Thread Rating:
  • 23 Vote(s) - 3.26 Average
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
Incest ਮਜ਼ੇਦਾਰ ਭੁਲੇਖਾ 2
Updated after 10 days. Slow updates downgrade a story. Try to give atleast two updates a week.
Like Reply
Do not mention / post any under age /rape content. If found Please use REPORT button.
Bahut hi vadhiya san updates. Conversation bahut hi jayada erotic si. Koi kahli nahi hai kahani de flow vich, har scene part dar part khul reha. Jo ke bahut vadhiya tareeke nahi likheya hai.

Keep it up.
Like Reply
Bhot e kaim likh rahe oo?
Like Reply
Update bro
Like Reply
Ghaint story speech less
Like Reply
Karde yaar hun update
Like Reply
Very slow and late updates. The story has lost its touch.
Like Reply
(11-02-2020, 12:50 PM)DRAGON WOLF Wrote: Very slow and late updates. The story has lost its touch.

Eho jehe lok hi writers nu discourage karde ne. Jinna ne writer da kamm salahun layi post nahi karna but jado post karni discourage karn vaste karni. I saw all of his posts under this thread, everytime he posts its discouraging for writer. If you are not writing stories yourself, you cant guess how hard it is to take time and write stories.
0
[+] 1 user Likes Busty_kaur's post
Like Reply
(11-02-2020, 07:48 PM)Busty_kaur Wrote: Eho jehe lok hi writers nu discourage karde ne. Jinna ne writer da kamm salahun layi post nahi karna but jado post karni discourage karn vaste karni. I saw all of his posts under this thread, everytime he posts its discouraging for writer. If you are not writing stories yourself, you cant guess how hard it is to take time and write stories.

Bilkul shi khea ji.. jdo banda app likhda story odo pta lagda v mehant lagdi ah nale oh kihda kalla storys likhan te hiaa bande nu hor v km hunde apne life de...don’t mind bro..keep it up tuci jdo v update kroge i m sure k pehla waliaa nalo v siraaa hayu. Bhut ghant likhni de malak oh tuci..thuadiaa papa ji nala ni khulda,mjedar bhulekha1, maa te putt bhut bar padeyaa te jdo v read krde ah inj hi lagda k nmiaa hi ne..
Like Reply
Too hot to handle
Like Reply
Update krde ustad!
Story bhut siraa, sochda hoenga Comment kyu nhi kite agar sira hai ta kaarn hai username bc pehla ajeha rakh lea hun change ni hunda!
Par aah Comment je dekhe, bai pehla reet aalia kahania pasand si samjh gea hoeanga sexy reet writer di gal krda fer oh busy ho gyi, fer kavita wadia lgn lgi!
Sexy reet warga koi nhi likh skya par ik din teri kahani pdhi ta bhut wadia lggi kahani, ik ta eh organic ji aa, jo asal lgda bnde nu!
Kdo marji krdi update, koi chakkar ni bs ik andaja ja de jaya kro v inne k dina ch deu ta jo udo k dekh lyie!
Kyunki es time sirf teri kahani hi pdh rhe aa, te lao nazare zindagi de!
Jehre negative comment krde aa dhyan ni dena, likhna bhut aukha bai, sex story ta bhut mushkil aa!
So thanks for lovely story!
Like Reply
(11-02-2020, 07:48 PM)Busty_kaur Wrote: Eho jehe lok hi writers nu discourage karde ne. Jinna ne writer da kamm salahun layi post nahi karna but jado post karni discourage karn vaste karni. I saw all of his posts under this thread, everytime he posts its discouraging for writer. If you are not writing stories yourself, you cant guess how hard it is to take time and write stories.

We'll miss or mrs busty , I am not discouraging the writer . I am just trying to remind him of his obligations as a writer to update the story at regular intervals , else the story will slowly loose it's grip upon readers.
Like Reply
Story is going great bro...please continue
Like Reply
Darwaje te lagatar ho rahi chot Jyoti nu utthan nu majboor kar dindi hai. Akhan maldi oh badi mushkil naal uth ke darwaja kholdi hai. Sahmane Nuri khadi hundi hai.


“haye mere tan hath dukhan lag paye darwaja khadkayundi de. Tu pata ni kehdi neende sutti pai si”

“Aa gai Nuri” Jyoti lagda hale vi poori teran naal hosh vich nahi si.

