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Romance Duja via ( vintage romance thriller incest punjabi story
Kavita ji update tan bomb c but chota c.
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ਅੱਗ ਆ ਨਿਰੀ ਅੱਗ...ਸੱਚ ਦੱਸਾਂ ਤਾ ਭੋਲੀ ਨੂੰ ਜਾਣ ਨਾ ਦਿਓ, ਰਮਨਜੋਤ ਮੂਹਰੇ ਦੇਬੂ ਨੂੰ ਲੈਣ ਦੋ ਭ੍ਹੋਲੀ ਦੀ ਫੁਦੀ , ਫੇਰ ਵਿਚ ਨਸ਼ੇ ਦੇ ਰਮਨਜੋਤ ਜੋ ਅੱਤ ਕਰਾਉ ਓਹ ਸਵਾਦ ਹੀ ਅਲੱਗ ਦੇਉ....

ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਕੈਂਟ ਅਪਡੇਟ ਸੀ, ਪੂਰੀ ਕਾਇਮ ਆ, ਜਿਹੜਾ ਗਰਦਨ ਤੇ ਨਿਸ਼ਾਨ ਸੀ ਉਹ ਕਿਸੇ ਦੇ ਬੁੱਲ੍ਹਾਂ ਦਾ ਨਿਸ਼ਾਨ ਲਗਿਆ, ਹੋ ਸਕਦਾ ਭੈਣ ਭਰਾ ਆਪਸ ਚ ਗਰਮ ਸਰਗਰਮ ਹੋਣ, ਉੱਤੋ ਸੱਤਾ ਉੱਥੇ ਰਹਿ ਗਿਆ, ਅਗਲੇ ਅਪਡੇਟ ਦਾ ਇੰਤਜਾਰ ਰਹੇਗਾ, ਨਾਲੇ ਜੇਹੜੇ ਗਲਤ ਕਮੇਂਟ ਕਰਨ ਵੇਲੇ ਪਹਿਲ ਤੇ ਹੁੰਦੇ ਨੇ ਉਹ ਤਰੀਫ ਨੀ ਕਰ ਸਕਦੇ,
ਫੇਰ ਵੀ ਕਵਿਤਾ ਜੀ ਸ਼ੁਕਰੀਆ, ਕਈ ਬਾਰ ਗਲਤ ਕਮੇਂਟ ਕਰਕੇ ਲੇਖਕ ਕਹਾਣੀ ਛੱਡ ਦਿੰਦੇ ਨੇ, ਪਰ ਤੁਸੀ ਜਾਰੀ ਰੱਖਿਆ ਇਸ ਲਈ ਸ਼ੁਕਰੀਆ। ਮੇਰੇ ਸਾਬ ਨਾਲ ਇਹੀ ਕਹਾਣੀ ਪੜ੍ਹਨ ਜੋਗ ਹੈ ਇਥੇ, ਅਗਰ ਇਸ ਤੋਂ ਵੀ ਕੋਈ ਗਰਮ ਹੈ ਤਾਂ ਮੈਨੂੰ ਕਮੈਂਟਸ ਚ ਹੀ ਦੱਸੋ ਕਿਉਂਕਿ ਇਨਬਾਕਸ ਫੁੱਲ ਵਾਂਗ ਹੀ ਹੈ।
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mn tuhadiya sariya storiya padhiya ne tusi kmaal de writer ho jaan pa dene ho chrecteran ch
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ਕਿਅਾ ਬਾਤਾ. ਰਮਨਜੋਤ ਦੀਅਾ ਲੱਤਾ ਵੀ ਚੱਕੀਅਾ ਲੳ ...ਅਾੳੁਣਗੇ ਨਜਾਰੇ....ਕੈਮ ਸਟੋਰੀ ਕਵੀਤਾ ..thuk lgga k
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Puri lain a good,  update fast ramnjot te debu da sex v auN do
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Waiting for update very dramatic turn
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Bohat sohni story likh rahe ho g
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Mast update
Debu jitna sidha ramanjot utni hi tedi in dono ke relationship me maza aaye ga dekhte hai kya naya rang leke aati hai aage story
Daru pi ke to emotional ho gayi raman jab utregi tab kya hoga lagta hai kaher se lamba mota hai ye jaan ke uske bil me bhi choohe kodne lage ab dekhte hai kab debu ka sanp bill me jayega aur chuho ko khayega

Waiting for next
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Boat vadhya....
Love your writing style...
You are simply the BEST!!!
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Awesome update
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Nice story.

and please visit my thread.I have some story about actresses with picture.



