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Meri aankh khuli to ssab se pahle maine ghadi dekhi 4:10 time hua tha main fauran uth gayi aur chuzi ko jagaya , wo uthi aur ankhen malti hui bahr chali gayi aur jake sofe pe let gayi
Uth jao kumbhkaran ki mausi to mujhe kah rahi thi ab so kaun raha hai – main boli
Maine chai banayi ar usko dekar khud bhi peene lagi – chai khatam kar ke main boli main ja rahi hun shahnaz ko lene tum tab tak so aram se
Nahi yar main bhi chalti hun wo boli aur hum dono sath me college gaye aur shahnaz ko lekar ghar aa gaye , ghar ke andar aate hi main shahnaz se boli tum fresh ho lo main tumhare liye chai banati hun
Maine ne chai banayi aur hum log chai peene lage chai ke bad main chuzi se boli ab tum so jao shahnaz se bhi maine kaha tum bhi thora rest kar lo , wo apne room me chali gayi
Chuzi bhi mere room me jake let gayi main sofe pe baithi parh rahi thi , 7 baje shahnaz uth kar apne room se bahr aayi , aur boli chuzi didi kahan hai
Wo so rahi hai – main boli
Shahnaz mere room me chali gayi aur agle hi pal aage age chuzi bahr aayi aur piche shahnaz chuzi mere pas akar baith gayi aur bahut dhire se mujhe chutki katte hue boli – maine kya bigara tha jot um ne shahnaz ko bhej diya
Maine ghoor kar usko dekha aur kuch nahi boli
Tabhi shahnaz ek bahut bada sa uncle chips ka packet liye hue khati hui aayi jis ko chuzi ne le liya aur khane lagi us ke hath packet liye jane ki wajah se shahnaz ka munh dekhne wala tha lekin wo kuch nahi boli bas ek bar jhpat kar aage barhi aur fir ruk gayi
Chuzi lagatar bakri ki taraf awaz ke sath kha rahi aur shanaz ki ankhen uske hath aur munh pet hi akhir har kar wo boli – didi kya sab kha jaogi
Haan sab kha jaungi tum ne kyun mujhe jagaya – chuzi boli
To aap fir se so jao na – shahnaz boli , jis pe mere sath sath chuzi bhi hans dii
Main uth kar kitchen me chali gayi aur chuzi shahnaz ke sath baithi thi , kuch der ke bad donokitchen me aayi aur boli hum logon ko coffee peeni hai
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Acha – main eke k harf ko chaba kar boli , abhi nahi banaugi – maine kaha
Jis pe shahnaz machal gayi aur maine kaha acha baitho abhi bana rahi hun , aur wo bahar chali gayi , us ke jate hi chuzi he he he kar ke hansi
Mujhe pata hai ki us ko tum layi thi patti parha ke – main boli
Ha ha ha ha – bahut ache ab jaldi se coffee banakr lao koi kam dhang se nahi karti – wo boli
Maine usko belan utha ke dikhaya to wo bhag gayi , maine un dono ko coffee di a\jis ko lekar wo dono piche lawn me chali gayi , aur main sukun se apna kaam karne lagi
Main kafi had tak apna kaam khatam kar chuki thi dinner lagbhag taiyar ho gaya tha ki chuzi bhagti hui aayi aur apna sir peetti hui kitchen ki shelf pe charh kar baith gayi aur boli
Gulnaaz please mujhe shahnaz se bachao main pagal ho jaungi wo bahut tez tez apne bal nochte hue sir pe iapne hath mar rahi thi , kahan is larki ke chakkar me phans gayi main kyun aa gyi yahan mujhe bachao us se – wo boli
Kya hua tum is tarah pareshan ho yakeen nahi ho raha mujhe – main boli
Arey meri maa to kar le na yakeen mujeh bacha us se
Kya hua – main bahut tez hans rahi thi us ki halat dekh kar
Arey yar lawn me baithi thi us ne eke k plant ki eke k patti ko tor tor kar mujhe parhana shuru kar diya , yepatti hai ye phool hai ye root hai , patti hari kyun hoti hai phool peela kyun hai , mujhe pagal kar diya us ne , tum jao aur us se botany parho main yahan ka kaam dekh lungi wo mujhe bahar dhakelte hue boli
Arey to is me problem kya hai botany hi to parha rahi hai parh lo ek subject ka knowledge ho jayega tum ko
Chup kar – wo boli maine aaj tak apna to kuch parha nahi
Acha shahnaz kahan hai – maine pucha
Wahin hai ghas phoos ukhad kar file me chipka rahi hai , yare k bat batao – wo boli
Kya – maine pucha
Tum sab ke sab khiske hue ho kya – wo boli
Chup bewakuf kahin ki – main boli acha tum yahi baithi raho wo ab nahi ayegi , aur chuzi wahin kone me dunki hui baithi rahi
Acha aaj kaisa laga tum , jab tum sabka jeena dushwar karti ho tab sochti ho kuch – maine pucha
Meri maa ab tum lecture mat jharo – wo hath jorte hue boli
Main hans rahi thi chuzi ki halat pe aur thori der ke baad hum logon ne dinner kiya dinner ke baad kuch der tak sab log TV dekhte rahe uske bad shahnaz pne room me chali gayi aurmain bhi chuzi ke sath apne room me aa gayi
Acha to kitne baje ka programme hai – chuzi bed pe baithte hue boli
Kais programe – main bolio
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Arey yar wahi live wild kabaddi match – wo boli
Pata nahi koi zaruri nahi ki wo log aayen – maine kaha
Ab wo aye ya na aye main to baith kar unka wair karungi – wo boli
Ok tum khusi se wait karo main to sone ja rahi hun - maine kaha
Thik hai dear no problem tum aram se so jao main dekh lungi – wo boli
Main janti thi ki ye kambakht mujhe sone hi nahi degi aur hua bhi wahi wo der raat tak apni baton se mera dimagh khati rahi aur jab 1:20 time hua to boli ki ab chala jaye yar wo mera hath pakar kar khinchti hui boli
Maine us ke sath uth gayi aur garage me a gayi , aur khirki me halki si daraz banakar bahar jhankene lagi
