[Goldy007]

yaaar ab karan ki entry krwaaoo v9 ek baar neha ko es halat me dekhe

[dragonslair]

nice updates. but it seems the story is stuck in a loop in last two updates. take it forward.

[Sahrabi]

Bhai mene aaj hi ye story full read ki he suru me plot bahut acha laga ye story karan ke jariye chal raha thaa fhir dhire tum ne 3rd larty ka usekiya waha story alag hogayi fhi abhi jo story chal rahi he wo puri 3rd party ke dwara sach kahu to pura plot hi change hogaya story ka wo filing hi nahi aaraha jo starting me aaraha thaa lagraha he koi porn dekh raha hu 3 some wala kahani raha hi nahi aur ha ye mera oponiyana he par yesa nhi he story acha nhi he bahut achey liktey ho tum bas story bhatak gayi plot se good luck for another update

[nightcrawlertyagi]

Bhai mene aaj hi ye story full read ki he suru me plot bahut acha laga ye story karan ke jariye chal raha thaa fhir dhire tum ne 3rd larty ka usekiya waha story alag hogayi fhi abhi jo story chal rahi he wo puri 3rd party ke dwara sach kahu to pura plot hi change hogaya story ka wo filing hi nahi aaraha jo starting me aaraha thaa lagraha he koi porn dekh raha hu 3 some wala kahani raha hi nahi aur ha ye mera oponiyana he par yesa nhi he story acha nhi he bahut achey liktey ho tum bas story bhatak gayi plot se  good luck for another update

Thanks for critically analysing the story...i am not a professional writer....but sometimes it is changed to readers prospective.  Some user said that dont involve Gupta , some readers said involve gupta for threesome..some user dont connect with story because they want direct action to satisfy their sexual need. This is fictitious story where i want to exPlore human behaviour with sexual encounters.

Sorry to every readers i failed to deliver good story...but i will try to finish this story from my prospective. I also thanks to many readers who supported me and encourage me to continue this story.
Yours

NightCrawler

[marathi.hubby]

yes... story is so nice... but story ka thda plot bhatak gaya aisa lag raha hai... karan ki feeling sinvolve kro..usko bhi kuch dikhao story me...nhi to ye 3sm story ho rahi hai...jo neha bata rahi hai aisa lag raha hai...
baki story writting bhut mast hai...plz continue writting
keep it up

[Suryahot123]

Please update

[mihikagupta1991]

Waiting for next sensation update........plss update....

[chandamadam]

Dear
Ab bahut muskil ho raha hai..naye plot rachne me...baar baar likhta hoon mitata hoon...tab jaake ek rough draft taiyaar hota hai..
Give yr suggestions to build new plot...i know u r the consistant reader of this thread.
Thanks once again.
NightCrawler

In my view. there are various ways to take it forward, Mr. NightCrawler;

1) Let Karan take part in the sex of his wife and boss. But I don't recommend it. it will remove all the fun. Make him an easy and willing cuckold.
2) Make Neha enjoy her coupling with her husband's boss. Karan should wake up after the action. Than make Karan jealous. He can be humiliated by his boss and wife. He will resist first but will accept and enjoy the same after some time.  Make him a reluctant cuckold.
3) After continuation of 2nd option, make Karan avenge the humiliation. Let him take control of Javed's company and teach Javed and (maybe) Neha a lesson.

All these are mere options.

Don't worry about writing and deleting to write again. Usually first time is the best.
Gupta should be used to humiliate Karan, not Neha.


Yours,
Madam

[chandamadam]

Bhai mene aaj hi ye story full read ki he suru me plot bahut acha laga ye story karan ke jariye chal raha thaa fhir dhire tum ne 3rd larty ka usekiya waha story alag hogayi fhi abhi jo story chal rahi he wo puri 3rd party ke dwara sach kahu to pura plot hi change hogaya story ka wo filing hi nahi aaraha jo starting me aaraha thaa lagraha he koi porn dekh raha hu 3 some wala kahani raha hi nahi aur ha ye mera oponiyana he par yesa nhi he story acha nhi he bahut achey liktey ho tum bas story bhatak gayi plot se  good luck for another update

I agree, Mr. Nightcralwer jayda soch rahe hai likhne se pehle. Gupta to story mai add karne ki koi zarurat nahi thi. Naya character add karna bhi tha to first time sex ke baad karna chahiye tha.

college dress theme ki bhi zarurat nahi thi. Phone pe Javed aur Neha ki baatein kafi lambi aur Neeras (boring) ho gyi.



Chanda

[nightcrawlertyagi]

In my view. there are various ways to take it forward, Mr. NightCrawler;

1) Let Karan take part in the sex of his wife and boss. But I don't recommend it. it will remove all the fun. Make him an easy and willing cuckold.
2) Make Neha enjoy her coupling with her husband's boss. Karan should wake up after the action. Than make Karan jealous. He can be humiliated by his boss and wife. He will resist first but will accept and enjoy the same after some time.  Make him a reluctant cuckold.
3) After continuation of 2nd option, make Karan avenge the humiliation. Let him take control of Javed's company and teach Javed and (maybe) Neha a lesson.

All these are mere options.

Don't worry about writing and deleting to write again. Usually first time is the best.
Gupta should be used to humiliate Karan, not Neha.


Yours,
Madam

Dear chandaMadam,

Actually i want to state this story in flashback from Karan point of view... actually this is another chapter in terms of karan prospective. Wait for sometimes when Karan will back this will reach to another  level. Outline of story is very clear in my mind. U are the only one who critically analysing my story..as per yr suggestion college dress theme is droped. And gupta is also sleepning partner. But in presence of gupta she will be open to fuck in any situation.

[nightcrawlertyagi]

Dear readers 

Next update will be posted tomorrow. Sorry next update is mega update so it requires time.