“Madam ek ghanta ho geya aai nu. Panj vajj gaye aa”

“Haaa…panj vajj gaye…yaar sachi pata ni lagga……sir chakra reha yaar hale vi”

“Raat nu hal chalayuno ni hattna..dine akhe chakkar ayunde aa”


“apne veere nu kahi……oh ni hattda hal chalayuno”

Nuri kujh kehan laggi hi si ke ruk gai. Jyoti lagatar ubasiyan lai ja rehi si. “Aja thalle, mummy ne chah banayi aa. Hath munh dho la. Thoda tera dimagh tikane aave”

Nuri vichari da college masa hi khatam hoyeya si. Phir ek ghanta bass ne laga ditta. Par ghar pahunchadi de armana te pani fir geya. Oh sver di Bhabhi naal gall agge vadhayun lai mari ja rehi si te Bhabhi utte so rehi si. Oh college ton aan te jadd uppar jaan laggi tan uhdi ma ne uhnu rok ditta. Ek ghanta udeekan ton baad bi Jyoti thalle na aai tan akhir oh khud nu rok na saki. Par Jyoti di halat dekh uhne hale sabar karna hi behtar samjeya.

Teja ajj vi hanere hoye aaya te siddha nahayun chala geya. Kulwant te Naseebo roti kha chukke sann te baithak vich tv dekh rahe sann. Nuri te Jyoti vi Bithak vich hi sann. Nuri ton sabar nahi ho reha si oh apni gall agge toran lai kahli si. Kahli Jyoti bi bahut si par darr te sharam karan oh faisla nahi kar pa rehi si. Naseebo kol hon karke Nuri ne raat nu hi gall karan da faisla kita. Roti khan ton baad jadd Jyoti thalle aai tan Naseebo rasoyi vich hi si. Ohne do glasa vich dudh pa ke Jyoti agge kar ditta.

"Main pehlan Nuri nu dudh de aava. Phir apne lai le ke jandi aa”

“Ohnu de anda main. Tu le jah. Main char bhande dho ke ape lightan band kar dayu”

“Le mummy tusi rehan dinde ta…tahanu keha tan si main ape aa ke kar layu” Jyoti da dil hi tutt geya si.

“Le putt fer ki ho geya…sara kamm tuhi ta kardi aa. Aah le ja dudh. Aram kar ja ke”

“Main bhande dho ke lightan band kar dayu. Tusi aram karo”

“Nahi-nahi putt. Main ape kar lau. Tu ja haram kar. Thand vi kinni ho gai aa” Jyoti ne koi chara na chalda dekh dudh de glass chukk laye te bahar aa gai. Paudhiyan chardi oh baar baar Nuri de kamre vall dekh rehi si. Hun oh pachta rehi si. Sara din kamm kaaj vich nikkal geya. Nuri naal gall karan da mauka na lagga. Halanke aje takk oh khud samajh nahi saki si ke uhda dil ki chahunda hai.

Jyoti vang Nuri vi nirash ho gai si. Uhdi ma ne uhde iradeyan te pani fer ditta si. Na hun uhda dil padhayi vich lag reha si te na uhnu neend aa rehi si. Kade oh apne aap nu kosdi, kade apni ma nu te kade Jyoti nu.

Teje ne Jyoti uppar jandi nu ajj fer ton dhah leya si. Jyoti da mood ukhdeya si par Teje de hatha di karamat si, ke oh jalad hi Teje diyan bahan vich siskiyan bhardi mel rehi si. Kall di peyas ajj di peyas nalon vakhri si. Kall kaam di garmi ne uhna de pyaar vich hor josh vadha ditta si par ajj oh ek duje de nede ho ke vi door sann. Ajj kaam di pyaas vakhri si te Teja te Jyoti us vakhri pyaas nu bujhayun lai bekraar sann. Ise bekrari karan Teje ne ajj bahuta time na lagayundeya Jyoti nu nangi karke uste chadh geya. Jyoti ne vi apniyan tanga khol ke uhnu apne vich sama leya.

Band akhan naal dand pichda Teja har ghasse naal apna poora lun dhur andar takk thok dinda si par ajj usda lun Jyoti di nahi balke Naseeb Kaur di fuddi de andar bahar ho reha si. Jyoti vi band akhan naal har ghasse da jwab bund uchal ke de rehi si bass farak eh si ke ajj mano-mani oh Teje nu nahi balke apne veere nu fuddi de rehi si.

Kaam da veg jinni tezi naal aaya unni hi cheti khatam vi ho geya. Kaam te paap da ne mil ke ajehi garmi paida kiti ke dono jalad hi ikk duje te dheh paye sann. Sahan de tufan de naal-naal dona de munho halkiyan-halkiyan karaha nikkal rahiyan sann. Ajj lagda si doha dhiran da zor lag geya si. Kujh sama ik duje diyan bahan vich paye rehan ton baad dono jalad hi sau gaye sann.