Kya hua koi hai – us ne pucha
Nahi abhi koi nahi hai – main boli ab tum hi dekho ye kahte hue main alag hat gayi
Aur chuzi lagatar ankhen lagaye udhar dekhti rahi aise hi bahut time ho gaya to main boli chuzi ab chalo aaj koi nahi aayega mere kahne par us ne mudkar mujhe dekha aur boli haan yar lag to aisa hi raha hai aur ye kahte hue wo wahan se hat gayi
Main khirki band karne ke liye aage barhi aur ek baar yunhi bahr ki taraf nazar dali to mujhe halki patton ki awaz ke sath ek saya sa dikha – main wahan se hatte hue dhire se boli chuzi koi aa raha hai
Hat jaldi se – wo boli aur bahr dekne lagi , aur kuch der tak dekhne ke bad wo mujh se boli yar abhi to ye ek hi hai aur samajh me nahi a raha kyunki isko dekh to lag raha hai jaise koi kisi kapre me lipta hua ho – wo boli
Haan abhi ruko aur dekho dusra bhi jaldi aayega – main boli
Tabhi chuzi bahut tezi se khare hote hue boli ye phone kar raha hai ab tum jaldi se guard ka number dial karo
Maine fauran uska number milaya lekin switch off tha – maine us ko bataya
Lekin ye bat kar raha hai – wo boli tab mujhe yad aaya aur maine chuzi ko kaha ki guard ne mujhe ek bar apne dusra number diya tha ur kaha tha ki ye uska personal phone hai agency ka nahi hai
Hmmmmm to iska matlab saaf hai ki ye service phone off kar ke personal phone pe bat kar raha hai koi bat nahi wo boli
Aur kuch der ke bad fir koi dusra aaya to chuzi dhyan se udhar dekhne ke bad hat kar boli jaldi se dekh ye guard hai ya nahi
Maine dekha aur andere me pahchane ki koshish ki lekin samajh me kuch nahi aa raha tha bas us ane wale saye ki hight gurad ke jitni hi thi bas yahi ek pahchan ho pa rahi thi aur maine chuzi ko bata diya
Ye guard hi hai Gul jaan ab tum meri bat likh lo aur sign bhi karwa lo mujh se – wo boli
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Fir ab kya Karen – main kuch darte hue boli , mujhe is wat bewajah hi ek anjan sa dar mahsoos ho raha tha
kuch nahi karo ab mujhe dekhne do – wo boli aur fir khirki pe ankhen gadaye hue bahar dekhne lagi
kuch der ke baad wo hat gayi aur mujh se boli kya show hai yar kasam se maza a gaya , wo jo pahle wala saya tha wo female hai is liye wo itna zyada lappet kar aati hai – wo boli
haan – maine kaha , aur chuzi fir udhar dekhne lagi , aur kuch der tak dekhte rahne ke bad wo fir hat kar mujh se boli , ab usne apna munh me daal diya hai haye kya maze se choos rahi hai saliii
main kuch nahi boli
acha ab tum wo guard ka dusra number nikalo – chuzi ne kaha
lekin kyun – maine pucha
arey number nikalo yar sawal mat karo – wo boli
maine uska number search kiya aur fir chuzi ko dete hue boli , lekin agar wo number milayenge aur agar us ne utha liya to kya kahenge us se pahle ye soch lo – maine kaha
arey buddhu us se baat hi kaun karega – wo boli aur usne mera mobile lekar us se number liya aur apne phone se milaya aur samne dekhne lagi aur agle hi pal wo khirki se hati aur us ne apne mobile off kar diya
kya hua –maine pucha
jaise hi maine number dial kiya uska mobile samne hi zameen par chamakte hue dikhne laga us ne silent pe dala hua hai – chuzi boli
aur kuch der rukne ke bad us ne fir se udhar dekha aur boli ek hath se mobile dekh raha hai
kya wo number dial kar raha hai – maine pucha
nahi – wo boli wo is waqt sirf ek hi kaam ke bare me soch raha hai lekin ab mobile us ke hath me hai – wo boli
chuzi ne ek bar fir apne mobile on kiya aur fir se uska number milaya aur bahar dekh kar fauran hi kaat diya aur mobile off kar liya
Lo eb to 100 % confirm ho gaya ki ye guard hi hai – wo boli
Haan maine kaha aur chuzi ko hatakar main eek bar udhar dekha to wo usi tarah se tha jaise chuzi ne bataya , main khirki se hati aur bahut hi Ahiste se maine khirki ko and kiya aur chuzi ke sath room me aa gayi
Chuzi ab agar wo tum ko phone karega to kya kahogi – maine pucha
Arey kuch nahi yar uthaungi hi nahi aur agar fir bhi karega to kah dungi ki ghalti se lag gaya tha - wo boli ab tum iski tension na lo ye meri sardardi hai kis ko kaise handle karna hai ye mujhe aata hai – wo boli
Thik hai – main boli
Admi ka to pata chal gaya ki wo guard hai lekin ab ye kaise pata Karen ki aurat kaun hai – chuzi ne kaha
Ab kya zarurat hai pata karne ki hum log koi jasoosi mukable me hissa to le nahi rahe hain – main boli
Haan zarurat to nahi hai lekin fir bhi mujhe pagta hai ki ab pata hona chahiye ki akhir kaun hai jo adhi rat ko machal kar is guard ke pad aa jata hai wo bhi jungle me
Haan ye to sochne ki bat hai – main boli
Waise wo gurad hai bhi bahut lamba tagra kaho to hum log bhi – itna kah ke usne ek bahut ho behooda ishara kiya jis pe maine us ko khoob mara
Wo boli nahi gulnaaz sorry sorry yar plese ab nahi kuch kahungi , maine us ko chor diya aur wo chup chap let gayi
main soch rahi thi ki adat ke mutbiq ye abhi koi naya namoona pesh karegi lekin aisa kuch hua nahi aur wo khamoshi se leti rahi main bhi let gayi raat bahut ho chuki thi is liye pata nahi kab main so gayi
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Ab aage ----
Subah main apne time se uthi to mere uthne ke sath chuzi bhi jag gai aur boli kahan ja rahi ho
Main ab uth gayi hunn- maine jawab diya , jis pew o bhi uth gai
