Incest ਮਜ਼ੇਦਾਰ ਭੁਲੇਖਾ 2

[Rohit senha]

Rebel_Jatt naam hai yaar da. Bade chir baad ek kahani likhan lagga haan. Ummeed han bhulle nahi hovoge. Punjabi vich kahani likhan da ek alag hi maza hai. Par Punjabi vich likhan wale bahut ghatt ne utton je koi likhda vi hai tan response bahut ghatt milda hai ja phir kai likhan waleyan vich akad vi bahut hundi hai. Nikki jehi gall piche tata baye bye karan lag jande hann. Samjhan di lod hai ke har koi achcha ja jis tara tahnu achcha lagge, us tara nahi likh sakda. Jekar kahani achchi nahi vi lagdi tan vi do shabad thanks de bol ke honsla afzai kar deni chahidi hai. Agge ton likhan da bal milda hai. Update-update da raula payun wale bahut han par likhan wala ik adha hi. Thodi bahut koshish khud vi karo, changa madha jis taran da vi likh sakde ho; jaroor likho. Punjabi section vich raunak bann ni chahidi hai. Hor koi vi section dekh lo; hindi, telgu, English, urdu ek ton badhke ek  kahaniyan hann, likhan wale hann. Par sade raula payun wale jyada hann, mehnat karan wala koi koi. 

Jaroori nahi koi bahut vaddiyan kahaniyan likhiye. Chotiyan chotiyan kahaniyan, ideas vi likh sakde haan. Te kade vi kise nu mazboor na karo apne anusar kahani da rukh modhan lai. Har kise di apni fantasy hundi hai, har koi apne maze lai kahani likhda hai is lai kise nu vi mazboor na karo. Kise nu adultery pasand hai tan kise nu cucold te kise nu incest. Achchi nahi lagdi ta na padho, bas madha na bolo. Thodi koshish khud karo likhan di. Koi itthe sahit academy da award ni milna is lai jis taran da vi likh sakde ho likho te Punjabi section nu bulandia wall le jao. Punjabi section di inni madhi halat dekh ke dukh hunda hai. Har roz navi kahani ayundi rehni chahidi hai. Is lai yaaro koshish karo. Sare koshish karo. 

Gall baat bahut ho gai hun kahani suru kariye. 


Bahut sama pehlan xossip te kahani likhi si, Mazedaar Bhulekha. Badi copy hoi oh kahani. Punjabi vich likhi si. Ate Punjabi vich likhna kina mushkil hai tusin jande hi hovoge. Mehnat badi aayi. Char panj din lag gaye par ant kahani meri pasand anusar bann gai. Usnu agge vi likhanga jalad hi. Bhapaji naala nahi khuld; vi update hovegi. Amrita meri last story vi complete hovegi. Time aj kall ghatt hi hunda hai is lai chotiyan kahaniyan te hi zor hovega. Eh kahani vi Mazedaar Bhulekha hi Hai Part two.



                                    ਮਜ਼ੇਦਾਰ ਭੁਲੇਖਾ -2

Poora ik hafta mausam kharab hon ton baad ajj dhupp nikkli si. Pehlan do tin din baddal chaye rahe te phir tin din meenh penda riha si. Saver ton dhundh chayi hoi si te hun dopehar de time ja ke halki halki dhupp nkkli si. Naseeb Kaur te uhdi nunh Jyoti ikk hafte ton jama kapde dho ke hatiyan sann. Kapde dhonn ton baad Naseeb kaur nahayun lagdi hai jadke Jyoti chatt te kapde sukkne payun lagdi hai. Kapdeyan da poora ambar lagga hoya si, lagda si jiven sare saal de kapde ikko din dhote hon. Kapde sukhan lai banniyan hoyiyan taran te addhe kapde vi nahi aaye sann. Jyoti vichari banere punjh punjh ke kapde pa rehi si. Eh siraf is ghar di gall hi nahi si, sare pind vich jidhar marji nazar maar lavo har paase kapde hi kapde nazar aa rahe sann. 

Akhir Jyoti vehli ho ke jadd thalle pahunchi tan usdi sass Naseeb kaur naha ke bathroom cho bahar nikkal rehi si. Naseeb Kaur chaliyan di ho ke vi bahut sohni si. Injh lagda si jiven umar vadhan de naal naal oh hor vi sohni hundi ja rehi si. khulle balan nu tauliye naal ragardan ton baad oh shawl lappet lendi hai. Naha ke usnu thand lagan lagan laggi si. Dhupp bhaven kaafi si par thandi hawa karke unjh hi pala chidh riha si.

“Mummy tusin koti tan pa layo. Kalle suit vich thand lag jaani aa” Jyoti ne Balti rekhdi ne kiha. Usdi banh te suit te tauliya si jo oh uppron ayundi hoyi le ke aayi si. 

“Putt kotiyan taan sariyan dho dittiyan. Hun tan bass ayun jane waliyan payiyan. Main keha kite choh vagera na lag jave” Naseeb Kaur shawl nu ghut ke pinde dwale lende hoyi boli.

“Oh jehdi Karani jehi koti si tuhadi? Oh tani dhoti. Oho pa lende.” 

“Putt oh tan main baiyarani nu de ditti. Oh vichari pati jehi ikko koti pa ke rakhdi si. Main tan hun kade pai hi nahi si. purani bi bahli si. Main keha chalo gareebani da butta lag jayu. Inni thand vich bada aukha aa” Naseeb Kaur dil di changi si is layi usdi nunh Jyoti usnu bahut manndi si.

