08-01-2020, 11:25 PM
going great brother. awasome writing. waiting for next update...
Misc. Erotica Gande Varke ( ਗੰਦੇ ਵਰਕੇ )
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08-01-2020, 11:25 PM
going great brother. awasome writing. waiting for next update...
08-01-2020, 11:25 PM
Brilliant just brilliant brother. I love your writing. After reading the update I can understand the feelings going inside mind of the innocent wife. At one side she loves her husband so much and on the other side she is getting excited by a stranger . I am speechless brother. I adore you.
09-01-2020, 07:49 AM
Bahut khoob bro.......par eh tusi hindi story " chhoti si Bhool " nu punjabi translate kr rahe ho.....thoda change krke jarur likho fer jada maza aayega....
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09-01-2020, 09:26 AM
(08-01-2020, 10:31 PM)AFSAR Wrote: Hats off prince bro. What a seductive story man. Innocent wife falling for stranger. Amazing narration bro. You are number one writer . Thanks bro for the precious comment. But narration in first two updates is inspired by writer jatin (Hindi Section) . So credit goes to him. I will originally write 3rd,4th and 5th update .
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(08-01-2020, 11:25 PM)Waliaz Wrote: Thank you so much bro for always encouraging me.
09-01-2020, 09:57 AM
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09-01-2020, 10:02 AM
(09-01-2020, 07:49 AM)Sarpanch004 Wrote: Bahut khoob bro.......par eh tusi hindi story " chhoti si Bhool " nu punjabi translate kr rahe ho.....thoda change krke jarur likho fer jada maza aayega.... Thank you so much bro for reading and replying. Yes bro eh story Choti so bhool by jatin di story toh inspired hai. Hanji bro story changed hai bas basic premise and the first update is purely inspired par I have made necessary changes in it. The story will be entirely different in coming updates.so don't worry brother.
13-01-2020, 02:21 PM
(11-01-2020, 08:18 AM)Sarpanch004 Wrote: Waiting for next bro (11-01-2020, 04:07 PM)Anmol Sidhu Wrote: update ???? (11-01-2020, 04:14 PM)Love1234 Wrote: Update kdo aauna next??? (12-01-2020, 08:26 PM)Ilovesinghni Wrote: Krdo g update,, sundy sukka langh gia Ajj update aa reha hai doston. Thanks for the patience.
13-01-2020, 02:55 PM
14-01-2020, 05:54 PM
kro update
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