Maine tum abhi so jao kya karogi itni jaldi uth kar , lekin wo uth gayi main bathroom me chali gayi aur naha kar bahar aayi aur prayer kar rahi thi chuzi bhi mere sath thi , wo sab kuch dhyan se dekh rahi thi
Main prayer kar chuki to chuzi ne bahut se sawal puchne shuru kar diye jis pe main usko jawab de rahi thi usne bahut sare religious question puche aur main jawab diya
Tum to bahut '. bhi ho – wo boli
Nahi aisa to nahi hai – main boli itna to sab ko aata hai aur har koi karta hai – main boli
Fir hum logo ne chai pee aur jake lawn me baith gaye shahnaz abhi so rahi thi , chuzi ne fir wahi rat ki baten shuru kar di , wo boli dekho mera shak guard pe tha aur wo sahi sabit hua ab ye socho ki aurat kaun hai – wo boli
Arey ab hogi koi kya karna hai leave them yar – main boli
Aha aise kaise chor dun ab to pata karna hi parega na ki akhir kaun hai wo aurat – chuzi ne kaha
Ho sakta hai ki koi uski janne wali ho ya fir koi aur jaise ki prostitute bhi ho sakti hai – maine kaha
Haan uska bare me jo maine pata kiya uske hisab se prostitute se sambandh to wo rakh sakta hai lekin yahan jungle me itni raat ko koi prostitute nahi aayegi , is liye prostitute ka mamla to nahi hai – wo boli
To ho sakta hai kisi se uska affair ho – main boli
Gul ek minute ke liye socho tumhara kisi se affair hai to kya tum itni rat ko us se milne jaogi wo bhi jungle me – wo boli
Nahi – main bahut bura munh banakar boli
To fir koi aur larki bhi kya itni rat ko ayegi – wo boli
Acha fir tum ab kahna kya chahti ho – maine pucha
Main sure to nahi hun lekin ab mera shak tumhari colony ki kisi larki par hai - wo boli
Chuzi abhi tumne kaha ki agar kisi ka affair hoga to itni rat ko jungle me nahi ayega aur ab tum khud hi kah rahi ho ki affair hai - main boli
Haan isi bat se to main maat kha rahi hun warna ab tak to main bata chuki hoti ki kaun larki hai is ke alawa ek bat aur hai jo bahut khatak rahi hai mujhe – wo boli
Wo kya – maine pucha
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Tum ne bataya tha kit um ne 2 female aur 2 male ko dekha hai yahi bat kuch samajh me nahi aa rahi ki dusra kaun hai – wo boli
Haan dekha to hai lekin maine 2 male ko ek aurat ke sath dekha aur ek male ke sath 2 aurat ko dekha wo bhi bas 1 – 1 bar – main boli
Arey matlab to saaf hai ki sab apas me connect hain – wo boli
Haan – maine kaha
Han ek bat aur click ho rahi hai – wo boli
Wo kya – maine pucha
Prostitute tum ne kaha prostitute ab yahan par sawal female prostitute ka nahi hai lekin ye ho sakta hai ki ye guard male prostitute ho – wo boli
Kya hizyan bak rahi ho – main boli
Oye kaun sa yaaan kya kaha tumne ne – us ne ajeeb si nazron se mujhe dekhte hue kaha
Kuch nahi mera matlab hai kya bakwas kar rahi ho male kaise prostitute ho sakta hai ?
Arey ye lo aap se milo , kyun nahi ho sakta ho raha hai ye aaj kal male prostitute bhi bahut zyada active hain aur unko Gigolo kaha jata hai – wo boli
Mujhe nahi pata main to pahli bar sun rahi hun – main boli
Haan tum ko to kuch nahi pata aur ye bade cities me bahut zyada hi hota hai ab ho sakta hai ki koi aurat is guard ki sewa le rahi ho aur badle me pay karti ho – wo boli
Malum nahi lekin agar tum kah rahi ho to ho sakta hai , lekin farz karo ki agar aisa hai to koi aurat jo usko pay kar rahi hai to iska matlab wo koi paise wali hi hogi , to jab usko aisa karna hoga to wo jungle me kyun jayegi – main boli
Chuzi kuch der tak khamosh baithi sochti rahi fir boli
Gulnaz ek minute ke liye socho tum ho aur paise wali bhi ho tumhare alawa tumhare ghar me tumhari sister hai , ab maan lo ki tum kisi male prostitute ko hire
karti ho tumhari sister so jati hai tum usko ghar pe bula sakti ho ? , ab zara soch kar batao kya akele hone aur self depend hone ke bad bhi kya tum apne ghar pe kisi male prostitute ko bula sakti ho – us ne pucha
Uske is sawal main chup thi meri samajh me nahi aa raha tha lekin kafi sochne ke bad main boli – nahi main to nahi bula sakti
Kyun nahi bula sakti jab tum bulana chati ho ek male ko hire karna chahti ho maan lo – wo boli
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Arey kyunki ghar pe kisi waqt meri sister jag sakti hai ya koi bhi ghar pe aa sakta hai ye to bahut bada risk hai – main boli
Yes now you right – is liye wo aurat jo koi bhi hai wo jungle me jati hai – wo boli
Maine kuch kahne ke liye munh khola lekin chuzi ne mujhe beech me hi rok diya , aur boli mujhe pata hai ki tum kyun munh faad rahi ho
Kyun batao – maine pucha
Tum fir wahi bat karne wali ho jo maine abhi kahi thi ki jiska affair hoga wo itni rat ko jungle me nahi jayega – wo boli
Haan main hairani se boli main yahi puchne wali thi – maine kaha
Haan jiska affair hoga wo larki to nahi ja sakti lekin jo male prostitute ko hire kar rahi hai wo ja sakti hai – wo boli , aur aisa is liye hai kyunki ye jungle pas me hi hai
aur bilkul safe hai jis jagah pe wo log jate hain unko wahan par kahin se dekha bhi nahi ja sakta siwaye tumhari khirki ke is liye wo log apne ko bilkul safe samajhte hain – aur wahin chale jate hain – wo boli
Matlab tum ne faisla kar liya ki koi yahin ki aurat hai aur wo guard male prostitute hai – maine pucha