“Tusin meri koti pa lavo. Main uppar bed te kadh ke rakh ke aayi aa. Main hor pa laoo. Mere kol tan batheriyan ne”

“Rehan de ni. Main hun roti banayun laggi aa. Teje de ayun da time ho geya. Chulle mohre aape ni thand lagni”

“le eh ki gall hoi. Bimar ho gaye phir. Jao koti pa lao. Main naha ke ayundi aa. Idda kareyo pehlan chah bana layo. Thand leh javegi. Menu tan agge Kamba chidiya peya aa. Baraf varga paani utton inne kapde. Mere tan jama hath pair sunn ho gaye.  Roti main tuhade naal bana devangi nale agg sek lavange” Jyoti gusalkhane vich vardi boli.

“chal theek aa. Tu naha ke aaja. Main jadd takk chah banyundi aa”

“Koti pa leyo pehlan” Jyoti ne bathroom da darwaja band kardi ne keha. 

“Oh pa lendi aa baba” Naseebo ne muskrayundi ne kiha. Thand usnu vi bahut lag rehi si. Jyoti te Teje da karma uppar chubare vich si. Modern ghar nahi si, simple par changa baneya hoyeya si. Naseebo aje paudhiyan chadhan hi laggi si ke usnu vehde vich motorcycle di awaz suni. Teja kheton mudh aaya si. 

Kamre andar bed te ek nili koti payi si. Naseebo nu oh jyada hi fansy laggi. Ohne almari kholi te sariyn kotiyan dekhan laggi. Par sariyan hi fancy sann. 

“Chall thalle hi payuni aa. Kehda kise ne dekhni aa. Pata ni ayuni vi ke nahi” Naseebo ne koti nu ulat palat ke dekheya phir uhne apna shawl utar ke bed te sutt ditta te koti payun lag payi. 

Kheton ayundeya Teja siddha uppar kamre nu chala geya.  Hath pair mitti naal bhare si par us waqat us kolo sabar nahi ho riha si. Sabr hunda vi kive. Aje che mahine pehlan hi usda veyah hoyeya si. Utton Jyoti vi poori jwan rajj ke sohni. Paudiyan chadhde de Teje da lun akad geya si. Jadd oh kamre vich dakhal hoyeya tan Jyoti usnu bed de kinare khadhi koti payundi dikhi. Khulle kale baal usdi bund takk latak rahe sann. Koti di banha tight sann. Is layi jadd sehaj subha Jyoti ne bahan uppar nu chukk ke koti pai tan picho usdai bund hichkole khan laggi. Teje nu ajj apni gharwali di bund kujh jyada hi moti laggi. Usde lun ne pazame vich jhatka mareya. Teja dabbe pair Jyoti de piche geya te phir  usne ik pal lai position lai. Usde bullan te srarti muskaan si. Agle hi pal usne Jyoti nu picheyon ghut ke jaffi pa lyi. Jyoti ne ikdum jhatka khadha. Sayad darr gai si. Usne apne aap nu shudaona chahyea par Teje ne chaddan di bajay usnu hor vi ghutt leya. Usda khada lun Jyoti di bund te thokran maar riha si.  Uppron usne jaldi dena apne dono hath Jyoti de mummeyan te rakh ditte. Jyoti hor zor naal khud nu chudayun layi sarir nu jhatkadi hai. Uston chutt tan na hoyeya par usde injh jhatke maran naal Teje da lun hor akad geya jehda used chitdan vicho hunda hoya usdi fuddi takk ragad reha si. Teje nu apni gharwali de injh chatptayun naal hor maza aa riha si. Ajj Jyoti di bund de naal naal usde mumme bi kujh jyada hi mote-mote mehsoos ho rahe sann. Teje de chehre te Jyoti de khulle baal hon karke usnu kujh nazar tan nahi aa riha si par ajj usde mumme kujh jyada hi bhare lag rahe sann te hathan cho bhar dull rahe sann.

“Ki gall! Ajj agla pichla saman jyada bhara lag reha aa”

“Ve khasma nu khaneyan teri ma aa main” Teje nu ikk pall lai apne kanna te yakeen na hoyeya. Usnu samajh hi na ayya ke oh ki kare te ki na kare.

“Ve hun tan chadh de khasma” Naseebo cheekh hi pai si. Teja aje vi used mummeyan nu nappi khada si. Agle hi pal jiven neend ton jageya. Usne foran apni ma de mummeyan to hath chukke te piche hatt geya. Naseeb Kaur phat dena piche nu murhi. Usda chehra gusse naal bhareya peya si. ik pall lai Teje nu lagga jive usdi ma usde thappad maaran laggi hai. Par Naseebo Teje te ik nazar maar ke teji naal kamre cho bahr nikkal gayi. Usne apna Shawl vi nahi leya si. 

[Radha sharma]

Hello miss busty kaur.. dhyan naal pdheya kro cmnts okk ?
Mai kithe manda boleya .
M keha great start.
Te na m eh keha k incest na likho ya kuch hor na likho.
M bs keha k incest de naal hor v add kreyo.
Tuc apni kahani likho te ohde te suggestion aaleya nu mna kro.. baki writers accept krde aan suggestions

[Rebel.Jatt]

“Ve hun tan chadh de khasma” Naseebo cheekh hi pai si. Teja aje vi used mummeyan nu nappi khada si. Agle hi pal jiven neend ton jageya. Usne foran apni ma de mummeyan to hath chukke te piche hatt geya. Naseeb Kaur phat dena piche nu murhi. Usda chehra gusse naal bhareya peya si. ik pall lai Teje nu lagga jive usdi ma usde thappad maaran laggi hai. Par Naseebo Teje te ik nazar maar ke teji naal kamre cho bahr nikkal gayi. Usne apna Shawl vi nahi leya si.