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Kavita ji, we r waiting 4 update.
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 'Kanjra ena changa  na bn ..' debu nu upr ton lay haithn tak vekh kuch sochdi hoyi ramanjot uchi awaaz ch boli'  nee bholi..'
Agley e pal andr bhaji bhaji ayi bholi kahli kahli ch boli'  hanji sardarni ji kuch chahida'  
 'Haan chahida...  'upr ton lay k haithan tak  bholi nu vekh ramanjot  hasdi hoyi debu wal vekhdi boli  'teri fudi chahidi a mere gharwaley nu .'
 'Ji mein ...'ek dum ghabra k debu wal vekh do kadm pichey nu hundi hki bki reh gyi bholi
 'Ki hoyea ..' bholi wal vekhdi ramanjot gilas chuk ghut bhardi  boli   'puch tan edan rahi a jidan kehar ton pehlan kadi fudi marwayi na hovey ..'
Rang ud gya bholi da haki bki kadi debu wal vekhdi  kadi ramanjot wal ..
 'Sochdi ki a chal khol salwaar'  kadak awaz ch bholi wal vekhdi ramanjot ghurdi hoyi boli'   eney mahiniya baad bahrely mulk ton ayea tera sadar ..'
 'Ethey..' kambdi awaz  ch debu wal vekh bholi apni salwar dey naley nu hath pandi ghabra k us wal vekhdi boli

 'Nyi nyi tun ja bholi ..' bholi nu salwar da nala kholdi vekh debu kahli kahli ch bolea'  teri sardarni nu lagda sharrb chad gyi a ..'
 'Kitey nyi jana tun bholi ethey e ruk'  kadakdi awaz ch gilass mej tey rakh  debu wal vekh bholi nu ghurdi hoyi boli ramanjot ' jaldi kr..'
 'Pagal a tun bholi' ek dum hadbda k bholi wal vekhda bolea debu.. pairan ch digi salwar ...nangia kambdean bholi dean  lattan ..' fer ramanjot wal vekh us nu samjaan di kosis krda bolea'  tusi hosh ch  nyi o'  
 'Hosh ch haan puri hosh ch'   debu wal vekh fer bholi wal vekhdi boli  'tun khadi kyoun a salwaar khol' 
 'Ji khol diti'  pairan vichon salwaar kad khadi hundi bholi kambdi awaz ch kol khadey debu wal vekhdi  boli
 'Chal tun b ho nanga'  debu wal vekhdi ramanjot boli 
 'Mein... '.hd bda k ramanjot wal vekh  buhey wal vekhda debu hairaan hunda bolea' nyi nyi ..'
 ' kyoun sang lagdi a mere samney ..' debu wal vekh fer bholi wal vekhdi ramanjot nashey ch doldi kursi tey apney aap nu sambhaldi  boli'  bholi tun pehln ja  buhey di kundi laa hor na sardar bahr nu bhaj javey ..'
Bhuhey wal jandi bholi nu rokan lyi hiliya e c debu k ramanjot di kadakdi awaaz sun pair na put sakeya awaaz da roab e ena c ghabra k kundi laa kol andi bholi wal vekhn lga...

