laya. Aarti hosh me aa gai aur hosh me akar usne unhe us toofan bijli chattan ke baare me bataya aarti ki nazar gire hue ped par padi wo soch me doob gai ki ye ped uski taraf jhuka hua tha aur logic ke hisab se ye uski taraf girna chahiye tha par ye doosri taraf kaise gira. Neetu aur aghori ko tasalli thi aarti theek thi par unhe ye nahi pata tha ki aarti ko bachane wala koi aur tha jo is waqt chhup chhup kar unhe dekh raha tha. Neetu ne aghori se request kari ki wo unhe haweli tak chhod aae. Aghori ne haweli tak chhod aaya wo saaya bhi unke peeche peeche haweli tak pahuch chuka tha. Aghori unhe chhod kar ja chuka tha neetu aur aarti apne kamre me aa gae aur neha ko msg kar diya ki wo dono wapas aa gae aur so gae.

Par wo age do the par wapas teen aae the. Koi tha muhobbat ke dor se bandha hua unke peeche peeche unke kamre tak aa gaya tha. Par wo saaya aarti ke liye achha tha ya ek khatra ye ab bhi ek rahsya tha beshak usne aarti ko marne se bachaya par wo aarti se chahta tha kya tha jis barso purani muhobbat ka wo zikra kar raha tha wo kya tha ye koi nahi janta tha.

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ISHQ ME DOOBE EK FASANE KI
                                           DAANSTA HAI YE US DEEWANE KI
MAUT BHI NA JISE ROK PAI HAI
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Bathroom me bhura ke hatho neha ki gaand marai us anjaan stranger ke khat.
Shobha ke andar wasna ka badte toofan.
Garima aur Hariya ke milan.
Vineeta aur lakha  ki us kathin yatra.
Lalu ke shandyantra aur shabana ke usme dheeme faste jane.
Neetu ki sankalp sadhna.
Aur
Aarti ke jeewan me us saaye ke pravesh ke sath kahani ka ye chautha din khatam hua ab bus purani likhi ja chuki kahani ka ek din baki hai jiske baad nai kahani likhi jaegi.

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END OF DAY 4
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Very exciting update bro.

Neetu ka sankalp suru ho gaya...Dekhte hai aage ki sankalp me kya hota hai.

Aarti ka pyar karne wala bhi aa gaya hai...Kaisa pyar hai ye...Aur kya hua tha dono ke bich shayad pichle janam me...Ye dekhna intereating rahega.

Superb update.
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Waiting for day 5.
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Waiting bro.
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Waiting bro...When will you post next update?
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Awesome story, itni aachi story mujhe kaise nahi mili xossip pe
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(08-02-2019, 09:40 AM)Unknown Wrote: Very nice bro.

Shabana ne aage badhne ki koshish to kiya tha lekin, uski kismat.

Lalu ke jaal me fans rahi hai wo...Dekhte hai Neha usse kaise sikhaati hai ye sab kuch.

Neetu aur Aarti ki update ka intejar rahega.

Ya bro ab dekhte hai neha shabana ko kaise sikhati hai. And thanks for commenting everytime and motivating tjis story. Neetu aur Aaarti ka update bhi on the way hai isike sath ye day 4 khatm ho jaega.

Baki logo se bhi req hai ki wo bhi comment kare agar story read kare to comment bhi kare. Beshak xossip khagm ho gai par ye site bhi kuch kuch waisi hi hai to yaha bhi waise bhi writers ka utsah badae comment ke madhyam se.
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(11-02-2019, 10:09 PM)Logan555 Wrote: Ya bro ab dekhte hai neha shabana ko kaise sikhati hai. And thanks for commenting everytime and motivating tjis story. Neetu aur Aaarti ka update bhi on the way hai isike sath ye day 4 khatm ho jaega.

Baki logo se bhi req hai ki wo bhi comment kare agar story read kare to comment bhi kare. Beshak xossip khagm ho gai par ye site bhi kuch kuch waisi hi hai to yaha bhi waise bhi writers ka utsah badae comment ke madhyam se.
I am commenting because I like this story a lot.

And talking about other readers...They will join gradually as story keeps going ahead...Just give update regularly...Readers will also join.

For readers joining story, story must have quality...And quality of your story is good...Kewp posting...Lots of reader will join you.
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Waiting for next update...When will next updste come?
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