Teja hill geya si. Kujh palan lai usnu samjh hi nahi aaya ke ki bhana varat geya si.

“Bhenchod eh ki ho geya methon, eddi vaddi bhull kive ho gayi” Usnu jive yakeen hi nahi ho riha si ke oh inni vaddi galti kar sakda si. Usde hath aje vi kamb rahe sann. Ohi hath jihna vich chand minta pehlan usdi ma de bhare-bhare mumme sann, jihna nu uhne kujh jeyada hi zor naal masal ditta si.

Teja ne socheya tan eh si ke gharwali naal thodha jeha tharak bhor ke oh hath munh dho lavega. Uppar bathroom nahi si thalle jaan di us vich himmat nahi si. Jadon oh ghar andar aaya si tan usne bathroom vich pani challan di awaz suni si. Vehde te ghar andar koi nahi si islai usne sehaj subha ehi soch leya si ke usdi ma hi bathroom vich naha rehi si. Oh kive janda ke chubare vich usde kamre andar darwaje walan pith karke khadi Janani jo usdi gharwali di koti pa rehi si, usdi gharwali nahi balke usdi ma si. Galti anjanpune vich hoi si par ho chukki si. Hun oh apni ma da sahmana kive karda. Oh thakke tutte bande vang bed te beth geya.

Uddhar Naseebo da vi sir chakra riha si. Kinni pagal si oh. Kinni bewkoof si. Apne aap nu kosi ja rehi si. Pashta rehi si ke akhir oh uppar chubare vich gai hi kyon. Jandi si Teje ne jaanbujh ke nai par anjane vich galti kar ditti si te kasoor uhda hi si.

“Par inni vi ki agg laggi si jehda do mint sabar na hoeyeya. Sari raat ohde kol hi rehnda phir vi kidda bhukhe kutte vang jhapat peya.” Oh gusse vich budbada rehi si. Badi mushkil naal usne chulle vich agg bali. Sardiyan hon karke oh jeyadatar chulla hi balde sann.

“Le mummy tusin ta aje agg hi ball rahe ho? Main tan keha chah ban gai honi.” Jyoti balan dwale tauliya lapetdi boli.

“Na tenu badi agg laggi aa chah di. Aap bana lendi” Naseebo ne apne man di bhadash kaddhi. Us kolon jehdi galti hoyi si us lai asli jimmedar sayad Jyoti hi si.

“Mummy main tan unjh hi keha si. Tusin inna gussa keyon karde ho” Jyoti sass de kaude bol sunn ke ke hairan reh gai si. Pehli baar si jadd usne us naal inne gusse naal boli si. Te usnu andaza vi nahi si ke vajah ki si.

“oh putt agg hi nahi balan dai si, is karke khijh jehi aa gai. Tu jah koti pa ke aaja. Main chah dhardi aa. Teja vi aa geya.” Naseebo thodha ghabra gai si. Oh nahi chahundi si ke jo kujh hoeyea si us baare usdi nunh nu kujh vi pata lagda.

Jyoti sass de anokhe vatire ton pareshan hoi uppar gai. Akhar usne ki galat keh ditta si jehda usnu inna gussa lagga si. Jadd kamre vich gai tan sahmane Teja Bed te lattan thalle lamka ke leteya si. Usde chehra khushi naal khid uttheya. Peyar hi bada si usnu Teje naal.

“Le hath pair tan dho lende. Uddan hi libbde tibbde aa ke bed te lambe pe gaye” Oh bed te Teje de kol baithdi muskra ke boli. Oh jandi si Teja bina hath pair dhote uppar keyon aaya si. Par phir bi anjan bann rehi si.

“Ki hoyeya bade udas jahe lag rahe ho” Teje nu utthde na dekh usne keha. Jeyadatar tan Teja aunda hi uste jhapat penda si. Usnu jaffi pa ke khub chummda chattda si. Usde mumme te bund nu khub maslada si par ajj oh bada shant peya si.

“Yaar thakk bada ho geya. Kam hi bada si” Teja udas jahe lehje vich boleya. Jyoti nu ajeeb jeha laggeya par phir usne ehi soch ke gall agge na tori ke sayad sachi khetan vich kamm jeyada hon karke oh thakk geya si.

“Chalo koi na, mummy ne chah dhar ditti aa. Main roti banauyndi aa. Tusin hath munh dho lavo” Oh Teje de balan vich bade pyaar naal hath ferdi boli.

“Nai yaar. Time haniga. Jaldi jana. Barseen nu khad payuni aa. Patthe vi vaddne aa. Tu roti leya jaldi” Teja murjhaye jahe lehje vich boleya.

“Chalo thalle tan aa jayo. Agg sek laeyo nale chah pi leyo jadd takk roti bandi aa” jyoti almari cho koti kadh ke payundi boli.

“Nahi yaar thakk bahut hoyeya. Tu bass roti leya de. Main jadd takk aram kar lenda”

“Chalo theek aa. Main aayi dass minta cho.’ Jyoti jaan hi laggi si ke usdi nazar Naseebo de shawl te pai. “Le mummy shawl itthe hi chadh gai” Teja shawl de uppar leteya hoyeya si. Oh utth ke shawl Chukk ke Jyoti nu fadayunda hai. Shawl fadayun vele oh nazran cura reha si. Sharmindgi usde chehre te jhalak rehi si.