 'Chal dey esnu  fudi  mere samney'  ghurdi hoyi  bholi nu vekh  debu wal vekhdi ramanjot boli'  sochda ki a jwaan run a lut nazarey . Chal ho nanga.' .
 'Mein ..jijhkda jhepda hoyea debu eketha hunda bolea  'nyi nyi' 
 'Chal nee tun e kr aj apney sardar nu nanga.. es ney tan hona nyi'  uchi uchi hasdi ramanjot tedi akh nal debu dey pattan wal vekhn lgi
Kuch  na boli bholi kdi debu wal kdi ramanjot wal vekhdi
 'Suneya nyi tenu ...'kadakdi awaz sun bhaj k debu kol ja khadi ho agey nu hundi  usdey patt wal hath lijandi ghabrayi hoyi debu wal vekhn lgi
 'Pagl a tun ..'hath fd rokda debu kamb e gya ..bholi da hath apney patt tey.. na chahundey hoye lun tunkey marda akadn lga
' tuhanu tan pta e sardarni da'  hath agey nu kr debu dey pjamey da nala fad kambdi dardi debu wal vekhdi   bholi boli'  tey jad ...sharab pee lendey fer nyi kisi di sun  dey... jo kehndi kri javo .. naley tusi kehri prhli baar mere nal ...'
'Nyi'  bholi nu  rokn di kosis krda debu pichey nu hunda burburaya 
 'Samjdey kyoun nyi tusi'  hath agey kr pjamey da nala fad khichdi kahli kahli ch bholi boli' .. es ton lehlan k eh  nashey ch kuch ulta sida..O vekho pistol unha kol e pyi a...'
 'Ohhh ..ghabra k plang tey pyi  pistol wal vekhdey nu Pta e nyi lga kad nala khich ditta bholi ney  lak tey dhilla hoyea pjama pairaan ch dig pya . ...
  'Luk luk bdi fudi msrwayi tun kehar singh ton aj mere samney marwa ..' gillas  eko deek ch pura khali kr mez tey rakh ramanjot bholi nu ghurdi boli 

'Mein mein ..' krdi kambdi hoyi bholi debu dey kachey da nala fad kholn lgi 
 'Pagal a tun ..' bholi dey hath ch fdey apney nalwy nu vekh debu uchal e pya ek usnu nanga kr rahi try duji usnu nanga hunda vekh rahi  ..
 
 'Lah deo na sardar ji kyoun koi syapa..' debu da kacha dhilla kr goddeya tak krdi ramanjot wal vekhdi boli bholi' tuhanu tan pta e a sardarni da kini jiddi a uton sharab...'
Kuch nal bolea ajeev jeha lag riha c usnu.... ramanjot tey bholi samney nanga khada.. chahey lun kurtey nal dhakeya hoyea c pr ... 
 
Akhan tikayi dona wal vekhdi ramanjot debu dey Pairaan ch diggey  pjamey tey goddeya ch uljey usdey kachey wal vekhdi  gilass hath ch fad kuch sochdi hoyi boli'  lagda tera sardar dr riha mere samney .. chal edn kr fad k  eh tan das sardar e dr riha k esda lun b dr riha.. fer uchi uchi  hasdi hoyi debu wal vekhdi boli'  j tan tera khada hoyea fer tan tenu ethey mere samney bholi chaudni paini .. j na khada hoyea fer rehn devin ..'




'Eh ki gal ..' hairaan hunda debu apney pattan wal vekhda ghabra k bolea
 'Galat ki keha ..' uchi uchi hasdi ramanjot debu dey pattan wal vekhdi  boli'  j tera sutta pya hoyea fer tun b ja k so javin nyi ..'..' chal nee bholi vekh tera sardar da sutta k jagda..'
 'Ji... ghabrayi hoyi bholi pairan bhar beith..hath agey kr debu dey patt tey ferdi ungln lun wal lijandi debu dean akhn ch vekhdi uchal e pyi hath pichey kr kadi debu wal kadi ramanjot wal..
Debu usdi tan halat e patli ho gyi chahey ramanjot di jid tey bholi ney usdey lun nu fadeya c pr lun o tan eko jhaktey nal funkarda hoyea akad gya ... 
 'Ki goyea'  hasdi hoyi ramanjot debu dey pattan ch kurtey dey palley thalley ubrey hoye lun wal vekh bholi wal vekhdi voli'  daseya nyi jagda k sutta pya tere sardar da  ...
Kuch na boli  kadi apney hath wal kadi debu wal vekhdi ek dum kadak motta debu da akadeya lun ..hairan hoyi nu yakeen na aya eh ohi lun c jisnu usney pta nayi kinni bar andr liya c eh lamba tey eda motta kidan ho..
 'Boldi kyoun nyi'  debu tey bholi nu apney samney khadey vekh kahli jehi paindi ramanjot boli'  jagda k sutta pya' 

