[Suryahot123]

Woww bro... I am speechless... What an outstanding update... Hatsoff to you ....I m extremely excited for the next update...

[kamdev99008]

Ab kya karoon delete kar doon..... ab flow me likh gaya..... is sex site pe sabhi taste ke log hai.... kissi ko kuch pasand kissi ko kuch...... koi kehta hai...punished , koi kehta hai dominance,  koi kehta hai sex between low class and high class.


I m bit confused...... story is still open decide what to do and what to write.....

bhai kis kis ki demand puri karoge...................
story apni marji se likho............

jise pasand hoga padhega

jise pasand na ho wo apni story likh le............

aise log bematlab ka confusion create karte hain..................

bhai kisi ko pasand nahi aa raha to mat padho.......... story ko negative comment dekar writer ko demoralise kar rahe ho........
uski mehnat ki ijjat hi nahi

[Sahrabi]

Hot update

[Kiranspice]

Please write ur own way bhai we all support you

[Samm93]

Great story bro keep it up.we are waiting for more and more mind-blowing updates

[nightcrawlertyagi]

Great story bro keep it up.we are waiting for more and more mind-blowing updates

Thanks samm

So nice of u.......

I hope next time me tumko niraash na karoon.... aur ek acchha update doon.....  iss plot ki wajah se kahani me kuch turn dene ki kosish kar raha hoon.... ho sakta hai.. next update me tumko pata chal jaaye...

Thanks once again......

Tumne meri baat maani....

[amitnagpalkumar]

Gupta wala scene beech me hi chor diya aapne atleast wo to do jissay or maja aye

[BurFucker]

Bahut hi  mast update boss..... Aise hi likhte rahiye Ap apne hisaab se aur waise bhi apki imagination lajawab hai. 
Sayad Neha ki chudai 2 Lund se hone ka plot set hone wala h.................ek Neha ki Chut me aur ek Uski Gaand me..

[exbiixossip2]

hi bro..
me apse kai bar puch raha hoon ki Gupta ka kya hua usne neha ko choda ki nahi. ya choot me kewal ungli kiya batano na plz..

[dragonslair]

nice update. I would suggest to keep the story how you have envisioned it. if you take too many suggestions from everyone which is not part of the main plot idea of yours then you will be lost to figure out what to write next. dont take suggestions unless you are stuck. you cant keep everyone happy a good erotic story is a good erotic story irrespective of its storyline. good luck for the next update

[warlock123]

I loved the update. Never do fan service Bhai, never.

[Bipin8923]

Waiting for update

[Farjand]

Update de do sahb

[shakalaka]

What an outclass writer you are!! I have been reading stories for years and have read many outstanding stories but yours is one of the best.

When I started reading your story I felt transported to the moments you described, I was living the moment as if it was happening in front of my eyes. Truly awesome writing skills you have mate.

The scene description, the language and the way story flows, the way it stirs up reader's imagination and senses is not only incredible but unbelievably stunning. You certainly have a class of your own and I could clearly describe you as one amongst the best writer on all erotic forums out there.

This story was very very capturing in the first part and I really could not blink my eyes while reading it. However, I would say that the standard went down a bit when you shifted from Gupta's part to the second part of story. But now it is going up again and maintaining the level of your outstanding and mind blowing writing skills.

Keep going mate you definitely have a gift.   yr):

[Kiran81]

Give update bro....plzzzz

[nightcrawlertyagi]

What an outclass writer you are!! I have been reading stories for years and have read many outstanding stories but yours is one of the best.

When I started reading your story I felt transported to the moments you described, I was living the moment as if it was happening in front of my eyes. Truly awesome writing skills you have mate.

The scene description, the language and the way story flows, the way it stirs up reader's imagination and senses is not only incredible but unbelievably stunning. You certainly have a class of your own and I could clearly describe you as one amongst the best writer on all erotic forums out there.

This story was very very capturing in the first part and I really could not blink my eyes while reading it. However, I would say that the standard went down a bit when you shifted from Gupta's part to the second part of story. But now it is going up again and maintaining the level of your outstanding and mind blowing writing skills.

Keep going mate you definitely have a gift.   yr):

This is best complements i ever received..... thanks brother......

[Hotmaniac]

Nice, I am reading a story of top class writer,  very nice imagination,  very good presentation . Thanks

[nightcrawlertyagi]

Nice, I am reading a story of top class writer,  very nice imagination,  very good presentation . Thanks

Thank u very much.... brother

[Nadeem]

Yani k hum bekar reder hyn....
Wah g wahhh chlo koi batni ap updat do plzzzz

[nightcrawlertyagi]

Yani k hum bekar reder hyn....
Wah g wahhh chlo koi batni ap updat do plzzzz

Nahi boss tum to first class ho.... update is ready to be uploaded at 930 hrs