“Mummy tusin shawl uppar hi chadd aaye.” Jyoti chulle kol ayundi boli. Naseebo chah bana chukki si te chulle uppar tawa rakh rehi si. “haye mummy tusin tan koti de button vi nahi laaye. Thand lag jani tahanu” Jyoti di gall sunn Naseebo ne apni chati vall dekheya tan sachi usne koti de button nahi laaye san.

“Putt kahli kahli vich kheyal hi nahi reha.” Oh thoda jeha nazran bachayundi boli. Usde chehre te sharmindgi di laali si. Oh fatafat button lagayun laggi. Thaddle tin button tan usne laga laye par mummeyan de upparale do button usnu khich ke lagayune pe rahe si. “le khich dhuh ke aa ee gayi. Menu tan lagdi si ayuni hi nahi. Thodha vadda size ayunda mere.”

“Thallda size tan poora aa” Jyoti srarat naal muskarayundi hauli dena boli. Phir ek saah le ke hor hauli dena hassdi ne keha “Bass aah uppron size thodha vadda aa…. Aah samneyo…. Thodha kahnu balke kujh jeyada hi vadda aa”

“ Jaah ni…. Tenu vi gallan ayun lag payiyan” Sharmayundi Naseebo ne Jyoti kolon shawl le ke pinde te lappet leya. Jyoti di gall ne usnu yaad kara ditta si kiven thodhi der pehlan usde putt ne usde saman te kabja kar leya si. pata ni keyon usde mummeyan diyan dodiyan thodiyan sakhat ho gayiyan sann.

Jadd Jyoti roti uppar le ke gai tan Teje ne bade murjhaye jahe mann naal utth ke roti khadhi. Roti vi usne badi mushkil naal adhi hi khadhi si.

“Ki hoyeya rota swad ni laggi” Teja aam nalo adhi ku roti kha ke uth khadha hoyeya si. Unni roti vi usne badi mushkil naal khadhi si.

“Nahi yaar bhukh hi thodi si. jah menu chah leyade”

“Thalle aa jayo. Jande hoye chah pi layeyo” Jyoti ne bhande chukkdi ne keha. Teja is waqat apni ma de sahmane nahi jana chahunda si. Par oh is vaar inkaar na kar sakeya. Usnu darr lag riha si kite Jyoti nu shakk na pe jave. Oh utth khada hoyeya.

“Gall suno. Metho gusse tan nahi” Jadd Teje ne hun jaan vele vi Jyoti nu koi pyaar na kita tan usne akhir puch hi leya.

“Nahi yaar. Sir jeha dukhda mera” Ohne jabardasti meskrayunde ne Jyoti nu kalave vich le ke used bullan nu chummeya. Jyoti inne naal hi khush ho gai. Usnu lag reha si sayad usda gharwala uston naraz si.

Thalle ja ke Teja Vehde vich na khada ho ke siddha gate kol motor cycle kol chala geya te unjh hi usde engine nu dekhan da natak karan lagga. Chulla varande de bilkul naal lagga si jadke gate koi veeh ku foot door si. Jadon Teja chulle de kolon langh reha si tan Naseebo ne bi munh modh leya si. Dono jane choran vang ghabra rahe sann. Jyoti ne usnu gate kol hi chah leya ke ditti. Teje ne kahli kahli chah pi ke fatafat nikklan di kiti. Teja gate de bahar nikkleya hi si ke sahmaneyo usnu apni bhen Iknoor ayundi dikhi. Oh sehar ek girls college vich BA 2nd year di student si.

“Aa gayi Nuri. Ajj late ni ho gai?” Teja apni bhen nu ghar de naa naal bulayunda hai te phir jwab sune bina hi motorcycle tez karke nikkal janda hai.

“Time tan poora ee aa” Nuri mobile te time dekhdi boli. “Eh veere nu ki ho geya. Peeti tan lagdi ni” Nuri thodhi hairan hundi andar vadh gai. Asal vich Teja Nuri nu jyadtar madam kehke bulayunda si te cherda bahut si. Par ajj ta oh bina chedchad de kahli kahli bhajj tureya si. Par ohne jyada gaur na kita.

“Mummy bhukh badi laggi aa yaar. Cheti cheti kuch khan nu deyo” Nuri andar manje te bag suttdi hai te phir khud bi manje te dher ho jandi hai.

“jehda tiifin savere bhar ke ditta si, madam. Oh ni khadha” Jyoti hassdi boldi hai.

“Le Bhabhi uhde naal ki banda. Tenu ki pata padhai cho kina zor lagda” Nuri vi hassdi boli.

“Salgham banaye aa. Roti leyadeyan”

“Main ni khane shalgam-shalgum. Tusin menu maggi bana deyo. Naale chah de deyo”

“Banayundi aa. Mera vi dil karda maggi khan nu” Jyoti chulle ton uth ke andar rasoyi nu chali jandi hai.

“Na mummy tenu ki ho geya. Ajj tan badi chup chaap aa. Agge tan mera ayundi da putt-putt karke sir kha lendi si.”

“Na menu ki hona ni?” Naseebo apne aap nu normal dikhayun di koshish kardi hai par usde chehre te pareshani jhalak rehi si.

“Menu ki pata ki hona. Main kehdi ghare si. oh shab vi ajj bada badleya jeha lag reha si” Nuri Teje da shab kehke majak udayundi si.

Dhee di gall sun Naseebo hor pareshan ho gai. “Aven na bol bahla. Kujh ni hoyeya, uddan ee mera sir dukhda.”