 'Jagda .. 'debu dey pattan wal vekhdi bholi apney bull tukdi boli chahey thori der pehlan sardarni ney nashey ch jid kr usnu fadn lyi keha c par hun tan usda apna ang ang khind uthea c debu dey lun nu hath laa 
 'Fer sochdi ki a dey hun sardar nu '  eko ghut ch pura gilass khali kardi ramanjot bholi wal vekh fer debu wal vekhdi boli'  tun b hun nakhrey na kar maar aj mere samnwy es si fudi' 
Samj na ayi bholi nu ki karey sardar tan enj jijhaksa chup chap khada jidan pehln usney kadi usdi fudi mari na hovey ....aap usdi himmat nyi ho rahi c sardarni samney kuch krn di pr sardarni da gussa tey kadakdi awaz sun kurtey da palla ek passey kr hath ch lun ch fad e lya
 'Sochdi ki a nee tere sardar ney tan mere samney himmat nyi krni tun e lutt najarey ..' Boldi boldi saah nigaldi chup e kr gyi ramanjot akhn us dean addea dean addea reh gayean kadak akad k khada debu da lun .. lamba e nyi motta b  kehra singh ton kitey jyada .. bholi dey hath ch fadeya funkarda  baggi hoyea.... vekhey tan usney tin char  lun c tey littey b doh tin c  pr debu da lun vakhra e lga o tan kehar singh dey lun nu wada samjdi c pr debu da .. bholi dey hath ch tan eh lun ada b nyi aa riha c tey jad bholi hilandi bahar nu niklda gulabi motta  topa.. tan... 6 salan di usdi sutti pyi jwani di agg nu  hwa den lga
sah roki us wal vekhdi nu apney pattan ch khumari hullarey lendi mehsoos hon  lgi

'Bholi tun ....ahhh 'siskarda hoyea debu eston agey nal bol sakeya jidan bholi pairaan bhar beith usdey lun nu hath ch ghut masaldi hoyi topa bahr kad vekh rahi c dil kitta lun agey nu kr usdey bulln nal jod devey pr samney beithi unha nu vekhdi ramanjot .....nu vekh himmat na kr sakeya
Tey ramanjot o tan hairaan hoyi debu dey lun wal vekhdi akh jhapkna e bhul gyi debu da lun o b akadeya usdean akhan samney uton sharab da nasha .. bholi nu lun fad hilandi vekh usnu apney ang ang ch ek khumari daurdi mehsoos hoyi bechain hoyi lat tey lat rakh apni fudi nu ghutdi gilass ch sharab pandi chehkdi hoyi boli ' bholi  aj na chadi sardar nu ... bdey dinna bad hath aya.
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Kuch na boli bholi na e usney ramanjot wal vekhea usda ang ang tan lun fad khind e utheya kiney mahinia baad sardar da lun fadeya c fudi tan usdi bechain hoyi pyi   c lun andr lain lyi uton es baar tan lun b sardar da pehlan nalo motta tey lamba lag riha c ..masti ch lun fad masaldi nu koi parwah nyi c k sardarni vekh rahi a.. sardarni ney tan aap usnu .. thori jehi hairaan c sardar kuch kr kyoun nyi riha ena jijhak kyoun riha ..hun tak tan sardar nu usdean lattan khol andr dhak dena chahida c sardar dey gasseya da swad chetey kr kamb jehi uthi  jad da sardar bahrley mulk gya c tarsi pyi c usdi fudi ruh nal chudn lyi .. gharwala tan usda bs sharb pee j kdi  upr charda b c tey agg la lma pay janda sardar dey bahrley mulk jaan ton baad  pind dey doh tin  mundeya to  fudi marwayi b pr jehra swad sardar dey lulley da c o kisi mundey dey lun ch nyi aya