Agli sver Jyoti time naal hi utth gai si. Ajj Naseebo vi haweli ton jalad hi vaapas aa gai si. Oh Jyoti nu kujh na kujh karan nu kahi ja rehi si. Jinna Jyoti kahli vich si unna hi Naseebo uhnu der kar rehi si.

“Mummy me Nuri nu roti de avan. Late na ho jave.” Jyoti ton akhar reha na geya.

“Haan-han. Jaah le ja” Naseebo apne dheyan vich laggi hoi si.

Jadd Jyoti kamre andar dakhal hoi tan Nuri nu poori terah tyar dekh thoda nirash ho gai si. Nuri ne sayad uhde chehre de bhaav padh laye sann par oh chupp rehi. Ohne akhan naal Jyoti nu darwaje wall ishara kita tan Jyoti us kol roti chah rakh ke darwaja band karan chali gai.

Kamre andar chanti si. Nuri chuppchap bed te baithi roti kha rehi si te Jyoti usde brabar baithi soch rehi si ke gall kithon suru kare.

“kall raat ki gall ho gai?” Ajj Nuri kall vang time waist nahi karna chahundi si.

“ki matlab?” Jyoti nu Nuri di gall hi samajh vich nahi aai si.

“Main keha raati awaz-awuz koi ni aai. Kite ladh tani paye si?”

“Nahi…lade tani si……nale tere veere naal ni koi ladh sakda” Jyoti muskra pai si. Sver di ajj oh pehli vaar muskrai si.

“Oh keyon bhala?”

“haye….uhde naal ladh ke sarda ni…..Nale haiga ee kina pyara aa yaar” Jyoti Nuri nu akh mardi hai.

“Pyara aa ja Vadda aa?”

“Dono aa…..payara vi aa vadda vi aa”

“Fer……ki hoyeya raati?”

“Kujh ni yaar….tera veer bahla thakkeya si …main vi thakki si…jaldi sau gaye si”

“Tu tan raati mere kol vani aai….main inna chir udeekdi rahi”

“Yaar main tan ayuna si par mummy ne dudh de glass hath cho fadha ke uppar bhej ditta”

“chalo theek aa….main uddan udeekdadi si tenu”

“Yaar tenu dasseya tan haiga.......dil tan karda si mera vi par mummy huni fatafat uppar bhej ditta”


“Uddan fer raati vohni ni kiti?”

“Nahi…nahi…bohni tan tere veere ne kiti si par kiti aram naal si” Jyoti is baar khull ke hass paindi hai.

“Aram naal tera sar janda?” Nuri apni Bhabhi di vakhi vich kuhni mard hai.

“sade kol tan sara din hunda….raat ni tan dine sahi…tu dass tera kidda sarda?”

“Haye…asin vi dil te pathar dhar ke saar hi layida” Nuri ne aah bhari.

“Lagda tan hai ni sarda tera….tahiyon svere-svere veere de ….nu yaad karan dai aa….akhe pyara ni vadda aa”

“hun guzara tan kise tarah chalyuna ee hoyeya…..hainiga tan yaad hi kar layida…”

“Haye ni meriye laado…mere hundeya tenu hauke len di ki lodh aa…menu keh ik vaari fir dekh” Jyoti bagal thani Nuri di hiqq te hath ferdi aa.

“Ki kahan…dass menu?”

“Bai menu veere da…” Akhdi-akhdi Jyoti ruk jandi hai. Oh Nuri di chati nu thoda ghutt ke nappdi hai te uhde kann kol bull karke hauli dena boldi hai “Keh ke bhabhi menu Veere da lun dwade…..keh ke metho fuddi di garmi ni sheh hundi…fer dekhi main ki kardi aa”

“Kiha tan haiga tenu……par tu ta galla karan jogi aa bass” Nuri roti di plate pase rakh dindi aa.

“Gallan kahnu…..tere veere naal gall karan fer sachi……Bai Nuri di fuddi andar agg laggi aa……..akhe veera apne lun naal thandi kare”

“meri gall karr jaroor…yaar par meri sharat mann-ni peni……pehlan tu…”

“Ki?” Nuri Jyoti vall munh karke uhdi chatiyan nu hathan vich bhar maslana suru kar dindi hai.

“Pehlan tenu apne veere da lun lena paina”

“Haye….Nuri mere kol tan haiga aa…..meri tan uhi bass kara dinda aa..gall tan teri aa…..”