“achchcha…. Goli kha leni si sir dard di”

“Kha lai aa goli. Par tu hun tain tain karno hatungi tan hi theek hoyu” Naseebo jaan chudayundi boli.

“Le main ki keha….” Nuri bolan hi laggi si ke andro Jyoti ayundi dikhi. Oh fatafat utth ke baith gai.

“Lao ji garma garm maggi. Main chah le ke ayundi aa”

“Aaja Bhabhi cheti naal. Sachi badi bhukh laggi aa”

Nanan bharjai dono andar maggi khan laggdiyan hann te Naseebo bahar chulle kol baithi khud nu kosi ja rehi si. “pata ni kiddan da din chadheya. Main vi pagal jehi bed kol khadke koti paun lag pai. Hun Teje nu ki pata laggna si ke andar main si.” Naseebo khud nu kasoorvar thehra rehi si jo kuch had takk sach vi si. “par ohde kanjar de vi ki inni agg laggi si ke ayunda ee jhapat peya… salan de bhukhe vangu…. Jiddan kite Janani ni dekhi hundi. Hain hath pair vani dhote…siddha aa ke mere te chedh geya. Inni kahdi besabri. Sari raat uhde kol hi rehnda….adhi raat takk lagge rehnde aa phir vi kinni tadas laggi aa” Naseebo khud nu kosno hattdi ta Teje nu man hi man koshan lagdi. “Haye kise kol gall na kar deve kite….. kite Jyoti nu ee na dass deve main ki munh dikhayungi” Jo darr us waqat Naseebo nu lag riha si ohi darr ne Teje de andar kambani chedi hoi si.

“Nai mummi dassdi ni kise nu….Par sala je kise nu gusse vich dass ta pher..Je Jyoti nu dassta.. Ja Nuri nu…. Bada majak uddna. Par je bhape nu dasta?” Apne peo da soch ke hi usnu darr laggan lag peya. “Nai nai bhape nu dassdi mummy. Bhape nu ni dassdi. Uhdi bi besti hoyu…..par je sala gusse-gusse vich dass ditta….bude ne tan galan kaddno ni hattna. Changa aa ajj ghar ni haiga nahi tan pata ni sala jaloos ee nikkal jana si” Teja patthe vadd da apne man nu tassali dei ja riha si.

Pata dono ma putt ni si ke dona cho kise ni kise nu kujh ni dassna. Par darr tan lagda hi hai. Par jiddan jiddan time langda ja riha si dona da darr ghatda ja riha si. Sham nu char ku vaje Jyoti ne vehli ke Teje nu phone kita. Teje ne darde darde phone chukkeya.

[Rebel.Jatt]

“Hanji nibbdeya ni kamm hale. Tusin phone vani kita ajj menu.”

“Bass pathe vadd laye aa. Bass turan lagga si.”

“Ajj sachi badle badle jahe laggan daye aa. Sach sach dassoo menu. Mere nalo gussa tani ge” Jyoti bade pyaar naal puchdi hai.

“Le tere nalo gussa ho ke sarda mera. Tenu pata tan haiga”

“Achcha ji…main keha dopehare bade pareshan jahe si. Chalo theek aa phir jaldi aa jayo. Main wait kardi aa”

“Oh hale tan haweli patthe kutrane aa. Do tinn ghante lag jane aa. Bhapa aaya ni hale”

“Nahi oh ta ni aaye. Main mummy nu bhej dayungi.”

“Oh rehan de yaar tu mummy nu bhejan nu. Main aape kar laina aa”

“Phir jaldi kar layo. Thand dekh layo kinni ho gai aa phir.”

“Achcha achcha..main bass che vaje samajh ghar pahuncheya”

Teje ne sukh da shah leya si. Jyoti diyan gallan to eh gall tan saaf si ke Naseebo ne kise nu dasseya nahi si. Usnu thodha chain mehsoos ho riha si. Par ik gall ne usnu aje vi pareshan kari ja rehi si jiston oh chah ke vi pichha nahi chudha pa reha si. Par Teja nahi janda si ke jo gall usnu pareshan kari ja rehi si ohi gall usdi ma di pareshani di vi vajah si. Oh gall nahi balke oh ehsaas si jadd Teje ne apni ma nu pichchyon jaffi pa ke apne naal ghutt ke la leya si. Dono ma putt ne ek duje de anga nu mehsoos kar leya si. Oh ehsaas jo baar baar na chahundeyan hoyeyan vi uhna de jehan vich aa riha si. Jinna oh us ehsaas nu bhullan di koshish karde, unna hi oh ehsaas uhna nu chete ayunda.

Thand vakyi bahut vadh chukki si te hanera vi halka halka hon lagga si jadke time aje sadhe char hi si. Teje ne patthe gadde te ladde par hun motorcycle da panga si. Usne socheya si ke uhada peyo aa javega par usde na ayun karke ohnu motorcycle chaddan jana pena si. Apni haweli motorcycle chadd ke jadd oh dubara khetan vich pahuncheya ta hanera kaafi ho chukka si. Thand te thakavat da mareya oh khijeya peya si utton pent vich usda akdeya lun usnu chain nahi ayun de riha si. Inna kujh hon de bawjood vi oh khada si balke ajj tan kujh jeyada hi akdeya si. Pata ni ki gall si. Teja jande hoyeya vi anjan bann riha si.

Che ku vaje Kulwant Teje da peo ghar pahuncheya. Naseebo usnu dekhdeyan hi samajh gai ke oh sharab naal rajj ke ayeya hai.