Faisla nahi dear ye faisla nahi hai maine apna shak show kiya hai aur is bar ye shak 80 % sahi hona chahiiye ab pata ye karna hai ki aurat kaun hai aur wo dusra admi aur dusri aurat kaun hai - wo boli
Haan ek bat aur abhi abhi dimagh me aayi – wo boli
Kya – maine pucha
Maine kaha ki un logon ko khirki ke alawa aur kahin se dekha nahi ja sakta , to jo log wahan aate hain unko ye achi tarah se pata hai ki ye room tumhara garage hai
aur itni raat ko tum yahan nahi aa sakti aur unko shayad ye bhi pata hai ki tumhara routine kya hai , is liye ye bat sabit hoti hai ki aurat jo bhi hai isi colony ki hai – wo boli
Hmmmmmm main chuzi ka munh dekh rahi thi aur samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya kahun main boli chuzi tumhara dimagh aisi khurafat baton me kitna tez chalta hai , yahi agar study me lagao to – main boli
Hey maata pravachan mat start kar ,- wo boli , dekho gul ye human nature hai har kisi ka dimagh is tarah ki baton me apne aap tez chalne lagta hai aur rahi bat study ki to main wo kar hi rahi hun haan lekin main kitabi knowledge nahi leti bas vyavharik gyaan se kaam chalati hun – wo boli
Bat to sahi hai – main boli
To thik hai ab ye pata karna hai ki aurat kaun hai , ab hum log is pe koshish karenge -- wo boli
Ok –
To chalo nashta karao mujhe bhook lagi hai tumhara kya tum ko to baton ke alawa kuch aata hi nahi hai us se hi pet bhar logi – wo boli aur ye kahte hue kursi se uth kar khari ho gayi
Acha kamini ulta chor kotwal ko dante – main uski taraf barhi lekin wo daudkar andar bhag gayi lekin jitni tezi se gayi thi utni hi tezi se wapas aayi
Kya hua – maine usko pakadkar baal khinchte hue pucha
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Kuch nahi yar shahnaz aa rahi hai is liye bhagi hun – wo boli
Chalo acha abhi main shahnaz se kahti hun ki chuzi ko physics parhao – main boli
Nahi please ye mat kah dena us se aur ye science ke jitney bhi subject hain in se meri jaan sukhti hai – wo boli
Main andar chali gayi aur fir hum logon ne nashta kiya aur chuzi apne ghar chali gayi chuzi ke jane ke kuch der ke bad shahnaz boli – bibbi chuzi didi hum logon ki kaun hai
Maine uski taraf ghoor kar dekhte hue socha ue kya puch rahi hai
Aap chuzi ko didi kahti hain is liye wo apki didi hai – main boli
To fir wo mere ghar me kyun nahi rahti – wo boli
Shahnaz please ye bawle pan ke sawal karna band karo ab aap samajhdar ho , graduation kar rahi ho – main boli
To kya graduation karne wale sawal nahi puchte – wo boli
Main kya karun main apna matha pete hue boli ,chuzi sahi kahti hai ki kisi ko science nahi parhani chahiye science wale sab pagal ho jate hain – main boli
Lekin chuzi didi to science nahi padhti – wo boli
Tumhara matlab kya hai – maine pucha
Kuch nahi , main aise hi aap se bat kar rahi hun , aur han main ye puchna chahti thi ki chuzi didi jab aati hai to hamare ghar me hum logon se aise behave kyn karti hai jaise ki hum log mehman hain aur wo mejbaan – wo boli
Main uski bat pe bahut hansi aur boli , wo is liye kyun ki aap ki chuzi didi bahut achi hai aur wo aap se bahut pyar karti hai is liye wo koi farq nahi samajhti ki ye ghar kiska hai aur wo mehman hai ye mejban , w bas hum logon ko aur is ghar ko apna samajhti hai - maine kaha
Ok bibbi – ye kahti hui wo kisi bache ki tarah chali gayi jaise koi bacha zid puri ho jane bad khush hoke chala jata hai
Fir din bhar main ghar me hi rahi april adha beet chukka tha aur mere liye ye bahut hi bekar mausam tha itni shiddat ki dhoop aur tapish me main ghar se bahar nikalna hi pasand nahi kari
Waqt beet gaya aur shahnaz aur seema ke sath sath mee chuzi ke bhi paper khatam ho chuke the aur hum log free hokar ghar pe hi the seema bas kabhi kabhi poonam aunty ke sath jati thi kahin kahin
Piche jungle me aane walon ko main roz dekhne jati thi lekin idhar wo us din ke bad se nahi aa rahe the
shayad un ko kisi tarah shak ho gaya ho ya fir koi aur bat ho main nahi janti , chuzi roz phone kar ke puchti thi ki kal raat kya raha , main yahi kah deti thi ki koi aaya hi nahi jawab me wo bahut ache ache word sunati thi
Aise hi is mausam me ghar me band aur us par shahnaz ki chuttiyan wo bhi dimagh garam kiye rahti thi ki kahin chalo , vacation pe lekin main nahi jana chah rahi thi
lekin ab shahnaz ko samjhana mushkil ho raha tha aur main khud shahnaz ki kisi bat ko nahi talti thi , maine socha chalo kahin chala jaye bahut dino se kahin gaye bhi nahi hain hum log , maine shahnaz se kaha acha hum log jayenge ab to tum khush ho
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Haan bibbi aap jo karogi main us me khush hun – wo boli
Meri chuzi se phone pe bat hui maine us ko bataya ki shhnaz kahin jane ko kah rahi ha is liye main soch rahi hun jane ke liye
Kahan jane ki taiyari hai – us ne pucha
Itni garami ho rahi hai is liye main soch rahi hun ki kahin hill station chala jaye – main ne kaha
Arey waah ye tro bahut acha hai kya main bhi chalun tumhare sath – wo bahut zyada excite hote hue boli
Haan haan chalo – maine kaha
Lekin tum shahnaz se puch lo – wo boli
Kyun – maine pucha
Arey yar kahin us ko bura na lage – wo boli
