27-01-2020, 12:25 AM
Waiting
Adultery Jaya - young college teacher
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27-01-2020, 02:11 AM
Superb man... it's really awesome.... waiting for more
27-01-2020, 12:40 PM
My dick is fully satisfied bro, thank you so much for the great update.
Please don't potray Jaya as bitch, make more lovely scenes between Mani, as he is at home, he got more chance to enjoy freely
27-01-2020, 03:11 PM
Yes, I am also opined like Chilipi.. very dick raising episode and also want that don't make her cheap or whore or Raand.. or not go towards blackmailing by anyone.. but you can add more characters and situations that Jaya will enjoy and get pleasure of pure sex.. as she was not getting enough from her husband.
Like the idea that Jaya don't want to hear anything negative or bad words about her husband.. though unable to satisfy fully her wife thru sex but doing hard work to earn money for his wife.. and keep her attitude so that always she remain firm against any negativity for her husband. Now.. don't know whose phone was it.. and what Didi he told her.. we are just waitingggg... But till now you have very well cultivated the story.. somehow I feel that though Rahim opened up her towards the pleasure of sex.. but as he always want to fuck her.. what I think still keep him away for fucking.. he usually meet Jaya they do every thing but not the fucking.. Rahim always make her thirsty but the beneficiaries are the other characters.. like Mani or May be his paralysed father.. Though she will have sex with more characters but no one come to know that other have tasted Jaya.. only Jaya knows the beneficiaries.. Though it's your story.. you have thought the future plots also.. these are just my thoughts.. not forcing you to do so.
27-01-2020, 06:34 PM
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(27-01-2020, 03:11 PM)Yampag Wrote: Yes, I am also opined like Chilipi.. very dick raising episode and also want that don't make her cheap or whore or Raand.. or not go towards blackmailing by anyone.. but you can add more characters and situations that Jaya will enjoy and get pleasure of pure sex.. as she was not getting enough from her husband. Thanks for your valuable comment.... I am also thinking the same way; waht you said here. Never make her slut, never marry to other one, male characters never know about her secret.......etc but may be it will change with situations or to developing the story. Next update must be posted in one time. So it's take much time. wait for that..... Thanks to you all...
28-01-2020, 11:05 PM
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30-01-2020, 11:11 PM
Let rahim confess about medicine mixed in cool drink, once jaya goes home get mani have an erotic fuck until the medicine came down....
31-01-2020, 07:37 PM
I think Rahim should have a chance now to fuck her......Mani should be removed from the scene...let Rahim come to her house and fuck her....Although she should not let her fùck easily but due to little force of Rahim and she eventually let him fuck her. Use some dirty words by Rahim to her during sex
03-02-2020, 06:14 AM
Update please
04-02-2020, 11:25 AM
Whatever you are writing is absolutely stunning. But plz give updates very soon. All the readers are holding their dicks and waiting for very long time.
06-02-2020, 05:24 PM
Ohhh..... finally my story views reached 400k. 2nd place in English category. Thanks all.
06-02-2020, 06:18 PM
congrats bro...is there any possible for next update this weekend???
06-02-2020, 11:48 PM
I suggest only , let love and romance cherish , among all characters with Jaya.
After each session they should increase intensity Bring Mahesh in to frame, husband shall benefits from Jayas Sex education by Guru Rahim Make it happy story. Let All become happy and filled after love making |
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