“Teja aaya ni hale? Kulwant jhulda hoyeya apne kamre vall nu tur peya.

“Tu ki kehna aya hove ja na aaya hove. Tenu kehdi fikar aa koi”

“Bud-bud na kar jeyada. Sari umar kamm cho hi nikkli aa. Aah roti leyade menu.” Unjh tan Naseeb Kaur apne gharwale de sharab peen te bahut khijhdi di si par ajj jiven oh sukar mana rehi si ke oh pi ke aaya si. Oh Kulwant nu roti pa ke den laggdi aa. Jyoti te Nuri dono janiyan tv dekh rahiyan sann. Nuri de siraf chehre te hi noor nahi si balke poora jism hi nooro noor si. Att di ran si. 20 salan di umar. Kasseya kora sareer. Girls college vich padhan karke te college di bass vich ayun jaan karan aje takk bachi hoi si. Par jis taran bhor usde aale dwale mandra rahe si lagda si saal che mahineyan takk usda kand vi ho hi jana si. Bhor mandrayunde vi kyo na. Taze khide full vang mehkadi tehkadi si. Par ghatt tan Jyoti vi nahi si te na hi usdi ma Naseeb Kaur. Jyoti Nuri nalo ek saal hi vaddi si. Jad oh is ghar vich veyah ke aayi si tan bilkul Nuri vargi si. Par che mahineyan di Teje di mehnat ne usdi jwani nu nikhar ditta si. Ang bhare ho gaye sann. Thodi gadra gayi si Par Naseeb kaur jinni ni. Poora gaddreya maal si Naseebo. Saman vi changa heavy si. Kul mila ke tinna janiyan ne pind de munde vigad ditte si. Kai Nuri nu yaad karke muth maarde sann te kai Jyoti nu te kai Naseebo nu.

Teja ajj sachi late ho geya si. Motorcycle ghar chaddan de chakkar vich ik ghanta jaya ho geya si. Sade che vajj chukke sann te oh aje patthe kutar reha si. Inne nu gate khadkada hai te Teje nu lagda hai ke usda peo aa geya hai. Oh kahli dena pent vich apne lun nu adjust karda hai.

“Hale patthe hi kutri janda. Inna time ho geya”

Teja, Naseeb Kaur di awaz sun ke chonk janda hai. Dil dhadak uthda hai. Oh apne sahan nu kabu karke mari jehi awaz vich bolda hai “Oh motorcycle chaddan ayuna peya. Islai late ho geya. Bhapa ni aaya”

“Oh tan sharab naal rajj ke aaya. Roti kha ke sau vi geya.” Teje nalo Naseebo normal si. Sayad dopehar di ghatna nu hun oh bhull chukki si. Apni ma nu injh normal dekh ke Teja nu vi sukh da shah aaya si. Jithe Teja patthe kutar reha si oh ik khulli shed si. khabbe pase ek karma si jo shed de bahar takk janda si jis vich piche tudi rakhi hoi si te agge tractor kharda si. Us kamre da ek vadda darwaja bahar khullda si te duja shed andar patthr kutran di machine kol. Shed de duje pase pachu bajhe hoye sann. “Main pachu andar kardi aa. Tu pattheyan cho tudi rala le.”

“Le mummy tusin rehan dinde. Main kar hi lena si” Teje ne machine band kar ditti si. Hun haweli vich poori chupp cha gai si.

“main kehda pehli baar karna aa. Sari umar ihna dhandeya vich hi nikkli aa.” Kujh palan lai koi kujh na boleya. “Nale Jyoti tenu addiyan chuk chukk dekhan dai aa. Uhda kitthe dil lagda” Naseebo muskrayundi hoi Teje nu cherdi hai. Teja munh neevan kita paththeyan vich tudi ralayunda rehnda hai.

Shed te kamre de pichle pase ik bahut vadda karma si. Oh karma poori teran naal band si. Andar khabbe pase ghar da te haweli da vadhu ghatu saman peya si. Ek kone vich daneyan da drum peya si. Shed vang hi andar vi sajje pase pachu bannde sann. Kamra band hon karke kaafi niggha si jadke Shed khulli hon karke bahut thandi si.

“Tusin jao ghar nu main ayunda hune. Kamm tan nibbad geya” Teja patthe payunda pehli baar apni ma vall dekhda boleya.

“Main hun motorcycle te tere naal hi chali jana. Inne hanere main kitthe takkran mardi phirna.”

Naseebo bahar aa ke gohe wale hath dhondi hai. Inne nu teja vi kamre Da darwaja band karke aa janda hai. Kunde jinde layun ton baad oh ghar nu tur painde hann. Naseebo Teje ton kafi piche nu ho ke baithi si. Teja vi lagbhag tanki te hi baitha hoyeya si. Uhna de ghar de kol ik mod si jithe naale jara chaudi si. Teje de bachayundeya bachayundeya vi vadda hijoka lagga si. Naseebo rokdeyan rokdeyan vi apne putt de naal ja takrayi. Naseebo fatafat piche nu ho gai. Par Teje di pith te usde narm narm te bhare bhare mummeyan ne badi bhari chot kiti si.

“Haramda sarpanch…inni vaari keha naali nu theek karde…gall ni sunda….kanjar kise than da” Naseebo sarpanch te gussa kadhdi boldi hai par Teja vichara munh band rakhan vich hi bhalai samjhda hai. Galti usdi nahi par darda si kite Naseebo eh na samjhe ke usne jaan bujh ke hajoka lagwaya hai. Dudh da jaleya vichara hun lassi nu vi fookan maar reha si. Naseebo vi chupp kar gai si. Inne nu ghar aa geya.