Thanks

[Veer.rajvansh]

Ok bro we waiting

[nightcrawlertyagi]

Update 27


Tabhi Neha ka sharir phir jhatke lene lagta hai.. wo phir kampne lagti hai....wo mehsoos karti hai..kuch to ander hai jo nikalne ko baichain hai...
Ye uska orgasm hai...jo jwalamukhi ban chuka hai...uska lava phutane ko hai...jo dophar se kai baar nikalne ko betaab hai...kai baar usne roka.. aur kai baar javed ne...

Tabhi phir kuch hota hai...ek badi dardnaak awaaj aati hai...

N: Aayeeeee. Mummyyyyy....mar gayi.....

Ab aage...

Neha jo phir sex ki sapne ki duniya me thi... aur uski ek cheekh ke saath uska sapna toot gaya..
Jo apni choochiyan pakde baith gayi...kyonki javed ne uske bra ke upper se nipple marode diye.... Neha itni frustrate aur irritate thi jiski kalpana bhi nahi ki ja sakti... wo bahut gusse se chillate hua boli...
N: ab kya hua...ab kyon nocha mujhko...ayyeee mummy.....
J: wo tum phir ajeev...
Neha ne javed ki baat kaat ke beech me gusse se boli...
N: hone dete..mujhe koi fark nahi padta to tumko kya pareshaani hai...khabardar abki baar aisa kiya....

Ab javed ki jhaante jal gayi....

J: Dekho madarchod mujhpe apna gussa dikhana nahi .. nahi to abhi tumhari maa chod dunga.. behenchod mere hi ghar me mere pe chilla rahi hai....
Ab neha backfoot pe....usne aisa expect nahi kiya tha kyonki jab se neha aayi hai...Javed usse bade pyar se baat kar raha tha...
J: madarchod tujse pyar se baat kar raha hoon to tu bhosadi ki mere sir pe chad jaayegi..maine kaha tha Natak nahi karna mere saamne...

Neha ki sitti-pitti gum hogayi...gali sunte.. wo apne choochiyon ka dard bhool gayi...
Neha ki ankhoon se ansoon behne lage....

J: Saali nahi chodna tujhe...bhaag yahan se....behenchod....
Neha sakpaka ke khadi...sara sex ka khumar utar gaya...
J: ja rahi hai ki nahi....nahi to tere saare kapde utar kar nangi gher ke bahar karoon...

Ab Neha ko darr laga....wo bilkul comfortable ho gayi thi javed ke behaviour se... usse laga ab achanak kya ho gaya Javed ko... itni aage aake wapas jaana ab usse manjoor nahi tha ... jo aag uske man aur sharir me lagi thi usse bhujani thi.. sabse badi baat agar baat bigad gayi to Karan ka kya hoga.. wo ye bhi bhul gayi ki wo sirf bra me baithi hai...
Javed ka chehra gusse se tamtama raha tha aur wo sofe se khada ho gaya.. uske khade hote hee neha bhi hadbada ke khadi ho gayi...aur darte 2 boli...
N: sir pata nahi kya ho gaya mujhe...i m sorry.. sir..
J: pehle galti karo phir sorry bol do....

Javed ye sab jaan bhoojhkar gussa dikha raha tha pehle pyar se uss per dominate kiya ab gussa dikha kar dominate kar raha tha...taki uski rahi bachi dignity..self respect, manobal, tod de aur usko her tarike se gulam bana de..

N: Sir mujhe us waqt bahut acchha lag raha tha. Per aapne jo kiya mujhe bahut dard gua...aur ussi dard ki wajah se achanak gussa aa gaya.. mujhe nahi karna chahiye..sorry sir maaf kar dijiye...aage se nahi hoga...aisa...

J:dekh tu apne acchha lagne ke liye nahi aayi hai...mujhe mazza dene aayi hai...tune abhi tak mujhe kya mazza diya hai...saala har kaam to me kar raha hoon .....tu kya kar rahi hai mere liye behenchod....

Neha sochne lagi har kaam to inke mann se kar rahi hoon..phir bhi aisa keh rahe hai..

J: bata jara me tere se pyar se baat nahi kar raha ....aur tu mujhe apna gussa dikha rahi hai...

N: sir maaf kar dijiye ...ab nahi karoongi...gussa..

J: chal maan leta hoon teri baat....mood kharab kar diya....behenchod...

Neha ko laga thoda normal ho raha hai... javed to usne apne patte fenke...wo ab bhi kissi aag me jal rahi thi usko bhi dekhna tha ki aage javed uske saath kya aur kaise karne wala tha...per gussa karne se sab interrupt ho gaya.... usko laga javed ko manana padega...

N: ab sir maaf bhi kar dijiye...aur ye bataiye aapka mood kaise sahi hoga...

Thoda idhlate hui boli...

Javed neha ke pass aaya, aur uske sir ke baal pakde..aur thoda keench kar uska chehra apne chehre ke pass laya..

Neha ko thoda dard hua...per wo ignore kar gayi...
Javed ne apne lips uske lips pe rakh diye...aur forcefully kiss karne laga...itna forcefull kiss tha neha ko takleef ho rahi thi..phir javed ne uske lips pe halka sa kaat liya to thoda blood uske lips se niklne laga...javed ne apna kiss toda to dekha .. neha ke lips se khoon nikal raha tha... neha ko thodi jalan hui ..to usne ungali se lips pe touch kiya ..to blood uski ungali pe lag gaya...neha javed ki eyes me dekhne lagi...surprise hoke... javed ne dekha ki lips se blood nikal raha hai to javed ne jeebh nikal ke uske lips pe lage blood ko chat liya ..neha ye harkat dekh kar apni eyes band kar leti hai...aur usko lips pe jo dard hua usme rahat milti hai...



Javed phir bade pyar se delicate tareeke se neha ko kiss karne laga ...aur uska blood jo uske lips pe laga tha choosne laga...ye kiss itna pyar se kiya ki neha apne lips ke dard ko bhool gayi.. aur eye close karke kiss ka anand lene lagi....