“pata menu mere veere da…….manndi aa tenu lod ni…..par ik gall sacho sach dass….tera dil ni karda apne veere thalle lammi pain nu…..” Jyoti bolan hi lagdi hai ke Nuri uhde munh te hath rakh ke uhnu rok dindi hai. “Sacho-sach dassi…jhuth na bolin mere naal….Main dekhla tere to kujh ni lukayeya”

“Dil tan mera vi karda aayaar ….veere vare jadon sochdi aa…..tan dil vich sachi yaar badi tangh utthdi aa …..ik vaari veere nu den nu par……par yaar bada ajeeb jeha lagda…..man kharab jeha ho janda……apne veere naal…..kidda karungi main…..samajh ni ayundi”

“Matlab tera man ni fer…..hunh?”

“Yaar…dassan tan dai aa” Jyoti Nuri nalon alagg ho ke uhdiyan akhan vich dekhdi kehndi hai. “Mera dil tan bada karda aa…par darr vi lagda….sang vi lagdi aa…..nale fer yaar lagda metho ee himmat ni huni”

“Chalo theek aa” Nuri chah da ghutt bhardi hai. Usda dil hi toot geya si. Uhde sare jisam vich udasi te nirasha bhar jandi hai. “Matlab fer tu hun faisla kar leya nai karan da?”

“Nai yaar…na di gall ni..main…pata ni…..Nuri meri samajh vich kujh ni aa reha” Jyoti nu dekhan ton pata lagda si ke Oh sach keh rehi hai ke oh sachi faisla nahi kar pe rehi si. Nuri chah da glass table te rakh dindi hai te uth ke apna bag chukkdi hai. Oh jaan lagdi hai tan Jyoti uhda hath fadh ke rok laindi hai.

“Ki gall naraz ho gai…yaar tu meri gall…” Nuri usdi gall poori hn ton pehlan hi bol paindi hai.

“Bhabhi zor-zabardasti koi ni. Je tera dil nahi karda tan rehan de…..main tetho agge vi kujh ni lukoyeya te hun vi tenu sach-sach dassdi aa……main sachi badi aukhi aa….kadi kadi tan raat-raat bhar neend ni ayundi….mera dil inna karda kise naal….kade kade dil karda pind de kise munde naal……par fer mera man ni mannda…….jiddan tenu sang lagdi aa na…..tu dardi aa….menu vi dar lagda, menu vi veere bare soch-soch ke sang ayundi…..par main jinne mundeyan nu jandi aa uhna vicho koi vi uhde barobar ni……koi mere veere vang menu pyaar ni kar sakda, kheyal ni kar sakda…kaun uhde vang mera parda rakhu…..dass koi haiga jo veere di jagah le sakda….?” Jyoti Nuri de swal da jwab den hi lagdi hai ke Nuri uhnu fer ton rok lendi hai.

“Main tan faisla kar leya…..je veyah ton pehlan deni aa tan veere nu deni aa….nahi tan jo marji ho jave, hor kise nu ni deni……par veere naal vi main karna udo ee aa jado tu karungi apne veere naal…..tera ni pata par main jadon vi veere bare sochdi aa ta mere andar iddan ee agg lagdi aa…haye dil karda veera hune tanga chukk ke fasa deve….main dass ni sakdi…” Nuri ik second lai saah lendi hai “Je tu tyar aa…je tera dil vi karda aa….apne veere naal maze karan nu……ik vari bass faisla kar la…..mero valo koi zor jabardasti ni…..kall nu eh na kahi ke tu majboor kita si menu……Je tu manndi aa tan theek aa……mere ayun takk soch la…je tera dil nahi mannda tan fer ajj ton baad na tu te na main ….apa kade is bare gall ni karni theek aa……” Nuri turan lagdi hai tan Jyoti uth ke uhnu rokdi hai. Par oh kujh keh nahi payundi.

“Sham takk bahut time aa…..changi taran soch la….majboori koi ni…….siraf mere vaste ni…..je tera dil vi karda aa tan fer karna apa…theek aa” Nuri jhuk ke Jyoti di gall te chummi lendi hai fer muskra ke bahar aa jandi hai.

-------------------------------------------------------
Like Reply
Jyoti diyan socha di ladi tuttan da na nahi le rehi si par Naseeb Kaur kall de muqable ajj jeyada khush lag rehi si. Usda man kall nalon halka si. Ajj man utte bojh nahi mehsoos ho riha si. Ajj tan Teja vi kafi had takk sambhal geya si. Apni kiti kartoot karan aje vi oh apni ma de sahmane nahi huna chaunda si. Ajj oh darr nahi reha si balke shram da mareya Naseebo to bach ke nikkal jana chahunda is. Par ajj Naseebo barande cho hill hi nahi rehi si. Utto Kulwant uhnu kanak nu khaad payun lai jaan lai awazan maar reha si. Akhar Teje ne socheya ke oh kina chir bachda firega. kade na kade tan ma de sahmane jana hi payega. Oh man karda karke paudiyan uttrdada hai. Thalle sofe te baithi Naseeb Kaur daal chug rehi si.