Naseebo bathroom vich hath munh dhon lag pai. Inne nu Teje nu sahmaneyo Jyoti ayundi dikhi. Ohne hath vich tauliya te Teje de kapde fade si.

“Kinna kuwela kar ditta. Main geyser chala ditta si. Tusin naha ke aa jayo. Main roti garm kardi aa” Jyoti da chehra poora khideya hoyeya si. Unjh vi ban than ke rehndi si. Boldi boldi achanak Jyoti ruk gai te phir munh te hath rakh ke hassan lag pai. Hasa rokan de chakkar vich usda poora sarir hill reha si. Teje nu samajh nhi aa rehi si ke usnu changi bhali nu ki hogeya si. Jyoti ne hassdi hassdi ne aase pase nazar ghuma ke dekheya ke koi usnu dekh tan nahi riha fir usne Teje de lakk vall ishara kita. Teje ne jadd thalle dekheya tan pent vich usda lun poora akad ke khada si. Inne nu Naseeb Kaur hath munh dho ke bahar aa jandi hai. Teja kahli kahli munh ghuma lenda hai. Jyoti da phir hasa nikkal janda hai.

“Na tu ki dandiya kadhi jandi aa. Ajja idhar.” Naseeb kaur de piche turdi Jyoti ek baar piche mudh ke Teje nu dekhdi hai te unjh hi hassde hoye akh mardi hai. Teja muskrayunda bathroom andar varh janda hai. Usnu thand vi lag rehi si te unjh vi hun Jyoti nu dekhan ton baad riha nahi ja reha si. Kapde laah ke usne fatafat nahyuna chalu kar ditta. Oh lattan vich vajjde apne lun nu nazarandaz karan di koshish kar riha si. Par sabun lagayun wele tan usnu lun nu hath layuna hi payeya. Ajj tan dekh ke lagda si ke inch ku size hi vadh geya si. Sabun malde malde ne jadd usne apne lun madha jeha hath vich le ke maleya tan maze naal usdiyan akhan band ho gayiyan. Na chahundeya vi usde man vich oh tasveer ubbhar aai jado usne apni ma nu jaffi cho le ke ragadh ditta si. Ik do stroke de ke achanak usnu kheyal aaya ke oh ki soch riha si. Usne fatafat akhan khohliyan te lun ton hath chukk laye. Apni gandi soch nu kosh ke reh geya si bichara. Na chahundeyan hoyeyan vi usde dil vich ik swal aa geya ke ki usdi gharwali vang usdi ma ne vi usda khada lun vekh leya si.

Teje da kheyal galat nahi si. Motorcycle ton utran ton baad tan usdi nigah Teje de lun te nahi pai si par jadd oh bathroom vich hath munh dho rehi si tan darwaja khulla hon karke usdi nigah Teje de akdeyo lun te pe gai si. Bathroom de bahar jaldi light vich usnu putt di pent vich baneya tambu saaf saaf dikh riha si. Pehli vaar taan usdi unjh hi nazar chali gai si par phir usne thodhi der baad chori nazran naal dekheya. Ate phir apni madhi soch nu kosdi ne badi mushkil naal apna munh duje pase kar leya.

“Mummy chah da ek cup bana deyo” Teja naha ke kapde badal riha si jadd usde kanna vich Nuri di awaz pai.

“Bass ban gai de ke jandi aa” Usnu Naseeb Kaur di awz sunai ditti. Nuri nu roti kha ke neend ayun lag jandi si, Is lai oh raat nu chah jaroor pindi si take der raat takk padh sake. Hun usde 2nd term de exam vi suru hon wale sann. Teja tauliya taar te pa riha si jadd achanak bijli chali gai. Par ghar da inverter kharab hon karke banayuna ditta hoyeya si. jo bann vi chukka si par ajj Teje kol time hi nahi lagga si ke oh ja ke le ayunda.

“Mummy chah” Nuri uchi dena chillayi. Nuri da karma duje kone te si is lai ohnu thoda uchi hi awaz marni pendi si.Ghar vich do emergency lightan sann. Ek Nuri kol te ek rasoyi vich hundi si.

“Aa gai aa. Avain cheekhan na maar” Naseebo chah cup vich payundi boli.

“Leyayo mummy main de dindi aa” Jyoti ne cup le leya te torch chukk ke Nuri nu chah den tur pai.

“Bhabi aajo. Aajo tahnu ek cheez dikhava” Nuri ne Jyoti nu banh fadh ke apne manje te bitha layeya.

Teja us waqat andar aa riha si jadd usne torch fadi apni ma nu Nuri de kamre vall janda dekheya. Torch da rukh sahmane hon karke oh eh tan nahi dekh sakda si ke torch kisne fadhi hai. Unjh vi hun usdi Teje vall pith ho gai si. Par Kujh der pehlan Nuri te Naseebo nu uchi uchi boldeyan sunn uhne andaza lagayeya ke usdi ma hi Nuri nu chah den gai hai.