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Ye bhi neha ke liye naya anubhav thi ki dard bhi anand deta hai....javed kiss karte 2 uske boobs bhi dabane lagta hai...Neha ki aah nikal jaati hai..
Neha phir se garam hone lagti hai...Neha ko bahut badhiya lag raha tha ki jo uske boobs ki khujali hai...wo kam ho rahi thi...

Javed phir kiss todta hai...aur ek haath se neha ke baal keechta hai aur dusre haath se uska chehra chin se lekar cheek daba ke uthha deta hai..phir uska chehra javed ke chehre ke saamne hota hai...neha ko dard ho raha tha per kuch anand bhi tha...aaj tak kissi ne usko aisa treat nahi kiya tha...ye anubhav bhi wo lena chah rahi thi.. neha ab sex se bahri eyes se javed ki aankhoon me dekh rahi thi...javed uski aankhoon me dekhte hua bolta hai...



J: Sun behenchod mujhe koi natak pasand nahi hai... ab koi natak kiya to mujse bura koi nahi hoga ...baat samajh me aayi ho to bol me aapki gulam hoon aap jo kahoge me karrongi...nahi to tu abhi ja sakti hai apne ghar...

Neha sex ki khumari me thi..ab peeche hatne ka sawaal hi ..usse khud janana tha sex me aur kya 2 hota hai..aaj usse bahut kuch naya jaana hai..
jo uske liye ek nayi duniya thi....jo ab wo explore karna chahti thi..

N: me aapki gulam hoon...aap jo kahoge me wo karoongi...
Itna bolte hee javed uski choochiya dabane laga... neha ki maon nikal gayi....
N: aahhh....
J: mazza aa raha hai neha apni choochi dabane pe .
Neha madhosi me...boli
N:haan...
Javed choochi dabate hua bolta hai...
J: behenchod maine tujhse apni choot ki jhaante katne ko kaha tha..kaat ke aayi hai...
N:haan.....
J: to dikhayegi kab .... chal door khadi ho jaa...
Apni sari nikal de....

Neha thodi peeche hoke kaanpte hath se sari nikal deti hai...ab wo sirf peticoat aur bra me khadi thi...lekin usne kar to diya javed ke darr se.. per bahut uncomfortable thi...uski ankhen dabdaba gayi shram aur humiliation se....javed ko samajh aa gaya abhi sahi nahi hai pyar se handle karna padega.. lagta hai jayada ho gaya hai... to phir bade pyar se apne pass bulaya aur gale laga liya...neha ko bada shakun mila....



J: Dekho Neha mujhe gussa nahi dilana... mujhe bhi bilkul aaccha nahi laga tere se us tarah se baat karke...aur neha ko paglo ki tarah chumane laga...Neha phir apne sex ke khumar me kho gayi.....

J:neha maine tumhari bra dekh li ab panty dekhni hai....wo kitni sexy hai..aur tum usme kaisi dikhti ho...

Neha sharm se apna chehra javed ki chaati me chupa leti hai...

J: Bolo dikhaoogi ki nahi...
Neha gardan hila kar haan me sehmati deti hai..
Javed phir se uske baal kheechta hai..
Neha ki phir aahh nikal jaati hai...
J: moonh se bol bhosadi ki...
N: maine kab mana kiya hai...
J: to dikha....
N: Mujhe sharm aa rahi hai dikhane me aap khud hi dekh lo.. .
Javed phir neha ko forcefully kiss karne




laga .... Neha ko ye forceful kiss bahut acchha lag raha tha....aur neha eye close kar li...phir javed ne kiss tod diya aur apni ungli neha ke chehre se lete hua..uske gardan, uski choochi, se hote hua..nabhi...phir peticoat ke naare tak le gaya..
Neha ki saans ruk gayi...

Phir sochne laga ye dophar se kai baar jhadne ko hui hai isko ek baar jhada dete hai...nahi to abki baar maine isko roka to ye meri jaan le legi...lekin maine roka to isliye tha ki jab jhade to me iski choot aur facial expression dono dekh sakoon. Agar chadi me jhad jaati to kya mazza tha...

J: Neha my darling agar tumhari permission ho to me tumhari panty dekh loon..

Neha gardan hila ke sehmati de di aur sharm se javed ke gale lag gayi.....
Javed ne thodi der baad usko apne se door kiya aur uske saamne neeche baith gaya...
Neha ne koi harkat na hote dekhkar...apni sex se bhari..apni thodi si eyes open karke dekha to javed ka chehra apni choot ke saamne paya..phir usne thandi si saans lekar eyes close kar li...
Javed ne uska peticoat dheere se neeche se uthana suru kar diya...uski gore 2 per dekh kar javed ke moonh me paani aa gaya...usne ankle me chandi ki payal pehen rakhi thi...aur ankle me kala dhaga bhi tha...thoda aur uthaya uska ghutna jo per ke comparison me thoda dark tha..per kya legs the bilkul gore and bedaag....thoda aur peticoat uthaya to chikni massal jhange....bhut hi sexy thi...uski patli body ke comparison me jhange thodi mass liye thi jo uski sex appeal badha rahi thi...
Thoda aur uper uthaya to uski sexy panty saamne aa gayi...wo kayamat lag rahi thi...javed ka mann hua ki abhi saali ko chod de...phir pura peticoat uthakar neha ke haath me pakda diya..



Udher neha ki to halat hi kharab ho gayi...uska excitement aur sharm ke maare khada rehna muskil ho raha tha...wo kaise peticoat pakde thi wo hi jaanti thi...puri body me sirhan daur rahi thi...

Javed ne phir pura charo taraf ghum 2 kar neha ko dekhne laga...panty me covered choot ek bacche ki lag rahi thi..aur uski gori chikni gaand jis per rongate khade ho gaye the...uski aadhi gaand dikh rahi thi....uski gaand ka size uski body ke comparison me thoda jayada tha..kyonki gaand uski sapat nahi ubhri hui thi....