Ramanjot ek tan eney salan baad lun vekh rahi c uton eda lamba tey motta akhan usdean bar bar bholi dey hath ch fadey lun tey e ja tikdia jad usdi njr debu nal mili  eko deek ch gilass khali krdi  usdey lun ton njrn parey krdi boli ' awen nakhrey kri janda c vekh kidan tera akadeya pya....'
Kuch na bol sakeya debu ang ang usda sarur ch dubn lga ..msti ch kamdey hoye lyi khada hona muskil ho gya

Debu nu msti ch bull chabdey vekh ramanjot shaarb ch chur doldi kursi tey sidi ho beithn di kosis krdi  boli 'Mere wal ki vekhda' ..' meri kaini a...' ena keh uchi uchi hassn lgi fer hassa rok  us wal vekhdi boli'  j  laini a tan bol kholan apni  salwar chey saal ho gye ney kisi nu nedey nyi aan dita...'
 'Nyi tusi hosh ch nyi o   ' ramanjot wal vekh bholi da hath apney lun ton prey karda bolea!  tu  b awen apni sardarni dean  gallan ch aa..'
 'Ki nyi'  hasdi hoyi ramanjot boli'  j bholi di fudi nyi marni tan es khadey lun da ki karna ...' kuch der chup reh bholi nu hukam jeha sindi boli' chal edan kr bholi  chung e lay aapney sardar da' ..' es nu chuppey marwan da bda shaunk a.. jad mein nawi nawi  viahi ayi c badey chupey marwaye c esney mere ton .. apney bulln nu ghutdi ramanjot kursi tey sar tika sharaab dey nashey ch chur aukha jeha sah lay debu dey lun wal vekhn lgi
Ek baar bholi ney gardan ghuma ramanjot wal vekhea sahi tan keh rahi c o kehar singh hamesha usnu lun chungn lyi kehnda hunda c ..debu da akadey lun nu hath ch fad bechain hoyi hun tan bholi b apna dar tey sardarni samney jijhak nu bhul beithi.. sardarni nu apney  wal vekhdi vekh ek baar  akhan chuk debu wal vekhea tey agley e pal bull khol debu da lun apney munh ch ghut lya
 'Ahhhh bholi'  addea chuk kambda hoyea aiakar e uthea debu kambda hoyea bholi dey modey fad hauka lenda akhir  apney aap tey kabu krn di kosis krda bolea' Ki krdi a bholi uff hatt'  keha chahey usney ney eh par na tan usney lun bholi dey munh vichon kadeya na e ramanjot wal vekhea jidn bholi ussey lun nu munh ch lay chungdi hoyi chuppey maar rahi c samjn ch der na lgi changa e chungwaya hoyea kehar Singh ney bholi nu apna lun hun tan usda b sabr munkn lga jad b bholi usdey lun da topa bulln ch ghut akhan chuk us wal  vekhdi apney aap e uston bholi dey munh ch gassa baj janda
 'Kyoun.sardara aya mja'  kamrey ch bechain  hoye  debu dey sahan di awaz sun nashey ch apnia band hoyea akhan nu kholn di kosis kardi kusi tey beithi ramanajot ek passey nu jhukdi bholi dey munh ch gye debu dey lun wal vekhdi larkhandi awaz ch burburayi'  bda chaska c tenu run ton chuppwy marwaan da ..bhain chod fudi ghat lainda  c lun jyada chungwanda c  ..
Bechain hoyea akhan meech sab bhul  bholi da sar fad  apney lun tey ghutda bull dandn nal chabda haukey lenda kuch bolan e lga c debu k  ek passey nu jhuki unha nu vekhn di kosis kardi ramanjot  nashey ch chur apney aap nu sambhl na saki tey ular k jameen tey dig pyi

Kursi ton digi  ramanjot nu vekh eko jhatkey nal bholi ton vakh ho apna kacha tey pajama upr nu chuk kahli kahli ch nala banda us wal vekhn lga
 'Tusi theek o'  ramanjot nu khadi krdi bholi ghabrayi hoyi boli'  sat tan nyi lgi tuhanu..'
 'Mein dig kidan pyi'  larkharandi hoyi ramanjot sidi khadi hon di kosis krdi burburayi par khadi na reh saki ek dum bhaj ramanjot da modda fad usnu sambhalda  debu bolea'  tuhanu keha c na tusi vohat jyada pee lyi
 'Mein jyada pee lyi nyi nyi' nashey  ch chur uchi uchi hasdi hoyi ramanjot boli  'tenu kis ney keha.....tusi kyoun hat gye chalo karo jo kardey pye c ...'
 'Tun fad esnu bholi' larkharndi khadi hon di kosis krdi ramanjot nu sambhln di kosis karda debu bolea'  hosh ch nyi plag tey lay chal..'