Teja hanere da fayda le ke fatafat uppar jaan di kahli vich si. Oh nahi chahunda si ke usde akde lun te Naseebo di nazar pave. Par hun Naseebo tan Nuri de kamre vich chali gai si te japda si ke oh vi utthe hi baith gai si. Teje de man vich shrarat aa gai. Ohne apni pent di zip kholi te apne akdeyo lun te hath ferda bina koi khadak kite rasoi wall ho tureya. Dabbe pair turda oh choran vang rasoi de andar dakhal hoeyeya. Usne hanere vich Jyoti nu gas de kol khadi nu dekheya. Bilkul dopehar vang oh Jyoti de pichche geya te jhappata maar ke usnu apne kalave vich bhar leya. Usne Jyoti nu dhakk ke kitchen di slab naal laga ditta te apna akdeya lun usdi bund te dhakk ditta. Nanga lun siddha Jyoti di bund nu cheerda usdi fuddi da darwaja khadkayun lagga. Teja gol matol bund di garmi naal hor josh vich aa geya. Uhne kahli kahli shawl de uppron Jyoti de mumme fadh laye te maslan lagga. Suit, koti te upron shawl de bawjood oh mote mote mummeyan nu poora mehsoos kar reha si. Jyoti buri tarah chatpata rehi si.

“kahton tadfan dai aa. Main ee aa.” Teja hauli dena Jyoti de kanna kol boleya. Mumme masldeyan usne apne lakk nu thodha jeha neeva kita te apne lun naal Jyoti di bund te ghasse maran lagga. Neeve hon naal usda lun bund de naal fuddi nu vi khub ragadh reha si. Par Jyoti hale vi tadaf rehi si. Sayad oh darr rehi si ke kite Naseebo na aa jve.

“Le Bhabhi bheh ja. Inni kahdi kahli pai aa” Teze nu Nuri di awaz sunai ditti. Oh ikdum ruk geya. Usde rukan de naal Jyoti vi tadfano hatt gai. Par hale vi oh Teje diyan bahan vich hi si.

“Nahi nahi tera veera roti udeekada hona” Is baar Nuri de kamre cho hi usnu Jyoti di awaz sunai ditti. Ik pal beeteya. Phir oh jhatke naal piche hatteya. Naseebo kahli naal ghummi. Is baar oh sachi Teje de chapedh maran wali si. Par ghummde sar usda hath Teje de lun naal takra geya. Usde putt da lun jo naga si jo usdi bund de sek naal garam ho ke pathar vang akdeya peya si. Naseebo andar takk hill gai.

“Uppar dafa ho ja. Jyoti torch le ke ayundi huni. Itthe nange nu dekh leya ta main ki jwab dayu” Naseebo aukhe aukhe saah lendi bilkul hauli dena boli.

Teja fatafat bahar nu nikkeleya. Oh darr naal kamb reha si kite Jyoti ne dekh leya tan fer oh ki kahunga ke keyon lun kadhi rasoyi vich apni ma kol khadha si.

[Anmol Sidhu]

too kaim

[Ilovesinghni]

Wow att update. Excellent

[Harrysinghbajwa]

Woow bahut hi sohna likhde ohhh 22 ji
Tuhadi writing skills di koi rees nahi bs ehi ummedd aa k tusi hun apniya baki stories v continue kroge....bht khushi hoyi tahanu dobara likhde dekh k
Ik hor gal 22 ji mai hun tak silent reader reha tusi majboor krta mainu cmnt karn te ..??.te ummed krda tusi mainu cmnt krn te majboor krde rahoge....

[Torontomale]

Keep it up bro

[Harmanjeet723]

Hello miss busty kaur.. dhyan naal pdheya kro cmnts okk ?
Mai kithe manda boleya .
M keha great start.
Te na m eh keha k incest na likho ya kuch hor na likho.
M bs keha k incest de naal hor v add kreyo.
Tuc apni kahani likho te ohde te suggestion aaleya nu mna kro.. baki writers accept krde aan suggestions

Veere ya bibi. Jithe suggestions de rahi aa oh galt aa. Tenu es writer dia likhia punjabi and great hindi stories da nahi pata. Bas read k jida da laga oh daso. He is the best from xossip. jado xbill hundi si fer xossip ban gyi.

[Loverboyjassi]

Bhut hi kaint update si. Lajwab.

[Harmanjeet723]

Hahahaha double bhulekha. Bhut hi jada wadia si. maja aa gya

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[Palikamal]

Te kade vi kise nu mazboor na karo apne anusar kahani da rukh modhan lai. Har kise di apni fantasy hundi hai, har koi apne maze lai kahani likhda hai is lai kise nu vi mazboor na karo. Kise nu adultery pasand hai tan kise nu cucold te kise nu incest. Achchi nahi lagdi ta na padho, bas madha na bolo. Thodi koshish khud karo likhan di.

Kahani padheyo bas... upar ki likheya oh na padheyo.

Bilkul shi khea ji?

[Palikamal]

Siirrraaaa update bai njara lea ta speeches ah

[Kamboj saab]

Te kade vi kise nu mazboor na karo apne anusar kahani da rukh modhan lai. Har kise di apni fantasy hundi hai, har koi apne maze lai kahani likhda hai is lai kise nu vi mazboor na karo. Kise nu adultery pasand hai tan kise nu cucold te kise nu incest. Achchi nahi lagdi ta na padho, bas madha na bolo. Thodi koshish khud karo likhan di.

Kahani padheyo bas... upar ki likheya oh na padheyo.

Bayi ji story ta m v likhna chonda pr menu eh nhi pta lg reha k story ethe post kida honi aa plz yr menu dso kida post hundi aa story plz  details vich dsna

[Kamboj saab]

Story bhut Ghaint aa Bayi

[Torontomale]

Update kar

[Premi041993]

Fantastic broo...keep updatingg........

[Love1022]

Superb

[Sukha.jatt]

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