Phir koi harkat na dekhkar neha ne phir ek eye kholkar dekha ki kya ho raha hai...javed ko apne choot ki taraf dekhta pakar sharm se laal ho gayi... uska man kar raha tha ki Javed choot ko touch kare...kyonki choot fadfada rahi thi....touch karane ke liye....

Javed ne dekha uski panty choot ke side me puri geeli thi...

J: neha kya sexy panty hai....bahut hi saandar usme tumhari choot bahut hi shandaar lag rahi hai....aur tumhari chikni gaand ka to kehna hi kya...



Neha sharm se dohri hui ja rahi thi...

J: Neha tum is bra aur panty me bahut hi sexy lag rahi ho bhagwan ne tumhara sharir badi fursat se banaya hai.. Tumhari har cheese perfect hai....

Neha apni tarif sunkar ander se khush ho rahi thi saath 2 sharm bhi aa rahi thi...
Javed ne aage bhadkar Neha ko gale lagaliye neha to itna aaram mila ki usne bhi javed ko kaskar pakad liya aur uski agosh me samma gayi... aisa karta hua peticoat haath se choot gaya...
J: Neha peticaot pakde raho...
aur phir peticoat samate kar neha ko pakda diya...aur peeche haath lejakar gaand pe rakh diya...
N:aahhhh.....aur phir kampan se peticoat choot gaya...
Javed ne ek dheere se chutad pe haath maara
N:aahhhhh...
J: behenchod (pyar se ) peticoat nahi chodna hai....
Phir samete kar neha ko pakda diya...aur phir dheere se chutad pe haath maara.
N:aahhhh.
J: chutad pe acchha lag raha hai...marte hua..
N:haannnnn ..
Javed usko chod ke neha ke peeche khada ho jata hai...aur phir uske ek chutad pe haath maarta hai..
N:aaooch...ahhh..
Javed phir marta hai..
N: ouuch...ahhhh..hmmmmm
Neha ke liye ek naya anubhav....ek meetha sa dard....jo normal condition me usko acchha nahi lagta...per is samay...jab sex ka bhukhar chada ho...to ye naya sexy idea usko kinky lag raha tha...
J: do u like baby??? Hohooon
N: hoonnn.
Javed phir marta hai.. aur bolta hai...
J: moonh se bol bhosadi ki...mazza aaya ki nahi..
N: ouuch...ahhh..mazza aa raha hai...



Neha aadhi nangi khadi...sex ki nayi duniya me ghum rahi thi....ye itna naya anubhav tha jo wo soch bhi nahi sakti thi...
Javed phir marta hua poochta hai...jor se bol behenchod....
N: ouuchh...ahhhj....bahut mazza aa raha hai...
Phir javed peeche se hi haath daalkar uski bra ke uper se choochiya daba deta hai....
N: aahhhhh...ahhhhhh....maon karti hai...puri body me alag hi star ka blood circulation ho raha tha...
Phir javed uske saamne aa jaata hai...
J: peticoat mat chodna...pakde rehna aur uper lo...
Neha peticoat aur uper le leti hai...aur wo usko peeche sofe pe baitha deta hai...Neha sochti hai ab ye kya karega...uska dil baitha ja raha tha...uske ander ka lava phir uffaan maar raha tha...jo phutne ko taiyaar tha... javed neha ka ser peeche tikka deta hai ..aur usko thoda aage sarka ker uski gaand sofe ke edge pe le aata hai...

Javed ab usko jhadne dena chahata tha..aur wo uske facial aur choot dono ke ek saath darshan karna chahata tha...jhadte samay...

Neha ka peticoat jo uski kamar me ghudmud pada tha.. nangi taange qahar dhaa rahi thi...javed neha ko lips pe kiss karta hai aur phir kaan ke pass jaata hai aur bolta hai..

J: neha teesre vaade ka samay aa gaya hai...mujhe tumhari choot dekhni hai ki tumne jhaante banayi hai ki nahi...

Neha ye sunte hee ek lambi saans leti hai...uske boobs bahar nikal aate hai...uska dil dhak se baith jata hai...

J: Neha baby kya permission hai....

Neha haan me gardan hilati hai..uske pass mana karne ka koi option bhi to nahi hai...aur wo mana bhi nahi karna chahati..kyonki is khel me usko bhi bahut mazza aa raha hai...aur wo ye janana bhi chahati hai ye kahan tak jaayega.. aur ab ye sex ki garmi usse bardaast nahi ho rahi thi...wo zaldi isko niptana chahati thi.

J: moonh se bol behenchod( pyar se) permission hai...
Neha itni excited thi...usko ab gali ka koi fark hi nahi pad raha tha...
N: aahhh....per..mission..haiiiii...
J: puri baat bol...ki maine choot se apni choti 2 jhaante saaf kar li hai...app check karlo ..meri permission hai...
N: Maine apni choot se..choti 2 jha..ante sàaf kar li hai...meri permission hai...aap..check karlo... SIR.....

Javed ne uski choot pe haath rakh diya...ye pehla mauka tha uske husband ke alawa kissi ne usse is halat me dekha aur choot pe haath rakha...
Neha ki dil ki dhadkan ruk gayi...aur ek lambi saans li
N: ufffff....ahhhhh.... SIRRRRR.....mummyyyyy....

Uski panty choot pe puri geeli thi....javed uske kamar ke dono side me panty ki elastic pe haath rakhta hai aur kheechta hai...neha ko ab lagta hai ye kya ho raha hai...wo jhat se apna haath laker javed ka haath pe rakh ker rok deti hai...ye kaam wo jaanbhoojhkar nahi karti..ye uski sharm kara deti hai...aur neha eyes khol kar javed ki aankoon me dekhte hua eyes se request karti hai ..ki panty mat utaroo..



Wo apni rahi bachi izzat bacha rahi thi.. aur uski ander ki aurat shram ki wajah se phir jaag gayi ... ki wo gair mard to apni choot dikhaye kaise...jo sirf Karan ki amanat hai. .