 'Plag tey... 'larkharandi bdi muskil nal plang wal turi jandi ramanjot debu wal adkhuleya akhan nal vekhdi nashey ch jhuldi uchi uchi hassn di kosis krdi  haklandi hoyi boli  'plang tey kyoun kitey meri tan nyi laini....'
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 'Bholi Tun es di gal na sun eh hosh ch nyi a'  sahara dey ramanjot nu plang tey beithanda debu kahli kahli ch bolea  'es nu lmi pa dey' 
 'Nyi mein nayi Lmi paina  'nashey ch dubi jid krdi  debu wal vekhdi larkharandi awaz ch jhoomdi ramanjot beithi beithi plang tey dig e pyi... akhan band bull farfrandey  samj nyi aa rahi c ki boldi pyi a oh.. us wal vekhdey  Jhatka e lga debu nu jad ramanjot ney hath agey kar pajmey upron e us da lun fad lya chahey nashey ch c par akadey hoye lun dey sek nal  ek dum sar chuk apnia adhkuhlia akhan nal us wal vekhn di kosis krdi boli'  hye tera lulla sardara . Bol j laini a meri tan kholan apni salwar' 
 'Nyi ..'ek dum jhatkey  nal pichey nu hunda debu apna lun usdey hath ton prey karda bolea'  tuhanu sharaab vohat chad gyi a so jayo' fer kuch der khada sochda bholi wal vekhda  bolea'  bholi apni sardarni nu changi trah plang tey lmi pa dey..'

 Hairan hoyi bholi lyi eh kehar singh da vakhra e roop c  ena sau tey sharif kad ho gya sardar.... sardarni ney usda lun fadeya tey usney lun prey kr liya
Plang tey latkdean ramanjot dean lattan nu chuk upr krdi bholi ney ek baar debu wal vekhea fer kuch sochdi hoyi ramanjot dey sar thalley sarhana rakh  debu wal vekh usnu uksandi hoyi boli .. 'lay layo sardar ji sardarni aap keh rahi' 
 'Pagal a tun bholi'  ek dum kadak awaz ch bholi nu ghurda debu ramanjot dey moddeya tak rajayi dey usnu dhakda  hoyea bolea  'shrab piti a.. koi hosh nyi esnu' 
 'Tusi aap e kehndey hundey  c ek baar ragarni a ramanjot kinney saal ho gye hath e nyi laan dindi  aj msuka a ragar deo ..' debu wal vekhdi bholi jameen tey pyi apni salwar chuk pairan ch fsa upr nu kardi boli' edan da mauka fir nyi milna' 
 'Tun munh band rakh  ' khijda hoyea debu kamrey ton bahr nu janda bholi wal vekh mej tey pye smaan wal vekhda  bolea'  'eh sara smaan ethon chuk dey  '
 'Kmaal a tuhada lun  khada... sardarni den nu tyar ..  tey tusi mukr rahey o 
.menu tan lagda tusi sardar ji nyi o'  hairaan hoyi bholi debu wal vekhdi apni salwar da nala bn di boli'  kon o tusi' 
Hakbka reh gya debu... kuch na bolea dil dhark uthea himmat na hoyi uthey khadey rehn di.... ek bar usney suti pyi ramanjot wal vekhea fer bina kuch boley bahar nh nikl gya.....