“Putt chah pi ke javi. Tazi banayi aa.”

“Oh main pi lai si. Bhapa le ayunga khetan nu ayunda huyeya” Teja dhadkade dil naal hauli jehi kehnda hai. Sharam da mareya Naseebo vall dekh vi nahi reha si.

“Le bhape ne hune aa jana kite. Jyoti putt chah pade Teje nu. Nale putt tu taat nu hanera bada kar dinda. Jaldi aa jaya kar”

“Achcha. Theek aa” Teja fatfat bahar motorcycle start karda hai. Jyoti uhnu chah da cup fadayundi hai.

“Main sochdi si pind ho ava. Kinne din ho gaye aa”

“Koi na aitwar nu chal chalange. Raat takk mudh avange”

“Main keha si hafta khand reh avan…..badi yaad ayundi ghardeyan di”

“hafta khand…..reham kar yaar…..menu maran da irada aa” Teja pola jeha munh banyunda uhnu kehnda hai tan Jyoti hass pendi hai.

“Subh-subh bolo……tahanu meri vi umar lag jave…….”

“Yaar tu aap soch…itthe din ni langhda…hafta main kidda kadhu”

“Koi na main Kamlesh nu keh dau…….Baki pind cho koi saheli tan huni aa tuhadi time tapayun nu” Kamlesh Teje de taye di nunh si. Rang di sanwli te mote nain-nakhas te sarir di vi bahut bhari si. Jyoti aksar Teje nu Kamlesh da na le ke cherdi hundi si.

“Iddan kar tu….mainu vi naal ee lai chali. Tere bina mera ni sarda. Pata tan haiga tenu”

“Hor naal ee le jayi menu akhe…..sariyan menu utthe agge cherdiyan rehndiyan……akhe apne parahune naal hi chimbdi rehndi aa…..nale hafte di ta gall aa…..jhatt dena langh jana dekhi jayeyo” Jyoti di gall sunn Teja us wall sikayat bhari nazar naal dekhda hai tan Jyoti fer ton hassan lagdi hai.

“Ni aja hun…ja len de uhnu…….mudhke tere kol hi auyuna” Naseebo di gall sunn Jyoti Teje ton glass fadh vaapas andar aa jandi hai.

“Ki gall……raati galla pooriyan ni hoyiyan si jehda hun rok ke khad gai si” Naseeb kaur Jyoti nu cherdi hai.

“Nai mummy ji…main tan bass…..uhna nu kehndi si ke menu hafte khand lai pind chadh ayun. Kall phone aaya si na…te sare bulayun daye si…..main keha ja hi aavan…mudhke fer time ni laggna”

“Koi ni ja aai putt. Main keh dayungi Teje nu chad aayu tenu.”

“Oh kehnde si sa din mil ke mudh anvange”

“Le uhde kehan nu ki karna. Main kehndi aa na…… Jana kado aa?”

“Hale tan main udda ee gall kiti si……do char dina takk ja aitwar nu”

“Koi na ja aavi. Mape tarsade ee hunde putt dhiya-puttan nu dekhan lai. Nale tera vi man badal jau”

Jyoti gahr de kamm vich rugh jandi hai. Naal hi naal oh Nuri diyan galla bare sochdi hai. “Nuri sach hi keh rehi si….veere jinna kheyal ni koi rakh sakda…..nahi par eh tan veere nalon kite jeyada kheyal rakhde mera…..nale pyar vi veere nalo kite jeyada karde aa….haan par veere ne ehna wala pyaar tan kade kita ni……par dil tan karda aa uhda…….dil tan karda aa……pyaar karan nu…..nahi peyar karan nu ni, par meri lain nu pakka dil karda huna aa…….kidda kara….haye samajh ni ayundi…….je de vi dayungi tan meri kehdi ghas jani aa…nale veera parda rakhu…Nuri vi tan eho kehndi si…..haye dil tan mera vi karda par main apne veere nu……” Jyoti ik pair aganh puttdi tan do pair pichche puttdi. Dilon oh tyar si par himmat nahi si. “Ki kahungi Nuri nu…..oh tan kehndi si main mana kar ditta tan fer gall bini karni……haye …..hun tan pind jaan lai chutti vi le lai aa…je veere nu deni ni tan fer jaan di vi ki fayda……”