J: Neha haath chodo..tumne permission di hai...

N: Sir please aisa na karo...me mar jaaoongi... maine aaj tak aisa nahi kiya ...kissi ko bhi apna sharir dekhne nahi diya...

J: Neha to me kaise check karoonga...

N: sir me bol to rahi hoon... ki jhaante saaf kar li hai .. aur viswaas nahi hai to Sir aap haath ... laga..kar ch..check ker ligiye...

Javed neha ke chehre ke pass jaata hai aur bolta hai...

J:neha ye to hona hi hai...abhi nahi to thodi der baad ...tumko to maloom hai tum yahan kyon aayi ho...bhul gayi ho to bata doon.

Ye baat javed bade sexy andaaj me bol raha tha..

J: tum yahan per mujse chudne aayi ho. Thodi der baad is choot me apna lund daloonga.. aur tumko chodunga... to ye panty to utarni padegi..
Waise bhi abhi tum aadhi nangi ho...blouse tumhara utar gaya hai.... ab bacha kya hai...

Neha itni gandi aur sexy baat sunkar sharma gayi.... aur phir apni halat ka andaaja hua to haath hatakar apne boobs dhak liya....aur eyes band kar li... Neha ne soch tha wo javed ke saath ek kamre me jaayegi aur light band karke chud ke wapas aa jaayegi...

Javed ab thoda kadak awaaj me bola..

J: Ab kuch bacha nahi hai neha ...ab sirf tumhari chudaai reh gayi hai ab natak karne se koi faayda nahi hai.....aur madarchod phir bhi natak kiya to nangi karke ghar ke bahar khada kar doonga...

J: aur karan ko bula kar tujhe nangi hi sapurd karoonga...tu kahegi ki javed ne mujhe nahi choda to ab kya ye karan maan lega ....
Aur me kahoonga mujhe tujhe chod ke mazza nahi aaya..tu natak bahut kar rahi thi...aur deal cancel kar doonga...
Aur tu laakh cheekh 2 kar bolna ki javed ne tujhe nahi choda wo maanega bhi nahi..isliye tu chahe to bina chude bhi ja sakti hai chud ke bhi...bina chude bhi gayi...to koi nahi maanega tu bina chude wapas aa gayi..Isliye apna bhi kaam bana aur Karan ka bhi...tu sex ko enjoy kar aur Karan ko jeevandaan de..

Neha ko baat bilkul samajh me aagayi...ab me yahan se gayi koi nahi maanega mere saath kuch nahi hua hai...

J: Neha jis halat me abhi hai chod to me tujhe abhi bhi sakta hoon per me kissi ladki pe jabardasti nahi karta hoon.. aur me abhi jabardasti chod kar bhi deal cancel kar sakta hoon..

J: isliye ye baat tujhe yahan aane se pehle sochni chayiye...yahan aane ke baad to sirf tera aur karan ka nukshaan hoga.

J: isliye mujhe bhi mazza de, khud bhi sex ka mazza le...aur deal bhi bacha le..

Neha sochne lagi keh to javed sahi rahe hai... main kyon faltu me natak karne lagti hoon...

N: sorry sir....mujhe bus sharm aa rahi thi....maine aaj tak Karan ke alawa kissi ke saamne kapde nahi utare..
J:tu aaj tak Karan ke alawa bhi kissi aur se nahi chudi hai.. to yahan chudne kyon aayi ho...kapde pehne 2 koi kaise chod sakta hai..

N:aayee....sir....bus.....aap theek keh rahe hai sir ab me nahi rokoongi aapko...

J: Behen ki lodi tujhe ho kya jaata hai thodi 2 der me... sahi jaa rahi hoti hai..aur apni maa chuda leti hai...mera itna acchha support kar rahi hoti ho sab baat maan Rahi hoti ho..aur mere saare mazze ke laude laga deti ho...apna mazza leti rehti ho jaise hi mere mazze ki baari aati hai naya natak suru kar deti ho.

N: Sir ab nahi karoongi....

Neha ye sab rokna nahi chahti thi...per ye sab automatically uski sharm ki wajah se ho gaya tha. To usne wo kiya....

Neha aage aakar javed ko chumne lagti hai..pure chehre pe phir lip kiss karne lagti hai....

Phir kiss karne ke baad neha ussi postion me laut jaati hai aur bolti hai...

N: sir check ker ligiye ki maine jhaante saaf ki hai ya nahi.. thandi saans chodkar aur apni eyes close kar leti hai...
J: Neha ab koi natak kiya to chodunga to me tujhe per uske saath peetoonga bhi...

N: sir chod bhi lena aur peet bhi lena me uff tak nahi karoongi.... (madhosi me boli)

Neha ko laga wo kya bol gayi..chod bhi lena...

N: aaeeiii...sorry aap kar lena aur peet bhi lena.
Agar ab natak karoon....
J: abhi pehle jo baat boli thi phir se bol...
N: Uff sir....aap ...please aap .chod...bhi..lena aur peet bhi lena....
J: tu mujse chudagi na....
N: haan sir....
J: puri baat bol..
N: ufff..sir.....me chudugi aapse....aap chod lena..
J: hye hye...wah kya baat hai...ab me khush... bata isme kya mushkil hai...jo ghadi 2 natak karti hai..
Javed ko kush dekhkar Neha ko thodi shanti mili. Usko lag raha tha ab karan ko bachane ke liye yehi raasta bacha hai...aur wo bhi bahut aage aa gayi hai...ab is samay khali haath lauti to meri abhi tak ki qurbaani bekar chali jaayegi..

J:Neha jaanti ho chudaai kaise hoti hai. Jab lund choot me jaata hai...kaise hoti hai...
N: jab lu..nd ch..oot me...ja..ata hai...
J: very good...