Apney Kamrey ch waps aa samaj nyi aa rahi c ki karey hun .. bholi ney tan sida e keh ditta tusi sardar ji nyi o kon o tusi ... hun .. sochdey sochdey sar fad plang tey beith gya... 
Aj jo b kamrey ch hoyea tey jidan jijhkda hoyea o bholi nu rok riha c pakka yakeen ho gya bholi nu mein kehar aingh nyi haan .. tey j usney kisi nu das ditta ufff .. eh b sharaab pee suti pyi a 

Tenu  ena changa bn an di ki lod c .. awen nakhrey kri gya fad k ragar dinda fer na shak krdi ..  chungwa tan lya c fudi b maar lenda...  rang e thora jeha lakka a  vekhn ch tan sirey si jwaan run a

Thori der pehln bulln ch ghut jidan usdey lun nu chungea c bholi ney chetey andey e lun tan mud khada ho akad gya...
Hath ayi ayi chad diti uton shak pay gya bholi nu k mein kehar singh nyi haan ... ek lamba sah bhuhey wal vekhn lga akhir kuch sochda bahar nu nikl gya


'Kamrey ch awin jra' bahr aa   bholi nu nalkey thalley beith bhandey dhondi vekh debu roabdaar   awaz ch bolea
 'Thori der tak andi haan .'gardan ghuma  us wal vekhdi chehak e uthi bholi kuch sochdi apney kamrey wal vekhdi boli'  gharwala so javey fer andi haan' 
 'Jaldi aa ween ... 'himmat kr apni awaaz ch talkhi bhar bholi tey roab paa  us wal vekhda bolea  debu




Buhey nu kundi laa debu wal vekhdi muskurandi hoyi bholi boli'  hun daso kyoun bulaya' 
 'Edar aa lun chung mera'  plang tey beitha debu himmat kr bholi wal vekh roab ch  bolea 
' kyoun nyi sardar ji  'kahli kahli turdi debu kol aa usdey pattan wal vekhdi bholi jameen tey beith usdean lattan kholdi boli  'kado bahr' 
 'Tenu sang lagdi a'  bholi da hath fad apney lun tey rakhda debu usdean akhan ch vekhda bolea 
 'Oye hoye  'debu da lun fad hath ch masldi apney bulln tey jeev ferdi boli    'sardrni samney tan bdey nakhrey krdey c ...'
 'Hor bhain chod usdey samney ki krda chal maar chuppey'  janbuj k gal kad bholi nu akhn kad da debu bolea
 'Chuppey b marungi . Fudi ch b layoungi pehlan vekh tan lwan eney mahinia baad hath ayea a tuhada lulla  ' debu da nala khol hath pajamey andr hath paa lun masaldi hoyi boli' hye kida wadda eh kiven ..'
 'Vohta na bol chal chung esnu'   apna pajma tey kacha thalley kr bholi da sar fad apney lun kol lya machlda hoyea bolea debu ...


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Crwww story kavita madm..agg e lyi pyi a tucc....on do update thode hor
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Nyc aa kavita, debu nu kehar asl ch bna de, now raMN di fudi ch vad khich ke
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Bhut vadiya update, kavita ji. Bholi da bhola bana devo debu toh.
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kya baat Kavita ji mza e lya ditta ... eda e likhde rho boht vdiaa likhde ho
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Siraa laa ta..... hun aiwein hee mhaul bnayo k debu maa te dhee dowa nu thokey
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ਦੇਬੂ ਦੀ ਬਾਰੀ ਧੀ ਤੇ ਬਾਦ ਵਿੱਚ ਆਉ ਪਹਿਲਾ ਭਾਈ ਤੇ ਸੱਤਾ ਨੰਬਰ ਲਾਉਣਗੇ, ਬਹੁਤ ਅੱਛਾ ਅਪਡੇਟ ਸੀ ਸਵਾਦ ਆ ਗਿਆ ਪੜ ਕੇ, ਆਖਿਰ ਚ ਦੇਬੂ ਜੇਹੜਾ ਕੇਹਰ ਸਿੰਘ ਦੇ ਕਿਰਦਾਰ ਚ ਡੁੱਬਣ ਲੱਗਾ ਉਹ ਅੱਤ ਹੀ ਸੀ...
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update ta bht. vadiya c.... but Kavita ji eh gal galat hai 1week ch 1 update de rahe ho .... please at least 2 update ta deo eda de he.... te preet te jeetu nu v le k aoo..... ona di chudai da v koi scean pao......
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