Pagal ho kyat um aisa kyun sochti ho shahnaz kyun bura manegi us ko bahut khushi hogi ye sunkar kit um bhi sath me chal rahi ho – maine kaha
Thik hai dear lekin ek bar tum ghar aake papa se kah do to bat ban jayegi warna yar mom ki wajah se to mera bhi dil nahi karta ghar chorne ka – wo boli
Thik hai main aa jaungi lekin chuzi agar ghar pe koi problem na ho to hi chalo – maine kaha
Thik hai tum ghar kab aao gi – wo boli
Arey aa jaungi mari kyun ja rahi ho - main boli
Fir bhi – wo boli
Kal aati hun – maine kaha
Kal kyun yar aaj kyun nahi aaj sham ko aao aur shahnaaz ko leke aana – wo boli
Thik hai dear aaj sham ko hi aaungi – maine kaha aur bat khatam kar ke phone band kar diya
Itne dino me meri shaizan se koi bat nahi hui thi han lekin uske masg roz aate the , aur roz hi wo bat karne ki request karta tha ,
lekin main busy rahi mera exam chal raha tha lekin maine us ko ye nahi bataya tha ki main bhi study kar rahi hun , magar msg ke reply kayi bar main kar deti thi ,
idhar last 3-4 din se bhi wo bahut hi zyada kah raha tha leki maine ye kah diya ki sister ka exam khatam ho chukka hai aur wo din bhar mere sath rahti hai aur summer vacation me ghar pe mehman bhi aaye hue hain is liye bat nahi kar sakti
Kyunki idhar main bhi bahut busy rahi aur bahut zyada main baat bhi nahi karna chahti thi is liye maine us se jhuth bola jabki meri hamesha yahi koshish rahti hai ki jhuth na bola jaye aur sach bolne ki koshish ki jaye , magar kya karun kabhi kabhi na chahte hue bhi jhuth bolna hi parta hai
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Lunch ke bad hum log aaram kar rahe the tabhi chuzi se bat hui thi , maina shahnaz ke room me gayi aur us ko bataya ki chuzi bhi hum logon ke sath chalne ko kah rahi hai kya us ko bhi le chalun agar tum kaho to – miaine pucha
Ye to bahut acha hoga bibbi agar chuzi didi bhi sath me jayegi – wo boli
Thik hai to sham ko chuzi ne apne ghar bulaya hai uske papa ko batana parega ki hum log ja rahe hain , is liye abhi tum aram karo sham ko chalte hain chuzi ke ghar – main boli aur apne room me aa gayi
sham ko main shahnaz ko lekar chuzi ke ghar gayi , chuzi hum logon ko dekh kar bahut khush hui aur chuzhi ki mom aur uske papa bhi , chuzi ke papa to bahut hi zyada khush the
kyun ki wo apni beti se bhut pya karte the aur main us ki frind thi wo hum dono bahno ki bahut tareef karte the khas kar mehnat aur education ke sath sath jo tarbiyat aur rahan sahan tha us se wo had darja mutasir the
Hum log baten kar rahe the chuzi ki mom jo leti hui thi hum logn ke a jane se wo baith gayi thi unke pairon me abhi bhi takleet thi jab hum logon ko bat karte hue der ho gayi to chuzi ishare se boli ki papa se kaho ,
maine kaha choro tum mat jao , jis pe bahut khtarnak munh banate hue mujhe ghoonsa dikha kar boli soch lena fir , main muskrat rahi thi
Tabhi uska bhai harsh kisi bhagte bhoot ki tarah andar aaya usne hath me ek packet pakra hua tha , usne hum logn ko wish kiya aur chuzi se bola jaoa bahar jeeja ji bula rahe hain tum ko
Is shahnaz tapak se boli kaun jija ji kiske jija ji
Mere jija ji chuzi didi ke husband – wo bola
Main chuzi ke munh dekh rahi thi , chuzi bahut tez chilla kar boli mammi dekh lo is kamine ko mutta kahin ka ye kahte hue chuzi k eek gilaas usko fenk kar mara jis ko wo bacha gaya aur aur uchalta hua wahan se chala gaya aur kuch hi der ke bad wo plates me ice cream lekar aaya aur hum logon kea age rakh di
Maine sab se pahle plate utha kar aunty ko dii , wo boli arey beta tum log khao
Nahi aunty pahle aap liye , is ke bad maine chuzi ko di jis pe plate apne age se hatate hue boli nahi main nahi kahungi tum khao uska mood off ho chukka tha
Kha lo didi jija ne free me nahi di hai pure paise liye hain kitna kanjoos jija dhunda hai tum ne – wo bola
Chuzi ne ice cream utha kar uske munh pe fenki jo sidhi jakar us ke face pe padi lekin uski sehat pe iska koi asar nahi hua wo apne face se hata kar ice cream ko khata hua bola thank you didi tumne apni ice cream mujhe de di
Wo kuch bolti is se pahle hi uski mom harsh ko dantne lagi , tabhi us ke papa andar aye jo shayad kisi dusre room me gaye hue the , bole kya ho raha hai ye badtamiz wo hansta hua wahan se chala gaya
Shahnaz khoob maze se sab kuch dekh rahi thi aur hans rahi thi , chuzi shahnaz se boli hans lo hans lo tum bhi kuch kam nahi ho wo bhi tumhari hi category ka hai
Kya hua chuzi bat kya hai kyu itna ukhri hui ho aur kyun chidh rahi ho – maine pucha kyun ki ye bahut ajeeb bat thi ki koi chuzi ko chidha raha tha warna sari duniya ko chidhane ka theka to chuzi ke pas tha
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Wo kuch nahi boli , lekin us ke papa bole beta aisa hai ki ek din hua kuch aisa ki tabhi chuzi naraz hote hue boli papa aap bhi na ab please chup raho – wo boli
Kuch nahi hai koi bat nahi wo pagal hai kuch bhi bakta rahta hai – wo boli
Pagal kyun hai tum apni bat nahi batati ho us ko hi har samay pgal banati rahti ho – us ki mom boli
Aap to us ka hi favour karti hai – chuzi boli
Haan karungi kyun nahi akhir mera beta jo hai – wo boli
Haan haan wahi to beta hai aap ka main to Anath ashram se aayi hun na – wo jal bhun kar boli jis pe hum sab log hansne lage