Javed pura dominate kar gaya tha neha ke jehen me...sex ki baato me, nangepan me, galliyon me aur wo physical abuse me bhi usko dominate karne laga tha...


To be continue...

[Suryahot123]

Masttttt..... Mind blowing........ Kya update diya...... H. ... Sahi mein mast story h.... Please update more...

[nightcrawlertyagi]

Update 28


J: chal ab teri choot ke darshan kare...ki tune wahan kya khajana chupa rakha hai...

Neha sharma jaati hai....aur apne haath se apna chehra chupa leti hai...javed ne phir uski panty ki elastic me haath daala...aur panty neeche kheechi jo saamne se utar gayi..aur uski chikni bina baal wali kamsin choot ka front saamne aa gaya...neha ne maare sharm ke apne legs bheench liye..aage se to panty utar gayi



..per peeche gaand pe ruk gayi..kyonki wo aadhi leti baithi thi sofe pe.... neha ko lag gaya panty uske chutar ke neeche dabi hui hai...to usne halke se apni gaand uthai ... javed ne panty ghutne tak utar di... neha ki jaan shukh gayi....jo part aaj tak uske pati ke alawa kissi ne nahi dekha wo ab javed ke saamne tha... jo chut ka frontal view tha wo kamal ka tha...sapat pet ke neeche ek dam sapat choot...jaise koi kamsin ladki ki hoti hai...



Mare excitement ke maare neha ke pet me kamppan hone laga...phir javed ne puri panty utar di.. uski panty choot wale portion me puri geeli thi...ander ki taraf gadha chipchipa liquid tha...
J: Neha ankhen open karo...meri taraf dekho..phir javed forcefully uske chehre se haath hatata hai...
Neha halki si eyes open karke dekhti hai...javed uski panty haath me liye hua hai.. jo uski izzat ka last sahara tha...wo bhi utar gaya tha.. javed uski panty ko apne naak ke pass lata hai..aur shungta hai...neha ye dekhkar phir haath se apna chehra dhak leti hai..
J: Neha apne haath hataoo apne chehre se...mujhe meri payri Neha baby ka chehra mat chupaooo.
Neha apne haath hata leti hai ....apne haath choot ke upar rakh leti hai... choot pe haath rakh kar thoda confidence aata hai..




J: neha apni eyes open karo... jab tak me na kahoon apni eyes band mat karna..
Neha phir apni sex se bhari laal eyes open karti hai... javed phir usko uski panty dikhata hai...

J: neha panty bahut sexy hai... aur isse tumhari choot ki bheeni 2 khooshboo aa rahi hai... jo bahut hi badhiya hai...lekin mujhe tumhari panty se jalan ho rahi hai...kyonki wo tumhari choot ke kitne kareeb rehti hai..kaash me bhi tumhari panty hota to tumhari choot se chipta hota...

Itni sex bhari baat sunkar neha ka hall bura ho raha tha..usko itna sex ki baato me mazza kabhi nahi aaya..per aaj usne bahut kuch seekha..jo bahut exciting tha... wo lambi 2 saans lete hua apni aadhi eyes open kare ye sab sunrahi thi..

J: per neha is taraf tumhari panty bahut geeli hai. Lagta hai tumhari choot apna ras chod rahi hai..
N: isshhhh...sir bus kijiye....mat sataiye....mujhe kuch ho raha hai...me phir apna control kho rahi hoon...
J: Neha kya tum chudne ko taiyaar ho....
Neha madhoshi me...
N:hmmm.. .
J:sahi se bataooo.
N:taiyaar hoon....
J: puri baat bataoooo.
N: ufff sir...kya bolu....mat sataiye....sirrrr..mujhe kuch ho raha hai...
J: agar bol nahi paa rahi hai.. to apne per uthha kar sofe pe rakh aur apni choot khol ke dikha...
Neha ab apne bus me nahi thi...mann me kasamkash tha per body ki jaroorat usko per kholne ko keh rahi thi....
Wo apne mann me baat karti hai..Neha ab tu nangi to ho chuki hai...to per kholne me kya harz hai...tu jis kaam ke liye aayi thi wo hone wala hai.. aur tujhko bhi to mazza aa raha hai...to per khol aur dekh aage kya hota hai...

Javed choot se uska haath hata kar uski sapat choot pe haath ferta hai...
N: ahhh...sir.....oh...ha...
J: Neha kya chikni choot hai teri....chal per khol apne...aur mat tadpa........
Neha saans rok ke apne taange kholti hai...aur javed uske taange uthha kar sofe pe rakh deta hai...Neha phir apne haath se apna chehra dhak leti hai..


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Javed Neha ki choot ander se dekhta hai to dekhta reh jaata hai...uski choot 18 19 saal ki lakdi ki tarah choti si hoti hai...choot ke ched ko do gulab ki pankhuri tarah golden brown skin ne dhak rakha tha...excitement me uska clitorious thoda badh gaya tha....choot puri uske ras se bheegi hui thi...ras beh kar gaand aur choot ke beech ja raha tha. Javed ka man kiya ki abhi loda thaansh de uski choot me..... uski choot gulabi aur bahut ki kam chali lag rahi thi....



Per javed ko maloom hai ..neha bahut hi excited hai loda choot pe lagate hi jhad jaayegi... wo jaanta hai ki neha dophar se jhadne ghoom rahi hai..ab uska jhadna ek yaadgar moment bana dete hai...jisko wo jeevan bhar na bhool paaye..
J: neha kya choot he teri...kissi kamsin ladki ke jaise....aisa lagta hai karan ne jayada use nahi ki..

Neha ye sunkar sharma jaati hai aur automatically apne ghutne mila deti hai..
Javed haath se uske ghutne kholta hai... phir javed uski dono taange uthaker upper kar deta hai...aur ushi dono jhanghe pe haath rakh kar aur legs uttha deta hai...uske legs itne uthha deta hai ki uske ghutne uske kandhe pe laga deta hai..ab neha ki choot puri khul jaati hai...aur uski gaand ka ched bhi saamne aa jata hai...
Idher neha lambi 2 saans le rahi thi....wo apne excitement ke charam pe ab is halat me usse kuch bhi nahi yaad raha ki wo nangi ek parye mard ke saamne hai...bus ab wo sex ki bhatti me jalta ek sharir thi....