Jyoti vang Nuri vi ajj fer ton apniyan sochan vich gumm si. College vich padhayi wall uhda dheyan ghatt si te apni scheme wall jeyada si. “Haye kite je sachi uhne mana kar ditta tan….nahi-nahi mana ni kardi…..mana ni kardi…..veere nu den lai pakka tyar aa…..dardi aa….darr kaddna pena uhde dilon…….ik galti ho gai svere time ni si dena sham takk da……jaldbaji vich bazi na palat jave…..par ki pata mann hi jave….agg tan uhde vi laggi aa poori….nave lun da swad len lai……jinna veere vare soch ke menu maza ayunda unna pakka uhnu vi ayunda….nahi tan baar baar oh gall na kardi…….par svere galti ho gai……sham takk da time ni si dena…..hauli-hauli ape uhne mann jana si”

Nuri apni scheme di agli chal bare soch rehi si. Ajj sver wele uhne Jyoti nu sham takk faisla kar len lai jo takeed kiti si us bare sochdi oh thodi pareshan si. Oh soch rehi si ke jekar Jyoti uhdi kahal karan apni gall ton fir gai tan uhne gall kiven sambhalani si. Halanke oh Jyoti nu keh aai si ke jekar uhne inkar kar ditta tan oh mudhke kade vi is bare gall nahi karegi par asal vich sver wali emotional speech usdi scheme da hissa si. Jyoti uhdi emotional blackmailing ton bach nahi sakdi si, is gall te Nuri nu pakka yakeen si.

Uddhar Naseebo ne vi raat vichale man samjha leya si. Bhave raat nu uhde putt ne anjan pune vich galtfehmi vich uhnu masleya si, ja phir jaan bujh ke. Hun gall vadhayun da koi fayda nahi si. Balke ohnu mehsoos ho reha si ke oh avain apne putt te gusse ho rehi si. Oh tan inna mehnati si, sau si fir pata ni keyon Naseebo da para chadh geya si. Jinna Naseebo sochdi unna hi oh mehsoos kardi ke asal galti Teje di nahi balke uhdi khud di hai jo inni ku gall badle uste inna gusse ho gai si. “Je uhne galti naal madha mota hath fer vi ditta si ta ki ho geya…..uhne kehda mera kujh patt leya aa” Naseebo baar khud nu kheh rehi si.

Teja ajj khetan vich uddada firda si. Uhdi ma ne ajj uhdi chati ton oh bhara bojh utar ditta si jis naal Teje nu sah lena vi aukha ho geya si. Ajj oh khush si. Khushi vi ajehi ke sver da uhda lun akdeya peya si. Naseebo ne gallan-gallan rahi usnu samjha ditta si ke oh us naal gusse nahi hai par Teze nu mehsoos injh ho reha si jiven uhne fuddi den di hami bhari hove. Teja khad payunda kai baar gaane gayun lagda. Oh inna khush keyon ho reha si eh tan oh khud vi nahi janda si bass dil vich cha bahut si, ik vakhri jehi feeling aa rehi si.

Ajj dopehar wele vi Teja ghar nahi ja sakeya. Ajj uhda mood baneya hoyeya si Jyoti naal dopehar nu ik round layun da.Naseebo naal raziname ton baad oh pichli raat di kasar ajj dopehar nu kaddani chahunda si. Par Kulwant dopehar nu roti chah le ke aa geya. Par Teje da josh ghatan di bajaye vadhda ja reha si. Oh mehsoos kar reha si ke uhde andar kaam di garmi kinjh lagatar vadhdi ja rehi si. Pata ni ki karan si. Sayad pichli raat Jyoti naal khull ke sex na karan karke ho reha si ja ajj dopehar wele ghare na jaan karke. Par Jyoti nalo vadh uhnu Naseeb kaur yaad aa rehi si te yaad vi ajehi aa rehi si ke uhda lun baitha da naam nahi le reha si. Apni ma de bahre-bhare mummeyan vall jadd vi usda kheyal janda tan akdeya lun iddan da jhatka marda jiven uhnu ulahma de reha hove. Sham pain takk usdi halat us din vangra ho gai si jadd uhne pehli vaar apni ma nu fadeya si. Sarir uhda kaam di garmi naal tap reha si.

Ise kashamkash vich ik gall uhde dimagh vich baith jandi hai ke uhne us din mauka veyarath hi gwa ditta si. Uhne poora fayda nahi leya si. Uhnu thoda bahut hor maza kar lena chahinda si. Oh avain darr geya si. Khud Naseebo ne koi gussa nahi kita si. Je gusse hundi tan svere injh pyaar naal na bulayundi. “Oh-oh….yaar galti ho gai, inna vadhiya mauka hathon chala geya” Sham nu chale te hath pair dhonda oh sochda hai. Idda da mauka baar-baar nahi milda. pata nahi mudhke kade kade mauka mile vi ja nahi. Phir achanak oh khud nu keh utthda hai “Je ape mauka bana layiye tan……” Teja apne man vich koi scheme sochda hai par uhnu samajh nhahi aa reha si. Sham nu bijli kade-kade hi jandi si fer Naseeb Kaur ikkali vi hove…..aukha hi si. Mauka labhna bahut mushkil si par oh khud chahe tan koi mauka bana sakda si.