Aunty ke kaha dekho beta aisa hua jab ye dono chote the to aise hi garmi ke mausam me ye log ice cream khate the ice cream to sab log khate hain lekin chuzi bahut hi zyada ice cream kahti thi aur koi bhi ice cream wala nikle to ye zarur ice cream le leti thi
Aise hi ek din ek ice cream wala bahar awaz de raha ki chuzi apne papa se zid karne lagi to inhone mana kiya to ye mani nahi aur khoob nakhre karne lagi , to is ke papa bahut naraz hoke bole
Mammi please chup raho chuzi uske pas jake un ke munh pe hath rakhte hue boli
Nahi aunty aap bataiye kya hua tha – main boli
Tum se to main baad me nipat lungi - mujhe hath dikhte hue wo boli
Aunty boli - ki fir iske Papa bole ki dekh teri shadi main kisi ice cream wale se kar dunga fir tum khati rahna ice cream
Ooooh to is liye harsh ice cream wale ko jija kah raha hai – maine pucha
Aage bhi to suno beta – us ke papa bole
Aur kya hua shahnaz hansti hui boli
Tum ko bahut maza aa raha hai chuzi us ko kha jane wali nazron se dekhti hui boli
Haan fir hua ye ki us ke agle din chuzi bahar gate pe khari chilla rahi thi ki papa papa mammi mammi main ice cream wale ko le aayi meri shadi kara do is se main ice cream wale ko le aayi meri shadi kara do – aunty ne hanste hue kaha
fir hum log bahut hanse is ki bat aur wo ice cream wala bhi bahut hans raha tha , is liye jab bhi koi ice cream wala awaz deta hai to harsh is se kahta hai ki didi dekho jija bula rahe hain
Waah waah bahut khoob itni achi baat thi aur tum batane ahi de rahi thi – main boli
Chuzi mujhe bhi ghoor rahi thi , shahnaz boli to jija ji dikhne me kaise hain
Tu chup rah – wo shahnaz ko dantte hue boli
Aur aise hi bato me hansi mazak me bahut waqt ghuzar gaya aur hum dono ne dinner chuzi ke ghar pe hi kiya aur fir uske papa ko btaya ki hum log ja rahe hain aur chuzi ko bhi jana chahti hai agar aap kahen to main us ko liye jaun – maine pucha
lekin jana kahan hai – wo bole
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Maine kaha hill station jana hai pahle nainital jayenge fir masoori - maine aise hi bol diya wo bole thik hai beta jao lekin bahut zyada din ka programe na rakhna – wo bole
Thik hai uncle – maine kaha aur chuzi ki taraf dekha to wo bahut khush dikh rahi thi
Fir main apne ghar chali aayi aur fir chuzi mere ghar ayi hum logon ne program banaya aur pahle us shahar ka plan banaya jahan chuzi admit thi
fir wahan se hum logon ka reservation ho chukka tha nainital ke liye aur wahan se fir masoorie ke liye socha tha ki wo hum log wahin jake dekhenge ki kya behtar hoga
Chuzi sham me mere ghar aa gyi apna bag leke us ke papa us ko chorne aaye the wo hum kuch der ruke aur hum logon ko samjhaya ki kaise jana kya karna aur safar ke dauran bahut hoshiyar rahna kyu ki koi admi to sath hai nahi tum logon ke
Sunday 14 may 2006
Aaj subah hi main shahnaz aur chuzi ke sath ghar se nikal aayi hum logon ne rat ko hi packing kar lit hi aur subah hi ghar chor diya maine seema ki maa ko ghar ki pe rahne ko kah diya aur chale diye .
Ghar ke pas se hi hum log bus me baith liye aura a gaye us big city me jahan main shahnaz ko lekar aai thi jab chuzi admit thi , hum log usi hotel me gaye jahan par pahle main stay kar chuki thi hotel pahunchte hi hum logo ne chai pi aur yunhi thora bahut nashta kiya , us ke bad chuzi boli chalo yahan ghumne chala jaye .
Nahi abhi itni dhoop me main kahin nahi jaungi sham ko chalange waise bhi is city me rat bahut der me hoti hai aur subah bahut jald hoti hai – main boli , aur hum log aaram karne lage
Shahnaz ne chuzi ko bataya ki hum log pahle bhi isi hotel me thahre the , wow tabhi tum log yahan aayi ho bahut acha hotel hai – wo boli
Ab yahan akar hotel me room leke letne se kya faida agar letna hi tha to yahan kyun aayi ho – chuzi boli
Dekho jahan bhi jana hai sham ko jayenge abhi itni dhoop me kahin nahi jaungi aur waise bhi hamari train parso hai abhi hum log pure do din is city me hain khoob ghoom lena – main boli
Khoob ghoom lena – wo meri nakal utarti hui boli aur dhamm se bed pe gir gayi aur hum log aram karne lage bus ke safar ki wajah se main to thak chuki thi aur us pe garmi ki shiddat ne pareshan kar diya tha is liye main so gayi
Main jab sokaruthi to dekha bed pen a to shahnaz thi aur na hi chuzi main dar gayi ki ye log mujhe baghair bataye kahan chali gayin , main uthi to dekha wo dono balcony me baithi hui baten kar rahi thi , main bhi jakar un ke pas baith gai aur baten karne lagi ,
chuzi ne chai ka order kar diya aur chai aa gayi hum logon ne chai pee fir maine us dono se kaha ab aap log naha kar taiyar ho jaiye fir hum nikalte hain is shahar ki sair karne ke liye
Hum teeno log naha kar change kar ke taiyar ho gaye hum log apni traditional dress me the jo main aur shahnaz pahante the aur chuzi apni dress me thi jo wo pahanti thi aaj bas fark itna tha ki uske kandhe par bag nahi tha jo uski kamar tak jhoolta tha
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Pahle hum log aaye the us ke muqabil shahar kafi bhara hua lag raha tha pahle itna zyada rush nahi tha shyad is ki ek wajah garmi thi aur us pe summer vacation bhi sahnaz ne apna camera hath me liya hua tha jo wo pichli bar nahi layi thi aur kafi afsos kar rahi thi