Javed ab ek haath se uski dono jhanghe doboch rakhi thi ..aur ek usne neha ki choot pe rakh diya..

N: aahhhh...aye.eeee sh....sh......sir
Neha ke pure sharir me tarange daur gayi ...javed ne uski choot kholi...to ek chota sa ched tha... javed ko laga madarchod issme meri ungli bhi nahi jaayegi..... javed apna haath uski choot pe pherta hai...uski saari ungli uske ras se bheeg jaati hai....
N; aahhhh.....shhhhh......
J: neha teri choot to bahut paani chod rahi hai...
Lagta hai wo to chudne ko taiyaar hai...tu hai ki nahi.....
N: ahhhh....sir mat pareshaan kariye...ahhhh.. mujhe sharm aa ra..hi...haiiii.
J: are bol na bhen ki lodi......
N: ahhhhh sir ...... mujhe bada ajeev lag raha...hai.
Ayeee.... sir .....kuch....kariye.....aur wo kaampne lagti hai......

Javed ab lagta hai isko ek baar hada dete hai.... to javed jor se apne haath uski choot pe ragadne lagta hai...aur uske bhagnase ko bhi chedne lagta hai....
N: aahhhh... sir....ohhhhhh ye kya ....hoooo raha.. haii......ayeeee maaa...... ye... pehli.... baar .... aisa ....ho raha hai...... sir bachaiye mujhe.....

Javed aur jor se chut ragadne lagta hai....Neha usse chutne ki koshish karti hai....lekin javed ne uski jhaanghe kas ke daboch rakhi thi...Neha apna sir idhar udhar phenk rahi thi.....aisi baichaini ho rahi thi....aisa lag raha tha ki uske pran niklane waale hai.....

N: sirr......mujhe bachaiye.......kya ho raha hai....
Mummyyy.....aareee.......
Aur phir wahi hua neha ne apne jeevan me kabhi nahi hua....usne squirt kiya.....



Usne ek dhaar chodi jo 2 meter tak gayyi.... usne aankh khol kar dekha to uskp badi sharm aayi... aur usne jor laga ke roka ki ab na nikle...to uski baichaini badh gayi...wo jor se taqat laga kar javed ke chungal se chootne ki koshish ki...per javed ne usko kas ke daboch rakha tha....wo buri tarah se chatpata rahi thi ...uski aanken uper chad gayi...javed ne uski choot pe halke haath se chapte maari....to uska sabra tut gaya....
N: uuuiiiii maaa.....aayeee.......
Aur jor se bhal bhala kar paani chodne lagi....javed ne ek glass uthakar uska paani bharne laga....
N: aahhhh.....ayeeee....sir........ohhhhhh mummyyyy....ye kya haiiiii......
Squirt itna jordaar tha....jki neha puri kaanp rahi thi.....usne phir jor laga ke roka....to phir uske ander baichaini badh gayi....aur wo phir chatpatane lagi....javed ne glass rakh kar uski choot ko ragadne laga aur ek ungli ander daal ke phir uski choot khadbada di....

N: ueeehhhhiiiii.....sir chod dijiye.....me mar jaaoongi.....aaeeee...maaaa.....me to gayi....

Usko aisa lag raha tha jaise jab bahut jor se pesaab lagi ho koi rok de.....neha ne phir bhalbhala ke paani chodna start ker diya... ab Neha ki bhi taqat nahi bachi squirt rokne ki...



N: aahhhhh.....hmmmmmm....
Aur wo bhi dum laga ke apna paani chodne lagi...per sharir abhi bhi uske control me nahi tha.. wo buri tarah se hil aur kaanp rahi thi ..agar javed ne usko dabocha nahi hota to wo sofe pe ucchal rahi hoti...jaise 2 wo paani chod rahi thi uska sharir machal raha tha... javed phir uska paani glass me bhar raha tha...
Jaise 2 paani nikalta jaa raha tha uski body thandi padti jaa rahi thi... awaaj me thandak padti ja rahi thi....
N: aahhhhh....ahemmmm....haaaa....
Uska paani ab dheere 2 uski choot se nikal raha tha jo choot se hota hua gaand ke ched ke pass hota hua uska peticoat bhiga raha tha...kafi ras jameen pe...sofe pe....table pe....uske peticoat pe.... aur 1/4 se jayada glass me tha...