Ajj Kulwant patthe vadh ke le geya si. Oh Jaan wele Teje nu dass geya si ke oh patthe kutar devega par raat nu Teja patthe pa ke pchu andar bann deve. Kulwant sham nu kite gwand wich jaan wala si. Vaise vi sham di jimmedari Teje di hi hundi si.

Teje jadon haweli pahuncheya tan hanera kaafi ho geya si. Haweli da gate khulla si. Jadd Teja andar geya tan kamre vich Naseebo pachuyan nu andar bann rehi si.

“Ajj fer dekhla kina kuwela kar ditta tu….svere inna keha si ke jaldi aa jaya kar”

“Oh khad da bora kholeya peya si main keha hun pa ke ee janda”

“Achcha tu aah patthe pa deh khurli cho. Main jadd takk pachu andar kar dindi aa”

Teja kahli-kahli tokre vich patthe pa andar khurli vich payun lagda hai. Pandrah ku minta vich dono kamm nibedh dinde hann. Teja hath dho ke jadd ayunda hai tan Naseeb Kaur motorcycle kol usda intezar kar rehi si.

“Putt inna kuwela ni karida. Kamm ta roz ee karna. Nale Jyoti vi tenu udeekadi rehndi aa. Cheti aa jaya kar” Naseebo Motorcycle te baithdi Teje nu bade pyar bhare lehje vich kehndi hai. Jyoti wali gall sunn Teja sharam da mareya kujh nahi keh payunda. Pichle din nalo ajj Naseebo Teje de kujh nazdeek baithi si. Farak hale vi si par jadd motorcycle ne uhna de ghar kol nali utton pichle din vang jhatka khadha tan Naseebo uddan nalo ajj jeyada zor naal Teje vich vajji si. Ajj Teje nu apni pith te Naseebo de bhare mummeyan da poora ehsaas hoyeya si. Oh pehlan hi tapeya firda si, mummeyan di us dabish naal oh hor garam ho geya si.

Nahayun ton baad kujh der takk Teja apne lun te hath ferda Naseebo de mummeyan nu yaad karda reha. Hun uhde man vich eh kheyal hor vi tezi naal aa reha si ke uhnu koi heela vaseela karna pena hai. Dil vich koi scheme sochda naal hi naal oh apne man nu tassali vi dai ja reha si ke ajj Naseebo ne jaan bujh ke uhdi pith te zor-zor naal mumme ragde si. Sayad oh uhnu koi signal de rehi si.

Tar te tauliya payun lagge achanak Teje da dheyan bijli de main switch wale board wall janda hai jisda cover khulla peya si. Ik minute vich uhde man vich ik idea ayunda hai. Oh Jyoti nu awaz marda hai. Andro Naseebo di awaz ayundi hai ke oh uppar kapde press kar rehi hai. Teje da man baggo-bag ho janda hai, uhde man di murad poori ho gai si. Naseeb kaur rasoyi vich ikalli khadi si. Teja fatafat dabbe pairi rasoi kol janda hai te ale dwale da jayja lenda hai. Fer oh vaapas main switch wale board kol ayunda hai te ik dungha saah le ke main button thalle sutt dinda hai. Poore ghar vich hanera ho janda hai.

Teje dhadkade dil nu kabu karan di koshish karda andar rasoi wall janda hai. Dil thad-thad chati vich vajj reha si, te darr naal oh kamb reha si par kaam uhde dimagh te injh haavi ho chukka si ke uhde sochan samjhan di shakti khatam ho gai si. Oh kahli-kahli rasoi vich varda hai. Naseeb Kaur pairan da khadak sunn ke partan hi wali si ke Teja dungha saah le ke uhnu picheyon jhappatta fadh lenda hai.

Naseebo achanak hoye is hamle ton ghabra ke bolan hi laggi si ke Teje de lafz uhde kanna vich gunz gaye.