Hum log paidal hi chalte hue aage barhe aur shahnaz us shrine ke pas jakar ruki aur wahan ke photo lene lagi ,
hum log us ke andar bhi gaye aur andar dekha to hum log dekhte hi rah gaye bahut hi bada aur ek tareekhi makam tha ye chuzi ka to munh khula ka khula hi rah gaya
wo boli yar main bahut bar is city me aayi hun lekin kabhi is jagah nahi aayi aur bahut si jagah maine yahan dekhi hui hain gulnaaz mere pas word nahi hain kahne ke liye ki kitna acha hai tumhara selection – chuzi ne kaha
Fir hum log yahan k eek bahut famous market gaye aur wahan par bahut der tak ghume aur shoping bhi ki , wahan se hum log ek shoping mall me gaye aur mall culture ko dekha jis market se hum log aa rahe the wahan aur yahan ke nizaam me zameen aasman ka farak tha
hum log wahin ek kinare baithe hue the aur shahnaz photo le rahi thi tabhi shahnaz boli – bibbi wahan chalo jahan par dariya tha aur bahut si boat thi aap morning me gayi thi mujhe lekar – wo boli
Haan haan yad hai mujhe – maine kaha aur chuzi bhi boli chalo yar wahi chalte hain aur hum log wahan se rickshe se wahan pahunch gaye
Us jagah par pahunchte hi chuzi apni dono baho ko failate hue boli wowwww kya jagah hai yar maza aa gaya ,
last time hum log yahan par bahut subah aaye the lekin aaj ye garmi ki ek sham thi aur yahan par bahut bheer bhar thi , zyadatar yahan par premi jode the aur kuch log family ke sath bhi the , shahnaz eke k chiz ki photo le rahi thi
Hum logon ne ek boat hire ki aur dariya ke andar boating ka maza lene lage bahut gram din beet chukka tha aur dariya bhi ab madham madham rafter se bah raha tha sham ki hawa pani ek sath milkar jism ke sath sath rooh tak ko taskeen de rahi thi
hum log yunhi dariya me kashti par sawar the aur bahut door tak ghoom aaye the , tareeki ki chadar liye raat sar pe kahri ho gayi thi aur charon taraf light jal chuki thi aur dariye ke andar se wo nazara bahut hi shandar tha lekin ye nazare hum log dekh kar khush ho rahe the lekin wo khoobsurat nazare shahnaz ke camera me hamesha ke liye qaid ho chuke the.
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Tabhi dariya ki ravani me bathe hue dharon par ek roshni ki lakeer namoodar hui jisko dekh kar shahnaz to lagbhag dar si gayi aur boli bibbi ye kya hai
main bhi us tarf ghaur se dekhne lagi wo roshni pani par tairti hui meri kashti ki taraf aa rahi thi , maine kaha is ka photo lo aur shahnaz photo lene lagi
Chuzi boli ye diye hai Deepak jo log pani me chorte hain pani par tairte hue wo Deepak bahut ache lag rahe the aur kahne ke liye mere pas lafz nahi hain , kabhi kabhi lakhon nazaron me ek aisa dekhne ko milta hai , jis taraf se Deepak tairte hue aa rahe the usi taraf meri kashti ja rahi thi aur kuch hi der me hamari kashti un Deepak ke pas pahunch gayi
maine dekha ki pattiyon ke bane hue pyalon me wo Deepak rakhe hue the aur pani ki lahron par dariya ki bal khati hui maujon ke sath ek dusre se sarghishi karte hue chale ja rahe the .
Raat ki tareeki mahaul par kabiz ho chuki thi aur sab taraf ki roshni dariya ke pani me ek alag hi rang paida kar rahi thi kuch hi der ke bad hum log sahil dariya par aa gaye aur chalte hue us restaure ki taraf hcal diye aur hum logn ne wahin dinner kiya fir hotel laut aaye .
Maine hotel me ek double room liya hua tha aur hum teeno ek hi bed par so gaye , subah hum log bahut jaldi uth gaye aur shahnaz jo ki fauran hi bahar jane ko taiyar ho gayi aur hum tino morning walk par nikal gaye
shahnaz boli bibbi us garden me chalo jahan pahle gaye the aur hum log chalte hue wahin chale gaye jahan par pahle se hi bahut log the lekin job hi the sab senior citizen the wahan pahunchte hi chuzi boli , main samajh gayi ki ye yahan kyun layi hai ab kahin fir se ye ghas phoos ke bare me na batane lage – wo boli
Hum log bahut der tak wahan tahalte rahe aur shahnaz photography kar rahi thi , arey yar kitne ajeeb plants hain yahan par maine aaj se pahle kabhi nahi dekhe – chuzi boli
Haan maine bhi yahin dekhe hain au raise plants kahin nahi dekhe aaj tak – main boli
Thori der ke baad hum log wahan se wapas aa gaye hotel aake hum logon ne nashta kiya aur uske baad shahar ke dusre hisson me bhi hum log gaye historical places hum logon ne sab hi dekhe aur bahut waqt wahan ghuzara aur hare k jagah jo hum log apne piche chor aye the shahnaz un sab ko apne camera me qaid karke apne sath le aayi thi .
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Tuesday 16 may 2006
Subah uth kar hum logn ne nashta kiya aur yahan ke do historical market ghumne gaye aur thori shoping ki , hum ne is city ki kuch mashhoor chizon ko khareeda aur kafi der ke baad hum log htel wapas aa gaye
Do din ka waqt pata hi nahi chala aur is shahar ko alwida kahne ki ghadi aa gayi , koi talluk nahi tha is city se koi apna nahi tha yahan fir kuch waqt jo is shahar me bitaya wo bahut acha tha aur yahn se nikalte waqt aisa lag raha tha jaise ye shahar ki sarzameen muskurakar fir aane ko kah rahi ho
Hum logon ne hotel ko chora aur station ke liye chal diye , aur kuch hi der me station pahunch gaye .