Neha thandi pad gayi...uske sharir ki saari garmi nikal gayi thi....javed ne phir uski jaanghe chod di...to neha ne apni taange jamin pe tikka di... aur lambi 2 saans lene lagi... uski eyes close thi...
Neha jab thodi der baad saans control me aayi... to apni eyes open karke dekha to javed ko apni choot ki taraf dekhta paaya...phir sharm se eyes closed karke sochne lagi...
Neha ye kya tha.... kitni baichaini thi...ab aaram mila... aur tune ye kya kiya... javed ke drawing room me peshaab kar diya....hye me to mar gayi... wo kya soch rahe honge... ki tujko control nahi hai kya...lekin ye peshaab wali baichaini nahi thi...per tune peshaab to kar diya.... ab me kaise saamna karoongi.... me maafi maang leti hoon... hye me to mar gayi....kitne sharm ki baat hai...phir neha boli...
N: sir ...sir....mujhe maaf kar dijiye......
J: kis baat ke liye....
N: sir...maine...maine...apke drawing room..me
. Pe...pe...peshaab kar diya...aapne mujhe choda kyon nahi...mein toilet me chali jaati...me bhut sharminda hoon....
J: ha..ha...pagal ladki...ha...ha....
Neha surprise hoke javed ko dekhne lagi...
J: Neha ye peshaab nahi hai.... ye tumhara kaamras hai... tum ne apna ras release kiya hai.. jisko jhadna kehte hai... jaise aadmi ka nikalta hai waise hi aurat bhi apna ras chodti hai... kya aisa pehli baar hua hai...
N: surprise hoke... haan...sir...
J: iska matlab hai ki tum aaj tak sahi se jhadi bhi nahi ho...ye natural hai...acchha ye bataoo ab tumhe kaisa lag raha hai...aisa lag raha hai ki tumhare sharir ko bada aaram mila hai...saari baichaini khatam ho gayi hai...sharir se saari garmi nikal gayi hai...
N: haan sir....
J: Neha jayada mat socho s3x ki nayi duniya me tumhara swagat hai...mazze karo...abhi to ye suruaat hai...abhi dekho kya 2 hota hai....abhi to tumko wo mazza dene waala hoon jo Karan ne bhi kabhi nahi diya...abhi tumhari chudaai baaki hai my sexy darling...
Neha sharma jaati hai...he bhagwan abhi ye suruaat hai to aage kya hone waala hai....haan ye baat to sahi hai aisa to Karan ke saath bhi kabhi mere saath nahi hua....
J: Neha abhi to swarag ka anand logi jab mera lund tumhari pyari choot me jaayega...
Ye baat sunkar neha gangana gayi..aur phir sex ki khumari chadne lagi...javed neha ke pass aata hai...aur usko lip kiss karne lagta hai...ab neha bhi uska mann se saath de rahi thi....dono phir magan hoke ek dushre ke lips choose rahe the...
Phir javed ne apna haath neeche uski choot pe le gaya aur dheere 2 uski choot kuredne laga..
Neha ki is harkat ke baad ...halki si maon nikal gayi..
N: aahhh...
J: neha meri aankon me dekho....
Neha apni eyes open karke dekhti hai....
J: neha tumhari choot bahut sexy hai...ek bacche ki tarah....ab me tumko chodna chahta hoon...kya tum mujhse chudogi....
N:haan....
J: Kya mera lund apni choti pyari choot me logi... bolo...
N: haan..
J: puri baat bol bhenchod....
N: me apni choti pyari ch...oot me apka lu...nd loo...ngi.
J: to bol apne lund se meri choot chod do.
N: apne lund se meri choot chod do....
J: chal apna haath rakh ke bata mera lund kahan hai...
Neha dheere se apna haath javed ke pant ke upar rakh deti hai...usko uske lund ka ubhaar samjh me aa jaata hai...
J: sahi se pakad behenchod......
Neha thoda kas ke lund pakad leti hai...
J: Lund mehsoos ho raha hai neha....
N: haan....
J: chal pant khol meri...
Neha thodi phir asmanjas me .....wo kaise kare usko phir sharm aa rahi thi...
Neha jo sofe pe sex ki khumari me thi aur sir peeche tek laga ke baithi thi....javed delay dekh kar... javed neha ke baal kheench kar seedha baitha deta hai...uska peticoat uski choot chuppa leta hai per jhaanghe phir bhi dikh rahi thi..
Javed baal kheechta hua bolta hai..
J: saali behen ki lodi phir natak karne ke mood me hai...bhosadi ki sunayi nahi diya maine kya bola...
N: oouuch...sir kar rahi hoon...kar rahi hoon...
J: apna mazza kar liya aur dusre ke mazze ke laude lagati hai..chal jaldi khol meri pant madarchod....
Neha sochti hai wo baar 2 galti kyon karti hai.. javed ko gussa dila deti hai...
Neha kaanpte hua hatho se uski pant ka hook aur chain khol deti hai...
Javed phir jor se uske baal kheechta hai...
J: saali behen chod pant neeche kaun karega..
Neha dard se karhate hua uski pant neeche kar deti hai...
J: chal ab mera underwear neeche kar aur jab neeche karegi to apni eyes open rakhna me chahta hoon tu mera lund dekhe...aur eye band hui to sazza milegi..
Neha ne socha ye kaam to theek se karna neha.. varna pata nahi kya saaza milegi...
Neha ne eyes open kar ke dekha to javed ke underwear pe ek bada ubhar tha...jo gavahi de raha tha uska lund bahut bada hai...aur wo sochne lagi itna bada ubhaar underwear pe... Karan ka to nahi hota hai.... kya ye Karan se bada hai...are nahi aisa nahi hota hai...sab ek jaise hote hai....aur
Neha ne Javed ke underwear ke elastic me haath daala..

Tabhi ek aj ajnabi haath uski jaangh pe gira jisse dekh kar javed aur neha dono ucchhal gaye...wo is khel me Gupta ko bhool gaye the....

To be continue....

[Suryahot123]

Great story! Great writing! Hope the next update will come soon.

[1978Deepti]

नेहा का जावेद और गुप्ता के साथ थ्री सम करवाएं और इसमें जावेद और गुप्ता
नेहा से करन की पत्नी का रोल प्ले करने के लिए कहें। नेहा ये सोच कर की
वो गुप्ता को बेवकूफ बना रही है। करन की पत्नी का रोल प्ले करने को तैयार
हो जाती है और दोनों के साथ जमकर चुदाई करवाती है। और जब बाद में जावेद
इस चुदाई की पूरी फिल्म करन को दिखाता है। तो करन यही समझता है कि नेहा
ने गुप्ता को सबकुछ बता दिया है और वो खुद अब आगे गुप्ता और जावेद के साथ
चुदने को तैयार है।

[mihikagupta1991]

Wowww.......fabulous update......Aspen Kamala kar kiya......its beyond expectations..........waiting eagerly for next blockbuster

[rkrameshkumarrk02082008]

Wow, thats the only expression i have, and i have noticed there are 27 pages and 27 updates. Thanks for regular updates, thats the most important thing to appreciate.

[Vixen]

just amazing update! too hot and extremely erotic writing.