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(09-02-2020, 11:44 PM)krishkj Wrote: Disappointed fuck with shekhar...
Excellent narration but unexpected fuck
Ha ha... What can I do. It's happened because of her situation. Shekhar also a womanizer. He try his luck and Jaya was too hornney because of Rahims medicine in Pepsi. She really need a mans touch at that night, Mani or Rahim was not there. Then it happened. May be its her fate or beginning of new life of Joy.
Wait and see... Thanks for ur comment
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Great update bro... Loved it
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It's impossible to give updates in 2-3 days. I will give update when I got time. And now this story not in 2nd place. It's in first place. Maximum views from short period, it's my pivate pride. If you are disappointed because of the update dalay; that's not my problem. I already tell about this in beginning of this thread that I will give update when I got time, it may be take 2 days, 2 weeks or 2 months. Thanks.
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(23-11-2019, 02:25 AM)lickerofpussy9 Wrote: I think shekar uncle will be the first person... he he he.. one's hunt another person's dinner
yay.. my guess got correct. Wrote this on November 23rd and became real.
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It was amazing.....now please give Rahima chance who deserve Jaya for all his hard work
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aapku kysa lagra. kya story likh na aasaan hy? tho aap likho na. kyku writers pe rore. aapku delay horatho math pado. ghamand har ek ku rahtha. kyun ki vo deserve for that. jo likhre usku rahtha na. aapko padna pasand ny hy tho math pado. 1-2 din me ek update dena boletho kysa possible hotha? unko b other activities rahthena. writer delay karke post karre but he giving good update. finally u guys understand that he is not getting any amount for writing story. Just enjoy karo jab vo update karejab.
kuttoosan009- Sir really your story awesome. I like so much. One request is please give update weekly or 10days or 15days. U only deside that. so never blame to u. they wait till that time.
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Very hot and erotic update... Looking forward for more adventures of Jaya.
Thanks for your writings.
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Hr 1-2 din me update? What do you want? An unpaid no life slave writer for you!!! Do you have any idea how hard is it to write a story for a casual writer? You can criticise about the quality of a story but can't start making absurd demands.
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Awesome story dear friend you are a great writer
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10-02-2020, 05:34 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-02-2020, 05:38 PM by stupid2903. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Read the whole story for first time. It's really awesome and the story built on seduction and Exhibitionism is fantastic.
But, I do agree with other folks that she gave her first adultery experience to Shekhar is not appealing in my opinion.
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10-02-2020, 05:47 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-02-2020, 05:50 PM by kuttoosan009. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
(10-02-2020, 05:34 PM)stupid2903 Wrote: Read the whole story for first time. It's really awesome and the story built on seduction and exhibition is fantastic.
But, I do agree with other folks that she gave her first adultery experience to Shekhar is not appealing in my opinion.
Sorry.... I when I introduce Shekhar in this story, I decided that he must be the person who fuck her first after Mahesh. Thats why I write this much updates to clear the way for Shekhars dick to reach her pussy first than Rahim and Mani. May be they get chance in upcoming updates.... If I give first chance to Rahim or Mani; then there is no difference with other stories. So I just try this way......
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(10-02-2020, 05:47 PM)kuttoosan009 Wrote: Sorry.... I when I introduce Shekhar in this story, I decided that he must be the person who fuck her first after Mahesh. Thats why I write this much updates to clear the way for Shekhars dick to reach her pussy first than Rahim and Mani. May be they get chance in upcoming updates.... If I give first chance to Rahim or Mani; then there is no difference with other stories. So I just try this way......
So when will be the next update bro am really waiting for it's next update ? me and my little brother are really enjoying the story ? and trying few tricks on my neighbor woman even am imagining her as Jaya ?.
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Mast.... Mind blowing... Please update more... New turning of story.... Please update more
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12-02-2020, 10:20 AM
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This update ruined my expectations about the story until this update used to check for update daily but not now. Good narration but lost in flow.
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12-02-2020, 02:00 PM
(This post was last modified: 12-02-2020, 02:02 PM by Chilipi. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Bro, don't worry about the comments. Once people started liking the story, they want their dream or fantasy to be fulfilled in this story. They have different expectations, if the story doesn't go their way they started commenting negatively. Only problem is not allowing writer to write in his own way.
Please guys, support him. We all liked the way he wrote till now, let him write freely, let him express his ideas. We can request but can not demand.
Bro, I just loved the update. Old man and young woman is also hot topic. You just keep going. Everyone loved your story because it is slow seduction, have more long, steamy, romantic and hot sessions.
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(12-02-2020, 02:00 PM)Chilipi Wrote: Bro, don't worry about the comments. Once people started liking the story, they want their dream or fantasy to be fulfilled in this story. They have different expectations, if the story doesn't go their way they started commenting negatively. Only problem is not allowing writer to write in his own way.
Please guys, support him. We all liked the way he wrote till now, let him write freely, let him express his ideas. We can request but can not demand.
Bro, I just loved the update. Old man and young woman is also hot topic. You just keep going. Everyone loved your story because it is slow seduction, have more long, steamy, romantic and hot sessions.
As rightly said by chilpi, i request you to continue the story as per your thoughts. We all love this story because of your writing skills and your thoughts. and we want you to be original.
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