Raat ka waqt tha right time par train thi aur hum log train me sawar ho gaye hamara reservation 3 – AC me tha , hum logon ke pas do uppar birth thi aur ek beech kit hi upar wali dono birth pe main aur shahnaz aa gaye aur beech wali pe chuzi ho gayi baithne ko waqt nahi tha raat ka safar tha aur subah tak hum logn ko pahunch jana tha
lekin raat ka safar aur train upper birth pe mujhe bilkul acha nahi lag raha tha , kyun ki raat ke safar me mujhe khirki pe baithne ki adat thi lekin aisa hua nahi aur Ac coach me khirki band hi rahti hai ,
is ko ek sitam samajh kar main let gayi maine shahnaz ko dekha to wo so chuki thi maine nichenigah ki to chuzi bhi chadar tan kar so chuki thi kyun ki din bhar ghumne ki wajah se bahut thak gaye the hum log kuch der ke baad main bhi so gayi .
meri aankh khuli to kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki hum log kahan pahunche maine mobile on kiya time deka to 4:00 baje hue the , main birth se niche uteri aur toilet gayi train me sab log so rahe the , toilet se bahar aa kar main gate kholkar khari ho gayi aur tez hawa ke thapede mere jism se takrane lage , thori der khare rahne ke baad maine gate pe pair latka ke baith gayi .
A.C ki masnui thandak se ye kudarti hawa k thapere mujhe lakh guna zyada ache lag rahe the raat ke sannate ko chirti aur tareeki ka seena chirti hui train tez rafter
se daurti ja rahi thi raat ke andhere me kisi basti se jab train ka ghuzar hota to aisa lagta jaise ki soyi hui basti ko jagane ki nakam koshish karti hui train yahan taka a
pahunchi lekin agle hi pal usko sannate me chorkar train aage barh jati thi aur isi tarah hawa ke jhonko ko mahsoos karte hue bahut der ho gayi raat ki tareeki
khatam ho rahi thi aur aasman me subah ka surkh shafaq namoodar ho raha tha tabhi train kisi station pe ruki lekin koi bhi musafir na hi utra aur na hi train me aaya , kuch der ke bad train chal di tabhi mere kandhe pe ek hath aaya aur kisi ne
awaz di yahan kyun baithi ho ,maine palat kar dekha to chuzi thi
Tum jag gayi – main boli
Haan abhi train ruki to awazen sunakr amin jag gayi dekha to tum nahi thi isliye main niche aayi – wo boli
Shahnaz so rahi hai – maine pucha
Haan wo hathi ghore sab kuch bech kar so rahi hai – wo boli
Wo aise hi soti hai – main boli , aur chuzi bhi mere pas baith gayi aur kuch der tak hum log baithe rahe , tabhi ek admi chai lekar aaya aur hum dono nechai le li
Aap log break fast lengi – us admi ne pucha
Haan lekin abhi nahi kuch der ke baad abhi to sab so rahe hain – main boli
Thik hai – wo bola aur chala gaya wo train ke pantry staff ka koi tha , hum dono ne chai pee fir chuzi boli chalo yar abhi leto abhi bahut der hai hum logon ko pahunchne me
Thik hai – main boli aur uske sath andar aa gayi aur apni birth pe jakar let gayi chuzi beech ki birth pet hi ye acha tha warna wo baten kar kar ke mera dimagh kha jati , birth pea ate hi chuzi fir se chadar tan kar so gayi thi
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Dear Gulnaz,
Aap ki story yahan tak parhi or buhut achi lagi lekin mein is k baarey mein kuch kehna chahta hoon umeed hei k aap is par tawajjah farmayengi. Yeh aap ki personal or zindagi ki aap beeti hei lihaaza lambi to hogi lekin itni lambi hojaygi is ka andaza nahi tha. Abhi tak story mein shaizan ki stories or aap k uncle ki stories or jungle mein ho rahey sex ki story hee ayee hei baaqi aap ki daily routine jis k baarey mein mera khayal hei k us ki wajah se story itni lambi horahee hei.
Yeh aap beeti hei lekin is baat ka shayad aap ko andaza hoga k exbii pe log kya parhney or dekhney aatey hein to us ka b aap ko khayal rakhna chahiye. Mera zaati khayal hei k agar aap apni daily routine ko thora mukhtasar kar dien to umeed hei k aap ki story ko chaar chaand lag jayenge.
Or sab se ahem baat, story k apney character ki story jab tak shuru na ho maza nahi aata (ap kaheingi k meri story hee to hei ) mera matlab hei k aap ka personal sex experience.
Umeed karta hoon k aap ek acha reader samajhtey huwey mere comments ko parhengi mera matlab aap ki touheen nahi balkey aap ki islaah ki koshish hei.
ANDAAZ-E-BAYAAN GAR CHE MERA SHOKH NAHI HEI
SHAYAD K UTAR JAYE MERI BAAT TERE DIL MEIN.....
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waah.....waah......
Agar commens ka contest hota to ye pehla inaam ka haqdaar hota. Aap ka comnt qaabile tareef hai. Aap ne TS ke samne khul ke apni baat rakhi.....lekin itne nape tule andaz me. Aur phir sab ka nichod ek she'r me.
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Dear aap sab ka kahna jayaz hai , aur main Reet ji ke jawab se puri tarah sahmat hun , lekin ab aap logon ka ye bat kahna mere naziriye se thik nahi hai , kyunki aap story ke shuruati hisse ko dekha aur ab dono me bahut farq hai , main ab to bilkul bhi ghair zaruri baten nahi likh rahi hun .
Aur agar main apni life ke har din ko shamil karte hue agar likhne lagun to is story ko khatam hone me 5 saal lag jayenge , aur rahi bat mere apne bare me likhne ki to jaisi meri life hai main waisa hi likh rahi hun aur jitna aap log parh chuke hain us se kuch zyda agar meri life me hai to wo bhi aap log parhenge .
bas ye story apne ekhtetam par hai kuch din aur sath rahiye ye meri aap sab se ilteja hai
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I am continuing my story
A wedding ceremony in village
A story of 7 differnt women same plot in different style
Give ur precious time read it ones and if u liked it give ur feedback
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A WEDDING CEREMONY IN VILLAGE
https://xossipy.com/thread-1191.html
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