“Jyoti main aa….” Oh bass inna hi akh sakeya si. Bolna tan chaunda si par ghabrahat karan shabad gale cho nikkal nahi rahe sann. Naseebo ta darr hi gai si ke pata ni kihne uhnu fadh leya hai. Teje da soch oh thodhi ruk gai te iston pehla oh faisla kar payundi ke ki kare, Teje de hath uhde mummeyan te pahunch gaye. “Ohhhhh” Teja man hi man uhna mote-mote mummeyan nu apne hathan vich mehsoos kar sisak uttheya. Naseebo de mummeya nu hathan vich bhar ke ik vaar zor di masleya tan Naseebo vi ma ni man sisak utthi. Teje ne apna lakk agge kar apna lun usdi bund te ragadh ditta. Teja kujh jyada hi zor laga reha si. Mauke da poora fayda uthayun di kahli vich oh Naseeb Kaur naal kujh jeyada hi dhakkesahi kar reha si. Sara din Naseebo de mummeyan de sufne lenda reha si. Hun is wele ohi mote-mote, gol-matol mumme uhde hathan vich kaid sann. Teje ne saroor vich aa ke jadd ragda chadeya tan Naseebo bardashat na kar saki. Uhne apni bund zor naal Teje de lun te daba ditti. Nahayun naal tande hoye lun nu Naseebo di bund da niggh aaya tan swad naal Teje diyan akhan band ho gayiyan. Teje nu ajeha josh chadeya ke uhne Naseebo nu dhakk ke rasoyi di self naal la ditta. Hun Naseeb Kaur self te Teje de vichkar fass chukka si. Teja uhdi bund te lun ragarda uhde mumme putt reha si. Naseebo chah ke vi khud nu garam hon ton rok na saki. Uhde mummeyan dian dodiyan sakhat ho gayiyan. Teje nu vi sakhat dodiyan da ehsaas hoyeya tan uhne dono dodiyan nu suit uppron fadh ke khicheya. Naseebo hauli dena karah utthi. Teja ik pal lai darr geya. Par agle hi pal Naseebo ne apni bund uhde lun te ragadh ke uhnu dass ditta ke dukh nalo uhnu saroor jeyada aaya si. Teje nu ajeha swad aaya ke uhne Naseebo di bund te halke-halke ghasse marne suru kar ditte.

“Mummy torch kithe aa” Use wele Nuri di awaz ayundi hai.

“Ehdi bhen di lun….Sali kutti kise than di” Teje nu inna gussa aaya ke rokan de bawjood uhde munho Nuri nu gali nikkal gai.

“Rasoi cho aa Nuri. Main le ke ayundi aa” Is vaar Jyoti di awaz aai si. Naseebo ne kahli naal Teje de aggeyo hattna chaheya. Par Teja ne uhnu rok leya. Do-tin tez-tez ghasse maran ton baad uhne ik hath mumme ton chukk salwar uppron Naseebo di fuddi uppar rakh ditta. Ik vaar tan Naseebo kamb gai putt da hath apni fuddi te mehsoos karke. Use wele upprale kamre da darwaja khulleya. Naseebo ne dungga saah leya te self te hath rakh zor naal jhatka mareya. Teje nu mauke di najakat samajh aai. Uhne kahli-kahli do-tinn baar Naseebo de mumme nu zor naal putteya te phir do kadam pichche nu hatt geya. Naseebo kahli naal mudhi te Teje nu dhakka de ke hor pichche kar ditta te fir apni chunni nu sahi karan laggi. Teja hale vi lagda si ke saroor vich hi si. Usnu sabar nahi aaya si. Pata ni uhde dil vich ki aaya ke uhne agge vadh ke salwar uppron andaze naal Naseebo di fuddi te hath rakh ditta. Hath bilkul tikane te si. Fuddi di garmi te nami uhnu salwar utton hi mehsoos ho gai. Teje ne poori fuddi nu hath vich bhar ke ragadh ditta. Naseebo jo hale takk sannate vich si, buri tarah sisak utthi. Paudhiyan te Jyoti di pairrh da khadak sunai ditta. Teje ne ik baar hor fuddi nu swad le masleya te fir jhatke naal pichche hatt geya.

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
[+] 2 users Like Rebel.Jatt's post
Like Reply
(07-02-2020, 06:45 PM)DRAGON WOLF Wrote: Updated after 10 days. Slow updates downgrade a story. Try to give atleast two updates a week.

Bhaji update roj deyunga. Par tankhah vi fir pehli di pehli milni chahidi
Like Reply
Nazara bann ta mitra
Like Reply
(15-02-2020, 07:26 PM)Rebel.Jatt Wrote: Bhaji update roj deyunga. Par tankhah vi fir pehli di pehli milni chahidi

Sahi jawab diti veere eh samjde banda  vehla. Jado time lahda banda aape update de dinda. And update bhut shaandaar si teeja skim la gya.
Reply
Bai jis hisaaab di tere likhni aa na tnu ta paise ditte v koi made ni. Kyaaaaaa bAttaaa yr bai njara leaaaa eddd ah ..speechless ah
[+] 3 users Like Sexym's post
Like Reply
Bahut kaim likhat aa
Like Reply




Users browsing this thread: 5 Guest(s)